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[sexualreflex909]

Hey, im making a pretty complicated tease and ive decided to upload just a segment of it, please give me feedback on if its understandable, too text heavy etc.

If theres enough interest I will definetly put up the rest of the game!

Please see tease here:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=8673

I actually uploaded a different poker bitch tease, but the text was terrible, this is my attempt at using the same concept and making the tease actually work.

[atYourService]

I liked the idea. I would be better as a flash tease

[pioneer911]

Yes, please. This one looks great

[sexualreflex909]

I dont think a flash tease would be all that different from a standard tease, most of the interaction comes from yourself.

The problem is, for it to work, my tease needs to be quite text heavy. Did people understand that they play with theyre own cards? And essentially simulate playing poker?

[bookworm]

It certainly is text heavy and pretty complicated. Maybe you could link to an online poker simulator instead? The pictures are nice.

[Flogger]

Uh.

Isn't this an old tease from way back? Just truncated.

Otherwise it's good. Bit of punctuation and timing needed in the instructions/conversations (think: do people really just talk in one go without pausing for breath changing tone adding emphasis - sic - and so on?) though.

Think it might need to be simplified a bit for people looking for something a little less intensive.

[sexualreflex909]

Uh.

Isn't this an old tease from way back? Just truncated.

Otherwise it's good. Bit of punctuation and timing needed in the instructions/conversations (think: do people really just talk in one go without pausing for breath changing tone adding emphasis - sic - and so on?) though.

Think it might need to be simplified a bit for people looking for something a little less intensive.

Hey, yeah its pretty similar to a different tease I made, I liked the concept but my English sucks and so that tease didn't exactly live up to potential. This is another attempt at making a similar tease using the same concept, but this time making it readable, I have a twist in mind, but I want to see how people respond to the tease before putting the work in.

The problem with splitting up the text is lack of pictures, certain models only have so many poker related pictures, and I want to have a sense of consistency, thats why I had to use the dealer, there are only so many photo's of Nikki playing cards.

Im honestly not sure if I will ever have the ability to make this a workable tease, its a lot easier working on it bit by bit but I dont want to put the effort in if people miss the point and dont understand how it works.

[alchemi183]

I'm interested to see where you go with this. I love poker. Please keep going!

[Drowze]

I'd love to see more of this tease!

[hhhobo]

I love teases like this. You can do them over and over and get different results each time. Doing an online poker game may be easier. Just have it open in another window and go back and forth. You might want to have the user earn his initial chips. So many chips for an edge, so many chips per clothes pin, so many chips for each swat to the balls, etc.

Please do keep working on it. When you finish it, I'll bet it is highly rated.

[Slave Sidrick]

I really enjoyed what there was of this tease. When it finished I just wanted more. I do hope that you continue to work on it and eventually finish it.

I do like the idea where it's a flash tease and you have buttons for fold, check and bet options so maybe that would be something to consider.

Anyway whatever you do I'll do the tease as enjoyed it so far, so keep up the good work.

[pyroman05]

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 MAKE THIS A FULL LENGTH TEASE!!!!!

[meiertom]

looking forward to full length. greaz idea, man!

[RylehDawn]

The only way I see this tease reaching its potential is if you have your opponent's cards and possibly the community cards for Texas Hold 'Em determined by the tease itself, so that your opponent knows when to bet high or low. Also, you can fix the ending rather easily that way, if so desired. Then maybe have the user play their own cards, perhaps providing a link to http://www.random.org/playing-cards/ to easily determine two cards quickly. That would make it closer to an actual poker game, if a little less random.

[saarcz]

It's a good tease. Please continue