Predicament
Predicament
Another great tease. I rated it 5 very early on. However there seems to be a bug. It seems to hang up on "Now stck that tongue out an smile for me as yu pant and wag that tail!" "Oh, you're a happy little puppy." I've been on that page for over ten minutes and nothing is happening. If that's your intention, it doesn't seem to match your other work.
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Got it... it's fixed now. Thanks for letting me know!hhhobo wrote:Another great tease. I rated it 5 very early on. However there seems to be a bug. It seems to hang up on "Now stck that tongue out an smile for me as yu pant and wag that tail!" "Oh, you're a happy little puppy." I've been on that page for over ten minutes and nothing is happening. If that's your intention, it doesn't seem to match your other work.
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Haven't had a chance to read through the whole thing yet, but I like what I've seen so far anyway.
Different girls with different personalities and a bit like a game, which I'm quite fond of and a story that ties it all together.
Really, very nicely done.
Different girls with different personalities and a bit like a game, which I'm quite fond of and a story that ties it all together.
Really, very nicely done.
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I got stuck on the following slide "does my puppy want to get a little more excited?" Very annoying as I'd spent a long time on it :(
Otherwise excellent tease. Please fix the bugs!
Otherwise excellent tease. Please fix the bugs!
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There were some issues saving the fixes to the tease (its over 600 pages... messed things up here and there), but now I've tested everything and I believe all is well. Please let me know of any other issues... thanks!
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too much text for me
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Very nice idea and a good tease. I just wish I didn't really have to write down all the digits... And it would have been really nice from the mistress to give away one of the numbers. Like doing a task for her or her friend and in the end you can chose which number you still need.
Just a small issue: When you rate Dita's breasts in the stripclub with just 5 points, the continue button doesn't work. And I don't know if this is an error or supposed to be like that, but when you head out of the club and jump into the limo. The girl asks you to stroke as fast as you can and gets mad, whenever you hit the edge-button. Is there no hidden timer and are you supposed to lose this part of the game?
Just a small issue: When you rate Dita's breasts in the stripclub with just 5 points, the continue button doesn't work. And I don't know if this is an error or supposed to be like that, but when you head out of the club and jump into the limo. The girl asks you to stroke as fast as you can and gets mad, whenever you hit the edge-button. Is there no hidden timer and are you supposed to lose this part of the game?
Last edited by ThomasKu on Fri Nov 19, 2010 10:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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On the strip club section --- the link http://is.gd/hayHG3 doesnt seem to work
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Thanks... both issues fixed!
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What happened to the street browsing option? Where you could go search for hookers... hope it comes back.
Cheers.
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many pictures doesnt work for me.. nearly any picture from that escort service..
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Another great piece of work, just like we've come to expect from Ritz' teases
I am completely amazed at how you come up with ever fresh and creative ideas for teases - and even when you are using concepts that have been used before, they are still twisted and perfected into something that feels new and fresh.
If you are not already and author or a role-playing game master, you seriously ought to try both!
I am completely amazed at how you come up with ever fresh and creative ideas for teases - and even when you are using concepts that have been used before, they are still twisted and perfected into something that feels new and fresh.
If you are not already and author or a role-playing game master, you seriously ought to try both!
Yes, I most certainly CAN do it again!
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Made it all the way through, only to realize that I somehow missed the 11th digit. Starting over. grrrrr
As always, Great work!!
As always, Great work!!
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Another problem - if you go to the fetish party and just click "move on" you end up with a girl complaining about how you approached her - when you didn't!
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A few responses....
daylight: Originally there was a "southside" driving option with options to cruise for hookers or go to a male strip club... when saving after fixing a bug someone pointed out, somehow half the entire tease got erased (which has happened on multiple occasions with very large flashteases like this one... it can take over a minute to save and sometimes it just doesn't quite finish saving I guess?), and the last time I had backed up the script was before completing that part. I got fed up and didn't want to rewrite the whole section, plus I thought the tease was large enough. So... sorry- it's gone forever...
paswis: The problem with not seeing pictures isn't on my end. The pictures are in there, but I believe a large flashtease with a ton of pictures (like this one) sometimes takes longer to load the pictures on the screen. Nothing that can be done about that.
janmd: Thanks as always for your praise. I appreciate your positive and friendly contributions to the forums, which is more than I can say for some frequent posters.
slavejack: Boy do I feel like a horse's ass... when the last bit of the tease got erased (as noted above), I thought it was the 12th digit that you could get through the hookers, so I went ahead and made it so the ex-wife would give you the 12th digit instead. Turns out it was the 11th digit that got erased. My apologies. It is fixed now, and you might want to scope out the restaurant again...
tabbycat: I see what you're saying, but the only way that would happen and wouldn't make sense is if you decided not to approach anyone at all, which seemed unlikely. There wasn't any mess up with the coding. I'm gonna just go ahead and keep it the same.
daylight: Originally there was a "southside" driving option with options to cruise for hookers or go to a male strip club... when saving after fixing a bug someone pointed out, somehow half the entire tease got erased (which has happened on multiple occasions with very large flashteases like this one... it can take over a minute to save and sometimes it just doesn't quite finish saving I guess?), and the last time I had backed up the script was before completing that part. I got fed up and didn't want to rewrite the whole section, plus I thought the tease was large enough. So... sorry- it's gone forever...
paswis: The problem with not seeing pictures isn't on my end. The pictures are in there, but I believe a large flashtease with a ton of pictures (like this one) sometimes takes longer to load the pictures on the screen. Nothing that can be done about that.
janmd: Thanks as always for your praise. I appreciate your positive and friendly contributions to the forums, which is more than I can say for some frequent posters.
slavejack: Boy do I feel like a horse's ass... when the last bit of the tease got erased (as noted above), I thought it was the 12th digit that you could get through the hookers, so I went ahead and made it so the ex-wife would give you the 12th digit instead. Turns out it was the 11th digit that got erased. My apologies. It is fixed now, and you might want to scope out the restaurant again...
tabbycat: I see what you're saying, but the only way that would happen and wouldn't make sense is if you decided not to approach anyone at all, which seemed unlikely. There wasn't any mess up with the coding. I'm gonna just go ahead and keep it the same.
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