[RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Sara is a Demanding Trainer

[arandommark]

Hey there!

I've just released my third tease, 'Sara is a demanding trainer', a stroking and edging focused tease with some neat story in between.

Inspired by the Emily's Extreme series, it has the option to be played as a multi-day tease, though is designed to also be short enough (if you consider up to two hours short) to be playable in one go.

If you find any problems or have any suggestions on how I could make future teases better, please tell me!

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=66526

[W_acte]

i have enjoyed the first two day of the webtease.
to be honest,the edges there are too much
it's too hard for me to keep not to edge after so many edges(qwq)
but on the other hand,I experienced the joy of edge I had never had before.（even if it is too profound to enjoy，i still love it）
maybe we can add a more easy mode？
i really appreciate the i'm on the edge bottom and the save function
(btw i like your Exploring Jean so much that i experience it multiple times.and i always except for your next tease.)
(best wishes for your future masterpieces)

[NulluN0]

I really liked your tease and i understand that the edging can be quite hard for some not-so-experinced people but for me it was very enjoyable. I played Emily´s extreme series several times and got all endings in there (good work btw nice-log). I could recognize that you took inspiration from Emily series because of that. Otherwise i´m really looking forward to sequels of this masterpiece, though it looks like i (with a lot of other people) will have to wait. Maybe you can do a collaboration on a tease with Nice-log? I´d immediately play that considering how good both yours and his (hope it´s him and not her, not meaning to offend) teases have been. Okay, I hope you liked my feedback because honestly it´s my first time making one this long and I´ll be looking forward to your future creations.

PS: Perhaps you could add a hard mode for us who like edging so much?

[SuccubiHunterRPG]

Really like your tease, in particular I really like the images you have created.

I'm in the process of making my own tease using AI generated images. It will be a RPG style of game where you battel models. I need several sets of images for several opponents but it is quite difficult get images of someone who looks the same, in the same clothing and in the same location.

I'm currently using websites rather than creating images on my own PC. At the moment I use Kindroid as is will allow images based on a uploaded face image for free but it is really slow, very limited in the number of images and frequently creates something I just have to delete.

Two questions for you.
1. Can I use some of the images in this tease for one of my models (I find her really cute and hot)?
2. What is your experience with Stable Diffusion?

[Nice-Log]

Congrats on finally publishing this tease! I can't wait to play the sequels when you get the chance to write them.

I really liked your tease and i understand that the edging can be quite hard for some not-so-experinced people but for me it was very enjoyable. I played Emily´s extreme series several times and got all endings in there (good work btw nice-log). I could recognize that you took inspiration from Emily series because of that. Otherwise i´m really looking forward to sequels of this masterpiece, though it looks like i (with a lot of other people) will have to wait. Maybe you can do a collaboration on a tease with Nice-log? I´d immediately play that considering how good both yours and his (hope it´s him and not her, not meaning to offend) teases have been. Okay, I hope you liked my feedback because honestly it´s my first time making one this long and I´ll be looking forward to your future creations.

PS: Perhaps you could add a hard mode for us who like edging so much?

I think a collab tease where Sara and Emily find out they've been toying with the same guy could be pretty fun. Would have to get creative because Emily keeps her guy under lock and key. I don't think either of us has the capacity to write something like that though.

Also, out of curiosity, what would you want to see in a possible hard mode? Faster stroke metronomes, longer held edges, additional edges for back to back edging?

[arandommark]

*snip*
maybe we can add a more easy mode？
*snip*

Well, this is probably not what some people want to hear, but you can always:

Spoiler: show

Decide from the get-go to 'cheat' a little.
For example, I play the Emily teases in one go, and that's just way too much, so I usually decide at the beginning that I'll skip every second edge, making it much easier.
Though I did play each one 'legit' (as in, a single ~3-4 hour session) at this point, which... probably explains why you find mine to be a bit difficult.
(Well, except for the stroking sections, those are literally impossible after that much back-to-back edging, if you ask me)

Really like your tease, in particular I really like the images you have created.

I'm in the process of making my own tease using AI generated images. It will be a RPG style of game where you battel models. I need several sets of images for several opponents but it is quite difficult get images of someone who looks the same, in the same clothing and in the same location.

I'm currently using websites rather than creating images on my own PC. At the moment I use Kindroid as is will allow images based on a uploaded face image for free but it is really slow, very limited in the number of images and frequently creates something I just have to delete.

Two questions for you.
1. Can I use some of the images in this tease for one of my models (I find her really cute and hot)?
2. What is your experience with Stable Diffusion?

Okay, first a heads-up: I find it really difficulty to use AI for creating multiple different characters, unless the have very obvious differences (other hair colour and hair style, for the most part, but skin colour works too) to grab onto. Even with Sara, there are multiple pictures where if you actually put them side-by-side, you wouldn’t immediately say it’s the same character.
It only works because it only follows her, so you’re already expecting Sara, masking those differences more easily.

Personally, I feel that using websites is far too limiting. I’ve not found one that gives you even a tenth of the customisation and consistency local stable diffusion gives you. Additionally, most don’t let you generate the masses of pics (I usually throw away ~80%) you need to get good ones. Meanwhile, even back on my worse pc, I could just set it to generate a hundred pics and walk away.

But I don’t really have experience with it, so maybe there are good sides out there. I doubt they can truly compete with a local version, though, especially if you have a good graphics card.

As for the questions:
1: sure. Try to make her a bit different, though. It would probably be weird to see the same character in two such different situations. Also, please don’t post the pictures on any picture side or where a search machine could pick it up. I don’t want to contribute to searches being filled with AI slob.

2: Quite a bit, I’d say.
In order to get some consistency, I always use [prompt for good picture quality, depend on model] + 1girl, Asian young woman, (Asian), (violet eyes), black hair, long hair, (fit), medium breasts, muscular female [for Sara specifically] + [here whatever I need for the situation/outfit]
Also, if you want a girl without huge tits, you usually need to put ((large breasts)) [or the equivalent for your model, not all use danboru tags] in the negative prompt.
(also, this worked well for Abyssorangemix3a1, which I used for this tease, but that’s an old model that can’t really keep up with the current ones in quality. I’m planning on using an SD XL model for part 2)

Though, all of that is for anime models. I have absolutely no idea about realistic models.

*snip*
PS: Perhaps you could add a hard mode for us who like edging so much?

As for the feedback, it's certainly nice to hear, and I appreciate it. However, in case you notice something someone could improve, it's usually best to be as explicit as possible about it - like 'that edge at the end of Day 3 felt awkward because of xyz', since that is the easiest to work with.

The intention is that the game has a 'perfect route' starting D4 which makes it harder if you do, well, perfectly on enough of the challenges and pick a few correct choices.

Congrats on finally publishing this tease! I can't wait to play the sequels when you get the chance to write them.

I think a collab tease where Sara and Emily find out they've been toying with the same guy could be pretty fun. Would have to get creative because Emily keeps her guy under lock and key. I don't think either of us has the capacity to write something like that though.

*snip*

Hey, thanks! And yeah, that will probably take a while. And thanks again for play-testing!

Yeah, and frankly, any collab would probably be too much work to be properly worth it.

[standardparfait7976]

Hey I really really liked your work, I normally don't ever comment (I believe this is my first one?) but after seeing the thread have so few comments I just had to write something and praise your work.

I had interest in Emily series but I just am not interested in chastity so I never got around to checking it out I feel like this proved to be a good alternative suited to my tastes. I also like edging themed teases a lot (for example the ones from schefflera0101 and Tapopip) and the fact that you put your creative twist to so many tasks made it a lot better.

If you ever decide to do the sequel I would really like to check it out.

[Edants]

Hey I really liked the tease. Looking very much forward to more parts.

I really loved the pacing of the tease - very good mix between stroking / edging / holding...

i have enjoyed the first two day of the webtease.
to be honest,the edges there are too much
it's too hard for me to keep not to edge after so many edges(qwq)
but on the other hand,I experienced the joy of edge I had never had before.（even if it is too profound to enjoy，i still love it）
maybe we can add a more easy mode？
i really appreciate the i'm on the edge bottom and the save function
(btw i like your Exploring Jean so much that i experience it multiple times.and i always except for your next tease.)
(best wishes for your future masterpieces)

For me it was quite the opposite! I love edging and was disappointed that she didn't make me more. Would have loved if at one point she asks if I like edging for her and if you say 'yes' then she would make you do it even more.

Would have loved the possibility to stay denied on day 3 (perhaps in the future when more days are available). Really hope you keep adding to the tease!

[lor205y]

Hey - this was great! Really well written, good character design, good difficulty level, loved the challenge aspect.

Very excited to see more in this series!

I also wanted to plant a seed. Have you considered a tease where she actually does instruct you through a workout? I think fitness is a great vehicle for femdom, and would love to be made to do the same kind of challenging tasks as she did with edging, but instead, it's exercises. Maybe some kind of calibration to find fitness level first? And sessions could end with stroking/edging reward/punishment sections. Any way - just an idea

[arandommark]

Hey - this was great! Really well written, good character design, good difficulty level, loved the challenge aspect.

Very excited to see more in this series!

I also wanted to plant a seed. Have you considered a tease where she actually does instruct you through a workout? I think fitness is a great vehicle for femdom, and would love to be made to do the same kind of challenging tasks as she did with edging, but instead, it's exercises. Maybe some kind of calibration to find fitness level first? And sessions could end with stroking/edging reward/punishment sections. Any way - just an idea

Nice to hear!

To be honest, that sounds like way too much effort for something I don't get off to. I'm not really interested in actually mixing workout with porn, as the few times I've tried were just really awkward. This tease is probably as close as I'll get, with at least the story assuming you work out in between each session.

Also, something like this sounds like a lot of work, even if it shouldn't be too difficult. So you'll likely need to do it yourself if you want to see it(I personally recommend at least giving it a try, if you're interested and have the time).

[lor205y]

Super reasonable! Tbh I have been tempted to make my own on this topic before... maybe one of these days :D