Firstly ThirtyDays, fantastic tease, got a 5 from me. the use of the dice website was very well implemented i must say. i just got thru this with having to go back the first 2 games of high/low and just when i thought i was going to get relief, bang, my length didn't come up!!!!
fantastic work and i can see that the tease could take a very long time to complete depending on how honest and unlucky u are!!
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Nice tease. I guess the length of the tease is a matter of your personal preference, but I think it may have been a little too long. This is what happened:
I got home Sunday evening from a very long weekend and I hadn't cum since Thursday night. So, I was VERY horny. I loaded up this tease and thought it would be a good one to stroke myself to. I was also looking for a little bit of anal and I saw the tease was tagged as so. Well, I started to do the tease and got pretty far and was getting very excited because I knew the dildo part was coming soon. I got to the page where I had to do all of the strokes within 30 seconds and I rolled a 97, so I had to stroke myself pretty quickly and didn't have time to pick up the hairbrush to smack my balls. So, I got to the edge and just couldn't hold it and came. I still clicked through the rest of the tease and punished myself in the shower with the dildos, but that is another story. I noticed that the tease was VERY long and would have probably taken me about 4-5 hours to complete depending on my luck. I, personally think that is a little much (all of the go back to this page, go back to that page). There is no way possible that anyone is getting sent back too many times and not cumming early. So, I do have a couple of comments:
1) There should be a set punishment for cumming early.
2) There should be a punishment for not finishing you strokes/smack within the allowed time limit.
Once last note: I didn't quite understand the way I was supposed to grip my cock during the tease. I interpreted it the best I could and held it a way that I don't normally hold it, but it lead to more wrist pain than anything else. How, exactly, am I supposed to hold my cock during that tease?
Thanks for the tease. I can tell you spent a lot of time on it. I gave it 4 stars, although it would have been 5 if it were a BIT shorter (without all the "go back to page...") and had a few set punishments for failure in there.
bondageslave36 wrote:I didn't quite understand the way I was supposed to grip my cock during the tease. I interpreted it the best I could and held it a way that I don't normally hold it, but it lead to more wrist pain than anything else. How, exactly, am I supposed to hold my cock during that tease?
Thanks for your feedback. I wanted to throw in something new, like being told HOW to stroke. I tried to describe the two methods as best I could, sorry abou that.
There are two different ways I stroke: One is more-or-less the "normal" way (I think), where you stroke underhand with your thumb on top:
The other way (my preferred way) was overhand, basically the opposite of the first way, you just flip your hand over. It gives the top of the cock more pleasure:
I hope this helps!
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Hi,
I thought the whole concept behind the tease was exceptional. Some of it didn't appeal to me, but it's still well worth a 5.
Some of it was my own preference, such as the girl didn't appeal to me much...bright & happy is the way I like it. (not that kinkier outfits are bad...far from!) I'm also not into pain at all, but again, that's my own personal preference.
Second, I agree with the length - I admit I skipped the "go back to page..." parts because I didn't have much time. To be honest, I skipped a lot since it was far longer than I had time for. At the same time, I like it long - so long as it doesn't get boring. The randomization was a great way to keep it from getting boring.
A superb tease, overall. It didn't completely match my ideals, but it's a great example.
I must say that this tease really is one of my favorites. The model is soo hot, and the combo of ball-torture, stroking and anal was great. Also loved the ending rewarding the abstinent (not me).
Initially I wasn't going to do this tease. I'm not a big fan of Goth chicks. However, now that it's made tease of the month...
Turns out she actually is rather hot for a goth chick. And the tease was well written. Maybe after Mz Teneale's and Jenna's game is up I might actually attempt the tease, instead of just reading it.
I thought this was a terrific tease. Many thanks to the author! I did get all the way through to the end, and then - sorry, Charlie, no cum. Oh well. That's part of the game, right? :)
I did want to mention that the dice roller listed in the tease was not working when I tried it this evening. There is another one available, however, that does everything necessary for this tease: http://hamete.org/dserver/dice