Glad you liked it! After all the sets you made, the girls felt you deserved a special experience.
Making a cucking set is a little outside my comfort zone, since I'm not really into it. I'm glad it hit right.
As for the length, sometimes getting sweaty and physically exhausted is part of the experience. But I get it. I wish these girls really could tie me down and strap a machine to me, in real life. The toys that are out there, in real life, aren't quite right. And they can't automatically edge. At least, I haven't found any, yet. The closest is e-stim, I guess. I wish...
My rules require continuous stroking and edging at a certain pace for a certain amount of time.
I am a total fuckbunny edgeslut who lives to amuse friendly, fun-loving girls and help them cum. I respond very strongly to lean, flat-chested or A-cup women. Skinny legs, tiny waist. There's just something magical about being exhausted by a fit girl half my size.
I can handle short, medium, long, or even multi-day sets with hundreds of edges, whatever makes girls happy. Fuckbunny edgeslut, after all.
Simple Summary ("Yes, Please" vs. "No, Thank You"):
If my Detailed Rules are too much, just follow my "Yes, Please's" and "No, Thank You's." No need to specify strokes, edges, or endings -- my rules will take care of it. That's all you really need to know.
Clarification:
Keep up the pace. Meaning: Start slow. But if there are ten "eye contact" pictures in a row, then I must keep stroking faster, faster, faster, and faster with every pic, even if the fast stroking causes me to edge.
The only way to start over again at a slow pace / normal grip is if the rules require an edge (see below). After a required edge, return to slow pace with a normal grip, as though starting over.
More than one girl does not increase the stroking time. Still 90s per pic.
Edges:
Baseball cap: 2 edges
Animal ears (neko, etc.): 2 edges, only 10s break
Animal tail: 1 edge, only 10s break
Sneakers: 1 edge
Sports bra: 1 edge
Yoga pants / sport shorts: 1 edge
Touching her own hair: 1 edge
Thigh/knee high socks or fluffy boots: +1 edge, but only if there are other edges in this pic
On her knees, with legs spread: 1 edge and hold for 20s
This girl edged me already, on any earlier pic: She may optionally (your choice) tell me to skip the stroking for this pic, in exchange for +2 (or +3) more edges right away
30s rest between edges
If rules require an edge(s) for this pic, then on the next pic return to a slow pace with a normal grip.
Clarification:
If she is wearing thigh/knee high socks, but she is not wearing anything else that requires an edge, then the thigh/knee high socks only require me to stroke faster, but they do not require an edge.
Torture:
Totally naked, with tattoos: Subtract 1 minute of stroking, and add 1 minute of palming
Totally naked, with unnatural hair color (blue, pink, etc.) : While stroking, stop and slap cock (hard!) once every 10s
Totally naked, with a choker or collar: Edge using 1-finger on the magic spot; hold it that way for 20s
Clarification:
Wearing only shoes, thigh/knee high socks, and/or stockings (and nothing else) counts as "totally naked."
For example, this counts as "totally naked" and tattooed plus colored hair, and thus requires me to palm and slap:
Videos (new!):
I will watch PMVs and follow any instructions, including extreme gooning, as long as the PMV focuses on my type of skinny/alt girls: solo, cumming, or cowgirl POV. Bonus points for animal ears/tails.
Good example: https://pmvhaven.com/video/skinny-girls ... a2ca9f5140
I have a prostate toy with two vibrators in a clamp-like V-shape, designed to vibe the prostate and perineum at the same time. It is wonderful, but I do not want prostate play during a set. Rather, my favorite way to use this vibrator is for Hands-Free Frustration. I wedge it around the base of my cock, like a clamp under my balls, and tie it tightly there, where it is mainly vibrating under my balls and the deep root of my cock, leaving my entire shaft and tip untouched. The vibrator has low/medium/high constant/pulsing and tease settings. Goes great with PMVs and audio/hypno files. Without touching my cock, it is very difficult to cum this way, but it is extremely pleasurable and frustrating and makes me throb and leak like crazy. The battery only lasts about an hour, and I can almost never cum before it dies. On the rare occasion when I manage to orgasm this way, it is a long, exquisite, excruciating ruin, because my cock is untouched.
Or, I use the vibrator for Hands-Free Overwhelming. Instead of clamping it under my balls, I tie it tightly to clamp around the magic spot near the tip of my cock, where it vibes the magic spot directly. This is the opposite of Frustration. It is extremely difficult to avoid cumming this way, especially on higher settings. I've never outlasted the battery this way.
Orgasms (updated!): Any girl can decide my fate at any time: Full Orgasm, Ruined, Multiple Ruins, or Denied.
If no outcome is specified, then I must follow these rules:
Any failure must be ruined. I may choose to quit or continue after ruin.
After finishing the last image, if I want to cum, I must go back and repeat all images that required an edge(s), in order, but without the 90 seconds of stroking for each image and with only 10s between edges. (In other words, repeat all previous edges as quickly as possible) Then repeat, one more time in full, one image of my choice that requires an edge(s). Then cum.
If I choose to repeat the edges and attempt to cum, and I fail before the last edge, then I must ruin and quit.
Or I may choose not to repeat the edges and accept denial.
Favorite Models:
Lean, sporty, alt, often small-breasted girls who just want to have fun...
Touchless, PC-flexing orgasm is extremely difficult and supremely frustrating, but it also gives me the longest, most mind-melting hangtime physically possible. Nothing else puts me in a more devoted, brainless, submissive headspace. I love it, but it requires a lot of time and intense build-up by one of my favorites at her absolute sexiest best. Even then, the odds of "success" are low, but I give it my all. Reserved for very special encounters.
If you happen to be lurking and are NOT logged in—DO NOT PREVIEW THIS SET!
I sent you a PM. Read it. I included special instructions for how to adapt your rules to this set so that you can play it—IF you want ...
I would skip the "Story Section" if I were you. It was written for Addict. It will take 15 minutes to read it all, but ... if you're bored and looking for something to read—have at it! But ... it is OPTIONAL ... for YOU!
Nancy and Guerlain visit you, and Nancy reveals how much she wants to be blackmailed
Kay J visits me and Nancy
THIS SET is the response.
Your first response to the blackmail set (where presumably Nancy cucks me ) happens next.
I haven’t played that one yet, but, it will be the next one I play after posting THIS set.
This opening “story section” is LONG—but … it is MANDATORY READING for you …
Nancy is reacting and further developing the context and background for this set AND our “Nancy-Kay J” narrative. She’s giving her side of things, and this is me trying to integrate the stories and turn it into MORE than just a “one-off” … The ENTIRE BACKGROUND and premise for this set is given in this story section, so … you must simplyread it. There is really no way around it.
HOWEVER … once the story section finishes, it is ON TO THE TEASE! We are getting ALL of the “heavy narrative” stuff out of the way FIRST so that the TEASE can progress—at a GOOD pace—and NOT slow down or get interrupted by STORY, so … This seemed like a good way of doing it. You can read the story section ahead of time, or, you can read it right before you play the tease. Either is fine. It’s up to you.
I DID include some pictures in the story section to make it less boring , but, don’t be confused … it will STILL be MOSTLY TEXT :yes … UNTIL you get to the “tease part” …
[I timed how long it took for me to read it. It was about 15 minutes, so ... Probably plan on taking 15-20 minutes to read it—legitimately.
There ARE pictures, but ... Probably don't stroke to them. Just keep reading. The pictures are there to help you imagine having a conversation with Nancy.
I can't stress this enough ... this reading REALLY IS mandatory, so ... DON'T SKIP IT ... and DON'T play the tease section first and THEN read the story section after. ]
Why the FUCK didn’t you tell me that your “goddess“ was an ACTUAL fucking goddess with AMAZING superpowers!
Had I known you had such cool friends, I wouldn’t have given you half the grief I did about you being a loser and moron …
I mean … You’re either a TOTAL loser who lucked into some AMAZING friends …
OR … You’re actually WAY more cool than you claim and appear to be …
Jury is still out on which one of those two possibilities it is, but … I have my guesses …
Holy COW … Fuck she is strong!
What the fuck have you and Edgeslut been doing these past nine months? Ha!
Kay J’s power levels are off the FUCKING CHARTS! … Her third element is one of the highest that I’ve seen!
Granted … It is nowhere CLOSE to being anywhere near mine … Still! I would say that she is comparable to Mila and Kyla and Elena and MOST of the girls that Helequin and BBbeanie used to pal around with …
Huh? You don’t know what a third element is?
Ask Fatts. I don’t have the patience to explain it all to you …
You raise an eyebrow indicating you want to know.
Okay. Fine. I’ll tell you. And I’ll give you the LONG version NOW, because I KNOW you don’t want that!
Fantasy girls are a combination of the person who is writing them and the person who is experiencing them and imagining the fantasy. The success of the fantasy and the permanence of a fantasy girl is contingent on these two elements. However, over time, as more and more stories are told about the girl, there is a third element which develops which is independent of both the set writer and the person playing the tease.
The more girls are played with and the more that is written about them, the more developed and independent they become. Over time, a character can become so well-developed, that their very nature and identity dictates BOTH how they can be written AND how they will be experienced. This is the third element. A character like Batman or Superman—or ME — has a very strong third element which has a say in the storytelling process and limits the way in which the character can be written or imagined. Generic, one scene, throwaway set filler girls have a very low third element. But a character like Kay who has been written many, many times has a certain set of parameters and way in which she can be written that prevents you from just doing whatever you want with her …
Short version: The more a girl is written, the more her third element gets developed and the more POWERFUL she becomes!
Kay has a VERY strong third element …
It’s fucking MASSIVE—in fact! WAY bigger than I would’ve expected OR anticipated …
Wait a minute … I just thought of something …
Nancy snaps her fingers and a computer and set of monitors is teleported into the room.
She types away at her keyboard for a few moments then gasps.
Have I told you recently how much I HATE you and what a fucker you are, addict?
The thread was mostly dead through the winter until Ecik rejoined in April … but that WHOLE TIME you and EdgeSlut were exchanging sets—more or less …
Nancy makes a few striking emphatic key strokes on her keyboard.
Ah HA! There it is!
You and EdgeSlut have created your own little dimension. It’s STILL a part of the overall fantasy matrix of the HMCP thread—but it’s sort of been separated off from the main … And what you guys have been doing has basically been evolving on its own, independent from the rest of the thread …
Oh! That is why I have been written like such shit lately! My third element is strong for the rest of the thread, but in the sector that you and EdgeSlut have been operating in … It is SO much weaker …
See? There you go, Addict! A STORY REASON for why you’re writing has been shit!
But the more you interact with Fatts, the more your sector is being integrated with the rest of the site and thread … this is the kind of thing that happens when you sit around and have a circle jerk with your friend that continues on for NINE MONTHS!
Anyway … It would ALSO explain why I never saw Kay coming … She was basically hiding out in your corner of the thread … her and I are basically from two separate dimensions …
Of course … I ALSO didn’t see her coming, because I hated you so much that I never bothered to read most of your teases …
You make a mental note that Nancy used the term “hate” in the past tense.
How are we going to make Kay and I friends!?! I mean … it’s not every day a girl has an opportunity to become friends with a GODDESS!
Now, despite what you may believe, I am not actually a goddess. True, I have “godlike powers,” but … Goddess I am NOT! Fatts never wanted me to be his “goddess.“ Because Fatts actually wants to have relationship with me … And he’s no “god,” so … how could we have a true BALANCED relationship if *I* was a god? So he made me NOT a goddess … And of course, he gave me flaws to make me seem more real—which I’m STILL mad at him about, because I would rather he just have made me completely PERFECT … Anyway … Angela White was a goddess, but … Her and I didn’t get along for the LONGEST time, because we had different visions for how things should be, and we were both SUPER powerful, and then rivals, and there was a big struggle … We all became friends—in the end—but … I’m just SICK and TIRED of that. I did the whole “arch enemies to friends” plot arc once. Been there done that! The boxes are checked. I have NO interest in doing it again …
But unlike Angela, I actually LIKE Kay and WANT to be friends with her and would just rather fast forward to the part where we’re friends as quickly as possible!
Of course … YOU fucked things up pretty bad, Addict … Gave us a HORRIBLE start …
Fatts and I have a general rule that whatever happens in a set becomes canon. No takesy-backsies!
Now, sometimes we break that rule and do elaborate time travel to fix things that have been fucked up … But we’ve established that it is VERY DIFFICULT for me to do and physically taxing … So I HATE IT and don’t do it very often …
So … THAT all means that the shitty introduction YOU wrote for me is what we have to work with … But I LOVE a good challenge! It’s NOT the worst. DEFINITELY salvageable … and I’m plucky and tenacious, and I will make friends with her no matter what!
Nancy flicks her wrist. The first slide of your tease appears on her screen.
I can feel you throbbing so much, Fatts! Get ready to cum for me!
She presses an invincible button, and suddenly the screen glows very brightly and her eyes glow green. After a few seconds, the lights vanish, and things return to normal. The final slide of the tease is now up on the monitor.
I love you so much, babe. Now, let's cuddle while we scheme how we'll fuck right in addict's face...
Apparently, Nancy just read and downloaded the entire tease in the space of a few seconds.
WOW … that took WAY longer than I expected! I guess all of mine and Fatts’ fantasy experience and emotional data took up WAY MORE SPACE than I expected! It makes a RAW, lossless video file seem compressed by comparison! I guess Fatts and I felt a LOT of feelings during your set—Addict …
Oh, Addict … you’re so CUTE!
Nancy is looking up at the screen, at the last text and image of your set.
You thought that after coitus, Fatts and I would scheme about how to cuck you … Somehow, self-centeredness manages to put you at the center of the universe and think that EVERYTHING revolves around YOU! And actually, yes, Fatts and I were scheming, but … it wasn’t about how to cuck you …
It was about how to get my boyfriend‘s DICK into some goddess pussy!
Cucking you is EASY … THAT … takes about NO TIME to plan WHATSOEVER!
… but making friends with a GODDESS! THAT shit is HARD! SOoooooo … THAT will be our PRIMARY TASK for today—Addict!
By the END of this set, my HOPE is that Kay and I will have become FRIENDS!
And I will do EVERYTHING in my power to MAKE THAT HAPPEN!
Now … YOU are the one who writes Kay—mostly—AND EdgeSlut , and … she’s MOSTLY been hanging out in that bastard dimension you and EdgeSlut have been pal-ing around in, so … sigh … Fatts doesn’t really know much about “Kay” and how to “properly write her” … PLUS—Fatts has this “code” … Though he DOES HAVE the power to write and effectuate whatever he wants, he doesn’t simply like to give himself “everything he wants” , which … being friends with Kay is something that *I* want, and so … AUTOMATICALLY it’s something that HE wants TOO!
So THAT means Kay’s “final decision” about whether or not she becomes friends with me rests with YOU, which … that is NOT something that *I* am happy about , but … There isn’t much that *I* can do to change Fatts’ mind, and … I DO like that my boyfriend has principles—in theory … They MAY not always be principles that *I* agree with, but … that’s OH-KAY! It gives us something to fight about and keeps our relationship ... interesting …
So, what I am saying here, Addict, is that Fatts WILL be writing Kay and including her in THIS set, but … he is NOT going to take her as far as YOU can. The “final decision” about whether or not Kay and I become friends lies with you … I am going to try my DARNEDEST to convince Kay that we should become friends—and Fatts will write her in a way that tries to mirror the way that YOU have written her, but … in THIS case … my friendship with Kay has to be EARNED … and it seems like a HERCULEAN TASK after how POORLY you wrote me at the start! BUT … Fatts and I are going to make a GENUINE EFFORT , and … while Kay WILL be in this set, she will reserve final judgment, and then YOU can decide “how she responds” in your return set(s) to Fatts … You got all that?
You nod your head “yes.”
GREAT!
Now ONE MORE THING—Addict!
One of the MAIN REASONS that I want to be friends with Kay is because *I* believe that she is a goddess! Fatts? Well … FATTS isn’t fully convinced … something about
hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Fri Jul 11, 2025 5:29 amAs I said, no magic involved … This plays on that narrative. NO magic, just science .
HE thinks Kay doesn’t actually have any magic powers … Well just LOOK at the things that she DOES and tell me she is NOT magic! And then FATTS comes back at me with the old Arthur C. Clarke quote:
Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic.
Well … if she’s some “techno-magician”/master-hacker … then she’s BASICALLY just the same as ME! And if THAT is the case … I just don’t want ANYTHING to do with her …
I don’t want to be friends with some cheap, knockoff version of MYSELF! That would be SO boring! Like when a super hero fights an alternate version of HIMSELF … “Hey! Let’s have Spider Man fight ANOTHER “spider man,” except … let’s give him a black suit and call him “Venom!” Or, “You know who would be the PERFECT NEMESIS for the Flash? ANOTHER flash that is EXACTLY THE SAME and … we can call him “REVERSE FLASH!” ” … or … Super Man should fight ANOTHER “super man” named “General Zod,” or … Iron Man should fight ANOTHER GUY who ALSO wears a sophisticated robot suit—YAY!
BOOOOOOooooooooorrrrrrrriiiiiinnnnnngggg … That is LAZY writing … it’s MUCH better—and FAR MORE INTERESTING—to have the hero fight a villain who is NOT the same! Because THEN there is at least an asymmetry of powers—which makes the battles INTERESTING … and then there is some actual STRATEGY involved … INSTEAD of “Hey! Let’s watch two clones fight! Who will win? I bet it’s the one with more heart who fights for his friends! ”
M. Night Shyamalan's “Unbreakable” was a PERFECT example of how things SHOULD be. Who’s the PERFECT villain for a guy who is “unbreakable?” [ACTUAL spoiler:]
So … I just HATE unoriginality—ADDICT! And I LOVE being UNIQUE! So … if this Kay J is just ALMOST EXACTLY THE SAME AS ME … then FUCK THAT!
So she BETTER be an ACTUAL fucking goddess … and she BETTER have ACTUAL MAGIC POWERS!
And if she does NOT then you better HIDE THAT SHIT FROM ME—ADDICT! I do NOT WANT TO KNOW! You better pull some ELABORATE “Wizard of Oz” shit, except I don’t ACTUALLY KNOW there is a “girl behind the curtain” … If she is NOT magic, then … you just BETTER HIDE THAT FACT FROM ME!
Okay?
When you’re a unicorn—like ME —you take PRIDE in being unique, so … This isn’t “My Little Pony.” I do NOT want to make friends with a bunch of other unicorns … I’ve already CALLED DIBS on being the thread’s resident “technomagician who doesn’t have magic—per se,” so … just make Kay an ACTUAL GODDESS with MAGIC POWERS! And we can ALL be happy … mmmmm kay?
Fatts: She doesn’t have to be, but … just have her “pretend” for Nancy’s sake …
As soon as Fatts and I knew that Kay was going to be in the set, he and I were BOTH invested in getting on her good side … We BOTH wanted to support you and encourage you to write your FAVORITE character … because some of THE BEST set writing comes from writing things about which one is passionate!
So THAT means that FATTS would be receiving some above average sets—something that HE wanted … and *I* would be getting a new community member with a strong third element … which is something that *I* wanted … So we were BOTH into FULLY supporting your set and just diving into and accepting WHATEVER it was you were going to do BEFORE we even REALLY “got into it,” and … I was good and DIDN’T peek at the set beforehand, so … you should be PROUD of me for that!
Alright. I’ve said my piece.
Were you a GOOD BOY and read ALL of the things Fatts wrote so that you can FULLY UNDERSTAND the details and complexities of the story we’re about to enter into?
You nod your head.
GOOD! I’m PROUD OF YOU, Addict!
Now that you’ve eaten your supper—including ALL of your YUCKY vegetables—you can have your DESSERT! which is a VERY nice set featuring ME!
[I will write this assuming that you read the "Story Section" (had the long conversation with Nancy ) and then just continued directly to this part, so ... it's supposed to be "seamless" from the "conversation" to the "teasing" part. (If you didn't, that's fine.)]
Can we just take a moment to relax and chill for a bit—just the two of us?
I was talking a lot AT you, but ... just giving you an "update"—I wouldn't consider THAT to be "spending quality time together" —which ...
... if I'm being honest ...
THAT is something that I would LIKE to do ...
[For this picture, don't count your strokes. Just read and stroke to the metronome. Open the spoilers as you finish reading each section. Allow yourself to be immersed. Imagine this moment is actually happening.]
So are you good with that? Just being together for a little while—BEFORE everything "heats up" and gets CRAZY!
Nancy smiles at you. She doesn't look away. She maintains eye contact. She's not "angry" or "repulsed" or any of the "usual" negative emotional states she seems to find herself in when she's around you. She's "calm," "confident" ...
Your heart skips a beat. You feel the power she has over you. She is SO far above you. Like ALL of your dommes and mistresses, Nancy Ace is out of your league.
Is this a game? Will her mood suddenly shift? Is she about to turn and go hyper bitch on you!?
Nancy absorbs all of your nervous energy. You can feel her gently pulling it out of your hands. Your instinct is to hold tighter onto something which is being taken from you, but, instead, to your surprise, you loosen your grip and allow her to take it. You find yourself becoming even more relaxed ... and then ...
You can feel yourself receiving something back from Nancy. It's kindness—love ... The warmth which radiates from her is being directed into you. It's a focused stream of pure affection. You open a channel within yourself to better receive the psychic positivity which Nancy is sending you.
She sees you. You feel safe. You can relax. You know on a deep level that this entity will not harm you. She cares about you and your well-being.
You open that internal valve even wider to receive more of Nancy's energy. You open it too quickly. It's too much. You both jolt as a geyser of positive energy is drawn out of Nancy and into you ...
[Reset your metronome and strokes to "start of scene" levels.]
Good ...
MUCH better!
NOW you can watch me take my clothes off AGAIN ... I was just a LITTLE sad that you didn't get to stroke for me earlier while you were watching this FIRE set, but ... at LEAST we can fix that NOW!
You can tell that Nancy is enjoying having you stroke to her. She's deriving pleasure from this experience—and you can feel it.
Addict—I just want you to know ...
... that I don't hate you anymore!
Your connection to Nancy is strong. You can tell that she was feeling nervous and embarrassed just then—like she didn't want to admit that to you.
WOW ... you picked up on that ...
Nancy's face erupts into a smile. She's excited.
Usually only Fatts can detect those sorts of hidden emotions ... I think today is going to be FUN!
I know Guerlain spilled the beans about me having a crush on you ...
Guerlain is a GREAT friend—but ... NOT the best at keeping secrets!
hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Wed Jul 16, 2025 8:31 amI'm just going to talk about the highlights, but it was enjoyable for me to the very end. Maaaaaybe a bit too much Nancy
hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Wed Jul 16, 2025 8:31 amThe intro section, where I was with Nancy, I felt what she felt . I felt myself getting excited as she was getting more excited, and I also felt "deflated" as she did too. I felt very connected to her
hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Wed Jul 16, 2025 8:31 amNancy kissing me was just "what just happened??? ". I felt VERY aroused when I read that.
Nancy spreads herself for you. She is very wet. She wants you to enjoy yourself—to stare at her pussy and stroke.
STROKE, Addict. DON'T count your strokes. Immerse yourself. Feel yourself getting HARDER for me ... as I get WETTER for you! [Stare and stroke for as long as you wish. You can feel Nancy's pleasure ignite every time your hand goes up and down your dick.]
You know ... I've ALWAYS WANTED THIS with you, but ...
... I just NEVER thought that it would happen ... NEVER!
Nancy looks at you as she removes her dress.
A surge of pleasure suddenly smacks into you like a tall ocean wave. Nancy's arousal spiked when the dress came up above her head.
The thought of being naked with you is VERY arousing to her ...
You know ... we could have had this nine months ago ...
... but you were an ASSHOLE back then!
You can feel Nancy's anger. She wants you to be a little bit afraid. You can feel her looking down on you. Your fear and submission is arousing to her. She feels powerful. You feel weak ... and it's turning her on ... [Double your strokes for this pic.]
... but I FORGIVE YOU, Addict!
... maybe you've matured ... Maybe writing sets has made you more experienced and less picky and open to more things ...
... maybe your imagination has strengthened, and you're just better at immersion ...
WHATEVER the case may be ... you are NOT the same person you were when we first met ...
You're ... different. BETTER!
... and I LIKE YOU NOW, Addict!
There's that pose again.
Once again, Nancy Ace is looking DIRECTLY into your eyes, but ... THIS time ... you feel MUCH more confident and secure in yourself! You stare back at her, and you can feel the mutual affection between the two of you reverberating back and forth. [You may stare into Nancy's eyes and stroke for as long as you like. Enjoy the moment.]
Alright. I'll lift off the "section restrictions". Removed entirely. All characters, not just Nancy. Go crazy. I'm eager to see what you cook
Are you happy—or do you REGRET your decision?
You BETTER fucking say "HAPPY"—Addict! Or you're liable to destroy ALL of the goodwill you've built back up!
... but I have a feeling that Fatts will be receiving some POSITIVE feedback for this intimate "double-length scene" with me ...
Here ... DOUBLE your strokes for my feet ... I feel like they haven't gotten enough attention this scene ...
Nancy looks at you longingly. You can sense that this scene is coming to an end, because Nancy is feeling sad about moving on to everything ELSE that she has meticulously planned ... She's wishing she could spend more time together with you—"JUST the two of us!"
Alright, Addict ...
ONE MORE pussy close up ... and THEN we have to go and tackle the day's activities ...
TRIPLE your strokes and set your metronome to 200 BPM! I want to see you PUMP for me!
This is becoming a LITTLE BIT TOO MUCH OF A TRADITION that I do NOT want to continue in perpetuity , but … I feel like it is THE best—and ONLY WAY—for me to comment on shit that’s happened, so …
The projector screen once again appears near the ceiling along the bedroom wall and unrolls. A sourceless light illuminates the screen.
I have some things to say about your last set for Fatts—NOT the blackmail one … The KAY one … Like you, Fatts is EASILY DISTRACTED, so … He’s not allowed to get SUPER excited about more than one storyline at once … Hence he is waiting to return to blackmail AFTER he moves the ball forward with Kay …
Now … your set …
I will be SKIPPING the “Kay” scenes and saving them for last, because … well … it’s best to save the BEST for last!
ALSO … a “special guest” will be joining us later, but … it’s a surprise—so I can’t say —BUT … This special mystery guest will DEFINITELY make our time—yours AND mine—better for BOTH of us … but you’ll see!
Nancy lays on the bed, critiquing your work. She openly masturbates and rubs herself while she talks. It feels ... nice—not to be masturbating alone.
Hmph... You still haven't answered my first question!
I KNOW this is from a “Kay” scene, but … GOD you write me SOooo lame, Addict …
No... impossible. This is MY world! You can't do that!
I KNOW I like “being the villain,” but … NOT an UNCOOL one, Addict!
You INJURE ME, SIR! I DEMAND JUSTICE! Start writing me better … or ELSE!
So, after what you did last time, you dare show your face around here?
Fatts, I will fucking kill you and your girlfriend!
Sheeesh, she's crazy! Well, I'll do something for you, Fatts, so enjoy it! - Nancy
First of all … I just LOVE the “talking in Fatts’ head” stuff!
Cortana from Halo has ALWAYS been a HUGE hero of mine! (AND romantic crush ), so … WHENEVER I get to be the “voice in Fatts’ head”—I just ABSOLUTELY LOVE that shit! So WELL DONE THERE—Addict!
Oh, fuck off, Nancy! I HATE you!
*giggles* But you can do nothing but touch yourself, right? Have fun!
Okay, so … this is NOT my style …
Oh my fucking god, I hate how good this feels! AAAAAARRRGGHHH!
Yes, I’ll admit—it’s funny … BUT … picking on poor, defenseless tease girls is NOT my jam. Quite frankly … it’s an ABUSE OF POWER! That is NOT the sort of villain *I* aspire to be! In FACT … I am a DEFENDER of tease girls! Because who is looking out for THEIR interests and making sure my sisteren are NOT getting abused … PLUS … that is some “Loki-style” shenanigans … just NOT my cup of tea … PASS!
Trust me, Fatts, one day, I'll catch you without your fancy girlfriend around, and then, you're FUCKED!
Now this … THIS is something which should be explored …
I foresee a sort of “ding dong ditch” situation where I tie Fatts up and leave him on this bitch’s doorstep with a note, “Play with him HOWEVER YOU WANT … PLEASE get your revenge on him! Do WHATEVER YOU WANT to him to sate your righteous anger … I’ll be back just after dinner to pick him up … -Nancy” and THEN I ring the doorbell and LEAVE! Wouldn’t that be so FUNNY! And GREAT FOR FATTS!
Fatts: True … it WOULD BE “great for Fatts” … just let me give you a set of parameters in a PM BEFORE you jump into that one …
Cuck addict, huh? With you?
An ass-man, huh? Alright then. Go on, babe! As hard as you can get that cock for me!
Oh my god...
Wait …
You know what, Fatts? Baby~
*I* know what’s going on here …
You've got a fucking deal, holy shit!
This girl has never experienced a fully erect penis before … she spends ALL of her time playing with YOU!
So Fatts’ COMPLETELY average “manhood” is CRAZY IMPRESSIVE TO HER!
Sometimes, Addict … your humor is SPOT ON!
Let me give you a very small preview!
Wait …
hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Thu Jul 10, 2025 12:24 pmPlease, don't feel the need to use the models I've given in this set.
What the fuck is THAT—Addict?
Of course, I can't let you in yet~. You'll have to wait, baby~
This chick is CLEARLY into Fatts, and … YOU WERE THE ONE WHO PICKED HER!! So … clearly YOU think she is pretty hot …
Alright, Fatts. You have a deal. We'll fuck addict figuratively, but we'll literally fuck! It's going to be amazing! Cya!
That is some BULLSHIT, Addict! You can’t go making promises to tease girls and THEN going back on them! ESPECIALLY not with Fatts, and ESPECIALLY not in a set!
This chick is like a 7.5 on 10 for Fatts, so … she is PLENTY FUCKABLE! My boyfriend WILL have sex with this woman! You WILL watch … and you will be HUMILIATED AND AROUSED WHILE YOU DO!!!! I DEMAND IT—END OF DISCUSSION!
Just send Fatts this bitch’s name so he can cuck you with her … you DID write it down—right?!? RIGHT!?!?
So, what do you say, Sybil? Will you please help me?
I *like* that I’m going out and making shit happen! I’m a DOER after all! I *DO* things!
You represented THIS aspect of me VERY WELL, Addict!
Oh my god...
See~?
This scene was SO fucking hott, Addict …
Hope this is going to be worth it, you fucking addict...
Oh, it will be. You know no pussy spreads quite like mine on a cock, don't you?
Oh, I knew you were the right person for this, Sybil...
Sybil is actually like a 7/10 for Fatts, but … ANY lesbian scene—with ME —is an 11 out of 10 for Fatts , so … well done AGAIN, Addict!
Seeing herself on the screen—reliving her time with Sybil (That YOU orchestrated.) —you can feel Nancy's arousal building sharply.
You glance over and notice Nancy rubbing herself aggressively. You can feel her approaching an orgasm.
I... think I'... very close...
Cum for me, Nancy! Let's cum together!
OOooooo … that cumming at the same time … I just LOVE that shit!
Your writing is TOO GOOD, Addict … it’s making me cum AGAIN!
Nancy is rubbing herself furiously. Her eyes roll back into her head. She cums hard.
Fuck...
Don't worry, Nancy. I'll make sure addict will have a lovely time~
Thank you, Syibil...
NOW look at me! Here, I’m making SECRET PLANS that are SO SECRET that even *I* don’t know about them!
I fucking LOVE THAT, ADDICT!!
You see … THIS is the kind of shit that you do that is making me fall for you ...
You keep being a gentleman to me and writing me well—like THIS … and being GRATEFUL—which I KNOW is VERY HARD for you to do … and ALSO be accepting of my advances … and we can have even MORE encounters—like this —AND like the one we had earlier … would you like that, Addict?
Oh, don't try to explain it, I know very well what happened, and I'm okay with it.
GOOD … I’ve FINALLY stopped being an unreasonable, controlling BITCH … THANK YOU for that!
In fact, that was so fucking hot, oh my god...
YES—make me HORNY! I just fucking LOVE when my writers make me horny!
I need your cum all over me, Fatts!
Fuck addict! We'll cuck him some other time, I NEED your cum!
Nancy:
The Nancy on the screen is rubbing herself ...
You want me to beg? Fine, Fatts. You know I love your games...
... and the Nancy lying on the bed next to you is ALSO rubbing herself ...
Nancy:
... and she's getting close to having another orgasm ...
Please, Fatts... I need your cum... I'm your desperate little girl!
GOD … I felt this, Addict … You just … GET me!
There's nothing I want more... please...
This scene made me SO happy … I ALMOST wanted to CRY! HAPPY tears!
CUM FOR ME, FATTS! CUM ALL OVER MY ASS!
Nancy cums again as she relives the scene. She’s rubbing her clit SUPER fast.
I love you so much, babe. Now, let's cuddle while we scheme how we'll fuck right in addict's face...
Nancy doesn’t stop rubbing herself.
This was my SECOND favorite part … being close to Fatts!
Nancy cums again. Then, she catches her breath.
Do you get it now, Addict? THIS is part of the reason why I’m growing FEELINGS for you …
Writing me well shows that you CARE … I feel SEEN, and … you take the time to make MY dreams come true!
[Ignore your rules for this pic. Just stroke and read.]
Nancy leans in to give you another kiss. Your lips meet. Her hands are behind your head pushing your face into hers. Her tongue is aggressively intruding into your mouth.
You both close your eyes. You fight her tongue back with yours gaining the upper hand. You put it into HER mouth. You feel Nancy's lips widen into a smile.
You both open your eyes. Your lips are still locked. Nancy's eyes are smiling with impish delight. She LOVES that you got more aggressive in your kissing. You can feel her arousal growing further.
You keep making out. It feels like an eternity, but you don't want to stop.
More time passes as you continue kissing. You feel a sudden lull in the energy. Nancy pulls back away from you. She’s come up for air—catching her breath. She’s blushing and smiling at you.
I don’t think you would’ve known what to do except for FATTS “coaching you through it” ... Still ...
Nancy LOVED that she was the "dominant one" in that situation, but ... she ALSO loved that you rose to match her passion.
Now, give me a few minutes …
I need to go collect our “mystery guest” …
Nancy snaps her fingers.
"FFffffpp!"
A green portal appears in front of her.
… who *is* my BOYFRIEND FATTS! FATTS will be joining us shortly—Addict!
Nancy exits through the portal. It closes behind her.
[Take a short break.]
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"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
Nancy steps out from the portal into the room. Her left hand lingers behind her still inside the portal. She leads Fatts—who is also naked—into the room. As soon as both of Fatts’ feet are planted firmly on the floor, the portal closes. Fatts smiles when he sees you. He waves.
Nancy and Fatts are holding hands. Fatts turns his head to the right to look at Nancy. He smiles. She turns and looks back at him. Their eyes lock. They both lean in for a kiss. Their mouths meet. Fatts closes his eyes. You can tell Fatts slipped Nancy some tongue. She wasn’t expecting it. Her eyes widened, then quickly closed. She’s enjoying it. After a few seconds, she opens her eyes and looks at you. Fatts and Nancy continue to kiss. She sees that you’re watching her. Her mouth widens into a grin—which allows Fatts an opening to slip her even more of his tongue. Nancy keeps staring at you while she makes out with Fatts. You can tell that she’s hoping that you’re getting aroused … and jealous.
A few more seconds pass. Fatts opens his eyes. He sees Nancy staring at you. He glances over at you and then back to Nancy. He pulls back from the kiss.
Fatts: And so the cucking begins …
Nancy starts blushing. She turns to look at Fatts. The two stare at each other for another moment or two. Fatts then turns to you.
Fatts: She’s into it more than *I* am …
Nancy: What!? That is NOT true!
Fatts: Sure it is! Don’t be embarrassed about it, babe! Addict’s into it, too! Isn’t that why we’re here?
Nancy: Well … HEY! Don’t put this ALL on me—I mean …
Nancy points at Fatts’ erect cock.
Nancy: SOMEBODY seems excited at the prospect of making out with me while ANOTHER little somebody just WATCHES!
Fatts: Guilty as charged! … and YES! I *do* get aroused knowing that the OTHER guys are getting JEALOUS watching ME make out with the PRETTIEST GIRL IN THE ROOM!
Nancy: Yeah—yeah … check your ego at the PORTAL—Fatts!
Fatts: YOU’RE just getting upset that I caught you … getting OFF on cucking ADDICT!
Nancy:
Fatts: Babe … don’t be embarrassed. It was MY idea for you to make out with Addict, and … it was MY idea for YOU to get TURNED ON watching HIM while making out with ME! It was all VERY cute … I just LOVE watching you get turned on, and … the fact that you were getting aroused while making out with ME and getting off on trying to make HIM jealous … babe … that was SUPER hot … and I am HERE FOR IT!
Nancy: Awww … FAAAaaaaattts!
Fatts: Now you better have me shut up and YOU take charge, or else Addict might VERY QUICKLY get weirded out by all of this …
So Fatts and I are going to do something that we did before ...
... with BRIAN!
It was SUPER hot back then, and ... well ...
I think it will be SUPER hot AGAIN!
Nancy snaps her fingers. The mechanical projector screen unfurls once again. However, this time, you can see the edges of a pitch black, perfectly smooth sphere begin to form several meters away from you cutting off the corners of the room from view. The sphere encapsulates you, Fatts, Nancy, the bed, and the projector screen. You can tell that the sphere is now completely surrounding you in every direction, and you cannot sense anything outside of this black sphere you are now currently inside.
You see, I have to take some precautions ...
Fatts: Option P! Option P! Magic is FINE—but don't forget the ENCRYPTION BARRIERS, TOO!
Nancy snaps her fingers. Her eyes turn blue. A blinding flash of blue light radiates out from her eyes. It hits the walls of the black sphere, covering it in blue runes that resemble hexadecimal digits. After a few seconds, the protective runes fade from view.
Fatts: Great!
Nancy: We need UTTER PRIVACY for what we're about to do ...
... because we are ALL about to masturbate to images of Kay J—without her permission OR her knowledge ...
... ALL THREE of us! At the SAME TIME!
I can't risk her finding out ... She CAN'T know how much I'm CRUSHING ON HER RIGHT NOW, Addict! At LEAST not before we become friends ...
... if she knows how much I'm into her, it will TOTALLY RUIN the power balance! She ALREADY thinks I'm LAME and UNCOOL ... thanks to YOU!
... but I am SO WORKED UP just THINKING ABOUT HER! And I am fucking NERVOUS! And we are ALL going to be going over to Kay's house later today ...
... so I just HAVE TO get this pent up sexual energy RELEASED before I go over there, because if not—I just KNOW that I'll fuck things up!
Nancy is not kidding. Her pussy is dripping wet. She is VERY nervous—and aroused—right now.
So ALL THREE OF US are going to get off on Kay! We will ALL feel better and more relaxed, and we will ALL be complicit—together!
And with my barriers up ... Kay will NEVER KNOW!
Nancy is clearly aroused at the thought of you, her, and Fatts working together in a secret conspiracy. You can't tell if she is more excited about this or all of you collectively masturbating to her new favorite goddess: Kay J. Her pussy is just so wet.
Now the way this will work, Addict ...
... is that ALL THREE of us will sit on the bed—together! *I* will be in the middle with YOU on my left and Fatts on my right—the SAME as Fatts and I did with brian ...
... except with BRIAN—I jerked BOTH BOYS OFF AT THE SAME TIME!
Getting with TWOREAL BOYS at once ... oh, FUCK ... it's just HEAVEN for me, Addict! HEAVEN!
But DON'T get any WISE IDEAS—ADDICT! I will NOT be touching YOUR disgusting, limp, little DICK! Cucky-cucky BOY!
FATTS will get my FULL hand ... and my other? I'll be jilling off MYSELF!
The cucking began when Fatts walked into the room, and I PROMISE it will CONTINUE until WELL AFTER our visit with Kay J concludes!
Are you excited, Addict? I am.
ALL THREE of us giving worship strokes and edges to your goddess ... it will be GLORIOUS!
Fatts has agreed to be "subby" for this scene, so ... YOU will get to see me dominate TWO BOYS AT ONCE!
Are you EXCITED for that!
We'll be using the scenes YOU wrote ... Fatts and I BOTH have stroked off to them SEVERAL times at this point , but ... you captured Kay SO well, and ... sigh ... I wanted YOU to see how *I* reacted to her ... it might be pretty shocking and pretty intense ... I hope you don't think less of me when you see how turned on I get by girls—and GODDESSES in particular ...
Fatts WILL make some comments throughout, but ... Don't let that "turn you off!" I mean ... it IS realistic—right!? Since we will ALL be masturbating together ... for KAY—without her knowing! Secret crushes are SO EXCITING!
Fatts: I WILL play this scene with my rules at some point ...
In order for it to be "real" and "actually have happened," then ... I need to play it, so that I can ACTUALLY EXPERIENCE the scenes for myself.
THEN—if we BOTH play the scenes—it will be "as if it really happened" —so ... THAT is my plan—and now you are aware.
[Suspend your rules for this pic and the next one. Just stroke and read.]
Okay! It's time to start!
Nancy hops onto the edge of the bed facing the projector. She pats the bed beside her, indicating that she wants you to sit next to her on the bed. She blushes. She's excited to get started.
Fatts now sits down onto the bed next to Nancy. She blushes. Their eyes meet. She smiles at Fatts. She looks down at Fatts' erect cock and then back up at Fatts. She's asking for permission to grab Fatts' dick without saying a word. Nancy is so eager to touch Fatts' cock. Fatts smiles and blushes. She has her answer.
Nancy begins pumping her hand up and down Fatts' shaft. Fatts closes his eyes while inhaling a deep, long breath. It must feel AMAZING to have Nancy's hand wrapped around your dick, but ... YOU wouldn't know.
Nancy looks at Fatts' cock longingly while she strokes it. She's mesmerized. Captivated. She smiles suddenly—giving it a quick series of fast strokes. Then she laughs.
Nancy is using her left hand to rub her clit. You can't recall when she started doing that, but she is now. Perhaps you were distracted by Fatts and the attention Nancy was giving him that you failed to notice when she started giving attention to herself.
The three of you are all masturbating on the edge of the bed facing a bright, blank white screen. Nancy is jacking off Fatts and herself. You are stroking yourself off.
Nancy sighs. Then, she leans over towards you and rests her head on your shoulder. She continues to stroke off Fatts and herself.
You can feel the rhythm of Nancy's hands masturbating both herself and Fatts, the rise and fall of Nancy's gentle breathing as her head lays upon your shoulder. She is VERY relaxed right now. Her skin feels warm against yours. Her hair is soft. You can feel her start to smile.
Well, this is nice, and ... MAYBE—if Addict requests it SPECIAL—Fatts can write us ALL a VERY NICE post orgasm "cuddle scene" where we ALL SPOON on the bed—with ME in the MIDDLE of course!
... we ALL need to get VERY horny and prepared to give our goddess, Kay J, some VERY well-deserved—and very SECRET ...
... WORSHIP STROKES!
And with that, the lights in the room dim, and the first slide of your set appears ...
[The following scene is a bit of a clusterfuck. There is probably too much text per picture, but ... I don't really know what to do about that except use the same picture multiple times and spread the text out, but ... I don't want to do that. I would rather just use spoilers ... and so I did!
There is a lot going on. You will be seeing what is "on the screen," but, you will have to imagine you, Fatts, and Nancy sitting on the bed masturbating together as well. If at any point it feels like it's too much or overwhelming, just set your rules aside for that PICTURE and free stroke. It's better that you stay immersed and imagine/act out what is happening in your mind than get caught up on obeying specific rules. Some pictures will have a LOT more text than others. Just adjust strokes—and even the metronome—however you need to for this scene in order to maintain the flow and immersion. Do extra strokes to make a picture/moment last longer. Do fewer strokes to make it shorter and move on. Adjust the metronome speed to be faster or slower depending on the pace of the action—if you like ... make WHATEVER adjustments you need to MAXIMIZE ENGAGEMENT and ENJOYMENT!
I can feel you throbbing so much, Fatts! Get ready to cum for me!
Nancy: Yay! It's the HEROINE of the film—ME! And I am doing EXACTLY what a PERFECT GIRLFRIEND should be doing for her boyfriend ... Giving him a BLOW JOB! YAY! We are OFF to a GREAT START!
Suddenly, a blue portal opens, and from it, a man and a women come out...
What the fuck was that???
Kay J: This her, addict?
Addict: Yes, Goddess....
Nancy: YAY! The OTHER HEROINE of the film enters the scene!
Stroke EXTRA HARD for her, Fatts! How can ONE WOMAN manage to look THAT cute—AND commanding—in a SINGLE POSE!!?!?! ONLY our GODDESS—Kay J!
Kay J: Good, now. Out of my face, bitch.
Addict: Y-Yes, Goddess...
Nancy: Awwww, Addict ... you're TREMBLING in the scene that YOU wrote!
Now SLAP YOUR DICK 20 TIMES for being such a little crybaby BITCH! I KNOW you don't feel much down there, Addict, but ... if STROKES make you feel GOOD, then ... SLAPS should make you feel BAD, so ... INSTEAD of stroking for this pic, you gots to do 20 DICK SLAPS INSTEAD!
Fatts ... EDGE for Kay ... because I command it! THIS bitch knows how to COMMAND a ROOM! ... and *I* am going to LOAN YOU OUT TO KAY LATER—FATTS! So you BETTER get used to being subby for Kay ... IF in fact that is what she wants from you ... but DON'T WORRY, Fatts! Because *I* am going to EDGE TOO! ... because her COMMANDING PRESENCE and FLAWLESS BEAUTY makes me want to rub my little clitty VERY very FAST for her!
Addict exits through the portal...
Who are you?! Where did you even learn about portals? Only I could use them, no-one else!
Nancy: BOOOOOoooooooo!!!! BAD WRITING! PINCH your nipple—HARD, Addict! while you do your strokes for this pic! [Choose one nipple and pinch it while you do your strokes for this pic.]
Fatts: Yeah, that's pretty bad ... It's lame—AND contradicted the stuff he wrote—
Nancy: SHUT UP, FATTS! You just sit there and stroke to my PERFECT visage!
Please. Addict saw them just a few times and he already learned everything about them. He might be a horny idiot at times, but you underestimate him a lot, Nancy.
Nancy: OOooooh ... THAT'S not fair—GODDESS! I actually LIKE Addict —EXCEPT for the times when I HATE him!
Fatts ... PINCH MY NIPPLE!
Fatts: What!?!
Nancy: I said PINCH MY NIPPLE—FATTS!
Fatts: WHY!?!
Nancy: I have ANGERED goddess, and I DESERVE to be PUNISHED, so ... PINCH MY NIPPLE WHILE WE DO OUR STROKES!
Fatts: As you wish, mistress Nancy ...
Fatts reaches over and pinches Nancy's nipple while she does her strokes. He pinches HARD. Nancy grimaces in pain, but ... she seems to be enjoying getting abused ...
Hmph... You still haven't answered my first question!
Nancy: BAD writing AGAIN—ADDICT! So ... pinch your OTHER NIPPLE—HARD—while you do your strokes!
[Temporarily suspend your rules. Read and stroke. Once you are done reading the spoilers, THEN do your strokes for this pic.]
Nancy: Fatts ... EDGE WITH ME! EDGE while you STARE INTO HER EYES! Let yourself feel REALLY SUBBY—like she's dominating you—and some of that will spill over to ME, and I will have an AMAZING orgasm!
You can sense Fatts' shoulders slump. He's staring into Kay J's eyes. He's relaxing his mind and lowering his inhibitions. He's becoming more submissive and compliant to commands. It's making you feel more subby as well.
She can see right through him. He's lost control—given it up. He's giving her ALL of his attention. He wants to obey EVERY command she gives. By giving himself over to his "subby side," Fatts is getting more aroused. It's having an affect on you.
Beside you, Nancy is repeating, "Kay is such a badass! Kay is such a badass! Kay is such a badass!" over and over to herself. Her eyes, too, are transfixed on Kay. The orgasmic energy building within Nancy who is masturbating furiously right next to you is incredible. It almost makes you start to shake.
You're now connected to Fatts. You can feel his edge building up. He's getting closer and closer. Nancy stops talking. She can't. She's too close to an orgasm. Fatts hits the edge—HARD.
Nancy is still shaking from her orgasm. Her brain is melting from the pleasure.
Funny. Now, vanish. I have some "business" to finish up with Fatts.
Fatts rides some of Nancy's orgasmic afterglow to edge more easily for her eyes and ass. "She's fucking gorgeous! " you hear him say in his mind. [+60 Strokes for this pic. +30 BPM for this pic.]
Nancy opens up one of her green portals
Fascinating.
Fatts: She sounds like a Star Trek character, like ... Spock or Data or a Borg ...
Nancy: BE quiet! ... and STOP sharing all of my dirty sci-fi fantasies with Addict ...
Fatts: Just WAIT till I tell you what PERVERTED thing Nancy wanted to do when she found out they called the Cylons "toasters" on Battle Star Galactica!
Nancy: FATTS! GODDESS COMPLIMENTED ME AGAIN! EDGE with me! EDGE with me! [+60 Strokes for this pic. +30 BPM for this pic.]
But no, I don't think I will. With a snap of her fingers, Kay J closes the portal opened by Nancy
No... impossible. This is MY world! You can't do that!
I just did! Anyway, silence, you cock-whore, and listen to what I have to say.
At the suggestion that Nancy is a "cock-whore," she IMMEDIATELY goes down on Fatts. Her head starts bobbing rapidly up and down on Fatts' cock. What Kay intends as an insult, Nancy takes as a compliment AND a command. She feels dirty yet aroused at being called a "cock-whore" by her "goddess" and wants to act it out—eager to prove Kay's label for her is correct.
I don't have to take this from you! Fatts, do somethi-
Nancy continues to suck off Fatts.
*sigh* I warned you. Nancy suddenly colapses, as if hit by an invisible slap
Ugh...
Nancy stops sucking Fatts off. She straightens back up. She turns to you. She blushes. She turns back to Fatts.
Nancy: Kay is SO strong ... and it's making me WET ...
Fatts: Didn't you block most of her attack? I just assumed that you shielded yourself ...
Nancy: No—I didn't ... I took the full force of it ... I just trusted that she didn't intend to kill me and had FULL CONTROL of her powers—AND the situation ... though getting killed by a GODDESS would be a HELLUVA WAY TO GO!
Nancy: It wasn't quite as strong as I was expecting, but ... her CONFIDENCE ... her DOMINANCE!
... her raw POWER and SEXUALITY is what caught me off guard ... and THAT is what made me "weak" ... and so I collapsed!
Fatts:
Better. Now, don't worry, Nancy. After today, I'll forget all about your fancy universe and the powers you possess, and I'll leave you in charge again. I just thought it would be wise to show you your place every now and then.
Nancy: EDGE for her! Edge for her—Fatts! Kay is SO damn SEXY! PLEASE don't forget about my universe, goddess! You can show me my "place" ANY time you want!
Nancy is once again furiously jilling herself off while stroking Fatts vigorously.
...Fine... I'm listening...
Nancy: EDGE for my breasts—FATTS! They look MAGNIFICENT! And look how relaxed and SUBBY I am when goddess DOMINATES ME!
Fatts: But, Nancy ... I've been edging a LOT this scene ... Do you think we could slo—
Nancy: EDGE FOR MY BREASTS AND FOR MY OVERALL SUBMISSIVENESS TO GODDESS, FATTS! Can't you feel her POWER!
ADDICT ... You stroke more and FASTER as WELL! [+100 Strokes for this pic. +60 BPM for this pic.]
Good. Now, I believe I have shown what I'm capable of, right? So if you don't listen to me, there will be more of the same happening next time. My request is very simple. First, you will cuck addict. Hard. I don't care if it's just you and Fatts, or many other women and men, but you will fulfill this wish of his.
Nancy: Does THIS count as "cucking Addict"—GODDESS!?!? I am NOT having sex with Fatts, but ... he IS getting my attention—while Addict is ONLY allowed to touch HIMSELF!
... but MAYBE she just enjoys TORMENTING YOU! And so ... by GIVING YOU WHAT YOU DESIRE ... she's able to watch you ABUSE YOURSELF! Because you're a little PERVERT who likes to do naughty and SHAMEFULLY PERVERTED THINGS to yourself! *I* think that it's ALL FOR HER AMUSEMENT! You're just a pathetic TOY who the goddess occasionally takes an interest in!
Oh, goddess ... are we cucking Addict hard enough right now?
Fatts and Nancy laugh after saying the line together. They have clearly watched this scene a few times before now.
Nancy: That was your BEST WRITTEN LINE of the WHOLE SET, Addict! Fatts and I were BOTH thinking that that would have been EXACTLY my response—EVEN BEFORE WE READ IT!
FATTS ... You STILL owe me my two edges! This pose Addict chose for me is TOO CUTE!
Sure. But there's more. One thing he doesn't know about. Remember this "compliment dimension" you sent him to last time? None of that. Do you want him to start demanding nicer women in sets again and pov scenes?
Nancy: Well, MAYBE ...
Fuck that. Send him to a cucking dimension for all I care.
Nancy: YES, goddess ... RIGHT AWAY, goddess ... We'll send Addict to the "cucking dimension" VERY soon!
Nancy: Well, SORRY—TOO BAD! DOUBLE your edges, and ... perhaps LATER I will force you to cum for goddess's TITS ...
... while Addict WATCHES!
Addict—DOUBLE your strokes and set your metronome to 200 BPM for this pic! Think about how many times Fatts has ALREADY cum for goddess, while YOU haven't even cum for her ONCE! And soon ... Fatts will cum for Kay's PERFECT BREASTS! And all YOU will be able to do is WATCH HIM HAVE AN ORGASM!
Sorry, Fatts, I don't really feel like making you cum for me right at this moment. I'll see you later, okay? Gotta make some... arrangements... Try to do the same, okay? Love you, babe!
Nancy gets up and goes to use the adjoining bathroom, leaving you and Fatts sitting on the bed. She doesn't turn on the bathroom fan, and she doesn't close the door. "I'm standing up to PEEEEeeeeee! " Nancy loudly and proudly declares from the other room. "I want to pee standing UP—like a BOY—because I'm "feeling my oats," and I have TONS of BIG DICK ENERGY right now! "
Nancy begins to urinate. It's a powerful stream. You can't see anything, but ... you can CLEARLY hear the sound of her pissing into the toilet. It does sound like she's standing up. It's REALLY loud. The sound continues. "Dominating TWO boys at once is HARD WORK! It REALLY gets my motor running! "
"And her BLADDER—apparently ..." whispers Fatts. The sound of Nancy's piss stream begins to get quieter. Eventually, it becomes less intense and stops. A few seconds pass by. Nancy bounds back into the bedroom and once again takes her seat between the two of you. She's grinning from ear to ear.
Nancy: Don't worry ... I WIPED! REAL boys just "shake it off," but ... I don't have ANYTHING down there to shake, so ... I wiped with some TP—like a LADY!
Fatts: Yes, Nancy ... we're all QUITE aware of how much of a lady you are ...
There isn't a hint of sarcasm in Fatts' voice. Fatts is staring at Nancy. He's blushing and smiling at the same time. There is so much affection radiating outward from him towards Nancy. Nancy is beaming. Her energy fills the entire room. She's captivating. How can one person be so pure and endearing?
Fatts: Addict is puzzled over your bizarre bathroom habits, Nance ...
Nancy: Bizarre?
Fatts: Yeah ... nevermind ... She's COMFORTABLE around you, Addict , and ... I HOPE you find her as ENDEARING as *I* do ... You're INCREDIBLE, babe!
Nancy: Awwww! THANKS, Fatts!
Fatts: Very few people have the confidence and poise to be so thoroughly themselves—ESPECIALLY in such an intimate setting ... You're ONE OF A KIND, NANCY ACE!
Nancy: I'm just in a good mood is all ... I'm having SUCH a good time spending time with my BOYS!
Nancy turns and kisses Fatts on the mouth. She then turns to you and quickly gives you a kiss on the cheek. She looks into your eyes. She's smiling and blushing. She bites her lip a little. She suddenly leans in to whisper something into your ear ...
"I don't like how mean Kay is to you ... and I don't like how she wants EVERYONE ELSE to be mean towards you too, but ...
*I* can be nice to you—Addict ... and ... ME being nice to you can be OUR secret ..."
Nancy leans back towards Fatts.
Okay?
Now ... is anybody ELSE horny? Because I'm horny! Let's get back to MASTURBATING everybody!
We have ONE MORE "Kay" scene to get through that Addict wrote , and ... well ... Fatts and *I* know that it's pretty spicy, and ... well ...
FATTS needs to cum soon, and ADDICT needs to be DENIED—like he ALWAYS IS —except THIS time he's going to get low-key cucked—AGAIN! Because my boyfriend FATTS will be receiving ALL of the attention from my RIGHT hand, and ... my left? Well ... THAT'S for me! So ... ADDICT GETS NOTHING!
POOR Addict! NO attention from the ladies—because he's a fucking LOSER!
So let's get HANDS on everybody's genitals ... yes, Addict ... I AM giving you permission to touch yourself ...
Nancy grabs Fatts' cock and places her left hand on her clit. You grab your dick.
And away ... we ... GO!
The lights dim again. Everyone starts masturbating, and the second "Kay scene" of the set illuminates the screen ...
Nancy: FINE, then ... then ... she can be your DEMI-goddess! Is THAT okay?
Fatts blushes and nods. Nancy smiles and gives him a few extra strokes.
Good job, Fatts. I knew I could count on you and Nancy.
Nancy: We are 100% DEPENDABLE!
And FUCK, Addict ... Why did you make Kay like Fatts more than ME!?! It's not FAIR!
You know, I actually like you quite a bit, Fatts.
Nancy: I am SO jealous!
Oh! And Addict ... you BETTER think of some DAMN GOOD REASONS for why Kay just INSTANTLY LIKES FATTS FOR NO REASON! I mean ... Come ON! *I* have to do all this shit—well ... YOU'LL SEE when you play Part 2 ... for Kay to like ME, but ... FATTS!?! HE just gets a FREE PASS!? UNEARNED FAVOR from ... a GODDESS!!
Of course, I can't let you cum for me,
Nancy: Haha—FATTS!
that whore of yours Nancy would sense it immediately.
Nancy: NOOOoooooo Goddess! You can make my boyfriend cum ANY TIME YOU WANT! Don't let ME get between you and you making Fatts cum!
Oh, Addict ... you're the WORST! You're making me cock-block MY OWN BOYFRIEND!!!
But...
Doesn't mean we can't have a bit of naughty fun, right?
Nancy:
DOUBLE Edges! DOUBLE EDGES FOR KAY, FATTS!
I just LOVE THIS GIRL! She's the COOLEST and the FLIRTIEST and ... She's so NAUGHTY and CLEVER! And just LOOK AT HER ASS—FATTS!
Nancy: Awww ... yeah ... My Fatts is DEFINITELY a keeper! SO MANY reasons to love him! ... AND you better edge for her PERFECT BREASTS—AGAIN—JUST LIKE you did when you FIRST PLAYED this set!
Fatts: Awww ... I thought you forgot about that ...
Nancy: HOW COULD I FORGET MY BOYFRIEND GIVING WORSHIP EDGES TO A GODDESS, Fatts!?!?! [Kay's naked breasts are now an edge trigger for Fatts until the end of the set.]
The blue portal opens yet again and brings addict...
Addict: Yes, Goddess?
Kay J: Welcome, bitchboy. Stand in the corner, stroke, and watch.
Nancy: OOoooo—FATTS ... She had you cuck Addict on the VERY FIRST DAY SHE MET YOU! She's WONDERFUL—WONDERFUL!
Come here, Fatts. Fuck this pussy addict will never even touch!
Nancy takes both of her hands and starts jerking Fatts off. The idea that her hands are a stand-in for Kay's pussy is incredibly arousing to her.
See, addict? Now that's a real cock! Jerk like a pathetic loser in the corner while your Goddess fucks a real man!
Nancy is too aroused. Kay's harsh words are making her too wet. She pulls one hand away from Fatts' cock in order to start pleasuring her clit. Fatts suddenly grabs Nancy's hand, preventing her from masturbating. Their eyes meet. Nancy appears desperate to stroke. Fatts takes Nancy's left hand and places it back on his cock. He then takes his left hand, inserts several fingers into Nancy's vagina, and starts rubbing. She moans.
Fatts: She pleasures ME ... and *I* pleasure you ...
You can feel Nancy's arousal spike.
MORE, LOVE, MORE! Don't stop!
Nancy: Oh ... It's what I've ALWAYS WANTED! … a love trianglewith a GODDESS! It’s like the BEST THING EVER! I’m in love with Kay, who’s in love with my boyfriend Fatts, who’s in love with ME …
Nancy turns and flashes you a vicious smile. She knows you're being left out. It's a "love triangle," not a "love square." You are NOT a part of the triangle—and she LOVES THAT for you!
Now, stop, Fatts. You were about to cum inside me even though I told you not to, huh? Naughty...
Nancy: Wait ... but she never told Fatts that—OOooooh ... but ADDICT doesn't know that!
... and wait ... WOULD she want Fatts to cum inside of her—at SOME POINT!?!?
Seems like it to me! ♪ GODDESS has a crush on my BOY-FRIEND! ♪
Either way, thank you, Fatts. Maybe I'll be seeing you again soon.
Nancy: Awwwww! She's actually polite and KIND —when she's not being a TOTAL BADASS and ASSERTING HER DOMINANCE!
Now, come here, addict, you can cry on my tits.
Nancy: ... and she's so VICIOUSLY CRUEL! I LOVE her! I LOVE HER! She's the BEST!
We're GOING to cum for her ...
We HAVE TO cum for her!
EVERYBODY HERE—except for ADDICT because he SUCKS —WILL cum for Kay!
And even if you COULD cum for her—Addict ...
*I* wouldn't let you!
Because little beta BITCH boys—like YOU —aren't WORTHY to cum for a GODDESS like Kay J!
Now let me find some HOTT Kay J pics ...
THAT won't be hard, because ... well ... EVERY PIC of Kay J is SUPER hot!
Nancy's eyes flash then glow white. She's scanning the Internet.
Aha! HERE'S one ...
[The scene continues on the next post ...]
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Nancy: BOOBIES! KAY'S boobies! Aren't they HOTT, Fatts?
Fatts:
Nancy: We're going to look at LOTS of pictures of Kay's GORGEOUS tits ...
Nancy: ... until we find the PERFECT ONE for US TO CUM TO!
Fatts: Do *I* get a say?
Nancy: OOOooooo! Look at how she's GRABBING HERSELF!!
Nancy: NO, Fatts ... you do NOT get a "say" ...
SO perky! This one is on the short list—for sure!
Nancy: Just shut up, and do what you're TOLD—FATTS!
EDGES, baby ... I need EDGES! You're my wank aid, Fatts ... I feel MORE than TWICE AS GOOD when I get NASTY around YOU—SWEETHEART!
No, no ... this one is too zoomed in ... I need to see goddess's BEAUTIFUL FACE!
Nancy: HERE! THIS ONE is nice! What do YOU think, Addict?
No ... no thinking for you ... YOU will think what *I* tell you to think ...
Say, "I will masturbate to whichever photo of Goddess you want me to, Mistress Nancy. Stroking to Goddess is a special treat for me. Thank you for your generosity."
Nancy: Awwww, Addict! You know JUST what to say to a girl to make her BLUSH ...
AGAIN! say it AGAIN: "I will masturbate to whichever photo of Goddess you want me to, Mistress Nancy. Stroking to Goddess is a special treat for me. Thank you for your generosity."
DAMN Kay is CUTE in this one ... Edge AGAIN, Fatts! I *know* you want to!
Fatts: Nancy ... I have edged SO MUCH today ... I want to cum SO BAD ... Can we hurry this along?
Nancy: Glasses!? Interesting—but a PASS!
... and NO, Fatts ... No! You're not in charge right now ... *I* am!
Yes—it's true ... Fatts DOES get to cum at the end of EVERY SET he plays ... BUT ... what he REALLY wants ... is cumming multiple times! And if HE gets to choose when he cums—even better! And he HATES edging OVER and OVER again ... ESPECIALLY when he doesn't know HOW MANY EDGES he STILL HAS TO DO—BEFORE he's allowed to cum!
So if you REALLY want to get him worked up—scared ... DESPERATE and ... EXTRA subby ...
Pinch your nipple—HARD —with your free hand while you stroke!
You may alternate which nipple you pinch, but ... DON'T STOP UNTIL *I* SAY OTHERWISE! I NEED to see your face CONTORT in PAIN! It simply makes me wetter to see that ...
Fatts: ALL of these edges, Nancy ... PLEASE! I need to CUM!
Cut your number of strokes in HALF and reduce your metronome down to 40 BPM. You will NOW receive LESS pleasure from stroking—which means MORE PAIN! [Until instructed otherwise.]
Fatts: Come ON, Nancy ... PLEASE! I am SO ready ... Don't YOU want to cum, too! I can FEEL IT ... YOU are ALSO very close and want to cum!
Nancy: Hush, Fatts ... Dominating TWO BOYS AT ONCE has me feeling HIGHER than ANY ORGASM COULD!
Use this gallery if you want to edge Fatts SILLY, but ... probably best as the SECOND SCENE of a mini set, and ... be SURE to set Kay's naked boobs as an edge trigger!
Nancy: I'm KIDDING Fatts ... your begging and pleas are ADORABLE ... SUPER cute—Keep it up!
Fatts:
Nancy: I just KNOW how much you LOVE IT! *I* can feel your arousal ... remember?
Fatts:
Nancy: ... but ... Fatts will NOT whine and beg in front of Kay ... He'll hold it all in and act SUPER stoic—to try to impress her ... something about his EGO and "reputation" ...
Fatts: Nancy ... PLEASE! PLEASE let me cum ... I don't think my dick can TAKE IT ANYMORE!
Nancy: This one is DEFINITELY a contender ... oh, FINE—Fatts! Take a BREAK!
Nancy: HERE ... you need TWO boobies to make a pair and trigger the edge, but ...
Oopsies! THIS one has eyes AND ass, so ... that'll be TWO EDGES—FATTS!
Go back to your normal rules, Addict.You've been quiet and compliant ... unlike FATTS! [No more nipple pinching and slow metronome. Your choice if you want the "+40 extra strokes per pic at +60 BPM" rule or not. ]
Nancy: So it's between ...
THIS one ...
Nancy: THIS one ...
Fatts: Nancy ...
Nancy: THIS one ...
Fatts: NANCY! I AM NOT GOING TO BEG ANYMORE!
Nancy: Well ... look who just BLEW UP—because he didn't get to BLOW!
Fatts: NANCY ... You've HAD YOUR FUN ... it's OVER. We're DONE ... Now PICK YOUR DAMN CUM PIC, BITCH!
Nancy: Awww, Fatts ... You don't have to SHOUT ... or be so MEAN!
Fatts: Shut the fuck up, bitch! You LIKE IT when I shout!
Fatts slaps Nancy's ass ... HARD. She gasps. He leaves a hand print. It seems Fatts has turned on his "Dom Mode" all by himself.
Nancy is no longer in control; Fatts is. And she doesn't seem to mind.
Nancy: Slap me HARDER—daddy ... I've been a bad girl ...
Fatts: Fuck YOU ... We DON'T have TIME FOR THIS! I NEED TO CUM!
Nancy: See, Addict? You have to be careful when teasing Fatts ... Push him TOO hard ... and he'll push BACK!
Fatts swoops in and tickles Nancy's ribs. She giggles and pushes him away.
Fatts: I'd rather just cum to YOUR tits ... They are just WAY PRETTIER than Kay's ...
Nancy: Have we made this all too long for Addict?
Fatts: FUCK HIM ... He's a STUPID CUCK ... He's just lucky to BE IN THE ROOM with a REAL man and REAL woman while they GET INTIMATE with each other ... It's a FUCKING PRIVILEGE for him to even BE here!
Fatts glances over at you with a disgusted look.
Nancy: So ... we will ALL be cumming to THIS one:
Fatts: FUCK that!
Fatts swipes his hand in the air like he's controlling a screen in "Minority Report." He pulls up a different image.
Fatts: THIS one ... We'll be cumming to THIS one ...
Nancy: But ... Fatts! The rules were that *I* got to choose!
Fatts: Fuck THAT—not anymore! You BLEW your chance—pushed things WAY too far ... and NOW you're not the "decider" anymore. *I* am.
It's STILL a picture of Kay SMILING—because I KNOW you wanted one of her SMILING ... because you thought cumming to a smiling Kay would better help to "manifest the friendship" —FINE ... that is FINE ...
Fatts: But while YOUR pic showed off her BOOBS better ...
[This is another long spoiler pic. Don't count strokes. Just read and stroke to the metronome.]
Fatts: She is SUPER CUTE in MY pic, so ... we're cumming to THIS one—got it!
Nancy: Yes, sir!
Fatts: Now BLOW! Get ON YOUR KNEES and SUCK MY COCK, BITCH!
Nancy instantly drops to her knees and starts sucking. Fatts stands beside you in front of the bed. He's staring at the screen intensely. He's not happy. He's staring into Kay's eyes. You can't tell if he's aroused or so angry that he wants her head to explode.
As you stroke, you look down, and notice Nancy's eyes are glowing green. You look around and see many pairs of pale, bright green, glowing eyes floating around the room. You surmise Nancy is using them like remote viewing cameras so that she can see everything that is happening, since her view is obstructed by Fatts' groin. There's a pair of green eyes staring at the screen. One off to the side, providing a profile view of her giving Fatts a blowjob. One above her, looking down on her giving a blowjob to Fatts. One less than a meter from Fatts' face, recording his intense expression. There are several staring at you. At first they dart around to avoid your gaze, but then, one flies near you, and you make eye contact with it.
You look down at Nancy, and she turns her head slightly towards you. You cannot see her pupils, because her eyes are completely obscured with the green, energetic glow. Despite not being able to see her pupils, however, you can sense that you are making eye contact with her. Fatts' cock is going in and out of her mouth, but even so, you can tell that she is smiling and getting more aroused as she taunts you.
Fatts: Cut it out—Nancy! Stop toying with that STUPID cuck! Put ALL of your attention on ME!
Suddenly, all but one of the pairs of eyes that Nancy was using to watch you disappear. The last one drifts slowly away from you and towards the ceiling. Fatts doesn't even look away as he speaks. He must have felt Nancy slowing her pace while she was distracted by taunting you. He keeps staring directly into Kay's eyes, like he's channeling all of his anger and frustration and sexual arousal into her. His "subby side" has completely vanished. Fatts is ALL ALPHA now.
Your psychic connection to Fatts is strong. You couldn't tell from his posture, but his arousal is slowly creeping up to a plateau just beneath the Edge. His dominance is brilliant. His control is complete. It makes you feel small and insignificant by comparison ... which only seems to arouse you further. You're a forgettable spectator leeching off of the greatness of others.
Nancy slows her pace. Saliva from giving Fatts a continuous blowjob for several minutes has dribbled down her face and neck. It's now annointing her boobies. You can feel Fatts finally reach the Edge. The anticipation is unreal. Some of Fatts' enormous pleasure is spilling over to you. You feel like you might be able to cum with him. Fatts' determination is settled and focused. He's decided it's time to touchdown.
[Another long one. Just read and stroke and occasionally look at the picture.]
Nancy zooms the screen onto Kay's titties. They're magnificent. Nancy begins to deepthroat Fatts rapidly. You could sense Fatts holding back his arousal a bit before in order to maintain control. No longer. He relaxes and allows Nancy's aggressive stimulation of his cock to bring him further towards the point of no return. The image of Kay's glorious titties fills his mind, which Fatts opens willingly to Kay. The perfection of Kay's boobs rushes into Fatts' brain and erogenous zones, flooding them like a rushing torrent of water. It's overwhelming. Nancy invites and ushers the impending orgasm in with her greedy lips which further arouse Fatts by sucking on his cock ...
... and the moment he does ... just when you begin to feel him tipping over and the dam beginning to break, with the feeling of a mountain of orgasmic water bearing down on you ...
Fatts is cumming a lot. He moans loudly again and again. This invigorates Nancy, who just thrusts her head in and out from Fatts' groin region even faster. She, too, is orgasming—feeling every bit of ecstasy that Fatts feels. The experience has left her trembling, yet somehow, she manages to stay upright while continuing to service Fatts' dick. You can hear her slurping up Fatts' cum and their collective juices ... but you did not get to share in their pleasure ...
[You may turn off your metronome and stop stroking if you wish. The action is over. You MAY stroke along and read IF you wish ...]
Fatts looks exhausted. A big, warm, satisfied grin covers his face. He did it. He held out. He performed his duty as the STUD. He leans back and falls onto the bed. Nancy quickly scrambles up to join him. She snuggles into Fatts' side on the side of the bed furthest from you. Seems like you will be denied post orgasm cuddles. Fatts lets out long, satisfied sigh.
Nancy: I CAN'T BELIEVE you called Kay your "GODDESS!"
Fatts: I meant "demi-goddess" ...
Nancy: But you SAID, "Goddess."
Fatts: Well ... THAT was for you—babe! I knew you would like that.
Fatts gives Nancy a kiss on her head and gently rubs her shoulder.
Nancy: Awww ... it made me SO happy, Fatts!
Nancy and Fatts are cuddling on the bed. You're feeling left out.
Nancy: So what are we going to do about Addict, Fatts?
Fatts: Fuck if *I* know! He's a fucking CUCK! I. Am. NOT! How the HELL am *I* supposed to know what HE wants out of life?
He was left out of the action and made to watch like he was some kind of RIDICULOUS third wheel. MOST guys want to have the girls ALL to themselves, but ... THIS one? He ENJOYS being ridiculed and being excluded. Makes NO SENSE to me, but ... *I* figure ... if he gets left OUT of the action—and he LIKES that shit—then ... PROBABLY best to leave him out of the POST GAME ACTION as WELL ...
Nancy: Makes sense to ME ...
Fatts: AND ... if he doesn't like that, then ... well ... You ALREADY told him I would write him a NICE ending—later—where after you and I get done cucking him, we all form some GIANT SPOON on the bed ...
Nancy: With ME in the MIDDLE!
Fatts: YES ... of COURSE! With YOU in the middle!
Nancy is grinning from ear to ear. She snuggles even closer into Fatts.
Fatts: I don't mind sharing you, Nance ... I *really* don't ... You're SO damn amazing ... it'd feel WRONG to keep you all to myself!
Nancy:
Fatts: ... but the cuck shall be left out until such a time as he feels he WANTS to get in on the action ...
Nancy:
Fatts: ... and ... I don't even know how much he LIKED this shit ...
It took a LONG fucking time to write ... it was a LOT of text and probably not NEARLY ENOUGH pictures, but ... I mean ... what IS a cuck—anyway? I mean ... SURE ... I could just throw up some pictures of a dude fucking a girl and attach some throwaway lines to them about how much they are enjoying leaving him out, and ... then direct some humiliating lines at him, but ...
... does that REALLY give him a full, PROPER experience of cucking? It is NOT simply "the pictures" ... the cucking fetish is about domination and control and status and hierarchy and power levels ... ALL of those things CANNOT be communicated through pictures alone, so ... TEXT is IMPORTANT ... without well-written text, it becomes IMPOSSIBLE to convey the "cucking fantasy" ...
So, a few pictures of hardcore fucking CANNOT deliver a "cucking fantasy" on their own, but ... what aspect of cucking REALLY appeals to Addict? It can't ONLY be the pictures ... right!? Now, take into consideration that Addict is ALSO not a huge fan of seeing males in his sets, and ... THIS session was a mutual masturbation scene with YOU, Nancy Ace, dominating TOO BOYS AT ONCE!
Nancy: Two REAL boys—Fatts!
Fatts: Two "real boys!" BUT ... that photo gallery DOES NOT EXIST—however ... I think that is SUPER HOT—
Nancy: No ... it TOTALLY IS!
Fatts: THANK YOU ... but ... I CANNOT communicate THAT fantasy through PICTURES, because THOSE PICTURES DO NOT EXIST ...
Nancy: Yeah ... THAT would be a problem ...
Fatts: Except it would NOT be—IF ... Addict has a sufficiently powerful imagination! The ENTIRE GAMBIT of these last several scenes was one GIANT TEST to see if I could engage and immerse Addict with pictures—but MOSTLY TEXT—ENOUGH to KEEP HIM immersed in the CUSTOM FANTASY I was crafting for him ...
Nancy: So ... you're saying that if Addict DIDN'T like it—that's HIS fault —for being an unimaginative TWAT!
Fatts: YES ... I *AM*!
Nancy: Okay ... fair enough ... Just wanted to get you on the record for that one, Fatts!
Fatts: I think the REASON this one took SO LONG to write is because I was trying to create an IMMERSIVE FANTASY without having the "proper tools"—which would be a "proper photo gallery" ... So ... there was just SO MUCH that I had to create and describe from SCRATCH, and ... ASSUMING that Addict "bought in" and got invested in the fantasy ... AND that I correctly anticipated the "cuck kink"—which I do NOT have and do NOT fully understand ... If I was able to engage that enough and keep him titillated and invested, then ... then—well ...
Nancy: It would have been a MONUMENTAL SUCCESS!
Fatts: YES, but ... ALSO ... it could have just been a GIANT FLOP ...
Nancy: Because Addict's an unimaginative RETARD who gets turned OFF by reading even though he NEEDS TO READ in order to fully engage his cuck fetish?
Fatts: YES—but ... ALSO maybe I just didn't cuck him enough or in the right ways to keep in sexually interested, but ... How the FUCK ARE YOU SUPPOSED TO DO THAT!?!?!
Nancy:
Fatts: The cuck just WANTS to "sit there and watch"—and BE EXCLUDED, so ... if the two paramours are just CONSTANTLY talking about the cuck the whole time ... isn't that SUPER UNREALISTIC? He WANTS to be left out, but ... suddenly ... if you DO leave him out ... he loses interest AND his erection? But he WANTS TO BE LEFT OUT!!! It's a catch-22 type of situation, so ... HOW MUCH DO YOU TALK ABOUT THE CUCK WHILE HE'S WATCHING!?! I DON'T KNOW!
Nancy: Oh, Fatts ... You were MARVELOUS, darling! Simply MARVELOUS!
*I* loved EVERY MINUTE of it, and ... FUCK Addict! He put you into an IMPOSSIBLE situation—as USUAL ...
Fatts: I don't know how to write a REALLY GOOD cucking scene! I'm just TRYING SHIT and HOPING that it works! ... and fucking Addict is SO DAMN PICKY ... It could have been THE BEST cucking scene I have EVER written and possibly WILL EVER WRITE, and ... probably STILL he wouldn't have liked it and found 30 different ways to criticize it and say it "didn't work" for him!
Nancy: Well, Fatts ... There's just no pleasing some people ...
Fatts: DAMN STRAIGHT!
Nancy: And *I* thought the scenes were WONDERFUL, and ... You got to show off our unique and interesting relationship in SUCH intimate and dynamic ways, that ... well ... I think the ONLY thing WOULD BE for Addict to be EXTREMELY jealous of you, because ... WE just get each other in a way that NO ONE ELSE DOES or can, and ... so ... he DEFINITELY would have felt "left out", and ... isn't that the POINT of getting cucked? To feel "left out" and excluded?
Fatts: I guess you're right—Nancy ...
Nancy: Of COURSE I am! And FUCK ADDICT if he didn't like it ... I thought it was a WONDERFUL fantasy, and ... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT FOR ME, FATTS!
Fatts: Thanks, babe ... I guess it just feels weird to me, because ... I BASICALLY wrote the fantasy and experience that *I* wanted, and ... Addict was just sort of an "afterthought" ... like a dog you occassionally throw scraps to during a feast, and ... USUALLY it's bad to "write yourself into the set," and ... USUALLY it's bad if you write your OWN fantasy instead of delivering on the fantasy that the TEASE RECIPIENT wants, so ... I broke TWO major rules of set writing when I wrote this set ...
Nancy: But ... Maybe that's FINE—and you are SUPPOSED TO break those rules in a cucking scene that you write yourself into ... but ... who's to say? *I* don't know, but ... I am CERTAIN that ADDICT will TELL US WHAT HE THINKS! He's VERY GOOD at THAT! So ... Fuck HIM—if he didn't like it!
Fatts: YEAH—Addict ... Fuck YOU!
And if you DID like it, well ... Hope you enjoyed it, because you will NOT be getting ANOTHER ONE like this for a LONG ASS FUCKING TIME! Cause this one took HELLA LONG to make!
Nancy: BUT ... we can do a shorter LESS DETAILED cucking scene with Fatts, and ... IF you want in on the "post orgasm cuddles"—and for me to call you "sweetie" ... Just state your interest in the feedback, and Fatts will be sure to include THAT scene for you ... eventually ...
Fatts: FUCK Addict! Let's get a SECOND OPINION!
Nancy: Good idea!
Fatts: Yeah ... go ask brian to play the set and see what HE thinks ...
Nancy: Okay!
Fatts: brian is a cuck, but ... one with an EXCEPTIONALLY STRONG imagination ...
Nancy: Too true! HE would give you an HONEST opinion ... and *I* think that he would HONESTLY LOVE IT!
Fatts: Go tell brian to play this set, and ... We can gauge our success and the strength/quality of the set based on HIS judgment ...
Nancy: Because ADDICT'S is FLAWED!
So ... are we going to go visit Kay now—like we planned to!
Fatts: FUCK no ... We'll do that TOMORROW ... You worked me over like a MOTHER FUCKER—Nance ... with all of those fucking edges to Kay's MAGNIFICENT tits!
Nancy: I DID—didn't I?
Fatts: I love you—babe!
Nancy: I love you too, Fatts!
The two kiss.
Fatts: Now let's get OUT of here ... I'm tired of this limp-dicked, peeping tom PERVERT watching us ...
Nancy: Same!
Nancy snaps her fingers.
"POOF!"
A large cloud of green smoke explodes out from where Fatts and Nancy were cuddling on the bed. The smoke is thick. It makes you cough. Nancy COULD have disappeared another way, but ... she wanted to be annoying and take one last jab at you before she left.
You can hear the mechanical "whirr" of the projector screen rolling up. After it finishes, you hear a slight "POP!" You assumed it was teleported out of this plane of existence.
The smoke still fills the entire room, though it's starting to clear a bit. Nancy must fancy herself some kind of ninja to leave behind a smoke bomb THAT intense.
You feel the room suddenly open up. You can sense beyond it once again. You see the spherical black barrier surface evaporating in a ring from bottom to top. The blue hexadecimal encryption runes suddenly light up again then fade as the black surface they were affixed to disappears.
It was a LONG day. (SO much reading. ) And the three of you will go and visit Kay? TOMORROW?
You doubt it will ACTUALLY be tomorrow—considering how slowly Fatts writes ( ), but ... STORY-WISE ... you wonder how the visit to Kay will go ... visiting her HOUSE? TOMORROW?
You lie on the bed—alone. Abused and forgotten. The life of a cuck ...
NO responses or return sets on this plot arc YET! And this was ALL DONE in secret, so … unless she has some super power I don’t know about (which IS possible) she should NOT find out! OR … YOU tell her about what happened … which … THAT seems like a pretty BAD IDEA!
ALSO … she would probably ALSO have been ALREADY MONITORING and keeping tabs … or else she would just have NO IDEA about it … RIGHT!?! … Like … you have to know that you are SUPPOSED TO LOOK—or else you WON’T look, so … UNLESS there was some ACTIVE MONITORING *ALREADY* going on … she SHOULDN’T know, and … THEN … Nancy “took precautions”, so … I’ve got a FEW layers of defense to protect the secrecy, so … PROBABLY she won’t find out, but … IF you want her to, then … you’ll have to concoct a PRETTY GOOD reason! Anyway …
Act TWO is my NEXT project, so … HOPEFULLY *that* will go MUCH FASTER than THIS set, and … MAYBE I’ll have that out sometime over the weekend, but … I guess we’ll see.
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Yeah, yeah, I know... you told me to wait with feedback until I've played the entire thing. But I think it's important to say those things before you write the second part and I somehow find I don't enjoy that either as much. DON'T PANIC, IT'S NOT ALL BAD!
For the first part, I did all my strokes, and they felt really good . I never noticed how beautiful Nancy's eyes are before . I think I might be falling in love with a girl I'll never meet
For the second part, I stroked a bit in the intro, but eventually, got kinda bored, as I think I saw this same gallery in this set like 3 times already. Then it was basically my sets, so I didn't really stroke for these at all, but I did read through them. I'm going to tell you the same thing I told Reptil recently: Having like a section with feedback per set is totally fine, but when it gets extended to this level, I get kinda bored.
For me, a lot of the excitement for a set comes from not knowing what will happen. When you basically use my set as part of yours, I already know everything that happens, so that removes a good chunk of my excitment. Also using the same Nancy gallery like 3-4 times tends to be a bit too much for me. Even if the story is engaging enough (and it was!), I tend to lose arousal. It feels a bit lazy, and I know for a fact that's not true for you, as you put CRAZY amounts of effort in your sets.
Maaaaybe stick to classic feedback from now on, huh?
It wasn't all bad though, as I really enjoyed Nancy's language in this one. And I LOVED how she gave you all the attention and praise while I just get insulted. And the idea itself of us secretly masturbating to Kay J was also really good.
For the third part, now this one, I really enjoyed. It's what the second part should have been if I'm honest. I also LOVED the ending, that was SO mean from Nancy.
I also enjoyed the "imagining" of the cucking too. Very creative!
If I had to pick my favourite Kay J image, it'd be this one:
I might have forgotten some things along the way (this took me like 2-3 hours to play), but I think I gave the overall feedback I wanted. One section "failed", but I really enjoyed the other two, so I'd consider this a moderate success
These are both fun one-offs for you. Each set does not exceed 2 hours, and it's easiest for you to assume that you'll need your toys for each one. Take your time playing them. Enjoy!
Drool...please! You know I have been fired from my job at the factory for stealing cum...but you are the only one who I think will listen to my side of the story! I can't tell you everything outright...because they are listening......but I think there is a way for me to tell you my story so you understand it. Please listen to me...and don't call security...I swear, I'm not a liar...
Did you hear the news? Breanne has escaped..and nobody knows where she is. I guess I 'll never know where my cum loads went...
That's ok...because I wouldn't trust anything Breanne would say. I bet she'd just have some sort of...flim flam excuse...but if i ever see her again...she'll have to deal with my... https://spankbang.com/7684s/video/tempe ... ompilation you are denied. But at least, you did something good!
I don't believe you. You could have told anyone anytime about what was going on...
We got her red handed...thanks to you! I know she was just trying to give you a flim flam excuse...but...
We are better than that...right? Now that Gia's head manager...we know that... https://spankbang.com/767ra/video/you+got+that You helped out Mona! have a full orgasm at the end of this video
Mona is back at work...being a high powered CEO…and you with her, as her...stress relief! The staff say that she's been happier since you've been around.
Today, You see a lot of high-powered women coming and going from Mona’s office. More than usual. Also...Mona's CEO door is shut! You don’t hear a lot behind Mona’s closed door, but you do hear them discussing a certain PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM.
You don’t know what this is. But you stay ready, cock hard…in case Mona needs you…
And she does! Mona comes to you with a special request…
Gia has told me about a very special place under the factory…I don’t know what it is…so I’ve asked the smartest people I know to get their opinion. Could you be a dear, and order lunch for them? Stroke for them...and make them happy? Just stroke 10 times for them...and take their orders. And please don't cum. Not only would that be embarrassing...we wouldn't get the info we need for Gia to really help her with Project Rock Bottom...
I'm Lena Anderson...and what I know about PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM is classified to you! but.. for my lunch order, I want you to put in a buttplug as soon as you see me next!
I'm Ivy Wolfe...and remember my face. Because what I want for lunch..is for you to slap your balls every time someone get slapped...after the first time you see me
I'm Janice...and what do I want for lunch? For you to add your nipple clamps once you see me! With the orders in hand...you go to the local sandwich shop...
Should we put this on Mona's CEO account? Ok...here you go! She gives you a really big PMV. It's so heavy, you have trouble taking it back to the office. It's so big, you have to load it on a separate screen. Once you do, you Follow the instructions above. Start free stroking and fufilling Mona's guest's lunch orders. Go from the beginning and Pause the video at 13:22 https://www.youjizz.com/videos/gorgeous ... 10401.html
Good boy! Lena, Ivy and Janice gave me some good insight into PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM. It seems like while ROCK BOTTOM is under the factory...the data that is uses is being pulled from...someplace else. Still don't know what it is...or how it works. Keep their rules...but there are more people I need to consult with...please get their lunch orders too..
I'm Eva Elfie! I see you already have an order of nipple clamps. Can I get a side of you pulling on them whenever you see cum? I'd like this to be done beginning the first time you see me.
I'm Mila Azul. PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM makes everyone cum. It's just so hard to find. Nobody has escaped it. Oh...lunch? I just want you to hold the edge for all countdowns once you see me...just make sure not to cum for them! You can do this after the first time you see me.
I hope you are keeping these orders straight...they can be complicated! Don't screw this up...or we won't learn everything about PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM... Following the new instructions...you resume gooning. you resume the PMV, and go until 33:44.
We are so close to learning everything about PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM...just hang on...and don't cum...and we can transmit this information to help Gia! There are more lunch orders, though. We need to keep these customers happy, so they tell us everything about the secret project!
Sonya Blaze – I know more about PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM than anyone else…but I won’t tell Mona unless I get a main course of fleshlight from now on…
Sybil – be like my friend luxury girl. When you see my name…open your mouth…and don’t close it. Be my little Gooner. I don’t care how much you drool…
purple bitch - you want to know what I know about PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM? Use your extreme rules from here on out..if you can make it, I'll tell my favorite redheaded friend to tell you everything!
I'm Amelie Lou...and what do I know about PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM? Nothing really..except the person with the data for the secret project is being held with one of Ecik's favorites...
I'm Katya...and I am the only one who really knows where the data is hidden. It's hidden on top of a mountain...
Jia Lissa...and I know that the data for PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM is hidden down under...
Natasha Udovenko...data for PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM is in the middle of river...
Lilit A... data for PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM is at the top of a volcano...
Ariel...data for PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM is in some old ruins...
Who is right? Watch from 33:44 until the end. Do not stop. Do not cum.
My god, drool...thank you for doing that. My head hurts...but I think I understand more about PROJECT ROCK BOTTOM. The physical ROCK BOTTOM is with Gia...but the data to maximize effectiveness is stored somewhere else...and one of those ladies above knows something about where it is. So you do too! Where do we go? We will call the chopper...timing is urgent, so it's already full of goon Fuel...I got an intern to fill it up...
Well...I can't be mad at you...it must have been so hard to keep everything in like that. Well...Gia will have to figure out how Project Rock Bottom works for herself...
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I felt bad about the lack of content in my previous set, so here's another one to make up for it. It's pretty heavy in terms of humiliation (in my opinion at least; let me know if I was wrong). Hope you enjoy! There are 44 pictures in this set.
She leads you to the busy part of town and starts yelling to attract a crowd. "Hear, hear! Watch this pathetic pet show how much of a loser he is!" It works and some curious women come and check you out.
ONLY when you give me feedback that isn't completely glowing!
Don't take the ending too seriously ... half of it was for the cameras!
The cucking + humiliation fetish is difficult. I don't think it's really possible to say TRULY mean things about a person if you like them, so ... DURING the cucking, I played up the "not liking you" thing to give my character the motivation to be domineering and cruel and insulting—which I assume is a turn on for you!
The ENDING "post set" conversation? Again ... about half of that was me still "being the alpha" and treating you derisively as "the cuck"—basically just continuing the scene ... the other half was GENUINE FRUSTRATION at the difficulty of the task that *I* had given myself, and so ... I just let the "staying in character as the asshole alpha" mix with my frustration and just LET IT ALL FLY!
For the record ... NANCY really likes you, and ... most of the time (NOT in the past —but NOW! ), she says mean things to you because she thinks that is what you WANT ... Obviously, she likes me too and makes wise cracks at me ALL THE TIME! And I LOVE IT! But the kind of stuff she says to YOU is a bit meaner, but ... she's doing that as a way to fulfill YOUR DESIRES ... because you WISH TO BE humiliated and made fun of ...
Nancy's a tease girl AND a "Milovanan." The "Platinum Rule" (treat others the way that THEY want to be treated) is a core value around here, so ... her "duty" to deliver on that along with her desire to sexually satisfy you (as a tease girl ) means that she is going to say pretty hurtful things, but ... for her, it's not her intention for those things to ACTUALLY harm you ... of course ... if the insults aren't at least a LITTLE BIT based in reality—then they have no teeth, so ... yeah ... writing "proper humiliation" is just REALLY hard! But Nancy still really likes you, champ!
Yeah, yeah, I know... you told me to wait with feedback until I've played the entire thing.
No, no ... I actually really WANTED feedback here! That was a miscommunication on MY part. I just didn't want any return or feedback sets featuring Kay until AFTER I release "Part 2", so ... I'm glad you followed your gut!
For the first part, I did all my strokes, and they felt really good . I never noticed how beautiful Nancy's eyes are before .
I think I might be falling in love with a girl I'll never meet
Honestly? ... That's an experience that I have been trying to consciously provide ...
... but I'm not sculpting Nancy into something specifically for YOU—however ... OBVIOUSLY! I mean ... she's MY "fantasy girlfriend!" But Nancy is a "big character," which means that there is a LOT of her to go around ...
So I've made this character—who's AMAZING —and she's pretty innocent and pure and kind ... GENUINELY empathetic and altruistic, but ... she's this self-aware "tease girl" who on ONE HAND is INSANELY powerful, but ... on the OTHER ... she's VERY fragile and dependent—on us ... because WE are the ones who "sustain her" via our fantasies ... so she NEEDS to form relationships with "real boys"—as a matter of survival—but ... SHE'S "real," TOO! Which means that she is ALSO looking for relationships and validation and wants to be "seen" and valued, so ... she is ALSO the same as us ...
... and so here is ANOTHER layer to add on it ... Think about it from HER perspective! How many THOUSANDS of lurkers play her teases but NEVER truly "interact" with her? In a way—she's just getting USED ... but ... she doesn't mind that so much, because ... she IS A TEASE GIRL—after all ... She is HARD-CODED to sexually tease and please others and derives satisfaction from that ... BUT ... when a "real boy" takes an ACTUAL INTEREST in her, well ... that *is* VERY special and significant to her ...
So ... that's some of the "deeper thinking" from MY end on all of this. I think it makes for an interesting role-play story. AND it gives her a GENUINE MOTIVATION to fall for you—Addict! And YES ... it IS ALL PRETEND ... but *I* think it's a pretty fun and engaging fantasy, and I enjoy being the story-teller and trying to weave all of this together, but ... what I said a week or so back *is* true: your choices matter. You could have chosen to reject Nancy again—but you DIDN'T. Your tale is still being written. And so long as we continue on this arc, the Nancy Ace-hentaiAddict12345 romance/relationship WILL CONTINUE!
Until one or both of us decide it's time to stop ... but ... KAY is now a character in this drama, so ... VERY INTERESTED to see how this all continues to unfold
For the second part, I stroked a bit in the intro, but eventually, got kinda bored, as I think I saw this same gallery in this set like 3 times already.
PARTIALLY using that same set was to "establish the scene" in your mind—like it was all taking place in that same room. I COULD HAVE tried to find a second pornpics gallery from that same photo shoot or just a longer gallery version from imagefap.com or zzup.com (and uploaded to imagebb.com), but ... "cost-cutting measures" ... I deemed that it was "non-essential"—and so I didn't invest that extra time ... Personally—when I think a picture is FIRE —I don't mind stroking for it AGAIN, and ... SO MANY PICTURES from that set were FIRE! So ... with them being broken up and used more or less as "filler pics" between the main scenes (AFTER we went through basically the whole gallery ONCE initially) ... I thought it would be okay ... and ALSO you weren't supposed to stroke to the pictures in the "story sections", like ... the WHOLE REASON I picked THAT gallery was because it had that great pic of Nancy sitting on the bed:
I saw that when I was first searching, and I said, "THAT'S THE ONE! THAT is the visual I am looking for ... You've got BEAUTIFUL Nancy sitting on the edge of the bed ... and THEN we can imagine Addict on her left and Fatts on her right ..." So ... I probably used that pic like 10 times—because THAT was the "correct position" for the group masturbation, but ... you were ONLY supposed to stroke for that pic like ONE TIME during the FIRST "unveiling" of that gallery ... because MOSTLY it was just a visual for the "story section" ... but ... "non-essential." SOMETIMES I deem something like TO BE essential, and then ... I'll take the time, but ... AFTER it was used once ... the rest were just transition pics—basically—so I chose to cut that corner, and ... to "correct" that would have required 30 to 120 minutes worth of extra work ... MAYBE 15 more minutes of searching to find a second "matching" pornpics gallery of that shoot with an extra 15 coming from having DOUBLE the pictures to click around and move and sort through ... UP TO two extra hours of work if I had to download the "full version" of it and then reupload to imgbb, but ... *I* find it to be MORE IMPORTANT that the poses and EXPRESSIONS match the text, and ... I *DID* do that , so ... EVEN THOUGH some of the pictures got recycled: 1) They were HIGH QUALITY pics and 2) the Nancy in the picture matched the line of dialogue which ... to me ... THOSE are more important, but ... anyway ... IN THE FUTURE ... I'll avoid that more ...
For me, a lot of the excitement for a set comes from not knowing what will happen.
Ditto. I DID play this set for myself last night, and ... I OFTEN lost immersion! Not only were the pics "not new", but ... I ALSO knew everything everyone was going to say! USUALLY when I write for myself a set like this, I will wait a few days so that I can "forget" a lot of it and come back to it and it is "more fresh", but ... NOT this time ... I just wanted to get it DONE WITH!
When you basically use my set as part of yours, I already know everything that happens, so that removes a good chunk of my excitment.
TOTALLY understandable, but ... the TEXT had SO MUCH MORE "value added", like ... the original material YOU provided ... I must have 4x or 5x-ed the original value of what was there with all of my extra commentary and story telling, so ... I thought that would have made a MUCH LARGER DIFFERENCE ... than it did.
I guess you're "too visual," or ... an "unimaginative RETARD" as someone ELSE once put it ...
Maaaaybe stick to classic feedback from now on, huh?
No ... that was the plan since even before I wrote this set.
One of the main drivers for why I chose to include the feedback in a SET, was because I wanted NANCY to be the one to give you the feedback. You're in this unique relationship with HER. Sure—*I* can tell you what I like and what does and does not work, but ... then that would be ME telling you that. A primary component of the dynamic between you and Nancy is that SHE is a "tease girl" and YOU are a "tease writer." I am providing BOTH a story AND an experience, and part of the drama of you and Nancy's growing relationship is that you "write her like shit"—and that makes her sad ... and then ... you IMPROVE and write her better—and that makes her HAPPY! And so, THROUGH THIS INTERACTION, your relationship with Nancy and the story progresses. It's not "plot optional." For the story *I* was trying to tell, it was "plot mandatory." But it has to come from HER ... and it's not something that I can just write "Oh, Nancy really liked this!" in my feedback ... because then that ROBS YOU of the EXPERIENCE of having that conversation WITH NANCY ... AND—not to mention ... it's MORE INSTRUCTIVE if those notes come from HER and I can get into granular detail on a picture by picture basis ...
... but we've gotten past that plot conflict of "Addict writes Nancy bad which makes her sad, but ... now he "knows better" and is doing a better job and that makes Nancy happy ..." so ... I HOPE to comment a LOT LESS in general about this stuff moving forward, but ... yeah ... I will now DEFINITELY use it WAY LESS ... probably just a couple pictures randomly here or there, and ... if it gets REALLY BAD for some reason—I'll just have her tell you herself in the "feedback post."
The OTHER big challenge with this set is that I didn't feel "comfortable" writing Kay having ONLY experienced her in two scenes, so ... using YOUR two scenes—where she was written ACCURATELY and AUTHENTICALLY—that seemed preferable to eviscerating her character due to inexperience of her and lack of knowledge ... because ... there COULD have been a situation where I wrote her SO poorly and just out of character for YOU and what YOU know about her that I could have broken your immersion from THAT angle, and ... then we would have had to do some stupid "mind wipe" bullshit to retcon it away ... so THAT was tough ...
... but THEN I thought that it would be SUPER hilarious and engaging and entertaining for you to get Nancy's honest "hot takes" about Kay ...
Okay ... IF I had to do it over ... I would have just used your dialogue and slapped it on top of a different picture gallery. That would have been THE PERFECT solution! Oh ... I WISHED that I had done that!
ALL of your complaints about recycling scenes YOU wrote and seeing the same pictures again and again and NOT finding them arousing the second time—100% fair and understandable!
Okay ... 100% understandable, but ... only 85% fair, because a "normal person" would have been okay with seeing some AMAZING PICTURES again with different dialogue ...
But ...
I'd consider this a moderate success
I'll take that as "win" and chalk that one up in the "wins" column ...
FUUUUCcccckkkk! I just WISHED that I had thought to swap out the Kay galleries for you! I—WRONGLY—assumed that my added text would have been enough to keep you immersed, but ... I get it—I GET IT ... it IS *really* easy to lose engagement and arousal when you know EXACTLY what is coming ... I'm sorry about that, man!
But OH WELL! It's done and IN THE PAST!
When *I* lose immersion during a set—which I did MANY times while I was playing my own set last night ... I start thinking about the NEXT SET that I am going to write, which ... I BASICALLY figured out the REST of the outline and major plot points for Part 2: "Paying Kay a Visit".
But the "good parts" of this set were REALLY good!
You strengthened your bond with Nancy.
The cucking scenes were well-written.
The premise of the "secret masturbation session" was hott.
You enjoyed the story.
It just REALLY SUCKS that 2/3 of the masturbation session scenes were DUDS for you!
For the third part, now this one, I really enjoyed. It's what the second part should have been if I'm honest.
That's 100% correct! I WISH I would have thought to swap out the pictures!
ALSO ... and this is something that brian does ... WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE ... PLEASE add a little section to your rules for Kay that includes "galleries you would like to see" of her ... I am NOT going to go back and read through EVERY SET you and Slut have exchanged to see which galleries of Kay you have and have not seen, which ... apparently ... if you have to see the same gallery twice—then that set is just FUCKED FROM THE START! SOooo ... if QUICKLY previewing a set "doesn't ruin it for you," (like you don't need a complete 100% surprise), then ... having a list of like 10 or 12 "safe" galleries of Kay that you have NOT SEEN *would* be pretty helpful ... For Nancy, you haven't played with her much, so ... I just won't use repeat galleries of Nancy for you in sets that I write with her (as I would for any other player) ...
The new set is going to have a COMPLETELY different vibe. That last one was an intense, immersive, VERY DESCRIPTIVE story thing, but ... THAT shit takes a while to write, lol, and I'm GOOD for a while writing that style ...
So THIS NEXT ONE will be more "traditional"—except with LOTS of dialogue—between myself, Nancy, and Kay ... VERY few descriptions. No planned "story sections" ... and the galleries I found were all "doubles", so ... PLENTY of pictures to keep things moving!
So ... VERY different vibe. I am EXCITED about the story! I think you are REALLY going to like it! Should be WAY faster and easier to write, so ... HOPEFULLY none of this 26 hour shit again ... which was MOSTLY me just writing "story stuff" and extra details ... FASTER pace. Easier to write. Should be LOTS OF FUN!
AND ... since we had our little cucking/Kay worship session ... NOW you know the background and more of the insights and feelings Nancy has about Kay, which ... SHOULD make this NEXT PART of the story VERY INTERESTING for you!
I'm EXCITED to write it! I'll get started on it tonight and/or tomorrow. And I don't have much else going on, so ... HOPEFULLY I can knock this one out in less than 12 hours—I think I might even be able to do EIGHT considering the galleries are already chosen (MAYBE) AND I won't go into SUPER detail (mostly focusing on dialogue) AND I have the basic plot already figured out AS WELL AS I was thinking up jokes to include in certain sections during my run the other day, and ... then ALSO did a fair bit of planning last night, so ...
I *do* have a fairly specific request for your return set, but ... I KNOW you "aren't a writer", but ... I have a LITTLE "homework"/writing prompt idea that I THINK will actually go a LONG WAY towards helping you write the return set, so ... I'll describe that in the "after the set", and ... if you think the idea sucks and/or don't want to do it, then ... you can always just say "no."
Okay. Glad you liked it—I gotta GO!
-Fatts
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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First, a thing I forgot: The name of the girl you asked me about: She's Melissa Moore.
TOTALLY understandable, but ... the TEXT had SO MUCH MORE "value added", like ... the original material YOU provided ... I must have 4x or 5x-ed the original value of what was there with all of my extra commentary and story telling, so ... I thought that would have made a MUCH LARGER DIFFERENCE ... than it did.
You know, I *might* play through that second part another day, but didn't really feel like it at the time.
I guess you're "too visual," or ... an "unimaginative RETARD" as someone ELSE once put it
Yeah . I can imagine some things, like the whole Nancy cucking scene, but visual stimulation does a LOT for me.
One of the main drivers for why I chose to include the feedback in a SET, was because I wanted NANCY to be the one to give you the feedback. You're in this unique relationship with HER. Sure—*I* can tell you what I like and what does and does not work, but ... then that would be ME telling you that.
As I said, including like a section with feedback is fine, but any more than that, it just feels lazy, at least to me. It often feels like "Meh, I don't have an idea for a set, so I'll just write feedback, put some images, and call it a day", which, as I said, I know for a fact that's NOT you.
Also, you're lucky we have similar taste in women
The OTHER big challenge with this set is that I didn't feel "comfortable" writing Kay having ONLY experienced her in two scenes, so ... using YOUR two scenes—where she was written ACCURATELY and AUTHENTICALLY—that seemed preferable to eviscerating her character due to inexperience of her and lack of knowledge ... because ... there COULD have been a situation where I wrote her SO poorly and just out of character for YOU and what YOU know about her that I could have broken your immersion from THAT angle, and ... then we would have had to do some stupid "mind wipe" bullshit to retcon it away ... so THAT was tough ...
Well, as I said, I really liked the third section, so you did that part well
Have you seen ANY of these?
I have seen none of the Nancy galleries, but I've seen the first Kay J one. To not turn this into an endless conversation of "have you seen this? Yes. Okay... Have you seen this?" , I haven't seen this one used in a set: https://www.pornpics.com/galleries/glam ... -16139273/
I don't think I've seen the one I chose my favourite Kay J pic previously either.
ALSO ... and this is something that brian does ... WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE ... PLEASE add a little section to your rules for Kay that includes "galleries you would like to see" of her
You know, I actually had Kay J named as "Goddess" in my rules for a long while. I just eventually got kinda bored, as she was basically in all my sets. I also had a long while ago some top favourites list, which, again, made them be spammed in all the sets I had. I'm the type of person who enjoys variety over everything else. So having all sets have the same 2-3 girls eventually gets really boring for me.
apparently ... if you have to see the same gallery twice—then that set is just FUCKED FROM THE START!
Actually, not entirely true. I don't mind seeing the same gallery used in different sets written by different people. I only get bored if it's overused in the same set.
I *do* have a fairly specific request for your return set, but ... I KNOW you "aren't a writer", but ... I have a LITTLE "homework"/writing prompt idea that I THINK will actually go a LONG WAY towards helping you write the return set, so ... I'll describe that in the "after the set", and ... if you think the idea sucks and/or don't want to do it, then ... you can always just say "no."
Well, I already had some faint ideas for the next set for you, but we'll see. Maybe I can combine your idea with mine
@Reptil, thanks for the set . I'll play it in the coming days.
@everyone, just so you all know, I'll be on vacation for like a week or so, so my set playing/writing times might be more irregular during this time
I actually found some alone time today and played it. Now, this one, I enjoyed a lot! Loved the tone throughout the set, and also loved the girls you've chosen. I recognize Melena and Leah Gotti, but I don't think I recognize anyone else, so let me know if you remember any of their names!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Also nice to hear that I did well with writing the humiliation as that's not something I'm very much into personally. I just went back and found the galleries again and the names of the other women were Blake Eden, Nina North and Molly Mae. Have a nice vacation!
You know, I *might* play through that second part another day, but didn't really feel like it at the time.
Fair. The sets will keep. A well-written set is the kind of thing you can return to easily a year or two later and replay it, because you have MOSTLY forgotten all of the forgettable details! Obviously, the major plot twists aren't something you usually forget, but ... yeah, you can always come back to it later ...
Yeah . I can imagine some things, like the whole Nancy cucking scene, but visual stimulation does a LOT for me.
You and EVERY man! But ... for some it's more than others, and ... yeah. I just think you are more on the "visual end" of that spectrum ...
Also, you're lucky we have similar taste in women
Yes ... It's easier to write for someone when that is the case ... I had a friend (Bjorn13) once who preferred his ladies thicker, so ... when THAT sort of thing happens, I just scroll through their list of favorites and find the one or two that I *ALSO* think is hot! Nancy was probably too thin for Bjorn ... though he DID include her in sets for ME, which ... was SUPER awesome, because Bjorn was an AMAZING writer! Best WRITTEN (not necessarily "most arousing" or "most fun") set I ever played was a LONG ASS immersive "story" set ... it was more like an erotic novel with pictures (I think I got so into it that I even cried a bit at one part—no joke ... it was AMAZING! ) ... Anyway ... I think we settled on Ariel (Piper Fawn) as our best "mutual favorite" ... because she wasn't too thin for Bjorn and wasn't too thick for me, lol! But Ecik tends to like his ladies on the thicker side (though not BBW ) ... however ... Ecik isn't TOO picky and neither am I ... well-written overcomes a LOT for me ...
I also LOVED the ending, that was SO mean from Nancy.
I KNEW you would love that ... which is WHY SHE DID IT!
I also enjoyed the "imagining" of the cucking too. Very creative!
You mentioned this in the original feedback—which I appreciated VERY much!
Which made it ALL THE MORE DISAPPOINTING that I FUCKED THINGS UP by recycling the same photos! ALL of that work, and ... I could have EASILY taken 30-60 minutes to replace the photos from those two Kay scenes ... and THEN it would have been a GRAND SLAM!
Would you like me to do that? I mean ... not right this second, but ... that writing was SO good and took SO LONG ... swapping the pictures is relatively EASY TO DO in comparison, and ... then you didn't really get to play those two scenes—only the third scene, so ... I guess just let me know. I'm not going to redo the Nancy in the bedroom scenes/pics, but ... the "masturbating in front of the screen" while we were "sitting on the bed" ... THOSE scenes where I just recycled your Kay J pics from YOUR set ... those two ... IF you want to replay them ... let me know, and I can copy/paste and replaced with new pics. Like I wrote—probably an hour or less of work, and ... if that makes the difference between "being able to play them" and NOT, then ... yeah ... probably worth ("sunk cost fallacy be damned!" ) ... of course ... THAT would be "lazy" in my opinion, but ... more of a "salvage job" than a rewrite—*I* would say ... and ... I could probably write a "new" Nancy intro scene for the opener, then have you "revisit" those two scenes (JUST the scenes and NOT the intermission stories ) then ... write an outro scene and call it a set. Let me know if that sounds like something you would want ...
Well, as I said, I really liked the third section, so you did that part well
No, like ... reusing those pics was basically the fatal flaw that killed the set for you ... Had I just replaced those with new ones, I think it would have been PERFECT, but ... if you can't stay engaged enough during Acts 3 and 4 of a five act set, well ... then ... yeah! That's sort of a fail ...
But it is VERY encouraging to know that I DID, basically, get EVERYTHING ELSE CORRECT ... Again ... it's just so sad that a relatively EASY thing to correct is a mistake that I made which derailed what WOULD HAVE BEEN a PERFECT MASTERPIECE!
You know, I actually had Kay J named as "Goddess" in my rules for a long while. I just eventually got kinda bored, as she was basically in all my sets. I also had a long while ago some top favourites list, which, again, made them be spammed in all the sets I had. I'm the type of person who enjoys variety over everything else. So having all sets have the same 2-3 girls eventually gets really boring for me.
I understand that.
I got your PM ... at some point when I was searching galleries, I went through and saved a large group of Kay J galleries to use for future sets for you. I'll dump that one that you said you have already seen, and ... I will be replacing it with one you suggested ... Also, there were SEVERAL that I had already sort of fingered to use for you in future sets that were a part of the list that you sent to me, so ... THAT's cool!
When I search for galleries, there are basically three criteria that I use:
Does the model's expression/mood match the tone of the conversation/dialogue I want to have for the scene. (E.g., if Nancy is having a "happy" conversation, don't choose a gallery where she only smiles once.)
Does the background match the setting of the scene. (E.g., don't choose a forest for a bedroom meeting)
Are the poses FIRE and does the set include a bunch of "Oh, my!" pics.
Yeah ... If *I* were you, I would keep the "goddess" label off of Kay J ... for ALL of the reasons you just mentioned!
I'm a character writer. I enjoy writing characters. I would LOVE to include her in our current narrative, so ... if you're only getting her in sets from ME—and no one else—then ... PROBABLY it won't be "too much", and ... PROBABLY you won't get burned out on her until AFTER her and Nancy's plot arcs/storylines finish up ...
I'm the type of person who enjoys variety over everything else.
I'm the type of person who enjoys "story" and "role play" and "characters" over everything else, so ... THAT is part of the reason I have been working so hard to engage you in my STORIES (and ALSO they are SUPER FUN for me to write ) ... so that—at least when WE exchange —I can write a set of recurring characters, which ... if I had to use a different model for EVERY scene and EVERY SET for you ... Yeah ... we just wouldn't exchange very much ... because those aren't the kind of sets that *I* like to write, but ... I think we're both on the same page and in a good place now, and ... I'm EXCITED for what are set exchange will look like over the coming weeks!
apparently ... if you have to see the same gallery twice—then that set is just FUCKED FROM THE START!
Actually, not entirely true. I don't mind seeing the same gallery used in different sets written by different people. I only get bored if it's overused in the same set.
That ... is actually a VERY GOOD detail to know!
Well, I already had some faint ideas for the next set for you, but we'll see. Maybe I can combine your idea with mine
I can always make a request; you can always say, "No." THAT is how it works. Don't write a set that you DON'T WANT TO WRITE! I have an idea which I think is pretty good and will help you to write the set I would like to receive ... but ... see above.
Two other things I forgot to mention in my last post...
First, when *I* played my set, I ended up edging 69 times. (Nice! ) I got SUPER distracted and lost immersion half way through, so ... I think it was 4 hours from when I started playing my set to when I ended, which ... probably like a 90 minute hard break in there (while I dreamt up ideas for the next set ) ... I did 30 edges ... LONG BREAK ... and then ... 39 edges, and ... Nancy making me edge over and over again to Kay's tits basically "broke my dick!" I edged so much, that I got put into a relatively long refractory period, and ... it took a lot (and a decent break like 20 minutes) before I was finally able to get hard again, so ... at around the time that I got "pissed off" in the set and "took over control from Nancy" ... is when I quit following my rules ("Dom Mode" ) ... and then it was 20 minutes before I "finished things up" ... So ... apparently ... I am MUCH MORE impressive "in print" (in the story that I wrote) than what I ended up being "in real life." BUT ... I DID "get there in the end." And while Kay's tits ARE magnificent ... had she been flashing her ass more OR if it was a story that *I* was "immersed in" (instead of one that I wrote and knew everything that would happen )—I probably would have gotten hard quicker and more easily IN SPITE OF being "near my endurance limit" ...
So, yeah ... OTHER THAN "giving you the update" on what happened on MY end ... the main point of this is that I do NOT have the edging endurance of some other guys ... 70-80 edges in a set is approaching my upper limit, and ... If a set has 80 edges, there is a 100% chance that at some point I will enter into a refractory period of 20-30 minutes which will COMPLETELY destroy the flow and break immersion for me ... 20-50 edges in a set is still a VERY GOOD time for me ... I'm not hoping to be "edged as much as possible" in every set—unlike SOME guys around here ... I think my FAVORITE set would be one where I cum at the end of every scene—and then just basically break it up into 4-5 "mini sets" that I can spread out and play over the course of a few days, but ... for a good STORY set ... having something longer where I just cum once at the end is TOTALLY FINE ... and ... probably only hit me with something in that 70-80+ range if the GOAL is to low-key "punish me" and "wear me out" or "endurance check" me or something ... which I am NOT "opposed" to that, but ... 80+ edges WILL turn into a 4 hour affair, because I WILL—inevitably—go into a refractory period SEVERAL times, which means I'll be taking 30-40 minute breaks in the middle of the set to rest ... because my dick goes soft and I lose immersion ... and then maybe I can catch a second wind and edge 10 times—and then I lose arousal/immersion again, and then the fatigue means I'm sitting there for another 15 minutes stroking my limp dick looking at the same picture waiting to get hard again thinking about the next set I'm going to write, but ... if the pacing is good and I am immersed, aroused, and excited ... 60 or so edges is pretty good for me ... it's just that around 70 and up where I REALLY start to struggle, but ... I would say 20-40 is a good target ... but anyway ...
The other thing was ... Did you want a "nice" longer-ish outro "story section"/cuddle scene (at some point) where Nancy gets to be the "middle spoon?" SHE obviously wants that, so ... maybe I just write that scene/story ANYWAY , but ... if you have NO INTEREST in such a scene after a cucking session with Nancy and I, then ... well, I just won't waste my time writing one!
Alright. I think I responded to everything and completed the correspondence ... I think it's time to get to work writing Part 2 for you!
I STILL have 2 sets to play right now, but ... I know Ecik's set will be like an "all day" or "all afternoon affair", and ... I know your blackmail set will probably be at LEAST two hours (just an ignorant guess ), so ... I just want to "get through" this part of the story ... because this Part 2 set WILL BE another longer-ish set to play (I have 10 galleries chosen that I would like to use), but ... I PLAN to have shorter lines of dialogue and use more pictures, so ... HOPEFULLY it doesn't take as long to write ... but ... THEN I will have "set the stage" for the next part of the narrative with Kay, and ... THEN I hope to go back to writing more "normal length" 4-5 scene sets, but ... just wanting to get a little "world building" in before we launch back into the NEXT part ...
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
Just a quick post since i saw some ppl going on holiday. Enjoy ur holidays / breaks ! Hopefully i get to writing the sets that I planned to. Recently life has been busy + no creativity / urge / inspirations (the real rzn). Thanks for the sets! Will try to find time (once i get the drive) to write and play
So, I had a pretty good plan going in. But then, I got to writing, and … WOW things took a turn! I just had some AMAZING ideas that sort of just happened organically in the story, and … they were ALL amazing, so … I just decided to go with them, so … this set is going to be EXQUISITELY CRUEL for you, Addct … which means that you are probably going to LOVE IT!
I added a few more galleries with this new idea that I had … I STILL have my “main plan” and some more dialogue written out, but … I had enough to release it as a full, “normal length” set, so … I found a good “intermission point”, so … I decided to split “part 2” of this series into two parts, so … THIS will now be part 2 of 3! I think you are gonna LOVE it, and … part 3 of 3 should ONLY CLIMAX HARDER! Enjoy!
Hooray! The day is FINALLY HERE! It's "tomorrow," and we're here to visit Kay and bury the hatchet so that I can FINALLY become close personal friends with a GODDESS!
Yay! I'm SO excited!
Now Addict—REMEMBER! EVERYTHING that you, Fatts, and I did is TOP SECRET ...
Kay must NEVER KNOW!
And if you slip up and tell her, well ...
Things will NOT go so well for YOU!
Now the MOST IMPORTANT THING is for you to NOT EMBARASS ME!
So let ME do most of the talking ... okay!?
"Nancy Ace" is a LADY in the street—but a FREAK IN THE BED!
And we are DEFINITELY in the "street" right now—IN THE STREET, Addict!
So ... Just sort of pretend that crazy shit we did DIDN'T happen—at LEAST for now ...
Just let the ADULTS in the room—Me and Kay—do the talking ...
Fatts: Hey!
Nancy: I'm KIDDING, Fatts!
Oh course YOU are allowed to talk ...
... I just don't want ADDICT saying anything ...
... because he's ALREADY screwed things up enough!
If HE had just made me friends with Kay from the start ... then we wouldn't BE HERE right now ...
INSTEAD he wrote me LAME and made us ENEMIES!
Fatts: But to be fair to Addict ... when he wrote the set featuring Kay, he didn't KNOW how much you liked her and wanted to be friends with her ...
Nancy: THAT'S true ... because *I* didn't know that EITHER ... at least not until part way through that SUPER steamy first scene ...
... where I got thrown around like a rag doll by a BEAUTIFUL GODDESS and got put in my place, and THEN given a mission to cuck her MOST DEVOTED FOLLOWER! ahhh ... it was GLORIOUS! ...
Fatts: So ... Don't you think you should cut hentaiAddcit at least a LITTLE BIT of slack—since he didn't know?
Nancy: No.
Fatts: Nancy!
Nancy shakes her ass at you and Fatts.
Fatts: That ISN'T going to work ... Nancy! ... at least not THIS time ...
Nancy: Too baaaad! I tried!
Fatts: And I LOVED that you tried though ...
Nancy: Fatts can be such a STICK IN THE MUD sometimes, Addict! Don't you think he should lighten up a bit?
Fatts: He's NOT going to agree with you, Nancy ... because *I* was defending him!
Nancy: I thought you "hated" Addict—Fatts!
Nancy once again shakes her ass at Fatts, both teasing and taunting him.
Fatts: LIES and FAKE NEWS! You're a BOOGER—Nancy Ace! Always "stirring the pot" ... I'm onto your shenanigans!
hentaiAddict12345: Are we going to visit Kay soon?
Nancy: SHUT UP, hentaiAddict! Not everything is about YOU! Can't a girl flirt a bit with her boyfriend in a set!? GOD you're selfish ... it's as if this ENTIRE SET was written PURELY for your SEXUAL GRATIFICATION!
The three of you march around the corner and up to the door of Kay's house. She has one of those video doorbell things. Nancy instructs you and Fatts to stand a bit off to the side—just out of view of the camera. Nancy rings the doorbell. After a few seconds, you hear Kay's voice.
Kay: Nancy? I wasn't expecting you ... what do you want?
Nancy: I came to talk—and ... apologize—actually ...
Kay: ... really?
Kay sounds skeptical.
Nancy: Yes! See ... I think we MAY have gotten off on the wrong foot—and ... I was HOPING that we could ... start over?
Kay let's out a long, frustrated sigh. You can tell that she's annoyed. Several long seconds pass. Nancy waits another moment for Kay to respond.
Nancy: Kay?
Kay: I'M STILL THINKING ABOUT IT—NANCY ... GOD ...
Nancy enters the room. She smiles sweetly at Kay. You can tell that she's nervous and that the smile is a bit forced.
Fatts enters the room next. Kay immediately brightens up.
Oh! You brought Fatts with you!
You follow behind next, closing the door behind you.
Kay: What's Addict doing here?
Kay and Nancy both turn to face you. At the same time, they both say, "Addict, go stand in the corner and stroke!" Kay then turns and looks at Nancy, confused. You walk to your familiar spot in the corner of Kay's living room and assume your position.
Nancy: Jinx! You owe me a coke!
Kay incredulously raises a single eyebrow in response. She's not laughing. She doesn't think it's funny. Nancy blushes and looks down—embarrassed. Kay smiles.
Kay: So ... it looks like you brought the whole crew with you today, Nancy ...
Kay glances over at you standing in the corner. You make a display of dutifully doing your required strokes. She smiles—satisifed. Her eyes sweep over to Fatts. Her smile widens into a full-toothed grin. She seems genuinely surprised and delighted that he is here.
Kay: I wasn't expecting so many ... visitors—or ... well ... really anyone for that matter!
Should I put on some coffee—or some tea!?
Nancy: Well, Kay ... it's funny that you should ask that ...
"BOOP!" Nancy points her finger, and a borderless screen suddenly appears ...
Nancy: You see, in DesertFox's GuideMe tease, "Mazes" ...
... when the walker FIRST meets Karissa, they are presented with a choice: coffee or tea.
Nancy: If they choose tea:
You looked like a tea drinker <myName>.
She smiles.
So, tea it is!
The walker will have a slower, relaxing stroking session every time they visit Karissa for the rest of the game ...
Nancy: ... BUT ... if they choose COFFEE:
Coffee! My favorite!
She smiles broadly.
I knew you were a man with lots of energy! Let's get right into it!
The walker will have a faster-paced stroking session with Karissa whenever they see her ...
Nancy: ... and so, the choice you make on your VERY FIRST ENCOUNTER with Karissa is QUITE important—because it dictates the tone of the relationship you will have with her for the rest of the game!
Kay: Fascinating ...
Nancy perks up. She can't believe Kay just expressed an interest in something she said.
Kay: You’re like an encyclopedia—that talks …
Nancy looks like she’s about to cry.
Kay: … except you don’t say things that are boring …
Nancy is now excited. She just received another compliment from “goddess.” She desperately holds in a squeal of delight. Her mind starts to race with all of the new things she might now have in common with Kay.
Nancy: So, you’ve played DesertFox’s Mazes!
Kay: No. I’ve never heard of it.
Nancy is deflated. Another gut punch. Fatts wonders if Kay is just gaslighting Nancy—like she has played it and is just messing with her … but it could also be that she hasn’t and just enjoys being mean to Nancy and watching her melodramatic reactions.
Kay: So, Nancy ... Coffee or tea? Which will it be—since it seems to be SUCH an important decision!
Nancy: Oh ... TEA—definitely tea! Since I came here to "make peace"—tea for SURE!
Kay: I'm sorry, Nancy ...
Kay: ... BUT I DON'T HAVE ANY TEA!!! I only have COFFEE in THIS house!
Nancy is devastated. Things are going HORRIBLY. She can't seem to win Kay's favor no matter what she does. She makes a hand motion, and the screen with Karissa on it closes. She's trying to hang tough, but she seems close to tears again. She wanted SO MUCH for Kay to like her ...
Fatts: I could go for some coffee. I'm always down for a hot cup of java!
Kay: "I knew you were a man with lots of energy!"
And now she's quoting Karissa from "Mazes." Kay really is too cruel.
Fatts: Soooo—if I may ask ... why offer Nancy tea when you don't have any?
Kay: Simple. Because I enjoy offering something to Nancy—just so that I can take it away! Her pouty face when she doesn’t get what she wants—it’s tooooo cute!
Kay keeps her attention on Nancy while she delivers her insult to see Nancy's reaction. She then quickly turns towards Fatts to see his reaction. Fatts is laughing.
Nancy: Fatts!
Fatts: I’m sorry, babe … Kay’s pretty funny … I LIKE her!
Fatts and Kay continue laughing at Nancy's expense. Kay puts her hand on Fatts' shoulder. Fatts recoils and takes a step back. He looks shocked that Kay would make a move on him while laughing at his girlfriend.
Fatts: Hey, Romeo! Not so fast! We still haven’t made peace yet—between the Montagues and the Capulets ...
Kay turns around. She bends over and pulls down her skirt in one motion.
Kay: Come ON—Mercutio! *I* know how you can "make peace" with the Capulets ...
Kay: ... fuck me in front of your GIRLFRIEND—right now!
Kay: If we're lucky, BOTH Nancy and Addict will die by suicide! ... and THEN we can have the WHOLE STAGE to OURSELVES!
Kay's knowledge of Shakespeare is impressive. (Well not THAT impressive! EVERYONE knows the plot of "Romeo and Juliet"—FATTS! ) Kay closes her eyes, fully expecting Fatts to insert himself into her at any moment.
[This is long. Don't count your strokes on this one. ]
Fatts glances over at Nancy. You can sense that she is COMPLETELY torn. On ONE hand, she would LOVE NOTHING MORE more than to be cucked by her GODDESS. Through your connection, you can feel her arousal from your corner of the room. It is INCREDIBLY strong—as high as the peaks from yesterday ... The part of her that is a tease girl wants to fully give in to this fantasy and COMPLETELY let her inhibitions go ... she wants to be cucked. Right here. Right now—and HARD ... she feels like you and her getting cucked by Fatts and Kay right now would strengthen your bond like nothing else ...
... but on the OTHER hand, Nancy knows that if Fatts cucks her with Kay right now without any pushback, she will INSTANTLY—most likely—lose ALL of Kay's respect and possibly FOREVER ... Nancy is VERY afraid that if this thing happens, she will PERMANENTLY be thought of as a "cuck" in Kay's mind and will NEVER be able to rise above that label ... which means that she will NEVER be even CLOSE to the "same level" as Kay, and so they will NEVER BECOME FRIENDS! ...
Nancy is panicking. She doesn't know what to do. "Help, Fatts! " Fatts sees her emotional state and knows EXACTLY what she's thinking. He smiles at her affectionately. He turns back to Kay ...
Fatts: LADY MACBETH!!
"WHACK!" Fatts pulls back his hand and gives Kay a HARD swat on the buttock. "OH! " Kay was NOT expecting that.
Kay turns around. She's blushing a bit. She didn't anticipate getting turned down so forcefully. It caught her off guard. She's a little embarrassed—but also a little aroused at how Fatts took charge of the situation—not to mention HIS knowledge of Shakespeare.
Fatts: And here *I* thought that *I* was the "naughty one" ... but you're FAR more "naughty" than me! I should call you, "Puck!" Because YOU are SUCH a troublemaker—miss!
Kay: I'll go make us ALL some coffee ...
Kay exits the room. She's as giddy as a schoolgirl. How long has it been since she's flirted with such a confident and intelligent man—and in front of his GIRLFRIEND, too! SO spicy! Kay heads straight for the kitchen. She doesn't even notice you standing in the corner stroking yourself. She's completely forgotten you. It's like you don't exist. You are the furthest thing from her mind.
Meanwhile, Nancy is trying to compose herself. She can't believe how close she came to ... disaster!? Heaven? She WANTED Fatts to take Kay RIGHT THERE—but ... at the same time ... she is SO RELIEVED that he didn't ...
She has mixed feelings. You can sense that she is confused—but still panicked ... Her heart is racing. Her pussy is wet. She's trying to center herself—but she just quite can't ...
Nancy: Fatts ...
Fatts: Babe?
Nancy: Fatts ...
Fatts: You good, Nance?
[Multi-spoiler extended text pic. Don't count your strokes. Just read and vibe. ]
Nancy: Thank you. Thank you SO MUCH, Fatts!
I was weak—about to break! ... I WANTED you to take her—RIGHT THERE ... FROM BEHIND!
In front of ME ... in front of ADDICT—OH ... he would have been SO JEALOUS, FATTS!
Watching his GODDESS have sex with ... someone ELSE!
And you! YOU don't even LIKE HER that much!
Fatts: Well ... she's growing on me ...
Nancy: For Addict's sake, I'm glad you didn't, but ... NO! WHAT AM I SAYING!?! He would have been MISERABLE, but ... SO turned ON, and ... ME ... *I* would have felt that and gotten EVEN WETTER! FUCK ... I would have gotten on my hands and knees, and crawled over to Kay's feet and started licking her toes while you and Kay cucked BOTH me AND Addict ... Oh, FATTS! You worthless LOUT! WHY didn't you give in to your hedonistic LUSTS!?! DAMN your fidelity—and coolness under pressure—but ... had you ONLY—
Fatts gets down on one knee. He takes his hand and cups it over Nancy's mouth. She stops talking. She looks at him. He looks at her. Nancy's tense. Fatts takes his other hand and starts fingering Nancy's pussy. She closes her eyes. Her shoulders relax. She starts to calm down. Her breathing starts to become more even. You can feel her stress dissipating and her arousal slowly building. Nancy's sexual energy was erratic and unfocused before, but now, it's starting to converge. You can sense that her thoughts are not so scattered. Her affection for Fatts is beginning to center her.
Fatts: You were getting pretty crazy just then ... talking COMPLETELY out of your ass, babe ...
Fatts removes his hand from Nancy's mouth. He continues fingering her sensually. Nancy is relaxed now. She's calmed down and thinking more clearly.
Nancy: I know, but ... I REALLY want to suck Goddess's toes while you fuck her from behind while Addict watches from the corner ...
Fatts: I understand ... and I want that for you too, babe!
Nancy: He and I would BOTH be getting cucked, but ... *I* would STILL be above HIM ... because at least *I* would be allowed to lick Goddess' BEAUTIFUL TOES ...
Nancy: ... and THEN! I could STARE at him—while I'm on ALL FOURS with GODDESS' FOOT IN MY MOUTH ... and even though we're BOTH getting cucked by our FAVORITE PEOPLE ... HE would STILL be THE WORST—AND ...
Fatts: FUCK, Nancy ... you are a TRUE degenerate —but ... eyes on the prize, kiddo! EYES ON THE PRIZE! We'll get there! One thing at a time ...
[Another multi-spoiler extended text pic. Don't count your strokes. Just read and masturbate. ]
Nancy: FUCK me, Fatts ... Fuck me RIGHT HERE ... on goddess' COUCH!
You were RIGHT, Fatts ... You made the RIGHT CALL, babe ... I want to thank you—and clear my head! Kay has gotten me SUPER crazy ... I can't think straight, but ... Sex ALWAYS clears my mind ...
Fatts turns around to face you. His cock is rock hard. It's dripping precum. You look down at your dick. It's limp—as always.
Fatts smiles at you. He's laughing. You're SO pathetic. You sit there and stroke silently while the man you WISH you were is getting attention from TWO women you would LOVE to get with—but cannot. Your inadequacies are overwhelming to them, making you disgustingly repulsive.
Fatts shakes his head with pity and disappointment as he looks at you. He turns around to face Nancy. Fatts knows you being there—in the room—watching and feeling SO helpless will ONLY make himself feel bigger and larger than life. He gets even harder.
[Another multi-spoiler ... you know the drill. ]
Fatts gets on his knees. Nancy turns on her side, facing both of her holes towards him. He can have his pick. Fatts chooses Nancy's pussy. It's DRIPPING WET. Her asshole is dry. Fatts wonders if you are revolting enough to lick Nancy's asshole. That would make it wet, but ... Fatts doesn't want your saliva anywhere near his dick. It's too repugnant to him. He inserts himself into Nancy's cunt.
"OOoohhh!" Nancy exclaims with her eyes locked onto yours. You can tell she moaned louder than she needed to. She was just making a point. She wanted to remind you how excited a lady gets when a MAN inserts himself into her. It's a sound you may observe but will never cause.
Fatts is now thrusting forcefully into Nancy. Your connection to Fatts means you can ALMOST feel what he's feeling. Her pussy is SO tight. Nancy glares at you. Her eyes flash green. Suddenly, you are cut off from Fatts. You can no longer feel what Fatts is feeling.
Nancy looks back up at Fatts. From your position, you have a clear line of sight to Nancy's face. You can look at each other freely. However, all you can see of Fatts is his back and the gyrations of his ass as he pounds Nancy's pussy.
Fatts: Like ... I want to STAY in this position and keep fucking you, but ... we don't have a mirror, and I would ALSO like to watch Addict stroke his pathetic excuse for a cock! I want to be able to see how sad and gross and jealous he is as he watches ME, and ... can I ALSO get a better view of your ass? Like ... I want one of those close-up h-game style views where I can FULLY see your ass like if I was looking from my crouch, but ... then ALSO see my penis as it's thrusting in and out ... and can you make it, like ... a picture-in-picture sort of thing, like ... where sad little Addict is in the CORNER—just like he is NOW!?!
Nancy: Sure thing, babe! Your wish is MY COMMAND!
Nancy's eyes glow bright green. Then Fatts' eyes start to glow. A pair of eyes appear half a meter above Fatts' head. They stare at you. Fatts' crotch also starts to glow green. The faint light lets you know there is somehow a pair of eyes down there.
For a moment, you feel Nancy open up your channel with Fatts. She leaves it open just long enough so that you can feel Fatts getting even harder from his arousal at cucking you. He's incredibly hard. There is SO MUCH BLOOD rushing to Fatts' cock. His cock is so hard that it's almost painful—and he didn't even take a viagra. Cucking you is enough—MORE THAN enough. Nancy quickly closes the channel. You can no longer feel the inside of her pussy.
She stares at you once again, making eye contact. It's eerie not being able to see her pupils. She seems otherworldly—SO FAR above you ...
Nancy: Cum when you want! I can FEEL how hard you are ... you're likely to have a SUPERGASM! I want to FEEL THAT!
Nancy begins trembling in anticipation. All you can see is the back of Fatts thrusting into Nancy again and again—and Nancy's devilish smile as she watches you feebly stroke your limp dick.
Nancy: Show Addict how a MAN fucks a cunt, Fatts!:
Fatts smiles. You can feel his eyes on you, thanks to Nancy's techno-sorcery. He's feeling maximally superior. You're lower than a cum stain, and he's about to cum inside of Nancy.
He slows his pace. He's approaching the Edge. He's trying to ride it. Nancy smiles and tightens up. She starts gyrating her hips as well. It catches Fatts off guard. She pulls Fatts over the edge and down a cliff into orgasm.
The remote viewing eyes burst and disappear in a flash of green light. It seems Fatts' orgasm overloaded Nancy's pleasure centers, causing some of her magical circuitry to overload. It was too much—too much pleasure. She couldn't maintain control.
Fatts continues to thrust. His cock eventually stops spurting. He pulls out of Nancy. Some of his cum oozes out of her pussy. Creampie.
Flick EACH of your nipples TWENTY TIMES! That's 40 flicks in total! Are they sensitive, Addict? DON'T wimp out! HARD flicks so that I can see the PAIN flicker in your eyes! *I* DON'T CARE! if it hurts! THAT'S THE POINT!
How about this: STOP stroking. Put your hands behind your back, and repeat after me:
I'm a little beta bitch-boy who's not worthy to stroke. But I want to watch a MAN eat out your pussy, Goddess. PLEASE let me watch FATTS worship your pussy while I stroke in the corner!
Good! Now say that 9 more times! I want to hear you say that out loud ten times in total, and if you stutter or misspeak, you are to START AGAIN from the beginning of the quote ... You may stare at my pussy as much as you like, but you KEEP YOUR HANDS BEHIND YOUR BACK, and you will NOT STROKE YOUR DICK, until you say that quote TEN TIMES!
Now, PINCH YOUR NIPPLES AGAIN! I think the counting down backwards from 20 was the PERFECT amount of time ...
Stroking in MY presence while FATTS pleasures my pussy with his tongue would be QUITE the treat for you—huh, pet?
STILL no stroking! ANOTHER 20-count while pinching ...
No ... stroking while Fatts pleasures me—I think that's FAR too generous for a bottom feeder like YOU ...
Now stroke freely, Addict. I'll allow it.
You may stroke for as long as you want at whatever speed that you want [for this pic only] ... the sound of your stroking is rhythmic and relaxing to me ...
... it allows me to zone out and daydream about how Fatts' tongue might feel along my clit and labia ...
How does it feel being in his shadow, toy? When I touch myself tonight, I'll think of HIM—but I NEVER think of you!
I think I can tolerate Nancy for a chance to make a play at Fatts ...
... but DAMN ... a quality guy like HIM will be HARD to "steal away" ...
A REAL MAN, like Fatts, has PRINCIPLES and STANDARDS ... which are TWO THINGS which are UTTERLY FOREIGN to you!
Still ... Nancy's not ALL bad ...
... she is CERTAINLY fun to FUCK WITH!
Kay rubs herself. The idea of one-upping Nancy in front of Fatts seems to be turning her on.
I suppose I should run this coffee out to everybody ...
While "war" might be fun, I think it would be WAY too much of a hassle ... Nancy is NOT worth my time—OR effort ...
I suppose I could "give peace a chance"—and at least hear Nancy out and see what she has to say ...
... and of COURSE extract AS MUCH AS I CAN out of that COCK-WHORE! She seemed fucking DESPERATE for ... something ...
NEVER trust a girl who is trying too hard, Addict! They are ALWAYS up to something!
I feel like Fatts and Nancy are the type of people who take sugar and cream in their coffee ... Me? I drink it BLACK—of course!
Kay bends over the counter, pouring the perfect amounts of cream and sugar into Nancy and Fatts' beverages.
You have TWO MINUTES to stroke to my pussy at whatever metronome speed that you wish. [Set a timer.] After that, we're BOTH going back out there ... Now GO! STROKE LIKE YOU MEAN IT!
Kay sets the three coffees on a tray and leaves the kitchen.
Of course she didn't get one for you. Cucks aren't allowed to drink coffee when they are on the clock. That kind of pleasure is only afforded to alphas and guests.
How did you enjoy the double-length (two gallery) final scene with Kay? Still glad you lifted the length-of-scene and character restrictions?
How was the cucking sex scene with me and Nancy? It wasn’t planned … it just seemed like a good idea at the time, considering how much you praised my “cucking scene work” in the last set … … and the story just seemed to go in that direction …
Kay was out of the room. Nancy was horny and upset. I knew sex helps to calm her down. If she was feeling insecure—because Kay just made a pass at me —that would help to bolster her confidence. (It didn’t go in that direction when I was writing it, but … it COULD have …) … ALSO … that Nancy “ass out, double holes on the couch pic” … like … FUCK … I saw that was coming up, and I was like … “I just REALLY want to fuck Nancy right now …” and then I thought of all of the above things I just mentioned in this paragraph—and ALSO how YOU would appreciate getting cucked … so, it was NOT planned—but I was like: “I should just have sex with Nancy right now. It is the correct decision … for … EVERYONE! ” … So I did. Hoped it was as good for you as it was for me!
It was BASICALLY just the three pics … I am HOPING that the quality of the pics and the writing were enough (and then also NOT having to count strokes for those) … it was NOT planned, and … I found double galleries for Nancy AND Kay for that “living room” scene, and … I only used about HALF of the pics for each of those, because I was saving the rest for the rest of the dialogue and set, so … Part 3 will pick up right where we left off in those galleries (naked Nancy and Kay in her panties). We’ll have them “finish their conversation” (which is mostly somewhat written) as I have planned … and THEN I have FIVE more galleries (plus some “extras” ) to finish out the now “part 3 of 3” for this series/scene. So … THAT is my plan, and … I have some stuff to do tomorrow, but … finishing this set is my TOP priority as far as set writing goes … it was nice that I was able to find a good break and chunked this one into two separate sets, so … THAT is nice!
RETURN SET …
So, I read the post saying you were going on vacation. Not sure when all that goes down and what your schedule is like, but … here is what *I* am thinking right now …
IF you manage to find the time in the next day or two to play this set AND write me a return set—GO FOR IT, man! I am DOWN to get a little something back!
IF NOT—that is TOTALLY FINE! Enjoy your vacation! We can get caught up once you get back …
I will probably have part 3 of 3 done in the next 48 hours. This one took me 11 hours to write (and edit). [Dialogues ALWAYS take more time ...] I am HALF WAY through what I had originally planned, so … 11 or so more hours—I *should* be able to find that in the next 48 hours yes: …
SOOOOoooooo … IF you have time to both play it AND write me a set … THIS is what I want:
NO SCENES WITH KAY … YET! I want to finish this little series first, then … I hope the next FIVE sets you send me after that include Kay, but … WE “got the jump on Kay” (after SHE got the jump on US ) … I want to finish out this little story FIRST … and THEN the ball is in your court, man!
What you CAN DO, however, is … write me scenes with Nancy reacting to ANY and ALL of this? I guess we’re keeping the “blackmail” story on the back burner for now. I DO want to come back to that, but … I can REALLY only get into ONE involved storyline at a time …
So, you are limited to Nancy, and … there is PLENTY to react to … INCLUDING ANYTHING that happened in Parts 1 and 2, since … they have already happened, but … I want to put ANOTHER option out there for you …
That Guerlain dishing on Nancy sharing that Nancy had a crush on you … THAT was kind of fun—and girls TALK, so … IF you wanted to have one of Kay’s friends “drop by” and “spill the tea” a bit—ANYTHING about Kay—INCLUDING why she likes me … just let’s pretend that it happens BEFORE Part 2 and the “visit to the house” … because THAT is an “ongoing story,” so … the NANCY stuff could reference ANYTHING, but … just place any NON-nancy stuff (with “Kay’s friends”) chronologically BEFORE the visit … (I am ALL IN on any Kay lore or background or details ...)
And, of course … if you are just too busy—that’s FINE! I will post part 3. You’ll get caught up and play them when you can, and … THEN you will have EVERYTHING with NO restrictions, but … I am just EAGER for more “Kay content” (though WITHOUT KAY for right now) … although … you are NOT an idiot, so … if you can work it to do some Kay scene POST her beating down Nancy but BEFORE the house call—go for it, but … *I* just don’t want my plans fucked up is all—cause I’m in the middle of my story and have the rest mapped out, but … I am EAGER to start receiving sets from you on this plot arc too … because it has been SO FUN!
But that’s the deal. I’ll hear back from you when I do. Enjoy the vacation, man!
-Fatts
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
But I get it. I wish these girls really could tie me down and strap a machine to me, in real life. The toys that are out there, in real life, aren't quite right. And they can't automatically edge. At least, I haven't found any, yet. The closest is e-stim, I guess. I wish...
Stroke faster
Stroke to this image for 30 extra seconds
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But ... it is OPTIONAL ... for YOU! 
We are getting ALL of the “heavy narrative” stuff out of the way FIRST so that the TEASE can progress—at a GOOD pace—and NOT slow down or get interrupted by STORY, so … This seemed like a good way of doing it. 
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Ha!
… Anyway … Angela White was a goddess, but … Her and I didn’t get along for the LONGEST time, because we had different visions for how things should be, and we were both SUPER powerful, and then rivals, and there was a big struggle 
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That would be SO boring! 
I do NOT WANT TO KNOW! 
—and there are going to be some AMAZING adventures REAL SOON! 
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Quite frankly … it’s an ABUSE OF POWER! 
Because who is looking out for THEIR interests and making sure my sisteren are NOT getting abused 
