FB Dormitory Duties

[flpanther]

Very nice job for those that like to edge!! There were no extended time periods, which I find sometimes boring. The tease moved right along. I think with more practise this writer will only get better. Bravo!!

[aldorax]

Excellent writing, great pictures, and great 'pace' of the tease. Very good job!

[AtTheEdge]

Great job! Good use of the timers. Excellent pacing.

[littlepos]

okay, where is this tease? i cannot find it

[PuppyPuppet]

It's on the front page - but here's a link direct.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=6178

Really good tease by the way. I was very impressed. Lots of edging, which is great - good pacing, sexy writing, a good, flowing story and great pictures.

[littlepos]

okay, i admit, i am overworked

i have no idea how i missed that on the front page, haha

thanks

[Makarov]

If only my dorm experience was more like this...

[jjsubslut]

i think this tease would make a really good series tease, any one else agree?

[camel]

I totally agree regarding the pace. That was great! There's nothing like intensity and chaos to maintain my "suspension of disbelief".

It also avoided one of my pet peeves, which is when nothing is going on but the author "times" the page anyway rather than just providing a "continue" button.

[PedroZorro]

Excellent webtease. A+
Now is one of my favorite.