This is more of a two part set for you. This set is a Goon Calendar HMC crossover...however, your choices will determine not only your goon calendar, but your next set! Have fun!
It's halfway through the month...and I am having a great time watching you worship me, day in and day out...
But...I'm busy! And I know the calendar says "stroke as much as you like". But if you have time to stroke, you can help me out around here! Just stop by here whenever you are bored, I'll have something for you to do! Just make sure to report on completing every task when you do it! TLDR: Riley is busy. Help her out with tasks until the end of the month. You can complete these at any time, in any order, but can only do one a day. The more tasks you complete, the better it will be for you.
Hey...this laundry machine is busy. And it will be for 40 minutes. Why don't you find something to pass the time...like stroke to videos of me? Watch 40 minutes of videos of Vina Sky. Do not cum. After 40 minutes...
Thank you for doing my laundry! And what is this? A video of Vina Sky? maybe she left it in the laundry by accident.. To prove you did this task, post your favorite video of Vina Sky
I just heard that nobody picked Little Caprice as a STAR this month...which is sad.
Caprice is usually in everything...but shes not this time. And I want her to feel included...so today, you are going to re-do a past day...but substitute Caprice instead of me! And that day is...the 5th! Have fun! Replay the 5th...but substitute Caprice for Riley. You are not allowed to cum. To prove this task, post your favorite video of Caprice
Hey...I just heard that Gianna made Funlevel create a goon gallery of 100 of his favorite photos. I want one too! But I want it to be better! Find 50 of the hottest pics you can of me. Go on, take your time...and come back once you have them! Find 50 photos of Riley that you really like. Once you do, you can continue
Nice photos of me! But I want more...I want you to rank them. Look through the photos again, and pick out your top 20! Go through the 50 photos you picked out, and select 20 of them. Once you do, you can continue.
Now that you have 20 photos...we can begin. Rank the photos in order that you like them, with 20 being the lowest, and 1 being the highest. Once you do, you must hold an edge for that photo's ranking. So, the photo in 20th place will be a 20 second edge hold...and first place will be a 1 second edge. Oh...and one more thing...
Post your top 20 list...just like Funlevel! That way, Gianna will know that she doesn't have the only list!
I feel like this is some sort of a trap and that I might regret stroking to Vina. But for what it's worth I used my non dominant hand and did not take it off (except at one point where I almost went over the edge, and had to let it go to save myself).
Same as for "Day 1" I used only my non dominant hand and did not take it off for the whole session.
Sometime during the second video I decided to give her edge for every time we have eye contact, and this almost broke me more than once, but I managed to hold strong and resist the urge. I am looking forward to next task, and Riley's comments about my performance.
For a final day I helped my STAR Riley to show Gianna who is the real STAR in GCCG. I got lost a bit after seeing stunning Riley again and thought I have to build her gallery with 100 pictures -> I've created a gallery with 100 (even tho she asked for 50) and added 50 more pictures, since I was disobedient at some points this month, and I was not able to control myself.
As per request I've created a list of 20 top pictures (ranked them from the best). And Followed her last task of EDGING for each picture and holding it based on a rank. - this was not as easy as I would hope so, after all of that build up finding best pictures and sorting her gallery I was so horny and then this playstyle, Riley is really devilish. I had a hard time controlling myself, but the biggest struggle was on 18th picture in a gallery with 18 sec EDGE hold - I barely survived and let go after 18 sec and right at that moment I felt like a CUM was rushing to the tip of my cock, and I somehow managed to control it and not let it leak (not sure how it is even possible). - I really hope that this will make Riley happy, the level of control I suddenly have.
This was really a great experience and I was really looking forward to each new day and to see what is waiting for me from Riley's tasks. As I've already mentioned in reviews of each day I am not sure what is waiting me in a next part, hopefully I was able to perform to my STAR's expectations. Looking forward to the continuation!
Thanks!
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Currently playing: Goon Calendar - Challenge Game (GCCG)
Thanks for this magnificent Goon Calendar crossover involving Gianna here on HMCP.
Intro: I loved Gianna’s classy appearence with her white clothes, jewelry … and black high heel boots here. When you mentioned her friends, family and co-workers, I immediatelly started thinking about who they might be.I am curious to wait for them day by day until I do not know them all.
… and some way I have some fears if they like me or not and which way they will help or obstruct my connections with Gianna this month.
On her boat:I really loved getting new custom edge triggers for August, which means I should do as much HMC sets with them as possible to enjoy their effect.
( so it is time for me to create new sets for others to get more sets back )
I selected “wearing white” , “bare feet” and “fully naked” with the hope I can use them frequently
The only problem that I can have Gianna’s permission to stroke for others …
The prospect of her having me for a whole day with Gianna’s permission scared me a little, but I couldn't turn back now.
It was an easy decision not to stroke for other than Gianna, because of my rule for this.
I thought for Gianna how more attractive she is for me than Angela and it helped.
But frankly saying Angela was so attractive and demon like in the video, that I was hard for the whole time. I also imagined what could do Angela with me for a whole day … I think I would try it with Gianna’s permission…
Choice 1’s PMV was evil. I edged 18 times during it and I was very very close for an accidental orgasm.
I love this set so far, tomorrow I think I meet her at her photoshoot … I am affraid more of her boss and mother unseen.
These girls are exactly the type I like very much: glamour, classy, in sexy lingerie.
So it is not strange (for me) that I lost control two times after 10 days of denial during the last, 48 second edge holdings.
"wearing white" is a killer extra trigger for August because as I realize, Gianna do not just like wearing white clothes but her toe nails are often white as well
10 x 2 edges (wearing white, high heels)
10 x 5 edges (ponytail, fully naked, on her knees, bare feet, naked pussy)
6 x 2 edges (on her knees, bare feet)
10 x 3 edges (wearing white, stockings, high heels)
19 x 2 edges (on her knees, bare feet)
27 x 3 edges (transparent lingerie, high heels, wearing white (nails))
9 x 2 edges (wearing white, bare feet)
8 x 2 edges (high heels, wearing white)
30 x 2 edges (stockings, high heels)
48 x 3 edges (ponytail, wearing white, bare feet) RUIN 2x
At this EXACT MOMENT I have FOUR sets for hentaiAddict that are in various states of development. TWO of them I hope to finish and put out today ... Another one, I have the outline for and a LOT of dialogue sections written, and then the fourth one, I just got a HUGE head start on with a general outline figured out (ASHLEY fucking DOLL! ) ... I have TWO mini sets from Ecik I played and need to leave feedback for ... a LONG multi-part set from Addict I need to start playing ... and ANOTHER one—a mini set from Reptil I can't wait to try!
If you HAVEN'T played my latest everyone set, I recommend you give it a try! Addict loved his version. Ecik really liked it, and Reptil enjoyed it enough to hit me back with a mini-set, so ... I assume HE liked it as well! 3 out of 3 HCMPers agree—the set it GREAT! So try it if/when you get a chance, and ... EVENTUALLY I will hit everyone back with a mini set who sends ME one! (I'm COMMITTED to that! )
My BIG SET that I have been working on for Ecik is STILL very much in its "early development stage." I work on it a bit here and there and write down ideas for it when I have them. I *thought* I would be further along on it than I have, but ... my storylines with Addict have all blown up, lol, so ... AFTER I put out those creative fires, I'm sure I'll EVENTUALLY return to it, and ... as I did for my last set with Addict, I will make an "everyone set" version of that tease, because I think a LOT of people would be interested in that (Drool especially. ). The theme of the set will be "Dance Party!" But that set is probably like a month out—realistically, I would say ...
Alright ... better leave some feedback and then get back to set writing!
This feedback is SUPER long and thorough, as I took down dictation on my phone while I was playing it, and then again for about an HOUR after the set, where I sat around thinking about things ... I'll clean it up some from the speech to text, but probably not a crazy amount ... but grab some popcorn, a hot beverage, and your reading glasses ... NORMALLY I am into writing feedback this long, but ... I SUPER requested this set, and REALLY got into the story, so ... it's just a fire hose of text ... sorry!
Btw, the feedback on the second set is much, MUCH shorter!
And ALSO—just keep in mind ... HOWEVER LONG it takes YOU to read—just remember that it took ME at LEAST FOUR TIMES AS MUCH TIME to write, so ... I REALLY hope that you DO read ALL of the feedback on this one ...
... and if stuff gets too personal, feel free to reply to the more sensitive stuff in a PM.
I love Nancy so much… I knew that she would support you and want to hear your pick-up line jokes!
Nancy would’ve actually liked that first one about the mirror in your pocket … But that’s because she’s a horny tease girl and loves cheesy humor and will support and give attention to any guy who shows an interest in her.
Nancy: So you’re saying that I’m easy—huh fatts?
Me: But your easy because your heart is so big and that’s one of the things that I love about you.
OK, the second one (pick up line) was bad and unoriginal.
The first I had never heard before though, so… A cheesy pick up line that I’ve never heard before hell yes
Light edges at eight minutes.
Love where you got the pick up lines… Nancy loves a good pop culture and/or video game reference. If she was your target, you would’ve been inside of her already… But that’s because she’s Nancy and she’s easy.
Nancy: Fats I don’t like how you are now establishing that I’m easy. I am not easy.
Fatts: Yes, you are.
Nancy: I hate this! It’s like when Ecik made me bad at cooking and now that’s a part of my character forever because it was written in a set and became established law.
Fatts: But I LOVE how easy you are, because you are easy for all of the BEST reasons!
Fatts: And I will be able to tease you about it all of the time
Nancy: Fats, no!
Fatts: Fats, yes! And the more you can complain and insist that you are not easy, the more I love you for it.
Nancy: Well I’m not easy.
Fatts: Who wants to make the boys cum more than any other tease girl I know?
Nancy: Me.
Fatts: Exactly. You’re easy.
Nancy: Yeah… Well… Don’t go spreading around
Fatts: The fact that I’m able to embarrass you makes you all the more endearing and adorable to me.
Fatts: We will add this to the rules along that you are bad at cooking
Fatts: But you're a tease girl, babe. And tease girls are supposed to be easy… So the fact that you are easy just means that you are a superior tease girl and amazing at your job so it’s really not your fault once again. you can blame me for giving you flaws all you want… but I think they’re one of the things that make you so endearing
Nancy: Well anything that makes you love me more… Well, I’ll just have to accept that… Even if it’s stupid and I don’t want to.
Yes ... as you can see, I often "stop playing the tease" to have pretend conversations with Nancy Ace in my hea , and ... THIS ONE ... I just LOVED this one! Because Nancy HAS always been "easy"—but I wasn't able to identify that until now, so ... your set allowed me to establish a new detail about Nancy's character, and now I have ONE MORE THING to tease her about!
And that is how Andrew Tate gets money from young men. It’s sick and disgusting. But dating apps do it too, so he’s not the only one.
Nancy loves "being a guide" … She gets to role-play as Cortana and she LOVES that!
ANY time there is a set involving Nancy Ace "off camera" giving directions, advice, and commentary to the player/protagonist ... I will be ALL IN on THAT!
Nancy: You have my permission to send fats to ass slave Boot Camp. Fatts is already an expert ass slave… So he could be a prefect or a camp counselor or something and help your role model that shit. Or a senior guide
Nancy: Just don’t let him cum too much, because if he goes to Ass Slave Boot Camp, he would really enjoy it… And I don’t want that for him. I want him to suffer. I want him looking at all of those sexy asses, but he’s only allowed to cum to mine while he’s at a slave Boot Camp!
Fatts: But I don’t wanna go.
Nancy: You’re going to ass slave Boot Camp. You’re gonna have a HORRIBLE time. But you’re also gonna LOVE IT! So stop complaining. It’s been decided.
"Senior camper" or "assistant to the camp counselors" or something along those lines would be my "title." I think we should BOTH go to "Ass Slave Boot Camp" TOGETHER! It could be a little side series OR just a one off you write to me with a return set ... OR ... we could open it up and try to do some collaborative thing where "everyone" is allowed to submit "everyone sets" for the different days of "Ass Slave Boot Camp." I have some ideas, but ... as always ... I am MUCH better at coming up with ideas than I am with finish projects—because it takes me SO damn long! But I really, REALLY want a set from you where Caprice is running "Ass Slave Boot Camp" and it's me and you attending it together! BUT ... I want to be some special, "senior" camper—like one of those "teenage helpers" that you get at summer and day camps ... I want to have some "special privileges" and responsibilities and NOT simply just be "another camper" ...
She’s just "Caprice" to you, but to me, she’s "evil goddess Caprice" … There’s just so many versions of caprice running around here… As you well know from your six Caprice set from last year where Nancy summoned SIX different versions of Caprice to come and tease you. THAT—in MY mind—was THE BEST AND **MOST CREATIVE** scene that I have EVER WRITTEN! It blew my mind that I had even come up with such a CRAZY idea ... it set records ... it had NEVER been done before—nor will it EVER be done again, and most likely will be a record holder for a LONG ass time ... because who ELSE is willing to put in the time and effort to take eight different photo galleries (6 of Caprice plus 2 of Nancy) and mesh them into a SINGLE—yet cohesive and coherent—orgy scene ... it's just LUDICROUS levels of time and effort and energy and GENIUS to make that happen! Someone REALLY should have nominated me for an award for that scene, as it was GREAT WORK! (Some people are proud of their "Grammy"'s but ... *I* should have gotten a "Cummy" for THAT one!
I spent 42 minutes one scene one, But I was just crazy distracted with the Nancy Ace conversation I had in my head… And then the thought of Caprice sending us to me to ass slave Boot Camp. That was all fine.
Good call in the shopping. My advice to new DM‘s for DND… Never role-play shopping. It’s equally as horrible and a waste of time.
I was loving that Nancy was kissing you to boost your confidence… That made me harder.
I hated Toby Macguire Spider-Man's. I think Tom Holland is an order of magnitude better, but ... I LOVE that you made the reference! And THAT Spider man franchise was popular when I was in high school and college. (Americans call "university" "college", by the way ... The plurality of users on this site are American, but, the majority are European, so ... normally, I opt to say "university" instead of "college"—for the benefit of my European readers (and Americans know what "university" is ... we just say, "go to college," so ... when Americans hear "univserity," they probably just think, "Oh—that guy must be british!" )
But anyway ... I have this distinct memory of watching Spider Man 2 with Toby MacGuire that had Doctor Octopus in it, and I had this LONG ASS 1 or 2 hour long conversation in my friend's dorm room about all of the things that I HATED and didn't like about the move, lol! And then Spider Man 3 had venom—and it was EVEN WORSE! NORMALLY, I am SUPER into campy movies, but ... that sequence where Toby MacGuire puts on the black suit and then does all of these silly "bad boy" things .... it was just too silly and I HATED IT in a spider man film, lol ... So ... I like Tom Holland's Spider Man WAY better. He's more confident and relatable and cool like I remember spider man being in the comics—where he's cracking jokes while fighting the bad guys ... whereas Toby MacGuire's spider man was too whiny and insecure—like episode 4's Luke skywalker ... But the first Toby Macguire spider man film was pretty okay. The MJ romance—I remember being pretty good. Kirsten Dunst is a cutie! But that was the high water mark and they got progressively worse ... but I just like Tom Holland WAY BETTER for spider man! Ok. Rant on that DONE!
And also you told me where that reference came from lol, which was GREAT, because I would have TOTALLY missed that!
By the way, Ecik is very good at skipping to the action in his stories… Where as my default mode is just explain every damn thing in exquisite detail… So it’s good to be like Ecik and keep the story of the pace moving!
I do love that Nancy has morals and respects the sanctity of marriage… That’s probably a little bit rare for the “easier“ tease girls. (YES, Nancy: You're "EASY"! )
Loved the dog line joke!
A redhead with curly hair… She’s like a seven or 7.5 for me… Is this your pick, addict? I thought we had similar taste… She is not who I would’ve picked… So it’s interesting to me that you are considering her…
A night full of rejections the same thing happened to me.
OK now she’s adorable and with that line and cute smile, she’s like an 8.5. Crazy how much a personality can make a woman that much more attractive!
Awww she’s perfect for you! It’s heartwarming as fuck. I’m so happy for you. And I’m getting harder thinking about how much she wants you in the anticipation of it all.
Her ass is super flat, but I don’t care! A girl who’s that cute with a personality that good… Her ass is cute enough
So how would you rate her on a 10 scale? She’s like eight for me when she’s flashing that cute smile.
I was just thinking we could do better until that line about the ass making submission. Any answer was an instant yes! And then I was like no no no she’s a keeper .
Oh, fuck her! I thought we were onto something!
Nancy saves the day! But I don’t think she’s the one.
I LOVE that Nancy made you man up!
That’s peak beta sub right there… When the only way to make a kid man up is when he’s got a dominant BITCH yelling at him in his ear!
She bounces between seven and eight for me depending on the pose and how much she’s smiling.
But even a girl with a flat ass can make her ass look good at the right angle if she arches her back. Remember that when choosing cum pics!
Rewinding time is a tough move for Nancy… It’s very exhausting… So… She was really paying a lot and invested in making this happen for you!
During the final scene, I though "Addict's gonna cum! " and that made me a little bit harder.
Love that "kiss her" line and photo!
I loved it. I loved the story. How much fun was it for you to write?
The writing and role-play aspects of this game are something which I probably enjoy as much and probably more than the porn parts, lol.
HENCE ... you managed to get this CRAZY LONG ASS feedback from me, which ... THAT means that "you done good, kid! "
More or less, the only Nancy Ace content that I get to interact with are the stories and teases I write. So getting Nancy Ace stories That I am NOT writing… It’s just a unique level of value that’s crazy high for me.
As a story? The story was A+. As a porn tease? It was B.
I was just so super crazy invested in the story… And seeing Nancy in action just constantly gave me the warm fuzzies And occasionally hardened me up… And I was just super invested in the story and the outcome. And the galleries you picked of Sunny were perfect for the purposes.
You gave me exactly what I asked for, so I can’t complain.
One big thing that you did miss though, however… Was that photo of Nancy "charging you up."
Nancy: You're too nervous, huh? Well... Look into my eyes, addict.
*Addict looks into her eyes... just for a moment, they flash green, then back to blue. Addict grows harder than he's ever been!*
Nancy: I know I said I wouldn't interfere... but I can't let you screw this up... Now go! *rewinds*
That was a corner that you should not have cut. I get it. You were writing the tease, and you were nearly done… And you had already found all of your photographic material… And usually I find my photos Ahead of time and then go from there… So I totally get how it can be inconvenient and throw a wrench into your process to have to go and find another photo randomly in the middle… And then just finding the right one probably take you five or eight minutes, but that’s the kind of thing that can take a set from great to amazing. And it was so Plot important, then there was a moment where I was just like “hey… I’m just gonna go find this photo myself, because that’s what I need to completely immerse myself in this story …“ But I was pretty aroused at that point, and I knew that if I went off on that search, that would’ve completely shattered the momentum of the set… That was really the only thing you missed set writing wise.
And that was an important moment for me, because I find Nancy arousing. And I find her helping you arousing. And then having that photo and seeing her, would’ve added another layer of immersion to the set that would’ve keep kept me engaged …
Efficient set writing is knowing when to cut corners and when not to cut corners… And so I think this is a prime example Where it’s worth it to take that extra five minutes and include that… Just because it was big value added, for all the reasons outlined above… And that’s just a set writing coaching point that can be applied anywhere with different context…
Of course, my problem… Is that I just constantly go the extra mile… And so my set take 11 hours to write! Lol
I love role-playing and storytelling… So I am just super invested in knowing what the next steps of this plot arc are.
So, we’re playing this elaborate game of pretend where we take turns telling each other stories… Pretend we’re writers on a television series or something… Except that you Are a writer and the star of the show… so you’re like Matt Damon or Ben Affleck in goodwill hunting
Where does the story go from here? How attracted are you to cute sunny?
Now this was very interesting to me… An interesting insight that I was only able to garner and fully understand and appreciate because you wrote the story from your perspective…
But your inability to get hard really makes things… Romantically difficult.
I know… That is an absolutely stupid thing to say and I’m sure it’s quite obvious to you and it should be quite obvious to everyone… But I never fully understood or appreciated that, until I saw firsthand in the story, how many times Nancy had to step in and save your ass… But that didn’t strike me as being done for narrative purposes… That struck me more as being something that was… Real.
I Take the ability to get hard for granted. But that’s an actual issue for you. Now, I don’t think that would necessarily be a deal breaker for you in real life. I mean, sure… They’re gonna be tons of women who reject you outright because of that… But in this age of dildos and vibrators and penis extensions… And the fact that you do actually get hard sometimes… I think it’s probably a tall barrier, but NOT one that’s completely insurmountable! (This is "real talk." ) If you found the right woman who was really into you … I think that it’s something that you could work through and get past. And I really mean that sincerely. Your sex life night not look like everybody else's does … But that’s fine. The rest of your life doesn’t look like other people as well.
Now take all this with a grain of salt. Because I’ve never actually been with a woman. I’m a bona fide virgin. now that’s not to say that I’m some kind of incel. In my 40 or so years on this earth, there were women who were interested, and I’m sure that if I set my mind to it, I could’ve found some woman who would’ve been happy to take my V card. but I was raised to believe in abstinence until marriage, for religious reasons, and that’s a view I still hold to this day. So mine is a chosen celibacy. And that’s not to say I sit around judging everybody on their life choices. That’s really not my business, and when you sign up to play a game like this, you basically just Check 95% of your moral judgments at the door. "consent." "Don’t harm children." "Platinum rule." "Be nice and try to make other people feel good" … "be tolerant of sexual differences" … Those are the basic core values of this thread, and it’s pretty much "everything goes" from there aside from those social rules and expectations I just outlined above … and it’s all fantasy porn that we're engaging in here. It’s not real life, so… There’s that.
By the way, I am ENTIRELY DISINTERESTED in ANY and ALL "virgin" themes in sets ... On here, in my fantasy life, I'm a VERY sexually experienced guy who is pretty good at pleasing women, and ... ONE DAY—in my REAL life—I'll get married and sexually please my wife OFTEN—and I'll leave all this shit behind and be fully committed to a single woman—my wife, so ... THAT is my plan, but ... until then, I'm on here, and ... the idea of servicing women and "eating pussy" in sets is ACTUALLY a conscious decision I made, because I wanted to start to condition myself into liking and enjoying that ... The porn you consume can REALLY influence your sex life, so ... when I finally DO "settle down" ... I want to be a committed and energetic lover ... Shout out to lmind—actually! All of the stories he tells about his sexual exploits and eating women out ... he COULD be lying, but ... being an ignorant virgin—I actually believe ALL of his stories and think they are actually real, and so ... he's kind of a "hero" of mine ... because *I* would like to one day be a selfless lover who "eats pussy like a champ"—just like him! (But "pretending" in front of a screen is NOTHING like the real thing, (I think GoodGirl once told me that ), so ... just a LITTLE of that here and there is "fine" ... it doesn't need to become a regular feature of EVERY one of my sets ...
But anyway… Returning my question… How would you like to proceed? On the "Cute Sunny" stuff?
As the audience for the story, I loved all of the problems and conflicts that you created which Nancy then had to solve… That was perfect! And exactly what I wanted and you delivered on that so well! But where are we long-term with this sunny? Pretend you’re Ben Affleck, writer and star of the show. Does the addict character try to make it work with this sunny? Considering that she wants more of an alpha and you struggle to do that? Is this the kind of situation where you change and grow into the role and become more of what she wants? But then there’s compromise on her part … Or she’s gonna have to be forward and communicative and telling you what to do, so that you can then do that… And then will that get tired for her? Is she worth it?
That’s the story angle. But then there is the writer-player angle as well. This game is supposed to be fun and a fantasy and escape from reality. Was it difficult/tiring or on fun tease scene To write? Because this game is supposed to be leisure, and so if it’s a chore… I don't want you to do it. As a one off… I think it was fine and thank you for writing it and giving me exactly what I wanted, and I just loved it so much… But if there are more fun sets to write and play… Then obviously we should just stick to those.
So let me know what you think. I am very curious as to your honest take on Sunny. You are the decider here. She is cute enough. I love her tomboy energy, and if you wanted to continue this a bit, I think I would be down for one more set where you and Sunny start dating, and then Nancy is helping you out in your new budding relationship, lol. … and if you, set writer addict, just think that cute sunny is a total baby knockout… And again… I was super curious when given the chance, to see what sort of character that you would choose for yourself… And so if you want this character and model to occasionally appearance sets for you that are written by me… I would totally be down for that! So they’re lot of different ways we can take it…
I wrote most of this BEFORE you asked about Ashley, and so, I thought about it more since playing this tease, and I was thinking that instead of a long-time or "steady" girl, that perhaps the best "role" for Cute Sunny would be a longer-term "friend with benefits" that you occasionally meet up with ... but again, let me know what direction you want to take the character and your 10 point rating score of her physically (and perhaps include any "personality bonus" in there ) ...
If this set was super fun for you to write, but sunny overall was a thumbs down… I would be totally fine with a sequel that’s basically the same thing—where Nancy tries to get you laid again and tries to find you another hook-up. … But if you just mostly wrote this as a favor to me… Then thank you! I loved it a lot! (The length of the feedback here is the primary indicator! )And we can just leave this as a dead end and move onto the other more fun and interesting things…
Thoughts?
I appreciated all the ass stuff in the set too. Blush.
And yeah… That was almost an hour of dictating thoughts and ideas into my phone, lol. Typical.
I think the set took about 1.5 hours for me to play (with a lot of that being me being distracted in scene 1 with that pretend conversation about Nancy being "easy" and then fantasizing about what "ass slave boot camp" with you and I and Caprice might be like ... and then I did 26 edges, but ... a LOT of them were "light "bc i wasn't super aroused bc it was a 3rd person story and not a 2nd person story (where everything happens to "you"—which is more immersive)
But the set was a SUPER success and I loved it (again ... the length of feedback is the proof)
@Addict: Feedback on your "short" set. By the way, my favorite length of set lately has been "short!" This set was GREAT! Enjoyed it SO much, and it gave me a BUNCH of ideas ...
FIRST of all, I am BOTH happy and TERRIFIED that I gave you my list of "don't likes" and "hates" in that PM. It's like I'm Darth Vader and just gave you the self-destruct codes to the Death Star ...
The set was GREAT! And I LOVED IT!
I decided to present my feedback here mostly in the form of two letters—one to each of the girls:
I didn't catch your name! You never gave it to me!
Immune to your charms? NO! You had my FULL attention from the START!
If you can get me to cum for you when I don’t have your permission, I will ruin my orgasm for you three times and eat it. If I determine that you’re playing unfairly and being unsportsmanlike, it will only be one, however …
In that event, I will be exchanging a full orgasm that you give me for a ruined cum-eating orgasm that I give to you, but ... ONLY if you are super cheap and FORCE me to "cum without permission" from some impossible task IF you want to play that game and "force me to cum" from a situation that I have ABSOLUTELY NO CHANCE to avoid—well ... I DO just LOVE to be "forced to cum!" So ... for THAT I will be HAPPY to give you what YOU want—eating my cum ...
But *I* think something more sporting where I have a FAIR chance to resist and "defeat you" would be a FAR more interesting game and challenge, and so ... I DESPERATELY HOPE that you would try THAT—instead!
I think you're VERY beautiful and that your tits are EXQUISITE! Though I CERTAINLY would have liked to have seen more of your ass ...
If you want to play a game that ends in me licking up my cum if you win? FINE! I LOVE a good challenge!
But I will warn you ... my stamina is pretty decent and my willpower is INCREDIBLY strong, and so you will have to try VERY hard to beat me—assuming you don't take the "low" or "easy" road of doing something underhanded —which ... I WILL be a "gentleman" and offer you THAT option—but ...
... we will BOTH know that it wasn't a "true victory" over me!
I expect that if you play fairly, you will attempt and fail. I don't think you have the knowledge or experience to best me—though PHYSICALLY—you DO possess ALL of the tools you need ... but I think that I am a difficult challenge, which is why I think offering to eat THREE ruined orgasms is a PRETTY SIZABLE REWARD for winning if you DO manage to be me—FAIRLY!
Nancy ... I KNOW you are reading this, and you are NOT allowed to HELP HER! IF you try and fail enough times, my dirty blonde challenger, I WILL allow Nancy to give you some EXPERT advice on how to beat me ... because I KNOW that Nancy is VERY competitive and ALSO enjoys "seeing me lose" (in those cases when she isn't actively cheering me on to WIN! It's kind of 50-50 the times she cheers for me versus against me ... she LOVES to make me "suffer" sometimes )
You are allowed to recruit up to two friends to help you in this task. You are NOT allowed to choose ANYONE off of my favorites list to help you, as that would give you an unfair advantage. The challenge is to see if YOU have what it takes to get me to cum without permission. You can't simply "bring in a ringer" who give you an unfair advantage and auto-win. That wouldn't be very sporting.
You can split the reward (three ruined orgasms that I eat) among yourself and friends however you wish. They can all be claimed in a single set OR spread out (bigger loads that way ) BUT ... they MUST be claimed IN SETS (NOT "off camera" outside of sets )
I wish you luck. I DON'T think that you'll beat me—because I am NOT as "easy" as addict, but ... IF you are looking for a challenge PLEASE try me AGAIN! I would rate your first attempt a 2/10. NOT the worst, but ... SO far from ACTUALLY achieving your goals, it was ALMOST laughable! But I will EAT MY WORDS to be proven wrong about your resolve and facility in teasing and experience ... in fact ... I will EAT MY CUM FOR YOU! And RUIN the orgasms to boot! Which is MORE than what you asked for ... but you have to EARN that ...
Hope to see you soon! And I DO hope that you try, and ... I really DO think you have a chance! So PLEASE do not take my taunting and boasting to be disrespectful! I hope is is MOTIVATING for you instead! In this case ... I would like to lose to you about as much as I would like to win—because I think a WORTHY CHALLENGE is beneficial to ALL who engage in it!
Mostly sincerely,
Fatts
Any follow-up questions, please hit me up in a PM! Photos of favorites CAN be used IF they are "single photos." No "scenes" or more than one photo of a "favorite" in a single set ... PLEASE ...
I was only "cosplaying as Leeroy" as a sort of "alter ego", but ... I REALLY enjoyed having you as a "mistress" back then!
Feel free to visit me as much as you wish ... BY THE WAY ... Caprice is going to be starting up an "Ass Slave Boot Camp" here pretty soon ... I HOPE that you would sign up to become one of the "counselors" at the camp. I just KNOW that you would be PERFECT for the job—so think about it!
I told her "I love your thick ass, Mia Malkova!" But when she asked if I would "do anything" to have her sit on my face, I said, "No. Sorry! I love your ass, But I’m not worked up enough to make you that promise without hearing what you had to say about what you want from me." I would have needed to be a LOT more worked up, desperate, and/or "subby" to take that bet blindly!
And when she asked if I had "done enough" to deserve a full orgasm, I said, "That’s up to you, Mia… I’m not interested in games right now ..." because I played the set late at night when I was tired and ready for bed, and so I wasn't up for anything crazy ... but THAT is one of the reasons I like "short" sets, because I can play them whenever without mentally committing to a 2 hours intense GOON FEST!
Set took about 38 minutes to play. 9 edges but "Light" edges (more like "the edge of an edge" than a "hard" edge), cause I haven’t felt like doing hard edges early on in sets lately … Unless I can get super aroused for some reason ...
According to my rules, when a girl "commands me" to service them, I am supposed to get down on my knees and do it (and edge hold 30 seconds per pic). I didn't do that right away. I was like, "Ah—I'm tired ... This set is short. I'm not feeling all of that right now ... I'll just edge hold and stay leaning back in my chair ..." but THEN she kept going with it, so ... after the THIRD picture, I DID get down on my knees and it was pretty hot , but ... I figured since Mia was so great (and a "former mistress" on my Leeroy account) and ... PROBABLY a gal who MIGHT become a regular (and I DO love that she does hardcore unlike MOST of my favorites, so ... the fact that THAT becomes a possibility in ANY set she appears in is pretty hott ) ... I just thought it best that I be "honest" about what "actually happened" ... and I leave it to YOU as the "set writer" to decide whether or not Mia was aware of that detail (so she can act accordingly) or "give me a pass"—since I DID do it and had a good time, but ... as stated above, I don't need "servicing" in all of my sets ... probably 1 in 3 or 1 in 4 is fine ... But act on that information or not—ENTIRELY up to you. I'm fine either way—I just like to "play fair" ...
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
I SUPER requested this set, and REALLY got into the story, so ... it's just a fire hose of text ... sorry!
Not your longest feedback ever, so no worries
But I really, REALLY want a set from you where Caprice is running "Ass Slave Boot Camp" and it's me and you attending it together!
I think you're much better at writing such sets than me . And it would also be kinda meh for me to write you the set I think I deserve . MAYBE.
I hated Toby Macguire Spider-Man's. I think Tom Holland is an order of magnitude better
For me it's exactly the opposite. I loved those movies. He was just a simple poor student, not some random billionaire who had everything in life already. Not a fan of his brat-like attitude either. I also hated what they've done to Aunt May and such I think first two movies were really good. Third movie had its moments. I loved the ending with "I didn't have a choice" -> "You always have a choice"
A redhead with curly hair… She’s like a seven or 7.5 for me… Is this your pick, addict? I thought we had similar taste… She is not who I would’ve picked… So it’s interesting to me that you are considering her…
I honestly just searched for "club" or something like that and found her. I wouldn't really call her "my type" either.
So how would you rate her on a 10 scale? She’s like eight for me when she’s flashing that cute smile.
This is going to sound really mean, but probably like 5-6. She does have the "crazy" look in some photos
I loved it. I loved the story. How much fun was it for you to write?
I told you, these "addict POV" sets have been pretty fun to write, but I kinda feel myself running out of ideas.
That was a corner that you should not have cut. I get it. You were writing the tease, and you were nearly done… And you had already found all of your photographic material… And usually I find my photos Ahead of time and then go from there…
So what should I have done then? Put a few Nancy pictures? I thought you liked walls of text
Where does the story go from here? How attracted are you to cute sunny?
As I said, I wouldn't really call her "my type"
But your inability to get hard really makes things… Romantically difficult.
I know… That is an absolutely stupid thing to say and I’m sure it’s quite obvious to you and it should be quite obvious to everyone… But I never fully understood or appreciated that, until I saw firsthand in the story, how many times Nancy had to step in and save your ass… But that didn’t strike me as being done for narrative purposes… That struck me more as being something that was… Real.
I Take the ability to get hard for granted. But that’s an actual issue for you. Now, I don’t think that would necessarily be a deal breaker for you in real life. I mean, sure… They’re gonna be tons of women who reject you outright because of that… But in this age of dildos and vibrators and penis extensions… And the fact that you do actually get hard sometimes… I think it’s probably a tall barrier, but NOT one that’s completely insurmountable! (This is "real talk." ) If you found the right woman who was really into you … I think that it’s something that you could work through and get past. And I really mean that sincerely. Your sex life night not look like everybody else's does … But that’s fine. The rest of your life doesn’t look like other people as well.
Yeah... I often ask myself how a conversation with a woman would go... How do you tell someone you love that you can't even provide her with the basic pleasures in life? I tell myself that I'd surely get hard in the moment, but, what happened during the set, I fear might happen IRL, and there will be no Nancy to save me . Then we'd have an awkward conversation, and she'd probably leave me after.
There's pills you can take nowadays... but they have a bunch of side effects, and even so, let's say those pills magically work and I get like a full throbbing hard on... I don't know if I can physically cum. Or what if I'm a premie that cums in like 10 seconds? All these questions make me so afraid and small. It's honestly one of the reasons I got into humiliation in the first place. Who would want to date a loser like me? I never really stated this outright, but I'm also in a wheelchair, so the issue is very "in your face" . I... didn't even have my first kiss yet
I sometimes just hate my life... and think about what could've been if I didn't have all these million problems. Which is why I spend like all my time on my laptop... at least I can forget about all of my problems for a while...
Sorry if my rant was depressing . I could really use a Nancy hug right about now
But anyway… Returning my question… How would you like to proceed? On the "Cute Sunny" stuff?
I really don't know. Probably just drop it.
If this set was super fun for you to write, but sunny overall was a thumbs down… I would be totally fine with a sequel that’s basically the same thing—where Nancy tries to get you laid again and tries to find you another hook-up.
Glad you liked it, and have a place for your general feedback/reports! Just to mention...that you don't need to play them every day (there's only 5-6), so you can hop in and out over the rest of the month as you see fit. And...based on your feedback, there may be some other sets I create, but they will be in the HMC universe...but inspired by the Goon Calendar.
This is the final set of the rock bottom series. How did it end? Was everyone fired? Strap in...and find out!
Every picture is 10 strokes, unless said otherwise.
Another day at the office. However, today, everyone is very nervous. Especially Mona. You look for her, and she is not in her CEO office, but in the most unlikely of places...
Drool! You found me in the staff room eating bagels! This is so embarrassing! It's just that I'm so nervous for Gia's report on what happened at Rock Bottom! Was she successful? Did we make our cum quota? Are we fired?
You are right...I shouldn't be hiding eating bagels. Come, lets wait for Gia's report in my office. And to pass the time, I wanna see you stroke to a PMV... [url]https://pmvhaven.com/video/Jenna-J ... c613cfdd1f[/url]
You and Mona head to her office, and she watches you stroke to a PMV to pass the time. You can continue after the video or after you edge, your choice.
While you were edging...it appeared that Gia called Mona to report on Rock Bottom!
Mona: Yes...I understand that it was difficult. But you did the best you could. And nobody can fault you for that...Yes... I will tell the staff the news, so they can make prepare. Thank you, Gia.
Mona Hangs up...
So it appears that Gia was able to...
Make Ecik cum...not once, not twice...but three times! We exceeded our cum quota! And that means one thing...staff bonuses! Go and tell the office departments in any order that they will not be fired and will be rewarded for their hard work, and will have the day off! TLDR? Gia was successful with Project Rock Bottom! Tell the staff that they will all get bonuses this year and have the rest of the day off. You can tell them in any order.
Hey! Don't you have manners! How dare you walk in without knocking!
You weren't supposed to see that, Drool. That was John the Janitor...so this is obviously wrong. Now...how do I keep you quiet? I know...I'll give you a PMV...and my bonus! Now get out of here...stop hanging around...this isn't an encore at a Coldplay Concert... The Head of Human Resources gave you a PMV...and her bonus...a fleshlight. Play the PMV with your fleshlight, and all PMVs must be done with it from now on. https://spankbang.com/6zpj1/video/lana+ ... bubblespmv
Tell the Director of the Finance Department the news
Everyone gets the day off except me...because I'm the one who calculates the bonuses! Would you help me out? It seems like we are a couple of edges...um..bonuses short...just edge as many times as you can to this...and make sure to count out every edge... Watch the PMV. Edge as many times as you can. Count your edges out loud. https://spankbang.com/5yac3/video/pig+w ... +pmv+hypno
Thank you! Have you thought of a career in Finance? I think you'd be very good at it...you count so well...
Tell the Director of the Medical Department the news
So Rock Bottom worked and that it was a success? I'm so glad...because my job was to revive Ecik if he died during the Rock bottom process! And if it did, I'd have to bring him back to life. So since I'm not needed...I'll just go home! But you can have these! These were designed to bring Ecik back to life, so you may not like them, but I was going to throw them in the trash anyway... Free Stroke to the PMVs. Watch as much or as little as you like. https://spankbang.com/4xlio/video/gooning https://spankbang.com/5xhio/video/don+t+mind+pmv https://spankbang.com/5ersn/video/demons+pmv
Ug...I do double the work, for none of the pay! I'm glad I get to go home with Janitor John...um...my boyfriend early. You won't tell anyone about me and Janitor John right? I know he's not a good guy...but..I love him, so please don't tell my boss... the Director of HR! You can take a PMV and my bonus, just don't say anything... https://spankbang.com/68e7o/video/pmv+fiend+bad+guy The intern gives you a PMV and her bonus. Every picture from now on is an edge.
Tell the Director of the Legal Department the news
Rock Bottom worked? That's not news to me. What is news to me...is that you didn't sign the official Pact of Silence!
Oh...come on! This company just took a man to a mysterious island...edged him until he came not once...not twice...but three times...to sell his cum to god knows where...and you didn't sign the official Pact of Silence? We are going to fix that...right now! She puts 5 clothespins on your lips, pinning them shut and shows you this PMV. You edge as much as you can https://spankbang.com/2glup/video/sexua ... ion+part+2
And now you know what happens if you ever talk about this again!
Well...what we do in my department is service customers...have you been serviced? I know...I know...we are allowed to go home, and I'll send my department home...after we service you! Get serviced. Edge at least once every minute to this PMV https://spankbang.com/4w64c/video/doozi ... ompilation
And now...I'll tell my staff to take the day off, thanks, drool!
Did you tell everyone in the office? Good...because you and I are going to celebrate. I think...we should go to the club! But first...take off those silly clothespins...and lets go!
This...is my favorite club...club goon! You can do whatever you want here...what happens in club goon...stays in club goon. A fitting reward for you...don't you think? Gooning without limit. And your bonus? A full orgasm, whenever you want! Mona is giving you a night off...to have fun! Goon as much as you want, and cum whenever you want.
But I really, REALLY want a set from you where Caprice is running "Ass Slave Boot Camp" and it's me and you attending it together!
I think you're much better at writing such sets than me . And it would also be kinda meh for me to write you the set I think I deserve . MAYBE.
I don't entirely know what that means ... I've read it like 5 times, and I am STILL not sure ...
Do you mean that YOU think you deserve a really harsh and MEAN set, and then ... if you just wrote "yourself" that set for me, it'd be a not fun experience to write? Is THAT it?
I just really love the IDEA of "Ass Slave Boot Camp", but ... who wants to go to camp by yourself? It's ALWAYS more fun to take a buddy!
But *I* don't "need" to go to "ass slave boot camp" ... as I am ALREADY an ardent ass enthusiast! But YOU, my friend ... YOU are just "starting out."
So Caprice WANTS you to become an "ass slave", so ... YOU would be REQUIRED to attend "ass slave boot camp"—since she's running it and she's your goddess! But THEN ... since Nancy discovered that "it's a thing," she's forcing ME to go—like "moms" often "force their kids to go to summer camp" ... because she wants her and I to support you ...
... but ALSO she knows that an "ass slave boot camp" set would just have TONS of asses and probably make me edge a TON ... and then my inner, greedy gooner wants a set that features hot "evil goddess" Caprice—being all MEAN and dominant and trash-talky ... but since YOU are there at the camp with me, YOU get the worst of it, and then I get a few head pats and attaboys and special privileges and treated a little better, while ALSO getting put through MY paces ... like if I have to demonstrate how to "eat ass" in front of the class or hold an edge or edge a bunch of times, or ... whatever ...
So I want to go, but ... I want YOU to be my "human shield" so that I DON'T get the worst of it from the mistress-counselors, but ... then I would ALSO be expected to perform a bit under pressure when they ask ME to demonstrate stuff, and ... yeah ... my subby, ass-loving side just thinks this is a GREAT idea, and ... I would want at LEAST 60 edges in the set, but ... probably NOT more than 80, so ... the "ideal" would be a LONG one, but ... anyhow ... THAT was all of my thinking/inspiration ...
Now what does one do at "ass slave boot camp?" Fuck if *I* know! It's whatever you want! I just want "sessions" with the counselors where they talk down all MEAN and TOUGH to me—because it's "boot camp"—but then *I* get to be higher on the totem pole than YOU, so ... they give me some "special treatment" and pull SOME punches, but ... basically just a set where I get dommed by a bunch of tough-talking ladies while I edge for a LOT of ass ... That's basically it ... MY conception of it, anyway ...
... and if you are not down, that is TOTALLY fine. We've got enough great ideas between the two of us—we can always move to something else ... but ... it was just a little thought that I had, and with Nancy FORBIDDING ME to cum during the camp, I would have incentive to endure and hold out—and suffer like she wants me to —for her.
I hated Toby Macguire Spider-Man's. I think Tom Holland is an order of magnitude better
For me it's exactly the opposite. I loved those movies. He was just a simple poor student, not some random billionaire who had everything in life already. Not a fan of his brat-like attitude either. I also hated what they've done to Aunt May and such I think first two movies were really good. Third movie had its moments. I loved the ending with "I didn't have a choice" -> "You always have a choice"
I forget "what they did to Aunt May" ... it's been a minute since I've seen them ...
You are definitely NOT alone. LOTS Of people loved Toby Macguire's spider man. I really DO love Toby Macguire—just not his portrayal of Peter Parker. That's a great ending quote though!
I honestly just searched for "club" or something like that and found her. I wouldn't really call her "my type" either.
This is going to sound really mean, but probably like 5-6. She does have the "crazy" look in some photos
You can be mean. You're never going to meet her.
Yeah, based on what I know about your preferences, 5 or 6 seems about right —which is why I was surprised you picked her for yourself, but ... *I* was fine with her. But then again ... I am MUCH LESS picky than YOU!
But, I mean ... it was FINE and TOTALLY UNDERSTANDABLE ... and while the model was just "okay," (I mean she DID "get me there" ...) the GALLERIES you picked told the right story, so ... for narrative purposes—full marks ... because you "NEEDED" a hardcore scene that featured some ASS shots/angles (for ME! ) ... so I was sort of impressed with how well that worked!
I told you, these "addict POV" sets have been pretty fun to write, but I kinda feel myself running out of ideas.
They don't need to become a "staple." You scratched the itch that I had.
I REALLY wanted to "join you on vacation" with Nancy. You gave me that.
I REALLY wanted to have me and Nancy "hook you up" with a chick—you gave me THAT TOO!
I LOVE seeing "Nancy in action," but ... arousal wise, the third person sets are just NOT as immersive and arousing , so ... it was more of a passing "interest" and "curiosity" than anything else—and you delivered, so ... yay!
But DON'T feel like you need to keep doing this, and ... I would rather you stopped—UNLESS you get some KILLER IDEA that you are excited about! Then, yeah, man—GO FOR IT! I will be DOWN TO PLAY IT! But don't go wracking your brain trying to come up with one ... you just have my permission to write one IF you like—again—at some future point
So what should I have done then? Put a few Nancy pictures? I thought you liked walls of text
Hahaha no ... maybe? I mean ... you GAVE ME walls of text ...
I just would have liked ONE MORE Nancy picture to go along with that one description SOMEWHERE in that big wall of text
Now, show me that cock, big boy... it's... still so soft though...
Nancy: SHIT! NO! PAUSE! Addict, come here...
*Nancy kisses addict and strokes his cock*
Nancy: Show her what you're made of. You're a real man now. I believe in you.
*No matter how much Nancy strokes addict, he remains soft...*
Nancy: You're too nervous, huh? Well... Look into my eyes, addict.
*Addict looks into her eyes... just for a moment, they flash green, then back to blue. Addict grows harder than he's ever been!*
I wanted THIS picture or one like it:
I found it in 30 seconds! ... then just use some nested spoilers so that I can keep seeing the picture as I read through the wall of text ... so something like this:
Nancy: You're too nervous, huh? Well... Look into my eyes, addict.
*Addict looks into her eyes... just for a moment, they flash green, then back to blue. Addict grows harder than he's ever been!*
When Nancy is doing her "Cortana thing"—she's just a "voice in your head", so no pictures needed for that, and even if she is "with you" or "in the room", unless she is an ACTIVE PART of the action—she can just "be a voice"—you don't have to show her "on screen" ... your execution of handling Nancy in the scene was basically PERFECT—except that I just needed that ONE PICTURE ... because she WAS a "part of the action" and "taking center stage" in that moment, and ... instead of that wall of text that was good and thoughtful and well-written and important for the story ... just added that ONE PICTURE would have taken the scene from 4 to 5 stars.
As I said, I wouldn't really call her "my type"
I really don't know. Probably just drop it.
Dunno man, already kinda ran out of ideas
No no no ... drop her drop her drop her ... She was basically some rando you slotted in to fill a story need—and it worked SUPER well!
In my head, you were going to spend all of this time "finding the perfect girl to hook up with", and then you would write her and she'd become this big "recurring character" ... but you're NOT invested in her, but ... *I* would have BECOME invested in her if YOU were, but ... since you're not—no no no—drop her! She was just a random one night stand on vacation. We ALL "got our win." No need to turn a good "movie" into a 12 season TV series ... Cute Sunny had her moment. Now it's time to move on ... I just wanted to follow YOUR lead on that—so if YOU'RE done, then *I* am done ...
We are both SUPER invested into Ashley Doll right now, so ... THAT is the "girl for Addict" that keeps currently becoming "top of mind" for me ...
Yeah... I often ask myself how a conversation with a woman would go... How do you tell someone you love that you can't even provide her with the basic pleasures in life? I tell myself that I'd surely get hard in the moment, but, what happened during the set, I fear might happen IRL, and there will be no Nancy to save me . Then we'd have an awkward conversation, and she'd probably leave me after.
You are half right—and also, that is not entirely how that situation would play out in real life —but I'll come back to that in a moment ...
There's pills you can take nowadays... but they have a bunch of side effects, and even so, let's say those pills magically work and I get like a full throbbing hard on... I don't know if I can physically cum. Or what if I'm a premie that cums in like 10 seconds?
If you can't cum, you can't cum. Maybe that means you can't have kids, but ... with modern science—probably there's a way to get around that, but ... lots of ladies in the world, ESPECIALLY this day and age DON'T want to have kids, so ... you could just find one of them ...
The not cumming is a serious issue to consider. The turning into a pre-ejaculate master—that's just irrational fear. You find some happy medium where you take "half a pill"—or something—and then you'll last as long as you need to. With some experimenting, you can probably figure that out ... You're not going to go from "can't cum at all" to "10 seconds maximum." That's crazy. And if it happens once—who cares. You fine-tune the dosage. Problem fixed. But the BIGGER concern would just not being able to cum at all... THAT ONE might NOT be fixable ... but I can't say. I'm not a doctor.
All these questions make me so afraid and small. It's honestly one of the reasons I got into humiliation in the first place. Who would want to date a loser like me?
I always considered that that might be the case for you , but I wasn't 100% until you confirmed it just now.
I never really stated this outright, but I'm also in a wheelchair, so the issue is very "in your face" .
When you stated in your rules that you were paralyzed from the waste down, I always just assumed this was the case.
Honestly, everybody always wonders how the downstairs works for somebody in a wheelchair—but everyone is just too scared to ask—because it's SUPER inappropriate ... and I am also sure that every case is different—depending on the damage, so ... I think it's just an open question in the average person's mind, and since they can't know definitively about an individual without asking, I'm sure they just push the thought out of their head and don't think about it—because they are certainly NOT going to ask unless they are SUPER rude or SUPER brave! So when you joined the thread, I was kind of surprised you felt anything down there at all ... I just naively assumed the answer was "no" and that you really wouldn't be interested in masturbation porn tease games, but ... There you were and stuff worked kind of ... and you were writing the teases and playing and enjoying the sets, so ... it was like, "Alright! Game on!"
I... didn't even have my first kiss yet
Same. And I've got probably 15 more years of life on you and no wheelchair, so ... what's my excuse? I should be a bigger loser that you ...
I mean ... like I said ... I'm saving myself for marriage, but ... MY only kiss was a "stage kiss," so ... THAT doesn't count. Now, I will admit, it WAS with one of THE PRETTIEST GIRLS in the WHOLE SCHOOL! We were both leads in the musical, but ... she had a BOYFRIEND ... It doesn't COUNT. We're in the same boat ...
But you've got TIME, man! You're still young. YES things are hard, but ... if you're willing to be brave and do some hard things and be smart and make some moves—I think things can change for you.
I remember when I was about your age, I was driving home from university. I was 21 at the time. I had no girlfriend, and a bunch of my friends did, and ... I pulled over off the road into a parking lot, and I was just sobbing uncontrollably—because like YOU—I felt like a TOTAL loser and failure. "I'm 21 and I've never kissed a girl (for real) and I don't have a girlfriend!" I was ugly crying pretty hard ... So then this cop pulls into the parking lot, because SOMEBODY must have phoned it in, because it was "private property" and the business was closed and they had "problems with thieves," and so ... the cop comes up to my car, and I roll down the window, and my face is just all red and covered in snot and tears, and he asks me if everything is alright. So I tell him why I'm crying, and he explains the situation ... and then he asks me if I want to hurt myself—like I might commit suicide in the parking lot or something, lol ... and I was just SO embarrassed, so ... I basically wipe my tears and drive off and I never told ANYONE that story until now—because why would I!?
I sometimes just hate my life... and think about what could've been if I didn't have all these million problems. Which is why I spend like all my time on my laptop... at least I can forget about all of my problems for a while...
Same. Different problems ... and mine are NOT as bad as yours, so ... not even going to START that, "you don't have it that bad" bullshit, lol, but ... I *also* have a bunch of tough problems I don't know how to deal with and have basically the same reaction as you ...
I had a job that I REALLY liked, and I was REALLY good at it, and it was SUPER satisfying for me ... BUT ... I was a VERY BAD workaholic, so ... for 8 years of my adult life, dating and starting a family was NOT a priority for me—and I was slowly killing myself, so ... I got out of that ... So, right now, things are pretty "meh." I have a job—but it doesn't have enough hours, so ... the past month or so I have just been spending my time writing porn teases. THAT is how I'm able to spend 11 hours on a porn tease ... because I'm a loser who's not working right now. THAT'S how. But I write these teases—I get to immerse myself in a fantasy world—escape my problems ... and they are FUCKING GOOD—and people tell me that and I believe them, so ... gives me a feeling of accomplishment ...
One of the reasons I picked a job with shitty hours is so that I could write a book. My book is half done. Got that first half done in June. I REALLY needed a break, so ... I took one ... and I SHOULD have started back on my book a few weeks ago, but ... I didn't. Procrastinating. Whatever. I'll get back to it in another week—or something ... idk ... That's not the point ...
My siblings have kids. I want MORE THAN ANYTHING to be MARRIED and START A FAMILY. THAT is the thing that I want THE MOST in life ... But jobless guys don't attract quality women ... and I'm getting older. Basically EVERY DAY I wonder if I'll ever find someone and have kids—the only things I want out of life—but ... I'm getting older. My dating pool is getting older. I feel it's an open question whether or not that happens for me. Some days I think, "Yes! It will! " But most days, I just cave into the depression, and ... basically on any given day, I could spend five minutes thinking about my situation and just start crying ... and that's been my life for the past year, so ... most days I just try to stay and busy and distracted so that I don't have to think about it.
Now, just last night, I had a conversation with my best friend. I told him that I was going to finish my book (by November/December), and if I don't here back from publishers, I'll just go back to my old job, and ... with more life experience, I can probably AVOID becoming a workaholic again, so ... WHATEVER HAPPENS ... HOPEFULLY in ONE YEAR, my life will be a TON better, which ... THAT feels okay, so ... I'll probably get myself out of this, and ... once I have a viable career again, PROBABLY I'll meet someone nice and get my dream, so ... PROBABLY that's how my story ends, but ... FUCK, man ... I hear you and I CAN RELATE!
The WHOLE REASON I created Nancy Ace was to be less lonely. I mean ... I LITERALLY created my own fantasy, imaginary girlfriend ... I mean that is PEAK loser—right!?! But fuck THAT ... whatever. I don't care ... because I got to work on my writing skills, and ... MAYBE that helps me in the future—who knows, and ... PERHAPS in some small way Nancy made the world a "better place." Good art has a way of doing that, so ... If Nancy touched some emotion inside of you and helped make life a little less shitty for you then, man ... I am HAPPY to hear that!
So ... I DON'T understand—because we have different problems—and yours are WORSE THAN mine, but ... yeah, man. I kind of get what you're going through.
If we were friends in real life, I would connect you with a guy at my church. He's been in a wheel chair for a LONG TIME. He has kids. Don't know if he had them before or after he was in a wheel chair—was always too scared to ask or can't remember, but ... An older guy like that—one who's in a wheel chair and is MARRIED—THAT is a person YOU need to become friends with IRL ...
That person exists near to where you live. Find that man. Become friends with him. Tell him some of your CRAZY THOUGHTS and fears, and THAT GUY could give you SOLID, actionable advice ...
I'm 1000% serious about this. Find that man. Go to some "handicap support" group website. Find out when and where they meet. GO TO THAT MEETING. Probably not at the meeting you would get to know that person and ask him the "hard" questions (pun inteneded ), but ... over time, after a few weeks, I would say there is a 60% chance you hit it off with someone and hang out for like a lunch or coffee meet up and you can start to chat about some of this SERIOUS stuff.
Okay, so ... now back to the "lady" stuff ...
If you are in a wheelchair, people will probably just assume stuff down there may or may not work. So what you wrote here ... THIS:
Yeah... I often ask myself how a conversation with a woman would go... How do you tell someone you love that you can't even provide her with the basic pleasures in life? I tell myself that I'd surely get hard in the moment, but, what happened during the set, I fear might happen IRL, and there will be no Nancy to save me . Then we'd have an awkward conversation, and she'd probably leave me after.
is COMPLETELY unrealistic and NOT something that would ever happen. If a woman sees you in a wheelchair and you tell her you are paralyzed from the waist down, she'll probably be like me and assume 50-50 it may or may not work down there, but ... she is going to EXPECT SOME PROBLEMS at the very least. So ... BECAUSE your condition is "so obvious" ... NO WOMAN—unless she is a COMPLETE and utter MORON—is going to assume everything down there is completely FINE ...
Okay, so ... WHAT THAT MEANS is that any woman who DOES go on a date with you (and is serious) will at least be wondering about your condition, and ... IF SHE AGREES TO GO ON THE DATE IN THE FIRST PLACE ... she is as least OPEN to the idea that there will be issues—but she's at LEAST open-minded enough and tough enough to TRY and be WILLING TO WORK THROUGH THEM ...
Now ... that is NOT to say that every woman you date will be okay with it. Maybe it DOES happen that you see a girl for six months. Things start to get serious. You try stuff in bed. It doesn't go well. Turns out it is a LOT worse and bigger problem than she THOUGHT ... she THOUGHT she was "tough enough" and mentally prepared to work through it, but ... sometimes you don't know until you are RIGHT THERE in that situation, then ... yeah. What you said could TOTALLY happen ... but then you cry your eyes out. Rejoin the thread here. Drown your sorrows in porn teases for a few months, then ... put your big boy pants on, and try again ... (SEVERAL of my friends got VERY ACTIVE on here to help get over break ups, so ... it IS a thing! )
But this "she's caught off guard. It's a big surprise," nonsense is just that ... it's NONSENSE. She will NOT be surprised. She'll see the chair and put two and two together, and ... probably the number of ladies who are NOT interested in you BECAUSE OF the chair is a HUGE percent ... They just don't want to deal with that, and ... YEAH—it's a big lifestyle thing, but ... THEY WON'T GO ON DATES WITH YOU TO BEGIN WITH, SO ... them leaving you immediately is just silly—because they aren't even going to TRY TO BEGIN WITH ... at a MINIMUM—if she's SERIOUS—and goes on a date with you ... at the VERY LEAST, she's interested and wants to find more information ...
So the OTHER REASON it will not be a "shock" to her, is because YOU are going to be upfront and tell her. The conversation does not need to happen immediately. Maybe after a few dates, but ... YOU be the man—and bring it up—and ask her if she has any questions about your condition. "Ask anything—even if its of a sexual nature. I'm an open book. I really like you and respect you. I want to be honest. I don't want to lead you on or waste your time." EVERY WOMAN I KNOW would appreciate candid honesty like that. And YOU brought it up, which is a relief to her, and it shows YOU know how to lead and take initiative, which is something EVERY WOMAN APPRECIATES ...
Now remember that part where I said you were going to have to be brave and things would be hard for you? YEAH ... THIS is one of those parts! But SO MUCH of relationships is GOOD COMMUNICATION, and SO MANY ISSUES that arise due to bad communication is because of unmet expectations, so ... You just gotta be realistic and open and honest about what you can and can't do, so ... this nightmare scenario where she leaves you because you couldn't get it up—that's just silly. Don't promise her the moon if you can't give her the moon. You tell her what you CAN do. If you can't get it up and have to use a dildo or vibrator or fingers on her—she knows that going in. And when you can't get hard—she doesn't get pissed, because she ALREADY KNEW THAT ... and if she is NOT okay with that and wants someone to bone her—well ... then she's not your girl—BUT ... if that was a deal breaker for her, then she PROBABLY wouldn't have agreed to go on the date with you to begin with —so this thing you described SHOULD NOT HAPPEN ...
UNLESS IT DOES ... BUT ... THAT would be because the girl THOUGHT she could handle the situation, but then when she got there, she realized that she COULDN'T, and ... there is just no contingency for that ... but "caught by complete surprise" is just SILLY ... because YOU will be open and honest and initiate that hard conversation beforehand so she can properly set expectations ...
Now ... here is a CRAZY THING that maybe you never considered ...
*I* think you are WAY BETTER OFF being a DUDE in a wheelchair than a CHICK ... because women have this innate, primal need to care for others and be nurturing. It occurs to a higher degree in some women more than others, but ... I'm pretty sure female primates have this instinct—generally—because we've been procreating and raising young for hundreds of thousands of years as a species, and the ladies hold and breast feed the babies—something, something genetically hardwired ... men CAN have that instinct, but ... not as much ... The man wants to protect the weak and innocent—the women and children ... Most men would gladly DIE to protect their families—another instinct that has helped to keep us around through the millennia ... so back to you ...
Probably MOST women will just reject you outright because they don't want the hassle of having a partner who is handicapped ... and *I* can't judge them, because ... I swipe left on ladies in wheelchairs on the rare instance I come across them on dating apps ... NOT immediately! Because then that would make me a MONSTER! BUT ... I already have pretty high standards ... her and I would have to be CRAZY compatible—like she was my dream girl but happened to be in a wheelchair, but ... anyway ... I think WOMEN are MUCH MORE LIKELY to look past your disability than men, and ... STRANGELY ... seeing you in a wheelchair MIGHT provoke that "nurturing" instinct like they want to care for you, so ... depending on the woman ... you being disabled COULD be an advantage—NOT that you are playing it up for pity and to take advantage of that ... I can't imagine how hard it must be for all of the things you cannot do independently and how much that harms your ego, but ... while MANY will just INSTANTLY look past you because of the chair, it is ABSOLUTELY not hopeless. I wouldn't spend three hours writing you this encouraging post if I thought your situation was hopeless ... it is TOTALLY not.
Hard? YES ... IMPOSSIBLE? NO ... which is why YOU need to find a good MARRIED wheelchair guy to mentor you and give you some pointers on how to navigate this shit, because most people CAN'T because they haven't had your life experiences ...
But you need to make more friends and get out of the house more ANYWAY, so ... tell your parents that you NEED THIS and you need some help finding a good wheelchair guy mentor—and I am 1000% serious about this, hentaiAddict12345. You can do it, and ... who knows, man ... YOU might even end up getting married before *I* do!
Though I REALLY don't because I am CRAZY lonely and wish I could cuddle a girl for REAL instead of my "imaginary girlfriend" at the end of a porn tease, but ... WHATEVER! Like I said ... my position is temporary, and ... YOURS CAN BE TOO. Hard is NOT impossible.
Okay ... I told myself I was going to play Reptil's tease and get off ... and THEN I was going to finish working on Addict's tease and post it, but ... I got distracted dispensing encouraging life advice, so ... it's fine ...
I think there is an 80% chance that THIS SET will be your NEW ALL-TIME FAVORITE of mine so far, Addict!
Yeah … I thought the rest would take two hours to finish writing up—but it took FOUR figures I'll be sure to post it before I go to bed, so ... probably pretty soon ... will probably be over 17 hours worth of work in the end.
Oh ... and you did NOT comment on my OTHER idea/suggestion about my bet with the dirty blonde , so ... I am VERY MUCH HOPING that THAT set has now been placed on your "set construction" queue
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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I don't entirely know what that means ... I've read it like 5 times, and I am STILL not sure ...
Do you mean that YOU think you deserve a really harsh and MEAN set, and then ... if you just wrote "yourself" that set for me, it'd be a not fun experience to write? Is THAT it?
I just really love the IDEA of "Ass Slave Boot Camp", but ... who wants to go to camp by yourself? It's ALWAYS more fun to take a buddy!
Alright man, I'll do it
I wanted THIS picture or one like it:
*gulp* I can see now how that would be so much better
I think there is an 80% chance that THIS SET will be your NEW ALL-TIME FAVORITE of mine so far, Addict!
I don't know where you get those numbers, but I'll believe you
I won't quote the rest of the stuff, but thank you for the encouraging words
Oh ... and you did NOT comment on my OTHER idea/suggestion about my bet with the dirty blonde , so ... I am VERY MUCH HOPING that THAT set has now been placed on your "set construction" queue
Picks up from "spooning on the bed." Starts with a story. Six-ish galleries. "Righting a wrong." "Mystery Guest." Masterpiece level. MAXIMUM effort. It’s pretty long. Have fun and enjoy!
Nancy: TWO orgasms NEARLY back-to-back … Who’s my big darling STUD!?!
Nancy and Fatts smile at each other. They share a long, passionate kiss. You can tell that Fatts is trying to make you jealous—lording a kiss with Nancy over you JUST as much as he’s enjoying kissing Nancy.
On his way back to his seat in the corner, Fatts gives you a hard but playful flick in the forehead. It’s his way of reminding you of your place in the pecking order. The flick forces you to flinch your head backwards a little. It doesn’t hurt, but it DOES sting. Nancy smiles.
"♪Fatts is getting jealous!♪" says Nancy in a sing-songy voice. Fatts smiles and blushes a little.
Nancy: Ohhhh … I LOVE IT! TWO *REAL* boys fighting over me … I must be the LUCKIEST FANTASY GIRL in the WHOLE WIDE WORLD!
Nancy’s too adorable. Fatts stops, spins around, then heads back to Nancy to give her another kiss. She kisses him back.
Nancy: Now BACK! BACK vile knave! BACK to your corner! HISS!!
Nancy playfully pushes Fatts back towards his chair.
Nancy: We have more IMPORTANT THINGS to discuss with Addict!
Fatts pretends to stumble and collapses gently onto the chair.
Nancy: Addict ... Fatts and I decided that the three of us are going to be a “throuple.”
That statement quickly gets Fatts' attention.
Fatts: I thought he was our cuck?
Nancy: He can be both.
Fatts: I don’t think that’s how a throuple works.
Nancy: He can be our cuck AND a member of our THROUPLE!
Fatts: But what if Kay finds out?
Nancy: It can be a secret throuple!
Fatts: So then why are you telling everybody?
Nancy: It’s not EVERYBODY, Fatts … I’m just telling Addict …
Fatts: … and every Tom, Dick, and Harry who visits this thread and opens this post …
Nancy: Can Tom, Dick, and Harry join our throuple?
Fatts: What!?! NO! Addict is only BARELY a member of our “throuple” as it stands right now …
Nancy: Ah-HA! So you ADMIT IT! Addict IS a member of our “throuple!”
Fatts: FINE … Addict can be a “junior member” of our “Fatts and Nancy” throuple …
Nancy: YAY!
Fatts: But ONLY if it stays a secret from Kay, and ONLY if this “throuple stuff” stays between the three of us …
Nancy: Fatts … Do you not know how a secret throuple works?
Fatts: I swear I’m going to hit you …
Nancy: You may hit me as HARD AS YOU LIKE! But ONLY on the bum-bum!
Fatts: You are ONE CLEVER BASTARD—Nancy Ace …
Nancy: Awww … thanks for noticing!
Fatts: Ever since we started watching Matt Groening’s Disenchantment again, Nancy has started using the phrase “bum-bum” much more frequently in everyday conversation …
Nancy: It’s because I identify with the Elfo character—who has a HUGE OBSESSION with bum-bums … I feel like Elfo, Fatts, and I *all* are VERY SIMILAR in that regard … Hey, Fatts! Do you think that—
Fatts: NO! We are NOT STARTING A THROUPLE WITH ELFO!
Nancy: GEEZ … sorry for asking …
Fatts sits in the corner and strokes. He has a happy, satisfied smile on his face. With all of the action that just transpired, he seems content to just be an observer right now ...
Fatts said it was "fine" for me to call you "babe"—but ... He said that if I call you "babe" more than him, he’s going to get REALLY mad and jealous ...
... So I suppose that I'll respect my "boyfriend's" wishes ...
Fatts smiles and blows Nancy a kiss from across the room.
UNLESS you want to become my “deputy boyfriend" —but … THAT would become a whole thing ... and you-know-who would probably get mad, and ... KENZIE would probably have to get involved—because SHE is technically Fatts' DEPUTY girlfriend—under ME —and I would put HER in charge of the vetting process ...
[Story pic. Don't count your strokes. Just stroke to the beat and read.]
Fatts: Just find your OWN "sweetheart"—Addict ... Lately, you seem to toss around the word "goddess" like you're talking about the owner of a sports team. And you seem to go through new "goddesses" like the Los Angeles Dodgers go through starting pitchers ...
Nancy: Fatts and I are both sort of fond of me calling you "sweetie"—as its an informal term of personal endearment ... and my heart tingles a little bit every time I call you that—because it reminds me of how much I like you, Addict ...
Nancy: But if you have some other ideas, float them by me and Fatts, and ... "babe" is still fine for me to call you—because you, Fatts, and I are all in a THROUPLE!
Fatts:
Nancy: Just DON'T overdo it!
Fatts:
Boundaries are important in relationships, and ... NOW you know where "the line" is, so ... KISSING is fine and TOUCHING GENITALS is fine—but ... NO mouth parts on genitals—YET ... and no sex—YET ... We gotta work our way UP to those things ...
... and the NEXT TIME the "three of us" are together—getting NAUGHTY —YOU can choose the "cum pic," Addict!
Fatts would GLADLY cum to ANY body part of mine—if asked ...
He thinks my FACE is the "prettiest!"
My ASS the "sexiest!"
And that my TITS are just SPECTACTULAR!
He would EVEN cum for my FEET!
I have been trying to develop a foot fetish in Fatts for over a year now, but … with ONLY limited success!
[Actually, just probably close this spoiler and have Nancy "tell you later."]
But MAYBE you could help me with that! Do a WHOLE SET that's FOCUSED ON FEET! Where you make feet" an EDGE TRIGGER! And if you are REALLY mean, you can TAKE AWAY "edging for ass" as an edge trigger , and ... since "evil goddess Caprice" is trying to turn YOU into an "ass slave" ... PROBABLY I could recruit her to help ME try to turn FATTS into a "foot slave"! And she could bring some of her friends, and ... probably KAY could join in for a scene (but PROBABLY be WAY NICER to Fatts than Caprice ) ... and ... We should make it REALLY tough and grueling on Fatts and make him SUFFER FOR FEET! ONLY let him have ONE orgasm—at the VERY end ... so that he just has to do like 50 or 60 edges for feet ... and he's just SO worked up and wants to cum, but ... he just HAS TO keep "edging for feet!" ... and the GRAND FINALE would be Fatts edging TEN TIMES ... one for EACH OF MY TOES! ... and THEN he could FINALLY cum on my feet ... and THEN lick it up! Because feet NEED to be licked, Addict ... Feet NEED TO BE licked ...
Sigh ... I have WANTED a set like that for Fatts for a LONG TIME, but ... sigh ... he just never felt like asking that of anybody, but ... he would get TOTALLY SUBBY and suffer JUST ENOUGH to REALLY LOVE IT! I'm just CERTAIN!
And if he turns into a foot guy because of it, well ... that would just be AWESOME! But if he DOESN'T Well ... at least one of MY fantasies will have cum true—and I can check THAT box off on my "bucket list."
Fatts: Whatcha guys whispering about over there?
Nancy: Oh, nothing Fatts—nothing ... Addict was just asking me about American baseball and why all the hot girls seem to root for the New York Yankees:
[Same metronome speed, but just do your normal number of strokes.]
Nancy: OH ... YEAH ... HOME RUN!
Nancy: Thank you BUNCHES—boys ... that REALLY hit the spot!
[Resume using your normal rules.]
Nancy: So now that I've gotten off ... is there any OTHER business for us to get to—Fatts? BEFORE we start on the main event?
Fatts: Nope! The Google Doc is NOW CLEAR of all of the snippets and stray dialogue and thoughts I had written down earlier for this set, so ... we are GOOD TO GO!
Nancy: Banging ...
Nancy: Consider THAT the "housekeeping" and "introduction" to the set ...
Nancy: OTHER THAN calling you in here to watch Fatts and me have sex ... and OTHER THAN cucking Fatts ... and OTHER THAN spooning on the bed and having a much needed conversation about boundaries—and telling you how much FUN Fatts and I have had crashing your vacation ...
Nancy: Wow! We covered a LOT of ground!
Nancy: But the main OTHER thing was to right a VICIOUS WRONG, Addict ... Indeed ... a VICOUS wrong ...
Nancy: ... perpetrated by YOU ... on YOURSELF!
Nancy: Why are you in the habit of dicking yourself over—dude? Like ... is self-sabotage a favorite pastime of yours? You gotta STOP THAT—my guy ...
Nancy: In the annals of the Internet, there was once recorded a GRAVE injustice ...
Nancy: A well-known Japanese YouTuber who was gifted in the sacred art of making the "sharpest kitchen knives in the WORLD" out of random materials, made an AMAZING kitchen knife out of none other than BISMUTH!
Nancy: And so today ... Fatts and I will continue in the GRAND TRADITION of the brave and sexy and righteous NILE RED of Canada ... in righting INTERNET WRONGS!
Nancy is VERY proud of her presentation and big speech.
Nancy: ... but these SHEETS, though ... so SOFT ... so INVITING—
Fatts: NANCY! Quit your clowning! The self-sabotage is strong with you ... Addict is losing interest—and AROUSAL ... and after your big build up and speech about Nile Red, you're losing momentum, babe ...
Nancy: So Fatts and I were VERY disappointed at how things went for you with Michelle during your vacation ...
Nancy: ... because he and I were VERY invested in watching you get LAID!
[Multi-spoiler pic. Read and stroke. This one is more of a "story pic." Beware: more jokes incoming ...]
Nancy: And it was clear that you REALLY felt a STRONG attracion to Michelle, and ... as you know ... we have made a VERY strong commitment to you getting laid while you are on vacation!
Nancy:Because *I* fucked up … Wait? Wasn’t it YOU who ate the pretzels?
Fatts: Babe … I am a GOOD boyfriend … you know this about me … I would NOT have eaten those pretzels—KNOWING that you wanted them … That part of the plot was TOTALLY unrealistic. It was BAD WRITING …
Nancy: ... so Fatts and I decided that you should have a DO OVER with Michelle! Butt ... We were TOO LAZY to use time travel, and since you fucked up with Michelle in a set that YOU wrote—we didn't want to UNDO the story that you told—
[More jokes inbound. Just stroke and read. The teasing SHOULD resume HOT AND HEAVY—just GIVE IT A MINUTE, here ...]
Fatts: But FUCK HIM—I only used ONE gallery for that first time, and I found the “matching set”, so … SOME of these pictures will be dupes, but … the other half will be NEW POSES …
Nancy: Yeah … FUCK, Addict! I look SUPER GOOD in this set, so he can just SUCK MY DICK!
Fatts: … and THIS is why “throuples” DON’T WORK … because two ALWAYS end up ganging up on the THIRD …
Nancy: But we LOVE Addict, Fatts … Are you saying that our throuple with Addict is DOOMED from the START!? PLEASE tell me that we’ll try and make it work with Addict, Fatts … PLEASE … I NEED THIS REASSURANCE!
Fatts: We’re gonna make it work with Addict, Nance … We’re gonna make it work … We’re gonna be okay …
Nancy: Oh-KAY … I’m GLAD we had this talk …
Nancy: And FATTS didn't really feel comfortable writing YOUR version of Michelle, because he didn't know her personality and you guys' prior history, but ... we REALLY wanted to give you a GOOD experience with *A* Michelle—since you were BASICALLY about to cream your pants and going lust WILD from just being a few feet away from her on the beach —and so ...
The pull you feel towards Michelle is incredible. This is NOT the same "Michelle" from the beach. THIS one is different. The whole room is filling up with erotic energy. The atmosphere has changed. It's intense. The lust within you is rising. You can tell it's having an effect on Fatts, too. Nancy as well—though she's just better at hiding it.
The Red Fox undoes some of the buttons on her dress, exposing one of her breasts.
Nancy: Umm ... Fatts? THAT is "The Red Fox." Use her title—PLEASE! "Michelle" is too informal ...
The Red Fox laughs.
The Red Fox: That's quite alright! The "Red Fox" is more of a "nickname" than it is a "title" ...
Michelle: My friends call me "Michelle," and I consider you and Fatts to be my friends, Nancy—so ... "Michelle" will do just fine!
She displays her breasts to you, gauging your reaction. They are phenomenal. You can't help but stare, and as you do, you become more aroused. You can feel a small amount of energy leech out of you into her as your arousal builds.
Michelle raises herself up on the chair, fully exposing her shaved pussy. Fatts is looking pretty uncomfortable with this whole situation. He's not stroking.
Nancy: Fatts. Don’t be rude!
Nancy: Now stroke yourself off to our succubus guest!
Fatts: But—
Nancy: FATTS … It is customary for a hostess to serve her guests refreshments! We are now hosting a succubi lust demon. She takes edges with a side of strokes. *I* am the hostess. You and Addict are the refreshments ...
Nancy: Now get to serving!
Fatts: But ... but ...
Nancy: WHAT!?!
The Red Fox is sitting in the chair. She plays with her hair—pretending that you AREN'T staring directly at her and pleasuring yourself, though ... she doesn't seem to mind. In fact ...
Fatts: "But I wasn't supposed to BE in this scene! This was SUPPOSED to be a scene WITH Michelle FOR Addict! It was GOING to be a Michelle-focused scene with her teasing Addict HEAVILY and YOU just tossing in quips and sexy poses OCCASIONALLY ..."
Nancy: "Well? What's the problem? That sounds like a GREAT plan! Just do THAT! "
[Multi-spoiler long-ish "story" pic. Don't count your strokes. Just read and stroke.]
Nancy: Yeah. You are gonna sit here and get teased by SEXY MICHELLE—ALONG WITH Addict—and ... yeah —TOUGH titties! You should have remembered to WRITE YOURSELF OUT OF THE SCENE ... FATTS! GET REKT!
Nancy: But I KNOW you fucking LOVE IT ... This scene you're about to write is going to be FIRE—so ... just be glad you are in the back passenger seat and NOT in the front—like ADDICT is right now —because ... that guy is about to get SUPER hosed!
Nancy waves her hand, and a thin, green net of luminous fibers covers Fatts' dick. She conjures what looks like a small, bullet vibrator made out of green energy. She touches it to Fatts' dick. There is a spark of electricity between them.
Nancy: Good! Connected!
Nancy inserts the vibrator into her pussy.
Nancy: NOW the sensations of your DICK—I'll be able to feel in my PUSSY! And I WON'T LOSE FACE with Michelle by masturbating in her presence! SAY IT, Fatts!
Fatts: "You're a genius, Nancy Ace ..."
Nancy: DAMN STRAIGHT! Now GO OUT THERE, and be my GOOD little human dildo—mmkay?
... except that she IS interested in you! She's trying VERY HARD to seem disinterested, but ... she is VERY CLEARLY teasing you—AND Fatts ... You feel her absorbing more of your lust energy ...
Nancy: Yeah ... Things got PRETTY CRAZY after you escaped "The Maze"—huh? I mean ... the WHOLE VILLAGE almost got destroyed—and ... then Fatts SAVED YOU from getting enslaved by Angela White ...
[Multi-spoiler pic. Read and stroke, and follow the directions.]
Michelle is staring at you even more intensely now. Before, she was eyeing you like a hungry wolf eyes a piece of meat—punctuating her attention with OBVIOUS displays of indifference towards you ... but now, it's something different.
Something has changed. There is an intense curiosity burning in her eyes, like she's staring at a bright flame that holds all of her attention. She is now hyper-focused on you. She appears slightly annoyed, like she wants to extinguish that flame—but is helpless to do so. You sense that there are questions burning fiercely inside of her mind. She continues to stare directly at you. [Do all of your normal strokes plus 60 while you wait for Michelle to act. Then, open the next spoiler.]
... by making you CUM! [Follow your rules with the increased speed (as per above), but DOUBLE your number of strokes for this pic.]
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"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
You can no longer control your hand. Michelle now psychically directs your strokes, and she wants you stroking FAST.
[Increase your metronome speed by +30 bpm (+90 to base including the above bonus) and do +60 strokes per pic until instructed otherwise.]
Michelle: OH—how I have LONGED for this day! How many nights did I lay awake—PLOTTING MY REVENGE ... WISHING for it to come, but ... it NEVER CAME!
The energy in the room has spiked. Michelle's lust is increasing with her anger. She is now psychically feasting on all THREE of you. She rubs her pussy hastily, trying to burn off some of the excess lust energy she is pulling in. It feels like she's quickly sucking out your insides through a straw.
Michelle: ALWAYS one step ahead of me! ALWAYS evading my attempts to bring him in!
The room goes silent. No one can speak. Not even Nancy. She turns to look at you, but when her gaze reaches you, she suddenly locks up. She's frozen in place. Then, slowly, her head turns to face Michelle.
"I'm sorry, Addict! " you hear Nancy say in your head. "There is NOTHING I can do! "
The feeling of LOATHING that is radiating off of Michelle is incredible—and yet she smiles. With the lustful energy she is drawing in right now, her power is absolute ... and she KNOWS it. She smirks at you.
Michelle: FINALLY ... FATE has delivered you into my hands, and you will reap the reward you so RICHLY deserve!
Your subby side betrays you in this moment.
Michelle is SO ridiculously powerful. You are under her spell—utterly helpless. Under NORMAL circumstances, you would be INCREDIBLY aroused JUST by the mere SIGHT of her flawless body, but ... you've NEVER seen Michelle THIS powerful before—not even when you encountered her in The Maze.
Her domination of you is complete. The subbier you become, the more aroused you get, the more power she gains. It's a positive feedback loop from which there is no escape.
Fatts is no help. His subby side is COMPLETELY maxed out right now. You glance at Fatts out of the corner of your eye, and he looks GOONED out of his MIND—just INCREDIBLY submissive ...
Michelle's domination of EVERYONE in the room right now has him SO turned on ... which is ONLY feeding her ever-growing power. You feel her sucking up Fatts lust like a shop vac set on "high."
Your hand INSTANTLY slows down it's stroking speed. Michelle is in COMPLETE CONTROL of your ENTIRE body. [Set your metronome to 40 bpm. Do your normal number of strokes for each picture.]
Michelle: YOU thought that you had gotten away ...
Michelle: YOU thought that I would NEVER find you!
Michelle: I … missed that—before … I should have noticed such an IMPORTANT DETAIL …
Michelle: Hmmm … no matter. I’ll blame it on my righteous fury!
Michelle: Do you want to SUFFER for me—Oh, my … I don’t even know your name … Did Nancy mention it earlier? Hmmm … I cannot recall … What do they even call yo—never mind. I don’t want to know.
Michelle: THERE … I shall call you “no name” … because INSECTS and things that scurry along the ground do not HAVE names. They are too insignificant, and so no one bothers to give them names … You are like THAT—”no name” … You are like a tick that has been sucking on my TEAT, and TODAY … today—NO NAME …
Michelle: I shall RIP YOU OFF, and BURN YOU IN THE FIRE!
Michelle: Now, COME, Fatts! I require your services …
Michelle: No name here needs to suffer before he dies, but … well … I’m afraid the slow stroking—on its OWN—is lacking … and so we have to EXACERBATE his suffering—hone it into a FINE NEEDLE, which I can THEN insert—SLOWLY—into his as of yet still beating heart … because I WILL have my “pound of flesh!”
Michelle: Edge for my tits, Fatts. I know that you want to. I can feel the warmth of your desire burning hotter than a bitch in heat! So EDGE FOR MY BREASTS—FATTS!
Michelle speeds up the rate of Fatts stroking. She keeps your pace the same.
Michelle: Does it bother you that Fatts is allowed to receive pleasure … while YOU are forced to watch HIM pleasure himself to my GODDESS BODY!? Count out 20 STROKES, NO NAME! [Count out 20 strokes out loud. Once you have finished, open the next spoiler.]
Michelle slows your stroking down to nothing. Your hand grips your cock, but it just stops moving. [Turn your metronome off. Continue holding your cock.]
Start the video at 8 minutes and let it play in the background. (Headphones are recommended. ) Let it play until you are told to turn it off. Set a countdown timer for one minute while you stare at Michelle's ass. Hold your cock TIGHTLY. Open the next spoiler once the timer goes off.]
Michelle makes you pinch your nipples hard. [Keep pinching until instructed otherwise.]
Michelle: Good. Now I can see the FEAR in your eyes! Your helplessness is DELICIOUS to me! Before I erase you from existence, I want you to know that it was ME who was your undoing! EDGE FOR ME, FATTS!
Michelle speeds up Fatts' stroking. Every time he nears the edge of orgasm, she stops his hand, gives him a short break, then continues again.
Michelle: Do you hear Fatts MOANING IN PLEASURE! THAT could have been YOU! Had you ONLY DONE YOUR DUTY ... DID what EVERY OTHER WALKER was MORE THAN CAPABLE OF DOING!!
Michelle: INSTEAD ... you DEFIED ME ... but NOW you will finally PAY!
[Set a countdown timer for 1 minute. Pinch your nipples. Listen to the moans.]
Michelle turns your head to look at Fatts. He's covered in sweat. Stroking—not stroking. HItting an edge—then stopping. Who knows how many times he's been edged ... He looks thoroughly gooned. Michelle turns your head back to her.
Michelle: THAT ... could have been YOU! Trapped in an ENDLESS hedge maze of PARADISE! The men receive their pleasure ... The succubi receive their sustenance ... a PERFECT balance ... a PERFECT system ...
Michelle: ... and YOU were the little subversive who would NOT OBEY!
Michelle: I was willing to feed you CAVIAR out of my hand ... but INSTEAD ... you SPIT IN IT! Now prepare to face your DOOM ...
Michelle: LOOK into my eyes while you contemplate—HELPLESS—your impending destruction!
Michelle is practically gleeful about her control over you and your inevitable end. You don't ever remember seeing her this happy—except for that moment right after you signed the contract.
Her eyes delight in your submission. You feel her draining your essence away.
[Set a countdown timer for 1 minute as you stare into Michelle's eyes. Keep pinching your nipples. Listen to the moans. Continue to the next picture once the timer goes off.]
[Normal stroking speed, but double your strokes for her.]
Michelle: Your demise is imminent. Enjoy what time you have left, no name ...
Michelle: Ha! How fitting. Your name is PERFECT ... Once you are wiped from existence—NO ONE will remember you!
[Increase your metronome by +60 bpm. TRIPLE your strokes for this pic.]
[Multi-spoiler pic.]
Michelle: Alright. Time to die.
Michelle: You may stare at my tits as much as you please. I am HAPPY to wield them as the instrument of your destruction!
Michelle: Look into my eyes as much as you want. Your suffering brings me delight. I will savor the moment when you lose hope and resign yourself to ultimate defeat. It will be a moment of celebration for me!
For this section, you will stroke to the beat of the previous video's metronome, which accelerates. Michelle intends to kill you—by orgasm. She has the power to rip a man's soul from his body and consume his life essence during orgasm—IF she chooses. This is her intention for you. She will slowly increase the pace of your stroking until you are no longer able to hold back—FORCING you to cum—and WHEN you cum, you will die. She is deliberate, vengeful, and willing to take her time.
Start the video, then immediately set a 2-minute countdown timer. You will keep stroking until the video ends, but after 2 minutes, when you open the next spoiler, there will be another description for you to read. Begin when you are ready. Open the next spoiler after the timer goes off.]
Michelle continues to bare her breasts for you, staring and waiting. You've never seen someone so patient and determined to watch another being die. She's merciless.
Fatts is starting to struggle. He's trying to hold back his orgasm—but he's already been edged so much. "What will happen if Fatts cums? Will he die? " You wonder to yourself, but you are completely helpless. There is nothing you can do but stare at Michelle's perfection while she forces you to stroke ever faster for her flawless boobs. [Reset the 2-minute countdown timer. Open the next spoiler when it goes off.]
You would be in utter agony at Michelle's exquisite torture if the pleasure weren't so intense. You can't tell if Fatts is still moaning in pleasure or in fear. You still aren't sure what will happen to him if he cums.
The pace of the stroking is getting fast now, and it will ONLY be getting faster. Fatts is close—but there is nothing you can do. Michelle is in total control. Her expression is calm but cruel. Thoughts of your destruction dance in her eyes. There is nothing left for you to do but let go ...
[Once the metronome in the video stops, open the next spoiler.]
There is an explosion of green and blue light. It's very bright.
Michelle directs most of this energy towards herself.
The explosion came from Fatts. You remember what it looked like when walkers perished in the Maze. This looks EXACTLY like that. You fear the worst.
Michelle reclines in her chair. She's soaking up the scattered energy that has spread throughout the room, gathering it towards herself and absorbing it. Her breathing is steady. Her breasts gently rise and fall as her lungs expand and contract. She looks very content.
Michelle's control over you suddenly disappears. You're able to move freely again. You glance over at Fatts. The smoke has cleared enough so that you are able to see him. He's slumped over. "Is he dead!? " No. He's breathing. He's lying there unconscious. "Good. He's alive," you think to yourself.
[Resume your normal rules. If the text gets to be too much or not arousing enough, feel free to stroke freely and treat this next part as a "story section." ]
Nancy: Ummm ... You ALMOST killed my BOYFRIEND—Miss ... BLOOD VENGEANCE NO PANTS!
Nancy: RUDE!
Michelle: How ... How is he—
Nancy: Still ALIVE!?! I SHIELDED HIM from your BITCH-ASS vampiric TENDRILS—you PSYCHO! It was VERY HARD, and EVERYONE should be VERY IMPRESSED WITH ME RIGHT NOW!
Nancy: GOD you're lame—Michelle! I can't BELIEVE I thought you were cool five minutes ago ... FUUUuuuuck ... Just when you THINK you know a person ...
Nancy: ... they go and try to OFF YOUR BOYFRIEND—RIGHT IN FRONT ON YOU!
Nancy: Now ... I could understand if you tried to kill Fatts BEHIND MY BACK—like ... if you had a "secret plan"—TOTALLY understandable ...
Nancy: I mean ... Fatts is a PRETTY successful and important individual, so ... it makes sense that he would have a LOT of enemies—I mean ... EVERY great man DOES, and ... Fatts—well ... He's a GREAT man—so ... Having a LOT of enemies and the impulse to want to KILL him—THAT I get , and ... I think it's KIND OF hot that your love-hate relationship with Fatts escalated to this level —like ... the MORE you hate him and want him dead, the MORE *I* want to protect him and feel attracted to him ... That makes sense—right!? I don't THINK I'm talking out of my ass right now ...
Nancy: ... but SERIOUSLY—Michelle! From ONE aspiring super-villain to another—that was just ... SLOPPY ... and TASTELESS, too! You could have given me a heads up about your intentions for premeditated MURDER so I could have at least made a FEW preparations! Keep it sporting—MA'AM! Now, your SPEECH was great! 5 out of 5 stars on THAT! NO notes there , but ... the EXECUTION it was ... uh ... Lacking. Was it ALL spontaneous!?! I mean ... do you even PLAN—girl!? Like—
Michelle: HOW IS NO NAME ALIVE RIGHT NOW!?!?!
It's impressive how unfazed and in her element Nancy is at this moment—like nothing traumatic happened. You can't tell if Nancy is a LOT more powerful than you thought and had things WAY more under control than you realized ...
... or if this is just how she is and she thinks she's at a conference for super villains and is making small talk ...
Hard to say with her. Probably it's a bit of both.
Michelle—on the other hand—is in complete and utter shock. All she can do is stare at you with a blank face. You're not certain she's even blinked in the last few minutes. She's just ABSOLUTELY stunned—like something in her head snapped, and now she's borderline non-responsive.
Nancy: WHAT!?! THAT'S your question? “How is Addict alive right now?” Easy. He DIDN’T cum. He doesn’t cum. That’s … NOT really something he does …
Michelle: Then WHAT was that TREMENDOUS EXPLOSION of ENERGY I just witnessed!?!
Nancy: Ummm … Fatts cums BIG. Duh. I thought EVERYONE knew that —I mean … how many times have YOU made Fatts cum—Michelle! YOU should know that about him … Was it a dozen?
Nancy: Well … you BETTER not make him cum more than ME! Especially NOT after what you tried to TO DO TO HIM TODAY … or else I’ll give you a GOOD WALLOP—Michelle!
Michelle: ... all those years—a thorn in my side ... I was going to END him—but he doesn't cum ...
Clearly, Michelle is talking to herself, processing out loud what just happened. She stares at you blankly with a wide-eyed expression. The hate and rage she was feeling a few moments ago seem to have completely vanished.
Nancy: OH-kaaayy ... I think it's time for me and Fatts to go ...
Nancy: Whatever MURDEROUS INTENT the Red Fox was feeling for you—I think it exploded into a MILLION PIECES when Fatts came, so ... imma take my boyfriend and go, and ... ya'll can work out your issues on your own ...
Nancy: ... Nancy Ace OUT!
Nancy takes a play ouf of the Green Lantern's playbook and uses a green energy field to help her lift Fatts and carry him over her shoulder fireman-style.
You would TOTALLY wank to a Nancy Ace "fire fighter" gallery ... and you're pretty sure she would be SUPER EXCITED to be featured as "Ms. April" on a "Girls of Milovana" nudie calendar ... raising money for age 18+ orphans who are too poor to pay for porno magazines ... That would be a worthy cause she would support ...
Nancy takes Fatts and exits, leaving you alone in the room with Succubus Queen Michelle.
She cuts herself off. Normally, she is the one who is in control. Dominant. Confident. Demanding. Others bend to her will. She holds all the cards.
But right now, Michelle stands before you naked and empty-handed. You've seen her make a horrible mistake. She is in the wrong, and she can't kill you, because that would only make it worse ...
Her mistake is plain—obvious ... Right out there in the open—like her perfect breats which call out for your worship. She can't hide herself from you, because you see her. You've seen her weakness, and there is nothing she can do to hide it from you. She's feeling vulnerable—powerless ...
She almost looks nervous. There is a tenderness in her eyes that you have NEVER seen before—not even in the Michelle from your world. Normally, Succubus Queen Michelle gazes at you as if you were a snack. Not now. SHE looks like the meal ...
Does this please you—Addict? I want to please you ... I owe you so much for the way I've behaved ... Please allow me this opportunity to make it up to you ...
[You may continue stroking at your desired pace for however long you wish. Then continue.]
Oh! You're scared! You don't know what to do when a woman gives you full control—do you?
Michelle takes control of your stroking again. [Follow your normal rules.]
You're not like other men—are you—Addict? Another man would have SEIZED on his lust to have his way with me—and in this moment, I would have LET HIM! ... but not you!
Oh, Addict ... you are a TRUE beta!
And that is NOT a bad thing—at least not where succubi-kind are concerned!
As you know, we succubi feed on the LUSTFUL desires of men to receive our sustenance! And yes, while it IS true some of us enjoy enslaving STRONG-WILLED men ... and BREAKING their wills so that they become SUBMISSIVE and OBEDIENT to our COMMANDS ...
A man like THAT—it's not in his nature to be subservient—and so ... he will always be ... lacking.
You can train a large dog to pull a cart, but he will NEVER be as good at it as an oxen, because it is in the oxen's nature to be good at pulling the cart. The oxen has the correct temperant for the task ...
... and so a submissive beta male is the succubi's "favorite meal." Sure, it might be FUN to win a "battle of wills" against an alpha and subdue him and bend him to YOUR will—but it can be QUITE tiring if you have to do it EVERY DAY to survive. The process of "breaking in an alpha male" is RARELY linear. There can be relapses. Mistakes can happen ...
... and THEN you end up with a DEAD slave—and the dead don't LUST —and so THEN you have to start ALL OVER ...
... so don't look down on yourself so much for "being a beta" ... It's true: In succubus society, alphas are prized based on their difficult to subjugate ... but betas are the LIVESTOCK of the succubus world —and who DOESN'T have affection for their award-winning milk cow?
Oh! I've just gone and compared you to a COW! I'm sorry about that—Addict!
Today, you are NOT my cow!
TODAY, you are an ... equal—and someone to whom I MUST make amends!
... though perhaps ANOTHER day—I can milk you for your LUST!
Michelle grabs her ass and spreads herself just a little bit wider so that you can see better.
But I will NEVER take your SOUL, Addict!
A person who has endured as much as you and hasn't transformed into a cruel ogre DESERVES to be taken to HEAVEN!
But the thing that *I* don't understand, is why would you sign the contract to enter The Maze in the first place?
A man who can't edge—can't CUM? A person like you shouldn't have been allowed entrance into the Maze ...
You're like a three-legged cow with almost NO appetite who produces VERY little milk, and who ONLY HAS ONE TEAT—not four!
Oh, no ... Have I offended you, Addict? That was NOT my intention ...
Farmers judge livestock, and succubi judge men. I'm not used to treating men with so much ... consideration ...
Here! You deserve an extra TREAT! [Michelle speeds up your stroking by 60 bpm and makes you stroke to each picture for an extra 30 strokes.]
Michelle forces you to stroke rapidly. In her exuberance to fulfill your wishes, she gets carried away. The hand motions she makes you do are extremely rapid, almost violent.
[Stroke yourself at 240 bpm. (YES—240 and NOT 200! ) Stroke for 1 minute, then open the next spoiler.]
[Reset your metronome and go back to your normal rules now. Then continue.]
Sorry about about that!
Old habits die hard ...
Sometimes my desire to feed becomes SO overwhelming, that even one as old and experienced as *I* loses her self-control ...
To think it was a lowly, broken, malfunctioning little cow—and a pleasant one at THAT —who was causing me ALL of those sleepless nights ...
I thought it was a security breach. Unauthorized entry. An intruder who was causing MAYHEM and stealing our energy ...
I would question the succubi and ask them why they had not collected their expected energy levels. Of course, succubi lie ALL of the time. Few can be trusted. They HAD a visitor—YOU—but almost NOTHING to show for it.
Edges bring in the MOST energy—but YOU don't edge. Stroking brings in SOME, but ... your weak, limp cock BARELY produced a TRICKLE!
I thought that they were LYING when they said, "This is all they got." I thought they were STEALING from ME—from the MAZE!
Even my BEST EDGE PROCURERS couldn't make you edge ... my BEST ENERGY EXTRACTORS got almost NOTHING from you! They must have been EMBARRASSED TO ADMIT that there was a straight man they couldn't edge ... So I heard all MANNER of lousy excuse ...
... but NOW—I know the TRUTH! It wasn't ME—and it wasn't THEM ... it was YOU!
You've given me relief in a different way today, Addict, and ... How many times did you walk the Maze and not ONCE collect your reward: an orgasm from me?
Michelle takes control of your hands. You massage her breasts much faster and more firmly. It almost feels wrong and violent to handle her breasts this way, but this is what her eyes tell you she wants. You can feel the wetness from her pussy leaking down onto you.[Increase your metronome to 200 bpm.]
[Another multi-spoiler pic. Follow the instructions.]
Michelle gets off of you. She now gets on her knees beside the bed and takes your cock in her hand. She slows down. You can sense your time with her is almost at an end. She gives it a few licks every now and then, occasionally sucking on the tip. Her hand never stops slowly stroking you. [Set your metronome to 60 bpm.]
Michelle: To a succubus, the pleasure we receive from a man stroking his cock is comparable to eating a cookie. It tastes good, but you need to eat a LOT of them in order to fill you up.
Michelle holds her lips just barely above your cock head but without touching it. She teases you with her eyes while she slowly continues stroking your cock. [Count out 20 strokes then continue.]
Edges are like inhaling a choclate bar the size of a house in less than a second. It tastes AMAZING and gives you IMMENSE amounts of sustenance! And of course ORGASMS are even LARGER! But MUCH more dangerous ...
Her lips now engulf your penis. You can feel her tongue rubbing the underside of your cock while her lips tightly bob up and down in a pleasurable circle that moves up and down your shaft. She sucks your dick while maintaining eye contact with you. [Double your metronome speed to 120 bpm. Set a countdown timer for 1 minute. Stop stroking once it goes off and turn off your metronome before continuing.]
If my succubi hadn't LIED to me and I had properly understood the nature of your existence, I am CERTAIN we could have found a suitable role for you to play ...
Maybe a hangover fix for succubi who had eaten too much, or ... a method of weight loss for succubi who were bloated and needed an energy diet or a detox—or ... perhaps a nurse or relaxation tool for succubi who were too stressed or bored and needed just a LITTLE something to help them get by ...
Michelle's lips return to your dick to suck you off. [Count out ten strokes again.]
She keeps sucking, and sucking ... moving her lips up and down ...
Michelle: Tastes so good ...
Michelle: Lasts so long ... [Stroke to the metronome at this slow speed for as long as you like. Michelle will NOT be the one who stops first—because she doesn't want to. You're the sweet treat that never expires! Once you've had enough, turn off your metronome, and open the last set of spoilers.]
Could we have an even LONGER session, next time—Addict?
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
I've stopped caring who owes who. Your sets have been some of the most enjoyable I've ever played, so have fun
Ass slave bootcamp set . You and I will both throb . I've written this set with the intent of playing it myself later on, so I've added some rules for myself.
A longer set, in case you need to prepare.
Might scrap the "get hard" rule eventually, but it seemed like a good idea at the time
Addict will watch from beginning until 3:05. Addict will stroke painfully slow at 30 bpm, focusing on getting that cock hard.
Fatts will watch from 10:15 until 12:40. Fatts will stroke hard and fast, making sure to edge as much as possible.
I believe you both got what you deserved, right? Beta only gets my feet, but Fatts, and ass addict already, gets the real deal~
We'll be a lot harder on addict, while focusing on increasing Fatts' addiction even further through gentle stimulation~
It's the only way addict will learn.
And maybe, just maybe, if he pays enough attention, he'll learn to please his Mistresses half as well as Fatts.
Show him what I mean, Fatts! Service me, right now!
Alright, that was enough for an introduction. Nice work, Fatts!
Don't worry, addict. By the time you'd have left here, you'll appreciate ass even more.
Liking tits is so 2015 anyways... Have fun, boys!
Oh, and addict... a few more rules...
- Tits will receive no strokes and no bpm increase during this set.
- Start at 30 bpm. Your maximum speed is 70 bpm.
- If you're not hard when presented with a tight fuckable ass, you will close your eyes, and focus on getting hard.
Oh, my, addict *bites lip*. You look... different today~
Different in a good way. I love seeing you hard, babe!
Here, stroke for my tits, babe! And Fatts, edge for them!
Just for this image, lick me, addict! Not you, Fatts, you greedy asshole! Addict. Lick. Me. Stroke at 30 bpm for this image while you pleasure me. Make that cock throb.
Good boy... you know, you should be like this more often.
Hard. Assertive. Be less of a subby beta. Prove you're a real man, huh?
Say it. "I'll be a real man from now on!". Good boy.
It makes me so happy to see you this way, addict. Fatts, come and lick my pussy every image from now on!
K-Kiss me, addict!
Oh god, Sunny was right, you're such a good kisser! More!
Fuck... that was amazing... thank you... both of you... You can stop licking now, Fatts...
Note: You don't need to stroke for this, just read.
Welcome back, boys. I believe today was a good training day, right?
By the look in your eyes, addict, I believe that's true~
Congratulations, both of you, but especially you, addict, for finally surpassing your beta status.
I knew you could do it... This was part of my plan all along.
We made you both a true ass slave and a real man, two birds with one stone!
Now, show me. Show me that hard cock. Take as much time as you need.
Lovely. I'm so proud of you, addict! It's MUCH better to have a fuckable slave than a limp dick loser, am I right?
You can leave now, Fatts. Thank you for all the help, though you didn't really do much... anyway, I gotta inspect addict's dick properly~
NEW RULES FOR ADDICT:
- Asses now receive +20 strokes instead.
- No more stroking for feet. You're not a beta anymore.
- No more subby beta attitude. Prove you're a real man, or we'll fuck someone else.
Now go ahead and thank Sunny for turning you into a real man, addict...
You know, I was originally going to write myself more submissive... but, your words this morning kind of inspired me, so I decided to be a bit less of a beta in this one . One thing led to another... and I was a full blown alpha by the end of it
Well, you were right, my new favourite set . I had a wonderful time . I just hope I remember everything that happened during this set
Nancy: Can *I* be your EXTREMELY hot and MUCH YOUNGER second wife and step mom to Addict?
Interesting proposition. I'm all up for it
Nancy: Fatts and I are both sort of fond of me calling you "sweetie"—as its an informal term of personal endearment ... and my heart tingles a little bit every time I call you that—because it reminds me of how much I like you, Addict ..
I'm all up for this too
Oh, nothing Fatts—nothing ... Addict was just asking me about American baseball and why all the hot girls seem to root for the New York Yankees:
Nancy cums.
I... I MADE NANCY CUM???
Nancy: And EVERYONE was pissed and upset about it ...
Nancy: ... until a GALLANT young hero named "Nile Red"—who is the HOTTEST Canadian YouTuber Chemist ALIVE! —UNDID this great injustice ...
You know, my erections are kinda random, sometimes when I'm really horny... I think it's safe to say this was a random one . I DON'T get aroused by Nancy talking about knives
Fatts & Nancy together: We LOVE YOU, ADDICT!
Nancy: ... the Red Fox!
THANK YOU SO MUCH, NANCY!!!!
I'm just going to stop quoting now and give you some feedback on the big Michelle encounter. I just honestly loved (almost) the full encounter. I loved when Michelle went all crazy on me for not edging/cumming in the maze. I got the hardest I've ever gotten in years when she made me stroke slow for her. Just so you know, slower strokes tend to get me harder, though it's totally fine to make me stroke faster during more "intense" parts.
I think the male moaning was a bit much . You never told me to turn it off, so I just kept it on for the whole set . It was very lame to hear a man moan while Michelle was sucking "my" dick
Fast forward to when she was realizing I was never actually just holding back, I simply couldn't cum... I was having such a lovely time with her, then her pressing her tits in my face, that was SO good ... then she called me a beta, and... old me would've probably gotten so horny for that... but not anymore... new me would've been on those tits immediately. I just kinda read through her stuff, and was thinking "she's just going to leave soon, whatever..." (love the random ass slave references, by the way )
... then... she... touched me... I was immediately sucked back in... that was one of the best moments in recent times for me Then I even fucked her, like WOW, what did I do to deserve such a thing? Thanks for not making me cum for her than her being like "what the fuck, I knew it!", though it could've been that I just needed the touch of a woman .
Call me any time you need me, Red Fox! If you or the other maze girls ever need a couple cookies, I have a LOT of them
I loved feeling like a real switch in this one . Just didn't really enjoy being insulted by Red Fox all that much towards the end. As I said, that's not me anymore. I would've loved the transition from her being all mean and wanting to kill me, to her being apologetic, and finally getting to fuck her. The in-between section was kinda eh, but that's not your fault, as I said, I was liking those things back then. I LOVED the section where she was being rougher with all of us, but without being degrading. I think that's what it means to be a real switch. You don't mind being dominated now and then, but you don't enjoy being someone's punching bag either. I'm finally starting to realize all of this
... you wrote this all... before I even told you I'm done with humiliation? ... Thanks man #nohomo
Her transparent lingerie was a bull's eye for the story (only a ponytail missing from her for the most effect on me )
I really liked the selected PMVs. The ones with the girls with glasses and the stamina trainer as well, that I just watched with my non stroking rule from GCCG.
I definitely come back in September for a replay, when I can edge for each video, so the current 74 edge score peak will definitely fall
Felt like I should provide a little update on myself! 
I feel like I have been ALL OVER THE PLACE these past few weeks! 
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... NORMALLY I am into writing feedback this long, but ... I SUPER requested this set, and REALLY got into the story, so ... it's just a fire hose of text 
I want him looking at all of those sexy asses, but he’s only allowed to cum to mine while he’s at a slave Boot Camp! 
But I really, REALLY want a set from you where Caprice is running "Ass Slave Boot Camp" and it's me and you attending it together! 
It blew my mind that I had even come up with such a CRAZY idea ... it set records ... it had NEVER been done before—nor will it EVER be done again, and most likely will be a record holder for a LONG ass time 
I thought we had similar taste… She is not who I would’ve picked… So it’s interesting to me that you are considering her…
I’m so happy for you. 
I get it. You were writing the tease, and you were nearly done… And you had already found all of your photographic material… And usually I find my photos Ahead of time and then go from there… So I totally get how it can be inconvenient and throw a wrench into your process to have to go and find another photo randomly in the middle… And then just finding the right one probably take you five or eight minutes, but that’s the kind of thing that can take a set from great to amazing. And it was so Plot important, then there was a moment where I was just like “hey… I’m just gonna go find this photo myself, because that’s what I need to completely immerse myself in this story …“ But I was pretty aroused at that point, and I knew that if I went off on that search, that would’ve completely shattered the momentum of the set… That was really the only thing you missed set writing wise. 
IF you try and fail enough times, my dirty blonde challenger, I WILL allow Nancy to give you some EXPERT advice on how to beat me 
Photos of favorites CAN be used IF they are "single photos." No "scenes" or more than one photo of a "favorite" in a single set ... PLEASE 
...) the GALLERIES you picked told the right story, so ... for narrative purposes—full marks 
We are NOT STARTING A THROUPLE WITH ELFO!
[Increase your metronome by 60 bpm and open the next spoiler.]
