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Denial Dick December - A Frustration Advent Calendar
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alex_horny
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Re: Denial Dick December - A Frustration Advent Calendar
So... My ending doesn't quite work for me (spoilers for ending ahead)
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Re: Denial Dick December - A Frustration Advent Calendar
Hey Alex,
You did great, so feel free to do another.
Use a foursided dice between those you liked.
You did great, so feel free to do another.
Use a foursided dice between those you liked.
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https://bdsmlr.com/blog/IonaWandelstern
== Results from bdsmtest.org ==
100% Switch
100% Rope bunny
97% Brat
92% Experimentalist
92% Submissive
88% Degradee
69% Masochist
56% Exhibitionist
55% Primal (Prey)
53% Voyeur
51% Vanilla
http://bdsmtest.org/r/wRzVRVRT
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alex_horny
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Re: Denial Dick December - A Frustration Advent Calendar
Thank you, I did. Here's my ending:SlenderSissyNewbie wrote: Wed Dec 25, 2024 7:52 pm Hey Alex,
You did great, so feel free to do another.
Use a foursided dice between those you liked.
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I had a lot of fun, many thanks to the creator.
There were minor things that could be improved, namely:
- I think almost all dialogue should be skippable, waiting for the next line without any reason is not fun.
- Spelling - there were some typos. I know it might sound nitpicky, and I'm not perfect myself, but at least for me a spelling error is a pretty easy way to break immersion. I'd be willing to proofread your stuff if you want help (if time allows).
Again, thanks a lot for the event.
