FEEDBACK - The B.N.W.O. Trap

[666]

Hello everyone, just published my latest tease, which is something quite different to what I've done before. Let me know if you like it, or maybe if you want a sequel?

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=76977

666

[666]

Okay, well judging by the score I will take that as a resounding NO.

Ha ha ha...

[biggestloser3]

I think you have a good start, but i almost think this could be better as a flash tease, given that we could have made choices on how honest we wanted to be when asked questions, get feel like we have a choice in the story.... i do know that flash teases are harder to make, either way i think you got a good start since this seemed more like a set-up then a actual tease

[666]

Thanks, yes I agree it wasn't really a tease but more of a story illustrated with pictures... and yes maybe it could be something if it was a flash tease. But never mind.... maybe I will write the story one day.