Feedback: The perfect edge.

[freaau]

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[amir]

I'm new, what's "Twas"?

[storydejour]

'Twas = a contraction for "It was"

As for the tease, couldn't get past the first three pictures. I tried, hoping the tease was about a pretty woman and not a cloud of smoke, but eventually gave up. I know some people think smoking is supposed to be sexy, but yuck!

Hey, you don't have to agree, this is just my feedback.

[amir]

thakns!

[les]

Cumhardy likes to build up a tease

He is not wham bam all guns blazing on the first page

Be patient he is always worth it






les

[Evals]

As for the tease, couldn't get past the first three pictures. I tried, hoping the tease was about a pretty woman and not a cloud of smoke, but eventually gave up. I know some people think smoking is supposed to be sexy, but yuck!

I'm the same way... Bleh, to smoke. The ironic part is though, that after the fourth picture, there is no more smoking shown, but it's still a very good tease. Perhaps if you could make it to the fifth page, you might enjoy it?

[cumhardy]

Thanks for the feedback!

As for the smoking thing, I dont particularly find it attractive, but I'm not anti-smoking either (being an ex-smoker) I don't mind it too much!
Different strokes for different folks