New Tease, shorter this time probably part of a series. Feedback welcome
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=74195
[RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
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firsttenth1353
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W0nderland
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
This was incredible and I'm so excited for more!
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Really enjoyed it. I like the last part the most (of course the lead up story too). The description of helplessness and submitting control was great. and the AGAIN. Yes, forced orgasm is great
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Agile_poet
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Very good! I lost the story on p28. Was there a part missing or out if order?
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Absolutely incredible. 
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
you need a EOS version of Beta Testers, so we dont have to keep clicking on the page/link.
just a thought.
just a thought.
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UrSlaveInGB
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I don't usually login to rate/comment on teases, but I had to for this one.
THIS WAS FANTASTIC AND VERY WELL WRITTEN!
It kept me captivated and eager to see what happened next, cannot wait for the next installment.
Would be interesting to continue in an EOS version with perhaps some hypno videos.
THIS WAS FANTASTIC AND VERY WELL WRITTEN!
It kept me captivated and eager to see what happened next, cannot wait for the next installment.
Would be interesting to continue in an EOS version with perhaps some hypno videos.
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Big fan of this and your other teases.
Is there a place where you post your work/other images?
Is there a place where you post your work/other images?
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This was one of my favorite story teases I've read in a while! I also really loved your summer series. Thank you so much for sharing your excellent writing with us! You have spoiled us with your generous gifts of your time, energy, and skills.
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I always love your stuff, but this was really excellent. Well done!
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feindishly
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
suuuper hot tease. Loved it. I really miss your old captions from bdsmlr, it was some of the best content on that site(back before the site became borderline unusable, lol). It would be great to see some of those old captions revived in tease form! super hot! 10 out of 10!
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feindishly
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hey, again, truly amazing tease! Here are some minor typos I noticed on the second read through.
page 10 should be - knight's armor
page 12 unexpected ending to this line, I'm guessing it should say "a collar" : "Suddenly I felt something tightening around my neck my hand rushed to my neck and i felt something leather. a"
page 12 no punctuation here, but still readable: I sprinted I ran I ran as fast as I could...
page 13. I think should say, "Tim, Tim you're" -- "Tim Time you're safe here, come come sit."
page 24: "See isn't it better when you Molly's in control."
page 29 should be "without": they cannot live with out it
page 29 missing "this": "We do through a process called ceding control"
page 41: "The energy wrapped it was around me"
page 10 should be - knight's armor
page 12 unexpected ending to this line, I'm guessing it should say "a collar" : "Suddenly I felt something tightening around my neck my hand rushed to my neck and i felt something leather. a"
page 12 no punctuation here, but still readable: I sprinted I ran I ran as fast as I could...
page 13. I think should say, "Tim, Tim you're" -- "Tim Time you're safe here, come come sit."
page 24: "See isn't it better when you Molly's in control."
page 29 should be "without": they cannot live with out it
page 29 missing "this": "We do through a process called ceding control"
page 41: "The energy wrapped it was around me"