Feedback: Fertility Clinic Part 3

[cactusman]

This tease, "Fertility Clinic - Part 3 (Doctor's Orders)" by wonderbo

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7017

is really excellent; I loved it. I like the way this illustrates part of Peter's story (Fertility Clinic), and how you made it all be the woman talking.

I think this is a very good example of using a dominant female soliloquy in a tease and I'm very pleased to see it.

[wonderbo]

Thanks cactusman! I had fun making it...and there's more on the way. I've already got all the picture picked out...just need to upload them and do the writing.

I've loved that story by Peter for a while. I wish he was still writing.

[cactusman]

I also want to compliment you on part 4 of this series. I think it is also very well done. Excellent work!