These conditions explain the references to booksellers at the beginning and end of the excerpt. I hope it doesn't come across as seeming like too much of an advertisement.Susan Strict wrote:Feel free. I'd appreciate it if you'd put a reference to my name and the name of the book anywhere it's used (it would be nice if a few people bought the ebook - it's available from most of the online ebook retailers like 1eroticaebooks, A1adultebooks, Mobipocket, Amazon Kindle etc etc).
Susan
Anyway, my illustration of the "Her Prisoner" excerpt is available now at:
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7437
If anyone wants a very difficult challenge in illustration of a story, this is a good one. I had several difficulties. (Compare the webtease with the original excerpt at http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=4827).
First, I wanted to use a model that match the description of the main character, Jenny, in the novel (blond, not too slim). I eventually settled on Jana Foxy (aka Jana Jordan). But I was unable to find pictures of her (or almost anyone!) with suitable silver panties, so I changed the color of her panties to black. (And the shower pictures weren't the best either, but at least they don't change the story.)
A second problem was that the vibrator described is only approximated in the pictures. And I couldn't find enough of the pictures I needed in the series that worked best, so I had to switch between two of them, which makes for poor continuity in places.
Anyway, it was a fun exercise, although difficult. It makes it clear to me that it's easier to write a web-tease with good continuity if I can change the story to match the pictures! But I tried not to change the words as much as possible.
So if you want a webtease illustration challenge, you might try your hand at this. If there are several treatments of this excerpt, we could have a poll to see who readers like best.
