One Year Challenge

[Ecik17]

Some housekeeping

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Hiya Bjorn. I heard that you weren't too happy with my edgeslaves work on the wife bedroom game. Something about "mailing it in?"

Well.. I made him fix it. It should be better now. To be clear, he's just using the normal browser version, not downloading anything...so the basic stuff. He's not very advanced, Ecik. And just so you know...I make Ecik play test everything before it goes to you...for quality. So if you don't like something ,let me know. I'll make him fix it...

[Ecik17]

Before task

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Short: under 20 minutes. Continues a weekly date with Leana...

Task:

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Hi Boyfriend! I hope you weren't too mad about losing at our last game night...

She takes a moment to drink...is she nervous?

I just want to let you know that I want you to do well. And...I know you have a huge cock...but lately I've been thinking about...raising the stakes a bit in our games. Why? I want you to compete...to try your hardest every time...and...something else we've talked about...swinging...I have some people on my list..and I'm sure you do too...and i really want you to be there. To watch. But only if you want. I was thinking about inviting some other gamers over. You may know them...they are...
She shows you some videos...
https://pmvhaven.com/video/cardi-b-up-d ... p=7&hot=33
https://pmvhaven.com/video/johnny-sins- ... el-profile
https://pmvhaven.com/video/vday-crash-o ... el-profile





So next time...you'll try your hardest, right in our game night? Because if you continue to lose...I kinda want them to try me out. Is that ok? I can tell them to not show up if you want...and of course...you could watch...

You leave the date, denied...but curious about what other games Leana has for you. It's clear she wants to do some swinging with you..

[Bjorn13]

As you’ve probably all noticed I’ve been struggling to find the energy/time/focus to write my reports. I’m going to try and be better moving forward. But I also think I need to spend less time writing them. This will make them shorter and less detailed. But I can’t find any other solution at the moment. Please feel free to ask questions if you ever feel that my reports leave out details that are of interest to you, and I will endeavour to answer as soon as time permits.

With that here follows three reports.

Thanks for the set!

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I honestly really liked it. The writing was at times a bit confusing, overall not that great, but, occasionally, it was really good… So it was very inconsistent. But I didn’t mind too much, like I’ve said ells where, I do enjoy variety. And I did like many of the pics, the general theme was nice and the set did turn me into a bit of a horny, panting, mess.

One of the best/worst parts was how it never seemed to end. It was just a looooooong edging marathon. And I was quite sensitive from the start. So it didn’t take me very long to start getting worried that I would have an accident. Towards the end I was kind of desperate for it to just stop… in a good way.

I quite like Katya. She isn’t exactly my type, a bit too petite, especially around the hips/tights. But she has a very pretty face, kind eyes and I do like her energy and quirkyness:

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Yay! Let’s jump there immediately!


My soup is warm.

Cute, silly and energetic.

My favourite pics were the ones of the three girls showing their asses, with or without bikini-bottoms. They were very hot.

Thanks, again, for the set.

Price to Pay: Write a set including Katya Clover

I would love to, but, as you can see above, I just don’t have the time. And I’ve already got a couple of projects in the works that I would need to finish first.

[Bjorn13]

Ooooh, man, I did not expect that to go on for sooooo looooong. Of course I now know why…

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I really liked the set a lot. Lots of veeeeery hot pics, good theme/story and this was the set where I had to use the blacked.com rule, so I had to edge… a lot!

If I had to complain I would say that the writing was a little bit… Boring? Like I would have liked it to be a bit sexier, more passion/teasing. But it was perfectly serviceable, comprehensive and made sense with the story.

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I've heard that Aruba's resort is nice this time of year. Look at those mountains...

I didn’t see any mountains, I was too distracted by the hills.

Looking at it now there really weren't that many pics. But, at the time, it felt endless. I think that's just a combination of how horny and sensitive I constantly am these days; that most pics had multiple edges; and that there was a short comment to every pic. It slowed down my progress. So when I reached Haley’s 9 min video after all of that I was like: MOOOORE?!?!! It was a great video, really kept me close to the edge the whole time. I even very nearly had a ruined orgasm by accident, but I stopped in time, only leaked a tiny bit of cum.

But I’m sure you are wondering how it ended, how I did with the trick question. Well, it was a bit tricky. Because I did not interpret it as a test at first. Kampala is in north africa and I knew she did mention a place in north africa. So maybe I just didn’t recognise the place because she never said the city? But I did remember Mexico city, and that it was the only one out of these that I believed that she actually mentioned.

Now, for full transparency, I did decide to go with Mexico City, but I did open the Kampala spoiler first. I sometimes do this out of curiosity, though I try and only do it at the end. But, again, I didn’t realise this was a test and I just wanted to have an idea of what the paths I didn’t pick were like before I went on. And, I think, the chastity/denial would have been very hot, and frustrating, especially since it would have made more sense with the final vid. That said I really didn’t want to upset Leana, and, like I said, I did pay enough attention to her to realise that she only mentioned Mexico City. So I feel like me having a glance at the other option was fair. So I had my ruined orgasm in the end.


As always, thanks for the set, it was another great one. Here are some of my fav pics with comments (I liked all of Leana’s pics, but didn’t want to favourise any one of them.)


Kendra is always such a hottie! And I appreciated the handbra in this one.


Very hot pic, love all the girls bent over, making eyecontact.


Again, great handbra! And I love how exposed she looks, so vulnerable surrounded by all those strong and well hung men. (I’m not in the slightest bit gay or attracted to men, but I do still find big cocks to be very arousing. )


I was scrolling down fairly slowly on these pics, and I loved the slow reveal of her underwear. Generally it is also a very hot pic, she looks so determined. She looks like she would either beat some balls black and blue, or get over confident and get fucked into submission. Very hot either way.



I really loved the look of this girl, very hot! Great ass, smooth and soft looking skin, pretty face/eyes/hair. And I love the snowy landscape + underdressed. The only negative part, for me, is that her lips are too puffed up, especially visible in the second pic. But, with her, it doesn’t bother me as much as with most other models.


Not necessarily the best pic of Summer. Her face looks a little bit awkward in this one. But I really liked the underwear and I love how her ass looks in this pic.

[Bjorn13]

@all: Btw, in case anyone has missed this, I do always try to quote the task I am writing feedback for. So that anyone reading can just follow that quote to the original task. That way any reader can do the task themself if it sounds interesting, read through it first if they want the full context, or return to it if anything in my feedback is confusing. Just wanted to put that out there.

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Quite a simple task, but I did really enjoy it. At this point my stamina feels like it is mostly back as well. Even though I still edge very easily and feel closer to accidentally cumming than usual.

I did like it, never used fikfap before. And I can see how it can be used for some interesting challenges and gooning. But I do think I prefer regifs, so far it seems they have more variety, easier to find niched content and better tags. But, again, nothing wrong with multiple sights like these, and I did enjoy exploring this one.

I did find this girl:
https://fikfap.com/user/emilylu

Which I quite liked. I enjoyed the sexy music and all the teasing.

At the end I locked up like a good boy and took a walk. I only took off the cage to sleep. (I love sleeping in chastity, but it messes with my sleep and makes me very tired. Since I’m already very tired, I didn’t want to make things worse.) I put it back on today, and plan on keeping it on until I do the next task.

Again, thanks for the task!

[2O23]

I would love to, but, as you can see above, I just don’t have the time. And I’ve already got a couple of projects in the works that I would need to finish first.

Don't worry Bjorn, there is no deadline, I guess. But please don't forget about it, just schedule it after those projects.
However if you don't, I might accidentally pour my hot soup into your pants.

[Bjorn13]

Just a quick update. I’m currently working on some reports, but I don’t want to rush them. To keep myself motivated I will not do any more tasks until I finish my reports… So I will be fully denied until then. … And my balls are already aching a lot.

That’s all, take care!

Edit: Also I will be very busy next week, so you probably won’t be hearing anything from me then.

[SleeplessSub]

Hey Bjorn.....

I just uploaded a large set for for Addict in the other thread. And...I've gotten kind of used to you playing everything I post, even if it's for others, so.....

[Bjorn13]

So… In my last brief update I mentioned that I was working on three reports, they are now done and will be posted below. I won’t go into details about why I’ve been absent but, in short, our dog had to go through surgery and I’ve been looking after them at night… getting about 4 hours sleep per 24h the last 3 or so days. So that’s why I haven’t posted anything. It was a serious operation, but, for now, it looks like it’s going to be fine.

But, regardless of the current situation, I’m sure you’ve all noticed I’ve been struggling to find the energy/time/focus to write my reports. I’m going to try and be better moving forward. But I also think I need to spend less time writing them. This will make them shorter and less detailed moving forward. But I can’t find any other solution at the moment. I can’t take any more focus from irl stuff and I need to do tasks to write about them. Still, sorry in advance for any decrease in quality.

With that here follows three reports:

… Well, I can't say I was surprised by this.

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Damn… Remy was absolutely killing it in that outfit! All those pics where perfect! Like the first pic was hot af, love her sexy trimmed tummy! But then, pun ALWAYS intended, she showed her ass in the next pic… And the way her pose in the third pic accentuated her slim waist and wide hips… I’m obsessed with the curve of her body, from the bra down to her stockings, otherworldly! And I honestly did not think it was possible for any buns to look better than hers in the second pic, but, somehow, she managed to make her caboose look even more impressive in the 4th pic. … But that… is probably enough of me fawning over how surreally gorgeous Remy is.

The writing was excellent, in that it did everything it needed to with no superfluous excess. I loved her teasing, this part was sooooo hot: “You don't want to go back there, right? Jail? It's even worse now than before. Or maybe you should talk to your wife about how bad jail is...wasn't she there at some time?”

It’s been a few years since I was in horny jail, but her saying jail is “worse than before” both excites and terrifies me. And, of course, her reminding me of this set, really turned me on.

I really felt that she hit the perfect balance. Like yes, I was veeeeery much turned on by her teasing. But I also did get a bit worried. My last time with her was rough, it was awesome, but still very much pushing my limits. Whilst the idea of more of that turns me on a lot, it also worries me especially with the potential of it getting even worse, potentially involving my wife! So, in short, warning received and understood. …

I won’t comment too much on the pmv. (I get way to horny/distracted if I try to skip through them to comment on specifics. ) But they where all great. I love watching her with the hops, so mesmerizing. And the final vid was super hot. I loved the teasing at the start and the song.

And if the police call me again to come check in on you, I won't be happy.

Don’t threaten me with a good time. Honestly, despite what I said early, it’s very tempting to “mess up”, if that means more time with Remy. But, again, I’m not actual sure if I would be able to handle the consequences. And, at any rate, I prefer when my failures are genuine, so I will try my best to stay in her good books. So I followed her instructions and stayed in chastity until I went to bed. (Roughly 4 hours.)

[Bjorn13]

What a great way to start my day!

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Although… Now I’m already very horny, sensitive and easily triggered. And I have a lot to get through today.

I picked the lawnmower task. Felt appropriate, since I actually need to do that today. Some really good pics in there, always love some sexy outdoors exhibitionists. Hopefully I will remember to pick out some favourites and comment on them before I post this. …. Surprise, I did remember!

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Honestly loved this first pic. Her little smirk is super sexy, and I love her tights, perfect thiccness. And that cameltoe turns me absolutely crazy!


… I don’t really have anything to add.


I love how cocky and provocative her expression is. The pose with the panties pulled to the side is sooooo hot!

I did also take out the trash, I was curious. I only watched one and a half pm before I decided that I’d have enough. I didn't want to push myself too hard this early in the day.

(I wrote that just after I did the first part of the set, everything that follows is written a couple days later.)

So, yes, a great start to my day. Starting in bed and spreading the teasing out throughout the day really made me constantly horny, like I could never forget about it and was always looking forward to the next part. It felt incredible, but was also extremely frustrating.

After I actually mowed the lawn, and had a rest, I did the next part. It was a pretty good game. I haven’t had much experience with it, since most of the development has happened this year. But I did get some pretty hot models, and I was soooo sensitive that it was hard not to constantly edge. I had to go two rounds because I ran out of edges the first time.

Not much else to say, it was great as a means to keep me aroused like this, and I think it would have worked as a short one of tasks in its own right.

After lunch and a bit more resting I moved on to the main part… I must say that I did underestimate it a bit. Because you wrote: “which would require an hour each in the morning afternoon, evening, and late night.” I sort of assumed that each part would be roughly similar in length/challange. I mean I obviously assumed that the party would be the main part and longer than the rest, but it was tougher than I had thought it would be.

I was getting more and more turned on as I was greeting the guests. And I was “stroking” more and faster as they arrived. Haley was looking particularly pretty and seeing Cole, with those piercing eyes, instantly got me hot and bothered, reminding me of the last time I saw her. I think I edged when I saw Penny, I for sure remember giving my balls a hard squeeze for her… it felt appropriate. And I loved how she was the only one not proper, showing one boob. It really suited her character, alluring, rulebreaker, and dangerous.

I started outside…

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I can't believe your wife and I have the same taste in men! Her guest list is so great!


Nggh! That was both subtle and very hot! I also loved the pic, her cute, “innocent”, face and sexy ass really went well with the text. But, yes, I loved that bit of teasing. And it was a great video to start out with. Even though I think this is my third time watching it, it is very hot. I especially love when he lifts her up, and fucks her standing.

Next I went to the living room. It was a pretty good scene, but I’m not a fan of Dee. So, I will admit, I did speed up the vid at times. That said, I was already getting worried. Assuming that all the locations were like this I was in for a loooong ride and I was already aching and struggling in my cage.

Then I moved outside again, to the pool this time. And, unsurprisingly, this was one of my favourites. Remy’s ass looks soooooo damned good in that outfit! She is a little bit on the petite side there. (I looked it up and the video is over 10 years old.) But I still loved it. And here is whear I really started to struggle. I was aching soooo much and I was getting so sensitive I was seriously worried that I might not be able to make it through. Maybe I would fail and give Remy a reason to visit me again after all. But I was also getting more motivated at this point. I really didn’t want to disappoint the girls and I was genuinely a bit worried about the potential consequences for failing. So I pushed on.

(Fuck, it is so damn frustrating to write this! I keep getting horny and distracted.)

I don’t remember the exact order of the next few locations, so I will just put them in the order I think it was. Starting with the spare bedroom. I looooooved all of Cole's pics, they were sooooo hot! The way she always made eye contact, her incredibly sexy butt, those sexy/cute socks and panties! She looked so gooooood, it nearly completely broke me. On top of that it was a super hot scene. The theme was really hot; her getting jealous of her moms new lower, so she decided to seduce him for herself. And the way she was confident, until she asked him to fuck her and he really started pounding her, turning her into a slut, a bitch in heat… yes… that was really hot.

I think I might have gone to Angell’s bedroom at that point, thinking that there was a chance that she might unlock me. I didn't want to postpone it any longer. Of course that did not happen. It was good to see, however, that Scarlit was getting some… first hand experience for her course. I really loved this vid as well. I loved the slow teasing at the start, the sexy music etc. But I especially loved how encouraging, bordering on crazy, she was getting, at around 13 minutes in. The way she was slapping the other girl and was literally pushing him to fuck her harder was incredibly hot. Never realised that such a scenario could be such a big turn on for me. I was thinking just how hot it would be for a girl to do that with my partner and her bull. Like pushing him to fuck her even harder than he normaly would.

Next I went to the garage. I knew what I would find, so I was holding of on it. What I didn’t expect was a trip down memory lane. That klip is from the first video I ever saw of Penny. And, I’m not sure, but I think that might have been my first experience with cbt. So it’s no wonder I always feel submissive towards her, and associate her with being a bit psychotic. I did try and mimic her actions, it felt appropriate. Of course I couldn’t really do the biting part. Normaly I would try and replicate that with my fingernails, but with the cage even that was nearly impossible. Whilst I did think that there was probably going to be more than one vid, I can’t say I was surprised. Now I’m just wondering if there will be any consequences of this…

I then went to the basement. This was a veeeery interesting video. To me a good dom (irl, not necessarily fantasy) is always concerned with the wellbeing of his sub. A good dom, takes responsibility and aims to guide their sub to self-improvement. So it was very interesting to see this played out in the video. No matter how rough or “mean” he was being, he was, ultimately, very caring. Asking questions, looking for weaknesses that she wanted corrected. Yes… very fascinating. … of course it was also hot af. To the point that I didn’t really get bored. It was, however, a bit slow, especially at the start. So I did take the liberty of speeding up the vid a lot early on and then mostly watched at 1,5x speed. After less than half the vid, I don't know how long exactly, I did stop. I still had one room and I was getting dangerously close to an accident.

But there wasn’t much going on in the last room… I mean it was, of course, great to see Leana making friends. But there wasn’t any vid or similar. So I went back and speed/skipped through the rest of the basement activities. I was pushing it, but being as careful as I could. After that I, of course, had to make dinner for my guests. It turned out great, marinated pork fillet, cooked in a cast-iron pot. With homemade sweet potato fries, garlic-butter, and some mini baguette. (Yes, that was literally the diner I made. )

After dinner, and a bit more resting, Angell finally let me out of my cage. … only to then proceed to cuck me. I love how she was all “not here” “what if someone sees us” for like the first 15 seconds… and then instantly just surrendered and went with it… I guess I need to be careful with her and wine in the future. If she gets this easy going from a glass or two, who knows what she might get up to. …

I was soooo horny, no wonders after all the chastity teasing, and caught up in the moment, that I forgot that they where fucking in the coridor. When I realised, after about 2 and a half minute, I was getting worried… and, I have to admit, even more aroused. I was like “please honey, not so loud. Someone will hear you.” It was humiliating, worrying… and very arousing. I love how loud she gets when she is properly fucked. But it was, honestly, a bit of a relief when they finally went inside. As weird as it probably sounds I kind of felt a bit more jealous when he started eating her out. I was like: “Hey, that’s my pussy! I’m the one supposed to kiss and lick it.” It just felt more… intimate in a way. But, don’t worry, it was also hot as hell!

Because of how sensitive I was, from everything that had gone down before, I was dangerously close to having an accident through most of the vid. I genuinely didn’t know if I would make it to the end or not. And her loud moaning, and french cursing, didn’t make it any easier for me. (It’s honestly adorable how she goes full french when she really gets into it. )

When she the suddenly went: “You want to fuck my ass?” that very nearly drew me over the edge. Like I’ve mentioned before, the idea of other men fucking my partner analy, when I never have/will, is a massive turn on for me. And I loved the way she fell over from cumming so hard. It is always very hot seeing my partner lose all control with someone else like that.

But I did last through the whole vid, and, when I was finally allowed to cum it felt amazing! It was incredibly intense and I was insanely sensitive. It was so intense it was, in a way, painful. But not in any bad way. It was like a very mild post orgasm palming, even when I wasn’t touching at all. It sort of felt like stroking the head of your cock, intense but manageable, whilst combined with the overwhelming pleasure of a full orgasm. It felt incredible, and I was absolutely exhausted afterwards. I honestly just wanted to stay there and fall asleep. I probably would have, if it weren't for the fact that the last bit of my consciousness was fully aware just how bad that would be. (Waking up after sleeping in an uncomfortable position, covered in my own cum, would have been awful.) So I, eventually, forced myself to get up, cleaned off, and went to bed.

It was all very satisfying… But my hornyness was returning a lot quicker than I thought it would. I think part of the reason was aaaaaaall the build up. Like my body doesn't seem to think that one orgasm was enough after a full day of teasing. So now, a couple of days later, it almost feels worse than before… so thanks for that.

[Bjorn13]

Fifth orgasm report:


This is just a brief report, for full context read the post above.

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After a full day of teasing I was finally allowed to cum. And, when I did, cumming felt amazing! It was incredibly intense and I was insanely sensitive. It was so intense it was, almost, painful. But not in any bad way. It was like a very mild post orgasm palming, even when I wasn’t touching at all. It sort of felt like stroking the head of your cock, intense but manageable, whilst combined with the overwhelming pleasure of a full orgasm. It felt incredible, and I was absolutely exhausted afterwards. I honestly just wanted to stay there and fall asleep. I probably would have, if it weren't for the fact that the last bit of my consciousness was fully aware just how bad that would be. (Waking up after sleeping in an uncomfortable position, covered in my own cum, would have been awful.) So I, eventually, forced myself to get up, cleaned off, and went to bed.

It was all very satisfying… But my hornyness was returning a lot quicker than I thought it would. I think part of the reason was aaaaaaall the build up. Like my body doesn't seem to think that one orgasm was enough after a full day of teasing.

[Bjorn13]

See...your feedback is being read!

Haha, I never doubted that YOU do.

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Sooooo… I’m writing this report today, on the 21st… I’ve lost track on the exact date when I did this task. But, looking around, it must have been about a week ago. o.O I was a horny mess then, now it’s veeeeery hard to focus on writing this. The last few days of no tasks, no relief, and minimal porn/teasing has only made me all the more sensitive.… Just to be clear, whilst it is frustrating being so unfocused and easily distracted, I am loving being this horny and desperate.


Now let’s focus on the actual task. And, I must confess, I’m a little bit in two minds here. On the one hand I loved it for what it was and tried to be. On the other there are a few things that, I think, I would have enjoyed more. But I’ll save constructive criticism for the end.

Obviously I loved the theme, I mean, I suggested it so it would be weird otherwise. I liked the “I “left” my wallet at home!” line… very much has the “ops I dropped my pen, would be a shame if anyone noticed my lack of panties while I bend over to pick it up” energy. I find this type of teasing both hilarious and very sexy.

For the actual challenge I had to edge quite a few times. I did it whilst looking at Images of Angell striping in a window next to the poker game. It felt appropriate and was very hot to see her lose more and more clothes as the game went on. Now I’m not a total poker noob, but this was my first time on this site. As such I had to “get a feel” for the AI. How easy/hard would it be to bully them out of the pot, how far could I push to milk them for a few more chips etc. On top of this I was a bit unlucky at first. I think I might not have had a winning hand for the first 15 minutes or so… Being horny and distracted didn’t exactly help me make good decisions either.

At some point I was at the bottom, having, I think 100 or so less than the second to last player. I was becoming pretty certain that I would lose. After that, however, my luck started to turn and I had a better idea of how to play against these opponents. So I won a couple of big 100+ pots whilst only losing small amounts on a couple of folds. I actually got to second place and the pot was growing during the final hand. And… I actually won the hand! … But it wasn’t enough. I ended with 1033 and the winner got 1125. It was close, a couple more hands and I might have had it. But that’s the way of the game.

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A loser ? Just as expected. Lock your cock up...and invite the poker winner to our house...he did pay for our drinks...

That felt appropriate. And, I can’t complain to much, it’s always a treat to see her get dicked down.

He was good...especially at poker...but honestly. You are better at everything else. Way better. next time...I really want you to try to win!

Awww, thanks, and I definitely will. … Although her moans were very convincing … and at least he was good for one thing I’m not… stretching out her ass.

Of course I was denied at the end, though frustrating, not surprising. Also that final pic was incredible. Pantieless, cum running down her chin and boobs. Looking at it now I just want to give her a passionate kiss.

Side note: no I don’t like the idea of eating another man's cum. The thing about this that turns me on is reclaiming and showing my partner that I love her still… maybe even more now. So more like: I don’t care that you taste of another man’s cum. Rather than: I like tasting another man's cum when I kiss you… does that make sense?

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Now for the constructive criticism. Like I said at the start, I loved this task for what it is: short, brief and to the point. A set up, a challenge, a punishment/reward video, the end. With that my first point is less criticism of the task and more reflection on some things I would have loved to see in a longer task. At times this felt a bit rushed and I would have loved more teasing from Angell.

One of the things that really trigger my fetishes is immersing myself in the scenario. And I think that if she would have teased me a bit more before, during and/or after the game that could have really got me going more. Addict’s set, that you referenced before, did a great job with having her repeatedly tease me. I don’t like giving specific examples, but, maybe, she could have teased me about a particular player before the game. Or I could have been made to pause the timer at certain intervals and she could have teased me based on how the game was going etc.

Again, I want to make it clear, I get that this wasn’t meant to be some kind of detailed HMCP set. And I love it for what it was. My “criticism” here is purely meant to inspire.

That said I do have two very minor actual issues.

1. This rule: “after every hand you lose, you have to edge before playing another round.” felt a little unclear. Would folding before entering the pot count as “losing” for example? How about after paying the blind, but before committing? I also think it might have been interesting to make me go soft after each edge, but then 30 min would be too short… maybe have me pause the timer after each hand? Just speculating here.

2. I’m personally, generally, not a big fan of non-immersive dialogue. What I mean by that is that her instructions for the game felt a bit out of place, especially since your instructions right after did a great job anyway. Specifically the “30 minutes” and “on medium” felt out of place. Like why would she be speaking like that and what would “on medium” even mean. Again, not a big deal. But I tend to prefer when such specifics are kept out of the dialogue.

So, in conclusion, I DID love the task. But I also thought of a few things that could have made it more impactful for me. And I am looking forward to more shenanigans with wifey.

Lastly I just wanted to mention that I’ve added some more inspiration in my rules. I especially recommend checking out Ours to Share. Could probably be a good inspiration for Leana. It’s sweet, “wholesome”, and gets going very quickly. Even just a few minutes of playing should get you some interesting events.

[Bjorn13]

Ooooh fuck! This break has made me sooooo horny and sensitive now that I’m getting back into it. Not that this is a surprise to anyone. But it is extremely frustrating and my balls are constantly aching slightly, as if they were being gently squeezed by a ballscrusher. And even just starting to write this report is making me pant and my face goes slightly ahegao.

… I might regret admitting this but whilst this is getting difficult and it is genuinely very frustrating… I must confess, I am loving feeling this horny and desperate. Like part of me just wants to get teased and denied more and more.

On to the actual task ☝

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This was a fantastic one to come back to. The writing and teasing was honestly fantastic, more of this please! As I often tried to do in the past I will first go through events as I experienced them and then give some constructive comments at the end.

Hi Boyfriend! I hope you weren't too mad about losing at our last game night...

This opener was sooooo good, very subtle. Like the way she teases me about losing that final round, whilst doing so in a way that could be meant in a completely innocent way. Intentional or not, her bringing it up instantly makes my mind think about the possible consequences of that. And that pic is genuinely very pretty, the sort a bf would take of his gf on vacation. Wholesome and innocent, whilst her linen is putting just enough focus on her chest to make me a little self-continuous. Making my mind go: “Are other men checking her out? What if they are?... Would I/she like it if they did?” On top of that, the theme of the pic, even though it is technically from California, made me think of Mexico, which made me think of the whole Haley situation… which turned me on even more. So, yes, this one pic and line was a perfect start. (Typical me trying to cut down on time spent on reports: proceeds to write a massive comment just on one pic and line of dialogue. )

And the quality kept coming! Obviously the next text and the pic matched perfectly. I felt like I could almost perceive a slight tremor as she took a sip. Her looking a bit nervous instantly made me both nervous and excited as well. My mind started rushing places. Like “Does this have to do with me losing that final round? Is she planning to do something risky… something… naughty, here? Now? How far would she go?” Of course she wasn’t actually going to do anything rash right there and then. But I loved the tension that was built up here. I love being allowed to have my thoughts wander, being led to think something has or will happen that is more extreme than what is actually going on.

The writing was still great on the next pic, the pmv part. I particularly loved: “but lately I've been thinking about...raising the stakes a bit in our games.” “I want you to compete…” “...and...something else we've talked about...swinging…” All great lines! As for the pmvs, they were, mostly, great. A nice way to get back in the swing of things. I think the first one was my favourite one. Solid editing, sexy girls etc. I loved the moment at 1:30 with Val, that zoom and her expression was mindblowingly hot. And the thought of Dredd stretching out Leana both filled me with excitement and… well, dread. Like, irl, I’m comfortable with my size, I’m pretty big, but he’s like HUGE huge. On that topic, I generally like to imagine, in these scenarios, that I can please my partners, like Leana, more with passion and knowledge of her weaknesses etc. than pure size. But guys like Dredd can stretch her out and reach places I can’t. So we would please her in different ways.

The second vid was probably the worst, short and Johnny seems a bit fake, like a poser… That said, the thought of Leana falling for, getting turned on by, that also turns me on a lot. I also loved it when the music slowed and the screen turned red. That, combined with the way the girl looked at the camera, really made it feel like they were recording for her partner. The last one was nearly as good as the first. It felt more dom-play oriented, and the thought of Leana being treated like that scares me a bit… whilst it also excites me a lot.

So next time...you'll try your hardest, right in our game night? Because if you continue to lose...I kinda want them to try me out.

That was probably the single most hottest line in this task… easily one of the hottest once I’ve ever read. This part really hit that spot of making me very motivated to try hard, whilst also making me extremely turned on at the prospect of failing.


Now for the more constructive comments. As usual I trust you, Ecik, to come up with something solid either way. So if my comments don’t align with your plans, don’t worry too much about it.

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I will say that her constant slight hesitation did, at first, feel a bit much. Her going “Is that ok? I can tell them to not show up” and “But only if you want.” sort of took me out of it a bit. But, reading it now, I kind of love it. Like it shows that she is still hesitant. She comes across as still being unsure if this is truly what I want. Maybe as she realises just how much I get turned on by her teasing and seeing her… experiment with others, she might come more out of her shell and become more confident. So I did end up liking her hesitation and her constant looking for my approval in the end.

One thing that I love so far, and hope to see more of in the future, is the “baby steps” with Leana. Especially compared to Angell. I love her too, of course, but this more gradual, subtle teasing, just hits my fetishes harder. That said, don’t be scared of moving things further when you feel like it, even if that sometimes means assuming my response/reaction or, even, making “me” say things if you need it for the story. It’s generally safe to assume that I will encourage her to try new things and break out of her shell… Just gradually, no rush. Currently I would be fine with her flirting with or sending risky pics, to other men. I would even be fine with her giving a stranger at a bar a blowjob in a WC, whilst texting me and sending pics. I also like the idea of her and I always use condoms. But I would, eventually, like her bulls, or just one of them, to fuck her raw. (I understand that this can be tricky with pics/vids, which is why I always consider those more representative, and the writing more canonical. If she says they are using condoms, I will assume that they are even if the visuals don't show it.)

Sorry if I’m being annoying, and please don’t feel like I’m pushing you to do this. But if you are looking for inspiration then Netorase Phone handles this kind of gradual teasing extreamly well. Also I like the MCs messages/attitude, so you could also use that as a reference for my possible reactions. (There are plenty of alternative sites if you don’t want to use F95.)

Also doing this task reminded me of a situation in one of the games I’ve linked in my rules: My new girlfriend. In fact if you ever feel like reading a long retelling of that scene I did post one here. If you want to play the VN yourself don’t open the spoiler below, otherwise read my retelling first, then come back here.

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So, to tie it back to what I was saying before, later it turns out that the gf didn’t send those last pics. She thought that would be taking things too far, too fast. I love these kinds of rollercoaster situations. Netorase/sharing has a type of progression to it, once you actually cross a line there is no going back. But now the door is open, and, maybe next time, it will actually be real.

Again, never feel pushed/forced to check out any VN/game etc. that I recommend. The reason that I suggest these is because I prefer offering sources of inspiration, rather than giving specific examples. It keeps me more in the unknown. Like, this way, I don’t know what, or how, you will be inspired. Also, I generally find it easier to just show scenes that turn me on, rather than try and describe exactly what about it turns me on. But, ultimately, I want people to check out stuff that I link, at least in part, for their own interest/amusement.

Also:

something else we've talked about...swinging...I have some people on my list..and I'm sure you do too.

I haven’t really thought of girls I would like to have fun with, with her blessing. I generally prefer it if she is the one pushing for it to happen, encouraging it, getting turned on by it etc. As long as that is the case I guess any hottie with some pov scenes would do. After a quick search, Adalind Gray looks like a good potential. Other than that, closeupfantasy has some awesome pov scenes where you can't necessarily tell who the girl is.


Sorry if this was an unusually messy report. I really liked the task a lot. And it made me think of a lot of different things, which I then felt the need to share. Tl;dr I’m loving Leana’s story so far. I’m very excited to see where it goes. I hope it will be generally slow, teasing, and gradual, without stagnating, pushing the boundaries slightly with each task.

[Ecik17]

Thanks for the feedback! It was helpful! I'll take those things into account going forward...

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Gave me some ideas regarding Leana and Angell...I think those things could be easily incorporated. Also, I really liked that you linked in some other sites that you liked...it helps me to refine my sets. That said...I'm out of town until July...so you may not see much until then! Remain strong!

[Ecik17]

Before task:

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About 30 minutes. No toys needed.

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Meanwhile...at the local bar...

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Angell is distracted...she is not paying attention to you. Instead...she is looking at this person..

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Did someone catch you eye? Someone not me?

It's ok...don't feel bad. Our relationship is open, after all. And you did say you'd like to fuck her.

so you if want to fuck her...go on, and do so! If she'll let you! Just don't cum in her...or for her. Normally..I'd lock you up, but I trust you. Don't worry about me...I'll have my own fun...

So stroke and edge as much as you want.

Angell leaves...you with her...

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Your wife told me that I can play with you. But can you keep up? You can leave at anytime.
Watch and edge

https://pmvhaven.com/video/gina-goonfes ... p=25&hot=0

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Still want to fuck me? You can't. But my boyfriend says you can watch...


https://pmvhaven.com/video/gina-goes-bl ... p=30&hot=0

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I think it's time to return you to your wife...

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It looks like someone had a good time...

But still needs some relief...

So...go on...ruin your orgasm for me!

Leave early (choose anytime)

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You have had enough with Gina...You go back home to Angell...

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Had a good time with Gina? I'm glad...So you'll come to bed with me!

Go to bed. You are denied.