Warm-Up w/ Denise - My first tease

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Warm-Up w/ Denise - My first tease

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Miss D let me join in one of the games a little bit late if I promised to make a tease for the site, so here it is. It's really short, but hopefully it's a precursor to some more action. I'd appreciate any and all feedback.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7243

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Jim
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Re: Warm-Up w/ Denise - My first tease

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Indigo wrote:Well Jim ... I'm sure you're used to hearing this, but ...

It could be a little longer ...
LOL, thanks, mate. I can always count on you for incisive and insightful comments :-P

Writing a good tease takes way more effort and time than I would have thought (at least for me). Mad props to all of you diligent tease writers. Pants off to you all . . . er, I mean, hats off . . . actually, maybe the first one is the more appropriate.

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Jim
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