Curious about feedback

Post by **zenlover** » Sat Jul 28, 2007 5:15 pm

I'd love to get any feedback to improve this tease:
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=302
The second of my "If you do exactly" teases.
Pluses?
Issues?
New Thinking to over--cum--the issues?

Thanks!
Z

cmc · Post by **cmc** » Sat Jul 28, 2007 7:51 pm

To be honset I thought it was great as it is, I gave it a 5 andf that's pretty rare for me... I've not tried it for real, only read it through (for now!) The only things I'd point out are that even though the girls are both gorgeous (especially Lori and the way she's dressed!!!) I've seen these pictures in other teases and that took the impact away for me. The only other points were the "self bondage" instructions were maybe a little convoluted and not too sure I like the sound of what's coming next in terms of the condom's contents being stored away - if it must be done fresh is one thing. but otherwise yuk, I simply wouldn't... I found that ruined the end of a hot tease and personally I''d drop it.

Anyway great work, I'll keep an eye out for the follow up.

Cheers cmc