FB: I will own you

[sissyscarlet]

Well its just personal taste, but thats the best tease I've come across on here of ages, it is sensual, sexy with just enough pain and control.
To make it perfect I personally would like it to be longer, maybe have some more humiliation and cbt, but I only say this as I think the author can do it, the improvement from your first tease to this is remarkable.
I felt owned and connected to you. Superb... more please.
xxxxx

[pagankinktress]

Awww, thank you so much sissyscarlet! Your positive feedback just made me smile from ear to ear!

I appreciate your suggestions too...especially with regard to the length of the tease itself. I wondered if perhaps I was closing it out a little too soon. As I've been reading through some very excellent webteases and info on the forums, I can see that longer...(ahem) tends to be better.

I also do like to go slowly with what I will require in a tease...and over time built up intensity of CBT and other activities within them. I try to keep in mind that a "beginner" in kink or BDSM might come across the tease and I strive to make it nasty/humiliating but not too overwhelming.

I have lots of ideas for other teases and you can bet I will take you further along in a delightfully erotic and freaky journey!

Thanks again for the kind words and encouragement.

[Ford]

That was exactly the kind of webtease I enjoy: direct (without a story, you know, interactive), interesting, seductive and really just very well-written. Absolutely among the best teases on the site. It was a pleasure to read, as well as to follow.

I also would have wished it to go on longer, or been a bit meaner ;)

Like sissyscarlet I certainly felt a 'connection' - by the tone of the words and little things like questions and small instructions, this one 'pulls you in'. And like scarlet I hope the author writes more!