FattsDynamo wrote: Fri Jul 11, 2025 4:46 am
No, Addict ... you misunderstand ... [This is
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insanely long—but ... I think it's important as it has to do with set writing, so ... I hope you read it
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Well, do give the set a chance regardless, as there's nothing fantastic about it. And as "she" said, "she"'ll forget all about it if you don't enjoy it. I think you need to change a bit how you feel about Nancy. Considering her a "god" in her dimension basically restricts all narratives.
and for us, The Red Fox is a succubus, which is an idea I stole from DesertFox's "Mazes" tease
I did play through that tease years ago, and it was pretty fun actually, so feel free to re-use that narrative if you wish
If I open and start playing a tease, without being given any other context, THIS is the starting set of assumptions I will be operating from.
And magic and fantastic situations are NOT a part of that bargain.
So, when suddenly magic is unexpectedly introduced into the set, it's a little jarring and unexpected—and YOU broke the bargain by suddenly changing the rules unexpectedly.
And THAT pulls me out of the tease.
As I said, no magic involved. You know, I never actually told you this directly, but I'm a programmer IRL, so I consider myself to be just above average in terms of "smartness", but I'm no genius by any means. In fact, for a lot of mundane things, I'm an idiot, but I do what I do for my job very well. This plays on that narrative. NO magic, just science
. Although when I do get horny, I'm kind of an idiot, which is probably the same for most guys
Well, that's your talent as a writer. My talents as a programmer don't quite fit with writing a story. I can still come up with silly ideas every now and then, but REALLY developing them like you do is just not me, unfortunately. In my job, I have to do the what I'm told with the least amount of code possible. You surely see how that would translate into my set writing, right? Not for you. You're a writer, so you're told to do the exact opposite: Use the
most amount of words to describe the environment, what characters are feeling, etc. It's one of the reasons why some of my sets feel lazy for you, but I can't really help it
VERY glad that you were able to reengage and "lock back in" with the set after that hiccup!
PLEASE always try to do that for me!
Also, I am VERY curious ... what was it about Magen that you did not like?
Do you just not like asians? No judgment from me if you don't ... we just "like what we like" and don't have a lot of control over that
Generally, not a fan of asians/black women, and she was kinda both
But I was looking to grab some new and "fresh" models that were NOT on your favorites list
And that was good! I always like meeting new women. I've been historically one of the pickiest persons around here when it comes to women, but recently it kinda dwindled a bit. I still dislike asians and black women though
I will now include the rest of my feedback on that "blackmail set" with a set of my OWN!
Well, that's great, I like doing that too. But, play my latest set after too. I'm not writing you another one until you do!
But also great clip. And same for the next.
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