[Feedback] Goon Session 2

[BrainStew]

After lots of constructive feedback, my second installment of Goon Session is up. I tried to make it a bit more interactive and less linear.

As always, I'm thankful for any criticism that's aimed towards making my future teases better.

Enjoy and have fun!

.Stew

[plum69]

Thanks for your two teases so far. Loved them both! Great that us betas are only worshipping clothed Women. Taking that to a further degree, perhaps your next one might feature censored pics? Just a suggestion, as I said I enjoyed both teases you have created.

[rubber_dick]

I thought I had to give up. But then I didn't... happy they forced me to stay a bit longer... and later they didn't need to force me again, because I decided to stay more.

My brain kinda melted halfway through there too... very good work, I appreciated it.

[catiesslut]

Really great work. I like the pics, I like the format, and I like the tone/mood of the writing.

[Achab1851]

After lots of constructive feedback, my second installment of Goon Session is up. I tried to make it a bit more interactive and less linear.

As always, I'm thankful for any criticism that's aimed towards making my future teases better.

Enjoy and have fun!

.Stew

Hey,
you did a really good tease!
Limiting oneself to strokes and edges might be boring for some, but I find that simple things are often also the most effective.
If you would like to do another one and need some advice, don't hesitate to contact me.

[xman911]

After lots of constructive feedback, my second installment of Goon Session is up. I tried to make it a bit more interactive and less linear.

As always, I'm thankful for any criticism that's aimed towards making my future teases better.

Enjoy and have fun!

.Stew

Your second tease is even better than the first one.

I think what can make better such a tease would be to track the number of edges and edging hold time.

Also another improvement will be if it's made into a multi day tease not necessarily with more content, just the girls saying for example "hello again gooner let's see if you can do more edges today" or something like that.

I should also say the girls in both teases are rally hot.

[lor205y]

Holy shit - this tease is amazing. This might be the hardest I've ever edged. Literally physically trembling, sweating, fingers tingly. When I had to stop, I HAD to stop. I've edged more or maybe even longer in other teases, but somehow never harder.

This is a work of art.

I desperately implore you to make more.

And maybe to find ways to add more replay value to this one? Right now, I know enough about how it works that it would be a bit less fun on a second play, but I could see...

Spoiler: show

some additional randomization, and maybe a few additional tricks, traps, and tests to be allowed to stop

... adding a lot to the replay value :)

[willow11]

I made a personal (for now) moded version of this. I downloaded it and imported it into guide me. Replaced the pictures of the clothed beauties with a good collection (1.4GB) of goon caps and changed some wordings.

This just shows of how much I love this tease.

[willow11]

I made a personal (for now) moded version of this. I downloaded it and imported it into guide me. Replaced the pictures of the clothed beauties with a good collection (1.4GB) of goon caps and changed some wordings.

This just shows of how much I love this tease.

Oh and I love the pictures of clothed girls btw. I just wanted to mix it up and have something more in line with the goon porn stuff

[ccgssdtttew]

Oh and I love the pictures of clothed girls btw. I just wanted to mix it up and have something more in line with the goon porn stuff

To Brainstew, i really loved this tease. Somehow I do find clothed women (in teasing clothes usually of course) even more of a turn on. I always admired those of yall who could write such narratives. Thanks for the teasE!!!

To willow, is there a way I can play your edited version? Ive been to GOONED reddit, and I kinda like how the captions "mock me" to keep stroking (but im not into dick, just in case goon had that reference in it since i kept seeing them on reddit).