Hey everybody - just posted my first webtease. Please let me know what you think and how I can improve the next one.
thanks,
brian
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My favorite scenario is Medical Fetish, so this was a good tease. It moves a little slow and some disrobing by the blond nurse would help. Nipple items would add a nice flair and exercises or positions always help a medical exam process. The use of the computer clock is a good technique for creating a pseudo flash with random times. Maybe the return visit will cover some of these areas.
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I started this tease, but stopped it a few pages in because of the spot that said all that about "gee, wont it be nice when we get the ability to have flash teases." It totally took me out of the fantasy and the tease. So, I wasn't able to finish this tease. Just a little pet peeve of mine... but perhaps you can just make the tease then leave those comments for the message board because I surely do agree with you, it will be nice.
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