The maze of Lust - FEEDBACK

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Nezhul wrote:do you really think that it's good to post a spoiler about a tease here? Delete it if you have any respect to my work. :closedeyes:
Hey Nezhul, no offense. I didn't mean to get off on the wrong foot. I just thought it would be something that some people who have already completed the tease could use to explore and enjoy all the traps that the maze has to offer.

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I see it as something that'll break the experience for those who didn't complete it. Bescides, noone stops anyone from exploring the maze. ;-)
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Does the tease end at the first checkpoint?
I received a password and now there's no "next" button. :(
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If you'v read at least half of this thread, you'd know, that it may be continued (and may be not) and THEN and ONLY THEN you'll use your pass. :huh:
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thanks for your kind answer!
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I believe it's fine for people to post spoilers if they like - but it should obviously be very clearly marked so people who don't want to stumble over it by accident can avoid it if they don't want to know the solution up front.
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he may give them via pm. If the spoiler is just posted on the thread - it's too much to resist for someone. But if he posts that he mapped it, everyone who really NEED it will just pm and get it.
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completely agree
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Wow... this tease is freaking hot.

Great work dude!
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This was brilliant and i hope you do get around to making a second part one day if you find the time. :-D
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:smile: :smile: :smile:

What a great idea. How are you getting those ideas. It was great. Without any pain, but pain anyways humbling around in the maze. Thanks a lot. Just great!!!!
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1: Please make a sequel soon - this was too great to stop :-D

2: Suggestion: Use directions in terms of North/East/South/West
Either that, or be 100% precise with directions/turns, especially where the maze is interrupted or otherwise reaches a dead end. Mazes are darn fun, but at the same time frustrating to no end when done imprecisely :lol:
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I am percise. If it says right - that meens to the right from your current orientation. So basically if you are facing north, for example, then "right" meens "east". And if you are facing west, then right meens to the north.

everything is good. I don't know why so many people think, that I would make something bugged.
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No one says (certainly not me anyway) that you made anything bugged. Also, I have tried the original version only, in case you have made any changes I have not tested those.

The imprecisions I am thinking of was related to the traps, where it is (was?) occasionally unclear whether you continue onward or turn back.

And all of this must not be blown out of proportions anyway, the essential part is that the maze was a very good and creative tease - don't let a small suggestion for improvement give the false impression that I am overall unhappy with the work (wouldn't given it a 5 if I was lol)
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You made everything great. I had no idea how to get out and I enjoyed it a lot. What wonderful traps. I got insane. Thanks once again. :-D
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