New Maria Pavlova Series

[cactusman]

I have started a project of rewriting what was formerly a very long tease "The Maria Pavlova Interviews." I've pulled back the old, long version, and am now releasing the rewrites in (what will be) 4 parts.

Thanks to camel and others for suggestions that (I believe) have improved the writing, making my new experimental technique more immediate and involving (I hope).

The new versions of these teases should be available from
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... ova-series

Enjoy, and feedback is very welcome.

[basher]

These are wonderfully illustrated stories about teasing. I have enjoyed reading them.

They are not, however, teases.

If the pictures were unpalatable or if the prose was not of such high quality, there would be calls to remove these "non-teases" from the Webteases section and place them in the Stories section of the Forum.

Kudos on a great story and for using pictures of Kyla Cole.

[cactusman]

These are wonderfully illustrated stories about teasing. I have enjoyed reading them.

They are not, however, teases.

If the pictures were unpalatable or if the prose was not of such high quality, there would be calls to remove these "non-teases" from the Webteases section and place them in the Stories section of the Forum.

Kudos on a great story and for using pictures of Kyla Cole.

Thanks, I guess.

I suppose what you consider a tease depends on your definition. I think it depends on the format. But I'm getting more and more puzzled as to why people insist on making this distinction and why they consider it important.

I always thought that a story serves the same purpose as a tease that gives explicit directions, since I can use them the same way. But seriously, should I put a set of directions on these teases to the effect of "Masturbate whenever the story talks about that and try to imagine yourself in place of the main character"?

[real-webjunky]

Hi

the shorter size makes it easier to handle ... ;)
but still it is sooo wonderful uneasy to handle these girls ...

im my opinion it is a very teasing story and therefor a tease.
you have so wonderful pictures combined with a good story leading my fantasy. I like that it is different from the "instruction set" type teases.

best regards, webjunky

[cactusman]

Hi

the shorter size makes it easier to handle ... ;)
but still it is sooo wonderful uneasy to handle these girls ...

im my opinion it is a very teasing story and therefor a tease.
you have so wonderful pictures combined with a good story leading my fantasy. I like that it is different from the "instruction set" type teases.

best regards, webjunky

Thanks very much. I am glad you like it and appreciate your comments.

[ballsfull]

I suppose that there is a distinction between those teases that give specific instructions, and those that are more story-line based....

But I, for one, happen to like BOTH styles of writing, and just wanted to say that I really enjoy your teases, Cactusman... Please keep up the awesome work!!

From time to time, I wish some were shorter, but for pictures and story, me likey!!!

Thanks for putting the effort into them that you do...

Barry

[cactusman]

I suppose that there is a distinction between those teases that give specific instructions, and those that are more story-line based....

But I, for one, happen to like BOTH styles of writing, and just wanted to say that I really enjoy your teases, Cactusman... Please keep up the awesome work!!

From time to time, I wish some were shorter, but for pictures and story, me likey!!!

Thanks for putting the effort into them that you do...

Thanks very much, that makes me feel very good.

[Evals]

It is very good writing. I love the writing in all of your teases, but I'm never clear where your writing comes from cactusman. How much of it has been saved from the archives of old forums, magazines, and other such sources... One thing I'm not too big on, and it goes to the hot debate it seems everybody wants to have, is should a non-instruction based tease, ie a "story with pictures," be published as a webtease.

Really though? I don't care! However, I don't like the format you have chosen. I just don't like the pictures. I would enjoy your teases much more if I could read the text without seeing the the girls that have been chosen for me by somebody else. To counter the inevitable people out there that will jump and tell me "well don't look," "turn pictures off," "copy and paste and do it yourself," etc... Yeah? Well, this is my opinion.

Hearing the voice in the head and imagining a girl in front of me is much more immersive to me. I'd like them more if I could read the text as a whole in the stories forum if you ever decide to do that!

[cactusman]

It is very good writing. I love the writing in all of your teases, but I'm never clear where your writing comes from cactusman. How much of it has been saved from the archives of old forums, magazines, and other such sources... One thing I'm not too big on, and it goes to the hot debate it seems everybody wants to have, is should a non-instruction based tease, ie a "story with pictures," be published as a webtease.

Really though? I don't care! However, I don't like the format you have chosen. I just don't like the pictures. I would enjoy your teases much more if I could read the text without seeing the the girls that have been chosen for me by somebody else. To counter the inevitable people out there that will jump and tell me "well don't look," "turn pictures off," "copy and paste and do it yourself," etc... Yeah? Well, this is my opinion.

Hearing the voice in the head and imagining a girl in front of me is much more immersive to me. I'd like them more if I could read the text as a whole in the stories forum if you ever decide to do that!

Thanks. I have tried to make clear, usually with a note at the bottom of the first page, if the contents or words are from someone else. The Maria Pavlova series is original with me. On the other hand, I am using an idea from camel's work in it, the idea being that the woman takes over the giy's hands.

Aside from that I'm not sure where these ideas come from; I just fantasize a lot! OK, perhaps my wife has inspired some of the initial ideas for Maria Pavlova. And she kind of looks something like Kyla Cole.

It's interesting that you would prefer the story without pictures. I'm glad to hear that there are still people with good imaginations around! Perhaps I can extract just the text and post that on orgasmdenial.com sometime if you would like that. But I didn't write it without pictures first, and for some of it, like you may see in part 4, the pictures carry rather more weight...

[cactusman]

I have finally published the 4th part of the revised "Maria Pavlova" series, which is available at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9778

This completes the publication of the revised version. There is more to come in the series, which you can find at

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... ova-series

Those of you who wanted less story might still want to have a look at this part, which after the editorial preface (a tongue in cheek response to some of our debates about what is a web tease), has far fewer words than earlier parts per picture, and thus is a bit more normal and relies on the pictures more.

Enjoy, and comments are welcome.

[cactusman]

I have now revised parts 1-3 to have more dialog, so that the reader is more directly addressed, and hopefully so that they are more involving. So I'm feeling like the new writing technique that I am using in this series is getting to be under my control. As a consequence, I think that parts 1-3 are in their final form now. At least I hope so.

[real-webjunky]

... I think that parts 1-3 are in their final form now. At least I hope so.

seems i have to read them again?

to avoid misunderstanding - i didn't mean i don't like teases with instructions in general. but i like this one to be different as well. and i'm looking forward to read more of this story.
you lucky guy have a wife like her? gratulations - has she also revised the story? ;)

best regards, webjunky

[cactusman]

... I think that parts 1-3 are in their final form now. At least I hope so.

seems i have to read them again?

to avoid misunderstanding - i didn't mean i don't like teases with instructions in general. but i like this one to be different as well. and i'm looking forward to read more of this story.
you lucky guy have a wife like her? gratulations - has she also revised the story? ;)

best regards, webjunky

Thanks very much. I hope you like the revisions, also to part 4 now.

My wife is an inspiration, but not exactly like the story, which is much more fantastical, of course.

[wonderbo]

I started this tease this morning, and I got so into it I barely got any work done today! I finally gave in and let myself cum at the end so I could actually accomplish something today. I'm looking forward to your next installment, and another day of accomplishing almost nothing!

[cactusman]

I started this tease this morning, and I got so into it I barely got any work done today! I finally gave in and let myself cum at the end so I could actually accomplish something today. I'm looking forward to your next installment, and another day of accomplishing almost nothing!

Thank you very much. I appreciate that, especially "coming" from an author I respect very much. Thanks!