Ms Hart Webteases

[Winker]

Recently done my first 2 teases on this site.

Any feedback would be welcome, whether there are errors in the two teases or just general comments on bad or good parts of them

Thanks

[ballsfull]

I'm so glad you asked, because actually, you have done BOTH my pet-peeves.....

I honestly have NO IDEA how much I do or don't like your teases, because between the access codes needed, and the time-wasting delayed timers, I haven't gone all the way through either one....

VERY frustrating!!!! I suppose that's the point, but wouldn't you rather people ENJOY your teases, rather than QUIT them out of frustration??

I don't want to give you a 1, because I ~think~ I like it, but I'll never know what I'm missing, so at the moment I can't rate it at all....

You asked....

[dtspam]

I liked both your teases and the second one received quite a good rating too, so don't be discouraged by the harsh comment above.
I think you make good use of the timers. Keep up the good work.

[Winker]

Thanks for both your response I appreciate both. I think what this highlights is that whatever tease anyone produces you will struggle to make it appeal to everyone. Personally i enjoy the delayed timers, obv ballsfull does not and thats fine cos everybody is different. But since this is my first couple of teases I am generally happy with them and will consider any critisism/praise if I do decide to make another one.

Thanks

[ballsfull]

I didn't mean to be harsh (although I was very frustrated at WANTING to enjoy your tease, but being unable to)...

I just don't have the idle time to wait for unknown timers to go do their thing, because I'll just go do something else on another web page and then come back when I remember to....
So I'm not enjoying your tease, because if I'm not waiting for just that right moment to push a button or something, I get kicked out...

And I appreciate that I'm probably impatient, but part of that is just having a lot to do and NOT enjoying wasting time waiting indefinitely....

Sorry for my harshness earlier.... I just will never get to enjoy your teases as they are written...
Seems a shame....

[Winker]

Don't worry about it, I don't see it as being harsh, as I've already said different things appeal to different people so it's not really of any concern to me.

I want to express myself by creating a few teases in the way I would like to see a tease be written, so thats what I have done.

In the first tease there is a bit of a wait at one point I accept that but to be honest in the second I don't think theres is anything more than 90 seconds at any point so its hardly an eternity.

So once again I take your comments on board and if the general community feels the samet then of course I would consider changing my approach.

[jlx666]

my point is, that people should write teases they are happy with, and not to attract many people, receive high ratings, become a totm, or whatever

i think both of them were pretty good, both how they were built and the story

this 6 minutes timer in the first part added kind of a "reality feeling" to the whole thing, so i think that was good, a bit distracting, but it supposed to be

just as you said, some people like "stroke 500 times and cum" assigments, the others want to enjoy the story and imagine, that it happens for real

in the beginning of the second part there were a couple of timers, that were a bit too fast, where i was not able to read what she said in time, probably because english is a foreign language for me =) that may also be the point for many other foreigner slowpokes =)

a bit distracting was that girl's hair color always changed from blond to brunette =) but i liked it, when you kinda joked about it, asking what hair color she had somewhere during the tease =) let's say that were wigs, /o/

so overall, a good job, keep going =)