The Netherworld - Trial by divinity

[schefflera0101]

Hey all,

Here is the next episode of my Netherworld series:
The Netherworld - Trial by divinity

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You have attracted the attention of a goddess.
How will she handle it? How will she treat you?

Feedback and/or error reports are very welcome.

Have fun

[gettingtherenow1]

You are back!

[Daragorn]

Oh nice! a new tease from you, one of my favourite author!
Gone through the first 3 chapters so far, and it's top notch storytelling as usual!
I definitely liked chapter 3, especially

[trap]

So happy to see a new tease from you! <3

A couple of bugs I happened across:
- On page "06-Chunmomo-4g", the "if" commands for the language check are mistakenly typed as "language=1" instead of ""language==1". So if you are doing the tease in English, you end up on the German "06-Chunmomo-5" at this point. And this also has reassigned the language to German, so you get directed to the German pages for the rest of the tease.

- The first half of the dialog on page "08-1" is entirely in English by mistake. It switches to German for the second half of the page. Both the English and German versions of this page also have a single short 2~3s timer that is not set to hidden. This appears to be the only timer like this in the entire tease, so I imagine that is an oversight, though not one that matters too much.


I was enjoying the tease too much to wait for the bugs to be corrected, so I fixed them on my side so I could continue it!

Feedback regarding the tease content:

Spoiler: show

- - Love the edging focus as always! Would have been nice if there were at least a few holds that were at least a bit longer, but I know that's very subjective (personally would have enjoyed 2x+ the max length in the tease~).

- The teasing requests for edges presented as short that turned into longer edges were very enjoyable. Things like that are very exciting in the moment.

- The option to complete the tease without cumming is also very appreciated, thank you! <3

Always a pleasure to be blessed with a new tease from you. I hope everything in going well for you!

[schefflera0101]

Hey

You are back!

I've never been gone. Just busy

So happy to see a new tease from you! <3

A couple of bugs I happened across:
- On page "06-Chunmomo-4g", the "if" commands for the language check are mistakenly typed as "language=1" instead of ""language==1". So if you are doing the tease in English, you end up on the German "06-Chunmomo-5" at this point. And this also has reassigned the language to German, so you get directed to the German pages for the rest of the tease.

- The first half of the dialog on page "08-1" is entirely in English by mistake. It switches to German for the second half of the page. Both the English and German versions of this page also have a single short 2~3s timer that is not set to hidden. This appears to be the only timer like this in the entire tease, so I imagine that is an oversight, though not one that matters too much.
Always a pleasure to be blessed with a new tease from you. I hope everything in going well for you!

Thanks for pointing that out and specifying the exact location.
That made it easy for me to fix.

I had completely forgotten about the English part in the German version. I've corrected that now, of course :)

Spoiler: show

It is difficult, no, impossible to meet one's personal preferred edge time. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it anyway.

[gettingtherenow1]

Awesome work there!

I was blacked out when I've finished the game, i felt the bliss washed through my body after finishing the game

[arandommark]

Awesome to see a new one in this series! I've really enjoyed all the ones so far.

Haven't had the time to play it yet, though it's looking good from briefly checking it out, but I do have a question:

Is there a reason you so commonly have a text that isn't skipable (for non-cheaters, anyway) and then a hidden timer? It feels like it would be perfectly identical to a normal player, while being much more tedious to implement and to skip through when checking for errors.

[Fishface777]

I completed Chapter 1 (which I loved) whilst I was logged in - but when I have gone back to it today I have to start all over again? Did I miss the password somehow?

[AtagoWTS]

Awesome tease once again! There hasn't been a tease like this for a while and I'm glad you have released one recently! I hope there would be more to The Netherworld series and also other varieties with the same theme too by other authors!

[moose]

I absolutely love this series, but I must admit I was greatly disappointed in the heavy use of AI language in this tease. At first I thought perhaps it may have been a translation support since I presume your first language is not English. However, the further I got into the tease, the harder it was to ignore. So many "it's not just this, it's THIS" statements, etc. Really missed the creative writing and storyline that was in the previous ones. Please take this into consideration for the next one!

[cheekbuster]

My goat made another masterpiece, I absolutely LOVE your model choices, they are amazing, the writing is interesting and it's just an overall amazing experience every time you post

[Jackall]

How standalone is this? Should I start with the first netherworld tease if i never completed it?

[schefflera0101]

Awesome to see a new one in this series! I've really enjoyed all the ones so far.

Haven't had the time to play it yet, though it's looking good from briefly checking it out, but I do have a question:

Is there a reason you so commonly have a text that isn't skipable (for non-cheaters, anyway) and then a hidden timer? It feels like it would be perfectly identical to a normal player, while being much more tedious to implement and to skip through when checking for errors.

There isn't really a “reason” for the non-skippable parts. The effect of the story and the teaser only really comes into its own with the rhythm. Of course, there could have been more or less here and there, but that's just how I decided to do it.

I completed Chapter 1 (which I loved) whilst I was logged in - but when I have gone back to it today I have to start all over again? Did I miss the password somehow?

I actually forgot to display the passwords. Now it's there :)
However, Tease is also saved at the end of each chapter.

I absolutely love this series, but I must admit I was greatly disappointed in the heavy use of AI language in this tease. At first I thought perhaps it may have been a translation support since I presume your first language is not English. However, the further I got into the tease, the harder it was to ignore. So many "it's not just this, it's THIS" statements, etc. Really missed the creative writing and storyline that was in the previous ones. Please take this into consideration for the next one!

Of course, I used AI to help me.
I had two options: create a tease within a reasonable time frame (and by that I mean about a year) with the help of AI,
or write everything myself in German, translate it into English, and spend four times as much time on it—lose motivation because it never ends, and abandon the whole thing.

I've chosen the first option.

My goat made another masterpiece, I absolutely LOVE your model choices, they are amazing, the writing is interesting and it's just an overall amazing experience every time you post

Thanks a lot

How standalone is this? Should I start with the first netherworld tease if i never completed it?

You can play this tease without the others. Every now and then there are references to the previous parts, but they are easy to figure out.



Thank you all for your feedback so far.
Even though I think, english is the majority, I'd like to hear, if you play in german or english. Let me know.

[QualifiedHuman9192]

I finally finished this one (in English), and it was soooo good. It's possibly my favorite of the Netherworld series so far? Everything was paced really well, not too much edging or too little edging, and the game moves between scenes at a good pace. I also love that all the girls are Asians. I really don't have any criticisms; it works exactly as intended. Thanks for sharing your work!