Feedback - Wake Up to Who?

[str0be]

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=6856

It's been a while since I made a tease so I figured I'd whip one up to kind of get back into the swing of things. So let me know what you think.

str0be

[BoredOMK17]

Your a great tease writer.
I just wish you put more stroke instruction into this tease.
Or at least told us when to start and stop, and when to edge.
But it was well written. Good job!

[Incubo]

I liked it str0be. Well written.
My only problem with it was just a personal thing really.
If that were my wife, not a chance in hell I'd be cheating on her, but that wouldn't really make an interesting story either.

Anyway, nice job.

[JasonSlut]

Great tease I loved it, very well written, and omg who is that woman she is the hottest woman I've ever seen in my life

[Incubo]

That's Lindsay Marie.

http://www.freeones.com/html/l_links/Lindsay_Marie/

..and I agree. Smokin' hot. I have quite a crush on her as well.

[cactusman]

That's Lindsay Marie.

http://www.freeones.com/html/l_links/Lindsay_Marie/

..and I agree. Smokin' hot. I have quite a crush on her as well.

I agree with that too, and that you'd have to be an idiot to cheat on a babe like that.

Anyway, nice work!