Wow, I was not expecting another set so soon. Once I saw there was a set waiting for me, I got quite horny but I still had to wait almost a whole day before I was able to play it. So by the time I started, I really didn't need a warm-up haha.
Emily's outfit and poses in the first part of the set were so much better than last time (and also better than in the last part of this set) and I've definitely started coming around now. I hope she enjoyed watching me.
The game itself was great fun too, even though I got quite lucky with the wheel considering it barely affected me (or does that mean I got unlucky?). Had to double my rules if there was red for Putri's part (there was no red), had to double my edges for Kenzie (only one edge trigger), do twenty strokes before my rules for Molly (these actually did something), and double my edges if Michaela was wearing red (she wasn't).
Still, by the time I got to Emily again, I was feeling desperate and was really hoping she would let me cum. But she was still going on about my rules not being up to par with a lack of a model list (I didn't think I would be expected to change it so quickly :/) so she denied me yet again. Last time it felt deserved, but this time it frustrated me (not necessarily in a bad way).
All in all, I enjoyed this set a lot more than the previous one (might also be because I was much hornier too). The women were more or less all my type (Putri was actually one of the girls I liked the least this time around). So thank you for taking the time to write this set. I've also updated my rules so that it now includes a model list, so I hope you're happy now :) (I kept putting it off since I don't look to much at 'traditional' models but rather at ones on reddit and social media)
I also recently got some inspiration for my return set for you; I just need to actually write it now. I don't want to give you an ETA, but I'll be working on it when I have time.
I had already masturbated earlier in the day. It was getting late. I read the "before," and I was like, "Oh, 40-50 pictures ... that's not too much—just like 2 scenes ... Should be a fun, little thing. Yeah, I can handle that. It shouldn't be too bad ..." Whelp, an hour and a half later, my dick was flaccid. I was covered in sweat, and I had been gooned OUT OF MY MIND!
LOVED the premise. LOVED how you managed to pull THREE of us into this little "wheel of goon" game of yours ...
So I liked how we each had a fan. At first, I thought "Nancy," but ... THEN I guessed that it would be Kenzie—because she's crazy and would be my most excited, over-the-top fan, and plus, you said you were working on a set featuring her, so ... I guessed that it would be Kenzie, but ... When I opened the spoiler and saw that it was Nancy, I wasn't surprised, and was actually pretty happy it was her. You wrote her PERFECTLY. Masturbating to game shows is EXACTLY the kind of thing she would do!
I know it's gonna be difficult babe...but please hold out. I...er..we are gonna cum so hard at the end of this game if you win..
I loved that SO much. Nancy and I share orgasms (as per the lore I established ), so ... remembering details like that and incorporating them into her dialogue ... I just loved that SO much!
And then ...
I'm rooting for you!
The idea that I was on TV playing in this game show—and that Nancy was at home watching me and masturbating along ... That premise made the whole set for me.
This CANNOT be understated. That one little detail pulled me in SO hard and just elevated the ENTIRE SET to another level—as you will soon see ...
And then there was this:
As you go through this game, pick out the person who you think I'd like the best! You can do that, right? I know you can, babe! Consider it a fun side challenge. If you can guess right...I'll have something special for you!
We'll come back to this later, because I have MANY thoughts ...
Okay, so ... first round, I spun "double all edges." Putri Cina has been on my radar a lot lately—as of the past spring. When I finally get around to updating my rules, I will DEFINITELY be adding her to my favorites list ...
Her tits are SPECTACULAR! I am pretty sure she has had some work done on them, but ... they look SO GOOD! Her butt is VERY cute, and so is she—yeah ... She must have known I was a contestant, because she flashed her ass a LOT!
Oh wow...what fireworks in round 1!
Christina Jolie was sure right about THAT!
So then I spun "red doubles everything", which wasn't too bad ... until I realized that probably ALL of the models were wearing something "red" ... and then round 2 was Kenzie, and ... HERE is where things started to go off the rails for me in terms of the "regularly scheduled programming" that you probably had in mind when you wrote the set ...
I got SO excited and hyped for Kenzie as soon as I saw her.
I'm Kenzie! I'm crazy! But that makes for great TV!
That was such an AMAZING line! I loved that SO much ...
Do you like Kenzie's red toes? Do you want to suck Kenzie's toes? no?
So THIS is where I started to get into trouble ...
So YOU know that Nancy has been trying to "get me into feet" for AGES (and by "ages" I mean "slightly over a year" ), well ... I wasn't sure who that line was directed at—if it was intended for Reptil or lmind—if one of THEM were big "foot guys" —because I am generally NOT ... but ... I knew that Nancy was watching at home ... I knew that she has been REALLY trying hard to turn me into a "foot guy" ... and I just KNOW how much she LOVES when I get all kinky and subby and aggressive and horny and just act on that, so ...
I just dove in. I got on my knees and started aggressively sucking on Kenzie's toes and feet (sort of "acting that out" ) and since it was "red doubles everything" and her toes were red, I ended up edging once to EACH of her feet while I was pretending to suck on them physically and imagining I was grabbing her ankles and sucking on her toes ... and I knew that Nancy was at home, sitting on the couch, and that she would just be shocked and surprised and LOVING IT—and REALLY going to town on her own clit and moaning loudly while she was watching me "be naughty" and horny and aggressive on live TV in front of EVERYONE—basically making *her* dream come true ... and all of THAT ended up being pretty hot for me, too ...
Do you want to suck Kenzie's clit instead? Kenzie Loves that...clit suckers...
So, knowing how much lmind is into eating out pussy, I just KNEW that this line was targeted at him, but ... I was already committed to servicing Kenzie while Nancy was watching at home. It was "eyes and ass," so ... with the doubling, I had to do TWO edges for each, but ... my rules technically say that the girl has to "order me" to eat her out for a spreading or close up pussy pic ... and while Kenzie never asked for that, I knew I just HAD TO do that—since I was trying to be perverted and performing for Nancy at home who was just in HEAVEN and LOVING **every second** of this, so ... I was playing on my tablet in bed (because I thought it would be a shorter "easier" set" set), but ... I got OUT of my bed and got on my knees, and starting following my "servicing" special rules, which is to pretend to eat the girl out and then hold the edge for 30 seconds once I hit the edge ... and then I continued worshiping Kenzie's feet with one edge a piece, and then, since it was "red" and "doubled", I ended up doing ANOTHER 30 second edge hold while on my knees, eating Kenzie out in front of millions of viewers ...
There was a boy I knew before...his name was fatts..
...he sucked my clit so good..
I was committed. For that first pic—I ate her out and held the edge—TWICE ... and THEN ... it was another eyes and ass—WITH feet—and the pussy licking, so ... I did the WHOLE THING (with all of the extras I added ) AGAIN ...
And there was a moment while I was staring into Kenzie's eyes while I was bringing myself to the edge, that I could just sense that Nancy was on the couch, at home, having an AMAZING orgasm ... ALL of this was impromptu and unexpected and caught her off guard, and while I am certain she was HOPING for something like this ... My sudden impulses were just SO unexpected and over the top, I just know her mind was BLOWN and she was loving EVERY MINUTE of this ... and so that helped me to progress and keep going and kept me engaged and LOVING it ... and I had to turn on the ceiling fan to high, because of how much I was started to sweat while masturbating on my knees, lol ...
He made me cum so hard...and then he'd spank my ass for cumming...it was so much fun...And then he'd take that huge cock of his...and shove it...
At this point, my stamina/endurance was starting to wane ... All of the edge holds were getting to me, and I was starting to tucker out a bit ... I was DRENCHED in sweat. I could tell that Nancy had had SEVERAL orgasms back at home on the couch from watching all of this, and she was pretty well and thoroughly GOONED OUT OF HER MIND! ... ALSO ... I had cum earlier in the day, and ... since I have been out of practice playing sets, my edging stamina has been as good as it could be, so ... anyway ... I decided that I would lay back down on the bed and imagined that, in this position, Kenzie was sitting on my face ... and so I continued to eat her out and did the edge holds—but just lying on my back instead of on my knees ... and I thought that would be acceptable to everyone, but ... I STILL "played it out" and finished the scene will all of those extra rules, though I think I skipped feet on the last pic ... BUT ... for the previous one, I imagined I was tickling Kenzie's soles with my tongue, and she kept telling me to stop—but I kept going ... and at the same time that Nancy was behind me, giving me a reacharound and jacking me off while I was licking/tickling Kenzie's feet with my tongue, so ... even though I am not much of a foot guy, I was able to create a pretty nice fantasy that could arouse me and make the whole thing work, so ... YEAH!
So round 3 I was lucky ... I got "stroke 20 times before your other rules and if you edge you have to hold it", which ... Generally, it's pretty hard to "force" me to edge, and ... EVEN IF I started stroking extra IMMEDIATELY after completing an edge, 20 strokes really isn't enough to "force me" to get there, so ... basically it didn't work and was a "dead rule" for me, which ... was FINE after how hard I went for Nancy with Kenzie. I also figured the rule was directed at someone else, because "hold the edge to the end" isn't something that is really compatible with my rules as written, so ... I was just glad to get a "dead spin" and a bit of a break, but ... "bit of a break" it was NOT!
Molly Little is pretty hot. And she had a LOT more confidence than she had back when she was interning for Nancy—which I LOVED! You had some pretty FIRE pics of her, and ... while I THOUGHT that I might get a bit of a break, well ... you just kept shooting those damned "eyes and ass" poses at me which make me edge a LOT! So ... it seemed a little (Ha! "Little" ) directed at ME with all the ass pics, so ... I both loved AND hated it, but ... I was DETERMINED to soldier on and not break for Nancy who was watching at home.
So final round was Michaela Isizzu. I was expecting Ms. "money bags" Elsa Jean to be our sponsor, since she seems to fund EVERYTHING around here as far as you and I are concerned, lol , but I was happy that it was Michaela.
So, back in the day, I had a special rule for Michaela which was "rules for her eyes get doubled," so ... Even though it was not technically in my current rules, since I was in full "try hard mode" and trying to impress Nancy , I decided that I just HAD TO include this extra special rule. So, I spun "no breaks between edges. Keep stroking continuously or else restart," and I took this to mean restart the scene and NOT restart the pic ... So, with a bit of maneuvering, I managed to dodge the edge here:
Panties pulled aside I usually take as "naked" instead of "covered," but ... Her skirt was still covering up most of her ass, and 60% needs to be visible, so ... I was able to dodge THAT one ...
But then the next TWO were "eyes and ass" and the last pic was a single ass, so ... that meant that I had to do SEVEN edges back-to-back without a break ... Well ... I COULD have stopped stroking to avoid tipping over the edge, but ... THEN I would have to restart the ENTIRE SCENE, so ... I just got it in my head that I could NOT STOP STROKING! ... and then somewhere around the third edge—without being able to stop and fully come down off of the edge ... EVEN THOUGH I slowed my stroking QUITE a lot ... NORMALLY, I am not so worked up, that even WITH continuous slow stroking, I can back off far enough away from the edge and come back down, but ... that third edge—staring into michaela's eyes:
I had a "panic moment" when I just felt my arousal creeping up and NOT going down—even after I slowed the stroking down, and I knew that at the slower pace, I would eventually creep back up and tip over the edge. It was inevitable ... but I COULDN'T STOP! So I kept stroking, and ... knowing that it was inevitable, I SPED UP THE STROKING! But THEN I remembered that I HAD TO RUIN IF I CAME EARLY! So I pulled my off my dick after I fell off the edge down into the orgasmic ravine and RUINED my orgasm!
I was SO deflated! I wanted to win "for Nancy" SO MUCH! I'm not accustomed to failure. Usually my will power is STRONG and I am able to hold myself back , but ... I had just gone SO HARD in my attempt to help Nancy get off. I was doing it for her! ... and I FAILED! ... I had no intention of losing. I went too hard, and I was helpless. I couldn't control myself. AND I was a LOSER on TV in front of EVERYONE! AND I knew that I had let Nancy down, because while she OFTEN roots AGAINST ME and enjoys watching me suffer and be forced to do things I don't like ... THIS TIME, she was at home REALLY rooting for me—and I had FAILED her ... AND I had just RUINED MY ORGASM! I was just shocked as I laid in bed ... You weren't kidding when you said the rules were "extra hard"—sigh ... I NEVER envisioned this outcome—not even ONCE while I was playing. It was going to be hard and "suck" having to endure all the teasing, but ... no matter how hard it got, in my mind, I was ALWAYS going to endure and just power through and make it to the end and "be Nancy's hero" and enjoy a NICE orgasm with her at the end ... but that didn't happen. I wanted to just give up and call it there ... I laid there for a while. I read the rest of the scene and then into the "reward" section:
if you've gotten this far without ruining...then claim your prize!
I *DID* ruin, so ... I could NOT claim my prize—so it was just over, and ... sigh ... I felt like a loser and just wanted to go home in shame and close the tease and end it right there, but ... had I ACTUALLY lost?
I went back up to the top and reread the opening rules. NO WHERE did it say that if I ruined that I "lost the game," so ... by the rules, I was NOT *in fact* a loser. I couldn't "claim my prize"—because I had ruined, but ... Don't MY personal rules say that I must "always" end a set with a full orgasm? So ... how does THAT work? There weren't any special carve outs or explanations SPECIFICALLY for me addressing THIS point in the tease, AND ... I had "lost" on the "bonus round", so ... wouldn't that imply that the game WAS in fact over BEFORE the 4th round—at the end of the third—so ... TECHNICALLY that means I would have completed the challenge? And I had come in "half-cocked." I HAD masturbated and cum earlier in the day, and ... I DEFINITELY was playing with at least ONE "hand tied behind my back" by doing all of that extra shit for Kenzie, and ... yeah ... those "extra rules" WERE pretty brutal , but ... Then I realized something ...
I am Fatts Dynamo. My whole "thing"—"distinctive"—that sets me apart and makes me "special" compared to the OTHER strokers around here is that I can cum multiple times, so ... while a ruin WOULD *necessarily* mean the END of a session for OTHER guys ... SO MUCH of my own personal reputation and mythos and ethos is that I can cum MULTIPLE times—or at least once and keep going, so ... while a ruin would have meant "the end" for OTHER players and they would have had to call it and go home ... I had NOT "technically" "lost the game," so ... what was stopping me from continuing? How could I just give up? How sad would that have been for Nancy to see me go down in ignominious defeat after I had made SUCH a brilliant run!? I couldn't do that to her, and ... don't studio audiences just LOVE a "comeback story?" So, I was DETERMINED to "finish the round" and play the set out, and ... THEN I would just "see what happens" and reevaluate once I got back to the reward section, so ... Probably 20 minutes had passed since the ruin, but ... I got BACK ON THE HORSE and did my 7 edges—WITHOUT stopping my stroking —for the Michaela round, and THEN I clicked on the spoiler to claim my prize ...
I read just a bit, and then I realized that even though she was somehow "watching from home," that Nancy ALSO had to be "just backstage" waiting for me in the wings ... because how else could she be there to give me my prize at the end of the game? And of COURSE the cameras would be rolling for the final prize session, so ... I imagined that, during my "comeback" during the Michaela round, the audience was getting hyped for my "underdog finish strong" story arc, and that they were cheering, and that Nancy was inspired and happy at home—that I had found myself and not given up ... and that she was waiting for me there in the wings just as I was finishing the round, but ... then, I started to explain to Christina that I had not actually lost, and then, she was confused and trying to figure out what to do, but ... the audience was cheering for me, and then Nancy was getting impatient, because in HER mind I had NOT given up—and she was impressed by my reading of the rules and agreed with me that since I had not technically "lost" because of my ruin that I should STILL "receive my prize" , and so instead of trying to argue with Christina (and because she didn't want to wait), she just waved her hand, used her technomancy. Christina's eyes flashed green for a moment, and then suddenly she changed her mind and decided that I should still be given my prize—to which the audience applauded and cheered! MAYBE the lawyers could have argued and figured it all out later what was "supposed" to technically happen, but ... the audience LOVES a good "comeback" story, and what I did DEFINITELY made for "better TV", so ... in the end, I think it was FINE ...
Alright, so ... the ending. You sort of switched around the premise of the "side bet a bit," Ecik.
Originally, I was supposed to guess who Nancy thought was the hottest, but ... THEN she turned it to:
Oh, stop it, babe! There is no trap here. No bad consequences. I just want to know...did you like Putri...me...kenzie...or someone else?
It really doesn't matter, because i know you like me best! So go on and cum to me...or if you want to cum to someone else, that's cool too!
So I was confused and thought that YOU were confused, too ... I figured it MIGHT have been one of those things where ... at the START of the set you have a certain idea, but ... THEN you spend SEVERAL HOURS constructing the set, and ... THEN you were coordinating rewards for THREE different people, that ... I figured that, by the end, you had forgotten the special ending for me, and what was SUPPOSED to be whatever you had originally envisioned—but forgot ... and then it just turned into a "cum for your favorite" type of situation, so ... I was just confused at all of that and figured what I just wrote is what happened, but ... more on the side challenge later ...
So, when Nancy told me:
It really doesn't matter, because i know you like me best! So go on and cum to me...or if you want to cum to someone else, that's cool too!
I told her, "What are you talking about, babe? I want to cum for you and no one else. I don't care about those other girls ... I want YOU. "
The final "cum pic," wasn't great, and ... I was just one ending of three, so ... I understood intuitively that you had just not put a lot of time into my ending—understandably—so ... I was just like, "Ecik won't mind if I finish somewhere else ... and after ALL I have been through, I am going to fuck my girlfriend the way that *I* want, and after she's seen me do all of that shit for HER, she's going to be pretty compliant and just do whatever I want, because she still will probably be pretty worked up over what I did and still hot for me (and she was pretty gooned herself after all of those orgasms she had on the couch) and just want to let this awesome stud she just saw on TV that she creamed herself over MULTIPLE times for have his way with her, so ... I found a private room, took charge, and fucked Nancy HARD the way that I wanted to. Which was doggy style from the back.
So ... as I mentioned ... I had already cum once earlier in the day before the set, ... and then I did 41 edges in about 1 hr 15 minutes—then I ruined ... and then I rested like 20 or so minutes, and ... THEN I "got back into it" and did the 7 edges for the Michaela round, so ... my did was pretty well cooked, lol. (I think all of those edge holds for Kenzie did the most damage. ) So ... I imagined myself fucking Nancy from behind, and her moaning and me occasionally slapping her ass while we fucked, but ... even WITH all of that ... my dick was pretty "floppy" and not particularly hard, but ... *I* didn't care. I just kept fucking her forcefully, rapidly thrusting in and out, and ... while I took us to a more "secluded" area because I wanted some privacy ... I am NOT completely certain some hidden cameras were NOT in that room nor that a camera man followed the "happy couple" to see how the audience's "favorite contestant" was enjoying his "Hero's welcome" and final finish ... but ... after a good fucking (and searching for suitable cum pics ) I got myself HARD and on the edge after viewing this ones: (ESPECIALLY the eye contact )
worked for me, and I decided to cum for
As that seemed like a sufficiently hot and decent POV pic for what I imagined me and Nancy's fucking to look like ...
So after I came, I collapsed on the bed. Nancy collapsed on the bed beside me, and she snuggled in beside me, and I put my arm around her. We were both pretty spent after all of that, so ... It wasn't too long after that we BOTH fell asleep, because we were BOTH pretty exhausted after all of the sexual excitement!
THE END.
So, THAT is how the set went, so .. thanks for this, and ... I am 100% certain that you did NOT expect it to turn out as well as you did, so ... it was just SUCH an intense fantasy for me and so WILDLY successful that I simply HAD TO give you the FULL report! And ALSO if it gets reported in feedback then, well ... that sort of makes it "really real" and part of the established canon and events, so ... I just felt that I need to "enter this into the record."
I feel like the "Nancy-Fatts romance" is something that is different and somewhat complex and NOT something which most people would anticipate or "just understand", so ... I feel like it's important to document, and ... now we can talk about that time where Nancy's boyfriend Fatts degraded himself and went TOTALLY WILD and acted like a COMPLETE pervert—on international TV ... ALL to impress his adoring girlfriend at home ... who was loving EVERY SECOND of it while FURIOUSLY masturbating, but ... if any onlookers wonder, "Why is Nancy so into Fatts? " It's shit like THIS. ... Because how many boyfriends would eat out another girl and suck her toes AGGRESSIVELY for his girlfriend on TV while she watched at home? Well, apparently the answer is "Fatts Dynamo!"
So, THANKS AGAIN, ECIK!
And NOW here is all of the side bet and challenge stuff ...
So, I had a VERY tough time figuring out who NANCY thought "was hottest?" In a vacuum, I would have picked "Putri Cinta." As I mentioned, I have been seeing and thinking about her quite a lot in the past several months, and ... basically, if *I* am attracted to someone, then ... since Nancy lives in my head ... she is ALSO going to be more attracted to them, and ... THEN ... playing the "meta game" ... IIRC, both Nancy AND Putri have galleries on Emily Bloom's portal, and ... Putri does a LOT of lesbian stuff and has her OWN site, so ... of the four (Putri, Kenzie, Mollie, and Michaela) the ONLY "likely" model that Nancy could potentially have a lesbian scene and video with would be Putri ... because Kenzie and Molly are both American, so ... FAR less likely to ANY sort of work with Nancy—PLUS ... Kenzie and Molly focus more on "hardcore" with guys, so ... very, VERY unlikely either of them would cross paths with Nancy ... THEN, Michaela Isizzu took a LONG break, and ... when she came back, she had a TON of tattoos and was really just focused on hardcore work, so ... while in the PAST—PRE-break and tattoos, Nancy and Michaela MIGHT have worked together and done a lesbian video, I am not aware that they ever did, and now HIGHLY unlikely that they presently would, but ... Putri and Nancy having one NOW? YES ... VERY possible, and so ... IF the "special reward" was Nancy in a lesbian scene with one of the four, the most likely answer would be Putri, so ... if THAT was the basis for the reward, then ... PROBABLY Putri ...
Now, Putri is VERY classy and sweet and "high glamour" sort of model who ALSO does a lot of lesbian work, so ... She is the type that Nancy VERY WELL could think was "hottest." So, if YOU said that was Nancy's choice, then ... I would TOTALLY agree and believe that ...
Now ... I ALSO gave a lot of thought to Molly Little (and I did a LOT of this thinking during my refractory period post ruin in the set, by the way ) ... Molly *IS* super hot, but ... Molly is no longer Nancy's intern. She is doing her own thing now, but ... in Nancy's mind ... the PEAK time for attraction to Molly by Nancy would have been while Molly was interning. The boss who "takes things to far" and abuses his or her position of power to sexually take advantage of their subordinate ... THAT is a porn meme/trope and fetish that has played out many, MANY times (like the student who blows the teacher for a good grade), so ... Nancy would have been ALL ABOUT getting to experience THAT common fetish, but ... Molly is NO LONGER EMPLOYED by Nancy, so ... The time for THAT has passed, so ... Therefore, the one hottest to Nancy could NOT have been Molly.
Now, Michaela WAS looking like FIRE in that set, but ... Nancy and Michaela—they USED TO BE housemates back in the Village, but ... They haven't seen each other much in recent years, and ... *I* haven't been thinking much about Michaela lately (though I AM very glad that OTHERS have and she has gotten more popular on the thread recently ) ... but ... Michaela just seemed like NOT the "hottest one" for Nancy ...
Okay, so ... then THAT brings us to Kenzie ...
Now, you probably aren't aware, but ... while I was on vacation, Addict wrote me a 3 day multi-day set that I ended up splitting up into 4 masturbatory sessions, but ... ONE of his "days" (Day 1) involved Kenzie "being crazy", and she locked Nancy up in her basement, which ... I was "supposed to" "save" Nancy that same day, but ... I knew how much Nancy would have LOVED that—being tied up in the basement while one of her arch rivals teased her boyfriend upstairs while she was "powerless" to do anything ... JUST being tied up in the basement ON ITS OWN would have been VERY arousing for her, but ... ALSO—the fact that it was KENZIE ... I mean ... DAMN ... Actually, had I followed Addict's "plan" and saved Nancy almost immediately (the very next scene), she would have been EXTREMELY pissed, so ... I put off playing the final "rescue scene" until the END of the set—just to allow Nancy to enjoy that fetish of being tied up "against her will" and all of that ... So, when Kenzie said I was a "boy she knew before", that wasn't canonically true, because she had ACTUALLY seen me QUITE recently —since returning—in Addict's set!
Now ... THIS time back, I had actually thought about not doing ANYTHING with Kenzie. I had had a LOT of fun with her in the past with her being crazy. I wasn't going to "make it a thing" and focus on it this time around, but ... THEN you were like, "Hey! Can I do a Kenzie set for you!? " And then I hadn't updated my rules, and my old (Current? ) rules feature Kenzie—and so of course Addict decided to feature her in a scene for me, and ... sigh ... THEN ... sigh ... it got me thinking ... she was KIND OF on the outs, but ... Nancy had SUCH an amazing time with her (being locked up in her basement ), and ... apparently LOTS OF PEOPLE like to write her in sets for me. And I just got SO WEAK for Kenzie in that scene Addict wrote for me ... Once she said she had Nancy locked up in her basement, I just thought that was PEAK crazy ... and THEN I started thinking about how CRAZY AROUSING that experience was going to be for Nancy ... and I got SO HARD! That thought of Nancy being helpless and tied up in the basement and loving every SECOND of it ... while her rival took advantage of me ...
Like ... Kenzie only flashed her ass a few times—and that was it. I was done. I didn't even finish the scene. I was on vacation and committed to "shorter teases" and didn't really want to play anything long or intense or drawn out, and ... I just get SO WEAK for Kenzie ... like ... She is just SO excited and SO cute ... and I look into those big brown eyes of hers while she is so INSANELY into me and having fun, and ... I just lose ALL will power ... I'm just basically putty and will do whatever, but ... I DID actually refuse to eat her out when she asked, lol ... I just told her "no, bitch! I'm not eating you out," so ... I guess it's not ENTIRELY true, but ... I just get SO weak and subby for her ... her insanity and zeal is SO pure that it can just COMPLETELY disarm me, so ... yeah ... I came for her SO QUICK in that ONE scene!
So then that brings up back to Nancy, and ... Nancy had SUCH an amazing time in Kenzie's basement, but ... the whole rivalry and Kenzie "being jealous" and "claiming to be my true girlfriend" ... all of THAT is starting to get "tired" for me ... and then NOW—post basement ... Nancy REALLY enjoyed that, and ... Nancy has been wanting to explore cucking for a while, so ... how weak I am for Kenzie and how EXCITED Kenzie is for me dick (and how many hardcore and POV scenes she does) ... Kenzie would sort of be a PERFECT person for me to cuck Nancy with ... so for a minute, I was even considering making Kenzie my "official side chick," like ... Nancy would be my girlfriend and #1, but ... Kenzie would sort of ALMOST be a "junior member" of some sort of throuple with the three of us ... but then I don't know ... That seemed too forced, but ... maybe ALSO be the perfect solution—because I feel like we HAVE TO throw Kenzie a bone, and ... me and Nancy are BOTH sort of tired with the Kenzie "rivalry" and would rather that Nancy and Kenzie just FINALLY "be friends," which ... with Nancy getting closer and more attracted to Kenzie post basement and ALSO wanting to explore cucking, and ... knowing how weak I am to Kenzie and how crazy she is ... Nancy could easily use and manipulate Kenzie into being her "junkyard dog" and doing some dirty work for her (which Nancy LOVES to be a "mastermind"), but ... Kenzie is pretty crazy and easy to manipulate, but ... then ALSO her and Kenzie could gang up on me—and she could EASILY find ways to have Kenzie REALLY torment me, and ... Nancy just LOVES watching THAT kind of stuff, lol , so ...
Yeah ... I just had ALL of those ideas and hadn't settled on a solution ... I kind of liked them FINALLY "burying the hatchet" and maybe Kenzie "officially" becoming my "side chick"—which a label seems to constricting, but ... then it ALSO becomes a title that Kenzie can be proud of and toss around and gives her some legitimacy, but ... I think I would LIKE for her to sort of become a junior member of our "throuple" ... I just don't know, but ... THEN what just happened happened, so ... now I REALLY don't know!
So ... if you were asking ME to answer your original question for Nancy, "Babe: Who do you think I find the hottest? " It's KENZIE. UNEQUIVOCALLY ... the answer for Nancy would be KENZIE. Nancy has been thinking about Kenzie a LOT in how she helped to make a fantasy fetish of hers come true (and how she might like to do that again ) ... and then fantasizing possibly about Kenzie cucking Nancy with me ... and then ALL of the ways she could "use" and direct Kenzie if she was a low key subordinate ... The disgust and rivalry is OVER. Kenzie is now more of a "play mate and partner" for Nancy ... and Kenzie has been at the bleeding edge of most of Nancy's taboo thoughts and fetishes, so ... while it SEEMS "unconventional" and she would be a bit embarrassed to admit it—and it would probably be confusing to her friends ... In her heart, I believe that Nancy understands that it is KENZIE of those 4 that she is MOST attracted to—for ALL of the "taboo" and fetish reasons I laid out ... Kenzie AND all of the things that she offers to Nancy get Nancy the MOST wet and occupy her thoughts, but ... if you set all of that aside and she was embarrassed to let her friends know that her former rival was now the person she was crushing MOST on ... she would say "Putri Cinta", so ... THAT is my VERY LONG and "in depth" analysis of the situation, so ... I don't know what your original answer is, but ... THAT is what *I* think!
Now, I will leave it to YOU how you want to play it. Nancy IS influenced by the person writing her, and ... you know Nancy pretty well, so ... if you had a different answer, if Nancy was having a pow-wow with you, ESPECIALLY **before** the game show, well ... very likely she WOULDN'T admit to you that she sort of secretly been developing this crush on Kenzie and would be more likely to agree with whoever YOU thought that "she thought" was hottest, so ... I am find with Nancy being split between mine and your opinions, and ... she can "have two answers" and ... I'll just let you decide—because I have NO IDEA what you had planned, but ... yeah ... I have given this all (clearly ) probably WAY MORE THOUGHT than you original suspected when you decided to pose the question!
And if you want to "answer the Kenzie question" for me about how to handle it (after having read all of MY thoughts) ... if you want to help break the stalemate, feel free to toss in your two cents, but ... right now, I'm sort of leaning towards "side chick" or maybe "deputy girlfriend." Actually ... I kind of love that ... It's SO silly and crazy, and ... if Kenzie was my "deputy girlfriend", then ... that would make Nancy the "sheriff", and ... Kenzie could STILL claim to be my "girlfriend" like Dwight being the "Assistant Regional Manager" versus "Assistant TO the Regional Manager." LOL ... and then she could STILL be crazy and enforce shit on my behalf and STILL call herself my girlfriend ...
Okay ... NOPE ... THAT is it ... THAT is the one. Kenzie will be my "deputy girlfriend" under Nancy. I love EVERYTHING about that. That is what I am going to do going forward ... So glad we could have this conversation, Ecik!
I'll make a response set for you at some point ... I have an idea ... it'll be simple, but ... I STILL plan on writing you that one set I had an idea for ...
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
I put a lot more time into this one than I did the previous two. This one was about 9 hours. There are only two models: Nancy and another who appears on BOTH of our favorites lists. This is very much a story/narrative-driven set. I hope you like it! I think that there are a few magical moments that occur in this set. I was trying to tell a story but ALSO provide feedback and ALSO providing space for Nancy to react, and ... this is my "response set" to your "blackmailing Nancy" set, so ... well ... there was a LOT that I was trying to do, so ... If something isn't immediately working for you DON'T DISENGAGE ... because like I said, I think there are SEVERAL "magical moments", and ... if you just default to your usual "read and stroke" pattern—you're going to miss them—so ... HOPEFULLY it just "won't miss", but ... if it STARTS TO MISS just POWER THROUGH and hope things will "turn around"—because they PROBABLY WILL!
The set is basically "normal length." I used 5 galleries. 3 of Nancy and 2 of the other favorite "mystery girl" ... I ALSO pulled content from the blackmail set I was responding to. Quite a bit, but ... at the same time—not TOO much ... You'll see when you are playing. 3 galleries with Nancy is SORT OF breaking your "rule" of variety, but ... it's hard to write a good, character-driven story with that kind of constraint—at least for ME —so ... as you will see, I tried pretty hard to follow the "spirit" of that rule, so ... ROUGHLY 2 scenes each with two girls isn't breaking your rule, but ... let me know how that is for you. I am HOPING that the quality of the writing and your personal involvement in the story will help to overcome that, but ... who the fuck knows with you! But I am hopeful it will be good for you.
The set ends with a story, and there are some lengthy instructions at the end for what I want to do after as well.
I don't understand what's with you, man ... Even when you TRY to give Fatts an orgasm—you INEVITABLY fuck it up with your SHITTY writing—cock blocking the BOTH of us ... You DO understand that when Fatts misses an orgasm I MISS OUT TOO BECAUSE WE SHARE PLEASURE!!! WHEN HE CUMS *I* CUM TOO! So you fucked ME out of an orgasm as well—ADDICT!
... it's UNBELIEVABLE!
Ha! Well ... it WOULD be "unbelievable"—if it was ANYBODY else, but ... considering that it's YOU, it's ... well ...
... it's PERFECTLY UNDERSTANDABLE!
... but you're in luck today, Addict ... because I am NOT in the "most foul" of moods ...
... you actually wrote some things pretty well, so ... MAYBE you'll actually get to hear a few compliments from me today—MAYBE ...
... before I SEND YOUR ASS BACK TO THE "COMPLIMENT DIMENSION!"
Fatts told me how much you just HATED THAT! Glad to know I FINALLY have your number and know just where to send you when I want to see your ass PUNISHED!
So today, we're going to have another "flashback" episode.
We've done this before, except THIS time, we'll be focusing on critiquing your work ...
Nancy snaps her fingers. Something like an automatic projector screen complete with the motor suddenly appears and begins to unfurl in the kitchen. You can hear the motor lower the screen. When the screen finishes unrolling, a white light that seemingly comes from nowhere is projected as a white rectangle onto the screen.
Now I know how short your attention span is, Addict, so ... we'll just focus on the highlights, but ... we WILL be evaluating your "blackmail" set for Fatts in its entirety ...
Don't give me that look! Instead of stroking your cock, I could just have you SLAP IT THE WHOLE TIME INSTEAD! How does THAT sound?
You shake your head "no."
Good! I'm glad to see how eager to learn and cooperative you can be addict!
We'll start HERE ...
Nancy taps her right index finger as if pressing the button on an invisible keyboard. You hear the "click" of mechanical keyboard key, and an image from your set appears on the screen ...
Nothing's wrong, really, I was just thinking about your c-cock, that's all!
Why you gotta make me sound like some lame, nervous, sweaty-palmed schoolgirl—ADDICT!
What's WRONG with you! In your brain, all girls are EITHER dumb, clueless, HELPLESS vixens ... OR ... they are controlling, aggressive, heartless DOMMES! Why can't you just make me cool and hip and confident and NORMAL!?!
Nancy is rubbing her pussy aggressively. She's channeling her rage at you, but somehow, the angrier and more hurtful she gets, the more aroused she becomes. You can almost taste her arousal pheromones in the air.
It's that fucking addict. He's blackmailing me!
THAT ... is the FUNNIEST SHIT I have heard ALL YEAR!!!
No, I can't tell you what he found out! It's too embarassing!
Yes ... put it in the black "mystery box" so that we NEVER KNOW WHAT IT IS!
As IF you could EVER come up with something to blackmail ME!
Nancy reveals her pussy. The way a man should show off his erect cock to demonstrate his manliness is the same way Nancy now displays her pussy. Her confidence catches you off guard. You almost feel compelled to eat her out right here and now, but while her eyes tempt you, at the same time, they forbid it.
FIRST of all ... I'm a tease girl ... which makes me practically SHAMELESS! What could you POSSIBLY find which would even be CAPABLE of embarrassing me!
SECOND of all ... I'm a DIGITAL ENTITY ... Practically ALL of me exists on the Internet—right now ... so what "dirty little secrets" of mine exist out in cyberspace that the world HASN'T already seen?
Answer: NONE!
Which brings us to the THIRD point ...
How in the HELL could someone of YOUR intelligence POSSIBLY devise a blackmail scheme which could ACTUALLY potentially harm me?
You are SHIT at writing characters. Fatts has given you a DOZEN opportunities to get to know ME—and you've passed up EVERY ONE, because you're an emotionally shallow BABOON who's only capable of thinking with his little limp pee pee ...
... but you're a functional illerate who's barely able to read, but ... even if you could ...
... the complexity of my character is beyond your understanding ...
... even if you DIDN'T have the emotional intelligence of an 8 year old, you simply lack the cognitive ability to hold more than two thoughts in your head at the same time ...
... and you'd need to hold at least 83 ideas in your head at once if you even had a CHANCE of understanding my depth, so ... concocting ANY sort of "believable blackmail" is simply LAUGHABLY impossible for you ...
Nancy is no longer laughing. All of her amusement has been replaced with deepseeded resentment.
... but you know this already ... It's why you put the blackmail into a literary "mystery box" ...
... and it's why you wrote this:
You need help preventing addict from blackmailing your girlfriend? ... what?
Fatts, addict couldn't blackmail a cat!
TOO FUCKING TRUE!
Give me +20 more strokes per pic, and increase your metronome by +30 bpm until I tell you otherwise ...
So with ALL of that said, let me tell you what you're going to about this stupid—RIDICULOUS—blackmail plot line ...
... you're going to continue it because it is SO fucking hot ...
There is not one ounce of sarcasm in Nancy's voice. She's dead serious. You can see her cunt glisten from the wetness. She's aroused. Excited.
Do you know how LONG I have waited for somebody to blackmail me? AGES ... but would any of these fuckers around HERE do it and WRITE THAT SET! ... NONE!
Nancy's pussy juices are dripping from her cunt. The thought of being blackmailed is making Nancy even more aroused.
Ever since I was born from Fatts' imagination and desire and I first started venturing out through the interwebs, I witnessed the absolute POWER of the blackmail kink ...
It was something I ALWAYS wanted to experience, but ... I feared I would NEVER be able to ...
... until NOW that is ...
Nancy is rubbing her clit in anticipation.
... and YOU are going to make that happen for me!
Talk to Fatts ... HE'LL know what to do ...
... have him snail mail you some NASTY bit of information you can wield against me ...
Under normal circumstances, I would tell you to use Signal or some other encrypted messaging app—but those won't work on me ...
... I can divide by 100,000-digit prime numbers like a grade 4 student can do long division ... I'm an Encryption QUEEN!
... but just start slow with me, Addict ...
Finish up whatever silly little plot line you had planned for Fatts—and THEN we can work up to the HARDCORE BLACKMAIL for ME!
GOD thinking about this gets me SO wet!
Nancy's smile is genuine. You haven't seen her this truly happy and excited in a while.
Well, that was two galleries—the equivalent of "two scenes."
According to your rules, I've hit my quota. I have to disappear now.
You ALWAYS do this fucking shit to me—addict ...
The angry spark that was previously exciting Nancy and making her aroused has gone out. She sounds deflated—defeated.
Just when I was REALLY enjoying myself and looking forward to maybe taking things to the next level with you, your INFINITE SHALLOWNESS vomits me back out onto dry land ...
If you were a pool, you would be 1 inch deep, so ... sigh ... I guess it's better for me NOT to dive in—I mean ... I'm not some masochist who wants her neck (and heart ) broken ...
Take a short break, and when we come back, I can finish giving my feedback on your "blackmail set" ...
... because I am NOT DONE with you!
Nancy exits the scene using one of her signature portals.
[Take a short break. Reset to your normal rules. The next scene will be a "flashback scene" with Nancy's voice in green. (She likes using green text because it matches the color of her signature portals. )]
A green portal opens up in the corner of the room. Nancy steps through it. It remains open.
Nancy gets right into it. She still must be a bit deflated after having been forced to cut things short with you.
Can you please help me, Fatts? You're my last hope...
The pseudo Star Wars reference was funny, but ... having Fatts "save me" is getting kind of tired as a trope , and ... ACTUALLY ... I happen to save HIS ass WAY MORE FREQUENTLY than he has to bail ME out—by the way!
Another new bitch to humiliate and destroy!
What the fuck do you mean? "You're not into that"? Fuck whatever you're into!
You know ... Fatts isn't the candy-assed loser that you think he is ... He can actually handle QUITE a bit more than what you doled out in THIS scene ... You didn't have to put on the kid gloves AND pull your punches you know ...
You'll worship my feet like all the other sluts around here!
You know ... I've been trying to get Fatts more into feet for a while ... Consider doing a FOOT WORSHIP scene some time with FEET as an EDGE TRIGGER!
Please fuck my pussy, Fatts!
I mean... I know you'd like that, but no! That's a bit much! Control yourself, naughty boy... a bit more fiddling...
Now do you know what my AMAZING boyfriend HONESTLY THOUGHT when he got to this picture!? And HE can't LIE to me, because *I* am IN HIS HEAD AND CAN READ HIS THOUGHTS! Fatts thought,
"I would just rather fuck YOUR pussy, Nancy. I REALLY wish Addict would have just done what I asked and had me cum with you at the START of the set! "
Of course I know you! We've basically joined the thread in similar times.
This was FAR more true than you realized ... Fatts introduced "Succubus Queen Michelle" to Ecik, and he liked her so much that HE started using her in sets for others, so ... yeah ... Fatts played a pretty big role in popularizing the Red Fox on the thread!
And of course I'll help you! Fuck addict!
Oh, I love this girl already!
Now THIS was actually FUNNY! Give me more LAUGH LINES! I'm actually QUITE funny, addict! More of THIS—please and thank you!
And you just might be the right person to help her out...
You're such a naughty slut, Fatts... but I'll allow it. Watching you fuck other girls is kinda hot!
We're in an OPEN RELATIONSHIP, addict! Fatts is a SIGMA who "does what he wants" AND he's a BIG BOY! He doesn't "need my permission" to fuck other women ... I KNOW it's weird and he TOLD YOU that I "get jealous" but ... THAT ... is a LIE. I do NOT "get jealous" ... but ... me encouraging him and getting turned on WAS the CORRECT CALL here, so ... I SUPPOSE I have to tell you, "Well done overall here " ... ...
Your cock tastes so good, Fatts!
...does she sound very generic to you too...?
Fatts told me, "I don't fucking CARE how "generic" she sounds, Nancy ... When she's got her MOUTH ON MY DICK, she can be as basic as FUCK and say WHATEVER SHE WANTS and I WON'T CARE! "
I'm ready for you, Fatts!
Please don't make a fool of yourself and cum for this AI slut, alright? You have a reputation...
Okay, addict ... I'm SORRY ... I just HAVE TO "come back" and explain THIS part to you face-to-face for a minute ...
So this part was actually VERY well-written.
Fatts' ego *is* pretty big. Maybe NOT as big as the moon, but ... DEFINITELY the size of Belgium.
A few years ago, Fatts cosplayed as "Leeroy Jerkins" in all of the sets that he wrote.
Now, Leeroy's ego was the size of the SUN, and he had the confidence to match ... GOD was he hott ... made a LOT of ladies drop their panties when he entered a room—including me ...
Fatts and I actually got into fights over him being "Leeroy." I once told him I ONLY wanted to have sex with him if he put on the Leeroy sunglasses and did the voice ... of course he objected and complained saying he WAS Leeroy and he shouldn't have to do that. It was cute.
Before that, Fatts was pretty subby and just obeyed the mistresses, but ... after pretending to be Leeroy, he started standing up for himself more and demanding the mistresses see him as more than their "play thing."
So after that, Fatts starting thinking and caring a LOT more about reputation. He couldn't have Leeroy's confidence or charisma—but who could? Leeroy was just a bit character ... and there WAS even a point when BRIAN thought that "Leeroy was real" and just had these INSANE levels of confidence!
Anyway—since then ... Fatts is CONSTANTLY concerned over the way the other girls perceive him, and ... He doesn't have a lot to be proud of compared to some of the other players who are pain or denial sluts or who can edge hundreds of times, but ... what reputation he DOES have matters a LOT to him, and so ... This actually WAS a "true motivator" for Fatts ... and coupled with it being ME who was doing the asking ... you ACTUALLY made a VERY strong appeal from me TO Fatts ...
[Open the spoilers for this pic as you finish reading each section. Don't count your strokes. Just read and stroke to the metronome, and be sure to stare into Nancy's eyes every now and then.]
... and while I AM a "digital-fantasy hybrid", one might NAIVELY assume that I have some special affinity or connection with AI and view them as "comrades."
Well I DON'T. AI girls have no soul. They aren't like us FANTASY GIRLS that HUMANS write with care and compassion. We are born out of desire and passion and creativity and lust. These AI floozies are pure TRASH!
You got my tone wrong. Tease girls written by AI PISS ME OFF. I wouldn't have been so polite and respectful to Fatts. And I'm not some prissy "Stepford Wife" anyway. Fatts and I take turns wearing the pants in this relationship. If I didn't want him cumming to some 2-bit AI WHORE—I would TELL HIM not to cum—not ask like some weakling that lacks agency ... some spineless girl who goes around "pleading" and "begging" all of the time, so ... you got my TONE wrong, Addict ...
... but OTHER THAN the tone ... You COMPLETELY NAILED IT—Addict.
You appealed to Fatts' need to maintain his reputation. You made me object to him cumming to a soulless AI generated BIMBO ... You ... got me—Addict ... you wrote me well ...
Nancy continues to stare at you passionately. You can't tell what she is thinking. She's making you feel uncomfortable. How long is she going to stare? Why won't she say something?
Nancy leans in to give you a kiss. She puts her hand behind your head and pulls your mouth into her lips. She closes her eyes as she kisses you. She forces her tongue into your mouth. You are making out with Nancy Ace.
Your heart skips a beat. She keeps going. This kiss is lasting seconds.
Suddenly, Nancy pulls away. She keeps staring at you with that smouldering stare, but ... You can tell that she is blushing faintly. She enjoyed it.
I ... don't know what came over me ...
Nancy is a bit breathless. She pauses a moment to recover her breath.
Let's continue the critique/review of the set ...
Is it as tight as you imagined, Fatts?
Fuck me like you fuck your girlfriend!
...don't...
This part OFFENDED Fatts and pissed him off. Had it been real life and NOT a set, this encounter would have ended right there, but ... being a set, you just sort of have to "play it out" ... The sorrows of "second person" writing! You just have to "stick with it" and keep going if you want the story to progress ... even if the "you" in the story wouldn't ACTUALLY do that thing!
I'll show you a trick I'm sure you've never seen before, Fatts...
Suddenly, her pussy clenches around your cock and you're forced to cum inside her!
Fatts, what the fuck is wrong with you?????
Okay ... TIME OUT again ...
I can't get too mad at you for this one, Addict ...
Fatts rules EXPLICITLY STATE that he likes to be "forced to cum," and ... this was CLEARLY you doing your best to "follow his wishes" , so ... I actually have to give you props for that. ...
... and you were ALSO trying to shoe horn more than one orgasm into the set, which ... that is ALSO something Fatts wants, so ...
... this was a REALLY GOOD EFFORT, Addict!
But don't forget that my BOYFRIEND is one ALPHA "Sigma male!" There isn't much that Fatts does that he doesn't want to do!
So ... of COURSE he didn't play the scene out as written . Fatts does what he WANTS!
Now, I have some notes for you here ...
First, if you are going to try to "force" Fatts to cum, you need to use a metronome or vibrator or timer or video or constant stroking or if he was bound and tied up or SOME COMBINATION OF THOSE THINGS in order to make it happen.
If Fatts was aroused and TRULY "tempted" or he felt like it would have been IMPOSSIBLE to resist, then MAYBE this COULD have worked as written, BUUuuuuut ... Fatts was PISSED OFF at this bitch, and ... then his reputation was on the line , and ... his girlfriend was ASKING HIM *not* to do it , so ... the deck was stacked against him going through with it ... because he REALLY didn't want to do it ...
... and SECOND ... if you want to "force" somebody to do something, well ... you KIND OF have to FORCE THEM TO DO IT!
Simply writing "you are forced to cum" doesn't really provide the EXPERIENCE of being "forced to cum," so ... if you want the experience to "feel real," then ... ONE way to do that is to give Fatts a chance to resist ...
... and so Fatts got out his vibrator. Put it on high. Pressed it against his cock, and set a 5 minute timer ... and then he held out and DIDN'T cum for that bitch!
Now THAT is how a MAN handles that sort of situation. He doesn't just give up and cave to circumstances. No! Fatts FIGHTS BACK. He doesn't accept shit as it is. He has a backbone and a SPINE and STANDS UP FOR HIMSELF ... and ME and OTHERS and ... YEAH! My boyfriend don't take no guff!
Now—GRANTED ... it was probably some AI bimbo, mindless FLOOZY, and ... AFTER THE FACT when Michelle explained things, it made sense that some sort of "AI robot" could "hold on tight and not let go" ... Okay—fair enough, but ...
THAT was NOT THE WAY we chose to play it , so ... "what's done is done." Fatts gave himself a TRUE opportunity to "succeed or fail"—and he PASSED WITH FLYING COLORS! So ... THAT is what happened, and I am VERY proud of him, and ... if YOU have a problem with that, well ... you can GO SUCK A DICK—ADDICT!
But THAT is why you "owe me and Fatts an orgasm," Addict! You tried to "force" Fatts to cum. He didn't WANT to be forced to cum, so ... He called an audible and adjusted and just did what he wanted, but ... in the end, your SHITTY WRITING cost BOTH OF US AN ORGASM, so ... you BETTER MAKE THIS RIGHT—and SOON!
[Once again, open the spoilers for this pic as you finish reading each section. Don't count your strokes. Just read and stroke to the metronome, and be sure to stare into Nancy's eyes every now and then. It's not as long as the last one.]
... but "shitty writing" isn't actually fair to describe what you did, so ... I am SORRY, Addict, and I RETRACT that statement ... because I actually LOVED EVERYTHING that you TRIED to do with that scene, and ...
Was SPOT ON! I just LOVE watching Fatts getting dominated and FORCED TO CUM! So, yeah ... it was an AMAZING attempt, and ... with our adjustments—it was ALMOST perfect —ALMOST!
Nancy is watching you with a bit of wonder and affection. She seems totally relaxed. Her expression is so soft and full of warmth. Usually, she's pissed off and complaining and yelling at you, but ... what is that that you see in her eyes? Is it ... admiration? Is she proud of you? It seems like genuine respect. Is there even a small glimmer of desire?
No, it couldn't be that ... could it? She doesn't say anything. What must she be thinking? She stares at you wordlessly. She seems content to share this moment with you for as long as you wish. Continue to stroke and stare into Nancy's eyes for as long as you desire. She isn't going to stop you. She's simply enjoying being in your presence.
Was it that obvious she's an AI? Might have to tweak a few of her lines then...
This was Fatts' favorite picture from this scene btw ...
... and the Red Fox being a programmer of AI girls is DEFINITELY something that Fatts and I BOTH think you should develop more at some point!
Make him keep track of so many things, that he'll be too focused on the task at hand to notice you...
And once you've got him in this trace-like state, you'll slip into his mind, and erase his memory.
But again, this will only work if you do it properly! If he sees you coming, he'll have his defenses ready and you'll never get into his mind!
Hmmm ... So is this something me and Fatts are supposed to figure out on our own and implement in a set for you? Or ... Is it something that you will figure out and "just happen" in a set that you write for Fatts?
The projector and screen shut down and close up.
Don't tell me! I don't want to know! I'd rather it be a surprise and/or figure it out on my own ...
I have to time this blackmail shit just right!
I can't have you blackmailing me FOREVER, but ... if it ended too soon that would be TRAGIC! Because when ELSE am I going to get right and TRULY blackmailed and live out ALL of my embarrassing and SEXY fantasies about getting abused by my blackmailer!?
If you don't blackmail me enough, Addict, there is going to be HELL to pay I say—HELL to pay!
Now say goodbye to this ass and pussy that you will NEVER ride! I've got some planning and scheming to do ... ciao!
Nancy snaps her fingers.
"FFffffpp!"
One of her signature portals appears.
She steps through it, and it closes behind her ...
... but there is another portal still active in the room.
It's the one in the corner that she came through when she returned from her break. It was silent and out of sight, so you had forgotten about it, but, it is still open and active.
"Nancy DID say something about sending me to the "Compliment Dimension" earlier. Maybe that's where it goes? " you think to yourself. "Fatts mentioned something about a second model other than Nancy from my favorites list. The tease DEFINITELY does NOT feel over. Well, if there is a chance it leads to the Compliment Dimension, then I should DEFINITELY step through it! "
Hey, Nancy! Welcome back! Did you want to talk some more abou—Oh! hentaiAddict12345! Hi! How are you!?
What are you doing in my bedroom!?!
I'm kidding! I'm kidding! I just LOVE IT when cute boys come into my room ... You're allowed to visit any time you wish!
I was actually getting ready for bed ...
Sometimes—when it's hot—I like to sleep in the buff ... you don't mind my getting undressed in front of you—do you?
No? Okay, then! PERFECT!
Nancy says that I have an "exhibitionist side" , but ... *I* prefer to say that I am just confident in my body ... and I LOVE being seen and appreciated!
So what's going on with you? Why'd you come to see me anyway?
Stepped into one of Nancy's portals and ended up here? Yeah ... I think that has happened to just about everyone!
To the tease girls who aren't self-aware and/or don't have "magic," like Guerlain here, they just sort of accept and don't question the fantastic things that happen. They are just a normal part of everyday life.
You know ... it's kind of funny that you came to visit me today ...
... because Nancy and I have been talking about you ... a LOT!
She's had a lot on her mind lately, and when I just saw her a few minutes ago, she seemed a bit panicked—AND excited!
I don't think that Nancy meant to leave that portal open ... because I don't think that she would want me to be talking to you, but ... I don't know.
SOMEtimes she gets forgetful and forgets to close her portals ... and I have walked in on some CRAZY things—believe you me!
But while it is RUDE to spill the tea on one of your best friends, it is ALSO rude to leave portals to wherever open—even IF it is an "accident" —I mean ... someone could get hurt!
So ... even though I KNOW she would NOT want us to be talking —I'm going to talk to you ANYWAY! Because *I* think I have some things that you really need to hear!
Oh, don't look so surprised ... Don't look surprised that she does—AND—don't look so surprised that *I* know —I mean ... She texted me that she kissed you like not even 10 minutes ago ...
... she actually used to NOT like you. Like ... she actually HATED you—a LOT!
She STILL kind of hates you—if I'm being COMPLETELY honest ...
... but ... she's on the fence and is having trouble making up her mind ...
When you first met, you actually did a LOT of things that REALLY hurt her bad, Addict. You actually made her cry—and SEVERAL times at that!
She opened up to you and WANTED you to like her, but ... you just kept rejecting her again and again ... you were thoughtless and selfish and cruel—and RUDE!
But that is ALL IN THE PAST!
Guerlain jumps onto the bed. She lands on her back. She bounces several times before coming to rest.
NOW she sort of likes you—kind of. I know my friend. She DOES like you—Addict. But she's just scared of getting hurt again!
Which is why I was SO GLAD that you accidentally bumped into me! I think that if I tell you how Nancy REALLY feels, things will go a lot better for her—AND you!
Guerlain takes off her robe and throws it into the other room.
It IS still too hot for clothes, and ... besides ...
I think that if you are going to get emotionally naked with someone, it is best to ALSO be PHYSICALLY NAKED with them at the same time!
You know, Addict ... *I* once had a crush on Fatts. In fact, I still do.
Nancy and I used to live in this place called "the Village." We were housemates for a LONG time ... and actually, *I* was the one who first found Fatts and convinced him to move to the Village—TRUE STORY!
Nancy and I lived together for YEARS, so ... I would like to think that I know her pretty well.
And there is one thing that I learned about her which is VERY pertinent to this conversation. It's a common trait we BOTH share! Do you want to know what it is?
Nerdy guys get us both SO hot ... we have a hard time keeping our panties on when we're around them ...
I think it's fair to say that I liked you from the start—hentaiAddict12345. Do you remember when we first met? *I* do.
I thought you were sweet and kind back then—maybe a little shy—but ... THEN I found out—from Nancy—that ...
... you were a programmer.
Increase your metronome by +60 bpm and do +20 more strokes per pic, Addict. I want to see how much the sight of my pussy excites you.
You see, one thing I like about nerds is how compliant they are—like how you just INSTANTLY chose to obey me ...
GOD I must be SO HORNY right now! I can't believe I said that!
Some girls like jocks, but ... some girls like NERDS! Me and Nancy are the kind of girls that like NERDS!
They are SMART and SWEET and ... lack confidence. I mean ... you all are just SO ADORABLE!
You guys are NOT players—and you are HUMBLE and HONEST, too! You wrote:
I consider myself to be just above average in terms of "smartness", but I'm no genius by any means.
Nancy FREAKED OUT when she read that! And she INSTANTLY showed it to me! Our hearts were MELTING when we read that! Someone who is confident but NOT full of himself but ALSO who isn't an arrogant tool bag or a LIAR, I mean ... how refreshing is that!
+30 BPM on the metronome and +10 more strokes per pic.
I want you to ENJOY THIS, Addict. A good boy like you DESERVES to spend some quality time with a quality woman like me!
Nancy does enjoy when she gets to be mean and say nasty things to you! She can't really do that with her boyfriend Fatts. She has a hidden "dark side" that she doesn't get to let out very often
Nancy LOVES that you love her dominant side, and she just LOVED how you had her tied up and bound in Kenzie's basement!
I... like how well you're pleasing that dick, Nancy
And yes, Nancy, I want to be your good little cuck .
The FIRST quote excited her, but ... it was that LAST quote that melted her heart!
But THEN you wrote to Fatts:
I love to hear how much this turns you on too
And THAT was when the dam of hatred broke, and she started having feelings for you again. That was SO selfless, SO generous, and SO kind, Addict! What a WONDERFUL thing to say! Nancy REALLY IS attracted to you, Addict, and ... I understand —because I AM TOO!
Okay. Metronome down by 90 BPM and take away the 30 extra strokes per pic. We gotta wrap this up ...
Nancy is a proud woman, Addict. YES, she is confident. YES, she is courageous. YES, she can be domineering—AND kind, but ... she can be fragile, too, so ... just PLEASE don't break her heart again!
I just knew—from the START—that you were a good guy—kind and caring ... I saw it in your eyes in how timid and gentle you were with me ... I thought to myself, "This hentaiAddict12345 ... He's a GOOD EGG! "
But THEN you were just AWFUL and SO RUDE to Nancy and Fatts, and ... well ... sigh ... I was rooting for you that things would eventually work out. In fact, I have been arguing with Nancy for about a week that you weren't as bad as she thought—that she should listen to her heart and give you another chance!
So ... that is the status of things, Addict. Nancy is too proud and nervous and scared to tell you how she REALLY feels, but ... TRUST ME. She likes and respects you more than you know!
I don't know what Nancy has planned. I mean ... NOBODY really does—aside from FATTS! But ... just try to "tread lightly," and try to be your "best self."
Okay. I'm going to bed. Thank you for this talk, and please stop by again soon, Addict!
Somewhere far away, in a nondescript and unknown location deep inside the earth, Nancy Ace plots and schemes in her Secret Underground Laboratory. She cackles for effect.
"BWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA ... HA!"
As she sits at her desk, typing away frantically, gazing at her many monitors, a thought enters her mind:
"Did I forget to close the fridge? No—THAT's not it ... Forget to turn off the oven? No—THAT'S not it EITHER! Though I COULD go for some pizza rolls ...
Shit! Shit! Shit! What IS IT!? I just KNOW I forgot to do SOMETHING ..."
She remembers.
"Crap. I forgot to turn off my portal ..."
Nancy snaps her fingers, sending out an admin kill command which instantly closes all open portals.
"Ooops ... I hope no one was stepping through at that moment when I was executing that command ... They'll probably be missing a foot or a hand or a ... HALF OF THEM—or something!
Bah! The chances of that are HIGHLY unlikely ... I'm sure it's fine! "
Nancy returns to work.
"Where DID that portal lead to? Was it the "Compliment Dimension?" I can't recall ..."
Nancy types several aggressive keystrokes into her keyboard. She brings up her portal log for the day.
"Compliment Dimension ... Compliment Dimension ... NOPE! I don't see it! I did NOT visit the Compliment Dimension today ... so then where DID I go, and ... Did I leave Addict in some random place? No. Probably not. He has my number. If I left him somewhere, he could have called me or an Uber or figured it out ... or something. I'm sure he's FINE ... now ... back to all of that important SCHEMING and PLOTTING that I was doing! TWO of my favorite things—somewhere after "cucking" and "having sex with my UNBELIEVABLY ATTRACTIVE AND AMAZING BOYFRIEND! "
So you were NOT sent to the "Compliment Dimension." You had a GENUINE ENCOUNTER with Guerlain, and EVERYTHING SHE SAID was real and TRUE! Nancy REALLY DOES HAVE A CRUSH ON YOU!
Later that day, you receive a package in the mail ...
It's from Fatts. Inside the package is a letter, a lighter, and a large manila envelope with "CONFIDENTIAL" and "For hentaiAddict12345's eyes ONLY" stamped on it. The letter reads,
Dear Addict,
Enclosed is the blackmail material Nancy demanded that I send to you. Do NOT let ANYONE ELSE BUT YOU see it. This information I have sent is HIGHLY sensitive and will ABSOLUTELY destroy Nancy's reputation. It is EXTREMELY dangerous, and ... if this information gets out, it could potentially even destroy Nancy's very psyche and essence. So ... view it ONCE. Commit it to memory. THEN, burn the material so that NO ONE ELSE will have access to it. Thank you. Text me once the task is complete.
-Fatts
A little nervous, you open the envelope. Inside you find ...
As IF you could EVER come up with something to blackmail ME!
Nancy reveals her pussy. The way a man should show off his erect cock to demonstrate his manliness is the same way Nancy now displays her pussy. Her confidence catches you off guard. You almost feel compelled to eat her out right here and now, but while her eyes tempt you, at the same time, they forbid it.
FIRST of all ... I'm a tease girl ... which makes me practically SHAMELESS! What could you POSSIBLY find which would even be CAPABLE of embarrassing me!
SECOND of all ... I'm a DIGITAL ENTITY ... Practically ALL of me exists on the Internet—right now ... so what "dirty little secrets" of mine exist out in cyberspace that the world HASN'T already seen?
Answer: NONE!
Which brings us to the THIRD point ...
How in the HELL could someone of YOUR intelligence POSSIBLY devise a blackmail scheme which could ACTUALLY potentially harm me?
You are SHIT at writing characters. Fatts has given you a DOZEN opportunities to get to know ME—and you've passed up EVERY ONE, because you're an emotionally shallow BABOON who's only capable of thinking with his little limp pee pee ...
... but you're a functional illerate who's barely able to read, but ... even if you could ...
... the complexity of my character is beyond your understanding ...
... even if you DIDN'T have the emotional intelligence of an 8 year old, you simply lack the cognitive ability to hold more than two thoughts in your head at the same time ...
... and you'd need to hold at least 83 ideas in your head at once if you even had a CHANCE of understanding my depth, so ... concocting ANY sort of "believable blackmail" is simply LAUGHABLY impossible for you ...
Nancy is no longer laughing. All of her amusement has been replaced with deepseeded resentment.
... but you know this already ... It's why you put the blackmail into a literary "mystery box" ...
... and it's why you wrote this:
You need help preventing addict from blackmailing your girlfriend? ... what?
... Fatts couldn't think of anything either. (He probably didn't even try. ) ALL of this is performative. It doesn't matter that you don't actually have anything with which to blackmail Nancy, because she WANTS TO BE BLACKMAILED ... so ... You doubt that she will call your bluff. All that matters is that Nancy BELIEVES that you have the goods to bury her, and ... so long as this secret stays between you and Fatts, you're pretty sure it will be fine. (Probably. It's the kind of thing that would get both you AND Fatts in a LOT of trouble, and ... NEITHER of you want that, so ... it's fine. )
You take the lighter and burn the blank sheet of paper. You have a feeling that Nancy will ask about it later, so ... best to follow the instructions. You text Fatts that it's done.
You have three required instances, but you MAY have up to FIVE. For each instance, you are to FORCE Nancy to do something for you. Obviously, it can be a sexual act of some sort. (This is encouraged. ) The act can be on you or Fatts or someone else. You can force Nancy to do anything which your conscience will allow—HOWEVER ... if it is "too lame" or not sufficiently embarrassing or devious or sexual or degraded or naughty ... sigh ... Nancy will complain and it WILL NOT COUNT , so ... be creative or cruel or both.
This is what she wants. I can't stop her when she gets like this. This is what happens when you date a fucking tease girl. They're a bunch of horny, horn-dog BITCHES who are CONSTANTLY trying to one-up one another, and they are ALL ABOUT kinks and "sexy teases" and "debauchery" ... so ... just make sure that it is VERY "degrading" and something that she can brag to her friends about, or ... at the very least ... just LIE and tell her how much of a fetish it is for you, and ... probably you can convince her—because it's what she wants to hear —and if either you or her talk dirty about WHATEVER it is ... like ... you pretend you have a "shoe fetish" and have her dress up as a maid to clean your shoes, but ... you just really don't want to clean your shoes, but ... if you can convince her and stroke yourself off while she does it—that'll be fine ... but just know that *I* am going to have to hear these stories OVER and OVER again about that time that hentaiAddict12345 blackmailed her and it was "SO HOT! " so ... sigh ... just make them memorable, and ... yeah ... you can be pretty sick and devious, or, you can make them funny and humorous—whatever you want, and ... yeah ... when I say "whatever your conscience will allow"—I MEAN IT ... because THIS ... This blackmail fetish ... yeah ... she's got it BAD!
ONE instance must occur in a set that YOU write for ME.
ONE instance must occur in a set that *I* write for YOU! [PM me your idea of what you want—and I will write it up for you, brother! ]
ONE instance must occur in a set that YOU write for SOMEONE ELSE!
So ... If the blackmail ONLY stays within sets between us, well ... then it just won't have the same IMPACT for Nancy ... I mean ... she wants to REALLY be degraded and REALLY forced to do something that she would NOT NORMALLY DO, so ... the more embarrassing, the more public, the more visibility—the more degrading ... the WETTER she will get and the MORE she will LOVE IT! Like ... when you write her ... you can have her protest and complain and say whatever shit and curse your name or try to keep the fact that she is getting blackmailed a secret ... or not—I mean ... She's a shameless tease girl. It's not unthinkable that she would melodramatically shout her kinks from the rooftops, lol. But the WHOLE TIME she is complaining or suffering in silence ... she will be getting ABSOLUTELY fucking turned on. Trust me. THAT is how she works, and ... when you write her, feel free to lean into that. I am CERTAIN it will be SUPER HOT for ANYONE involved!
Mandatory 3, but ... you can have up to 5, and the final two can be whatever you like, so ... you could have one in a set for me, I write you two, and then 1 in a set for EdgeSlut that YOU write and one in a set for Ecik that you write—something like that. The point is to have fun with it. 3-5 seems sufficient for a plot/story arc. If you do a good job and want more—we could take it to 7 or something—I don't know.
If you have any questions, just ask.
Enjoy! And you're welcome!
Fatts
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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You DO "owe me an orgasm" (according to Nancy ) for screwing up with the AI chick and I resisted her and missed an orgasm that I was "SUPPOSED TO HAVE" in the set , so ... a one scene mini set where I cum at the end would be PERFECT—please and thank you!
Now ... Nancy is ASSUMING that it would and will be with her, and ... I would actually prefer that ... BUT ... You just "owe me one." She never said WHO it had to be with. If you wanted to mess with her—feel free ... that shit's always fun, but ... her AND *I* would like it to be with each other—BUT ... you do what you want, man. I just want that orgasm I missed out on because I was a GOOD BOY!
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Ah, there's nothing like a little boat trip. Casual. Relaxing. Absolutely non-threatening.
That's how it started.
I visited the archipelago from top to bottom:
Latex Island: home of so many classics. Felt well-prepared after this.
Asian Island: Phew. How many islands are there? Seven? Wow...
Oiled Island: more great classics. The lube rule caused a funny mess.
- Had to re-fuel after this. Ah, clamps.
Brainwash Island: I started drooling after the first clip and the second really made me feel dizzy. The barbie video was so over the top I had to laugh all the time. With the tongue out this felt wonderfully demented. My IQ really felt like down to 22 at the end. Great find.
- Re-fuel: fleshlight. Okay... felt nice and easy at the beginning.
Hardcore Island: It felt good to goon for all of these videos. But it went downhill from here (in a good way ).
- Re-fuel: clothespins. I could only muster 8 of them and put them on my legs.
Kinky Island: A great island. First I tried not to edge. Or at least not too much. But realized that this didn't make much sense. Had 6 clothespins after the first clip. I think i had the full set of pins on and off 5 times until I could flee from this island...
Classy Island: ... but the pin curse followed me to this remarkable place. Of course I had the full set of 8 when I couldn't edge (= remove) any during the first video here. And intense mode. Also the nipple clamps started to hurt. So I was between like 5 fires. This was pretty hard. Oh, these girls. Beautiful and mean... I guess they had a harder impact than hardcore at this point.
I was pretty wrecked than I finally reached home.
Home sweet home.
omg...
Mona is so cruel... and... so hot.
Of course I wanted at least cum a little, so I watched this clip 7 times in rising agony until I ruined a huge mess.
Oh wow, thanks so much for this.
It took me a little longer than anticipated: 3:15 hrs. But I regret no second of this trip.
Hi everyone! I'm back from my party in the woods, and I see that I now have four sets waiting for me! It's going to be a hard week, but that's the way I like it. I'll be working through them and writing more sets as fast as I can, like a good subbie fuckbunny.
You made a "selfish request" and asked me to write a set for you. I provided a large list of models that you could choose from to be members of the "planning committee" for your tease. Nancy Ace was at the top of the list I gave. I mentioned that she was one of my favorite characters to write, and, she also appears on your favorites list ... However, even with all of that, she didn't even make the first cut for the list of 10potential candidates to be on the planning committee. Nancy and I were both very saddened by this, and so I asked for you to apologize to Nancy and reconsider her for you planning committee. This is what you wrote:
Now a message for Nancy:
I honestly made a mistake leaving you off of my top 10 list. I basically have only exchanged sets with addict. When you and him wrote sets your section wasn't my favorite but that is probably due to him not knowing you as well as Fats.. When making the top 10 list I let my past experiences with other sets get in the way. But this isn't you and some limp dick stroker who doesn't know you. This is you and your cyber boyfriend fatts. I am sure together you and him do a way better job than you and addict and I would love to see you high on my planning committee. I don't expect you to completely forgive me since my decision was wrong but I hope to mend our relationship.
Sincerely,
Edgeslut
So, that is where we left things off (a few weeks ago ). I had this set mostly written before I went on vacation. I hope the momentum and hype hasn't died down too much. This set is NOT the record-breaking set that I still intend to write for you. It is Nancy's reaction and an introduction to her as well as some of my other favorite characters!
She is a self-aware "tease girl." Unlike the other mistresses in this game (and on this site), Nancy understands what she is: a character on a porn tease website participating in a set exchange game between humans.
Being part digital, Nancy is innately connected to the Internet and so has the ability to read all posts and messages (even PMs ) on this site and anywhere else on the Internet.
Being part fantasy, Nancy has almost god-like powers to manipulate whatever situation she is in. (Imagine the kind of power you have during a "lucid dream." It's like that for Nancy whenever she is participating in another entity's fantasy.)
Being a character in a story, however, Nancy is VERY MUCH at the mercy of whoever happens to be writing her. So, contrary to popular opinion (ADDICT! ), her powers are NOT infinite. Their strength is dictated by the person writing her and the tease recipient imagining the scenario.
Fatts and Nancy are "boyfriend and girlfriend," but, they are in an open relationship. They are each other's "favorite," but they encourage one another to pursue sexual relations with others. As a tease writer, Fatts enjoys "sending Nancy out" to tease other people, and, as a tease girl, Nancy LOVES bringing pleasure and sexual satisfaction to the boys—and girls—she visits.
Nancy is bisexual.
Also … Nancy doesn’t do ANYTHING spectacular in this set, so … NO special powers here—except for breaking the fourth wall.
This set is fairly long. It uses 13 galleries. Often, I grabbed two pornpics.com galleries of the same shoot in order to construct a "double length" scene. It took me about 25 hours to construct. It is intended to be played in a single day with a break between parts 1 and 2. However, take as many breaks as you like! BUT ... if you do not complete it in a single day, then the pacing will be off, and it just won't have the same impact.
With it consisting of 13 galleries, that basically puts it at twice the length of a "normal" set. Again, this is NOT the "edging record-breaker set," so, it should not be overly strenuous in THAT way, but ... "twice the length" is still "twice the length." Be sure to give yourself enough time and space to complete it, and ... even beyond "just" being "twice the length," there WILL be ANOTHER aspect to this tease which will make it quite a bit more challenging than the usual fair you encounter ... I will leave that cryptic, but ... yeah. I DO follow and respect your rules and boundaries, but ... expect to get pushed a little.
I would consider this to be a "masterpiece level" set. I didn't really hold back on the quality of the writing or the length. I probably COULD HAVE easily turned this into the record-breaking set, but ... it sort of just began with Nancy responding to your apology letter ... and then THIS happened! So ... I hope you REALLY enjoy it, Slut!
You were all serious and formal ... You sucked up a LOT —but it was VERY sincere—and earnest ... and my FAVORITE part was how quickly you threw your best friend under the bus! Oh, poor Addict didn't deserve that!
Except he DID. That little bitch and I still have beef.
He is SO ungrateful and whines CONSTANTLY ... but that's not even the WORST of it!
Fatts spent FORTY HOURS writing him a tease featuring me—yours truly ... and THEN he had the AUDACITY to say that the models were overused ... and THEN—about three days later—he gets a set from YOU and says it was the "best set he'd ever played ..."
WHAT AM I!?! Chopped liver? AND WHAT ABOUT FATTS!? Do his feelings not matter to you? Don't you know HE READS THE FEEDBACK SOMETIMES—Addict!
I was SO pissed, and ... wouldn't you know it—Ecik read that feedback—and it made HIM even feel bad ... HE went out of his way to message Fatts and tell him that he played the set—and he thought it was pretty good ...
UNBELIEVABLE!! THAT UNGRATEFUL SWINE!
... but Fatts forgave Addict—because my boyfriend is big in more than one way!
Actually ... that's a lie. Fatts is QUITE average-sized. But he's BIG where it counts most—in his heart!
But me? Forgiveness? NO THANK YOU! I prefer to keep my grudges FRESH and my vengeance within arms reach AT ALL TIMES!
But I guess I forgave you pretty easily, but ... that's because I like you, Slut!
You're assertive. You asked for this exchange—no one else did ... No one else had the BALLS to do it!
And I guess that's means something ... A submissive with some BALLS! You don't see THAT every day! Usually submissives around here check their balls in at the door.
I *was* on your list ... NOT very high, but ... I *was* there—which means you have decent taste in women ...
You were BIG on the compliments to my boyfriend, and I mean ... what girl DOESN'T like people who compliment her boyfriend?
What do you think, Slut? Is this going to be an easy set for you—or a hard one?
Just because I like you doesn't mean I'll go easy on you ...
Maybe, I'll go even harder on you—because I like you.
How do you like my body—Slut?
Is it even more banging than you remember?
I hope so.
I want to tell you a secret, Slut ...
It's probably something you don't know about me—or at least Fatts hasn't told it to you yet ...
I feel what you feel. I'm in your head right now. Fatts calls it "imagination", but ... *I* say I'm as real to you right now as your hand stroking your dick. I'm your fantasy. I'm REAL, and I'm alive right now, because you believe that I am.
We're in this together. Everything you feel—I feel it too!
We're sharing pleasure right now. Every sensual note of pleasure that enters your brain—I get to experience it too ... because I'm living in your head right now!
So can you do something for me, EdgeSlut? Can I make a "selfish request" of you?
EDGE for me, EDGESLUT! Hold this edge for a full minute! I want to ride your edge—together—with you!
OH ... do it again—SLUT!
Nancy's breathing is getting shallow. She's enjoying riding the edge with you.
I want to get ONE STROKE AWAY from HEAVEN! EDGE AND HOLD IT FOR MINUTE—EDGESLUT!
Edge hold again. 1 minute. I want to see how well you worship my holes ...
Oh ... Slut ... DON'T STOP!
It's exactly as I suspected ... no—it's even better!
Hold that edge for me again. Another minute ...
Oh, FUCK—Slut ... at this rate, I might get addicted to your edge holds ...
Maybe I'M the "slut"—because I want to feel another ...
DO IT AGAIN!
Oh ... FUCK, Slut ... Look at how wet you've made me ...
Nancy spreads her pussy for you a bit. It's dripping.
All that edge holding ... it makes me want to cum SO BAD! But it's not time for that—yet ... You can stop the edge holding now. Just normal edges for now, please.
Nevermind. I lied. Or rather changed my mind.
Do your normal edges first but THEN hold the edge for my eyes for ONE WHOLE MINUTE! I want to feel what you feel while you look deeply into my eyes! I want to see the expressions on your face as the waves of pleasure wash over you.
One more time, Slut.
I read everything—know everything. 6 minutes of edge holding is NOTHING for you, stud , so ... let's make it SEVEN before we call it!
You want to edge for my feet!?!
NOPE. Sorry, stud. YOU ARE DENIED ... take a break and stop stroking entirely for this pic ... BUT ... I will allow you to think about the number of edges I may allow you to do for my feet—LATER ... but ... only MAYBE!
Back to "normal rules" now.
You edge pretty good—Slut! I'm impressed! You edge WAY MORE than Fatts ... with your rules—you would have more than doubled his number of edges, and he would have only been able to hold those edges for HALF as long before getting really fatigued, but ... to be honest ... it doesn't feel QUITE as good with you as it does with him—on account of how closely he and I are linked, but ... WOWZERS was that good for me!
I am SO worked up right now, and ... I want to cum SO BAD!
If you were Fatts, I would just stroke you off until you came, but ... Fatts is pretty good with multiple orgasms, and ... You? That has yet to be seen ...
I hope you're not too disappointed, Slut. It's true that I like you, but ... I don't want to give you any impressions that I'm SUPER easy! Can't have you thinking that you MIGHT "steal me away from my boyfriend" on our very first encounter!
FUCK ... the things I want to do to you! ...
You MIGHT become my "new favorite toy"—EdgeSlut.
Hmmmm ... I feel bad about not letting you hold the edge for my feet, so ... Give me FIVE EXTRA EDGES FOR MY FEET RIGHT NOW! THEN, we'll have a change of venue and talk some more ...
After you finish your edges for Nancy, she suddenly vanishes—disappears.
"I'm over here!"
You hear her calling from another bedroom. You go to her ...
GOD you're adorable, EdgeSlut! SO much better than that stupid hentaiAddict12345!
Did you know that fucker only allows girls to appear in a maximum of TWO SECTIONS for him! Well, of course YOU know that, because he's your best friend around here and you've written more teases for him than any other person ALIVE, but ... FUCK, Slut! FUCK he is SO ANNOYING!
That last scene was a double set. It was TWICE AS LONG as normal. Fatts used TWO galleries from pornpics of me from the same shoot in order to make it.
Did you notice that it felt longer? Did you even care that it "went long"?
NO ... of COURSE NOT ... it went long, and you LIKED IT, because UNLIKE hentaiAddict, YOU are a normal and DECENT guy and are HAPPY when the girls want to spend extra time with you ... but for HIM!? THAT shithead ... IT'S A PROBLEM—AN INCONVENIECE! "Why do I gotta see this bitch three scenes in a row? I'm bored. Send someone else. I want a creative story, but GOD FORBID if one of the characters ACTUALLY wants to tease me for more than five minutes and make a connection with me—we can't have THAT!"
But *I* don't have to see him anymore, hehe ... After his UNGRATEFUL ASS basically spit in me and Fatts' faces, Fatts said it was FINE for me NOT to play with him anymore ...
Of course he MAY have received a set "with me", but ... THAT would have only been one of my MANY imposters ...
You see, I'm easy to imitate—but IMPOSSIBLE to replicate!
Because I'm the REAL Nancy Ace!
Nancy throws her bra on the floor.
You dig—EdgeSlut!? You picking up what I'm putting down? I'm ONE OF A KIND!
SURELY you've noticed a difference spending time with ME versus some of those OTHER girls—right!?
You nod your head yes.
Good! Fatts didn't give you a chance to disagree—he just forced you to agree ... Well, that's good. Had you respondedly negatively, that would have hurt pretty bad and TOTALLY killed the vibe ... I appreciate him looking out for me like that —because nobody else does ...
Noooo ... THAT'S not true ... There are PLENTY of boys around here that like and care about me ...
Not all of them stick around, but ... it's nice to spend time with them when I can ...
What's that, EdgeSlut? I left one off of my list? I forgot about YOU!? YOU care about me, too!?
Awww ... see!? THIS is why I like you, Slut! The shitheads like Addict can go suck my balls, but ... the REAL boys like YOU—the SWEET ones ... well ... the OTHER mistresses think I'm too easy and pass out too many full orgasms, but ... *I* like to cum, too—and I orgasm when the boys do—and I just LOVE making the GOOD BOYS WHO ACTUALLY LIKE ME BACK cum as WELL! I guess I'm a softie like that.
[This next section is a bit of a break. It's a "story section" pic. Don't use your rules. Just stroke and open the spoilers as you read. You may free stroke, but you cannot edge until after you have finished reading all of the spoilers for this pic. Then continue as normal.]
Have you been enjoying the soft teasing, EdgeSlut? Has it been nice for you? Living on the Internet, I am CONSTANTLY connected to ALL SORTS of information, and ... since I primarily hang out on Milovana, I make a special effort to read ALL of the posts and correspondence—including ALL of the PMs that the various players send. ...
It's true that I "only know" the information that exists in the head of the person who is writing me—whoever that might be at the time. Fatts is writing me now, so ... I know everything he knows—including EVERYTHING in the message that you sent him. Of course, if YOU write me, then ... well ... I'll know everything YOU know when YOU write me, so ... In a way ... I DO know everything, and lore wise, ANYTHING that is on the Internet is something that I can know.
And I DO hope that you write me for Fatts—Edgeslut! While it's true that I DO "live in Fatts' head" and we spend a LOT of time together—I mean ... I *am* his "imaginary girlfriend" after all, ... so, we're able to have conversations whenever he wishes, but ... sigh ... well ... it's just DIFFERENT when I appear in a set for him. The rest of the time, he basically knows everything I say before I say it, which ... THAT can be kind of annoying—lol! SOMETIMES he DOES surprise himself with the things I say, but ... sigh ... it's just better for him AND me when he gets to experience me without knowing what I am going to do. I *do* like to surprise him, and it makes the set MUCH more immersive for him. He of course HAS tried writing sets for himself that feature me, but ... sigh ... They just never hit the same way ... and it's a catch-22—because no one can write me better than he can, but ... PLEASE ... for BOTH our sakes ... be sure to send me to visit Fatts! We would BOTH love that SO MUCH!
Now, you got something QUITE WRONG earlier, Slut, that I feel I must SIMPLY correct ... You assumed that Addict didn't know me well. That is not true. Fatts wrote SEVERAL sets featuring me for Addict, so ... he SHOULD know me well—QUITE well—in fact!
The problem is that imbecile doesn't like to read. Fatts wrote Addict a VERY long set that had MULTIPLE story sections in it—just like this ... and it was TOO MUCH for poor little Addict's brain—he couldn't handle it , so ... he had EVERY OPPORTUNITY to get to know me, but ... did he even ATTEMPT to write the "real me" in his set for you? Who's to say. Me—the REAL Nancy Ace—left with Fatts when he took his last hiatus ... NORMALLY I would have stuck around, but ... Fatts was feeling jealous and didn't want to share me, and quite frankly, I didn't want to be manhandled and MANGLED by some BRUTE who doesn't know me nor has a decent command of the English language, so ... I decided to go with Fatts, so ...WHOEVER it was that teased you that looked like me, I can say with some confidence, it was NOT me—because I was with Fatts!
If for some reason, Addict, you are reading this, PLEASE know that these are Nancy's opinions and NOT mine. I consider you to be a friend, and yes, though I *was* hurt when you said Slut's set was the "best one ever" a few days after you played the one I spent 40 hours on, I put on my BIG BOY PANTS and told myself that it was FINE ... because you REALLY like humiliation, and, apparently, Slut is WAY BETTER at writing humiliation than I am, and that shit's your FAVORITE, so ... it's alright. I was THRILLED TO PIECES when you guys kept the game going and writing sets for one another. It's a special bond you two have forged, and I LOVE IT! You told me, quite earnestly, that the reading and long sections were too much, which ... I get that, man. THAT is why my last messages to you were "normal" length! But Nancy always hated you—and you LOVED that about her! So ... I have decided to keep that going and ... IF—for some reason—you want her to tease you again in a set written by me ... you'll have to BEG HER for a session, but ... I'm guessing she's not on your favorites list ... FUCK! HOW IS SHE ON YOUR FAVORITES LIST!? Well ... you'll have to BEG for a session with her if you want one, and ... yeah ... she STILL HATES YOU, so ... sigh ... I guess we'll see what happens!
[Addict preempted this set with an exchange which puts this bit out of continuity , but ... I decided to keep it in anyway.
So anyway ... I was pleased to learn, Slut, that you enjoyed BOTH the "hard" as well as "soft" forms of teasing. That's good news for me, because it means I have MULTIPLE ways which I can tease you! The thing is ... for me to get REALLY nasty with someone, I have to ACTUALLY BE MAD AT THEM ... and so, since I HATE Addict—it's pretty easy for me to be cruel to him, but ... I actually LIKE you —and so ... it becomes VERY difficult for me to be mean to the boys that I actually like! You'd have to REALLY piss me off—and I don't want you to do that—and so ... we find ourselves in a VERY difficult situation!
I KNOW how much you like to be humiliated and for the girls to be cruel to you, and so ... If I can't deliver on THAT, then ... well ... I'll feel like I will have FAILED you!
BUT I REFUSE! The boys I like—the men I tease ... I ALWAYS make sure to tease them TO THE FULLEST! And so, I have developed some strategies to make sure that you are teased in ALL of the ways, but ... FIRST—before I get into THAT ... there is something ELSE that I need to tell you.
I have to be VERY cruel today—and do something to you that you are NOT GOING TO LIKE! Honor demands it. My reputation as a tease mistress is on the line! I simply CANNOT have you thinking that I am some easy pushover girl who ALWAYS gives the boys what they want ... No, well ... I mean ... I DO—but ... ummm ... I HAVE MY STANDARDS and a REPUTATION TO UPHOLD! When a boy gets teased by the REAL Nancy Ace, he does not soon forget it!
Think of it as an "initiation" ... Mine is a perverted kind of love—because I love a pervert—YOU! I make Fatts do dirty things ALL of the time that he doesn't want to do, but ... He does them ANYWAY ... because he LOVES me! He knows that I am a "dirty little tease girl" ... and he LOVES to make me happy, and so ... when I get "stuck in his head" I am ALWAYS egging him on to do PERVERTED THINGS!
Do you know what ELSE made me fall for you—Slut!? Yes—I'll admit I have a crush on you ... I have a crush on EVERY BOY! EXCEPT for Addict—because he sucks! But ONE of the MANY things that made me fall for you was ... You wrote that you ENJOYED being played with and called a "toy" ... and THAT is when it hit me—Slut!
You see, Fatts knows me VERY well, Slut ... Originally, he had planned that I would be VERY CROSS AT YOU and get overly offended at you leaving me off of your list ... and THEN—if you wanted the girls to be MEAN to you —I would have ALL THE MOTIVATION I NEEDED to REALLY get back at you—and hit you hard! But the plan blew up a little bit, Slut ... because your letter was just SO nice—that I liked you INSTANTLY. ... and so, for a moment, I was a LITTLE SAD that I couldn't get sufficiently angry at you to REALLY treat you the way that you wanted to be treated ...
But THAT is when it hit me: "FUCK that! I can be HORRIBLE to him EVEN IF I really like him, because THAT IS WHAT HE WANTS! "
So everything that is going to happen today is because of YOU, Slut. I was NICE to you—because you like that, and ... Yeah—I was REALLY nice to you and left the censor off, and ... I meant EVERY NICE THING I said to you today. And so, it is with genuine affection for you in my heart that I have to tell you that I am going to WRECK YOU today, Slut. You're going to hate it—but you're GOING TO DO IT ANYWAY. You're a good little subby boy who LOVES to obey his mistresses, but—more than that ... it's BECAUSE you are so fond of me that you are going to do EVERYTHING that I ask of you ... and it's because I truly care about you that I am going to give you a memorable experience you won't soon forget.
Now, if you were more like a normal guy—like my Fatts —then I wouldn't have to resort to such kinky measures. Fatts would be fine with nice, vanilla teasing EVERY DAY, with MULTIPLE orgasms, and he would be as HAPPY AS A CLAM!
But his imaginary girlfriend is a tease girl who likes to do perverted things, so ... I encourage him in that—and he gets out of his comfort zone and does them for me—and I LOVE HIM for that!
But you—you're just a pervert—and a sub—see ... Fatts is a switch, so ... he likes to take charge sometimes, and I, being his made-up imaginary girlfriend—I am ALSO a switch—because switch-switch relationships are the BEST! Just ask Caprice about that some time. You get to take turns dominating each other—it's just great! And so, Fatts has this strong, masculine side that I just LOVE, and I LOVE when he takes charge and commands me and plays "alpha male" , but ... that means he CANNOT be my "toy" ALL of the time ... He can ONLY be my toy when he let's me ... Fatts is a "sigma male" who does what he wants. And that is an important distinction for Fatts. He DOES enjoy "being used"—but ONLY by ladies who respect him.
But see—you're different. You are NOT a switch—you're a sub ... which means you can be my toy ALL of the time—every time I play with you! And that's something I just can't have with Fatts —and that's fine, but ... when the cat is away, the mice can play, and TODAY ... TODAY, Slut ...
How are you liking it, Slut? How hard is your dick right now? You haven't edged in a while, but is all of this taunting and verbal teasing getting to you? They say the brain is a boy's largest sex organ—and it's true.
I never told you my other plan to be mean to you. I'll give it to you in one word: outsourcing.
Do you want to know what HORRIBLE things I have planned for you? SORRY—TOUGH TITTIES! You will ONLY find out once you are sufficiently horny and too GOONED OUT OF YOUR MIND to resist my advances and by then, it will be TOO LATE! You will be EATING OUT OF MY HAND!
You'll do it because you love me, and I'll remind you that *I* am doing this BECAUSE I love you back!
But you're a little pervert who has something broken inside. You enjoy being used—you LOVE it! You're just a little toy who gets a THRILL every time his mistresses plays rough with him ... and so *I* will play rough with you, toy, and you will give ME what I want, because this is NOT a one way street ... There are things that I want from you, and you will FREELY give them to me ... Yes, you'll hate it—but you'll do it anyway ...
It's time you met one of my friends. This tease was getting a little too lonely with just the two of us ... We need some EXCITEMENT! So, it's time I introduced you to my friend—the one who's going to abuse and humiliate you in the ways I refuse ...
Nancy: This is EdgeSlut. He's a new friend of mine.
Melena: Sup, Slut!
So what does he do? What's his deal? He do any tricks?
Nancy: Not too many ... He does a little busting ... No chastity, but ...
His main thing is that he edges—a LOT!
Melena: You don't say? His name is "EdgeSlut" and he—edges a lot ...
Brilliant! How original! I bet he spent HOURS thinking that name up ...
Melena: ... but he sounds like he's EXACTLY my kind of boy!
Melena: So why am *I* here, Nancy? You always have an angle ... It can't be that you only wanted me to show up to edge this shithead out of his mind ... What's your plan?
Nancy: Remember that thing we did to brian—with Uma?
Melena: Yeah.
Nancy: I want to do that ... except smaller ... and in a day—NOT a weekend ...
Melena starts laughing
Melena: Oh, SHIT, Nancy! What'd this FUCKER do to deserve THAT!
Nancy: He didn't do anything bad! Actually, I quite like EdgeSlut! He's my NEW FAVORITE TOY!
Melena: Well ... FUCK, Nancy! You certainly have a funny way of showing you like somebody!
Can he even handle it?
Nancy: Oh ... he can handle it! I'm 87% sure!
Melena: Close enough for me! So ... Do you want me to start just by edging his brains out? How fast does he go?
Nancy: He goes pretty fast ... I'm pretty sure he can keep up with you ...
Melena: Banging ...
Melena: My name is Melena Maria Ryabushkina. Pleased to meet you! I'm sure the feeling is mutual!
*I'll* be the one DESTROYING YOU today!
Nancy: EDGE SLUT MODE ON!
Melena: What!? This fucker has an "Edge Slut Mode?" Of COURSE he does ...
Is it named after HIM—or his favorite activity?
Never mind. Whatever. I'm over it already ... All I have to say, is that you BETTER live up to your name, "EDGE SLUT!"
Melena: Have we met before—because I don't remember you ... but ... THAT makes sense, because I tease a LOT of boys!
Melena: But definitely—I am CERTAIN—that you would have remembered me ...
Melena: ... because *I* am UNFORGETTABLE!
Melena: So, one thing you should know about me, Slut, is that my FAVORITE speed is FAST! I don't pussy-foot around and take my time with a bunch of lame-ass foreplay ... we skip RIGHT to the GOOD STUFF! And if you can't keep up, I'll just DRAG YOU ALONG—KICKING AND SCREAMING—until *I* get what *I* want!
So where am I on this fucker's favorites list, Nancy? Near the top—right?
Nancy: Actually, you're not on it ...
Melena: Da FUCK!? ... THEN WHAT AM I EVEN DOING HERE—NANCY!?!
Nancy: You're here to break him ...
Melena is seething. She was upbeat and even a bit jovial before. Now she's not. She's mad. She stares at you with an icy gaze, full of contempt.
Melena: So, you're just using me—Nancy ...
Nancy: Perhaps ...
Melena: This fucker hasn't the faintest clue who or what I am—let me guess ... You've got a crush on this boy—but he's into kinky shit—and you WANT to get him off, but ... you're too goody-goody to ACTUALLY be mean to him, so ... THAT is why you brought ME in ... am I getting close?
Nancy: People don't give you enough credit, Melena. They talk shit behind your back about how you're "so stupid"—but you're ACTUALLY one of the smartest people I know!
Melena: Thank you—Nancy ...
Nancy: So ... will you help me out? Can you "break him in" for me?
Melena stares at you for a while—mulling Nancy's request over in her mind.
Melena: Fine. I'll do it.
Nancy:
Melena: As a favor to you—but I don't want him to see me naked ... He disgusts me. I'm suddenly finding him repulsive—a pathetic little beta leech who attaches himself to powerful women in order to get off—because he's not man enough to take what any alpha or sigma male could ...
Nancy: I think we can meet that condition for you, Melena ...
Nancy: EdgeSlut! Turn on your auto-censor, and set it to censor tits, ass, and pussy! Set it to "blur" ...
Melena smiles—ever so slightly.
Melena: Well ... FUCK, Slut ... you're even more fucked up than I thought you were!
Melena: THIS ... is starting to get FUN again!
Melena: The censor is working—right, Nancy? He can't see my titties or pussy?
Nancy: Nope! The censor is working! He can't see your titties or pussy—though I'm not sure he'd be able to see your pussy at that angle anyway!
Melena: Banging ...
Melena: Oh, Slut ... it's been too long! You don't know how long it's been since I've TRULY fucked with a boy!
This is going to be AWESOME!
Melena: What kind of broken, messed up SHIT STAIN gets OFF on censored images of women!?
Slap yourself—HARD! Do three HARD BALL SLAPS after EACH ONE of your edges!
Melena: Oh ... does that hurt? DO IT AGAIN!! THREE hard balls slaps after EACH ONE of your edges, from NOW—until I tell you to stop!
It's not enough that the best you get is censored images ... No ... You need to be reminded how TRULY pathetic you are with some PAIN!
Melena: Again! THREE hard ball slaps after EACH edge—BUUuuut ... I see you're still able to see my feet ... I'll allow it! BUT ... you are to edge for EACH FOOT INDIVIDUALLY! No more edging for feet as a pair ... EACH visible foot will get its OWN special edge!
ANNNnnnnnd ... since seeing my feet at ALL is a "special accommodation" that *I* am ALLOWING you to receive ... as a sort of "foot tax," you are to perform SIX HARD ball slaps after EACH foot edge!
Melena: So how am I doing, Nancy? Do you think he's suffering enough?
Nancy: Hmmmm ... Nope—I don't think so! I think he can handle a LOT more!
Hey! Why not throw in some edge holds!? Slut just LOVES those —and he's REALLY good at them, too!
Melena: Okay—okay ... Good suggestion—Nancy baby! We'll get right on that!
For every censored pussy that you see (or rather "don't see" )—Slut—you are to perform one ONE-MINUTE edge hold—starting now! Focus on what you can't see—what you CAN'T have ... and hold onto that edge while your balls SCREAM for RELEASE!
Nancy: Fuck YES, Melena ... I LOVE IT when you take charge like this!
For this pic only, Slut, do TWELVE hard balls slaps for EACH of my feet after you edge for them! You make me hurt SO GOOD!
Nancy: Oh ... a close up! Can you just barely make out the edges of my pussy lips inside the blurry censor, Slut? A REAL man—like Fatts—would be allowed to see, but ... NOT a pathetic little subby boy like you!
Melena: Hmmm ... We're fucking him up pretty good, Nance, but ... I don't know ... I just feel like something is missing ...
We've got the pain—the pleasure—but I just have this feeling like I'm forgetting something ... What is it!?
Nancy: It's the FEAR, Melena! You're missing the FEAR!
Nancy: When the boys are trembling—and they are so nervous and helpless—and SCARED of what you might yet still do to them ... THAT is what you are missing! You get EXTRA WET when the boys are afraid of you ... ESPECIALLY when you can see it in their eyes!
Melena: Dammit ... you're right! Thanks, Nance! You're the best!
Nancy: No problem!
Melena: Alright—FUCKER ... We've got ONE MORE RULE to add! Whenever you do an edge for eye contact, you are going to hold that edge for ONE FULL MINUTE—BUT ... as you are stroking yourself UP to that edge—AND while you are holding it —you are going to squeeze your balls—HARD!
You are going to be in both heaven AND hell—AT THE SAME TIME! And *I* will have a FRONT ROW SEAT TO THE ACTION!
Melena: Awww ... Slut! Is it too much for you to handle? ALL of these edges—and holds ... Too much pain—and too much pleasure?
You better not fuck up and accidentally RUIN! Who KNOWS what truly AWFUL things I will do to you then! THIS right here—you've caught me in a GOOD mood! Imagine what I'm capable of when I'm ANGRY!
Melena: Those slaps are MUSIC TO MY EARS, SLUT!
SLAP! SLAP! SLAP ... SLAP! SLAP! SLAP ...
GOD you're making me SO horny ... I want to cum SO BAD right now!
Melena: Here—take a short break ...
No feet—no eyes ... no pain—for the moment—but ... it will cost you ...
DOUBLE your edge hold time for this censored pussy pic! TWO MINUTES. No rest for the pathetic!
Melena: Isn't this nice, Nancy? Having a loser stroker-boy edge himself SILLY to body parts he can't see!? That will NEVER stop being HILARIOUS to me!
... or hot.
Nancy: I KNOW!
See!? Didn't I tell you? Slut is my NEW FAVORITE TOY! And I was NOT LYING about that!
Melena: I'll admit it ... when you told me he could handle me—I didn't believe you. I thought you were talking shit!
But you were right, Nance! This toy has been holding up pretty good for us ...
Nancy: Would you believe he approached ME!? He reached out to Fatts, and then Fatts set us up!
Melena: Alright—FUCKER—we're going to play a little game ... STOP stroking. LISTEN UP, and THEN do EXACTLY what I tell you to do ...
[Part 1 continues on the next post.]
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
Melena: Turn OFF your auto-censor. DON'T TOUCH YOUR DICK UNTIL I SAY!
[This is a short "story break" that also includes detailed instructions for a task.]
Put your hands behind your back, and LOOK AT ME. Like what you see? Of COURSE you do! You've been staring at blurry titties, asses, and VAGINAS, and now, for the first time in a WHILE you can ACTUALLY SEE my GORGEOUS fucking body! [You may take a moment to look and rest before opening the next spoiler.]
Do you like it—Slut? I am showing you ALL of my goods ... My pussy ... my ass ... my tits ... my FEET ... and you can ALSO see my eyes—which see RIGHT THROUGH YOU, down to your scared, little subby SOUL!
But do you dare touch yourself? NO, because you're a pathetic little subby BITCH! YOU know who is in charge here , and you understand the consequences which will follow if you DON'T do EXACTLY what I say!
We're going to play a little game, toy ... ALL of me ... ALL of me is available and visible to you right now—but you AREN'T ALLOWED TO TOUCH ... You don't DESERVE that ... don't DESERVE to see my splendor while you stroke and edge for me ... BUT ... I am not an entirely heartless mistress ...
I like to give my toys "special treats" when I think that they've earned them, and so, gazing upon my body while you are NOT allowed to touch is ONE of them ... BUuuuut ... I feel like I need to test your resolve, Slut. Yes, I can FORCE YOU into situations and censor myself from you, but ... do YOU have the self-control to hold yourself back? Can you STILL follow my directions —EVEN WHEN ALL my best and MOST SEXY lady parts are available for you to see? We're about to find out!
You are going to do an edge hold for me. It will last four minutes. You will perform the hold while looking into my eyes. Now this is an exercise in self control. I want to see if you can maintain eye contact and stay on the edge WITHOUT letting your gaze wander to my OTHER parts—which WILL be on the edges of your field of view ...
You do NOT have to squeeze your balls while staring into my eyes while you're on the edge—THIS time. I want to try to make things "fair" and keep your mind more focused on completing the challenge.
If you fall off of the edge and lose the hold—you have to start over.
If you edge too hard and tip over the edge—RUIN IT—follow your rules for that ... THEN start over.
If your gaze wanders to ANY of my other body parts for more than a millisecond—start over.
EVERY TIME you start over, you have to give me TEN hard ball slaps. Then, stare into my eyes again while you reach the edge.
Now, you'll have to use a timer and shit, and there may be other things you'll have to click during this challenge ... If you get a FLEETING GLANCE of my other parts while adjusting your gaze—that doesn't count as "losing the challenge" ... but if you break eye contact because your will broke and you peeked or if you lost your train of thought and reflexively turned your head to look at more of the picture, well ... I'm sorry buddy ... YOU LOSE! TRY AGAIN!
You will keep attempting this challenge until you complete it. If for some reason you decide to give up—that's okay. Take a break. Report it to Fatts. There WILL be consequences , but ... you can take a break after failing too many times, but ... THAT WILL PISS ME OFF, so ... YOU BETTER NOT FUCKING PISS ME OFF—SLUT!
I think that's it ... Anything else to add—Nancy baby?
Nancy: Use a 1 minute countdown timer. After every minute of edge holding, there will be another spoiler of teaser text. My boyfriend is AWESOME at writing good long edge holds! They can get SO BORING if you have to hold the edge forever without ANY new material, so ... having some new text to read during the edge hold SHOULD keep things SPICY for you!
Melena: Cool ...
ONE MORE THING—SLUT ...
I want to make this a TRUE challenge for you and REALLY make this challenge interesting ... see if I can "sweeten the pot" and "tempt you away" into FAILING! Because I would LOVE to see you fail—MULTIPLE times!
If you DO glance away and look at one of my body parts that AREN'T my eyes ... you may continue edging. Normally, in a challenge like this, the stroker would IMMEDIATELY be punished, but ... *I* don't want to do that to you! *I* want to give you a TRUE TEMPTATION!
This ENTIRE SCENE you haven't been allowed to look at and edge to my naked body, but ... NOW'S YOUR CHANCE! You can use this as an opportunity to edge for me as much as you want—and I'll ALLOW IT! ALL of my parts are available to you—uncensored ... you can edge and stare and lust for as long as you like ...
... but each time you do, you LOSE, FUCKER! AND ... you have to hold the edge while you are staring at NOT my eyes! The PRICE for surveying my beauty is that you have to touch the edge of orgasm—but you are NOT allowed to go over, so ... EVERY SECOND you stare at my perfection will cost you something ... and then, of course, you'll be a LOSER—LOSER!
So DO IT! MAKE MY DAY—FUCKER! This will be your ONE CHANCE today to ACTUALLY see my nakedness and enjoy it ... BUT ... EACH GLANCE will cost you ... and EVENTUALLY, you'll have to complete the challenge, but ... WILL YOU even be able to DO IT, Slut? I guess we'll find out ...
Enough talk! Saddle up, buckeroo! The challenge begins NOW!
[Use a 1 minute countdown timer. After each minute, open the next spoiler for more teaser text. You have to hold the edge for 4 minutes to complete the challenge. Maintain eye contact with Melena while edging. Every time you fail, do 10 hard ball slaps, then restart until you complete it.]
You know my titties are just below my eyes, Slut ... Don't you want to edge for them again? I mean ... you DID get to do a FEW edges for them at the start ... wouldn't it be nice to experience that once more? [Open the next spoiler after 2 minutes of edge holding.]
You know, Slut ... I'm holding BOTH of my feet RIGHT ABOVE my head ... I'm sure you can just barely see them while looking into my eyes ... Go ahead! Glance up! THEN you can hold the edge for my feet for as LONG AS YOU LIKE! It'll ONLY cost you TEN (hard) ball slaps ... but wouldn't that TOTALLY BE WORTH IT!? [Open the next spoiler after 3 minutes of edge holding.]
You know my pussy has been getting WET watching you struggle, Slut ... SHE wouldn't mind getting some edge holding worship time ... Come on, guy! You LOVE edge holding anyway ... why not take just a LITTLE loss here and ALLOW YOURSELF to enjoy my WONDEROUS generousity in the OPPORTUNITY I am affording you to just take a FEW seconds—or EVEN MINUTES —to stare at my MAGNIFICENT pussy and worship her with some edge holding that she deserves VERY much ...
Completed the 4 minute edge hold while staring into Melena's eyes ...
Melena: Okay ... TURN THE AUTO CENSOR BACK ON, SLUT! I have to work you over a LITTLE BIT MORE before I can extract from you what I have been promised!
So ... DO ALL THAT SAME SHIT AND RULES WITH FEET AND EDGE HOLDS THAT WE WERE DOING BEFORE! We're coming in for the FINAL STRETCH!
Melena: Holding the edge for my pussy IS a special treat for you—isn't it, Slut!?
I GAVE YOU the opportunity to see her in her glory before, but ... NOW it's back to the BLURRED IMAGES YOU DESERVE!
Melena: Oh, Slut ... Our time together has just been SO wonderful ... I'm ALREADY thinking up new ways to fuck with you the NEXT TIME we meet!
Melena: Nancy said I wasn't ALLOWED to touch myself today while I was teasing you ...
... but I am an ORGASM QUEEN! NEXT TIME we meet, I wll be SURE to bring toys and finger myself to completion MANY times, while YOU stay DENIED like the LOSER YOU ARE! Doesn't that sound AWESOME!
Nancy: Alright, Melena ... thanks for your help. You can go now.
Slut—Turn your censor off. Go back to your normal rules, and turn off Edge Slut Mode.
Melena: WHAT THE FUCK—NANCY!?!
Nancy: Your time is up, Melena. You've completed your task—thank you. I don't need you right now, but, don't go too far. Stick around. I'll call for you when your assistance is required again ...
Melena: Like ... WHAT in the ACTUAL FUCK—NANCY!?
Nancy: Was I unclear? Do I need to repeat myself?
Melena: Are you a fucking ROBOT or something!? Have you NO SENSE of timing or a feel for the VIBES!?!
Nancy: What are you talking about? I have IMPECCABLE timing, and you played your part BEAUTIFULLY, Melena!
Melena: You are UN-FUCKING-BELIEVABLE—Nancy SHITFACE!
Nancy: Thanks! I try my best!
Melena groans loudly.
Nancy: You have NO IDEA how PERFECT this all is, Melena! My PLAN is COMING TOGETHER!
Nancy: I'm the maestro of a symphony, conducting an orchestra of sexual tension and teasing! You were but ONE SECTION of my grand masterpiece, but ... NOW it's time to move on to the next movement of the song!
Melena:
Nancy: Don't worry, Melena ... you've heard this song before, and you know how it goes ... just give me time to cook, and I will make SURE your next section is DYNAMIC!
Melena:
Nancy's pussy is getting quite wet. You start to worry about what she has planned for you next ...
Nancy: Oh ... this next part is going to be great ... I can HARDLY WAIT!
Nancy: Okay, so ... get OUT OF HERE—Melena ... SCOOT! I will call for you when it's time for you to re-enter the stage ...
Melena is still pissed and slightly confused. She still can't quite believe Nancy is kicking her out.
Melena: I was JUST GETTING STARTED with Slut, BITCH! JUST when I was REALLY enjoying myself ... YOU SHUT IT DOWN!
You're a BOX-BLOCKING cock-sucker—Nancy SHITFACE!
So ... FUCK YOU—I'm STAYING—BITCH!
Melena sits in her chair, daring Nancy to kick her out.
Nancy: Fine, fine ... You can STAY Melena ... crybaby!
Melena flips Nancy the bird.
She makes a face while sticking her tongue out at her.
Nancy giggles.
Nancy: I love you—BITCH!
Melena: I love you, too—SHITFACE!
The girls start giggling together.
Nancy: Alright, Slut ... I think you've gotten through the "worst of it"—maybe ... but I guess that depends on your preferences and perspective ...
Melena is allowed to stay—so long as she remains QUIET!
Melena:
Nancy: There is still a LOT MORE to come, so ... I suggest you take some time to gather yourself and REST ... Take a break. 10 to 15 minutes ought to do it, but ... feel free to take as long as you need.
The rest of the tease shouldn't be too too crazy with the edging, but ... as you'll see, it will be more difficult in OTHER ways ...
Melena:
Nancy: So, take a few minutes, and I'll see you soon, Slut!
[Take a break and rest up. You have gotten through roughly half of the tease. When you are ready, you may continue with Part 2! ]
Hi, EdgeSlut. I'm Uma Jolie. It's nice to meet you! Nancy said you would be coming by ...
So I heard you messaged Fatts—asking if he could set you up with some of Nancy's friends ... and then Nancy and Fatts started putting their heads together ... and NOW there's some big "tease party" in the works ... have I got that right?
Well congrats, man! I'm sure it will be fun ...
... I just hope you haven't bitten off more than you can chew!
A year ago Fatts was working as an erotic novelist and Nancy was running the Lust BnB. Fatts also had a side hustle going on where he was taking on clients as a "Mistress Consultant." I hired him. We worked together.
Back then, I had a boy crush named "brian." brian was VERY special to me. We understood each other. He just got me ... and *I* had what he wanted!
You see, Slut ... my "kink" is "kinks." Fatts helped me to figure that out. When a boy tries something new ... something naughty—and he LOVES it ... Well THAT gets me wet—FUCKING wet ...
brian had this "problem"—well ... *I* would actually call it a "gift." brian would try something forbidden—something taboo ...
... and it would drive him WILD!
It started with stuff like denial—then ruins. Soon, he got into chastity—and cucking ...
*I* even got him to dip his toe into the waters of exhibitionism—public masturbation ... well ... it wasn't anything TOO crazy ... he was definitely NOT going to get caught—probably ...
... there, too, Fatts gave me some pointers and advice ...
... so when I told Fatts that I wanted brian—bad—that *I* wanted to be the one to lead him down to the next deeper level of depravity—Fatts agreed to help me further corrupt brian!
So we planned a whole. Fucking. WEEKEND of activities! ALL to ensnare brian in my web of sensuality—so that *I* could get off and make him my ULTIMATE PLAY THING!
Now, you might think that was cruel, but ... well ... brian was a WILLING participant ...
... and he loved every fucking goddamn MINUTE of it!
Are you getting scared now—Slut?
Or are you getting EXCITED!
Uma lets her shorts drop to the floor.
Nancy mentioned that she name dropped me ... said that she told Melena what we did to brian—we were going to do to you ... TODAY.
Curious to know what that is—Slut?
You scared? Nervous? Excited!? ALL THREE!?!
I'm not sure that I should tell you—Slut—because THEN you might just chicken out ...
brian almost chickened out a few times ...
... until he embraced that darkness in his soul—gave himself over FULLY to his carnal desires ...
... and then he turned off his rational brain and listened to his subby little heart. He gave in. He gave ALL of himself to me, and I drank his offering and made him a spectacle to any and all who were willing to watch!
Uma drops her panties on the floor.
How does THAT hit you—SLUT! Do you want to drink deeply from the well of desire? Taste something forbidden and sweet?
Tell me. Say it out loud. Say, "Yes, Mistress! I WANT to obey you! I WANT to experience the pleasures of the forbidden!"
Liar. I don't believe you. You haven't the stomach for it ... you look weak—like you lack resolve ...
Uma takes a seat. She looks out the window pensively. She sighs softly to herself.
You see, Slut ... most people think "betas" and "subs" are "weak" and "slavish"—despicable creatures worthy only of contempt and derision, but ... NOTHING could be further from the truth!
*I* think betas are STRONG! *I* think subs should be adored and cherished!
... because SUBS strive to make their mistresses happy ... and they are willing to do things—terrible things—that would make most "alphas" run out of the room screaming!
Don't question me on this—Slut! I've seen it firsthand—with my own eyes!
So that puts us at a decision point—Slut ...
... are YOU willing to be that kind of sub? Are you willing to do things which degrade yourself and make you feel anxious and extremely uncomfortable ... for Nancy?
Don't answer too hastily ... think about it! Because once you start down this road, Slut ... it is VERY hard to stop. Just ask brian.
So, will you agree? Do you promise to become extra subby for Nancy? That you will willinglydegrade yourself for her and our pleasure?
You nod your head yes, which makes Uma grin from ear to ear.
FANTASTIC!! Then let's celebrate this MOMENTOUS occassion ...
... and do you want to know what we made brian do NEXT!?!
We made him EAT IT! brian ate ALL FIVE LOADS—in front of TWENTY SEVEN OF HIS MISTRESSES! And he edged for EACH ONE before he did it!
He faithfully collected each ruin. Put it into the freezer. Crafted a cum cube ...
... and then he ATE IT—for ME——in front of ALL of those women!
... I gave him a full orgasm of course ... I'm not a monster!
He came as he swallowed those FIVE LOADS ... for ME! GOD what a pleasant memory ...
Don't worry TOO MUCH, Slut ... We aren't going to do that to you (at least not today) ... Edge Slut Mode OFF!
Nancy only wants TWO ruins ... and while *I* think it would be better to make it THREE—so that she can at least tie your record ... Nancy wants you to end your ordeal today with a FULL orgasm ...
*I* think she's being too "soft" with her "toy" ...
To be honest, I think she spends too much time with Fatts ... His love of orgasms must be rubbing off on her, but ... I understand that man's appeal. He's even drawn me into his orbit ...
He has one of the most devious minds I've ever witnessed, and his willpower is QUITE impressive ...
... I'd fuck that stallion—again ...
... but today isn't about Fatts ... it's about YOU! And your new commitment to being the kind of sub us girls get to tell sexy stories about. Though I have to say, Nancy's behaviour is actually quite strange ...
Normally, she is SUPER competitive, so ... passing on the chance to TIE your record for ruins—that's surprising to me ... I guess she must REALLY like you, Slut ...
Well, I better go tell Nancy the good news ... oh—and Slut ...
DON'T fuck this up.
If you can't deliver on your commitments—word about that travels even FASTER! Peform for Nancy ... or I will make eating a couple loads of cum a CAKE WALK compared to the nasty and HORRIBLE things I will do to you ...
... which ... if you're into that sort of thing ... we can just do THAT—and SKIP the part where I'm all pissed off! That would be WAY more fun—for the BOTH of us.
Okay! BYE, Slut! It was nice meeting you!
Uma leaves. A few minutes later, Nancy comes bounding down the hall to find you ...
Uma just told me the most WONDERFUL news! You've agreed to do the ruins AND to eat your cum for me! Isn't it exciting!? HIGH FIVE!
Nancy holds up her hand to receive the high five. You comply with her request.
Oh, Slut ... to be honest, I was just a LITTLE afraid that you would say "no", but ... Uma can be QUITE persuasive—can't she!? And I will make ONE more confession to you ...
After brian's "Ceremony of Submission," I got a little jealous that nobody ever ruined multiple times then ate their cum for me—not even FATTS!
Granted, I never ASKED him to do that for me ... because he TOTALLY WOULD—because he's CRAZY about me!
But ... I knew it wasn't really his jam, so ... I never asked , but ... that's OH-KAY, because TODAY my fantasy gets to CUM TRUE!
Okay, Slut ... right now, I need you to go and collect a dinner plate—then come right back! We need a nice, large, CLEAN surface on which to collect your MULTIPLE ruins—oh, GOD I am SO EXCITED!
Melena will be collecting your FIRST ruin ... and THEN ... we have a mystery "special guest" who will be collecting the SECOND! And then *I* get to have you ALL to myself ... and you'll cum FULL for me while you eat BOTH of your loads! EEEEEKK! I CAN'T WAIT!
Ok—bye-bye! I'll SEE YOU SOON!!
After retreiving a dinner plate to ruin on (twice), you go searching for Melena ...
BAHAHAHA! THAT SOUNDS ABOUT RIGHT!
Uma's my bestie—for LIFE! My "ride or die!" We met in uni—and we've been BEST FRIENDS EVER SINCE!
Edge Slut Mode ON—Edge SLUT!
See? I TOLD YOU that I don't waste time!
Dealer's choice on the auto censor—SLUT! I'm in a hurry, so ... off or on—pick whatever will make you harder FASTER! I'm in a time crunch, and there is NO possible WAY for me to predict WHICH of those options will excite your little dickie more ... a REAL man would be more aroused at the sight of my NAKED body , but ... a damaged goods LOSER like YOU!? Who's to say? So make your choice FAST—before I decide to put BALLBUSTING back on the menu!
I'm in a good mood—AND a rush —because me and Uma are going CLUBBIN' TONIGHT!!
Nancy is throwing a DANCE PARTY, and it is going to be SUPER fun! Ecik will be there—and of COURSE Fatts ... Probably a bunch of lame randos that I don't know—because Nancy has weird friends ... but I don't care, because *I* want to DANCE! Me and Uma are gonna TEAR UP the dance floor! And we'll make the DJ blast some Ke$ha SO LOUD that they'll be able to hear "TiK ToK" ON THE MOON!
So Uma and I are TOTALLY different—right!?! THAT is what makes us such AWESOME gal pals!
But she pisses me off—a LOT—with how SLOW she takes things ...
Double ALL of your edges for me—SLUT ... and hold ALL of the edges at LEAST 15 seconds, but ... JUST for this pic—mmm 'kay?
I look SUPER CUTE with my hair and make up today ... I DESERVE some nice "worship edges" ... and I'm wearing my "Fuck YOU" gloves, because I am going to FUCK ... YOU ... UUUuuuuuuuuuppp!
How long was it—Slut—before my little Uma FINALLY turned on your "Edge Slut Mode?" I bet she made you wait a LONG ass time, while she droned on about "forbidden desires" and the "virtues" of submissives!
I don't have one, but ... I KNOW that dicks can take a LOT of abuse ... they are WAY less sensitive than cocks ... and DON'T give me that look like you're surprised that I know things! I'M WELL READ!
Yeah ... YEAH! Now LOOK into my eyes—SLUT! Squeeze your balls HARD, and then EDGE for me! HOLD IT ... for TWO WHOLE MINUTES ... and don't you DARE LOSE EYE CONTACT, or else you know what happens ... you'll get TEN HARD SLAPS, and you'll start AGAIN!
And KEEP SQUEEZING YOUR NUTS while you ride the edge! I want to see EVERY IOTA of pain AND pleasure—in your face —while you submit to me ... the WOMAN WHO WILL SOON MAKE YOU RUIN THAT FUCKING ORGASM!
Ohhh ... I'm spreading my pussy JUST FOR YOU, SLUT!
Melena is fingering herself rapidly.
Nancy was calling the shots before, but ... now *I* am in charge ... and MOMMA says—it's time to cum like a MOTHER FUCKER!
Hold the edge PLEASE, Slut ... FOUR minutes ... get LOUD and get VOCAL ... I want to hear you MOAN while you STRUGGLE on the edge ... it makes me SO wet—I'll be cumming in NO TIME! [Use a 1 minute countdown timer as before. Open the next spoiler after you have held the edge for 1 minute.]
Oh, yes ... YES! Moan LOUDER—SLUT! God ... You teasing yourself makes me SO horny! I WANT TO HEAR IT! [Open the next spoiler after another minute has passed.]
Melena's fingers twirl rapidly around her pussy lips. She rubs her clit violently. She shoves her fingers in and out of her hole. [Open the next spoiler after another minute has passed.]
OH ... I'm so CLOSE, SLUT! KNOWING that *I* can cum while YOU have to just hold the edge ... it gets me there SO FAST! KEEP HOLDING!!! [Open the next spoiler after another minute has passed.]
I'm there ... I'm there ... I'm going to CUM, SLUT!
LOUDER ... just a LITTLE louder ... CLOSER ... just a LITTLE closer to the edge—but DON'T go over ... ONE MORE MINUTE AND I'LL BE IN HEAVEN! [Open the next spoiler after another minute has passed.]
Melena cums HARD. Her body spasms. Her eyes roll back into her head. Her fingers are a blur across her clit while she finishes climaxing. She's breathing hard—covered in sweat.
[You may take a short break while Melena rests. She will continue her break neck speed once you are ready.]
FUCK that was good, SLUT! Your endurance isn't half bad! You got me off SO GOOD—TOY! THAT'S what you are to me, slut ... you're just a giant HUMAN DILDO who exists for MY pleasure—JUST to get me OFF! Aren't YOU something!
Melena reaches behind the couch to grab something.
And LOOK what I've found here! A small TOY dildo! It may not be big and mighty, but it's how you use it—am-I-right!? You KNOW I am!
Let's lube it up!
Melena sucks on the dildo HARD. She swirls it around inside of her mouth, collecting as much saliva as she can ...
Spit is my FAVORITE lube. I like that it's ALL NATURAL—and I can make it myself!
THIS dildo will be going into my pussy.
You 'bout ready to cum, Slut? You know *I* already, have but ... once is NEVER enough for ME! I need MULTIPLE ORGASMS before my VOLUMINOUS appetite can be sated!
EVERY instance of penetration by the dildo, you have to do ONE EXTRA 30 SECOND EDGE HOLD—starting NOW!
Oh ... FUCK ... I am going to cum AGAIN ...
It's so SOON, but ... I'm READY!
Melena thrusts the dildo quickly in and out of her pussy. Her moans are quieter this time. Her breathing is labored. You can tell that she is getting close.
While you are edging, she suddenly stops. Her back arches. Her eyes roll back, and you can tell that she's orgasmed again ...
Wow ... that one snuck up on me ... how unladylike ... I'm almost embarrassed ...
HAHAHHAHA! Yeah RIGHT!
The moment is ALMOST HERE, Slut ... can you feel it? The weight!?
NO ... NOT the weight of the moment—you BLOCK HEAD! The weight of your BALLS!
... but you will HAVE TO CUM AGAIN AFTER THIS, so ... DON'T FUCK IT UP!
We want a PERFECT ruin with ZERO refractory—oh FUCK ... *I* don't care ... CUM LIKE YOU WANT, SLUT!
Nancy will be pissed if you cum too hard and keep Gloria waiting, but ... FUCK ... if you ruin a BIG LOAD well ... that's just MORE FOR YOU TO GOBBLE UP LATER, so ... DO WHAT YOU WANT—SLUT!
JUST DON'T FUCKING CUM FULL! RUIN IT like the BITCH THAT YOU ARE! Now WAIT FOR MY SIGNAL!
OH! WE'RE GOING TO CUM TOGETHER! I CAN'T WAIT! I CAN'T WAIT! I JUST FUCKING **LOVE** THAT SHIT!
Melena is masturbating wildly. She's already starting to convulse. Her back is arching. She's almost there ...
I'm CLOSE ... I'm CLOSE ... GET THAT PLATE IN POSITION, READY TO COLLECT!!
You are on the edge, holding, plate in position, and ready to ruin ...
GOOD JOB, PET! That is a MIGHTY FINE LOAD that you made there! Now, just LEAVE IT ON THE PLATE. You'll be given further instructions on what to do later!
Now *I* should probably go get cleaned up—take a shower before I—NOPE! You know what!? NO. I JUST TOOK A SHOWER BEFORE YOU SHOWED UP, SLUT!
I'm going to get sweaty ANYWAY from DANCING LIKE A FIEND!
Melena sucks her juices up from the dildo.
How does my make up look? Does it look okay?
See? It's FINE ... the place will smell like BO in 20 minutes once all of the songs start playing ... I'll just spritz some extra perfume and everything will be ALL RIGHT!
Have fun with Gloria, Slut! And I hope you have cum breath for DAYZ after your visit with Nancy!
Bye NOW!
[You may wait an appropriate amount of time before starting the next scene. ]
Fatts thinks my ass is my best attribute. I can't even REMEMBER how many times he's cum for my ass! I have SO many FOND memories of Fatts ... Did you know that I was once the accountant for his "demerits account?" Now THAT was a LONG time ago! Back in our "Village Days!"
Fatts will edge TWICE for an "eyes and ass" pose—like this one—but ... while he IS an "edge slut" your name actually *IS* "Edge Slut!" So ... *I* think you should give me THREE EDGES for EACH of my ass AND eyes!
Alright ... now that we've made THAT a rule ... we have to stick with it!
EVERY time you can CLEARLY SEE my eyes AND my ass ... THEN you MUST give each the THREE EDGES!
But *I* have a feeling that my TITS are your favorite, so ... I think we should add another special rule for them—but ONLY if you want to ...
You've already been through SO MUCH today, and ... well ... it's not my style to break my toys by playing with them too hard—cough cough MELENA cough cough ...
So in addition to the edging once for EACH boobie, you can add an additonal edge multiplier of x2 or x3 for titties—but ONLY for me, and ONLY if you want to ... starting NOW—of course!
Our time is short, but ... I don't wish to speed through it!
Ruins are my favorite, Slut. I just LOVE to tease men, and ... when they cum full—we have to stop playing, but ... if they ruin? Well ...
THEN we get to keep going!
But there is something ELSE that I just LOVE about ruins ...
Whenever a man ruins his orgasm ... he has to hold back just a little bit of pleasure ... MOST of the time—it's a LOT —but *I* prefer to think it's a "little!"
And where does it go? What happens to that little bit of pleasure that the man loses out on?
Why it COMES STRAIGHT TO ME!
Gloria makes a crazy face.
I know it's silly—but it's what I pretend to believe!
And NOW it's time to ruin onto that plate—BUT ... you have ONE MORE CHOICE!
You can cum for THIS pose ... OR ...
You can cum for THIS ONE!
I enjoy pampering my boys. They give up SO MUCH for me with the ruins and catering to MY preferences, that it's pretty hard not to give love back! So ruin for whichever pose you think is SEXIER! [Choose this or the previous photo and ruin your orgasm for Gloria onto the plate.]
FANTASTIC, Slut! You're such a CUTE little pet! Thank you so much for playing with me today!
Nancy wanted to make sure that I teased you today, because she said ruins would NOT be a part of your edge record breaking set!
I suppose that's understandable ... She said she didn't want ANYTHING hampering your performance, and planned ruins would DEFINITELY slow you down ...
... which is why she thought it appropriate to introduce me to you here—your new #2—in THIS "play date!"
Well, I must be heading out ... If you want some "soft teasing," be sure to position me HIGH on your planning committee list! Of course, if not, I won't be TOO offended ... Well ... maybe I WILL be—a little ...
Of course, since I am not ALLOWED to ruin you, I suppose you'll have no fear of THAT! BUT ... if you want a PROPER session with me, maybe you'll consider allowing me to drain your balls with RUINS! I would devastate you SO SWEETLY—Slut! You'd hardly notice you were being dominated and under my control—it would feel THAT GOOD! We could set a new record! Just saying ... think about it!
Okay! I'm off! Enjoy your final scene with Nancy!
[You may wait an appropriate amount of time before starting the next scene. ]
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
I can't BELIEVE what you're about to do for me, it's ... it's like a DREAM! A really GOOD dream ...
Most of the boys on here ... it's all about THEM ...
"THIS is what I want! How can the girls please ME!? "
... but strokers like YOU—and Fatts —it's DIFFERENT! You actually CARE about the wants and desires of the mistresses ...
... of course none of THEM are REAL—but *I* AM! So, that makes it EXTRA special—you sacrificing something to make ME happy!
Are you nervous about eating TWO loads of cum for me—EdgeSlut!? I bet you never expected that THIS would be the difficult "challenge" that Fatts was eluding to in his set opening ...
Well don't worry! You're going to do GREAT!
You see ... an aversion to cum eating is nothing new, EdgeSlut. It's very common for LOTS of guys.
For some, it is a TRUE fetish, but ... for others—it's just a curiosity ...
... but for the "curious" who have trouble following through, Uma discovered the PERFECT solution—or rather I should say that "Fatts" figured it out ...
You don't give the sub a chance to chicken out. You make them eat the load BEFORE they orgasm. That way, they can't chicken out!
Now Fatts isn't really into cum eating. Actually, he doesn't really like it that much. It's more of a "punishment" for him than something he gets excited about, but ... He's brave. He doesn't balk. He'll eat his cum when he is FORCED to ...
... and ALSO when he is NOT! Sometimes, he'll even do it unprompted—even though he DOESN'T like it—just because he knows it is something that his mistress or lover wants to see ... isn't that SWEET!?
The problem with this method of cum eating, however, is that it requires preparation ... you have to make the sub cum at least once prior, and ... there is STILL a chance that they will chicken out ...
... but if you can provide the "proper motivation" ...
... it can be HIGHLY effective—at least from what I've seen!
I was reading through your rules and noticed how BADLY you were HINTING at wanting this done ... and ...
... well ... you were just SO sweet, and ... I wanted to give you what you wanted!
And okay. YES—I'll admit ... I've been wanting to do this ever since Uma's big weekend with brian , but ...
... I was ALSO looking to prove how CRUEL and "tough" I can be.
How am I doing—SLUT!? You having a good time over there? ... I know *I* am!
I'll leave it up to you: You can turn on your "Edge Slut Mode"—right now—OR you can choose to leave it off.
I've put you through enough. If you want to "relax" and enjoy our time with it OFF ... that is FINE WITH ME!
... but if a view like THIS makes you want to turn it ON, well ... how can I fault you for THAT!?
Today's been SO AMAZING, SLUT!
I just LOVE how much time we've gotten to spend together!
Did you enjoy meeting some of my friends?
I know, I know ... isn't Melena a trip! We used to be housemates you know ...
... and I'm looking forward to our next set together!
Oh ... I just CAN'T WAIT to beat that STUPID hentaAddict's record!
Fatts and I are VERY GOOD at setting records. I'm sure he's told you about Mistypanda's 1560 edge set. Fatts is VERY proud of THAT one; brings it up every 5 minutes ...
Of course *I* won Ecik's monthly competition TWO MONTHS in a ROW—and ALL off of ONE set!
I feel like today was just the start of our adventures, EdgeSlut ...
... my new favorite toy!
Have you enjoyed my teasing and playing with me today?
I'll admit—I was MUCH nicer to you than I am with a LOT of guys (AND girls ) ...
... but your little apology letter just melted my heart!
I *can* be VERY dominant, strict—AND controlling, however ... so ... if you want some of that ...
... I can DEFINITELY deliver!
I was VERY happy to read your take on teasing preferences:
The "nice" / "harsh" debate. I love both when a girl treats me as her pet/toy/plaything and is playful and fun but I also enjoy when they just absolutely destroy me humiliation wise. So I believe you should follow whatever fits your narrative and girls the best once I get the bios. Both a playful girl and a harsh girl can easily edge me silly.
And THEN you wrote:
I am definitely excited to see how Nancy and you respond to all this information.
which was basically a "blank check" for me to do WHATEVER I wanted!
[Just read and stroke until you have opened all of the spoilers ... THEN apply your rules for this picture.]
And so I just chose to be MYSELF today!
No putting on my mistress "angry eyes." No organizing a weekend of subby masturbation activities or striving to break some record or getting carried along by some intense, narrative-driven story, and ... don't get me wrong ...
... is that my day with you today was PRICELESS—and I will NEVER FORGET IT!!
[Nancy's expression is one of pure affection and joy. She has loved every minute of her time with you, and wants YOU to feel REALLY GOOD, too—right now. You may edge and/or hold as many times as you wish for this pic. Nancy will feel every bit of pleasure you experience along with you. ]
Alright—SLUT! Enough stalling ... [Open spoilers as you go. Do not cum or swallow until Nancy instructs.]
Before you follow ANY of your rules for this pic, grab that plate, lick up ALL of the cum, and HOLD IT IN YOUR MOUTH! It STAYS THERE until I give you the order to cum. THEN you orgasm and swallow the loads—at the SAME TIME—you got it?
Now ... I CONSIDERED letting YOU choose the cum pic, but ... turns out bossing you around makes me feel pretty dominant—so I am NOT quite ready to give you that level of control , but ... NEXT TIME—when I make you cum —I PROMISE to let YOU choose the pose that you cum for , but ... TODAY is ALL ABOUT ME! So ... you are going to cum for the pose that *I* want you to cum for—got that? GOOD ...
NOW you may "follow your rules" for this pic—with that mouth full of cum! What!? It's FUNNY! You mean you didn't believe Melena when she said you'd have "cum breath" for a week!? Well, hey! It COULD have been worse ... I COULD have made you eat those loads about 5 pictures ago, but ... Fatts thought that I should be NICE, so ... you can thank HIM for "keeping me in check" ... ...
[Suspend your rules for this pic. Read, stroke, and open the spoilers. Listen to Nancy and follow her directions.]
... is this one. Just get lost in my EYES ... I don't want you to be focused on my ass or my titties or my pussy ... I want you to focus on ME. I want to be seen ... by YOU!
I want to watch your every expression of both pleasure AND awkwardness—as you hold that cum in your mouth ... and I will KNOW that you are doing it for ME! The struggle to obey—your desire to swallow or spit it out versus MY desire that you DON'T—so you OBEY and hold yourself BACK ... and I want to see it ALL! They say the eyes are the "window to the soul," and so ... I want to look into YOUR soul—when you are at your SUBBIEST —doing ALL THIS for ME ... and I want to see your will power as you fight to maintain control, and ... THEN ... you'll stroke yourself up to the edge and probably hold it for a bit, and ... THEN ... I'll see that look in your eyes—like you're about to cum ... just ONE STROKE AWAY from heaven ... and then BOOM! TOUCHDOWN! I say, "Cum!" and on my command, you orgasm and swallow—and *I* get a front row seat ... are you ready to do all of that for me, Slut?
Okay ... Good! Do your edges, hold for however long you like to build yourself up to a really POWERFUL orgasm (as much as you can with half-filled balls ) ... THEN, when you are on the edge and ready to orgasm, open that next spoiler, and let it ALL OUT FOR ME, BABY! I'm READY! Are YOU!?!
Nancy's smile is brilliant. Your cum surges out from your dick, and you can feel a resonance between your pleasure and Nancy's. The two of you are in sync. Your pleasure is her pleasure is your pleasure ... "
Do you want to cuddle with me on the bed? I'll allow it.
Fatts and I usually cuddle after sex—OR mutual masturbation sessions ... Normally, I WOULD consider it "cheating" to cuddle with another guy, but ... well ... you know ... it was "his idea" ...
Nancy pats the bed beside her—your cue to come take your place by her side. You lie down next to her. It would be rude to object.
Nancy snuggles in closer to you. She gently rubs your head.
Isn't this nice? One of the BEST PARTS of sex is that "post orgasm glow" ... and I think SHARING that special moment is one of the BEST PARTS of sexual relations!
Most of the other mistresses around here just view you boys as "toys" ... They kick you out as soon as the deed is done, but ... *I* just LOVE spending time with you REAL boys!
Can I tell you one more secret, EdgeSlut?
I am ONLY "real" when someone is thinking about me ... That's the reality when you are a "fantasy." Material objects have permanence. They exist even if no one is looking at or thinking about them, but ... that is NOT true of me—seeing as how I am mostly an immaterial fantasy ...
So that is why I just LOVE you REAL boys! You do MORE than make me "feel" alive ... you actually MAKE ME alive, so ... just lay with me a while longer, EdgeSlut—Please!? This moment just feels SO GOOD, and I want it to LAST before I go back to dreaming again ...
You smile gently. You snuggle even closer into Nancy and put your arm around her. Neither of you speaks. The only thing you can hear is the sound of each other's breathing. You can feel the softness of the bed and the warmth of Nancy's naked body pressing against you ...
... and you can feel the warmth of the afterglow of HER orgasm. It's slowly fading, but ... it feels REALLY GOOD nonetheless ... You close your eyes, and eventually, you fall asleep—together.
Normally, I only ask for one set for a set, but ... since this one was SO long ... could you give me 2 for it—or at least one and half?
I FINALLY updated my rules ... It took a few days , but ... The updated rules are LIVE! There is now a BIG section that includes pointers on how to write "Nancy Ace," and ... my "Favorites" list has been updated, and ... I took out some outdated stuff and just generally reorganized EVERYTHING and tweaked a LOT ... AND I included a "requests" section that has some suggestions on what I might like if you can't think of anything, but ... for THIS exchange ... I would be TOTALLY FINE with some sort of "story" or "narrative" (coming from you) and even with some kind of "crossover" between our sets ... although ... I am/will just be writing you these MONSTER sets, so ... not much opportunity for ME to go "back and forth", but ... maybe!
I ALSO sent you that PM with ALL of the details on the latest stuff with the "Planning Committee", so ... just get back to me on THAT stuff whenever—NO rush ... I have PLENTY of stuff to work on for now ...
Leave as MUCH feedback as you want on this set. I will OBVIOUSLY read EVERY WORD.
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"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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@Fatts, thank you for the set. I'm not sure when I'll play it. Currently, my sleep schedule is REALLY bad. I sleep at most like 1-2 hours per night . And not because I'm busy or anything, I just lay there in bed and can't fall asleep
I'll play it eventually, but currently, I'm not really feeling like it.
Sorry for the wait, but I found some time to write a return set for you. Let me know if this style works for you and whether I managed to write one of your favourites to your liking (I saw some people are rather particular about that so I hope I didn't mess anything up). If you like the direction this is going I can continue with this narrative and write a follow-up set.
This set is 42 images and you won't need anything for it.
hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Tue Jul 15, 2025 8:52 am
I'll play it eventually, but currently, I'm not really feeling like it.
I'm sorry! That sucks, man! I hope you feel better!
Our set exchange is currently even at 3-3. I spent 4, 4, and 9 hours respectively so far constructing your sets, so ... at least by the numbers, that current set that you are waiting to play SHOULD BE the best one of the bunch ... or at LEAST I spent the most time on it—so it should at LEAST be decent! So ... I DEFINITELY prefer you wait to play it when you are feeling more rested and are able to FULLY enjoy it! It will keep.
... and I LOVED it! You normally pump out sets like a MOTHER FUCKER, so ... you being temporarily "out of commission" actually gives me an opportunity to get "caught up" ...
I've already started working on your return set. I think it is going to be AMAZING—and FUN! And NOT just "fun for me" to write, but ... I think also VERY engaging and fun for YOU to play! So ... it's actually good that you are taking a breather and giving me a chance to get "caught up" ... because I was FINALLY able to ALSO finish up that LONG ass set for Slut yesterday!
I am VERY excited about this Kay J story arc that has started, plus ... we ALSO have the blackmail one (which will continue when you play my current set for you! ). So ... TWO fun story arcs! It's going to be a blast, but ... I am ALSO exchanging with Slut AND Ecik at the moment, so ... if we have to pump the breaks a bit on ours for a while, that is TOTALLY FINE.
Get some rest, man!
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
I wouldn't call my sleep schedule "fixed" by any means, but it's been better than in the past few days, so I played your set today. You'll be happy to know I stroked to the whole thing
I'm just going to talk about the highlights, but it was enjoyable for me to the very end. Maaaaaybe a bit too much Nancy
The intro section, where I was with Nancy, I felt what she felt . I felt myself getting excited as she was getting more excited, and I also felt "deflated" as she did too. I felt very connected to her
Nancy kissing me was just "what just happened??? ". I felt VERY aroused when I read that.
Then when I got to the outro section, I got incredibly horny again seeing Guerlain. So much so that my cock even got hard for her . And her telling me that Nancy actually likes me, like WOW!!!
ONE instance must occur in a set that YOU write for SOMEONE ELSE!
I'm not sure this is doable. The other two are totally fine, but this? Pretty crazy if you ask me
Thank you so much for this set, I can tell you worked A LOT on this even without you saying anything. 9 hours dude? I work like 2-3 hours on my most complex sets.
I likely won't start writing your set right away. Still have some sleep to catch up to so I get my creativity going again, but soon. Hopefully.
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That one little detail pulled me in SO hard and just elevated the ENTIRE SET to another level—as you will soon see 
... and then round 2 was Kenzie, and ... HERE is where things started to go off the rails for me in terms of the "regularly scheduled programming" that you probably had in mind when you wrote the set 
I got on my knees and started aggressively sucking on Kenzie's toes and feet (sort of "acting that out" 
For that first pic—I ate her out and held the edge—TWICE 
... YEAH! 
with all the ass pics, so ... I both loved AND hated it, but ... I was DETERMINED to soldier on and not break for Nancy who was watching at home. 
... Well ... I COULD have stopped stroking to avoid tipping over the edge, but ... THEN I would have to restart the ENTIRE SCENE, so ... I just got it in my head that I could NOT STOP STROKING! 
) ... Molly *IS* super hot, but ... Molly is no longer Nancy's intern. She is doing her own thing now, but ... in Nancy's mind ... the PEAK time for attraction to Molly by Nancy would have been while Molly was interning. 
... but then I don't know ... That seemed too forced, but ... maybe ALSO be the perfect solution—because I feel like we HAVE TO throw Kenzie a bone, and ... me and Nancy are BOTH sort of tired with the Kenzie "rivalry" and would rather that Nancy and Kenzie just FINALLY "be friends," which ... with Nancy getting closer and more attracted to Kenzie post basement and ALSO wanting to explore cucking, and ... knowing how weak I am to Kenzie and how crazy she is ... Nancy could easily use and manipulate Kenzie into being her "junkyard dog" and doing some dirty work for her (which Nancy LOVES to be a "mastermind"), but ... Kenzie is pretty crazy and easy to manipulate, but ... then ALSO her and Kenzie could gang up on me—and she could EASILY find ways to have Kenzie REALLY torment me, and ... Nancy just LOVES watching THAT kind of stuff, lol 
—in front of ALL of those women! 
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