Prisoner to a Princess - Feedback

[onthebrink]

After a long time lurking on this site - my first tease! I kind of wrote it on an impulse. It's heavily focused on edging/denial and has little in the way of pain, which reflects my tastes at the moment. Anyway, especially as this is my first time, I'd love any feedback. Was it too short? Too edging-oriented? Too hard? Let me know what you think.

[justans18]

I actually really liked it, it was good for your first tease. I think u have the potential to go farther in this business. What will b your next tease, domination, cum eating, etc?

[Nwah]

Well, you weren't joking when you said it had heavy edging...

The writing was great, and Aria is stunning as always. The length was perfect, in my opinion. It was hard, but that was half the fun. Keep it up, I say!