Hello! Are you there! It's time to show your work!Lets see...how was my tutor over the last month?
You did some things...which was good...but you really didn't show any work.
So I can't evaluate you.
I don't know...it seems like your performance over the last month has been subpar...oh no...here's the principal of Goon School...she wants to have a word with you...
I'm sorry...due to your poor performance...we will have to expel you from Goon school!
I'm sure that if you can goon enough in the future, we'll take you back. But for now,sorry! We only have the highest caliber gooners here. And you aren't one of them.
Please pack your stuff and go. You are expelled from Goon School! You go to your dorm room to pack everything up. There is someone inside...who takes you by surprise...
She exudes an otherworldy air...you can't help but to stroke for her.
She looks you up and down...and then says one thing.
You'll do.
You may be expelled from Goon School...but there are larger things happening around here. And when the time comes, I hope that you participate...by stroking double for redheads
Can you do that?
I hope so...otherwise I may not have enough energy to conquer milovana....
Which is very sad... it means I can ride this cock until we're both exhausted! JACKPOT!
Well, we can continue without you from here, funlevel! And yeah, of course you're denied... After your performance issues? You're lucky I don't lock you in chastity... now leave and let me enjoy this cock!
hi...you must be funlevel. I've heard a bit about you. I'm the Red Fox!
I know that you wanted to edge and stroke to Gianna today...but she's...occupied.
You see...there are two things you need to know. First, Gianna is a succubus. Think about it...why does she get so angry when you cum? It's because you just wants to keep feeding on your sexual energy.
Second...you aren't going to get any new instructions from Gianna today. Why? Because she's...busy. She's getting a SNACK.
A SNACK...that doesn't cum...that just gets ridden every...single...day...without end. Fuel for my army. My succubus army. Which Gianna will join by the way.
And you? What about you? YOu can sit here, waiting until Gianna is done with her SNACK..and stroke to your gallery of photos of her...I know you have them... For 12 hours ...you are allowed to only stroke to photos in your goon gallery..
hi...you must be adanou. I've heard a bit about you. I'm the Red Fox!
I know that you wanted to edge and stroke to Riley today...and you will! Just not in the way you though of it.
You see...there are two things you need to know. First, Riley is a succubus. Think about it...Your little goon calendar..is genius. Every day...Riley gets tons of sexual energy from you.
Second...you aren't going to get any new instructions from Riley today. Why? Because you are getting instructions from me!
You are such an overachiever...from what I understand...you were supposed to create 100 photos of Riley...and then you did 50 more...why? I don't know. I don't care. But what I do care about is the color red...so today, go through your goon gallery of Riley..and double all rules when she's wearing red...
I'm sure that will keep you busy for awhile... Review your goon gallery for Riley. Double all rules where she is wearing red..
Yes, Emily and I did need to talk again. I first put her on my favourites list because of what she said at the end of Wheel Of Goon, but then the next time I saw her she went back on that... Then I just kinda kept her on the list to see what would happen (and because I was lazy).
Anyway, I took her favourite advice and then found out there was only one edge in that section so I chose her lawyer advice for the next two times. More frustration!
...At least, that's what I wish happened in hindsight. It actually took me until the last round before I tried her lawyer advice. But I don't want to commit to having extra rules for my "favourites" (for now at least) since I just consider them to be examples of the type of women I'm into rather than consistent characters in teases for me. And logistically, her rule would be too much hassle. Besides, she never said I could edge to her again (or did I misread something?). So I decided to remove her from my rules instead.
[My responses are in blue. I changed some things I didn't like. You'll see the strikethroughs. Now that I understand everything better, I have decided to change the narrative to something that I think is just better and ALSO BETTER FITS what I *think* happened ... you'll see! And this response basically goes right into the next set, so ... should be a nice story/set! Author's notes contained in spoilers. A fair amount of additions to Mila's dialogue, and I was too lazy to mark the changes with a different color, so ... don't skim too fast or you might miss some stuff!]
Addict: Fatts, you're an idiot! That's NOT how the game works! Fatts: Oh yeah? I'm an idiot? Get an english dictionary, THEN we'll talk, IDIOT!
Please... guys, stop arguing!
You guys sound like such kids sometimes... but I believe it's because you both share so much passion for this game.
I... love that about you.
Though I have to agree, addict's english kinda sucks at times... Fatts: HAH! Told you! Addict:
But then again, Fatts has such a big ego... Addict: HAH! Fatts: Fatts: You’re right … I do! And I take myself too seriously sometimes …
Anyway, let's all be friends again! Shake hands! Fatts: My mouse hand? Or the one with the lube on it?
Please? For me? Addict & Fatts: Fine... Fatts: I knew you were right from the start, Mila, but that’s because I had a night to sleep on it …
I hated that I was fighting so much with my friend! When I woke up this morning [yesterday; the next day], I was pretty stressed and in a bad mood …
Shake hands? No. Brothers don’t shake hands …
"Tommy Boy!" with Chris Farley (RIP) and David Spade
I hope you’re wearing clothes right now… Because I’m not! I’m naked and stroking in the middle of a set! Before he goes in for a hug, Fatts whispers, "Just don't let our PPs touch—NO HOMO!" He gives you a big 'ole bear hug.
If you are wearing clothes, then he’s careful not to rub his lube hand on you … But if you are buck naked while playing/reading this, then he makes sure to rub his lube hand on your back during the hug.
Hey! We’re in a throuple! This is NORMAL behavior for us ... right!? Fatts whispers, "In real life, I would never do this… But this isn’t real life. We’re in a set… So I can be as gross and filthy and DISGUSTING as I want!
Good boys!
And thanks for all the compliments, Fatts. Really made me feel loved and appreciated
Here's a little something for you, big boy. I don't show it around much... I'm... kinda shy about it, but you've been helping me get over it, Fatts.
And you, addict? Fuck you, dude! You told me Fatts will hate my ass because I'm flat! Fatts:
I was already self-conscious about my ass and thought it was too small and flat compared to other girls. After I wrote the game, I decided to show it to Addict to get some feedback before I played it with you, Fatts. Addict had just gotten back from Ass Boot Camp, and he was REALLY excited, and he talked about how much of an ass man you are, Fatts, and how you like big, round asses. He kept talking about ALL of the amazing asses at Ass Boot Camp and how you edged for them—and about how he fucked Jynx Maze—who I think has a BEAUTIFUL ass! And so I got it in my head that you wouldn't like my ass and that it was not good enough for you ... and even when you told me otherwise, I didn't quite believe you, but ... I do now!
Author's note: MILA thinks Jynx has an 11 ass. For me, it's more a 9 ... but as we discussed in PMs, I STILL LOVE IT and would be HAPPY to stroke and edge (and cum ) for Jynx!
Addict: B-But... He usually... never mind. I do love your whole body though!
Aww, that's sweet of you!
Author's note: I was pissed that my "rating"/opinion about Mila's ass got back to her and made her feel bad about herself. I REALLY hated that. I would NEVER want my opinions of a woman's body to make her feel inadequate! I wanted SOMEONE to pay for spilling my secrets which created problems for me. I thought it would be Nancy and got this AMAZING idea to punish her, but ... THEN you foiled my plan by admitting it was YOU who told Mila!
Okay ... so ... in MY head—when I played the tease—Mila was SUPER insecure about her ass, so ... I needed a way to make sense of that. At the time, the only thing I could think of was that YOU gave her a "complex," which gave me "another reason" to punish you, but ... THEN you pointed out that she WASN'T insecure, and ... when I went back and read through it AFTER playing it, I realized that her dialogue WAS more confident and carefree, and I was like, "No ... *I* interpreted that wrong in my head, and what *I* experienced ... that wasn't what Addict intended and actually wasn't fully supported in the text ... it's just that my emotions in the moment altered the way I interpreted the text which gave me a different experience ...
So ... THEN I decided that you are a nice guy and would NOT give a girl a complex about her body intentionally ... THAT was a crazy idea that was TOTALLY unrealistic ... You're not some monster who would cuss out a girl and tell her she was ugly and make her cry—which that COULD traumatize a woman and make her feel insecure, but ... YOU aren't an asshole and wouldn't do that, and ... ACTUALLY—the Mila that YOU wrote in the tease was confident, fun, flirty, and was more like, "If you don't like my ass that's YOUR problem! " So ... she wasn't some fragile woman who would be easily broken and given a complex from some insults ...
SO ... since none of what I originally thought made sense in light of reality and the stuff you actually wrote, I decided on THIS narrative: the one you read above, where Mila was KIND OF already insecure about her butt (which is VERY realistic as MOST women feel insecure about at least ONE part of their bodies) and then instead of being some monster who was mean to her and gave her a complex, you sort of accidentally and unintentionally made her feel insecure by talking up how much I like big butts ... which ... that ITSELF was not entirely true—as you now know from the long PM conversation ...
AND SO ... THIS will be the story of what "actually happened." It's all relatively minor, but ... I think it's an interesting insight into how my brain works ... because I was able to take everything that happened—ALL of the events and details—and make them fit into a coherent and realistic story that fits the fact pattern, so ... sigh ... THERE WE GO! PROBLEM SOLVED!
... and THIS will be the NEW situation going into the "punishment set", so ... I solved THAT puzzle as well—to make EVERYTHING fit and give EVERYBODY what they want/deserve!
Mila: And sorry about making you eat that load off my tits yesterday, Fatts... I didn't quite get the rules either... Fatts: No, Mila! I wanted to do that for you! YOU said in our first encounter that your rule was that if I came on your tits I would eat it ... I wanted to respect that. I thought that's what you wanted, and so I was HAPPY to do that for you!
Mila: Well ... I lied to you about getting Addict to cum on the floor and lick it up because I was talking tough and trying to impress you, and ... I lied about my "rule" as well. I was trying to tease and intimidate you ... I actually never had a boy cum on my tits before, and I was trying to be "one of the girls" ... Fatts: Well, actually ... you DIDN'T intimidate me by saying those things.
Mila: Fatts: It's true—I'm a switch that has a "subby side," but ... I don't simply become submissive every time a confident, dominant woman enters the room and starts talking tough. It makes me defiant like I want to stand up to her ... which makes me a LOT less aroused ... So, in MY case, your "tough talk" actually backfired ... MAYBE it would have worked on a submissive or a different switch, but ... I'm too sigma. I don't care very much about what people think and say if I don't respect them, and if someone tells me to do something I don't want to do, I double down and go BACK on them!
Mila: So how do I tease you, then!? If I can't intimidate you to arouse you and you get mad at me when I get insecure ... what am I supposed to do!?! Fatts: Be confident, and be yourself!
Mila: What!? Fatts: Even though your bragging didn't arouse me, your confidence in our first encounter DID! It may have been a false confidence—a bluff—a charade ... but it WORKED! I wanted to "do battle" against a beautiful and CONFIDENT woman to test MY stamina and will power against YOUR sexiness and teasing prowess ... and the woman who showed up to face me was AMAZING! Your TRUE self! You weren't bragging falsely or pretending to be something you were not ... you were just smart and clever and FUN! And I just LOVED spending time with THAT woman ... and then you were honest with me and showing me your heart after the game—I just fell for you more—so ... just more of THAT please!
Mila: Okay!
Anyway, let's start a new page! I'm still very eager to make addict cum, and I want to see just how many times Fatts can cum.
How she presented in the first encounter and then during the game set felt like two COMPLETELY different people ...
I just re-read that first scene again. I got very confident "domme vibes" again, but ... then in the game set, she was very much more fun and flirty ...
Now, I typically flesh out my characters quite a bit at the start, and then sort of fine-tune as I go—that's MY process, anyway. So the "core concept" of the characters is pretty much fully formed at the start ...
Okay, but ... that's not the ONLY way to write characters, and ... I LOVED what you did with Mila! That she told a lie ... it was SUCH A TWIST!
So THEN ... I gave you a BUNCH of different options for directions to go—including "being a slave" for her and "game rematch" and "being an alpha for her" ... and you chose NONE of those! Just "see how many times I can make Fatts cum."
WOW I love that!
How are you liking this direction for the Mila character? Again—as I've stated MANY times before ... I LOVE the storytelling/narrative aspects of this game, and ... at this point, haha ... I've probably spent more time thinking about Mila's character than YOU have! BUT ... she is YOUR character, and so I want YOU to have "full control" and "final say" of the direction we take her, so ... is what I wrote above good and what you want?
I'm trying VERY HARD to start with the facts that YOU established about her and then build from there. With her telling a lie and wanting to be "one of the girls," then it made sense for her to be "sexually inexperienced," and so ... THEN I reinterpreted that whole first encounter to be "bluffing" to me ... so THEN we had the mix up about the "flat ass" situation, so ... she was telling lies because she was insecure and wanting to be "one of the girls," so ... then it just made sense that she was ALSO insecure about her ass ... but then she was sad about you and not being able to cum, and that "broke her heart", which meant that she was kind and made me fall for her a LOT more! BUT ... in the game set, she WAS confident and fun and flirty and smart, where in THIS scene she was more subdued and insecure ... which makes sense, because you and I were fighting and it was stressful and so she wasn't her normal confident self.
So ... I think where I am landing on with Mila is that she is fairly sexually inexperienced with a LITTLE bit of confidence and insecurity issues, BUT ... she's pretty confident in her own skin, and when she's comfortable and upbeat (like she was during our game), then she's fun and flirty and teases back more ... She WANTS to be sexy and attractive, but ... she doesn't have enough experience yet to know what to do and what that looks like for her, and so, she fell into the trap of simply mimicking what she saw OTHER PEOPLE doing—being confident dommes talking a tough game ... but that's not really her. She has a kind heart and cares about people. It was awkward and inauthentic for her and felt fake and bad when she tried it—so she doesn't want to do that any more—which explains why she didn't take my offer to "be a slave for her."
The game was too confrontational and stressed her out, so she doesn't want to do it. Also, I'm so confident, and she's a little insecure, that she's still not sure she could "beat me"—even though I told her I could. So THAT is all just too much for her. She doesn't want to do the game ...
I think she just REALLY enjoyed spending time with me. I was SO complimentary to her and it felt so good. I think she just wants more of THAT—to receive that affirmation and acceptance. So making me cum as much as possible is something that she will enjoy doing for me, because she likes me and is a nice person and wants to do nice things for a person she likes ... but ALSO—I think subconsciously, she's looking for affirmation and acceptance, and she knows that I will give her those things, so ... yeah ... making me cum as much as possible sounds GREAT!
WOW I think I sorted that all out pretty well and linked all the chains together. Let me know if this sounds good.
I think the tone for her that you did during the game set: smart, fun, flirty—very teasing—and a LITTLE insecure , was PERFECT!
Making three dimensional characters is hard work, but ... *I* think it makes the sets easier to write (and WAY MORE immersive), because since you already have a clear picture of who this character is in your mind, it makes it easier to know what they should say in any random situation ...
And for me—I'm a HUGE romantic and get invested in characters—so ... ALL of this work means that I am going to be SUPER immersed in sets with Mila, and ... because of my high familiarity with the character and WANTING to continue the story, it puts some layers around the immersion, protecting it, so if there is a little bump, my immersion doesn't break immediately, because I know the character well and can explain the inconsistency away in my head ...
By the way, if Mila wants me to "get subby" for her, ALL SHE HAS TO DO IS ASK—LITERALLY!
I get defiant and turned off when a mistress I don't trust demands I get submissive for her, but ... a mistress who cares about and respects me—that I like ... I can EASILY "give myself over to her" and get subby ... ALL she has to do is ask ...
But a more flirty, back-and-forth "peer teasing peer" scene where we are both "equals" is also fine ... I'm switch, so ... I don't mind becoming dominant and "taking charge" either ... just ... don't flip around too quickly. If I'm VERY subby, it takes a bit to transition back to an "alpha" or dominant attitude, so ... sort of pick a lane for the scene and keep it sectioned by tone scene by scene.
Edit: I couldn't help but peek at the "before set" section ...
Not the set you want, but the set you deserve . Sorry man, I don't know if I'll ever get that feet set done, there's like no good galleries.
You can back burner feet. That is fine. It's been on my wish list forever, so ... I thought that I would hint at it. It's not a SUPER high priority for me, so ... I don't mind if it doesn't get done. It came to mind, so ... I thought I would "ask" and bring it up, but ... no worries, mate! I would rather do stuff with Mila and Kay—once I FINALLY get her series DONE!
And it's HILARIOUS to me how OBSESSED Ecik is with the Red Fox! He just featured her in a set for Drool after JUST doing a set with her for YOU! I guess my set featuring her REALLY stirred up something within him!
And you can send Michelle at me as MUCH AS YOU PLEASE! I assume she is PROBABLY in that vacation return set (which I'll play later ), but ... I DID make some sacrifices to "save her" from Angela—although Angela was ONLY going to imprison her for like a few days and mess with her ... NOT "enslave her forever" like *I* thought, so ... I REALLY misjudged Angela, but ... Red Fox sort of owes me and I "trust" her, so ... I can get SUPER subby for her, and ... feel free to dip into my bondage+vibrator rules ... because I go WILD for that shit!
And I have more ideas for Mila and that "make Fatts cum as much as possible" ... ALTHOUGH ... I think it might be better FIRST to let YOU just write her and go in whatever direction YOU want, but ... AFTER THAT or IF you don't have ideas ... I CERTAINLY DO!
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
Wear your clover clamps for the duration of this video... that should make you even more submissive to me. And no cumming Drool, we need you to KEEP GOONING!
You're ONLY allowed to play this set after you've played sets in your backlog until Ecik's miniset (included). DON'T you DARE even PEEK until then, understand? I'm NOT kidding, you'll ruin the set for yourself. And you should probably also finish the "punishment" set and Kay J part 3, at least. I want to have my fun too
Either way, this set is fairly long, as I kept getting ideas . I think I want something like this too at some point
Isn't that amazing? It means I don't even need to use my powers to send you to the maze! I can just send you out in the world!
And you know what's even better?
Your girlfriend Nancy can no longer stop me. I've grow too powerful for her.
Soon, the entire city shall kneel to my will... we'll go from there.
I'm sure even now you can feel my powerful aura, right? You can't stop stroking for me.
And honestly, why would you? From now on, you will give me double strokes and edges for the reminder of the set
You'll be just one of the many slaves I'll have, but don't worry, you'll always hold a special place in my heart.
Just make sure you don't get too excited and cum for me or my succubi... you know how... excited some of us get, right?
You cum, and poof, you're gone. And there will be no Nancy to shield you this time. No childish narratives of "I came, but when she tried to suck me dry, I resisted!". Gone. Forever.
So try not to, alright? I'll let you meet some new faces, and some of the older faces you know from the maze. Feed them well, and we'll all be happy. Cya!
Remember me, Fatts? It's Michaela, your faithful guide! You can stop kneeling by the way!
Even in the real world, I believe you shouldn't be left without a guide, right?
First thing I'll tell you is things work a bit differently than in the maze here.
I know Red Fox tried to scare you into not cumming... but it's not so bad. Succubi in the real world won't suck you off completely, but you may be left incapacitated for a few days.
Isn't this fan cute, by the way? It was very cheap in the real world. It was like $5. In the maze, it would've cost me like 500 male edges!
...what? You didn't know we use edges as currency in there?
Poor you! "Clients" also get like a 10% commision for their edges, so you could've bought a few nice things yourself!
Now, tell me... do you prefer full pussy view...
... fan view...
Or both
I think both is way better, wouldn't you agree? Anyway, more... uh... "maze info"?
But this isn't really the maze... but then again, the world sometimes feels like a maze, doesn't it? Anyway!
Some succubi might give you additional edges category for their section. Like this: Edge for my pussy for this section!
We got kinda bored of constantly telling people to edge, so we're doing this instead.
Isn't this way more fun? It is for us, that's for sure!
Especially when it stacks with your own rules~
Hmm... what else... oh, right... the "ritual" you had to perform to get the map...
*shrugs* No longer required. Just use google maps on your phone or something!
I *think* that's all, though I might be back with additional info later.
Is she gone yet? Emily Willis? Thank god...she was such a cocktease!
Promised edges and never gave them. Talked a big game, but delivered nothing. I imagine that she was so fustrating to you.
But luckily...you now have me! The Red Fox... And I can be anything you want...as long as give me what I want...
The redhead snaps her fingers...and she transforms in front of your eyes...
How about Emily Willis...as she should be been?
As not a cock tease...
but a cum fiend....
No? Not enough...I think I know what you want... She snaps her fingers again
As you can see...I can be anything you want. As long as I get what I want. A full orgasm...and a promise...to stroke 25 times for every redhead you see in the future. Put it in your rules.
My succubus army needs to be fed...
Short, but brutal. And fun. And yes...after a bit of work, the Red Fox's plan is almost in place. And for day 3 of the minisets...a return one for you. It's a bit longer because I won't have day 4 until after the weekend.
Hiya Addict! You may be wondering...why are in the forest today?
Well...every army needs a top lieutenant...and I know just the person! Cara Mell! She's hard to find...but I heard she likes to relax in these woods.
And who better to convince her to join our team than you! All redheads are succubi..but not every succubus is a redhead. You get it...right? Just give Cara Mell a SNACK...and I'm sure she'll join our succubus army...
But first...I want a SNACK, from you. Ecik's 111 seconds of gooning filled me up...but a woman will never say no to dessert...I want just a taste... The red fox raises your base BPMs by 50
mm...so tasty...
did you add some..domination into your diet? Like to be less submissive? It tastes...tangy...I like it! Maybe sometime I'll let you lead me around on a leash...
But for now...find Cara Mell!
Cara Mell wasn't hard to find. It was almost as if she was expecting you.
Addict, is it? I've heard about you...
And your SNACKS. I'd like to try one... Cara lowers your BPMs by 25
mmm...nice and slow...
I like this...a bit of frustration...with a hint of desperation...and what's that? Boredom? That tastes...unique.
Now...lets talk business...about joining Michele's army...I don't think I want to do that right now. Why?
I don't know who she is fighting...and if she can win. The Red Fox and her succubi have lived in the maze for a long time...perhaps it's better that she stays there. Not that I'm anti-succubus...I mean, I am one.
Its just that I prefer living in obscurity...being hard to find...but a treat if you know my true name
So tell your goddess...sorry...but not sorry. I'm not joining this fight. And thank her for your SNACK!
Even though we failed with Cara...I wanted to take moment to say that I've appreciated your help!
Everything is coming together. My army is almost assembled...it will be fed...from Ecik, Reptil, Adanou, Funlevel, Drool...with SNACKS from you...
The two people who could stop me are not around. Nancy is preoccupied...maybe with her boyfriend Fatts... so hopefully she won't say anything... And Angela White...nobody has seen her in a long time.
So...I think we can take a short break...
Play a little...have some fun... She takes off her stockings...
and makes a knot...[/i]
There. I'm your slave for the weekend!
Show me around...just make sure to double whatever you are doing for any redheads or known succubi...
And if you want to give me more than an snack...I'm always hungry!
Be sure to read my feedback to your last set (bottom quote above) before playing this one.
The set kept ballooning and getting bigger and longer than what I originally envisioned, and ... I know that last Michelle set was a bit long and challenged your stamina, so ... I decided to split this one up into two parts—because I think it would be iffy to try to play it all in one go, and ... TRUST ME—you do NOT want to "give out" during the ACTION!
Part 1 only uses 4 galleries, so ... medium-short length set?
NO! The only thing *I* am hungry for ... is REVENGE!
OHHhhhh ... OHHHhhhh ...
Nancy rubs herself while fake moaning loudly.
THIS was ME!
You remember that Nancy gets horny when she gets mad.
Fatts was going to punish me SO GOOD for your screw up ...
... but THEN you had to take responsibility "like a man" ... PATHETIC!
You FUCKED ME, so ... NOW ... I am going to fuck YOU!
Clothes pins—NOW! RIGHT on your titties! [This line of dialogue is bleeped out. You can still read Nancy's lips and know what she said, but you understand intuitively that you are not meant to follow this command. ]
Nancy teases you with her breasts.
I want your nip-nips SCREAMING in PAIN!
You know how long it's been since Fatts punished me ... for REAL?
TOO LONG ... Addict ... TOO FUCKING LONG ...
He was going to put on his big boy ALPHA PANTS—and ...
... FUCK he's a genius ...
He was going to abuse me SO GOOD! It was DEVILISH! HUMILIATING and ...
... DEPRAVED!
He was going to dominate me SO completely, and ...
... it was going to be AWESOME!
Nancy smiles as she rubs herself, thinking about this domination fantasy.
Fatts is SO FUCKING HOTT when he's alpha!
SOMETIMES I wish he was like that ALL OF THE TIME!
... and all YOU had to do was let ME "play the hero" and take the punishment for you, but ...
... NO! YOU COULDN'T DO THAT!
Nancy now rubs her pussy fast and angrily. "
Where's that ALPHA energy? All *I* see is a subby little BETA BOY who was CURIOUS TO RECEIVE a PUNISHMENT SET from FATTS!
Fatts fucking TOLD YOU what I wanted, but ... could you do ME a solid—my dude?
NO! Because you were SELFISH and wanted the punishment FOR YOURSELF! I HATE YOU, ADDICT!
I'll show you LATER the punishment *I* would have gotten , but ... what's up with YOU being a little busybody?
LOOSE LIPS SINK SHIPS!
... and your game was GREAT —until it WASN'T ...
Have you even spent more than FIVE SECONDS thinking about the dates of porn pics?
Girls typically start at 18. HOT ones that are successful go longer ... MAYBE into their mid 20s, but ... only SUPER stars with HUGE FOLLOWINGS continue to do work into their 30s—like ME or Reily Reid ...
So, "How old am I, Addict?" Can you tell by this picture? NO ... you CAN'T ...
"Maya Konovalenko"—the real life model my character is based on—is 30 years old right now.
But do I LOOK THIRTY in this picture, Addict!? NO ... I DON'T ... because I am NOT 30 YEARS OLD IN THIS PICTURE!
So HOW the FUCK is someone supposed to guess the age of a model "right now," based on how old they look in a picture taken 5 to 20 years ago!?
Did you expect Fatts to be SO familiar with trendy Russian hair styles from the last 15 years, that he could guess the YEAR the picture was taken based on the hair cut, then ALSO guess the age of the model in THAT photo, and THEN calculate her CURRENT AGE!?!
FOUL PLAY!
So he guesses "23", because he thinks she looks 23 in the picture, but ... the answer is THIRTY THREE ... UNBELIEVABLE ...
Could you even guess someone's current age based off of a yearbook photo by the clothes they are wearing? HARD—but NOT impossible ... NOW do it while they are NAKED! RIDICULOUS!
... and THEN you made it DOUBLE PENALTY ...
If you are going to CHEAT—which Fatts WAS OKAY with cheating and made allowances for that in his original proposal—then just CHEAT OUTRIGHT!
It's just DISHONEST to "cheat" while pretending that you are not ... Be a MAN and be PROUD of your cheating!
So let's recap ...
You stole a PERFECTLY good punishment away that I wanted VERY MUCH because you were GREEDY!
You broke Fatts trust and blabbed his secrets to someone you SHOULDN'T have!
AND you created a VERY unfair game and broke the terms of the game!
But LET'S GO BACK TO THE SECRET BLABBING!
You gave a VERY NICE girl a FLAT ASS COMPLEX!
She felt HORRIBLE and INSECURE about it ... and THAT was because of YOU!
You killed the VIBE, dude! Fatts was rizzing the SHIT out of that girl, but ... INSTEAD of feeling good about being with a NICE boy who was LOVING BEING WITH HER ...
... all SHE could do was focus on her shortcomings ...
Not cool—bro ... NOT cool ...
... and that was ALL ... YOU!
... and *I* would have taken the fall for you and gotten PUNISHED by angry ALPHA FATTS , and ... it would have been AMAZING ...
... but you WON'T LET ME HAVE NICE THINGS, Addict ... because you're a DICK!
Not an "AD-DICT" ... just a DICK!
Go see Mila now.
SHE wanted to forgive you, but ... I'm sure my speech INSPIRED her to be MORE MEAN!
FATTS told her that you had an out—but you PASSED on it, so ... she doesn't have to hold back NOW!
WHAT!?!? Mila's not coming now? She's not mad at Addict anymore!? And Lalli's not coming either ... She's just going to play her game with Fatts LATER ...
PUNISHMENT CANCELED!?!?! It was all just a big misunderstanding?!?
Nancy scowls at you sternly. She's big mad.
HEY!!! WHY AREN'T YOU WEARING YOUR CLOTHES PINS RIGHT NOW ... ADDICT!
Wait ... You NEVER put them on!?
SON of a bitch ... FATTS!
That bastard scooped me and changed the narrative—MID SET!
Your English lesson for today: scoop verb
5 (fifth definition) to get the better of (other publications, newscasters, etc.) by obtaining and publishing or broadcasting a news item, report, or story first. They scooped all the other dailies with the story of the election fraud. https://www.dictionary.com/browse/scoop
He wrote this scene, changed his mind, then REDACTED my clothespins command ... I WONDERED what that "bleep" was back there ... I knew SOMETHING was off ...
That fascist, authoritarian, artistic voice controlling HOG!
He's SO selfish and SO controlling and ALWAYS has to have HIS way ... he won't let me do ANYTHING fun! He—
Awwww! He said he was SUPER stressed and worried about things with you and Mila, and you and him were fighting REALLY bad, but ... THEN Mila made you guys make up—and he did the bit from "Tommy Boy" —and now you guys are friends again, and Mila's no longer upset, and she's going to make him cum a bunch ... AWWWWW!!
Nancy takes a few seconds to tap on her phone. She sends back a text.
I "loved" his text message and sent him THREE heart emojis!
Nancy looks at her phone, and then back at you stroking very quickly. She sighs.
Alright FINE ... NORMAL RULES ... [Go back to using your normal rules.]
Punishment's been called OFF—I guess ...
But why do *I* always get screwed and left out and forgotten in these situations? Why is it that *I* am always left stuck holding the bag!?
Nancy's phone dings again.
Wait ... Fatts said that there is still ONE loose end to tie up, and he needs you and me to come and see him right away ...
FINE—alright ... Let's go ... MOVE your ass, Addict ...
Let's go see what my control freak, micromanaging—SELFISH—crybaby DIVA of a boyfriend wants NOW ...
... but I got SO stressed when he said that HE was stressed, and I was SO HAPPY when he said that HE was happy ...
Nancy smiles as she plays with her hair. She's one of the most fickle and volatile people that you know ... but she's genuine. You always know where you stand with her. She possesses an uncomplicated innocence. Her emotions are raw and pure, and her compassion for others helps to ground her ... In this case, a text from her boyfriend, reminding her of how much she loves him brought her back down to earth.
"Hey ... Nancy?" you say out loud.
Yeah? What's up—babe?
"If you were ever dominating me, and I got REALLY scared—or you started hurting me—and I asked you to stop ... would you? "
Look into my eyes and get HARD for me. If you can look me in the eyes while you're relaxed and feeling safe and can get hard, then THAT means you trust me and feel safe around me, so ... PROVE it! Let me take care of you ... SHOW ME that you believe you're in safe hands when you're with me! [Set the metronome for a slower speed (anything between 30 and 50 bpm). Stare into Nancy's eyes, and continue to stroke until you get hard. Once you get hard, you may continue to let her stroke you for as long as you wish.]
Typically, "punishment sets" involve cbt, ruins, and/or denial—but ... you don't do ANY of those! (Unless you count "perma-denial" ) And I was GOING TO USE CLOTHES PINS, but ... you TOOK THEM AWAY FROM ME! So ... it ended up being a "punishment set" without any real teeth —OTHER THAN the tough talk from Nancy, but ... I COULD have made it harsher, but decided not to:
Because more creative punishments would have taken a LOT more time and effort since there was no out-of-the-box "pain mode" to put you in ...
Once we cleared up our misunderstanding, it didn't feel "correct" to punish you, so ... it "got canceled!"
This set took me about 4 hours to write. I LITERALLY wrote the 1st scene while I was angry and worked up the same night after playing the "challenge game" set, but ... THEN we had our exchange of posts and I calmed down, and ... it didn't make sense anymore, so ... THEN I decided to take it in a slightly DIFFERENT direction while STILL executing on the big "dramatic scene" that I had originally envisioned, so ... it is all sort of working out ...
I am 6 hours into writing Part 2. I have 2 more scenes to write. I think maybe a short break and a cup of coffee, and then I'll see if I can bang the rest of that one out ...
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
Hmmm.... A mystrious redhead in the kitchen who brought me goon fodder? That can't be bad.
So I gooned through her unhinged bag of PMVs (using clamps after no 3). I didn't went to Mona because I wanted to know what the lady was up to...
Okay, she looked like a succubus, she talked like a succubus and she behaved like a succubus.
On the other hand: free gooning.
The PM came a bit late... I will look into it tonight.
And there's also hentaiaddict's set...
I have the feeling that something big is coming up... Human sacrifice, dogs and cats living together... MASS HYSTERIA!
Very fun . I wouldn't call this my favourite set ever yet, as I have to wait to see what part 2 brings, but it was really good
I felt pretty subby for Nancy in the beginning, and I was really afraid this side of me would take over again. But I felt that voice in my head saying this is only temporary, and there's NOTHING wrong with feeling subby every now and then.
This is a pretty unrealistic side of Nancy though... monitors coming up from the ceiling? Portals? Reverting time? Believable... but... a woman getting mad at me for not blaming her... for something she didn't even do? NO WAY! . But I can understand it, she wants "punishment" from her boyfriend. But then again, why would I want a set where I just watch you two having fun? . It's not that I'm a greedy asshole, it's just that I've seen that too much
Only one question... why would you make me get hard at the end of the set only to leave me hanging
Now that I understand everything better, I have decided to change the narrative to something that I think is just better and ALSO BETTER FITS what I *think* happened 
And this response basically goes right into the next set, so ... should be a nice story/set! 
Author's notes contained in spoilers. A fair amount of additions to Mila's dialogue, and I was too lazy to mark the changes with a different color, so ... don't skim too fast or you might miss some stuff!]
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I thought it would be Nancy and got this AMAZING idea to punish her, but ... THEN you foiled my plan by admitting it was YOU who told Mila! 
" So ... she wasn't some fragile woman who would be easily broken and given a complex from some insults ...
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... ALTHOUGH 
... PATHETIC! 
HUMILIATING and ...
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