A Spy, caught: Feedback
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BrianWantsToCum
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Most of the pictures won't load for me
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Had this before - just remembered why. Disabled Adblock Plus for milovana and all is ok...
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Quazwierdcev283
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it was kind of fun to read. Not really my thing, but i can tell you put a lot of effort into this. Kudos on seamless storytelling and good grammar 
. Even though I thought it was well done I do have a question about it. I'm just wondering why it's tagged "for-guys?" It has a lot of naked girls, yes, but the things that are being done are mainly done to women there is not talk of guys in it, torturing or otherwise 
. Shouldn't it be titled, more appropriately, "for-gals/women (or however those are titled)?"
Just wondering, please correct me if I am wrong and/or point out why you tagged it "for guys."
I just noticed that we have tons of emoticons, more than anyone should need. Cool, eh?
. Even though I thought it was well done I do have a question about it. I'm just wondering why it's tagged "for-guys?" It has a lot of naked girls, yes, but the things that are being done are mainly done to women there is not talk of guys in it, torturing or otherwise . Shouldn't it be titled, more appropriately, "for-gals/women (or however those are titled)?" Just wondering, please correct me if I am wrong and/or point out why you tagged it "for guys."
I just noticed that we have tons of emoticons, more than anyone should need. Cool, eh?Quaz.
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billlr
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I thought it was pretty good.
There should be MORE teases with virgin girls losing their hymens aspart of the plot.
Bill
There should be MORE teases with virgin girls losing their hymens aspart of the plot.
Bill
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Thanks, guys.
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"So, what do you say?
Hurry up!
I think the baboons need some new chew toys." - Kyra from "A day at the zoo".
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Very hot! Loved it... Pics worked fine. I'm East Coast, I've found that around 11:00-midnight my RoadRunner broadband slows down, and especially the Milovana site. I realized that's around 8:00 in California, when everyone across the country is online...
But the tease is awesome! The virgin/ hymen part kind of lost me, and like QuazWierd said it seems to be written for gals (not to say us bottom guys can't enjoy it!) But yeah, great storyline, very creative, and well-written. Thanks, Indigo!
But the tease is awesome! The virgin/ hymen part kind of lost me, and like QuazWierd said it seems to be written for gals (not to say us bottom guys can't enjoy it!) But yeah, great storyline, very creative, and well-written. Thanks, Indigo!