[Release] [Feedback] Beta College

[Beta_on_a_Journey]

So I'm back with a new Tease! And it only took me two years :D

Anything can happen in college - even to a Beta! Who will you be at the end of the semester? A good beta boy, cuckold, sissy, simp, an outcast, or will you find an actual girlfriend who loves you?

"Beta College" is a narrative driven, choice based Tease with 3000+ pictures and high replayability in which you can talk to different women during your time on campus. Main kinks involved are (interracial) cuckolding, chastity, humiliation, and femdom in general. But a happy vanilla ending is possible too!
In total, there are 6 distinct endings and multiple ways to get there. Which ending is your favorite?

I would be honored to receive your feedback wether it be your thoughts regarding the story, new ideas or possible bugs. Following the feedback from last time, you can now follow various paths with totally different outcomes and timers are much shorter and sparely used this time :D

I have two more Teases in progress currently (and hints of them are hidden in this Tease, I'm curious to hear your guesses!).

See you in two years (hopefully sooner, but those Teases are a really time consuming endeavour)!

Anyways - have a great day and keep teasing!

Here is a link to the Tease: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=68276

[derrickx757]

Great tease! I can tell you put alot of effort into it. Cannot wait to play more of it!

[Agent X]

Hey, I was trying the tease, and it looks pretty good, but it seems like it forces

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Naomi

on you early without any option to avoid it or explore alternatives? I'm not really sure how I'm supposed to proceed otherwise? Just seems a bit confusing early on. A bit more context on my specific experience below.

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Like, I refuse her initially, at least after she tries to command me...but then it just kind of assumes I'm automatically serving her by default? Am I missing something? I know there's the computer options, which I explored...but they don't seem to go anywhere? I played on and found the hints, figuring the Boyfriend option was most appealing. I mean, I enjoy ballbusting as well, but that seems like a side thing in this tease. Ideally I would have both, but that doesn't seem possible here, lol. Thing is...I end up on the Outcast if I refuse the Beta options...unless I take the Stripclub/Simp choices, but none of the three are what I'm going for. I just don't know whether I'm expected to play along until other options come up or what. Any advice or clarification is much appreicated!

[manwithcape]

It's a very interesting tease.

There are however some problems as well.


From the chatroulette option that you unlock by finding an item first you suddenly get pushed forward to the page named Sissy1 as soon as a certain character appears in the story but there is a (large?) part missing there.

Is there a way to interact with the other options on the computer?
I think I tried everything with the Tinder option but nothing ever changed there.
Did you just enjoy creating those profiles that much?


I feel like there should be a more positive storyline with Jia but the few I tried were cut rather short.

All in all, great base to build upon. fun tease to explore.
Do please make it clear when we hit a dead-end or part of the tease that isn't completed yet.
Exploring everything is fun but wasting time on dead ends gets old quickly.

[PrincessBrooke]

Hey, I was trying the tease, and it looks pretty good, but it seems like it forces

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Naomi

on you early without any option to avoid it or explore alternatives? I'm not really sure how I'm supposed to proceed otherwise? Just seems a bit confusing early on. A bit more context on my specific experience below.

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Like, I refuse her initially, at least after she tries to command me...but then it just kind of assumes I'm automatically serving her by default? Am I missing something? I know there's the computer options, which I explored...but they don't seem to go anywhere? I played on and found the hints, figuring the Boyfriend option was most appealing. I mean, I enjoy ballbusting as well, but that seems like a side thing in this tease. Ideally I would have both, but that doesn't seem possible here, lol. Thing is...I end up on the Outcast if I refuse the Beta options...unless I take the Stripclub/Simp choices, but none of the three are what I'm going for. I just don't know whether I'm expected to play along until other options come up or what. Any advice or clarification is much appreicated!

I noticed this is well, you seem basically forced into it regardless of yoir choices, and only have found those same endings.

[ritewriter]

Really fun tease. I'm not big on raceplay, and there's a lot of that, obviously, but it's still very well done and hot. I played a few times and got three different endings:

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Outcast, Good ending with Jia, Beta ending with Naomi

A little feedback:

1. I wish it were longer. The first time I played it, I got

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Outcast

and figured it was a quick end because I'd refused to play along with Naomi's games. But then I learned if you give in, the game ends at the roughly the same spot, albeit with a different bad ending scene.

2. I enjoyed the party games, and it was one place where there were multiple paths, but there don't seem to be any consequences for taking the different paths yet. They all just collapse back down to

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going home with Naomi and her friends

. It'd be fun in something you did at the party led elsewhere. But maybe I'm missing something.

3. Right now, that's generally true for many of the "choices" you make. For example, it doesn't really matter, as far as I can tell, which luggage you carry. It's a choice with no impact on the overall story. It'd be nice if any choice you make leads to a new (or at least slightly different) moment, even if you eventually collapse back down.

4. The diary doesn't currently reveal anything for the tabs I clicked on. I assume it's placeholder for now.

5. It would be great if there were some alternative paths right at the start with Naomi depending on how you interact with her and your mom maybe or how long it takes to go to her room. For example, if you glance at Naomi's feet in the kitchen, make the bedroom scene about foot teasing. That kind of thing. Or if you don't go in, she interrupts you on the computer. Or let the character wander campus and meet someone else. I find it's good to give alt scenes early, especially, since those are the areas that will be replayed the most and can get tedious to repeat.

Just some suggestions though. Overall, nicely done.

[wanker_loser]

Amazing!! Loved it! Not sure how I miss the older one (Secret Desires) but I'm doing it right now.

Love how it made me feel like they are real life decisions.

Would love to be able to do more in the computer and getting caught by the room-mate watching humiliation porn for example. But Wasnt able to do much with Tinder, Twich or Chat Roulette... maybe I was missing something (would love some help if i did).

Please please make more, they are really great!

Thanks!

[Beta_on_a_Journey]

Hey, everyone! Thank you so much for playing my Tease, providing helpful feedback and leaving very nice DMs! I have not replied here yet but I have read everything and DMed a lot of you in order not to spoil anything when clarifying any plot points. If you want to discuss the Tease more in depth, feel free to DM me.

It seems like most plot criticism comes from people who wanted to resist Naomi. That's fair! Naomi will always be

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dominant towards you. You can resist her by going after other girls. But if you mess up with them, Naomi is supposed to be the plot line to fall back to.

The computer

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is indeed mostly not plot relevant. I wanted the Tease to be a bit satirical of the "time wasting beta life". But there is still a lot to explore and you can always stop and return to "real life where the plot happens".

There is however a secret plot hidden

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if you spend some time on ChatRoulette!

The diary

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tells you the different endings and which colors to follow to get to them.

How you act at the party

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does change the way Naomi treats you later. There are several paths and endings including Naomi.

Of course I wished I had created more subplots, more relevant decisions, more endings. But the project was already becoming way too big and way too complex. I already spent two years creating it and I'm mostly a writer, so the non-linear nature of the Teases can be challenging.

I hope you all still enjoyed the Tease :)

[sally670]

I cannot figure out how to get the sissy ending for the life of me. I assumed it was

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getting the panties and then Jia's feet and asking to be her sissy, but she always says no.

I can't find

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any other pink options

to give me clues. Does anyone know what I'm missing?

[inaaca]

After trying to explore the computer options and getting absolutely nowhere, I came here to figure out what I was missing.

I gotta say, I specifically avoided Naomi's room because the game told me that I was home alone, and I wasn't going to creep on her room while she wasn't there. If your roommate is home with you, then you aren't home alone. Might seem like a nitpick but it made the first significant choice super misleading IMO.

[biggestloser3]

Is there only one sissy ending?
also is there any point

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to the dildo and shoes in the roommates room? or is it like the computer just a waste of time?

[diddums]

I enjoyed it very much. Please do more teases!