My most "vanilla" tease since getting back, though it dabbles in a lot of different fetishes. This is part of a planned series that will probably be huge as there are hundreds of Liz Vicious galleries.
As always, comments and criticism are appreciated.
Feedback: Asking Liz Out
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texturedshroom
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Re: Feedback: Asking Liz Out
textured, you know I love your teases.
Though this tease speaks a lot of what the reader will be doing once he is settled into his new slave position, i don't think there was enough actual teasing. Plus it didn't seem like Liz was really into it.
BUT the tease wasn't horrible, it was pretty damn good compared to the garbage I've seen from others.
Your teases rock man, and I'm sure the series will be great.
I gave it a 4.
Though this tease speaks a lot of what the reader will be doing once he is settled into his new slave position, i don't think there was enough actual teasing. Plus it didn't seem like Liz was really into it.
BUT the tease wasn't horrible, it was pretty damn good compared to the garbage I've seen from others.
Your teases rock man, and I'm sure the series will be great.
I gave it a 4.