Vita I:Monic The Secretary

Makarov · Post by **Makarov** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 9:27 am

Here is my first attempt at a web tease, hopefully it's not too bad.

That said, here's a little bit of what I was thinking when I was making this. The goal of the tease is to be part one of a series that revolves around a fantasy life of a single person: you. Thusly, the title. Vita means "life" in latin. You go around life, and the story follows you through your interactions with the other characters. Theoretically consequences for previous actions might eventually be involved.

Some things to note: this is an ideal universe. For some reason the only people you know are women. Women who like to tease. Women who like to tease you. Women who like to tease you for seemingly no apparent reason or gain. Conveniently you are rich, but so are they.

However, each of them will hopefully sound a little differently in their tease. None of them will tell you how long to stroke, or how many strokes to perform. None of them will blackmail you. None of them are out to humiliate you in front of your peers. They just want to tease you relentlessly.

Anyway, post what you think, suggestions to improve part two, etc.

JelloBoy · Post by **JelloBoy** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 11:17 am

I liked part I, very good - I will have to put some thought into what to suggest for part II.

~Jello

pin-dicked sissy · Post by **pin-dicked sissy** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 11:32 am

hey makarov, excellent beginning to what looks and sounds like a fabulous series. if i come up with any ideas, i'll let you know.

Haldirkd · Post by **Haldirkd** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 2:22 pm

Great tease, i really enjoyed...I can't wait to see what will happen further in the series