[RELEASE][FEEDBACK] The BBC Truth Test

[thatwilldoit2]

I liked the overall idea, I didn't really like her character. If you're reluctant she's just pissed, I'd like for her to be more manipulative. In Some texts it also said {name} instead of my name. The lines also felt a bit repetetive, when I clicked the same colored answer her reply felt like the same, just slightly rephrased. Also the answer choices I had felt really predictable and I missed some like "I didn't check" or something.

So, nice idea, could use more variety so it's not as predictable and polishing!

[UrineMyMouth]

I scored a 92%! Woot woot!

This is excellent and I'm grateful to you for posting and making this. The tests/activities were great! The images... so alluring. The MC was wonderful.

My only critique is that Riley can be a bit verbose. And I get it, I'm the kind of person who thinks "why use 15 words when 500 is so much more descriptive." But in this case I think it threw off the vibe a bit. Her humiliating me for picking something like, "What Necklace?" is great, but five lines filled with $20 words was a bit much.

Overall, I gave this a solid 5/5 stars. Truly wonderful work and desperately hope you make more!

[hentaiAddict12345]

I got a 53.50 score in the end. I have to admit, I usually don't like these teases, because they all seem the same. But I really liked your twist on things.

I loved her tone, and how degrading and supportive she was throughout. I failed at the end though, as just staring at lone cocks isn't really my thing, so I just picked the babes. Probably why my score is so "low" . Anyway, I really liked the hypnotic spirals when doing the red dot game, they were very surprising. At first, I rolled my eyes when she said "focus on the red dot", but I was quickly focused when I saw the spirals throughout.

Great job!

[SC2]

Loved the tease, have played it multiple times already.

One wish I have if we could have gotten a final scene seeing Riley with BBC as either a prize or punishment depending on our results.

[StellaRack]

Very well put together. Keep making ones like this

52.50%

Found one name bug

Spoiler: show

Just after the first tgirl (I noted)

"Your soul is igniting so magnificently now, {name}, as the exalted might of black superiority surges through your core, reshaping every fiber into rapturous devotion. Every surge confirms your eternal bond with this divine force."

line just before the choices
Now, expose to Riley, what color were her panties?

[Mika221]

Love the tease, here is my feedback:

What was your final score?
84.5

What was your most enjoyable part?
the red dot/hypno spiral-part

Any bugs or issues? Black screens, timers acting weird, images not loading?
no

Suggestions for future improvements?
2 Suggestions:
I think at the part where you have to choose between BBC and a woman, the woman side could have been a bit more erotic. Stroking to BBC over beautiful clothed women is fine, I just think the submission would've hit harder if I had chosen BBC over a nude woman.

I really liked Riley as the hostess, I would've liked for her to slip into the 'games' now and again. For example maybe one of the red dot pictures has Riley in it and she asked if you even noticed. Or you have to choose between Riley and a BBC.

5/5 overall.

[Bioflug]

Great work



I have put together a story, but I don't find the time to "code" it, if you are interested send me a pm, I'm happy to share it. It is about CEI.....and BBC of course

btw way over 70%

[kerkersklave]

Looks like the author has deleted their profile, tease and everything. Too bad, wasn't a bad first tease and was quite well rated too.

[Bioflug]

[destroymyballs692]

Isn't there some way to restore the tease?

[kerkersklave]

Isn't there some way to restore the tease?

No, unless someone has the json file saved, there isn't.

[Bioflug]

and does someone have the file? this would be great, very much