[FEEDBACK] Weeks of serving Queen Zoe

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Weeks of serving Queen Zoe

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PrincessJulia, thank you so much for coming back and making this tease! It is blowing my mind so far! I am so excited and nervous at the same time about what might be coming up next. You are so creative and interesting in finding ways to humiliate and provide naughty tasks... I wish this could go on much longer... but thank you so much for the hard work you have already put in!
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Weeks of serving Queen Zoe

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Day 2 spoiler:
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This is about not-arrived-yet-3

Overall, another solid entry. That last writing task was brutal though. It ended up taking me 2.5 hours because I would occasionally loose focus and make a bunch of mistakes in a row, erasing all my progress. It didn't help that I constantly had a full bladder, despite peeing so many times I lost count (I did, however, get very fast at counting to 600).

I did cheat slightly on the shower, and turned the temperature a smidge away from pure cold. It was still cold, just not the frigid cold that comes out of the tap. The text at the end of the writing task was a bit inconsistent with the tease. It sounds like they already left, and I am free to shower normally. However, going back to the tease reveals that is not the case.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Weeks of serving Queen Zoe

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magie686 wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2025 8:43 pm Day 2 spoiler:
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This is about not-arrived-yet-3

Overall, another solid entry. That last writing task was brutal though. It ended up taking me 2.5 hours because I would occasionally loose focus and make a bunch of mistakes in a row, erasing all my progress. It didn't help that I constantly had a full bladder, despite peeing so many times I lost count (I did, however, get very fast at counting to 600).

I did cheat slightly on the shower, and turned the temperature a smidge away from pure cold. It was still cold, just not the frigid cold that comes out of the tap. The text at the end of the writing task was a bit inconsistent with the tease. It sounds like they already left, and I am free to shower normally. However, going back to the tease reveals that is not the case.
Probably something I added much much later, without changing the original scene ending that is represented in the writing task. I'll edit it, when I have time. :) Thanks.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Weeks of serving Queen Zoe

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Good concept, but some rough edges. I'm going off of memory here, so apologies if I was just dense and misread/remembered something.

Day 3 itself was fine (although I improvised and put a cutting board down to put the rice on, as I was on carpet). I ended up on the failure path. In retrospect ... I should have just taken the L and failed that test immediately :-P . The crime was definantly worth the punishment for that one.

The handoff was a bit rocky. I moved to the basement (unfinished part below my steps with the lights off) before opening day 4 like I was told too. Then, once in day 4, it was clearly the expectation that I should not have gone there until instructed.

I don't think the instructions made it clear to bring something to tie my balls with. I read whip/rope as whip, with rope as an alternative to use in place of the whip (especially since you can kind of whip with rope). As luck would have it, I was extra cautious and brought various kinds of rope as well. As more luck would have it, one of the rope was actually suitable for the task given (which, at least for me, needed to be relativly thin, but longer than my normal cbt paracord or a shoelace). I also had to retie my leash once told that I should be standing. As a safty note, I think that tieing my balls on an upline like that was also enough to justify having a pair of safty scissors in reach. Not a problem for me (as I also packed those).

On a more personal note, I replaced the ballgag with some vet tape. But that is between me and my dentist. Although it is especially annoying, because I love ballgags, and actually had to cut one out of the mask I used. I also brewed real tea, because I would die of embaresment if my family found out I served a fictional guest bottled tea.

The instruction to put my phone somewhere where I could see it, but wouldn't need to touch it seemed unnecessary and confusing. There was plenty of interaction needed after that point. For the part where I was actually waiting, I wasn't even supposed to be looking at the phone. It feels like that could have been better done by instructing me to turn on the timer, close the phone, and cuff my hands.

This is the second time I was instructed to cum by jerking my cage, which I simply cannot do, so I had to pretend on that. I still jerked for a while, which was painful (and probably not healthy given long term chastity belt wearing) The annoying part of that is I can cum through my cage by using a vibrator. I think this section (and the previous cum while caged section) would work better for people like me if we were instructed to bring a vibrator, then after X minutes of jerking the cage, given permission to use the vib.

At the end, we were told to keep the clamps and ball tie on and get dressed. Then the tease ended without any instructions about when we were allowed to remove them. Relatedly, that ending felt like a missed opportunity for another writing task; not that I'm complaining about that.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Weeks of serving Queen Zoe

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For those of you who finished the tease, please tell me which ending you have chosen. :)
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There's a new button added to confess cumming without permission. Plus an according handlung by your Queen!
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Weeks of serving Queen Zoe

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BEST Webtease on Milovana that makes you feel like a REAL slave.

5 out of 5 stars!! Deserves double that!
Beautiful written and executed!

Thank you so much Princess Julia for sharing this with us :love:


... Hello everyone,

I could finally read this topic without spoiling myself. And I can see that some others pointed out some good sessions and days. Yeah there is a lot of creativity in this tease :)

I want to give a spoilerfree-ish warning to everyone reading this. This tease is about WEEKS of SERVING, it is in the title. The relationship with Zoe will build up. And it is about serving her. She is not there to provide you with fap material and do a fun JOI with you. Nope, you will be serving her.

Some days you will want more, and you have to wait for tomorrow. Other days you are just happy your suffering is finally over. :D It really made me feel like a real submissive, a slave. And when I did get rewarded, it felt EARNED. And AMAZING :)

Stick with it, be obedient and you will have a once in a lifetime experience as a submissive.

And it is not for newbies, your obedience and willpower will be challenged, and it won't be easy. But rewarding if you make it through. It felt so great in the end for me :)

For the ending I choose:
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121 Zoe, my Queen and Owner!
Stay kinky,
Peter
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