Feedback: Do you really want this key?

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Forevergallant
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Re: Feedback: Do you really want this key?

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It was good. I really like the first set of images of Dita, but the second set, Ive never liked those images of her. Her head looks like its floating above her body. A few grammar errors, but otherwise, it was a Solid tease. *gave it a 4
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Re: Feedback: Do you really want this key?

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wow really loved this tease... hope you make a sequal... or just more that can be done in chastity :-D
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Re: Feedback: Do you really want this key?

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I liked the storytelling. very nice tease. lovely photos. just the end was quite abrupt. i hope you will write a sequel
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Re: Feedback: Do you really want this key?

Post by doggy »

liked it a lot.
Theend was a bit rushed but good storytelling.
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