[Feedback] Beta Tease & Torment

[Blink_twice]

Hey everyone.

Long time user here but made an account and have made my first tease and wanted some feedback before I publish it.

It is called Beta Tease & Torment and focuses a lot on teasing and denial, censored stroking and non censored denial, cuckolding, virgin fetish, light humiliation, JOI, chastity play (I made a whole special section just for that as well as specific endings.) There are also some games in there, lots of choices and different outcomes and quite a lot of different endings.

I started out with the intention of it being kind of small and I had tons of ideas that I kept implementing and working on. Takes 50-60 minutes to finish I think. I have included options to play parts separately so you will not have to do it al in one go.

I was thinking if anyone wanted to check it out and help me with any feedback that would be great.
If you could private message me I will send you the link to it there or leave a message here and I will PM you.

Thank you.

[Visitor from Bound Anna]

i might have time soon....

[Visitor from Bound Anna]

While beta is not my cup of tea, I think this tease will be an immersive experience for those who like it. No bugs or typos that I could see.
It did give me an interesting idea for "black marks". Each time you receive a black mark, you have to use a permanent marker and draw a circle around your private area, starting 1/2 inch from the base, each one after is 1/2 inch above that. Throughout the tease, and after the fact, you must not touch any area below your black mark while stroking for any reason until,
A.The markings fade away
B.You rinse the markings off in icy cold water
C.You can actually please a real woman. You must explain how you got them. After the encounter, you may remove them anyway you want.
Have fun everyone!

[Blink_twice]

Thank you for checking it out and the feedback.

Glad to hear you didn't find any bugs or typos.

[NEGEV]

I'd be happy to test it too.

[Blink_twice]

Thank you to everyone so far for the help and feedback, I appreciate it greatly.

I accidentally clicked the publish button when trying to grab the link and saw that before I can actually publish I have to fix a lot of errors that are present but I have no idea what they are or how to fix them.
If anyone could help me out with that then that would be amazing. Here is a screenshot, there are a few more below that as well but they are all that type of error.

https://imgur.com/EPmQ7uz