Seriously. I'm not saying it's good, I'm just happy I finally finished one and clicked publish whether it sucks or not!
Please let me know what you thought, how I could have improved it, questions, etc! I tried to make a tease that people would enjoy a 5th time because it felt unpredictable.
Chance (fictional) decided that guys have to wait 4 hours because she really wants a fun game so she wants you to worry and play your best, but doesn't really care what happens after. Also, if she'd have said "a week" most guys wouldn't obey anyway. She figured 4 hours was realistic.
For those of you who "cheat" and look at the script... (warning: spoilers!)
"start" pages are the introduction. The last start page (called startlast#
) starts a random range from pages 1 to 66. Each page unsets itself so that it's selection doesn't take it out of the range.pages 3 through 66 are tease pages with random images. That was a bitch to make. I ended up using Excel to help me generate the page code and would revise it in Excel, then copy and past pages 1 through 66 into Nyx. Otherwise, when I added the 66th page, I would have had to edit all the other pages' range() function's upper number! I think I had about 40 pages and then kept going without headache since another page was easy to add because of the way I had set up the spreadsheet.
pages 1 and 2 are chances to cum. You never see those pages, they just redirect to range(100,103).
100 means you get to cum and redirects you to range(200,202)
101, 102, and 103 mean you don't get to cum this time. You don't even know you were close, you just go back to range(3,66)
Unless/until you get the bitch that tells you that she's going to complain, 103 is disabled (aka "set") so really, if you get page 1 or 2 then you have a 1 in 3 chance of cumming (100 vs 101&102). The way I figure it, it will take an average of 5 minutes for you to get a 1 or a 2, so you have a 5/9ths chance of cumming within the first 10 minutes if everything goes well.
200 means you get to cum nicely. You get about 12 seconds.
201 means post orgasm torture and pushes you to 300s pages. 314 through 300 are countdown pages that are designed to randomly take a while. On average it should take 27 seconds. (I know this because I modeled it in Excel and tweaked it) including the possibility that you'll get all the way to 1 before she suspects you aren't doing your best and might bounce you back to 3 again, and again.
202 is a ruined orgasm or denial. You'll have 3 to 9 seconds.
The 600s pages are the anti-climax pages where she asks you how you did.
That way, if you're doing it right there should be no problem, but if you are caught while taking it easy, or being minimalistic, or taking a rest, you are screwed.
I ended up having to let go.