Feedback: various illustrated letters and board postings

[cactusman]

To support my new story: "Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing" I have posted several new illustrated letters and bboard posts as webteases. These are as follows:

Cockteaser's Letter: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7202

The Power of Masturcizing (and the Mirror Trick): http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7204

A Little Cock Does the Trick: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7221

F-Stop: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7201

Penetration without Ejaculation (or Penetration Denial): http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7203

Most of these are interesting for their ideas (especially the one about penetration denial) and are inspirations for various parts of the main webtease I'm posting which is:

Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174

However, I will say that the "Cockteaser's Letter" story seems to often "work" for me ,
and the first part of "F-Stop" is exciting (I have since rewritten the ending). And the story "A Little Cock Does the Trick" is good in it's way and sometimes gets me going.

However, the letters about "Penetration without Ejaculation" and "The Power of Masturcizing" are very interesting ideas (and I wonder if anyone really does this in real life) the first of which I seem to use a lot in my webteases, but I don't think they will "work" for getting anyone's rocks off.

The success of the "Cockteaser's Letter" suggests to me that similar soliloquies by dominant women would also make good webteases, so I encourage others to mine their favorite letter collections for such stories.

Enjoy!

[cactusman]

Rats, I forgot one of the letters, which is also a good one that "works" for me:

Unadorned Pleasure for Wily Wife: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7211

This is another example of a dominant female's soliloquy that seems to make a good webtease. So again I urge others to see if they have similar letters that might also work as webteases.

Enjoy.

[cactusman]

To support my new story: "Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing" I have posted several new illustrated letters and bboard posts as webteases. These are as follows:

Cockteaser's Letter: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7202

The Power of Masturcizing (and the Mirror Trick): http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7204

A Little Cock Does the Trick: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7221

F-Stop: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7201

Penetration without Ejaculation (or Penetration Denial): http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7211

Most of these are interesting for their ideas (especially the one about penetration denial) and are inspirations for various parts of the main webtease I'm posting which is:

Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174

However, I will say that the "Cockteaser's Letter" story seems to often "work" for me ,
and the first part of "F-Stop" is exciting (although I don't really like the ending, as it just goes into straight sex, sorry). And the story "A Little Cock Does the Trick" is good in it's way and sometimes gets me going.

However, the letters about "Penetration without Ejaculation" and "The Power of Masturcizing" are very interesting ideas (and I wonder if anyone really does this in real life) the first of which I seem to use a lot in my webteases, but I don't think they will "work" for getting anyone's rocks off.

The success of the "Cockteaser's Letter" suggests to me that similar soliloquies by dominant women would also make good webteases, so I encourage others to mine their favorite letter collections for such stories.

Ok, it seems that in the early returns people really like

The Power of Masturcizing (and the Mirror Trick): http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7204

the best, but maybe that's just because of the pictures?

I also wanted to say that contrary to what's above, I have gotten my rocks off a few times in the past with

Penetration without Ejaculation (or Penetration Denial): http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7211

but that also may be because of the pictures

Anyway I would still like to see if others find it works for them to have letters or soliloquies from dominant women (or tops) as webteases.

[onthebrink]

I liked them. The stories/thread quotes are pretty hot, especially 'the mirror trick' (40 minutes on the edge - anyone brave enough to give it a try?) and the pictures work really well as a visual aid. However since there are no instructions you click through the tease quite quickly - which also means there are lots of interruptions, if you know what I mean. So I can see this idea working even better as a flashtease, maybe with a metronome, timers, and some instructions. Anyway I think the idea of an illustrated story is perfect for webteases, and there are lots of great stories out there (like the ones on orgasmdenial.com) that spring to mind, so hopefully you'll start a trend here.

[cactusman]

I liked them. The stories/thread quotes are pretty hot, especially 'the mirror trick' (40 minutes on the edge - anyone brave enough to give it a try?) and the pictures work really well as a visual aid. However since there are no instructions you click through the tease quite quickly - which also means there are lots of interruptions, if you know what I mean. So I can see this idea working even better as a flashtease, maybe with a metronome, timers, and some instructions. Anyway I think the idea of an illustrated story is perfect for webteases, and there are lots of great stories out there (like the ones on orgasmdenial.com) that spring to mind, so hopefully you'll start a trend here.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked them.

I tend to like regular webteases best, as a flash tease always seems to leave me waiting for it to change, but then perhaps I read too fast. But if you or anyone else would like to convert one or more of these to a flash tease, be my guest.

I do hope others will illustrate stories or letters, as I think they work well as a way to make something more interesting (and I hope more exciting) than a tease that just consists of pictures and instructions. I think the same picture can work in multiple ways depending on the surrounding story, and that really add up to something that is more exciting than either the pictures or the words.

But it might be good to find a creative way to add more instructions back in. I had a thought that someone could take a story like the ones in "Tonight an Orgasm Will Cost You" and "Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing" and make a set of rules for reading them "creatively". For example, imagine that you only get to cum when the "you" character actually does, and you edge when the "you" character gets edged, etc. In essence, you feel whatever the "you" character feels. But when I read I usually don't have any trouble knowing what to do so I don't think that others reading really need much in the way of instructions either. And this way each can do what they are moved to do.

[cactusman]

I have added another story along these lines that I belatedly realize is another inspiration for "Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing" (http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174).

The new story/tease is the story "A Teasing Tale", which is now on-line at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7253

Enjoy!

[curious]

"A Teasing Tale" is simply magnificent.

[cactusman]

"A Teasing Tale" is simply magnificent.

Thanks, I appreciate it.

[cactusman]

I illustrated one more of these dominant female soliloquies and have posted it as

Boxer Tease http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7267

This is by the same Patti who wrote the posting on masturcizing and the mirror trick.

Enjoy!

[Crocko]

One of, if not THE greatest series of webteases I've read. Well done, well done!

[cactusman]

One of, if not THE greatest series of webteases I've read. Well done, well done!

Thanks!

Again I would urge you and others that if you have similar letters or stories, that you dig them out and illustrate them. I think that such soliloquies work pretty well in a web-tease.

[zadig]

cactusman,

I really like these!

Patti was probably my favorite member of the old NTCWeb boards, and it's great to see her wicked ideas revived here. I have tried the mirror trick several times and failed each time. It is a grueling ordeal and takes a great deal of control to finish.

The Penthouse forum was where I first learned about teasing and denial, and where I first learned the power of it. Again, thanks for reviving those old memories.

The images and format match the content very nicely.

Be well,
zadig

[cactusman]

Thanks for your responses.

I just posted another of these, an illustration of the story "Dream On" by BellOfTheBalls, which is at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7290

Enjoy!

[cactusman]

I have posted another of these, called "Justifiable Tease":

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7297

Enjoy!

[cactusman]

And here's yet another of these illustrated letters, told in the voice of a dominant female.
This one called "Cock-Tease":

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7313

Enjoy!