Scrambled Eggs tease

Shaft8888 · Post by **Shaft8888** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:38 pm

Just seeing what you guys think of my first tease scrambled eggs.. any suggestions? Feel free to let me know...

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 10:24 pm

only saw the first page cause i too busy but i'll go through it tomoz and let you know what i think

scaryfatman · Post by **scaryfatman** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 11:50 pm

hey shaft, i jus wanted to say that was a great tease!

it was likea million times better than my first tease. it was fun to do and it pushed alotta the right buttons fo me. XD

That girls pretty hot, great job!

pin-dicked sissy · Post by **pin-dicked sissy** » Tue Jul 17, 2007 7:56 am

Great work mate, very good tease especially since it was ur maiden one. Gave it a 5. One suggestion tho, for the ending, it might work better if you add one more page to the end that both choices will go to for a finish even if it is just for a chance to submit a rating. at the moment, you only get to the final page (thus the ratings page) from one of the in-tease choices. if you added another page in, u could point both endings there so people can rate ur gr8 tease.

Let me know if this makes no sense to you.

Jesse

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Tue Jul 17, 2007 5:36 pm

good for a first go id say

keep up the good work