FB: Torture Cell Jerk

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ZanLover
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I thought the tease was wonderful.
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Thank you, ZanLover.

To those who have left me private messages:

I write teases for me and hope others enjoy them. There was a time on Milovana when people actually enjoyed my teases, but sadly it seems that the majority just want pics of hot women and could care less about the story or tease. Ironically, my latest tease has not faired well in the rating department and it is loaded with hot women, but I suspect the first few images of the grand madame has turned off those who do not have the patience to wait the few minutes to get into the tease. Or maybe it is because I leave too much to the imagination rather than posting nude images in every window.

I know there are several old timers who still love a good, ol' creative tease...you guys and gals know who you are. I will continue to write teases as the time allows...if only I could get back to my heyday of a few years ago.

Sincerely,
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I liked your tease. I'm into red light-green light teases. I'm also into teases where you can't see what you want to see. Yours fits both categories. There are those of us out here who like your work.
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Post by cumhardy »

Awesome, I loved the scenario....and the ending....!
I shit brix

Although some feedback: I would like to see more humiliation talk from the girls at the window, not sure what, but more laughing at your predicament or something.
Also, this is a minor thing, the background for the girls, I kinda wished it was more uniform so it looks like they are all in the same room behind the window.

Although this is just just constructive feedback, I thought the tease was great.
As always I know you arent really concerned about the ratings, otherwise you would just write some mainstream crap.
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Post by masterstroke »

I thought it was an enjoyable tease - a unique variation of the red light/green light tease.
I also liked the graphics and the ending.

It may not have had the bodies of any hot women in it but the storyline didn't require them.
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Post by rbtheservant »

Thanks guys...it means a lot coming from my fans.

BTW- Cumhardy...I agree about the the backgrounds but I was just too lazy and time is tight right now. Also I get what you mean about the humiliation chatter...again I agree more was needed, but alas it was a time issue again.

Thinking about reviving the "Can't Resist Your Mistress" series...just by the nature of it, it will be more mainstream, but I will try to add my usual twist or two.

It feels good to be back,
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