[RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Censored Details

[Razorsedge]

This is a tread for any feedback regarding my Eos Tease - Censored Details
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=81472

Please let me know here if you have any issues running the tease, or if you find any egregious spelling errors.

It was my first time with the Eos Editor, so I think I have sorted any issues and read over it all several times,but I would be surprised if I caught them all.

I hope you enjoy the story, it takes a little bit to get going fully, but who doesn't like a little build up.

Enjoy.

[gettingtherenow1]

Great tease, but I keep stuck in the loop, when Harley is in

[StellaRack]

Really liked it. It was very well done

Love censored content

I can confirm that page18-Company-Loop is a bit broken
Picking Cumming works but it is a race till the 10 seconds is up and the page resets

Would be cool if saying your name was Showtime to the pool girl triggered something

[SleeplessSub]

Great tease, but I keep stuck in the loop, when Harley is in

My guess is that's on purpose, if you eventually pick cum you get to the end.


@RazorsEdge

I liked it a lot. I only read trough it, didn't stroke. But I will be fully playing it at another time. I loved the idea of the "magic word" getting me in trouble each time. I played it until the Harley part and went eventually for the cum option. Like I mentioned above, I suspect that that is the intended ending? Maybe you could have made that a bit clearer by having her say a line like "I'm not stopping until you cum" or something like that. Only thing I didn't like about the ending, is that there were no consequences for cumming. An angry e-mail from Dr Reid, promising to punish me with an extra harsh censor or something would've been nice.
I could easily see this becoming a series, where we have to return to the clinic to test different types of censors etc. Or, what you could do is create custom Puryfi settings and link them in the teases. Make us do a Milo tease, and at the end we receive the settings that will lock for a week (or longer?), until we can play the next one...

Anyways, well done. The writing was pretty good and creative. So for filling in this niche.

[access_denied]

Not a fan of loops or getting stuck in them. At that point what started off as a great tease becomes a 1.

[Razorsedge]

Thanks guys, there was meant to be a loop there. but not as the finale. I will look into it and try to resolve it

-- Should be resolved. I had too much text after the choice, changed text to be on whole new page to avoid timer nightmares.

[Razorsedge]

@RazorsEdge

I liked it a lot. I only read trough it, didn't stroke. But I will be fully playing it at another time. I loved the idea of the "magic word" getting me in trouble each time. I played it until the Harley part and went eventually for the cum option. Like I mentioned above, I suspect that that is the intended ending? Maybe you could have made that a bit clearer by having her say a line like "I'm not stopping until you cum" or something like that. Only thing I didn't like about the ending, is that there were no consequences for cumming. An angry e-mail from Dr Reid, promising to punish me with an extra harsh censor or something would've been nice.
I could easily see this becoming a series, where we have to return to the clinic to test different types of censors etc. Or, what you could do is create custom Puryfi settings and link them in the teases. Make us do a Milo tease, and at the end we receive the settings that will lock for a week (or longer?), until we can play the next one...

Anyways, well done. The writing was pretty good and creative. So for filling in this niche.

Thanks
I added the angry email idea. I do agree that there was potential for so much more.
I just needed to cut things off where I did,
-to see if people even enjoyed it
-I'd been spending too much time working on it
-If I didn't stop it somehwere, it would become an unmanageable behemoth that never got finished.
(Perfect is the enemy of good, and all that)

People seem to be enjoying it though, so perhaps Dr. Reid will return in future for a sequel. or mabye an assosiate of hers?

[Leto]

Loop and locked

[moose]

Really enjoyed the concept of this one! Would love to see more checkpoints in the future in case I want to return and come back later to continue.

[Hdf123hdf]

I don't know if I'm just stupid but in the beginning when defining the trigger, I write "Showtime" and it's incorrect.

[jhorny10493]

I survived the night with Harley and went to bed. When I woke up I chose “Showtime” and did the edging but the report with Riley says I failed. I restarted and chose “get out of bed” and I still failed? I never click cum only edged.

[bits]

I am personally not a fan of text you can't skip through. I'm not trying to skip it, I'm just a faster reader than the tease is making me wait. It's frustrating in a non-fun way. I think during stroking sections it's absolutely fine, but the start in particular was a bit of a slog

[NSK101]

Fantastic tease thank you.

Only feedback I would give is also some way of saving progress and returning. It’s a lot to do in one sitting.

[ChastitySlave2017]

Hello @Razorsedge,
your tease was amazing, thanks for your time and fantasy.

I know what you meant, with finding an end and not create a monster
But if possible adding in your next tease the option to come back and start with another session where you left would be awesome.