[FEEDBACK] Risky Pick Legacy

[VanessaGoonerAddict]

Hi!

This tease is a lot of fun. I dont even do chastity or cbt, and tbh i barely even edge. But i love to play it anyway and imagine the despair if i was actually locked up that long, seeing the debt go up, etc. And riley is always pretty so thats a big plus.

One thing i really wish was available is a way to increase the amount of mystery cards. I think that could be a fun curse. Even with the second mystery card added from taking on chastity, i was barely able to hit the mystery card even a few times after many many attempts. Im really curious to see more effects from her mystery cards, but i just cant land on them.

[Slutmatty]

Great tease needs more task boring to do on your own maybe CEI card punishment card pegging just needs more task and involved with the Mistress

[Kaelis]

Awesome tease, lots of fun.

It would be nice if you could see your current debt and owed tasks from the main menu screen - maybe displayed in Notifications the same way chastity release is displayed?

Piling on with the bug reports:

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• Mistress Offering - gave 100 credits - got told I would be given 150 debt, was given 0 debt.

• When passing on an offer - specifically the "As you wish (name)" line, there's no space between the end of wish and the (name).

And a huge round of applause for how quick you've been with updating and patching all of this stuff we're finding!

[WorriedPuff]

I might be in the minority here, but part of me loves that the tasks aren't actually scripted inside the tease, and only strictly assigned through it. It gives me hope that making derivations of the basic gameplay loop but with different kinks, shouldn't be too hard to implement right? I know this is a refactor of an older tease, but I really hope more newer stuff gets made in this same style because it honestly plays so well. I just don't interact with CBT or chastity content much, which is why im hoping (selfishly of course) that this format gets utilized more!

And seconding of course, thank you so much for fixing so many bugs already. Some of them feel like an absolute pain to debug...

[CXZman]

Hi, thanks for fixing bugs quickly.
I just found another:

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If the deck of cards is down to only misted cards and chastity bane cards, so no more debts cards and the host makes you an offer it comes back with: „… I’ll give you NaN Credits and you take NaN debt.“

My guess is that the offers are somehow calculated on the debt values in the game and then it sort of breaks due to no values. Maybe add a hidden value to the mistery and chastity bane cards. It might be a random but relatively high value. Or as a quick fix disable offers if all the debt cards are out of the game.

Great otherwise so far.

Thank you! and yeah, that one completely blindsided me, but it should be solidly fixed now.

Piling on with the bug reports:

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• Mistress Offering - gave 100 credits - got told I would be given 150 debt, was given 0 debt.

• When passing on an offer - specifically the "As you wish (name)" line, there's no space between the end of wish and the (name).

And a huge round of applause for how quick you've been with updating and patching all of this stuff we're finding!

Thank you!
Haha this one was a little dumb :D math wasn't mathing.

It is an interesting tease, it would be much more fun for me personally though if you could do the tasks inside the tease with some instructions. If I get a certain amount of edges to do, what do I do with that then? Wouldn't even matter if images and instruction sequences repeat after a while.

Yeah I purposely kept away from that since the beginning to make the Tease a piece of work that I can afford to tackle. I do love writing those, however I'm trying to limit feature creep, and in this case narration creep. Once you start making the story dynamic and react to what the player does, it multiplies the amount of writing work. Writing is only ever easy when it's linear.

If I work on a V2 someday, that could be attempted... but on the other hand, any added dynamism in the underlying logic, and that makes storylines even harder to write. So I don't know... It certainly understandably feels like guided tasks teases should be in there, but I had to limit my scope.

Hi!

This tease is a lot of fun. I dont even do chastity or cbt, and tbh i barely even edge. But i love to play it anyway and imagine the despair if i was actually locked up that long, seeing the debt go up, etc. And riley is always pretty so thats a big plus.

Thank you! Yes, I needed a cute bitchy Mistress, and Riley was at the top of my shortlist. Good pics to pick from out there too. Makes it much easier

One thing i really wish was available is a way to increase the amount of mystery cards. I think that could be a fun curse. Even with the second mystery card added from taking on chastity, i was barely able to hit the mystery card even a few times after many many attempts. Im really curious to see more effects from her mystery cards, but i just cant land on them.

Could look into that, shouldn't be too hard to implement.

Great tease needs more task boring to do on your own maybe CEI card punishment card pegging just needs more task and involved with the Mistress

Yeah unfortunately I don't want to do that too much to avoid putting too much work on my shoulders (see above).
Now CEI I can certainly find a way to squeeze it in there somewhere. Hmmm...

Awesome tease, lots of fun.

It would be nice if you could see your current debt and owed tasks from the main menu screen - maybe displayed in Notifications the same way chastity release is displayed?

Mmmmh that's not a bad idea. Will work on that, should be too hard. Thank you!
EDIT: implemented, actually! for both Edge and Ball Slaps tasks

I might be in the minority here, but part of me loves that the tasks aren't actually scripted inside the tease, and only strictly assigned through it. It gives me hope that making derivations of the basic gameplay loop but with different kinks, shouldn't be too hard to implement right? I know this is a refactor of an older tease, but I really hope more newer stuff gets made in this same style because it honestly plays so well. I just don't interact with CBT or chastity content much, which is why im hoping (selfishly of course) that this format gets utilized more!

And seconding of course, thank you so much for fixing so many bugs already. Some of them feel like an absolute pain to debug...

Thank you !
Fortunately people are providing ample clues and dialogue lines to figure out where the issues are coming from, so spotting the bugs once reported is easy. It's testing the game without letting any bug get public that's a pain in the ass! Javascript doesn't help. At all.

Other than that, I would be honored that this format would inspire many people to do the same, but I do have to say that:

• I'm hardly a coder. Taking my tease and running with it... I don't know how ill advised it would be
• Many things are checked in many places to do many stuff, and so changing or breaking stuff will have a lot of little implications, often structural implications.

But all that being said, I'm happy giving out the code/export JSON for the tease. It's still probably too bugged or wonky to be worth sharing publicly this early, but if anyone wants a copy of the current version, hit me up in DMs!

[mulrooney13]

This tease checks all the boxes for me. I love teasing games, I love the pace of the game and how it can get out of hand if you want it to. I love the times when you can dig yourself a deeper hole by choosing certain options. Most of all I love the dialogue. That will always get me going more than a simple "Edge x times" so thank you for taking the time to make this.

The only bugs I noticed have already been pointed out. One suggestion I might offer is to maybe randomly have Riley add a bit to your debt if you don't spend it. She has that "It's your funeral" dialogue that suggests something could happen. I've seen a mystery card that increases debt but that's pretty rare to land on.

[CXZman]

This tease checks all the boxes for me. I love teasing games, I love the pace of the game and how it can get out of hand if you want it to. I love the times when you can dig yourself a deeper hole by choosing certain options. Most of all I love the dialogue. That will always get me going more than a simple "Edge x times" so thank you for taking the time to make this.

The only bugs I noticed have already been pointed out. One suggestion I might offer is to maybe randomly have Riley add a bit to your debt if you don't spend it. She has that "It's your funeral" dialogue that suggests something could happen. I've seen a mystery card that increases debt but that's pretty rare to land on.

Thank you!!

Good feedback on Debt play and fuckery. I tried to sprinkle a few of those here and there but I guess I can also really push it.

[bits]

This is AWESOME!!! I had one of my biggest cumshots ever to this, I have no idea why it was so much and with so much force, but yeah.

I love these kind of games so much, and this one is really thought out. Maybe it needs a little more balancing, after I had a good few chastity days I was able to quite easily buy a chastity release and I won an orgasm shortly after. I won it in the game, but presumably I could have bought one easily enough - maybe buying an orgasm should be disabled when on chastity release? And maybe the chastity release price should go up depending on your amount of days? Otherwise I can just keep playing to get enough credits.
I've already bought a few curses and that's upped the fun, though!

Riley is so pretty that it would be great if we were able to spend credits on more photos of her during the game to stop things getting too repetitive.

Boring: I noticed a typo where it said "And orgasm!" instead of "an orgasm" at one point, no big deal.

[bits]

Also, I am absolutely in the camp of pro-fuckery. Random (not too big) chances of her denying (or ruining) an orgasm or chastity release you won fair and square, etc. It would be awesome if she could change what's available in the store, so if you're always opting for edging she might take the option away for a while.

[PandaDark8]

Seems like if the days in chastity go beyond a certain point, it loops back around to the current day rather than display next year.

[CXZman]

Seems like if the days in chastity go beyond a certain point, it loops back around to the current day rather than display next year.

... wow, okay I didn't see that one coming I've fixed that for players that really dig their hole deep. It will show the year if the release date is not within this current year.

Also, I am absolutely in the camp of pro-fuckery. Random (not too big) chances of her denying (or ruining) an orgasm or chastity release you won fair and square, etc. It would be awesome if she could change what's available in the store, so if you're always opting for edging she might take the option away for a while.

Will try and implement more of those. I've tried to keep the branching narrative to a reasonable amount, because it quickly gets out of control

This is AWESOME!!! I had one of my biggest cumshots ever to this, I have no idea why it was so much and with so much force, but yeah.

I love these kind of games so much, and this one is really thought out. Maybe it needs a little more balancing, after I had a good few chastity days I was able to quite easily buy a chastity release and I won an orgasm shortly after. I won it in the game, but presumably I could have bought one easily enough - maybe buying an orgasm should be disabled when on chastity release? And maybe the chastity release price should go up depending on your amount of days? Otherwise I can just keep playing to get enough credits.

I've just made it so the Chastity Release now costs more every time you buy it or activate it some other way, as if it was the Chastity Release Curse.

I've already bought a few curses and that's upped the fun, though!

There you go!

Riley is so pretty that it would be great if we were able to spend credits on more photos of her during the game to stop things getting too repetitive.

Yeah for EOS editor technical reasons, it's not easy to both synch her attitudes and expressions to context AND add more pictures. There are some moments in game where I think I could add random new pictures. No promises though

Boring: I noticed a typo where it said "And orgasm!" instead of "an orgasm" at one point, no big deal.

If you find more context for the typo, I'm interested.

[Kaelis]

Found another edge case (haha).

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If you pay enough points on a Mistress Offering Card to be allowed an orgasm while in chastity, the tease doesn't do the 'well you're in chastity so you can't orgasm, but I'll let you pay for a release with Credits or Debt' thing that happens if you get a MysteryBliss card while in chastity.

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Ball Terror card: "You start with a dozen slaps" - actually instructed to do 10 slaps. Very minor thing, difference of 2 slaps per 'bet', but it would be cool if this lined up.

And a typo:

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After paying 0 at a Mistress Offering "You're already in fucking in chastity". Feel like there should be one less "in" there.

Also very fun punishment for that! Exactly the sort of flavour of 'fucking with the player' that people have been talking about in this thread.

[Frank1699]

Hello everyone! The teaser is amazing, and I love the idea of debt getting out of control, but I've found a bug:

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When you enter a chastity and then return to the teaser after a while, the time that showed your chastity period on the main screen disappears. It's as if you're not in the chastity at all.

[vegan38]

Thanks for this - I really enjoy it! I might be missing something, but what is the point of the debt at the end of the day? I got deep in debt right away which was kind of exciting. But then I realized that I could still just play again and get an orgasm card. Also, I could play again and try and get credit to buy an orgasm. So why can't I just ignore the debt? It seems like the debt should have to be paid off before being able to get an orgasm card, and the debt should have to be paid with credit or tasks before being able to use the credit for an orgasm (like you should have to have positive credit rather than negative debt). Am I misunderstanding?

[Kaelis]

Thanks for this - I really enjoy it! I might be missing something, but what is the point of the debt at the end of the day? I got deep in debt right away which was kind of exciting. But then I realized that I could still just play again and get an orgasm card. Also, I could play again and try and get credit to buy an orgasm. So why can't I just ignore the debt? It seems like the debt should have to be paid off before being able to get an orgasm card, and the debt should have to be paid with credit or tasks before being able to use the credit for an orgasm (like you should have to have positive credit rather than negative debt). Am I misunderstanding?

Debt and Credit are essentially two different currencies.
- Debt tracks how much punishment you owe
- Credit tracks progress towards guaranteed rewards


There are 4 ways to pay off debt, all of which are accessed via the Shop menu at the end of each game.

Under the Debt tab:
- trade debt for edges that you have to complete before your next game.
- trade debt for ballbusting that you have to complete before your next game
- trade debt for chastity time (you can still do games while locked up, but the orgasm card gets removed, and any edges you opt to trade for are held until you buy a chastity release or your chastity period ends).

Under the Credit tab:
- An option to spend Credit to reduce debt. Which is quick and easy, but removes your progress towards guaranteed rewards, and the exchange rate isn't great.

Under the Curse tab:
- These are the quickest ways to reduce your debt, but they all have permanent consequences for future games.

If you have 1000 or more debt and try to leave the shop, then you'll get told you can't leave until you've spent it.

Some of the Mystery cards play around with your debt / credit, punishing you for running around with a lot of debt, or removing your progress towards guaranteed rewards.

The point of the game is to end up with a high enough debt value that paying it off with edges / ballbusting /days of chastity is inconvenient enough that you'll take some curses for quick and easy debt relief with longer term consequences for future games.