[RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Erotic Hypnosis 3: Weak

[m1]

Chapter 3 from the Erotic Hypnosis series is here at last! It took longer than I thought. This is because I am building a new editor for Milovana too. I used this tease to test it.

Anyway, enjoy it. Note that this chapter will last a bit more than one hour.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=77718

What do you think? Tell me if there are problems.

[nsxoxy]

Enjoyed the story of this one. Thank you, I'm glad you continued it, like you said, and I'm looking forward to what's next.

Couple of observations (continuity errors):

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- There is a section where the NAKED command is given a second time and introduced as if its new
- There is a section where the CIRCLE command is introduced as if its new, after it's been already given

Feedback, request:

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- I think the tease would be better if there was more variety in the images, since there's a lot of rotation between the same ones, especially now that this is in part 3.
- If the choices toward the end change anything, I'd like a Code to be able to return to those points and see what happens

[tkct78]

Interesting tease, moderately engaging, but as hypnosis, I find it lacking. The 'need' for audio that's just a snap is a weak use of audio. I would suggest adding a binaural or other hypnotic sounding audio file (that can have the volume set up or down) to help move the focus along.

Stamina Test by DSH has an alluring audio track that covers this along with a beat meter that creates a hypnotic effect. If you added that, I think you'd have a much more engaging tease.

[m1]

Enjoyed the story of this one. Thank you, I'm glad you continued it, like you said, and I'm looking forward to what's next.

Thank you for your feedback!

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- There is a section where the NAKED command is given a second time and introduced as if its new
- There is a section where the CIRCLE command is introduced as if its new, after it's been already given

The NAKED and CIRCLE commands section is a flashback from earlier chapters. It assumes you already know the commands, so it serves as a quick reminder rather than new information.

I see your point that it feels odd, but I may keep it for now.

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- I think the tease would be better if there was more variety in the images, since there's a lot of rotation between the same ones, especially now that this is in part 3.

You’re right—I really need more variety in the images. It might be hard to add them to this chapter now, but I’ll definitely keep it in mind for the next one.

Interesting tease, moderately engaging, but as hypnosis, I find it lacking. The 'need' for audio that's just a snap is a weak use of audio. I would suggest adding a binaural or other hypnotic sounding audio file (that can have the volume set up or down) to help move the focus along.

Stamina Test by DSH has an alluring audio track that covers this along with a beat meter that creates a hypnotic effect. If you added that, I think you'd have a much more engaging tease.

Thanks. You know what, you're right—I didn't realize it was lacking hypnosis until now. I was too focused on the story and less on the hypnosis itself! Looking back, maybe the first two chapters build up the player's hypnosis mind, and this chapter is more about using that hypnosis to do things.

Adding background binaural audio is a good idea. But maybe it’s better to start from Chapter 1 and use it in all later sessions. Is it strange to add it only in Chapter 3? (I don’t plan to change the old chapters unless there’s a big problem )

[Daragorn]

I liked your series a lot, but i have to say this 3rd chapter felt a bit too repetitive compared to the first two, since it consisted in basically chapter 1 and 2 done all over again with some other commands in between the old parts.
It would have been more engaging if, instead of simply copy/pasting the old teases into this one, you did this "reminder" using new content, instead of just copying the old ones; done like this, for the firsr 40+ minutes it just feels basically like playing chapter 1 and chapter 2 all over again with little to no novelty .

Mreover, it also felt kinda odd at times, as already reported, because the fact that you just re-used the old tease pages made some of the phrases makes no sense like the naked and circle command being explained all over again; there were other instances in which you took for granted that the user already knew the commands and simply gave the, for example "STROKER SLAVE" command without explaining it and then, later on, instead, you gave the command again and added the explanation.

Overall, i like the whole idea of the tease itself, but i felt that this 3rd chapter was the less inspired of the 3, consisting of just copy/paste/mix of the previous 2 instead of new content (apart for the end basically)

[m1]

Hey Daragorn.

Thanks a lot for taking the time to share such detailed feedback — I really appreciate it!

You make some very fair points about the repetitiveness and reused content. I tried to enforce the commands into your mind It seems the copy-and-paste content ended up being too much — as you said, creating some new material to reinforce the commands would have been a better approach.

Your comments are super helpful for improving future parts. Thanks again for the thoughtful feedback!