Suggestions for Tease

[Miss Melly]

Hey little boys,
I'm doing a nice tease atm (a flash one). It has multiple parts and I would love to hear any suggestions from you. You can also give me general suggestions in what direction my tease should go.
But don't really expect me to do as YOU say that would be silly

Kisses, Miss Melly.

[brian]

Hi Miss Melly

I for one really enjoy the fact of different possible endings, like no orgasm, ruined orgasm, partly ruined orgasm (!) and a full orgasms..

and an element of luck

looking forward to it ;)

[Little Miss Jay]

Hey little boys,
I'm doing a nice tease atm (a flash one). It has multiple parts and I would love to hear any suggestions from you. You can also give me general suggestions in what direction my tease should go.
But don't really expect me to do as YOU say that would be silly

Kisses, Miss Melly.

When I write a tease I like to imagine the boy standing infront of me and performing- I would give the orders and he would do it, no questions asked.
So my suggestion is to create a tease that makes YOU happy and turns YOU on. I know you asked for the boys opinions but these are my thoughts on it.

I imagine the boys would just want to cum *giggle*

Good luck with your tease writing and welcome to Milovana

Little Miss Jay X

[freaau]

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[bunny20]

How about metronome themed with a shemale like bailey jay being the boss

[Mitchell34]

Good golly, Miss Melly!

I just wanted to tell that awful joke. But here's my two cents anyway -
I think the best webteases are the ones that the authors really enjoyed writing. So include the sorts of things you like, and run with it as if you were teasing someone right then as you type.

For ideas and inspiration for content, you could have a look at some of the highest-rated teases and see how they look.

And I'd second that idea about different endings, so as the submissive really doesn't know how it will end. I love that.

What really makes a good tease is quality of writing. Believable story / interaction, good pacing throughout and most important - a good 'voice' - seductive, silly, harsh, strict or mysterious - but writing that is just as entrancing as the teasing! That's the key!

I'll stop now - but I look forward to the tease!

[SexualChoc]

When I write a tease I like to imagine the boy standing infront of me and performing- I would give the orders and he would do it, no questions asked.
So my suggestion is to create a tease that makes YOU happy and turns YOU on. I know you asked for the boys opinions but these are my thoughts on it.

I imagine the boys would just want to cum *giggle*

Good luck with your tease writing and welcome to Milovana

Little Miss Jay X

As always excelent advice
I agree write what turns you on!
Yourself being teased?
tormenting someone else?
An erotic story?
Or something silly?
Do what you like and don't worry about others opinions. (even mine)

[justans18]

Hey little boys,
I'm doing a nice tease atm (a flash one). It has multiple parts and I would love to hear any suggestions from you. You can also give me general suggestions in what direction my tease should go.
But don't really expect me to do as YOU say that would be silly

Kisses, Miss Melly.

I think u should put an ending in three different ways: cum in your hand and eat it, legs over your head,and cum on your face, or ruin the orgasm completely. Each selection will take us to a different setting,like for cum eaing u tell them to edge multple times,stopping every now and then for about 30 seconds to a minutes,then edging some more,etc.

[les]

when i wrote the Figging task for alexander
i imagine it happening to me
to set up my thoughts before
Committing to the written word


les

[Nezhul]

please don't allow the boys doing the tease to cum - i'd really like to do it, but as You can see from my signature cuming is not on my horizon!

I'd say the best way is to ask in a tease - if you are forbidden or not. Personally I did exactly like this in my tease, which hopefully will be done at last soon....

As for my opinion - I don't like pain and humiliation things, that's just a great turn off for me. So I'd prefer a tease without it, but well - it's your descision really, and I totally agree that you should write only what turns YOU on. If worst comes to worst, I just won't do your tease. Though as I see by "Giving up control" thread (for example), a lot of users here don't mind inflicting pain to themselves (that if it all true there, which I personally doubt).

Also my opinion - that would be good if a tease could be done by both genders. Simply make the first page gender selection, then write a version for boys (so each page name starting with B letter), then copy/paste all of this and make a girl variant (changing B to G) and tweaking texts a little. I think it would be nice if more teases could be made by girls.

[les]

As for my opinion - I don't like pain and humiliation things, that's just a great turn off for me. So I'd prefer a tease without it,

Also my opinion - that would be good if a tease could be done by both genders. Simply make the first page gender selection, then write a version for boys (so each page name starting with B letter), then copy/paste all of this and make a girl variant (changing B to G) and tweaking texts a little. I think it would be nice if more teases could be made by girls.

I agree the carrot is much more powerful than the stick.

See this thread
Links idea
for ways of seperating a tease into sections


les

[Mitchell34]

I'd like to put in a vote in favour of pain and humiliation! I love that stuff.

[Nezhul]

About links - I was talking about flashtease - sorry, didn't mention it. And the thread les gave is about normal teases (or maybe I'v got the wrong idea)
Flashteases are much harder to make, though. And not just because of a lot more options - the editor itself is not perfect. For example, if we embed a sound on a page, and then make ANY changes, the sound line will be erased from the code. Or if we make randomizer and then view this page in visual mode, the randomizer stops working, because the editor changes the parameter of go from
go(range(x,x,'page'))
to
go(range(x,x,'page')#)

which is quite a fummy lag, but can be quite frustrating....

[Miss Melly]

Hey little boys,
I'm doing a nice tease atm (a flash one). It has multiple parts and I would love to hear any suggestions from you. You can also give me general suggestions in what direction my tease should go.
But don't really expect me to do as YOU say that would be silly

Kisses, Miss Melly.

When I write a tease I like to imagine the boy standing infront of me and performing- I would give the orders and he would do it, no questions asked.
So my suggestion is to create a tease that makes YOU happy and turns YOU on. I know you asked for the boys opinions but these are my thoughts on it.

I imagine the boys would just want to cum *giggle*

Good luck with your tease writing and welcome to Milovana

Little Miss Jay X

Thanks for your advice, I'll definitely make them only do things I like.
I just hope there're not too twisted
But when I look at the other comments the guys here are no real guys, so that should be okay hehe.

[Miss Melly]

Annother thing: Does anyone know how to change the amount of pixels for my avatar picture?

Cheers, x

Btw, I'm using a mac.