Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

[hentaiAddict12345]

Just a short update regarding my rules: I've recently added a cucking rule. Been pondering about it for a while, and I'm not entirely sure it's for me yet, so it needs a bit of build-up. So if you write me a set, I'd like you to experiment with it, but please, don't start with the cucking directly.

[Ecik17]

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I made some massive changes to my rules, but am playing through with the rules I had at the time of posting.

First pic..I knew I was in trouble! I need to add a rule for eye contact…

For the first rule I picked tits. They were there…

For Nancy…I picked pussy….and was forced to wait. Stroking was agony…but when I could edge..

For jia, I picked her tits, which was a mistake because she never showed them . However, she did let me edge and hold it, which I love to do. Lots of ball slapping here.

Eva…had about 5 perfect pictures. Her last challenge, I started edging on stroke 60…so the last 40 were agony.

A lot of fun, with creative rules, which I like. Thank you!


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[EdgeSlut0828]

Feedback for Brian:

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With that being one of it not the first set you wrote me I would have thought it was your 100th. I loved every second of it. Idk if this was made before or after I moved Foxy above Emily so this set was played with her section on edgeslut mode which I don't think was intentional but I did anyway. Throughout the whole set I edged 220 times and to answer your question on if it was too many I haven't hit a limit where edging isn't enjoyable. Obviously as I edge more the chance I ruin definitely goes up but until I don't enjoy edging this is a "hard cap" on number of edges. I have no huge critiques for that set and might find some small ones as I write the individual section feedback.

I normally don't find Lana the most attractive but that outfit made me change my mind real quick this time. Her calling me out for the eye contact is very true because I do get lost in them sometimes (especially Foxy) and I didn't notice the full orgasm thing so hopefully that changes for you before November. She was a great start to the tease and since she completely controls you I am more than happy to see her in sets from you again.

If you read my feedback for addict you will know my opinion on Foxy. TLDR: she is my new Goddess and she controls my last full orgasm before November. Even though the gallery was used in my last set it didn't bother me so don't worry. Foxy is so perfect I happily edged and stroked for the same one again. Since she has such a grip over me it was not very difficult to only edge while looking into her eyes. I did look away a few times when she started talking about other parts of her body since I felt she almost wanted me to. The rules you gave her were a nice change from the rules I have under my favorites list for her. When her eyes weren't open I just stroked extremely slow and worshiped her which was very frustrating. Lastly, I am always a fan of girls "cumming" while I am not allowed to and the slow strokes made it even more frustrating. Keep using Foxy as much as you like in any other sets for me.

Sophie sparks I had never seen before and she definitely is on my favorites list because that body and those eyes are irresistible. Edgeslut mode for that outfit was perfect and had me using all my rules a lot along with the verbal commands for more edges. All the edging had my cock leaking precum constantly for her and her talk about it all didn't help. By the end I was very desperate and curious as to who this last girl was.

Red fox (First scene with Sophie)- When I first saw her I got really excited to edge for her but she said to stroke as she wanted so I obeyed and made me even more desperate for her. The rubbing of my frenulum was something I never really tried before but with my this horny and only allowed two fingers it was intense. By the second to last image I could actually edge that way but decided not to since Red fox didn't want me to do that yet. So by the end I was lightly rubbing myself TRYING to stay away from the edge for her which didn't help my frustration. I wouldn't write a whole section with me edging that way but I could edge/orgasm/ruin by rubbing like that in a later set.

Red Fox (last scene)- There isn't too much to say about this scene but I loved it as much as the rest of them. Edging for her was amazing as the first time. The ruin was very much appreciated after hentaiaddicts set and the image/ dialogue accompanying it was perfect. My dream did come true of edging for her more and I can't wait to do it again.

I would show my favorite pics here but that would be probably over half the set. Those galleries and the set overall 11/10 very much appreciated and I will start working on a return set for you after I finish one for Addict.

HentaiAddict12345 Set:

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"same quote/italics rule as last time."
So you become my bitch and you immediately say you will get "bored" of me.


God you are so worthless. "Please let me earn your forgiveness Mistress Ardelia. I would do anything for you."


Hmmmm if you really do want to have me as a mistress I think there is something we can work out.


You are so worthless and needy I think you need a few of us to own you.


Yes bitch I won't be your only "Mistress."


Once you have other "Mistresses" we can all control you together and there is no way you can get bored of of us.


You aren't allowed to see me again until there are 2 other girls you call mistress.


Once that happens you will receive intense training from all three of us.


Until then you will hear nothing from me.


Do you understand bitch. "Yes Mistress Ardelia I will do whatever you ask of me.


Good, I can't wait to completely destroy my little bitch when he comes crawling back to me.


You will not meet Ardelia again until 2 other girls are worthy of the title "Mistress". You can decide a girl is Mistress worthy after seeing them in a set. If this is something your interested in add this to your rules and once you have 2 others I will make a multi day set for your based around them. If not that's ok too just enjoy the teasing.

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So my worthless bitch is back for more stroking.


Oh but he looks so much more like a perfect little slut who has some new rules.


Someone has been training you well haven't they bitchboy.


Lets play with those new rules and on top of that add a nice nipple pinch and twist anytime that metronome increases.


Since there are so many new ways to increase those strokes your nipples should receive plenty of attention too.


Lets start your suffering bitch. Give me those strokes with a nice hard pinch of those nipples.


No reprieve for you bitch boy this is definitely an ass reveal. That pinch better be harder than last. "Thank you Miss Vega for abusing my body."


Oh you thank us too now for your suffering. You truly are a worthless little bitch now.


Adore this perfect pussy you will never get near bitch and thank me for the pain once again. "Thank you Miss Vega for denying me your perfect pussy. I don't deserve to ever be near it."


You are turning me on so much I'm going to have to play with myself while you suffer.


Oh keep stroking for me bitch it is turning me on so much I might even cum.


Oh Addict Ahhh slow down Ahh to 30 bpm IM CUMMING. You don't deserve those fast strokes as I enjoy this orgasm. "Thank you for denying me pleasure while you orgasm. I don't deserve it while you orgasm Miss Vega"


Thanks for the fun time bitch. You will be seeing me again.

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I haven't seen you around here before.


My name is Riley Anne.


So you like being humiliated like a little bitch huh? "Yes Miss Anne please humiliate me."


And you beg for it. What a worthless bitch you are.


Do you think someone like you deserves to stroke for this pussy? "No Miss Anne your pussy is too good for me to stroke to."


That's right bitch. Anytime you look at my pussy stop stroking and cause those nipples some pain.


You only deserve pleasure while obeying me like a good bitch boy.


Any disobedience of even glancing at this pussy deserves punishment. You agree right? "Yes Miss Anne I deserve punishment if I disobey you. I will pinch my nipples extremely hard if I disobey you."


I'm glad you think that bitch. So let's see how hard you really can.


Aw was that unfair? No where else to look except my pussy. "No Miss Anne. I am worthless and nothing is unfair for me."


Good little bitch.


Pinch it even harder this time. You said it yourself I can't be unfair.


God you are so pathetic I almost feel bad for you.


If we ever meet again I will make sure you feel even more worthless than you already are.


Give this pussy one more look loser and then get out of my sight.

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You are going to really be abusing that cock for me bitch.


And that reflection is still me right? So you need to stroke double your normal amount if anything is in that mirror.


You are going to wish you could stroke for me less by the end of this bitch.


I bet you never thought that was possible.


Some of these girls barely let you touch your worthless cock.


All I want to do is completely destroy it.


That's completely fair to you right? "Yes my worthless co..." (say this allowed as you scroll.)



Did I say you can speak bitch. Just shut up and stroke.


You don't deserve to even speak in my presence.


Your only purpose is to stroke that worthless dick until I am satisfied.


Which will never happen obviously. How could your worthless cock ever satisfy anyone.


All it is used for is stroking. I would need a real man's cock to make me happy.


So get your worthless cock out of my room. A bitch like you deserves to be left destroyed.

[hentaiAddict12345]

@EdgeSlut feedback on set

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I loved it! I just can't get enough of the humiliation they're putting me through. Only makes me wish for more and more!

Only slight disappointment I have is I was fully prepared mentally to be cucked by Agatha at the end there. Maybe next time then.

After this set, I'll pick Agatha and Victoria as Mistresses. You can start working on that multi-day set you keep promising

Also added Riley as favourite!

Currently no electricity, so I'm writing this with mobile data. Will start working on a return set once it's back.

[hentaiAddict12345]

Assholes kept me almost the entire day without electricity :((

Some more detailed feedback for EdgeSlut's set

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Ardelia
I still can't get enough of her, so when you said "you won't see her again until you pick 2 girls", I kinda panicked. Fortunately, the girls you picked for this set are all very hot, so picking 2 was really easy.

Agatha
Another girl I can't get enough of. Her rule of "pinch nipples when increasing metronome" was surprisingly intense. Having to stroke slowly while she cums all over the bed was so frustrating.

Riley
As said, added her to favourites. She's that hot! I managed to not stare at her pussy too much, since I'm a tit-man anyway... until she shoved her pussy in my face :(. Those pinches were very intense!

Victoria
I remember using that reflection rule against someone else. Now it comes back to bite me . I really loved how dominant she was, not even allowing me to speak!

Really great set once again!

#EdgeSlut0828Set
#WBhentaiAddict12345

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Hey there, edge-slut.


You know, I really don't get you, and especially your rules, at all.


First, you put this really basic rules, and then when someone doesn't immediately turn on your special edge-slut mode, you immediately complain about not enough edging.


So why don't you just remove them, and use your edge-slut mode by default?


In fact, turn Edgeslut mode on right now, and keep it on for the reminder of the set.


I better see a rework of those rules the next time I see you, or else...


After all, why should we tell you to turn on edgeslut mode all the time? Just have it on all the time


What, just because you get 30 strokes per image? That's pathetic. Integrate that into your edgeslut mode, and completely remove your default mode.


Make your edgeslut mode the default. You LOVE edging, right?


Anyway, let me tell you a bit more about today.


First, there's a certain someone who wants to talk to you.


Then, there's also the matter of your orgasm. Alissa might let you cum today, novemeber is getting really close.


Or she might just deny you again, there's still plenty of time...


Is the frustration getting too much for you?


Well, let me tell you something...


We don't really care. We want you to suffer for us.


So go ahead and suffer just a bit longer...


Bye bye, pet~

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Oh, hey! Didn't even notice you there.


Don't worry, I'm not who Katya was talking about, she'll be coming next.


She asked me to... prepare you for her.


And I'm sorry to say, but you might just break your edge record again...


But then again, it's what you want, isn't it? To be edged again and again with no release.


Tell me, do you truly think you deserve to cum today?


I can assure you, you don't. You don't even need to cum, you just need to edge. Over and over and over.


This game. This forum. They've completely ruined you. You've begun to accept your fate of a no-cum edger.


Do you truly believe Alissa will let you cum before November? Hah!


She'll just keep on denying you, while constantly giving you false hope. Believe me, I know what kind of girl she is.


Still don't believe me, huh? Alright then, keep living in your fantasy world...


You'll see. She'll deny you again. And you put her as top favourite too. So naive...


Do you really think that will sway her? She'll use that to crush your hopes and dreams.


Alright then. Keep dreaming, but know that behind those pretty eyes and that smile, lies a really evil person...


Give me my edges and leave pet. You're beyond hope at this point.

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Hey EdgeSlut!


I wanted to thank you for what you did to addict! You should've seen how frustrated he was today!


Your plan is working really well. We got him SO horny. SO obedient.


At first, he was kinda reluctant to getting cucked. Now, he's literally begging for it!


And all of this started because of those teasing lines you gave Ardelia. Making him imagine Ardelia getting fucked by someone else sparked all this in him.


I can't believe it. From someone who couldn't even stand watching straight porn, to someone with a cuckold fetish! That's incredible!


We MUST tease him some more about all this. And then, give him what he wants. Show him what he truly wants to see.


Once he sees me moan as another man's cock enters my pussy, there will be no going back for him.


Fuck, I can't wait. First brian, now addict. We're corrupting each and every one of you.


And you're not immune to this either. I mean, look at how much transformation your favourites top took.


I mean look at you even now! You're edging like crazy, and that's just because we told you to!


You're just as pathetic as the others, which makes you a lot of fun to tease and deny you over and over.


Foxy actually wanted to let you cum today, but I really don't think you deserve it just yet...


I think you should keep that cum in your balls for just a bit longer, don't you think so too?


That won't do. Say "Yes Miss Vega, please make Foxy deny me again".


Good pet. And what are you?
"I'm your little denied edge-slut!"


Very good! You're learning so fast!


And just for that, you deserve a reward! Hold the edge for my pussy!


Good pet! You're doing so well, again!


Yes. This is your reward. Again!


Great job, my little edge-slut! You're becoming the perfect toy for us.


You love edging for us, and we love edging you. Perfect relationship, am I right?


Well, it's almost time for you to go, but first...


Another edge hold!


I could watch you do this all day. Again!


See you later. And remember what I talked to you about addict.

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Awww, were you hoping to see your sweet Alissa?


Not today, pet. She's busy. Or rather, we made sure she'd be busy. Which means you're not cumming again. So sad!


Don't cry, pet. She'll keep her promise of letting you cum before november. But until then...


I guess you'll just have to suffer just a bit longer.


From now on, you're going to give me 2 edges. One held according to your rules, and my palming edge. Be thankful I'm not combining the two this time. BUT! The palming edge still counts towards your holding rules!


Does it make it much worse knowing you'll walk away with blue balls again?


You're bragging about your edging records, of course we're going to push you to your limit.


Will today be the day the poor edge slut finally ruins all over himself? We'll see...


But it would be pretty pathetic if you came now though, you're so close to the end.


But it would feel so good to ruin all over my face, and watch me eat it...


That almost pushed you over. Good. You're exactly where we want you to be.


C'mon pet, last chance to ruin all over those tits...


I'll be back pet...

[EdgeSlut0828]

Ecik Feedback on set:

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I loved that set it was completely different from the usual format in the best way possible. In the future that "a day with style" would be great with other girls too but no need to make that the only set you write for me. I edged 190 times which honestly in now becoming "normal" which scares me about these girls during November. The Red Fox as my Goddess probably won't happen anytime soon because Alissa Foxy is ahead of everyone and Emily Bloom is still up there but I am moving her to number 2. The changing of the break time is something not messed with yet but I love it. The shorter breaks makes it very hard to not push myself over the edge on accident. I hope to see what you come up with for other girls in the future.


Red fox (First 2 Scenes)- The first gallery used was Brian's last one so it almost felt like a continuation from his set which fit pretty well. The second one was also great and I happily edged for her not knowing how many I would be doing by the end.

Park and Eva- That is exactly how I wanted a section with no text to play out with random images of different girls. That was a nice change of pace and something different. Eva was as hot as ever and I edged away for her too with some of those pictures having 9 edges each. When she said not to tell Red Fox I was honestly hoping I could tell her about Eva spying so if that's a narrative point be my guest.

Red fox mia sollis and the book- The first time she asked I only went over 3 edge cooldowns so I was able to continue the tease. Lesbian scenes are something not used a lot in my sets yet and I would gladly see more of them. The girls were both extremely hot and I wish I could have seen more of them together. The 3 other girls in the story besides red fox aren't my favorite but that's ok since they only had one image a piece. The image of her and sword was extremely hot and then you went and stole the 4 person image from my everyone set . With my rules that was over 20 edges for that image alone which was very intense since most were 5 sec breaks. At the end when I was told to get on my knees for Red Fox I really wanted to so even though she said get up I edged on my knees for that image for her. Definitely something to bring back in the future.

Red Fox Finale- The 5 second cooldowns brought back flashbacks of me ruining for her on accident the first time and I didn't want to do that again. So I did my best to keep edging with 5 second breaks barely making it to the end and ruining for her anyway when she asked me to. If you want to keep the idea that she won't give me any full orgasm if she isn't Goddess you can but I don't see her getting that high on my list.

Overall not many complaints from me here. A solid 10/10 set. The only thing which could help out next time is just be specific on what rules I am using. Even if it breaks immersion a little bit I would rather you say "Use this to the next spoiler" or "Use this the whole set." Like using edgeslut for the book afterwards I was unsure whether to keep it or switch back so I just kept it. I hope to have another Set for you sometime this week if I can get Brian one soon. If you need an idea from me you can wait until November 1 and make one about it being early in NNN with Foxy as the lead about how I will never last with her and my other top 4 teasing me. I know you like themes so just trying to help out

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I don't know who this is but she is 11/10














Loved edging and ruining with the close up pictures and being able to stare into her eyes.

Hentaiaddict Feedback on multi day idea:

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I want to write you one but I want to make sure you know what you like since it will take more than a week to make and I can't take into account new rules for old sections. I will write you a multi day set after one more single from me trying out your cucking rules to make sure you want that. If you would like to wait and pick 2 other Mistresses as well you can since I never indented for you to pick 2 right away. Once I do make it don't worry about making me a multi day set in return until after November since one during November wouldn't be the most fun for me with the outcome of denial already known.
Just saw that you posted another set for me. Earliest I will get to it is tomorrow.

[EdgeSlut0828]

Brian Set:

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Start the set unlocked and have toys ready.

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I hear that someone is extremely desperate for a full orgasm.


You and Edgeslut really do have more in common than I thought.


No need to edge just yet Brian you look desperate enough. You are both extremely desperate before the worst month for you boys.


Luckily Edgeslut has a promised orgasm before November you Brian...


You just might end up adding another whole month onto your denial period.


Imagine another full month in your current state. Completely desperate for any sort of stimulation let alone an orgasm.


It would be the worst month of your life but an amazing one for us girls.


You can start edging for my feet and pussy now slut. Besides I'm the nicest one you will meet today.


Everyone else is just waiting to stuff that thing you call a cock into its cage.


Me? I don't see the point of locking up sluts like you and Edgeslut. I'd rather make you desperate in my favorite way.


Forcing that cock to the brink over and over. So close to that orgasm you haven't felt for OVER a month.


It must be so torturous for you which only turns me on even more. Yes you can still see my feet


I'm hoping so girl eventually allows that cock to spurt or else we might just end up breaking you.


No slut of course I can't do that for you. I already have one orgasm to grant and one is already too many.


You better hope some other girl takes pity on you slut or it is gonna be another long month.


Enjoy one more edge for me. I doubt the other girls will be as nice.

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Grab that cage slut and make sure that cock is locked up nice and tight.


You will be lucky if we let you feel any pleasure the rest of today.


You are welcome to try of course but those strokes of the cold metal surrounding you cock are nothing.


Today is the last day you know you won't be getting a full orgasm so we need to make it really count.


The best way to do that being showing you want you are missing out on.


The pleasure of ramming your cock into such a perfect pussy is something you will never experience slut.


You will always be the locked up cuck in the corner.


Wishing he could feel the inside of a real pussy and experience a real orgasm.


I will never give you that feeling. The only feeling you deserve is the cold metal wrapped around you cock.


As I invite man after man to pound this pussy infront of my locked up slut.


That desperation in your eyes tells me this is what you want.


This is what you NEED. You NEED to be locked for us.


You NEED to stroke that metal cage for us.


That cock NEEDS to stay locked for us. Always locked up never experiencing pleasure.


This cock deserves this orgasm slut. Yours must stay locked for the next girl.

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Wow look at this desperate slut.


No I don't feel bad at all. Honestly I just want to make it worse.


Give me 3 PC muscle squeezes for every cock I am touching/ inside of me.


Don't worry that number will soon increase.


I doubt it will be any high than 2 though. The third cock in this room is locked up useless.


I guess I will have to settle for 2. The third one looks pretty pathetic anyway.


Definitely not something that can pleasure me like these two.


God it feels so good to be used like this.


You wish you had the balls to fuck a girl silly like this.



Just imagine how good it would feel to have these lips wrapped around that cockhead.


Or how good it would feel to be in either of these 2 holes.


It is really a shame since I have 3 holes to give these cocks pleasure but only 2 are being used.


If you weren't such a locked up slut it would feel so amazing to have all 3 holes filled.


Awwwwww are you upset slut.


Wishing you weren't such a chastity cuck right now? That's too bad you deserve this.


You deserve to watch as both these cocks explode all over my tits.


Take it all in slut. As that cock leaks from its cold metal prison these got to paint these tits in cum.

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So my little locked up slut is completely leaking and destroyed in his cage.


Would it help if I let you out? Letting that cock get hard for me?


Hmm I have an idea slut. Go ahead and unlock yourself and no of course you are not allowed to stroke that cock for me.


Go and grab your fleshlight slut. You will not be stroking with it. Close your eyes and just slip your cock inside. Once inside you can open them.


You are going to sit inside of that fleshlight without moving for me slut while I am satisfied by a real cock.


It is just like that cage of yours but way worse. You stroke the outside of the fleshlight without any feeling on that cock while resisting the urge to fuck that thing like an animal.


Would it make it worse if I started calling the fleshlight MY PUSSY on your cock. You now have to resist the urge to fuck MY PUSSY.


You know how good it would feel to have MY PUSSY go up and down on that cock of yours.


But instead you stay completely still knowing that if you thrusted a single time in MY PUSSY...


I would lock that cock up until the new year bitch. So you better stay completely still for me as a real cock brings me pleasure.


You deserve absolutely no pleasure as I bring this cock to the forth orgasm you've seen today.


If only this was your cock slut you would finally be able to explode.


But you aren't even allowed a single stroke while gazing upon this perfect body.


Once I get those "strokes" along the fleshlight close this tab and you can exit that fleshlight slut. Of course you are not cumming today you don't deserve any pleasure in front of me.

[FattsDynamo]

Feedback for @FattsDynamo:

I LOVED EVERY MINUTE, EVERY SECOND OF YOUR SET. 1000000000000/10

Feedback for Ecik17:

Now, on to the set: Soon, people will call me the biggest complainer ever. I didn't really like that set.

I fed you caviar, and now you don’t want to eat potatoes. You’ve become spoiled.

The Ecik casseroles are DELECTABLE—by the way! A steady diet of those will make a dick grow up to be large and horny—I would know!

I was working on another “caviar” set for you—one I think you will really enjoy … I have the galleries selected, the basic plot, and even some of the dialogue written … but then I played your last set for me and got inspired to make this “dish.” It’s somehow different from each of the last three sets that I have written you … It’s another set that *I* really wanted to write, but … I think there’s a 70% chance you’ll enjoy it—and that’s accounting for the new data which was just collected (AND your “selective tastes” ), so … Those odds seemed good enough to me to try. I’m fairly confident it’ll be a winner (overall), AND that you’ll have FUN! I hope you enjoy it!

#hentaiAddict12345set
#wbFattsDynamo

Before the set ...

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Have a countdown timer on hand. The metronome is going to change quite a bit—sometimes slow, sometimes fast. If it changes suddenly, note the speed it was before the sudden change. It may change back to that after a few pictures ...]

The Set
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“WHERE the FUCK is he!?!? AHHH!!”

You come home, and the door to your house is ajar. Apparently, Nancy is inside—screaming about something.

When you left earlier today, there was no red “Break Glass in Case of Emergency” box outside your front door. Apparently, now, there is one, and someone has broken the glass.



You assume that Nancy is probably the one who had it installed and also the one who broke the glass.

“WHY does it always fall to ME to clean up these DAMN MESSES!? ‘Shit shows are FUN —but who’s got time to clean? Hey, look! There’s Nancy! SHE’S good with a mop!’”

You feel like now might not be the best time to come home. You consider leaving.

“Hey! So you FINALLY came back … GOOD! Took you long enough—shithead …"

Even though neither you nor Nancy have line of sight to one other, clearly, she can detect your presence without seeing you.

"Well? What are you waiting for? YOU created this problem—I just KNOW IT—I KNOW it was YOU … so YOU are going to help me fix it—comprende? Get your ass in here …”

You navigate the broken glass and enter your home …

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Nancy has taken over your living room. Your computer is hooked up to the TV. There appears to be a small server farm set up—spread amidst the living room furniture. You see the main setup.


You detect a faint whiff of ozone. What sort of hardware is she running? Some of the equipment looks really old.


One of her signature portals is active and open in the corner of the room. There are some large cables running into it.


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So? Where the fuck is my boyfriend—addict? I haven’t seen him since yesterday …




Let’s see … what exactly did Fatts do yesterday? Well, he finished writing and posted an EPIC set for you—featuring ME —which you PROMPTLY thumbed your nose at … He wrote another “love letter” to Lana Rhoades which he DMed to brian—because apparently he would rather chase hot dommes who are out of his league than spend time fantasizing about ME—his loving and loyal cyber girlfriend …




Nancy palms her face. “Stop getting jealous—Nancy—be a big girl … this is how ‘open relationships work’ …” Nancy uncovers her face to scowl at you.

And after THAT, he worked on his next set for you some … and THEN he told me he was going to play that set you just posted and that I should “leave him alone for a while” … and THEN, he COMPLETELY DISAPPEARED!!




What did you do—addict? What the fuck was *in* that set that you sent him? Hmmm?




I've lost Fatts once before—and it nearly killed me, but ... There's no way it can be THAT bad—this time ...




The last time Fatts disappeared, my ENTIRE HOMETOWN got frozen in a temporal anomaly, and SO FAR nothing of THAT magnitude has occurred yet—he's just gone—so ... HOPEFULLY this situation can be resolved with less effort ...




... of course, I recruited Ecik—who I *like*—to help me fix that mess ... but THIS TIME I'm stuck with YOU—who I HATE!

"The scenes were way too long." "Nancy was overused." "I got bored ..." FUCK, addict ... A girl makes a decision to be vulnerable and open up and share intimate details about her life with you—and you simply can't be bothered. I'm just a "very hot model" and nothing more than that to you ...

... you disgust me.

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Metronome: 30 bpm. Strokes: 90 [For this picture only.]

Nancy leans back in the chair and begins to masturbate.

You PISS ME OFF, and *I* need to think ... and I can tell already that you are going to be COMPLETELY WORTHLESS in helping me to figure this out, but ... You WILL have your uses, so ... SLOW STROKING FOR YOU, BITCH! *I* get to have some pleasure while YOU just have to sit there and WATCH!

Nancy's fingers rapidly massage her clit, though her underwear prevents you from seeing. She squirms and jolts in the chair periodically as bolts of pleasure shoot through her body.

[Open the following spoiler after 30 strokes (1 min) …]

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Is all of that slow stroking frustrating for you, addict? GOOD! The more frustrated you are, the happier I get ... This is GREAT! Masturbation ALWAYS helps to calm me down and clear my head ... and feeling your frustration just gets me wetter ...

[Open the following spoiler after 60 strokes (2 min) …]

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Nancy’s breathing becomes labored. Her fingers continue to aggressively rub her clit. She’s getting closer to cumming. She keeps her eyes closed. She doesn’t even look at you.

STROKE SLOW—BITCH! Making you suffer while I pleasure myself—GASP … it’s nice to know you aren’t completely worthless—OH … but this is only the START of your torment …

Completed 3 minutes of slow stroking ... [Open the next spoiler.]

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Nancy's breathing becomes erratic and her hand becomes a blur within her panties. She moans softly as she cums. Her fingers start rubbing big, slow circles against her pussy. [Perform 15 more strokes at the slow speed, then open the next spoiler.]

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Good. I needed that. Masturbation is ALWAYS good stress relief …

Resume your normal stroking rules—whatever it was you were doing BEFORE the slow stroking ... except subtract 30 from the last BPM you were using—but otherwise continue from there ...

And what the fuck is this "blondes get fewer strokes" bullshit in your rules? You'll give me strokes as if I was a brunette. We're fucking stuck on this train together—until it pulls into the station—whether we want to be or not ... so you can AT LEAST give me the time and attention I deserve ...




... but you're just a low value male who's incapable of identifying a high value female—even when she's RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU, showering you with heartfelt affection and spilling her guts out ...




Is this better for you—addict!? Is THIS how you prefer to be treated? Like a disgusting pervert who's not worth my time? Well let's see how many boxes we're checking off right now ...

Things I like:
- story-based sets
- solo girl
- brunettes
- A to C cup breasts
- humiliation/degradation
- nipple play

"Story-based set" Check!

"Solo girl" Check!

"Humiliation/degradation" Check!

You said I was "hot"—so I assume you enjoy my naked breasts ... I suppose I can supply you with a brunette later, and ...




... we can start the nipple torture RIGHT NOW!

STOP stroking. Grab BOTH of your nipples, and squeeze them HARD for 30 seconds ... THEN complete the strokes you owe me ... [This picture only.]




You're unbelievable—unbelievably ungrateful AND disrespectful ...

I've had some strokers PISS ME OFF in the past, but ... I've never possessed this level of disdain for a stroker ... until NOW that is!

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Metronome: 30 BPM. Strokes: Don't count them.

You're just going to read and stroke your dick—because THAT is what I require from you right now ...

You know Fatts once spent over 20 hours working on a tease for Noah—a tease which flopped and did NOT turn out well ... ANOTHER ONE featuring me ... Do you want to know how Noah responded? Well I don't fucking care if YOU want to find out or not, because you are going to read it RIGHT NOW : [Open the spoiler and read while you slow stroke]

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First of all, I should start with telling you how much I appreciated you taking this as seriously as you did and taking the time to create such a challenge. I honestly didn't read that you weren't doing extensive story-based around the time I made a tease for you, so I wasn't being as 'selfish' as Nancy made me feel during the tease Yes, I desired a return tease from you, because I was intrigued by the efforts you seemed to put in it (haven't watched any of your other teases, so this was purely a guess based on your meticulous blocks of texts and your efforts in the forum) and that matches my 'standard' because I also get teases that just do not work for me because of low effort from the maker... Well, that is something I can definitely not say about you... My compliments for how you built it up... I can only compliment you for the incredible writing and matching these to the pictures... I absolutely love how fleshed out Nancy is for you...

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"Now look at YOUR feedback—for Fatts ... just skim it:

This is very painful for me to write, trust me. I was so excited for this set, been visiting milovana like 3 times per hour just to see if the set is posted. But... I didn't enjoy this set all that much. Scenes were way too long, and Nancy, while a very hot model, was unfortunately overused. I understand it, you were trying to build a narrative, and have her explain everything... but, most people, including me, simply don't care for all that stuff

I skimmed over the 2nd section (the one where she was talking to Ecik), and I got kinda bored and quit the set mid-way through the 3rd section. I read over the rest of the set and the 2nd part, and unfortunately... more Nancy, and just a tiny bit of Sonya.

Again, I'm really sorry about all this, but I thought it's better to be honest than anything else. I... really lost interest in all the plot by now, so just don't bother writing the rest of the set. If you're already mostly done, then I guess just post it, but otherwise, please use your efforts for someone else.

Please don't take this in any wrong way, there are likely people around here who are just begging for a set like this... it's just not for me.

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AND for Ecik:

Now, on to the set: Soon, people will call me the biggest complainer ever. I didn't really like that set. A bit too chaotic for me, scenes changing too quickly, then there's the random images I don't really like at all.

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[Resume your stroking and normal rules, which would be normal strokes and metronome except -30 for the scene.]

Notice any differences there? See anything that might be missing?

No, no you don't ... because you're an UNGRATEFUL LITTLE BITCH!




How about a SINGLE compliment—just even ONE!

... but NO ... there was NOTHING!

Not for ME, not for FATTS, and not for ECIK ...




All *I* got was "Nancy is hot ..." Not a WORD about the quality of my dialogue or Fatts' writing ... no comments to Ecik about the quality of the models he used—and Elsa Jean is SUPER hot ... makes me wonder if you're blind or have poor taste—or MAYBE blondes just DISGUST you ... I'm starting to get THAT feeling ... no compliments about Ecik's efforts to craft a fun and interesting story premise ...

Alright, addict, well ... if I'm "so hot" ... [Open the spoiler]

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Then give me fast strokes at 240 BPM for 3 minutes.

You don't seem to appreciate my personality nor the care with which it was crafted ... but I *am* deserving of your worship ...

... so I suppose you'll have to worship the basest part of me—the ONLY part of me that your shallow little brain can perceive—my "hot body" ...

So STROKE AWAY—little stroke slut ... give me the worship strokes I deserve—all 720 of them!

Performed 3 minutes of fast stroking ...

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Nancy snaps her fingers. Reality shifts, and her appearance changes ...

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Scene change. Reset your metronome. Use your normal rules—and of course I'm "still a brunette" ...

Pathetic ... YOU'RE pathetic ...




I HATE you ...

You're getting dominated by a "hot girl." You're stroking your little dicky. It feels SO good ... I'm going ON and ON about how rubbish you are ... and you lack the self respect to leave ...

... you can't help yourself—because you're just HOPING ...




... that I'll do something like THIS! SMOOSH my breasts together—just for you ...

Well go on ... DOUBLE your strokes for me while you pinch your nipples! But NO visible nipples for YOU! YOU don't DESERVE them!

Uma: Do you want to be our "play thing"? An object to be abused for our pleasure?

hentaiAddict12345: Oh my god, yes, yes, and yes!

How am I doing? Is your little dream coming true?




A lot of mistresses refer to their subs as "pet"—but YOU'RE not my "pet."

Pets are something which are loved and admired by their owners, so ... you could NEVER be my pet—because I DESPISE you ...




Some mistresses refer to their subs as "toys"—because they enjoy "playing with" them ...

... but I hate EVERY SECOND that I have to spend with you ...




"Pet" doesn't work. "Toy" doesn't work ... I suppose I could just call you "boy", but ... I think that would be an insult to most of the "boys" that I know ...

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So I think "slave" is the only fitting moniker for you ...

So, slave ... are you enjoying yourself?

DON'T speak. The question was rhetorical ...

Are you sufficiently immersed? Is the story engaging? Is my talking down to you and calling you ALL of the FILTHY NAMES that you DESERVE ... is that all keeping your COCK INTERESTED?

Or is the scene "too long" and I'm being "overused" and you wish you could see a brunette right now?


Well lets see if we can remedy ONE of those things ...

Nancy waves her hand. Reality shifts, and she transforms into a brunette ...

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Metronome: 180 BPM. Do not change the speed until instructed. Strokes: the normal amount.

Since you enjoy brown hair so much, perhaps THIS speed will suffice. Maintain this metronome speed until I command you otherwise—slave ...




I know your shoddy little rules can't handle all of the "chaos" of changing models ...

... but *I* don't see how that is MY problem ...




You strokers come up with some of THE MOST complicated and convoluted rules I have EVER SEEN!! And THEN it falls to us mistresses—the ones who are trying to do you a favor by teasing you—to sort out all of THAT SHIT and make sure YOU are having a good time ...




... when YOU were the one who CRAFTED the shitty rules IN THE FIRST PLACE!




It's not MY job to understand or solve the SIMPLE and BASIC problems inherent in YOUR custom rules—the ones YOU invented ...




So I have to tease you AND come up with ways to modify your asinine rules in order to make them usable?




Learn to play the game—N00B! GET GUD, KID!




Your tease skills are a JOKE … BG Uninstall.




But fine—whatever ... *I* can do that ... I suppose this is why slaves need a mistress ...




... so you're getting a static metronome at a "fast pace" for all of these brunettes you seem to ADORE so much ...




No ... this "costume" feels wrong—it doesn't suit me ...




Malena Morgan is hot, but ...

... her "resting bitch face" doesn't quite capture my essence ...




I actually smile QUITE A LOT ...

... when I'm not forced to take LITTLE BITCHES out on QUESTS with me ...



Next!


Nancy waves her hand and transforms again ...

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[Metronome stays at 180 BPM. Normal amount of strokes.]

I've never changed my appearance like this for a stroker before. I've never had to ... it wasn't necessary ...




Most men are FINE with the way I look ... Fatts could have sets with ONLY blonde me—for a YEAR—and I don't think he would complain ONCE ...




But Fatts is a sophisticated stroker—unlike YOU. He understands there's more to teasing than just the visual ... something you ALSO seem to understand—just not consciously—because you're an IDIOT!




You're SO fucking demanding and WHINY, addict ...




You DEMAND to be told a story ... you get "bored" by videos and "bored" by groups of pictures ...




... but when *I* come along and share my PERSONALITY with you—"NOPE! NOT INTERESTED!"




It's so FUCKING INSULTING ...

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Stop stroking. Turn off your metronome. Start twisting your nipples—BOTH hands. 30 seconds per picture ...

Uma:If you know what you want, ask for it—and we can provide ...

If you're not sure what you want—we'll help you find it ...

addict: Unsure what I really want yet

I would say so ... you're SO fucking stupid ...

Uma: Do you want me to control you—to deny you pleasure? If so, then STOP STROKING ...

addict: I did stop stroking for her

You haven't a CLUE what's going on ... you have NO idea how ANY of this works ... you can't offer a LICK of constructive criticism—ONLY complaints ... and yet your list of demands seems to have no end ...

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STOP squeezing and twisting. Hands OFF. NO touching, metronome OFF ... [Do nothing. Just read until Nancy instructs you otherwise ...]




Dammit ... this one doesn't work for me either ... feels like I'm wearing someone else's underpants ... I'm changing back ... and THEN I am going to explain things to you AS SIMPLY AS I CAN ...


Nancy changes herself and your surroundings again ...

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Without experiencing any sort of physical stimulation, you are able to give Nancy your full attention. She looks into your eyes as she speaks to you. There's no kindness in her voice—but no malice either. You can tell that this is important, so you listen carefully. [Open the spoilers in order, one at a time.]

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The key to a successful tease is immersion. Immersion occurs when you suspend disbelief, engage with the fantasy, and believe that the deception is real. Immersion happens when your imagination “switches on” and doesn’t “switch off”.

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The reason Fatts’ first tease to you scored a billion out of 10—is because you were immersed. He presented a fantasy to you. You accepted it, and you didn’t “come out” of that immersive fantasy world until the tease was over …

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Recall what Noah wrote:

this was purely a guess based on your meticulous blocks of texts and your efforts in the forum and that matches my 'standard' because I also get teases that just do not work for me because of low effort from the maker

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You have a high standard, addict—and that’s okay—because other people do as well …

Fatts wasn’t successful by accident. He put a LOT of effort into crafting that tease. He used characters that he developed that felt 3-dimensional to you—and not 1-dimensional. He coordinated the text to match with the expressions and poses. He chose models that he thought you would enjoy. He followed the “platinum rule” and tried to have them tease you in the way that YOU wanted to be teased …

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Fatts did EVERYTHING that he could to create an immersive experience for you—and it WORKED! “1 billion out of 10” … because THAT is the power and impact of an immersive fantasy … but it is SUCH a difficult thing to achieve … SO many things can “break” that immersion, and one of the most challenging things is that what breaks immersion for one person is NOT the same as what breaks immersion for another … and then, different things are required for each one to ENTER INTO immersion as well …

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Recall Fatts’ signature quote:

We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager.

You have two problems, addict.

The first, is that you have VERY LITTLE idea of what it is that gets you immersed—and ALSO—VERY LITTLE idea of what BREAKS that immersion …

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You’re like a bird that can fly but yet has NO CONCEPTION of the physics behind flight. Instead, you need to become like an aerospace engineer who actually understands flight and knows how to fix planes when they fail to function …

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The second issue is that you refuse to be “complicit in your own deception.”

I don’t think you’re trying hard enough. *I* think you’re just like a tiny baby bird, sitting in your nest, waiting to be fed—squawking for more caviar …

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If you’re playing a tease and the immersion breaks—do you know what you do?

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You get back on the fucking horse and start riding again ...

You don't lay in the dirt and cry like a little BITCH!


Nancy waves her hand again and turns into yet another brunette ...

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Metronome: 120 BPM. Strokes: the normal amount. [Don't change metronome speed unless instructed.]

FUCK I hate trying to keep up with your demanding preferences ...




"Too much Nancy!" "I don't like blondes!" "Why does she keep talking about her feelings?" "Is this a book I'm reading—or a porn tease?"




FUCK YOU, addict ...




"I want to be teased by complicated characters in STORY teases—but I can't be BOTHERED to learn ANYTHING about them OR the rich worlds they inhabit ..."




YOU don't fucking DESERVE me ... FUCK!

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Metronome up to 210 BPM. Watching you stroke that slow just PISSES ME OFF MORE ...




If I didn't need your help to unspring my boyfriend from whatever lame ass trap you caught him in—we wouldn't even be HAVING this conversation!




Don't you think I have better things to do than give wank instructions to ungrateful LOSERS like YOU!




But my existence sort of depends on Fatts. You would know that if you've been paying attention—not that you have ... you just tune out "hot girls" the minute they become "boring" ...




So when my boyfriend suddenly disappears, it's kind of important that I go looking for him and bring him back … because if Fatts disappears for too long—*I* disappear, too …




I would prefer to take a "pet" with me on the journey—or even a "toy" ...

... but INSTEAD all I have to work with is a "slave" ...




Well, no matter. You'll do. All I need to get the job done is a horny dick and a half-way imaginative mind that is at least somewhat immersed and committed to the plot ...

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No touching, slave—HANDS OFF! [Metronome off]

Rejects like YOU don't get to stroke for views THIS good, and NO ... I will NOT allow you to touch your nipples ... PUT YOUR HANDS BEHIND YOUR HEAD!

You stare at Nancy's pussy. It's wet. Some combination of the anger, hatred, and talking down to you has excited her.

Now, count backwards from 30 to zero—OUT LOUD—WITHOUT touching ...


Finished counting backwards to zero ...

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I fucking HATE this form ... It looks good on Naomi Swann—just not ME ...




I'm changing back. We need to talk business now and further the plot—LITERALLY ...


Reality shifts once again, and you are back in your living room with blonde Nancy and all of her humming equipment ...

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["New scene." Normal rules.]

You want a STORY TEASE, addict?

Well, a good story needs plot …




What’s that? Plot is “boring?” You would rather just stroke to me while I dominate and humiliate you some more?




Sorry, compadre! A BAD story with plot holes can break immersion, and we BOTH know how fragile your TINY little imagination is … I can’t RISK having a shitty plot with the likes of YOU playing this tease … PLUS—I *am* rather committed to it—I mean I DID break the glass because this was an “emergency” …




So where do you put the plot when it’s SEXUALLY BORING but VERY NECESSARY? Why, you put it at the beginning while the player is still “warming up” AND during breaks in the action—which we are having right now …




Now, someone with a POWERFUL imagination—like brian or Noah—who DOESN’T have a short attention span—like you—can play a VERY LONG conversational scene and LOVE IT—like the one *I* gifted to you …




But your appetite is bigger than what your stomach can handle, so I have to explain these things to you in manageable chunks—baby bird …

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But I'm done trying to cater to your whims—mostly …

So turn off your metronome and just read this next text section and stroke along and TRY to stay immersed and NOT lose your erection, but ... IF you do ...

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... I'm sure we can find it again—slave.


[Story section. No rules. Free stroke.]

As a fantasy entity, people from your world fuel me and serve as my “hosts.” As such, I’m able to connect with most of the people who think about me to a certain extent—but Fatts most of all since he created me. Additionally, if you have any sort of reasonable mnemonic retention, you’ll recall from the tease that I “chipped my boyfriend”:

Did you know that I had a microscopic subdermal implant installed on Fatts’ forehead so I can see things POV? I mostly use it to watch the tape from our fucking sessions so that I can improve on my technique later … but it comes in handy for stuff like this too!




Why are you giving me that look? Do you think that it’s wrong that I chipped my boyfriend like a prized show dog? What you call “possessive” I call “caring.”

Maybe you remembered the detail because the joke was funny, or maybe you were distracted from looking at my pussy and forgot, or maybe you were just too bored and didn’t pay attention … whatever. The point is, I felt Fatts “disappear,” and when I tried to locate him with the tracking device—that didn’t work either. Fatts is not on this plane of existence, which leads me to believe he is somewhere else—on a different one—in some alternate reality.

Are you familiar with black holes? Most people aren’t—so I’ll assume that you are not.

Black holes are generally VERY massive bodies which are EXTREMELY compact—so much so—that they basically constitute a rip in space-time. The extreme tidal (gravitational) forces which exist around black holes basically destroy all matter which falls onto them. However, while the matter is torn apart and destroyed—unable to ever be reconstituted—SOME scientists believe that the INFORMATION which enters the black hole (such as the position and make-up of the matter as it was falling in) is NOT lost. Some hypothesize that it MIGHT be possible to extract any and all information “stored” in a black hole. And some scientists go even further. They say that we are living inside of a black hole, that our universe just exists not as the matter and energy that we perceive, but rather, we’re some sort of 3 dimensional projection onto some multi-dimensional surface which exists inside of some MASSIVE black hole … like a light shining on your hand casts a shadow on the wall, our whole universe is some sort of 3D shadow being cast on the inner surface of a giant black hole … this theory is sort of compatible with the theory of the multiverse and COULD explain what happens when universes collide or if you can have one universe inside of another universe … and this “projection theory” is interesting, because …

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OH-KAY … THAT was a “boner killer”—I’ll admit—UNLESS you are into “smart chicks”, which … Fatts actually is …


Helequin once wrote a funny “the thread can’t do math” everyone set, which included the following scene:

There’s only one girl in the first room, seems safer than anywhere else. She looks up. “Oh hey! Enjoy the view stroker and tell me, what’s larger f/2.8 or f/11?"




“Wow that’s amazing,” she says more to her camera than you.




“Right! The answer is f/2.8 of course. Hey you walked into the studio, camera related questions are totally fair. Now you can either let me edge your brains out while I make sure you understand every last nuance of the math behind aperture values running into depth of field calculations...”




“Or you can keep going on your studio tour!” She giggles softly as you move on.

Fatts was actually SAD that Helequin didn’t include the option of staying … He would have LOVED to have edged to that chick while she was spewing a bunch of technical jargon that he didn’t understand, but … THAT is probably a RARE fetish for men …

Heeerre … stroke to my pretty pussy some more … I’m a “hot girl”—right? I’m SURE you would like that … we REALLY need that erection to NOT disappear ...

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For pacing’s sake, I put all of this dense “story stuff” in between the “action scenes”—to help “give you a break.” But I STILL need you HARD, but we simply MUST get through this story, so, back to the story—AND THEN there will be more stroking after—I *promise* …

You’re new to the thread and unfamiliar with the power that you tease writers possess when it comes to creating fantasy environments. WHATEVER IT WAS that you did MUST have been PRETTY POWERFUL! You must have created a whole other “pocket universe” that Fatts entered—and now he can’t get out … and his connection to YOUR TEASE has been corrupting the digital data—so I can’t read it, BUT … while I was teasing you—yes, I can multi-task —I was able to locate the pocket universe Fatts is trapped in, and I made a VERY faint—but brief—connection to him … it was like hearing a tiny distress call in a sea of static …

Anyway, I am CONFIDENT we will be able to penetrate the barrier and tunnel into the pocket universe, but … we are going to need more energy …

… and THAT is where YOU COME IN!

Yes, yes … this IS a porn tease, and so OF COURSE the answer to EVERY problem is “STROKE FOR ME MORE PLEASE, BIG BOY! ”

But THIS time it’s different … THIS tease is DIFFERENT from the rest, because **I’ve** grounded the need for more stroking inside of solid SCIENTIFIC rationalizations! The stroking you will be doing for me to power up my machinery is therefore WAY MORE valid, important, and plot-affirming than ANY other ill-conceived, half-hearted attempts at a justification for more stroking than you have seen in the past from other “lesser” teases …

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“Don’t argue addict … just nod along and agree with me and let me have this one …” whispers Nancy …

Now, Fatts Dynamo—as his name would suggest—IS, in fact, my PRIMARY energy source, but … since YOU have SEPARATED HIM FROM ME —using GOD ONLY KNOWS what … I will have to make do with you … a smaller, more humble, less imaginative, more inattentive, and easily distracted power source … and since YOU are the one who created this little pocket universe that Fatts is trapped in, your energy matches the vibrational energy of the pocket universe, so … I won’t have to worry about desyncing issues once we are inside, so … really … I couldn’t even use anybody else EVEN IF I WANTED TO—WHICH I DO …

So YOU shall be my “hentai dynamo” …

I rather like the sound of that … makes me think of a little Japanese man with his leg chained to a desk, being forced to doodle naughty cartoons all day in some abandoned warehouse just outside of Tokyo …

So, I NEED your energy, addict … I NEED to excite you sexually to power my equipment so that we can save Fatts … and once we get inside of the pocket universe, you’ll have to keep erect and pumping and not stop or else the connection will be severed … Once we get to that part, I’ll explain it further, but … basically, it will SORT OF be like “Inception”—but there is only ONE layer … and yes, we’ll be able to “enter the tease” that you wrote Fatts and will have to find him inside, but … ONE THING AT A TIME!

[If you need or want a short break, THIS is the spot for it. This next section is LONG and continuous, and you won’t have a chance to stop. ]

Part 2:

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[New scene. Start again with your normal rules.]

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But the thing is, I’m getting tired of teasing you, addict … and I am SURE that you are tired of seeing my “hot face” …




… so we’ll just bring in “Generic Caprice” to tease you and charge up my devices the rest of the way …




The only thing I hate more than you, addict, is rewarding failure.

I offer myself to you. You reject me and spit in my face, and then—through GROSS incompetence—you create a Category IV CATASTROPHE that results in you getting your dicky pleasured while you look at pretty girls … it fucking MAKES ME SICK—you asswipe …

Squeeze BOTH your nipples HARD. 1 minute. I need you aroused to power my machine, but … a little pain before we get started won’t slow us down too much …

… or perhaps that will just accelerate the process!




Caprice is one of the the most popular models on this site. She's been included in HUNDREDS of teases, and her image can be found tens of thousands of times ...

I *could* summon forth one of the more developed and multi-dimensional versions of "Caprice" to titillate and arouse you—but I will not.




You don’t appreciate deep, character-driven dialogue as you should, so … a well-developed version of "Caprice" would be wasted on you …




… and so YOU will have to settle with getting teased by a generic, 2-dimensional "Caprice"—one of the hundreds of versions of her which can be found wandering about the many pages and teases of Milovana ...




Then maybe you can leave in the feedback if you liked her or ME better …

HER that you had NO connection with …




... versus ME who is fleshed out—and who HATES YOU—and is connected to the plot …

Girls like ME require EFFORT to create ...




Girls like "Generic Caprice" are a dime a dozen ... Forgettable ... unsophisticated, but ...

... maybe you're just a simpleton who can't recognize quality—even when it's staring you in the face ...

Nipples. Again. Hard. PINCH—and BOTH OF THEM ... 60 seconds ... Turn off your metronome. Set your countdown timer ... [Open all spoilers before starting the timer.]

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And I don't want to hear ANYTHING from you. NOTHING ... no apologizing. No audible whimpering ... I just want you to stare into MY eyes and know that *I* am the one who is in control ... YOU are TRASH ... You're a FUCK UP, and you DON'T deserve me, and in your HEART ...

... you know this is ALL true ...

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So SUFFER for me—slave! HURT yourself, and hurt yourself GOOD! I want to see the PAIN in your eyes ... feel your inferiority as you stare into the eyes of a superior being ...

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... and if your eyes break contact with mine—you will start your countdown timer AGAIN—and pinch your nipples EVEN HARDER!

Pinched BOTH of my nipples for 60 seconds while staring into Nancy's eyes ...

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Good, slave ... but we're not done ...

You're not WORTHY to look me in the eyes while you receive pleasure. That might imply that we are "equals"—which we are not.

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No, slave ... you're just a pathetic DOG with unrefined tastes, but ... THAT'S okay! I'm a "hot girl"—remember!? The only thing *I* need from you is sexual arousal, and to extract THAT does NOT require me giving you my respect—NOR does it mean that YOU have to recognize MY superior qualities ... which CLEARLY, as a dog, you are INCAPABLE of doing ... So, I will give you a "treat", doggy ... Would you like that!?

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Stare ANYWHERE at my body—ANYWHERE that pleases you and gives you pleasure ... and while you do so, stroke SLOWLY ...

As you stroke, flick your nipples. Alternate. Flick them 100 times. 50 times each. Count your flicks out loud ... and if you DARE to look into my eyes during this exercise ...

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... we'll start again from the beginning. Now GO. FLICK, slave! Hurt yourself for me while you pleasure yourself like the PATHETIC little dog that you are ...

Completed 100 nipple flicks while slow stroking without making eye contact with Nancy ...

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Stop. Look at me ...

I suppose now you'll complain that the dialogue and instructions were too long, and you'll write that you got bored from just staring at a single picture for five minutes ...

Nancy goes silent. From your position away from her across the room, you can feel the psychic anger welling up within her. Her eyes turn white with rage. You have become the focus of her hatred ...

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FUCK YOU, ADDICT!!

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Nancy's scream makes the walls shake. The lights flicker. She's breathing hard—attempting to control her emotions. She continues to stare you down with a look of pure revulsion ...

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An eternity seems to pass, but eventually, Nancy's eyes stop glowing. Her breathing settles ...

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You're not worth getting angry over , and after we complete this mission, I'll NEVER have to see you ever again ...

Well, at least I don't have to tease you the rest of the way ...


"Alright, Caprice! Come on in! We're READY for you! "

With a "FFffffpp!", another of Nancy's green portals appears ...

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... and out steps Caprice ...

[New scene. Start again with your normal rules.]

Hi, stroker! I have been so looking forward to teasing you!




Does the sight of my panties turn you on?




I can see that you are eager to get started ... You have already started warming up—haven't you?




Do you like it when I take off my skirt? I'd bet you'd like me to take off MORE clothes, huh?




Nancy shouts from across the room.

Nancy: You're being TOO NICE, Caprice! This stroker is defective ... He requires a firm hand, and he LIKES being talked down to ...

Caprice: Oh ... I BET you just WISH you could have a piece of THIS!

Nancy: That's more like it ...




You don't deserve me ... and so I will tease you with what you can't have ...




I would just LOVE a man to come over here and FUCK me ... problem is, I don't see any around—there's only YOU ...




Wanna lick my cunt? I BET you would—but you're not allowed ...




What would you do to please me—beta boi?




Caprice: I'd make you get down on your knees to serve me ...

Nancy: Sorry, addict ... This "Generic Caprice" is just going through the motions ... She's not actually aware enough to fully comprehend who she's teasing and tailor her dialogue to the recipient ... but this sort of thing is common for poorly developed mistresses ...




I bet you'd LOVE to thrust your cock down my throat in this position ...




You want to watch me get off? I bet you do—dirty boy ...




But we have to go slow, and you have to do what I say ...




Caprice: ... but first I have to take this bra off ...

Caprice: Do you like my cute little titties—stroke slut? If "yes," then DOUBLE your strokes for me for this pic. If "no", then smack your balls 10 times hard pinch both of your nipples HARD for 30 seconds ...

Nancy: You're welcome for the modification—addict ... Are you now beginning to realize my value and what I bring to sessions?




OH! I want a NICE big cock to go DEEP into my pussy—just not YOURS, haha ...




You're not allowed to fuck me ... YOU are only allowed to watch ...




[Same metronome speed for this pic as last.]

MMmmmm ...

Nancy kisses her vibrator.

I think "Caprice" has the right idea here ... I think I will join her, but ... let's make this scene a little more interesting ...


"FFffffpp!" Another of Nancy's green portals appears in your living room ...

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... and out steps ANOTHER Caprice ...

[New scene. Reset the metronome and start again with your normal rules. If Nancy randomly appears for a picture or two, just continue using the previous metronome speed and resume things normally for the primary model when she returns.]

Hi, stroker! Do you want to play?




[Leave the metronome alone for this pic.]

Yes, Caprice! YES he does ... in fact ...

... tease him—AND me ... but tease HIM more ... I need him worked up REALLY good ... so tease us BOTH, but focus on HIM ...




Caprice: Yes, mistress ... I will comply ...

Caprice's eyes momentarily flash as if a new program was just initiated within her mind.

Nancy: Good girl ... as you can see—addict ... I have NO issues mixing "business" with "pleasure" ... Generic Caprice 2 will do a GREAT job teasing you ... and *I* just get to "enjoy the ride" ... "fringe benefits" of being fully self-aware ...




Caprice: Are you a "tits man?" You seem like one, so ... DOUBLE your strokes for me, but ONLY look me in the eyes while you touch your cock, haha ... you're not ALLOWED to look at my perky titties! And if you DO peak, then for each time you do, you have to hit yourself in the balls REALLY HARD!

You hear Nancy's groans over the sound of her vibrator.

Nancy: Sorry, addict ... I was busy—so I missed that one ...




Haha ... I like playing with you ...

You look so cute and desperate—stroking your cock for me ...




Do you like my ass? No? Not really? Well, I don't care ... give it the worship strokes it deserves anyway ...




Watching you play with yourself is making me wet ...




Pussy reveal! Speed up your stroking!




Caprice: Watching YOU stroke—I can't help myself ... it's just SO hot ...

Caprice: ... I have to join in too ...

Nancy: YEAH! Fuck yeah Caprice! TOUCH YOURSELF! RUB THAT PUSSY FOR US! I want YOU to enjoy yourself, too!




Do you like it when I spread myself for you? Imagine burying your face in this ...




Pinch your nipples while I fondle my breasts—and double your strokes as well ...

I know you like that, and I want YOU to feel good, too ...

Nancy obeys Caprice and starts pinching her nipples as well.




Caprice: *I* know a pose that makes the boys go crazy ...

Nancy: Does it make the GIRLS go crazy TOO!?!

Caprice: Yes ...




Caprice: It's the view of BOTH my holes—but STOP TOUCHING, addict! Twist BOTH of your nipples for 1 minute instead ...

You hear Nancy turn up the speed on her vibrator.

Nancy: Haha—fucker! Looks like ONLY ONE OF US gets to receive pleasure right now ... unless squeezing your tits feels good to you!




Caprice spreads herself for you.

Caprice: Okay ... now do ALL of your strokes, but ONLY do them at 60 bpm ... a view THIS good isn't something a DESPERATE little boy should enjoy TOO much ...

Nancy: You got THAT right, Caprice! A shithead like this shouldn't be stroking AT ALL, but ... FUCK—sometimes life just isn't fair ...




Caprice: I think I should join you ...

Nancy: About fucking TIME ... I've been WAITING for you to start vibing yourself since the moment you walked in ...




Caprice begins pleasuring herself.

You now hear the sounds of TWO vibrators. Caprice 2 ...




[Leave your metronome alone for this pic and the next ...]

... and Nancy ...




... and Caprice 1 is still going at it with her dildo ...




Nancy: This isn't enough ... we're building up the energy stores, but ... we are still SO FAR from what we need ...

... time to ramp it up again ...

"FFffffpp!" Another of Nancy's green portals appears in your living room ...

[FattsDynamo]

Part 2 (continued):

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... and out steps YET ANOTHER Caprice ...

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[New scene. Reset the metronome and start again with your normal rules. This pic DOES NOT COUNT as the "pussy reveal". ]

Nancy: Caprice! GET YOUR ASS IN HERE AND TEASE ADDICT RIGHT THE FUCK NOW!

Caprice: Bitch ... I don't take orders from you ... and I especially don't take orders from pathetic slave boys like HIM ...

Nancy: OOoooo! I *LIKE* this one! She's SPUNKY!




Caprice: ... but you can DROOL over my ass—because it pleases me ... I'll allow it ...

Nancy: AH-DICT ... Turn your metronome down by 30! Caprice 3 is overly dominant—and it's turning you on too much! We're going to have to play the LONG GAME here, and ... slowing down your stroking JUST MIGHT start to raise your arousal to the sorts of levels that we need ...




You want to see my pussy? No, not yet ...

... you haven't suffered enough—slave ...




Caprice: Subs like you are MINE to toy with—and so you will obey ME and do WHATEVER I say!

Caprice looks first at you, and then glances over at Nancy.


Nancy: Bitch ...

Nancy snaps her fingers ...

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... and Caprice freezes in place.

Nancy: Generic "mistresses" like HER haven't a CLUE ...

What's your Third Element leveled up to—honey?

Nancy waves her hand, and some bright blue glowing symbols appear just above Caprice's head. You cannot identify them. They look like some sort of machine language. They flicker and change.

Nancy: Just as I thought; you're basic.

Nancy waves her hand again, and the symbols fade and disappear.

Nancy: She's just BARELY 2-dimensional ... Her personality is "dominant" and she's developed just enough to recognize me as a "threat" and "be a little jealous", but ... her creator never bothered to give her any motivation or purpose ... she ONLY wants to assert herself and "feel superior" while she teases us ... she's JUST another "pretty face" ...


Nancy waves her hand. Ethereal green tendrils radiate out from it. They surround Caprice 3 in a green, energetic glow, and with a flick of her wrist, Nancy turns Caprice 3 to face both of you.

Nancy: But *I* can make good use of a "pretty face" ...

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Stroke FAST for me—BITCH! [180 BPM for 2 minutes.]

It's fine ... She can't perceive us, and she won't remember this ...

The way YOU feel superior to an ANT, well ... THAT is the way in which *I* feel superior to HER ... [Open the next spoiler.]

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But I don't burn ants with magnifying glasses like SOME of you humans do ... "Generic Caprice 3" is STILL a tease girl—the same AND different as me ... and while I don't BURN ants—OR tease girls —I don't mind playing with the lesser ones like this ... and PLUS she had it coming —for DISRESPECTING ME! [Open the next spoiler after 1 minute of fast stroking ...]

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YEAH, addict! I'm controlling her AND you! ... but while controlling her *is* cathartic after her insult ...

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It's NOTHING compared to the power trip of dominating a REAL BOY—like YOU!
The control you WILLINGING give up to me is INTOXICATING—SLAVE!

Finished fast stroking for Caprice ...

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Nancy waves her hand, dismissing the energy and restoring the flow of time. "Caprice 3" goes back to her routine as if nothing happened.

Caprice: You're SO pathetic—the control I have over you ...

Nancy: She's not wrong, addict!




Caprice: THIS pussy is FAR too good for you ...

Nancy: Back your metronome down another 30 BPM, addict ... I want you FRUSTRATED!




Caprice: ... but you can watch ME touch it and ACHE ... ACHE for me, addict!

Nancy: YEEeeeesss ... THIS is what I wanted ... THIS is what I wanted to see! ...

... I could just TELL as she was approaching my portal that THIS ONE was VERY horny ...




Caprice rubs circles around her clit with medium pressure, not going too fast or too slow.

Nancy: She's not in a hurry—AND NEITHER SHOULD YOU BE! 30 bpm for THIS PICTURE ONLY ...




Caprice: ACHE for me—FUCKER ... TEASE yourself ... you're NOT ALLOWED to go FAST ... this isn't ABOUT your pleasure—but MINE ...

Caprice goes even slower. Her fingers play with her clit and pussy lips. She's teasing you with them.

Nancy: She's right, addict. Generic Caprice 3 may not know a lot, but ... she DOES understand the proper place of a SLAVE! 30 bpm AGAIN for this pic ...




Should I let you cum?

No—I don't think so ... I think I'll DENY you at the end of this session—it's what you DESERVE ...




... but YOU can watch ME cum ... RIGHT NOW!

Caprice rubs herself aggressively for a while.




You're so POWERLESS, stroker ...




... at my mercy—awaiting my next command ...




... and you'll do ANYTHING I say ... because you just LOVE being controlled and ABUSED by pretty girls like ME ...

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Hands OFF—NO touching ... put your hands behind your back ...

... turn off that metronome and ACHE for me, slut!

Turn on a stopwatch. You will do NOTHING but STARE at my GORGEOUS PUSSY and WISH that you were allowed to touch yourself ...

How long is enough? When you think you've denied yourself sufficiently, open the following spoiler to find out if enough time has passed ... You will be either punished OR rewarded based on your patience ...

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3 minutes 17 seconds. If you waited for LESS TIME than this—you will be PUNISHED ...

If you waited for 3 minutes and 17 seconds or MORE ... THEN you will be rewarded ... [Open next spoiler.]

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[Still no touching or metronome.]

You're going to watch me pleasure myself—SLAVE!




The sounds of Nancy's and Caprice 2's vibrators reverberate throughout the room.





All the girls are softly moaning—including Caprice 1 who is still dildoing herself.




It's no wonder Caprice 3 is feeling so horny and wants to join in the action.

If you were GOOD and PATIENT—then you may join me and stroke as FAST and as HARD as you wish ...

... but if you were BAD and couldn't wait—then you will suffer MORE! NO TOUCHING FOR YOU WHILE I RUB MYSELF AND CUM!! [More instructions below.]


[Watch the following video till the end. Start it at 2:00. Follow the instructions Caprice gave you. ("No touching" for failure. "Fast free stroking" for success.]

https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php? ... 1718541822



After the video ...

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Caprice 3 and the other girls all continue masturbating in your living room. They now seem more focused on themselves than they do you.

Nancy: Let's bring in another ...

"FFffffpp!"

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Another green portal materializes, and another Generic Caprice steps out ...

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[Another "new scene." Reset your metronome and begin again with your normal rules.]

Hi.




I like the way you stroke your cock for me.




Nancy: WOW … THIS ONE has EVEN LESS personality than the LAST ONE! Less THAN ALL OF THEM COMBINED!

I *KNOW* that is funny math that doesn’t add up, haha … but THIS SHIT, addict … ahahahaha THIS SHIT is FUNNY as FUCK!




Caprice: Do you want to play a game with me?

Nancy: No, sweetie—that’s alright … we really aren’t into games, but … would you mind putting on a “show” for us—pretty please!?




Caprice 4 flips over onto her belly and assumes an “ass up” position.

Nancy: Holy FUCK, girl! You’re KILLING it!




Caprice flips over onto her back and flashes her pussy.




She then gets on her knees and plays with her skirt.

Nancy: DAMN, Caprice 4! You may not have much going on upstairs, but … FUCK if you don’t make up for it with the POSES!




Nancy: Those doe-eyed blank looks are making me SO WET right now …




Nancy: Guuurrrrll … you just DON’T QUIT—DO you!?!?




Nancy: Okay … THAT is the one … you just hold that pose RIGHT THERE, Caprice 4!

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Nancy: ADDICT! WORSHIP STROKES! FAST! NOW … 180 BPM for 90 seconds … [Use a timer.]

Generic Caprice 4 is going to hold that pose for as long as I want … and baby …

… I WANT! [Open the next spoiler after 1 minute of stroking.]

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PRETTY AS A PICTURE! I think I might just cum every time I look in her general direction!

Nancy: … speaking of which …

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240 BPM. 1 minute of stroking ...

*I* am the "Boss Bitch" around here ... These "Generics" may look good—and they REALLY DO —but they are only semi-sentient and don't have much going on between their ears ...

Don't forget the mission, and don't forget that *I* am the primary—the lead—the super—the "number 1" ... *I* am the one who is in charge here ... [Spoilers (like the following) which don't have instructions can be immediately opened.]

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... and you do as *I* say ... SLAVE!

Get HARDER! Get AROUSED! I need you at PEAK horniness and immersion in order to finish filling up the energy stores ...

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... you're nothing but a metal can of petroleum to me ...

After 1 minute of fast stroking ...

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Now SLOW! 40 bpm for TWO whole minutes!

You think arousal is all about going fast!? You know nothing ...

"Tease and Denial" is all a mental game: you give and take—give and take ... [Open the next spoiler after 1 minute of stroking.]

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I show you what you want—but you can't have it ...

You want to stroke FAST!? No. I deny you what you want ... and that JUST makes you want it even more ... until ...

I give you what you want!? What you desire!?

HELL NO, ADDICT ... and FUCK YOU! You're a DICK!

Go EVEN SLOWER! 20 bpm for 1 minute of stroking. [Open the spoiler.]

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I have Caprices which can finish the job of collecting your horny joules ... and if you had forgotten that "joule" is a unit of energy—then go ahead and lower your BPM down to 15!

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Nancy is highly aroused. You see a drop from her pussy fall down and land on her wrist as she is teasing you.

Oh, FUCK IT! Go FASTER—I'm getting CLOSE ...

180 BPM for 30 seconds ...




Nancy breathes hard. Her next orgasm is near.

We're psychically linked—you and I ... I'm a fantasy whose currently occupying your mental space ... I'm on your screen—I'm on the servers ... but I'm ALSO in your head ... and I can feel your arousal like an earthquake shaking the walls of a house ...

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... and I *want* that energy. I can feel how *powerful* it is—and it's right there ...

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210 BPM. Stroke for 1 minute. GIVE IT TO ME, ADDICT! GIVE ME YOUR AROUSAL! I WANT TO CUM!

Finished fast stroking for 1 min ...

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[210 bpm. Normal number of strokes.]

Nancy orgasms silently. You can tell by the expression on her face that it's hitting her hard. Her mouth is open. She's enjoying it.




KEEP GOING! DON'T STOP! FASTER! [Metronome to 240 bpm. Normal number of strokes.]

Nancy flips back over onto her stomach, raising her ass high up in the air. She cums again. This time, she moans loudly as she orgasms.




Nancy flicks her wrist, and your metronome drops down to 60 BPM on it's own. [Normal number of strokes. Keep metronome at 60 until told otherwise.]

MMmmmm ... look at this satisfied pussy, addict ... she came SO GOOD just now ... and it was ALL thanks to—




—Caprice! Seeing FOUR them—all hot and bothered ...




... I'm joking—OBVIOUSLY ... it was MOSTLY thanks to YOU—toy ...

Nancy kisses her vibrator.

... and I was speaking to the vibrator just now—and NOT you ... YOU still disgust me ...

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... but thank you, addict ... that was nice ...

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...for a fuck-up slave—like you!

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... but the machine is still not ready ... we have some more masturbating to do ...

"FFffffpp!"

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Yet another green portal appears, and yet another Generic Caprice steps out ...

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[Another "new scene." Reset your metronome and begin again with your normal rules.]

Hi, addict. Do you want to have some fun?




I've been waiting all day to tease a horny cock ...




Caprice: Yours is nice. I think it will do.

Nancy: Is there any way we can speed this along, Generic Caprice 5? Your stroker here has places to be and things to do ...




Caprice: Does your cock get harder when I show you my breasts?

Nancy: Great ... she doesn't perceive me ... I think this one's on autopilot ...




If I squeeze them tight—does that make you do anything special?




Caprice: Oh, good! It does! I like that ...

Nancy: Good ... you're taking your bra off ... is there ANY WAY you could go a little faster?

Caprice: Will anything special happen if I remove my bra!?




Caprice: Not yet!

Nancy: Oh, for fuck's sake ...

Caprice: I think I need to tease you a little bit more first ...




NOW it's off ... but you can't see them—yet!

Maybe if you stroke for me some more ...




Okay, you've been good ... I'll show them to you again ... HERE THEY ARE!




Nancy: GOOD! Pants off—shoes off ... NOW we're making progress ... but can we just skip to the part where you are naked? I have some plans for you that don't involve clothes ...




See anything that you like, addict? If so, DOUBLE YOUR STROKES for me!




Caprice: I could tease you ALL DAY, addict ...

Nancy: See—about that ... We DON'T have all day, and—




Caprice: PUSSY REVEAL!

Nancy: Well, FUCK ... I was going to scold you for being rude and cutting me off, but ... yeah ... okay ... I'm a sucker for a good pussy reveal. Well done, Caprice 5!




Caprice: And NOW that I'm naked, let me tell you what you're going to do for me before I let you see my pussy AGAIN!

Nancy: Alright, let me stop you right there—Caprice 5 ... I've been patient, and WE DON'T HAVE TIME FOR THAT ...




Nancy snaps her fingers and a pulse emanates outward from the snap. Generic Caprice 5 freezes in place. Nancy waves her hand, and time speeds up for Caprice 5. It looks as if she is being "fast fowarded." Her movements are swift. It looks like Nancy is skipping a lot of dialogue.




Caprice continues moving quickly through her spiel.

Nancy: She's a cute one, and CLEARLY her creator had some interesting games in mind for her to play with strokers ... BUT ... we SIMPLY don't have the time ...

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Caprice turns around and bends over.

Nancy: And THERE IT IS! THAT is what I was waiting for!

HANDS OFF, ADDICT ... NO TOUCHING!

Nancy snaps her fingers again, and Caprice freezes in place.

Nancy: We have to set the scene just right in order to maximize the horny aesthetic ... and what THIS room needed ... was another purdy ass—RIGHT THERE!

Just look and ADMIRE it, addict. 1 minute ought to be enough time ... and put your hands behind your head again! I DON'T TRUST YOU! You're looking "too frisky" right now ... [After 30 sec, you can open the spoiler.]

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You need more appreciation for the artistry that goes into crafting these sorts of experiences, addict ... Not EVERY mistress has the finesse that *I* do to tease boys at a HIGH level ...

Nancy turns on her vibe and starts masturbating again.

You're lucky you have ME —an EXPERT mistress —to guide you on this masturbatory journey ...

1 minute of "no touching" is up ...

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Nancy: Okay ... I think we need ONE MORE ...

"FFffffpp!"

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Another green portal appears.

Nancy: SIX Caprices! That's 500% MORE than what Fatts originally had planned!

Generic Caprice 6 steps into the room ...

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Caprice: Hi, Stroker! Do you want to play with me? Will you be my toy?

Nancy: Awww, look addict! Generic Caprice 6 is SO CUTE! She’s just a wittle bey-bey ...




Caprice: You will!? That's SO great ...

Nancy: She must have JUST turned 18 before this photo set … and the Pornpics gallery is calling her “Lola” …




Caprice: A good toy is obedient—so you have to do what I say!

Nancy: CAPRICE 6 IS ADORABLE!!! Getting all "firm" with you. Is it making your cock firm—addict?

... but I just CANNOT take her SERIOUSLY!




Caprice: Good boy! Now stroke it FAST for me! 150 BPM for this pic ...




Nancy: This is BLOWING MY MIND! This "Lola" was little Caprice BEFORE she was “little Caprice” … It's like we've taken a time machine back to an earlier time in porn history ...

Caprice: Okay, now ... Go SLOW, toy! 60 BPM ... I don't want you getting too excited yet ...




Will you break if I take my top off, toy!?




Caprice: Here it goes! You better hold your cum back!

Nancy:




Now there's only ONE piece of clothing to go before I am COMPLETELY naked ... Does that make you excited, toy?




Now you have to promise NOT to pop when I take off my panties, toy ... because if you cum, then we'll have to stop playing together ...

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Caprice: ... and I know *I* for one don't want that!

Nancy: Oh, addict ... stop ... STOP! JUST STOP STROKING ...

Turn off your metronome ... just stare at each picture for 20 seconds and DON'T TOUCH ...




Caprice: Are you excited to see my pussy!? Watch out! My panties will soon be cumming down ...

Nancy: This … THIS is the “calm before the storm” … sweet little INNOCENT Caprice 6 is going to tease you for a while …




Nancy: ... we are going to build up MASSIVE levels of arousal ...

Caprice: How do you like my cute little bum? What would you DO to it?

You hear Nancy moan from across the room. That last line did it. Little Caprice 6's teasing has made Nancy cum.




Caprice: Oh ... that's pretty naughty ... Are you sure?

Nancy: [weakly] ... yes ... yes I am sure ...

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[Just read this next part. No need to wait 20 seconds per pic ...]

It's finally time, addict ... Time for the CLIMAX!




Well … NOT for you … YOU don’t do that, but … we’re approaching the “climax of the scene.”




You’re going to feel the weight of SIX Generic Caprices teasing you—PLUS me … and you’ll be getting “500% more Caprice” than what Fatts originally planned … that would be SIX TIMES the original number of Caprices … and it is going to be fucking WILD!




It's going to be a bit chaotic, so ... YOU just stroke and HANG ON TO YOUR COCK FOR DEAR LIFE!




I'll be directing the Caprices to tease you and calling out metronome speeds and number of strokes per pic ... so suspend your normal rules and just do what I say.

Remember, the POINT of ALL OF THIS is to finish filling up the power reserves with YOUR sexual energy. We're almost there—and so THIS little "final run" should take us there ...




I'll be joining you—of course ...

A six Caprice orgy *has* never happened before and WILL never happen again ... It's a one-off, addict—a "black swan" event ... We're making history today ...

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It’s a fucking ORGY OF CAPRICE—ADDICT!:w00t:

DON’T WORRY ABOUT YOUR FUCKING RULES! JUST DO WHAT I TELL YOU TO DO, SLAVE!

The ONLY THING you are good at is WANKING TO PRETTY GIRLS …

So BEAT YOUR FUCKING MEAT AND OBEY MY INSTRUCTIONS!

I *NEED* my POWER SUPPLY to GET CHARGED UP!

So BE my fucking DYNAMO and GIVE YOURSELF OVER TO AROUSAL—SLUT!

... so are you ready?


Then let's BEGIN!

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Power surge. The lights in the room brighten. Nancy's equipment and devices which were humming quietly now roar to life. There is electricity in the room. All of the Caprices perk up. You feel a growing sexual tension and an upwelling of arousal. The sexual energy heightens, but at the same time, you can feel Nancy's devices pulling your collective libido out of the air. They are hungry for horniness, and YOU will feed them ...

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Metronome: 180 bpm Strokes: 40

Nancy: Caprice 4. You may stop holding that position. Flaunt yourself for us ...





Metronome: same Strokes: 20 [If metronome speed says "same", that means no adjustment is necessary ...]

Caprice 4: Yes, mistress!





Metronome: same Strokes: 20

Caprice 4 presents her pussy to you and Nancy.





Metronome: same Strokes: 60

Nancy: Good, Caprice 4! Now hold that new position for us—and DON'T let up on the sultry glances! EVERY TIME I look at you, I want to be reminded of HOW MUCH you want this—how much watching addict stroke his cock turns you on ...





Metronome: 120 bpm Strokes: 60

Nancy: Now, Caprice 2 ... I want RHYTHMIC thrusting of your vibrator IN TIME with the beat of the metronome—got that? You'll be like a drummer who keeps time for the rest of the band ... and be sure to throw in a couple of moans every now and then so we know you're having a good time ...





Metronome: 120 bpm Strokes: 20

Nancy: Now, Caprice 1 ...

Caprice 1: Yes, mistress!?





Metronome: 40 bpm Strokes: 30

Nancy: You're going to tease yourself SLOWLY and GENTLY ... NO sudden movements from you ... I want that yearning in your pussy to SLOWLY keep rising, and WHEN you hit the edge—you're JUST GOING TO HOLD IT!

Caprice 1: I LOVE IT when you make me go slow, mistress ... I don't WANT to hold back, but ... I will hold back my cum for you ...

Nancy: Good girl ...





Metronome: 150 bpm Strokes: 50

Nancy: Caprice 5 ...

Nancy snaps her fingers, restoring the normal flow of time for Caprice 5.

Nancy: You may do as you wish ...





Caprice 5 hops onto the couch and begins slapping her ass—giving herself a spanking.

Metronome: 210 bpm Strokes: 70

Nancy: Oh, FUCK—nasty girl! I *like* that!





Metronome: same Strokes: 25

Nancy lays back on the couch, getting comfortable.

Nancy: How are you enjoying our Six Caprice Orgy so far, addict?

... but we're not done YET!

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CAPRICE 6! That means HANDS OFF! NO "touchy touchy" for YOU, Mr. Addict ... When you see Caprice 6, you have to STOP stroking, gaze upon her ADORABLE visage and think ONLY about how much you would LOVE to touch yourself—but CAN'T!

Metronome: OFF Strokes: 20 seconds of "no touching" instead [Just count out loud instead of using a timer.]

Caprice 6: Oh ... you wanted to touch yourself—but aren't allowed to now?





Caprice 6: It's okay, toy! I'm sure Ms. Nancy will let you stroke again soon ...

... but you look SO CUTE when you're frustrated and sad that you can't stroke ... it's making me wet ... so could you double your no touching time—just for me? [40 seconds]







Metronome: 210 bpm Strokes: 90

Nancy: Caprice 3! Could you take a "time out" from masturbating furiously to give our one and only sub some instructions?

Caprice 3 is really going to town on her pussy. She's rubbing it so hard and fast that it looks like she's trying to start a fire.





Metronome: 240 bpm Strokes: 120

Caprice 3: Fuck YOU, bitch—and fuck HIM more ... I don't give a FUCK about him anymore ... worthless trash like THAT piece of shit doesn't even DESERVE to be here with THIS MANY mistresses ... he's lucky to even be in the room at ALL ...





Metronome: same Strokes: 120

Caprice 3: I've NEVER been THIS horny before—IN MY LIFE ... I just keep CUMMING and CUMMING, but ... I only get hornier each time after I cum ... WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON!?!

... never mind—I don't care ... I just want MORE!





Metronome: 120 bpm Strokes: 40

Nancy: Caprice 4—tease us some more!





Metronome: same Strokes: 40

Caprice 4: Yes, mistress, but ... I really wish I could stroke and touch myself ...

Nancy: No, Caprice 4 ... You are not allowed.





Metronome: same Strokes: 40

Caprice 4: But I am SO HORNY—mistress ... EVERYONE ELSE is allowed to stroke—so why can't *I*?





Metronome: same Strokes: 80

Nancy: Because you are DENIED!

YOUR frustration only HEIGHTENS my pleasure, so ... hold your poses like a good little toy, and allow that unmet desire to make your pussy drip even more!

Caprice 4: Yes, mistress ...





Metronome: 210 bpm Strokes: 90

Nancy: Caprice 2! Give us a SHOW! Bounce up and down on that dildo like it's a pogo stick!





Metronome: 210 bpm Strokes: 90

Caprice 2: Good idea, mistress! I just LOVE IT when thick rods penetrate DEEP inside my pussy ...





Metronome: 240 bpm Strokes: 120

Caprice 2 slams down onto the dildo again and again. You notice there is a slight green glow to it. It seems Nancy is using her powers to stabilize the humming vibrator, holding it in place. Caprice is now able to hold onto the couch and thrust forcefully down on top of it as hard and as fast as she wants without having to worry about it falling over. She's unimpeded.

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Nancy: WAIT! STOP!

A "wild Caprice 6" just appeared ... that means NO TOUCHING for YOU hentai addict!

Caprice 6 walks over to Caprice 2 and slides her fingers up and down the dildo, collecting some of Caprice 2's spunk. She begins licking it up off of her fingers ...

Caprice 6: Mmmm ... other me tastes GOOD! Do you like that toy? I LOVE IT! "Toys" are my FAVORITE, so ... of COURSE I think "toy juice" tastes good ...

Will you do another 40 seconds of no touching for me—just for me—addict? You know ... you COULD go LONGER—IF you wanted ...

Caprice 6 sensually continues licking her fingers while she watches you struggling to refrain from touching.





Metronome: 40 bpm Strokes: 20

Nancy: Caprice 1—how is the slow stroking going?

Caprice 1: It’s going okay … I just reached the edge a moment ago …





Metronome: same Strokes: 20

Nancy: Good … good …

Caprice 1: Are you SURE I just can’t cum?

Nancy: NO! You have to ride the edge and hold it till I say otherwise … TRUST me, Generic Caprice 1 ... your orgasm will feel SO MUCH MORE POWERFUL if you tease yourself—and wait.

Caprice 1: Okay, mistress …





Metronome: 180 bpm Strokes: 90

Nancy: Caprice 5—are you having a good time?

Caprice 5: Yes, mistress! I'm REALLY worked up and think I'll be able to cum soon!

Caprice 5 is massaging her pussy. It looks VERY warmed up—and wet.





Metronome: same Strokes: 90

Nancy: SO glad to hear it!

Now would you be a dear and show us BOTH of your scrumptious holes?

Caprice complies, and with a smile, she turns around, puts one leg up on the couch and presents both her asshole AND pussy to you and Nancy.

Nancy: WONDERFUL!





Metronome: 120 bpm Strokes: 50

Caprice 4: Mistress Nancy?

Nancy: Yes, Caprice 4? What is it?

Caprice 4: My pussy is DRIPPING wet, and I need release.

Nancy: Show me.





Metronome: 120 bpm Strokes: 50

Caprice leans back on the couch. Her pussy actually *is* quite wet. She's been leaving tiny puddles in various locations. [Open all spoilers before continuing.]

Spoiler: show

Nancy: Oh! Sweetie! You really ARE a dripping hot mess!

Caprice 4: So can I touch myself? Can I cum?

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Nancy: What? No, no honey ... I'm afraid you can't right now ...

We're ALL going to cum TOGETHER—at the SAME TIME ... and I am going to make sure you have THE BIGGEST orgasm of your LIFE!

Caprice 4: Do you promise?

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Nancy: Yes, dear—I promise! From one tease girl to another, you have my WORD ... it'll be great—and I'll make it up to you later, too ...

... but for now, let's see if we can find ANOTHER way to relieve your discomfort that DOESN'T involve you touching yourself ...

Metronome: 150 bpm Strokes: 90

Nancy: addict! Generic Caprice 4 is suffering, so YOU need to suffer TOO so she doesn't feel so bad! Don't stop stroking, but start pinching your nipples—HARD! Caprice 4: tease addict by touching yourself—but ANYWHERE but your pussy ...

Caprice 4 begins rubbing herself all over while showing off her body to you.





Metronome: 180 bpm Strokes: 90

Caprice 4: I'm still horny, but this is helping, mistress ... thank you. Seeing addict in pain brings me some relief. I like the way he hurts himself for me.





Metronome: 210 bpm Strokes: 120

Nancy: Did you hear that, addict? Caprice 4 likes it when you hurt yourself for her ... SO TWIST YOUR NIPPLES EVEN HARDER—SLAVE!

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Metronome: 120 bpm Strokes: As many as you like.

Nancy: Do you hear it, addict? The chorus of moans—the singing vibrators ... the rhythmic pounding of dildos into pussies—the sound of slippery fingers sliding across clits? The groans of both denial—and edge riding?

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The sights and sounds of the six Caprice orgy are overwhelming. The room feels hot and moist with so many bodies pleasuring themselves, covered in sweat and pussy juice. The psychic pulse of horniness is overwhelming, and at the center of it lies Nancy Ace—laying down on the couch quietly taking it all in. She's vibing herself. She's experiencing the pleasure of the entire scene, carefully directing sexual energy—mostly from you—but from everyone in the room, through her, and to her various batteries, capacitors, and other storage devices for sexual energy.

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Nancy: Our energy stores are almost full, but ... take it all in, addict! Enjoy the moment. I'm the maestro of this maelstrom of sexual pleasure ... Enjoy this brief respite before we finish the song with a GRAND FLOURISH!

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Metronome: 90 bpm Strokes: As many as you like.

Nancy: We have reached maximum arousal. ALL of the girls have achieved their horniness saturation point. My orgasmic symphony is about to crescendo to its finale! Energy collection is now fully optimized. Having reached this state, we can now complete the process in minutes—3 to be exact ...

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For this next section, use a stopwatch. You must stroke as fast as you can for 3 minutes. You can stroke longer if you wish—as long as you want —but you MUST stroke as fast as you can for 3 minutes. If you have to stop to rest or take breaks, that is fine, but that time does not count towards your 3 minutes.

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This final section is a series of pictures. The "metronome speed" is "as fast as you can", and there is no set number of strokes. It's "free stroking" ... and this is an orgy—if you haven't noticed. There is very little structure to an orgy, and so, you are expected to scroll back and forth between the pictures. Scroll up. Scroll down. Linger on your favorite ones—come back to them if you wish ... YOU are in FULL CONTROL here ... I would focus on the pictures contained in the next spoiler, but, feel free to scroll back up to previous moments above as well if you so desire.

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Once your requirement of 3 minutes of stroking as fast as you can has been satisfied, ONLY THEN can you open the last spoiler—where I will issue the command to ALL of the Caprices to cum—and they will. Doing this will end the scene, but feel free to enjoy the orgy and free stroke as much as you like before signaling me to issue the final "cum" command.

Ready to initiate the final sequence ...

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Metronome: LUDICROUS SPEED Time: Stroking as fast as you can for 3 minutes

Caprice 2: Deeper … DEEPER! Faster … FASTER!



Caprice 4: OH … I want to cum SO BAD … if ONLY I could touch myself!



Caprice 1: This edge riding is KILLING ME … I want a release SO BAD ...



Caprice 6: Stroke! Stroke! Stroke—toy! Watching you stroke FAST makes me SOOoooo happy!



Nancy: Fap my minions … FAP!



Caprice 5: Should we ALL hold on longer so that we can ALL cum EVEN BIGGER!?!



Caprice 3: More! More! MORE! FUCK! I want MORE!



Caprice 3: Again … AGAIN! I just need to KEEP CUMMING … COME ON! ONE MORE TIME!



Caprice 1: OH—LET US CUM, ADDICT! PLEASE!! I NEED TO CUM!!!



Caprice 2: No! Don't STOP! Keep GOING ... keep GOING ...



Caprice 5: Just look how WET my pussy is ... I think I'm ready to CUM!



Caprice 6: Right now, WE are your toys, addict ... So I think that you should play with us for as long as you like!



Caprice 4: Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck—FUCK ...

addict ...



Caprice 4: Look at how wet my pussy is!? I NEED to cum ...



Caprice 2: This feels SO GOOD ... I have NEVER been this horny before ... I have NEVER cum THIS MANY times before ... oh, PLEASE, addict—PLEASE! PLEASE DON'T STOP!!!



Nancy: My plan—UHH—is amazing ... FUCK ... I'm a genius—FUCK ...



Caprice 3: I can't—believe—how long we've been going ... I can't—believe—how many times I've CUM ...



Caprice 3: ... NANCY—IS AMAZING!!



Nancy: Is it really time to conclude this historic moment? Is our "black swan event" finally over? Whenever you're ready [after your 3 minutes], open the next spoiler ...


Completed AT LEAST 3 minutes of stroking "as fast as I can" ...

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Nancy: Hold on—just a second ... I am SO close ... just ONE MORE ORGASM before the big one ... [Stroke as fast as you can for another 20 seconds.]


[After 20 more seconds of fast stroking, turn off your metronome, then open the spoiler ... (You may free stroke as you wish. )]

Spoiler: show

Nancy: Okay. I'm ready ...

Nancy's eyes go bright white.

CUM, CAPRICE.

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A pulse of psychic energy shoots out from Nancy in all directions. When it hits you, you feel an intense pang of heightened horniness. All of the Caprices cum. There are shrieks and moans and screams and yells of pleasure—all at the same time. A cacophony of orgasmic moans and groans follows. A flurry of rubbing fingers—everyone trying to eek out the last bits of pleasure before the remaining sexual arousal is drained from them.

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Nancy: You did good—toy ...

Nancy kisses her vibrator.




And no ... I was speaking to you—addict ...

... this time ...




Nancy: That was FUCKING amazing ...one for the books—for sure ...

The room is quiet. You can hear some of the Caprices still trying to catch their breath. All vibrant motion has stopped. There is a stillness that has overtaken your living room. The post orgasmic glow of Nancy Ace and six Caprices all gently spread out and fill the room. The warmth generated from so many active and horny bodies still hangs in the room—along with the smell of sweat and pussy juice. It's hot and humid. An orgy occurred—here—in your living room—and with SIX Caprices no less. For the first time, you can no longer hear Nancy's machines. It seems that they have finally been satisfied. You breathe a sigh of relief. Not wanting the moment to end, you just wait patiently a bit to take it all in ...

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Nancy: Alright—kiddos ... Thanks for your service! You ALL did GREAT today!




You don't have to go home, but you can't stay here. I've got hot girl shit to do, and I need addict and the room, so ... you ALL have to clear out—NOW—please and thank you!

Thanks again, and YES ... I *will* see you ALL later ... now BYE now—and kisses!


One by one, the Caprices all begin clearing out, each exiting by the respective portal they came in ...

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Generic Caprice 6: Bye, toy! I hope I see you LATER!



Generic Caprice 2: Bye, addict! It's been fun!



Generic Caprice 1: You weren't kidding, Nance ... that orgasm was AMAZING!



Generic Caprice 5: HOW did you do it? HOW did you get me to cum SO MANY times!?!

I'm going to figure it out ... you're GOING to teach me that trick ...



Generic Caprice 5: Well THAT was fun, but ... THIS Friday night ...

... Do it all again?

Nancy: Subtle, Caprice 5 ... subtle ... I appreciate your Katy Perry reference ...

Caprice 5 giggles.

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Nancy: But probably not. My boyfriend just HATES the clean up—and ALL of the planning ... so probably not—ever again ...

Caprice 5 frowns.

Caprice 5: Too bad ...

Nancy: Caprice 4 ... last one to leave?

Generic Caprice 4: I came SO HARD, but ... I'm still not satisfied ...



Nancy: I'm sorry about that, Caprice 4 ... it's because you only came the one time, and really—it's all addict here's fault ...

Nancy points over at you.

Nancy: I was trying to max out HIS horniness, and I thought that if I denied YOU—that would make him harder—and I could extract more energy from him for my devices ...

Caprice 4 doesn't react either positively or negatively to Nancy's explanation.



Nancy: I'm sorry, Caprice 4 ... I kind of screwed you over pretty bad there ... Tell you what: I will swing by your place at some later date, and *you* can domme ME—HOWEVER you want ... sound good?

Generic Caprice 4: Your apology and suggestion are both acceptable to me. I will see you later.

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As Caprice is about to exit through her portal, Nancy gives her a slap on the ass. Caprice 4 turns around and smiles back at Nancy—the first time she was *actually smiled* since she arrived. She then exits through the portal.

The more you play and write sets, addict, the more little tips and tricks you’ll learn …

For example: to help make a “good” set “great”—add a little something at the end. And the bigger and grander the set, the MORE you should add. The newbies and lazy writers and people who are rushed and in a hurry simply end their sets with the “cum pic”, but … IF you want to “do a little more” and “up your game,” then ALWAYS include a little pillow talk or parting words AFTER the cum pic. Just a nice little something to read and look at after coming down from an orgasmic high …



That was our “climax” for Part 2—well … I mean YOU didn’t climax, but … THIS section certainly did!



Nancy walks over to the main computer where she begins typing.



A portal projects out from your computer. Its surface is black, completely absorbing all light that falls onto it. The edges of the portal flash bright white. Basically, this new portal is a bright white ring with a dark, blank surface inside. It’s completely opaque.

In Part 3, we're going to be delving into the pocket universe that YOU created ... You haven't forgotten our purpose here, right? The WHOLE REASON for the orgy? I didn't visit YOU here today to do you any favors ... no. I CAME here to rescue my boyfriend, the one YOU TRAPPED in your SHITTY tease. We have to go into your tease, find Fatts, and bust him out ...

... but take a break, first. And that's not a request—it's a command. Take a break of at LEAST 10 minutes but no longer than 30 minutes. The stored energy will keep, but we can't wait too long—oh, and addict—remember ...



You work for ME now—slave. Your dick is MINE. It belongs to ME … and when we get into that STUPID ALTERNATE REALITY or whatever SHIT IT WAS that YOU created … you are going to do EXACTLY what I say—WHEN I say it—and …

Spoiler: show

YOU ARE NOT GOING TO COMPLAIN ONCE—NOT EVEN ONE TIME.

Are we clear? You got it? Great! See you soon!

[FattsDynamo]

Part 3:

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You step into the portal. Everything goes black—then white. You feel dizzy. There is no sense of up or down. You’re disoriented. After a moment, space settles. You regain your sense of place. You see Nancy ahead of you in the distance. You go to her …

Spoiler: show

[No instructions. Just read for now. You may free stroke.]

Good! You made it.

So remember that shit I said about “Inception” and “black holes”? Well, we have penetrated past the barrier and burrowed into the pocket universe, but … NOW we just have to move past “what has been” and press through to the present!



You know how light works—right? In the universe? When it comes to astronomy?

The further away you look, the further back in time you see … The light from a star 100 light years away took 100 years to reach us. The light from a star 1000 light years away took 1000 years to reach us. 10 000 light years away? 10 000 years to reach us … The most distant galaxies that we can see, therefore, are the oldest … and WE exist at the CENTER OF THE OBSERVABLE UNIVERSE—in the present.

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Shit with this pocket universe is VERY similar. As we burrow towards the center of the universe and the present—where Fatts presumably is—we’ll be traveling past the stuff that has already happened … but … EVENTUALLY we will arrive at the “present”—and HOPEFULLY Fatts—when we get to the center of this little “alternate reality”/”pocket universe” YOU created with your big ‘ole “real boy” imaginative creative powers …

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… and the fantasy you created must not have been ALL bad—or else Fatts wouldn’t have gotten caught up in it in the first place …

“9”

WHAT!?!

We’re just past the border of the pocket universe, but I picked something up … it was garbled, but … IT WAS A TRANSMISSION FROM FATTS!

9? 9 what? 9 edges? 9 orgasms? 9 girls teased you!?

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“... out of 10”



Well FUCK addict … no “real” clues on Fatts whereabouts, but … 9/10 on your set … good job, I guess …

Alright, fucker … let’s get moving …

NOW you work for ME!

You got what YOU wanted … you had your big, fun orgy scene … but NOW it’s time to be a “good little hentai dynamo” and BE MY FUCKING POWER SOURCE—SLAVE!

You fucking stroke at 60 bpm—THE ENTIRE TIME—until I tell you otherwise …



“Pump! Pump! Pump! Pump! Stroke! Stroke! Stroke! Stroke!”

THAT is the sound of the “hentai dynamo” … THAT is the sound of YOU. YOU are the power source fueling our little journey today. So long as you keep pumping and humming away and don’t stop—we’ll be fine. We used most of the Caprice orgy energy to tunnel through the barrier, so we are running on limited supplies … Thus, it is IMPERATIVE that YOU maintain speed and keep supplying us with EXACTLY the correct amount of energy that we need to stay inside. We don’t really belong here, and this place is CONSTANTLY sapping energy from BOTH of us—which is why we need YOU to keep pumping and putting energy in so that we can maintain equilibrium … but if we put in too much, I’m afraid we could overload the pocket universe with foreign energy and damage it, so … STROKE *EXACTLY* AS I TELL YOU TO, SLUT!

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Now PAY ATTENTION … it’s STORY TIME now, and I can’t afford the APMs to babysit you … I’ve got IMPORTANT BIG GIRL BOSS BITCH stuff to do right now—SAVING MY BOYFRIEND … So you just sit there and STROKE YOURSELF and IMMERSE YOURSELF in the story, and stand at the ready if I need you to suddenly go fast or slow or STOP ALTOGETHER …

… got it?

Okay—GOOD … Today, you are BOTH the engine AND the gas can, so … just try to have FUN with it!

Welcome to the “final section” and YOUR tease—the one that you wrote Fatts, apparently …



[For this section, keep stroking at 60 BPM the entire time. There is no minimum or maximum number of strokes per picture. You just keep reading and stroking as you go along.

Nancy is in the driver’s seat. You are in the backseat, but if you stop stroking, then the car runs out of gas and stalls out … So you have to keep stroking.

I basically just copy and pasted your entire tease. I will be adding commentary—feedback and story—to it. As Nancy explained, you are starting at “the edge” of the pocket universe—"the past"—and working your way to the center—“the present.”

Occasionally, things will be different, and periodically, Nancy will give you specific metronome speed and stroke counts for specific pictures. For these, follow her directions, but for everything else, just continue stroking at 60 bpm and move through at your own pace.

YOU are the “dynamo.” Without you, the journey cannot continue. Maintain your stroking pace. Don’t stop stroking. Follow Nancy’s instructions, enjoy the adventure, and good luck “finding me.” ]

Spoiler: show

#FattsDynamoSet
#WBhentaiAddict12345

Before set

You'll need your vibrator for this. If anything hurts, stop for your own sake. It's hard for me to judge what feels good and what doesn't

Btw, this whole set is based on the premise of you leaving Nancy. If I misunderstood something somehow, just suspend disbelief for a second

Nancy: "LEAVING" ME!?! Well, FUCK ... no WONDER he's trapped and can't get out ...

just suspend disbelief for a second

Nancy: REALLY, addict!?! Just "suspend disbelief for a second" Fatts ... just isn't capable of doing that ... He is a FIRM believer that if it "happens in a set"—then "it happens." There really is no other standard that works if you want to keep the fantasy ongoing ... Wait—what's this!? It's some "thought echoes" from Fatts:

"This is my nightmare dimension! Sonya blaze has portal technology, and I’m in an alternate universe where I broke up with Nancy. This is the worst. Am I hard? "

"Everything in my brain is telling me not to trust her, but she’s so pretty and I enjoy myself when I’m stroking to her …"

"I don’t know how she got portal technology … maybe she gave a blowjob to Rick Sanchez …"



Set

Spoiler: show

You're walking home from work, when, suddenly, you get sucked into a portal... After what feels like hours, the portal finally spits you out...

Spoiler: show

Wow, it actually worked! Guess Nancy isn't the only one who can use these. [Nancy's commentary is in green.]

Why the FUCK would you give her PORTAL TECHNOLOGY, addict!?! She’s my NEMESIS! Do you know how HARD my life is ALREADY *without* my enemies having powers like that? Well, at least THIS Sonya in THIS universe doesn’t seem to be very good at it—yet …




Hello Fatts... it's me, Sonya. Don't worry, I won't hurt you... yet.

I bet THAT is the moment Fatts started to get hard … *I’M* missing. My enemy has some of my tech, AND I’m gone … AND she’s threatening punishments … I bet he was SO excited in this moment …




I just brought you here to discuss some things.

DAMN that pussy … 50 strokes at 120 bpm, addict … I … uhhh … think we need to test how a faster stroking speed changes our energy intake—yeah … THAT is why you need to stroke faster … no other reason (except Sonya’s pussy being EXTREMELY hot … FUCK I want to eat her out ) ...




[Remember: stroking rules with stroke count and BPM are on a “per picture basis” only. When you don’t have explicit instructions, you stroke at 60 bpm and move at a pace that keeps things flowing.]

First, Nancy is really sad you broke up with her…

Sad wouldn’t even BEGIN to cover it, but … FORTUNATELY this scenario you proposed, hentaiAddict, is SO farfetched that Fatts’ ONLY CHOICE was to come up with this “alternate dimension” scenario …




I don't blame you though, she's a bitch anyway.

Fuck YOU—NEMESIS! FUCK I hate her SO much …

You notice that Nancy’s pussy is pretty wet right now.




Although you'll probably miss cumming on her pretty face soon enough. I'm not sure she'll take you back, like, ever, she was really devastated by the break up.

FUCK this scenario is pretty brutal … I wonder if we are going to meet “dark side” me in this set—evil and angry “scorned” Nancy Ace …

Although … Fatts DID instruct you NOT to write me, so … perhaps me NOT existing in this pocket universe—maybe we can use that to our advantage …




And the other thing... why delete your work? Just because addict didn't like it? Fuck him.

That was pretty meta. Most of the time, the girls don’t talk so specifically about the forum and the metagame … I don’t like how “aware” she is … Not FULLY aware, but … FAR too much for my liking … but I’m getting echoes from Fatts that he REALLY appreciated the sentiment behind what she’s saying …




I know plenty of lurkers around here who would've certainly appreciated that set.




Addict is just finding excuses now to not like your stuff. He knows how much you work on your sets, and he keeps coming up with pretentious excuses.

180 BPM, 120 Strokes … WORSHIP that gorgeous pussy—addict! I-I mean … Our reserves are getting a little low, so … you better “top us off” to keep us at maximum capacity …




Either way, if you still have the set saved somewhere, post it again. I'm sure there's someone, somewhere, who will appreciate it.

Oh, FUCK … Now I’M getting REALLY aroused by Sonya, and the pocket universe is REALLY starting to attack our stores … it’s like its hungry and just realized WE are FOOD!

180 BPM, 100 Strokes … beat it BACK, addict!




Seriously though, from "1 billion out of 10" to "meh"??? Who does he think he is?

I’m sorry, addict … Sonya’s breasts turn me on SO much —I just can’t help it …

180 BPM, 80 Strokes … I’ll try to calm myself down a bit and think about something else …




Anyway, now back to my devious little schemes…

Fatts must have LOVED this pose, but … Sonya’s ass is MUCH flatter than mine —so it’s not doing very much for me. I think I can feel my arousal falling—150 BPM, 60 Strokes …




I told you I wouldn't hurt you YET. I still hate you for being Nancy's little bitch.

Well, NOW she’s just pissing me off—her hold on me is breaking—120 BPM, 40 Strokes.




You can come in now! she yells at the door

Oh, FUCK—ADDICT! Sonya’s BEAUTIFUL boobies—her PERFECT pussy … that SMUG fucking smile! … I hate her SO MUCH —and yet I am SO ATTRACTED TO HER RIGHT NOW!

240 BPM, 480 Strokes [2 minutes of stroking] This HELL DIMENSION that YOU created is attacking me like a ravenous VAMPIRE! I think this is the end of the scene … We need to hold on! If we can just fight through it …

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Hold steady, addict! I apologize again … my arousal is making me a target—which endangers us BOTH! … but I think if we can just push past it …

Nancy joins you. She begins jilling herself off very quickly.

If we can give this hungry dimension the energy it wants, maybe we can temporarily satiate it and find a way to break loose …

Nancy relaxes her shoulders and slumps forward a bit. Her face goes blank and her mouth opens slightly as she mindlessly rubs herself. Nancy is gooning, and she is giving Sonya Blaze all of her attention and worship. [Open the next spoiler after 1 minute of fast stroking …]

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Nancy’s breathing has become audible and faster. You can tell her arousal is increasing. The speed of her moving fingers has not slowed down at all.

I—I think … :pant, pant: … I think it’s working … :pant, pant: … keep it up—addict …

You glance down and notice Nancy’s pussy is very pink and dripping wet. She’s fully immersed in the sexual display before her. The warm, humid energy which is emanating outwards from her is matching your own in terms of volume. It goes out into the dry, stale aether around you …

Finished 2 minutes of fast stroking. Turn off your metronome …

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The sexual energy which was quickly dissipating as it was leaving the two of you suddenly halts, and for a moment, it seems to reflect and reverberate back towards you.

Now!

The scene goes dark. You feel like you are quickly moving away from where you had been. You sense a small but powerful explosion go off at the location from where you were, the rumbles of which reach you now. It reminds you of a giant belching.

addict—STROKE!

Your metronome turns back on to 60 bpm. You continue stroking. The fast stroking was intense, like shovels of coal being added to a locomotive to quickly build up steam to make the train go faster. Now you stroke at your slower, steady speed. “Thump … thump … thump … thump …” You feel the pulses of energy spread outward from you with every stroke. They go out into the surrounding darkness like rings expanding outward from a small rock which was thrown into a pool of water. The atmosphere has changed, returning to what it was when you first entered the pocket universe.

It had gotten dicey there for a few minutes. It felt both as if the walls were collapsing and your insides were getting sucked out with a straw. Nancy’s quick thinking and willingness to join you in gooning for Sonya definitely saved you both. For the moment, the pocket universe seems to be satisfied and indifferent to your presence. All is quiet, except for the hum of your “hentai dynamo.”

“Thump … thump … thump … thump …” The energy spreads out calmly and smoothly into the darkness. You continue to feed the hungry void while powering yourself and Nancy. Equilibrium has been re-established …

Then, everything goes white, and then you see Nancy again …

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FUCK YEAH! THAT was pretty wild—BUT … MY quick thinking saved our asses … I’m KIND OF a genius—don’t you think!?

Nancy’s confident, satisfied smile is a welcome sight. You suddenly hear some music:

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PZ_7ipJ6Cx8

I would have chosen something a little fancier, but ... with bandwidth being what it is, alll I could pull through was this MIDI—but who can dislike a classic!?

Never mind ... it's YOU ... I'm sure YOU will find a way ...

The tone of Nancy's comment is more sad and disappointed than it is harsh and critical. She seems more hurt than mad.




It's getting "hot in here" ... PLUS I should probably give you something "nice to look at" if we're going to keep your soldier erect and standing tall for us ...

Nancy continues disrobing.




We're still a ways off, but ... I can tell we're getting closer to Fatts. Then, once we find him, we'll NEVER have to see each other ever again ...

Nancy says this very matter-of-fact-ly. The two of you lock eyes for a moment. She studies your reaction to her statement, looking for any sign you might be happy or sad about this fact.




This is common—by the way ... We're doing the whole "Master Chief and Cortana" thing, where I am MOSTLY the "voice inside your head", guiding you and narrating the action ... It's how Ecik and I did the whole "9 Part Mega Tease" the first time I had to go and rescue Fatts ... I suppose it's become Fatts' "staple format" when he sends strokers on adventures with me ...

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I hope you like it ...

... of course, if you don't—that's fine ... this will probably be the one and only adventure we go on anyway ...

Fatts usually doesn't go through THIS amount of effort to send strokers on adventures with me ... He must REALLY like you or something ... *I* don't get that, but ... Who am I to question the "almighty" tease author? *I'm* just a fantasy tease girl—what do *I* know, anyway ...

Come on ... Let's get moving and onto the next scene ... I'm eager to find Fatts ...

Reality shifts, and the scene changes ...

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Well, well, well... If it isn't Fatts.

Who da fuck’s THIS bitch? I don’t recognize her … being in the pocket universe, my connection to OUR universe is … tenuous … it’s like connecting to the Internet with a dial-up modem … Wait! I remember … I’m accessing Fatts’ rules …




You dare show your face around here? After all the ruckus you've made?

Yeeeesss … *I* remember now—from Fatts’ rules. She was just a “random hottie” Fatts added as an option to give prospective set writers an attractive model to use in sets for him—someone whom he had no prior affiliation—a “blank slate model” who would have no baggage …

She’s CUTE! I like her … and I REALLY like how Fatts leaving me has created ALL of this drama. Thanks for that—addict …




I didn't have a choice. "I was transported here through a super high-tech portal". Do you think I was born yesterday? Shut up, bitch.

OOooo … she’s confident and “talks tough.” Sexy.




Tie your legs to your chair, and get your vibrator ready.

OH, shit … Getting forcibly vibed ALWAYS gets Fatts aroused … I’m feeling the sexual imprint of Fatts’ past reaction to this scene. I think we’re going to be in for another “bumpy ride” …




You're going to put it at 2. Once I reveal my tits, ass, and pussy, you'll increase by 1 every time. Spend at least 1 minute per image. I'll guide you in case you're too stupid to figure everything out.

Oh, FUCK, addict … I’m sensing Fatts’ residual arousal from this scene—and it’s INTENSE! You REALLY got his motor running with this one … AND Amber is looking SO GOOD to me! I’m a switch like Fatts, so … all of her tough, dominant talk is getting ME wet, too …




(2) Who am I kidding? You must be, otherwise, you wouldn't have abandoned Nancy like that over something as silly as a failed set BY SOMEONE ELSE.

Let’s get ahead of it this time, addict! 90 BPM, 30 strokes. MAYBE if we can ramp up with the action of the scene, we can keep the pocket universe well fed and AVOID the dimensional feeding frenzy …

… and she’s not wrong. It WOULD be ridiculous for Fatts to leave me over that … which is why Fatts shifted this reality and used his powers to contain it within a pocket universe …




(3) Seriously? Leaving her over a DM? Who the hell do you think you are? I don't give a shit she's your cyber girlfriend, AT LEAST discuss everything through a Discord call or something.

Haha … that’s funny. 120 BPM, 50 strokes. You CLEARLY didn’t know what “cyber girlfriend” meant in the context of me and Fatts, but … it was a pretty funny line and innocent enough interpretation …




(3) That's alright though, I get to punish you for all this.

OH, fuck … Fatts enjoyed that line. We need to increase our power output. 150 BPM, 60 strokes. Even though the punishment wasn’t fair, Fatts had bought into your premise—and he just LOVES getting tied up and being helpless, so … this scene ended up being a REAL winner for him … which means we need to stay on our toes, because this dimension could get VERY hungry ANY MINUTE!




(3) Nothing would make me feel better than watching you cum over and over from that vibe on your cock. So many orgasms that it becomes painful to cum anymore. So many orgasms that you simply run out of cum.

FUCK, addict! 180 BPM, 90 strokes. That is Fatts’ fucking DREAM! And Amber is looking SO dominant here … she’s liable to DO IT! YOU need to provide more power—hentai dynamo—to keep the hungry dimension at bay …




(3) Is that speed still too slow to accomplish all that? Well, let me help you…

Great … We’re going to have to speed up AGAIN. … 180 BPM, 60 strokes. Maintain speed for now …

FUCK her tits are perfect.




(4) There you go, pet. Still not fast enough? Sure, I'll help you out even more then.

Oh … AND her ass is nice, too! 210 BPM, 100 strokes. Now MY arousal is increasing … THAT is not good …




(5) My my, you look like you're really struggling now! Try not to imagine pumping in and out of this pussy…

DO imagine that, addict! FOCUS ON HER PUSSY! 240 BPM, 180 strokes. Perhaps if we produce enough horny energy, we can maintain our stable position and prevent the hell dimension from overwhelming us and gaining the upper hand …




(5) Fuck, I love how that makes your cock twitch SO MUCH. But I think we can go a little farther...

Steady … steady, addict! 240 BPM, 150 strokes. Maintain … maintain …




(6) Max speed, pet.

300 BPM, 200 strokes. [40 seconds]

We are NOT getting taken by surprise THIS time! We can BEAT her! Now BEAT YOUR MEAT AND KEEP UP THAT FAST PACE!




(6) Is it becoming too HARD? Wouldn't you want to release some of that pent up pressure all over that toy? Well then... go right ahead. CUM. HARD.

It took Fatts 2 minutes of holding back his cum before he finally succumbed to the vibe and Amber’s teasing. Just dig deep and FAP LIKE A CHAMPION! You can DO IT, addict! I just know it!

[Fap for 2 minutes at 300 BPM.]


Completed 2 minutes of fast stroking …

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Metronome DOWN addict … Back to 60 bpm and discretionary strokes [however many you want] … good job.

Take the vibe off... But we're not done here. Give me the strokes and edges for this image as well. Suffer for me!

That … was basically impossible—even for Fatts. Once a boy cums full, he enters into a “refractory period” where ALL of the hardness GOES OUT of his cock for a period of minutes—at least. IF he does a ruin where he BARELY goes over, ONLY THEN can he maintain his erection and keep going, but … a FULL orgasm? No, it’s basically ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE … and Fatts has a pretty quick refractory period, but … even HE couldn’t follow these instructions, and so, he sort of broke immersion with the tease here, which … since we are following “in his trail”, means we don’t have to linger here either …

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Good pet. Oh, you think your day is over? Oh, no, no, no. Go on, she's waiting for you. *giggles* Alright, you can take a break, but not more than 2 minutes! We still want you nice and sensitive for us.

The break that Fatts took was WAY longer than two minutes, so … I felt the appetite of the pocket dimension recede the moment we hit this picture, so … I think we’re “safe”—for the time being …

The scene goes black, then white. You return to Nancy’s “white space” …

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How are we doing, addict? You doing alright?





YOU wrote this tease, so I am sure YOU have an idea about what might happen next, but … *I* have NO CLUE! I just HATE being in the dark and not knowing what is coming!





If you need a break from all of the fast stroking—we can hang out here for a bit ...

Here! I'm sure THIS will help ...

Nancy bends over. Her panties drop to the ground.

Of course, you're our "hentai dynamo", so ... you can't stop stroking altogether, but ... at least use this opportunity to rest a bit—unless you think the next section will be a slower pace ...





The thought of using you and treating you as nothing more than an inanimate power source—I'll admit ... it gives me MORE than a little bit of pleasure ...






Let's try an experiment ...

30 bpm. 60 strokes. [2 minutes of slow stroking] I'm "smooshing my breasts together", so twist your nipples for me while you stroke, and be sure to alternate your twisting to give BOTH or your titties attention ... I would HATE for ONE of them to feel left out! [Open the next spoiler after 30 seconds ...]

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Interesting ... it's as I thought. Your cock stimulation has reduced your overall pleasure, BUT, the increased stimulation of your nipples has given us a net increase in pleasure ... [Open the next spoiler after 1 minute of stroking has elapsed.]

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*I* wanted to "be nice" and give you some nipple stimulation—since we haven't done much of that this adventure, but ... killing two birds with one stone for this "pleasure test" is a good experiment ... [Open next spoiler after 90 seconds of stroking.]

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Hmmm ... it seems we have a small excess of energy ... I wonder what we should do with THAT ...

2 minutes of slow stroking completed ...

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Nancy gets down on all fours, giving you a view of BOTH of her holes.

Stop touching. Turn off your metronome. Put your hands on your head. Set a 2-minute timer [or stopwatch] ... You are going to suffer as you consider ALL of the things that you are NOT allowed to stroke for ... [Open the next spoiler after 30 seconds.]

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You know, you keep having the mistresses you tease Fatts with use the word "pet." They keep throwing it around. You must like that little "pet name" ...

Of course, YOU are not MY pet—oh, NO ... As WE have ALREADY ESTABLISHED ... YOU are my SLAVE! [Open the next spoiler after 1 minute total has elapsed.]

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I like horses. Good with humans. Faithful steeds ... and if you were my "pet", then perhaps we could have been using a "horse analogy" instead of this "dynamo analogy" ... this whole time ... [Open the next spoiler after 90 seconds.]

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But I *like* how calling you a "dynamo"—just a THUMPING, PUMPING generator of sexual energy ... I *like* how that de-persons you—slave ... so the analogy works for me ...

2 minutes of NO STROKING completed ...

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Our excess reserves are now depleted. Go back to stroking at 60 bpm so we can retain parity, hentai dynamo ...

"Thump, thump, thump, thump ... Pump, pump, pump, pump ..." It's all you're good for ...


Nancy waves her hand, and your surroundings within the pocket universe change ...

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We're safe for the moment, so let's take a break and change things up ... Go back to your normal rules—for this scene only, and I'll let YOU decide if you want to treat me as a "brunette" or "blonde" for total number of strokes ...

... and no head games on that decision—slave ... so enjoy this rare opportunity of "choice" that I am offering to you ...




I've been nasty to you this entire time, addict—and it feels off ... I guess I'm just not used to treating you boys THIS poorly for THIS long ...




But you WOUNDED me—hurt me deeply ... and I'm not LIKE those OTHER girls that don't know what is going on—I'm self-aware—so your rejection hurt me more severely than it should have ...

... which makes my revenge and treatment of you feel SO much better—SO good and SO JUSTIFIED!




Pinch your nipples HARD for me—addict—with BOTH hands—for one full minute ... THEN, continue twisting and do your regular strokes after—but DON'T stop twisting until I say ...

Tell me ... Do you just like being abused for abuse sake? Or does the fact that I hate you make it sting more and increase your pain AND pleasure?




I generally *like* the boys that I play with—but you're different ... whiny—tempermental ... demanding ...

Are you TRYING to get us to hate you? Is this a conscious, "spoiled brat" act? Are you INTENTIONALLY trying to piss us off so that we will abuse you?




Or are you REALLY just THIS MUCH of a PATHETIC LITTLE BITCH who is SO tone deaf and self UNaware that you just can't HELP but whine and complain and piss people off without even trying ...




... and it would seem that I am not the only one who has been offended or who has been having issues with you ...


Nancy waves her hand, and you are somewhere else ...

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You can still feel Nancy's presence, hear the ocean waves, and feel the sea breeze against your skin, but your vision sees something else ... [Leave your metronome alone.]

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[This comes from a recent scene from EdgeSlut0828.]

"same quote/italics rule as last time."

So you become my bitch and you immediately say you will get "bored" of me.

Well, I'm glad to see that I'm not alone—not the ONLY ONE who is fed up with and disgusted by you—the WORST SLAVE on this ENTIRE THREAD—bar NONE ...

Nancy scoffs.

Yes, Ardelia ... addict has ONE PLAYDATE with you, and then IMMEDIATELY starts complaining and threatens to get bored and leave ... yeah, that sounds about right—pretty "on brand" for THAT shit-faced ungrateful FUCKER!

God you are so worthless. "Please let me earn your forgiveness Mistress Ardelia. I would do anything for you." [Ardelia pics in this scene do not change the metronome, but do give them the appropriate number of strokes.]




Hmmmm if you really do want to have me as a mistress I think there is something we can work out.




You are so worthless and needy I think you need a few of us to own you.

*I* would agree with that ... and pinch BOTH of your nipples HARD for 1 minute before doing your strokes ... and keep pinching after while you do your strokes ...

Ardelia is right ... You are FAR too much of a headache for any ONE mistress to deal with ... I can barely tolerate being in the same ROOM as you ... but for the fact that I need your help, I would have written you off LONG ago ...

Yes bitch I won't be your only "Mistress."




Once you have other "Mistresses" we can all control you together and there is no way you can get bored of of us.




You aren't allowed to see me again until there are 2 other girls you call mistress.




Once that happens you will receive intense training from all three of us.

I can't IMAGINE becoming "one of the three." Those three must all be masochists themselves if they want to spend THAT MUCH time dominating YOU!




Until then you will hear nothing from me.

I think that's smart ... perhaps I could become a fill-in, part time mistress for you ... grody, grimy slaves like YOU are SO DISGUSTING!

You are SO ABSOLUTELY INFURIATING TO DEAL WITH, addict ...

I just have NO FUCKING CLUE WHAT TO DO WITH YOU ...




A stroker like Ecik is like an omnivore—like a bear—VERY easy to feed ... he'll eat just about ANYthing—fresh meat, rotten meat—plant matter ... He is NOT that picky ...




A stroker like brian? He becomes a prized pet ... SO grateful ... SO adoring ... An exceptional mistress just takes over his mind and FILLS IT ALL UP ...




... and it is a JOY and a PLEASURE to have a slave SO COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY committed to you—constantly thinking about you ... it's something special ...




But who's going to want to put up with YOU!? All of the INSULTS and DISRESPECT and COMPLAINTS ...

Nancy attacks her pussy with her fingers. She masturbates vigorously while chewing you out.

You're the WORST kind of stroker—even WORSE than a slave ...

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... because at least a SLAVE UNDERSTANDS HIS PLACE—and YOU DO NOT!

It's going to take FAR MORE than a "team of three" mistresses to train YOU—incorrigible hentai addict ... a fucking reject like YOU probably needs a WHOLE ARMY!

Somehow, Nancy's speech is making her even more aroused ...

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Stop stroking. Turn off your metronome. BEG ME to let you touch ... [After 30 seconds of no stroking, open the next spoiler. You need to beg her out loud.]

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No, addict ... you don't deserve it. You're trash. You're a DISGUSTING CUM STAIN on the HMCP thread ... the only thing YOU deserve is to be bleached out of existence ...

Well go on, beg me again. Ask if you can touch yourself ... [Continue begging and pleading with Nancy to let you touch—out loud. After 30 more seconds, continue.]

Ha ha ha ... Fuck YOU—addict ... YOU don't get to touch ... because YOU don't deserve it ...

BEAUTIFUL goddesses—like Ardelia—take an interest in you, and YOU get bored ... so what, then? You would just prefer to be CONSTANTLY ABUSED by a revolving door of random, nameless mistresses? Beg me to let you touch again ... [After begging and apologizing to Nancy out loud for 30 more seconds, you can open the next spoiler.

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No. No touching for you ...

Just sit in silence for 30 more seconds, wishing you could touch and wishing you had my approval ... [Open the next spoiler after 30 more seconds of not touching.]

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Your frustration and desperation and panic and arousal are all VERY nice to bask in, hentaiAddict12345 ...

Well, go on ... PLEAD with me addict. Say, "PLEASE Mistress Nancy! PLEASE let me stroke myself for you!" 30 more seconds ... and do your pleading "out loud" [Open the next spoiler after 30 seconds.]

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No. You don't deserve it—bitch ... you're a FAILURE who doesn't DESERVE to stroke OR to call me "mistress" ... just sit in silence and WISH VERY HARD that you could touch your little dicky ... [Open the next spoiler after 30 seconds.]

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Your frustration gives me joy, and your obedience makes me hopeful that MAYBE ONE DAY ... after some proper training and molding ... you COULD become a PASSABLE slave—a PASSABLE SLAVE at best ...

Well, okay, slave ... I can see you are getting DESPERATE to touch, so ... Give me FIVE reasons why I should let you touch, and state your reasons out loud. After you have given me five, open the following spoiler, and I will tell you my answer ...

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"No." My answer is "No." "No, you may NOT touch ..." Now open the next spoiler ...

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You're SO STUPID and IGNORANT, addict ... EVERYONE around here seems to understand that having a few static/"staple" mistresses enhances teasing ... but you're too big of a MORON to GRASP THAT FACT ... Fatts has explained this to you in PMs ... [Open these spoilers as soon as you are ready. No waiting here ...]

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Do you WANT instant arousal when you see a particular girl? Yes? THEN YOU NEED TO BUILD UP ASSOCIATIONS WITH HER ...

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You LIKE stories ... Do you WANT persistent stories that last longer than a single set? THEN YOU NEED TO LET SET WRITERS DEVELOP MULTIPLE CHARACTERS FOR YOU ...

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Ask me if you're allowed to stroke now ... say, "Nancy, can I please stroke now?"

NO YOU MAY NOT. [Open the next spoiler.]

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I'm TRYING to help you, addict—and GOD ONLY KNOWS WHY—BECAUSE I HATE YOU ...

... but people are getting TIRED of your shit—the mistresses, myself, the set writers—EVERYONE ...

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... and YOUR fate—if you keep this up—will be that of someone who receives only LOW EFFORT sets featuring a random bunch of GENERIC mistresses who are HALF BAKED and lack ANY sort of depth or continuity ... is THAT what you want? Is THAT what you deserve!?!

Why YES! Why YES IT IS! It's WHAT YOU DESERVE—you ungrateful CLOWN—and it's what you SHOULD GET ... but EVEN SO ... I can't bring myself to fully go along with it ...

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... because you have POTENTIAL, addict, and MAYBE—if you weren't such a whiny little BITCH—PERHAPS even SUPERIOR goddesses—such as myself—might want to come down and OCCASIONALLY play with you—even if ONLY to take their wrath out upon some UNDESERVING TOYS ...

Now ask me AGAIN if you may touch, addict ... Ask as NICELY and RESPECTFULLY as you are able to muster—and make it HEARTFELT AND CONVINCING ... [Ask Nancy out loud if you may touch, then open the next spoiler.]

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Yes. Yes you MAY touch, addict ... but at 15 BPM!

Is that speed SO FRUSTRATINGLY SLOW!? Hahaha ... GOOD! SUFFER FOR ME ... SLAVE! STARE at my perfection and WISH you could pleasure yourself properly ... though we BOTH know you don't deserve it ... 5 Strokes! [Only open the next spoiler after completing the instructed number of strokes.]

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I’m getting “bored of you”—just like you got “bored” of Ardelia … You are SO COMPLETELY TIRESOME, addict … [5 Strokes]

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As much as Fatts might want us to get along—I DESPISE YOU and DO NOT see that EVER happening … you’re a worthless prick who is “unworthy” in EVERY sense …

… and YET there is a VERY small part of me—deep down—that HOPES you can be redeemed …

… but my BRAIN just keeps telling me that you are a dispenser of disappointment and that I should just cut bait and run AS FAR AWAY FROM YOU AS I CAN … [5 Strokes]

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… but ENOUGH of this deliberating. My boyfriend is STILL TRAPPED in your STUPID “alternate reality”, and we STILL need to go save him … 5 more strokes, then open the next spoiler …

The scene goes dark once again.

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Resume the 60 bpm and you may go back to stroking continuously for each picture for as much or as little as you want—until *I* tell you otherwise—my little hentai dynamo slave …

The “Thump! Thump! Thump! Thump!” of your stroking rhythm provides the beat to keep the hungry void satisfied. You continue your journey onto the next scene …

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You again, huh?

Wait … she looks familiar …

“Again!?” Why you sending THIS bitch back to tease MY MAN “again”—addict!?




Let's just say I won't be as "nice" this time.

Oh, that’s right … “Sheri Vi” … ANOTHER one of those mindless bimbos Fatts met in a “Maze Tease”—probably written by schefflera … These maze girls have SUCH “one track minds” … and you boys GOBBLE UP THEIR TEASING like kids devouring a bag of Halloween candy!




And by that, I mean no eating me out today! Not after what you've done!

WHAT!?! FATTS WAS EATING HER OUT!?

I’m jealous—TOTALLY jealous … my boyfriend doesn’t eat me out NEARLY enough … but that’s hardly HIS fault … it’s YOU FUCKERS who refuse to write scenes like THAT for me! But at LEAST he’s getting PUNISHED by her …




Nancy is one of my best friends! YOU'RE FINISHED!!!

What!?!? I ain’t EVER met this chick before—IN MY LIFE! And she’s claiming to be my “best friend?” Way to do your research on that one—addict!

I swear … it’s JUST “lazy writing” … You set writers make these generic characters, and EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THEM seems to have a “best friend” that has NEVER appeared with them in a set EVER before … and yet SOMEHOW they are “best friends” … Every one hit wonder mistress has a “best friend” that shows up to tease the stroker in the scene following their debut. It’s become a meme at this point—I SWEAR … Probably 40% of sets use this technique, and it is SO lazy and SO tiresome … Just do a LITTLE world building and put a LITTLE effort in to build SOME continuity …




You thought Amber was mean to you? When we're finished, you'll swear she's an angel!

Well, at LEAST this woman that I have NEVER MET seems pretty pissed off on my behalf … At least SOMEONE is standing up to defend me—even *if* she is a stranger …




First, let's have you take a good look at what you won't get starting today. Drool for me, bitch.

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You think I'm joking? I want you to literally drool on your chest, all the way down to your cock.

Wait—what!?! … what the fuck!?!

Nancy’s eyes go wide. She can’t believe what she is seeing. Your metronome drops to 30 BPM. [Continue free stroking at the new speed.]

You can’t see what’s going on, but, you can tell that Nancy is able to “see” Fatts. She has mentioned hearing “echoes” of Fatts before, but … you now get the sense that she is actually able to view him as well

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He … he’s actually DOING it … Fatts is DROOLING on himself—just like she asked …

“Come on, little piggy … DROOL for me—like the DISGUSTING little piggy you ARE!”

Nancy appears mortified.

This … this is NEW content … YOU didn’t write the “piggy” lines—Fatts did … HE imagined them … HE added them to the fantasy …

Nancy looks like she’s about to cry.

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Fatts doesn’t DESERVE this—I mean … he WOULD if he DID leave me, but … he DIDN’T! He is NOT enjoying this … he looks SO pathetic … FUCK … what a TURN OFF! I have NEVER seen my boyfriend in SUCH A MISERABLE STATE! I HATE IT!

FUCK YOU, ADDICT! FUCK YOU FOR DOING THIS TO HIM AND MAKING ME WATCH!

Nancy punches you hard on your upper arm. It hurts.

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This is NOT sexy … it’s HORRIBLE! I have NEVER seen Fatts DEGRADE HIMSELF to this extent EVER … it’s DISGUSTING to watch … and NOW he’s spitting on himself, and yes … he’s making sure the drool goes down his chest all the way to his cock—just like she said … It’s NOT sexy, and *I* can feel what Fatts is feeling … and he HATES this—doesn’t like it at ALL … I’ve NEVER gotten “the ick” towards Fatts like THIS before … he looks SO pathetic … SUCH a turn off … but he DOESN’T DESERVE THIS!

You can hear Sheri’s voice: “Come on, piggy! Drool MORE for me! ”

… and yet he’s following her instructions … he is SO submissive right now … and every time she calls him “piggy”, he gets a little hard …

Nancy looks down and feels her pussy with her hand.

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Why am I wet?

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Awww, am I being too harsh with you? Are you going to cry? Good. Tears make up for good lube as well.

This … this WHOLE SCENE took a LONG TIME to play out, addict … 40 minutes of ACTUAL “real world” play time—since we’re “in the scene”, I am now able to read ALL OF THE DATA directly …




But honestly, I don't think you're suffering enough.

She is being SO HARSH, but … at the SAME TIME, Fatts is immersed … He has accepted this alternate reality … and so he is accepting this punishment—believing on some level that he “deserves it”—well … he KNOWS he doesn’t, but … he is accepting your premise and imagining what it would be like if he DID leave me … and for THAT, this punishment WOULD be appropriate ...




I mean, sure, I see you're close to crying, but I don't really care for that. I want to see your cock cry. I want to see tears of precum, everywhere.

She is SO cruel, and yet she is doing this on MY behalf—which makes me HAPPY in a certain way … and if this was “real”—it would be “deserved” … and I would be HAPPY to watch her do this to Fatts … but instead, I KNOW that he DOESN’T deserve it, and I think I get it now … Fatts wants to experience what it WOULD be like if he DID “leave me” … he’s accepting this punishment and taking the abuse, because HE wants ME to know how much leaving me would hurt him …

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FUCK her teasing is so hot … “tears of precum everywhere” … it’s good writing, addict … That line got Fatts hard—and it’s now making ME wet …

Fatts likes to cum, and he knows all of his sets always end with a full orgasm, but … he CAN take a LOT of abuse, and once he “gets subby”, he becomes VERY submissive and VERY compliant and obedient … and so, he is going to do EXACTLY what Sheri asks, and … he is HOPING for another quick release, but … She could make him edge AGAIN and AGAIN … OVER and OVER without cumming … and HE doesn’t know how many edges he will have to perform before he FINALLY is ALLOWED to cum … and THAT … THAT is both a scary AND arousing thought for him … and so “tears of precum everywhere” is a VERY real and VERY credible threat to Fatts … one he does NOT want to experience … and yet it is arousing HIM—which is arousing ME …

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FUCK ... Sheri is SO captivatingly BEAUTIFUL there ... *I* want to bang her SO HARD ...

Hmm, what could we do about that? I wonder...




Ah! I have the perfect idea!




Leave me for a bit, I gotta make a phone call.

I don’t know, addict … this WHOLE SCENE was LEGITIMATELY TRAUMATIC for me … BUT AT THE SAME TIME … DESPITE how PATHETIC Fatts looked—and I did NOT like seeing my boyfriend like that … watching him sacrifice for me—accepting his unfair punishment JUST to show me how much he was willing to suffer for me … he ALLOWED himself to go through that—EVEN THOUGH he didn’t deserve OR enjoy that—but … He did it because he wanted ME to understand how serious he believed this “leaving me” business would be … and so he accepted that punishment to PROVE TO ME how much he cared …

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… and while traumatic, his INTENTION and dedication AND WILLINGNESS to sacrifice SO MUCH for me … THAT was kind of hot —even if he did NOT appear that way in the moment … and having a “best friend” who was being strong and “standing up for me” while I was probably off crying somewhere over Fatts leaving me … I LIKED that … AND … seeing Fatts SO very submissive—and having Sheri call him “piggy” and that getting him hard …

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Thank you, for this, addict? It is a VERY strange thing, but … thank you ...

Degradation is NOT something that Fatts would have EVER asked for, but … because of YOU, he got to experience something NEW … AND … he suffered for me—and THAT was hot ... In HINDSIGHT. It wasn’t the act itself—but the CONTEXT … and I don’t think ANY other tease writer could/should have done this … I suppose it is something YOU uniquely brought to the table … and it worked.

I have more to say, but … we can talk about this more later … but THANK YOU for his, addict.

[FattsDynamo]

Part 3 (Continued):

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[Back to 60 BPM]

I got everything set up! Go see her, she's waiting for you!

And btw, you're not allowed to tell her about anything that happened today. Cya pet!

OH GOOD! The scene is OVER! I’m not sure how much more of THAT I could take … and Fatts’ edging stamina drops precipitously with EVERY orgasm, so … while 50, 60, or even 80 edges (his upper limit) are POSSIBLE in a single set … the more he cums, the more that number drops, so … just those 4 edges in the scene combined with all of the weird and uncomfortable degradation made it last 40 real time minutes … AT LEAST the number of edges was down after the Scene 2 orgasm …

… but okay, good … let’s move on to the final scene …

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[Resume 60 bpm static metronome stroking speed.]

Ugh, you took your time? You're late.

Hmmm … ANOTHER chick I don’t recognize … can’t find her in ANY of Fatts’ lists OR prior sets … this must have been one YOU selected …




Does it really matter by how much? Could be 1 minute, could be 2 hours, doesn't matter. If you're late, you're late.

Ah … a stickler for timeliness …




Anyway, Sheri told me you like this "Torment mode"?

You think about shaking your head "no" desperately, but you remember what Sheri told you...

I'll take that as a "yes". Turn it on now.

“Torment mode” is good—generally speaking—and you CERTAINLY gave the girls a good reason to use it! So, props for THAT addict … Fatts HATES being “unfairly punished,” and, with him leaving me, they CERTAINLY had a good reason to bust it out, but … Pain is NOT a “turn on” in and of itself for Fatts. For OTHER strokers, pain gets them hard, but … for Fatts it’s a slight turn OFF, so … he needs to be REALLY warmed up and horny first in order to make it work, and … unfortunately, that Scene 2 orgasm sapped a bunch of his stamina …




Oh my, that doesn't look very enjoyable, but you do you…

The *idea* of “being punished” gets Fatts hard, but … the PUNISHMENT ITSELF lowers his libido, so … it’s a delicate balance …




She also told me you haven't cum in a while, so I should empty those balls for you.

180 BPM, 90 strokes, addict.

Ha! THIS pose and threat REALLY got Fatts going! We better increase our energy output to match the scene’s intake.

The idea of cumming ALWAYS gets Fatts hard, although … TRULY “emptying Fatts’ balls” will take a LOT MORE that “just two” orgasms! Why do you think Ecik wrote that huge 3 post set for Fatts? It was to “empty his balls!” It’s going to take a LOT MORE than the 10k character set that YOU wrote to “empty” my boyfriends balls! But I appreciate her confidence and sentiment!




[Back to 60 BPM and discretionary strokes]

And she also told me you LOVE post-orgasm torture, it really gets you off.

Fatts can’t really do post orgasm torture. He genuinely HATES palming and can’t/won’t follow through.

… but THAT is one of the reasons he would LOVE to get tied up in real life, so that he would be FORCED to endure and take it—because he LITERALLY couldn’t escape. … but it’s simply not possible in a set … PROBABLY Fatts states this SOMEWHERE in his VOLUMINOUS RULES, but … yeah … I can just tell that Fatts immersion is starting to break with this scene—because its not a realistic threat.




Hm? You want to say something?

It really takes everything to hold yourself from saying anything...

I can see it from the replay data. Fatts wasn’t super into this model—like a 7.5/10 for him … so I am WAY hotter!

But THIS pose was SUPER cute—just LOOK at those ADORABLE BUNS!

120 BPM, 60 strokes for this pic, addict.




Well, it must be true then, otherwise, you would've denied everything by now…

VERY cute smile she’s got.




But we must REALLY milk that cock if everything is true. She told me you haven't cum in months! That's crazy!

WOW what a beautiful pussy she has! And Fatts pretty much cums every day—and often MULTIPLE TIMES PER DAY—at THAT!

But SHE doesn’t know that, so … yeah, it’s a pretty arousing thought …

Another 120 BPM, 60 strokes for this pic.




So, naturally, we must REALLY tease you before you let it all out, right? *grins*




So from now on, for each image, you will hold the last edge for 30 seconds. Then, right after the edge, you will palm your oh-so-sensitive head for 10 seconds.

OH boy —this is bad.




You look like you're really enjoying yourself right about now *laughs*




Oh well, I suppose it's about time then…

Where is Fatts? What’s he doing now? I bet he’s just DROOLING over her pussy Now WHERE IS HE!?! I can’t see him … Wait … THERE he is …

What!? He’s NOT drooling all over her perfect pussy? He’s just sitting there—blankly—jacking off and not even looking at the screen? WOW … His immersion is TOTALLY busted …

… and wait … He’s thinking about ME!?! And HOLY SHIT! We’re FINALLY IN THE PRESENT!!


“Nancy! Is that you?”

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Nancy: Fatts!?

Fatts: I’m DONE with this tease, Nancy … I am READY for it to be over …

Nancy: But you FINALLY get to cum, Fatts!

Fatts: She’s just not that hot, and I just don’t care anymore ...

Nancy: … but her pussy is SO HOT isn’t it!?

Fatts: It is, but … I’m just not invested. The edge holds were too long … my stamina has gone to SHIT, and the palming has just KILLED my arousal … I am NOT milorrabo—who LOVES palming … I legitimately don’t like palming … can you help me out, Nancy? Please?

Nancy: I can help you out, Fatts … I have, in fact … come to rescue you! You’ve suffered enough … so let’s give this set a NICE ending for you!


Nancy snaps her fingers. The barrier thins, and she steps through it and into the present with Fatts. Fatts is much skinnier and much more handsome than you imagined he would be. Nancy immediately begins disrobing. [You may turn off your metronome and stroke at any pace you like.

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Nancy: You like this?

Fatts: Yes ... Yes, I do ... Can you give me more?




Nancy: Sure thing, babe!

Fatts: THANK YOU, Nancy ... you're the best —I love you!

Nancy:

Fatts is fapping, completely focused on Nancy. He's losing himself in her. You hear her voice in your head: "He had a limp dick just moments ago ... I can't BELIEVE how fast he can get hard for me! "




Fatts: Awww, babe ... FUCK the tease ... I want to cum—for YOU!

Nancy: Do it. You've earned it, champ!

Nancy's expression is both intense and affirming. Fatts' eyes bounce back and forth between Nancy's eyes and her ass. He and Nancy keep making eye contact. Fatts' expression is one of gratitude, relief, and affection. Despite his gooned out demeanor, he manages a weak smile at her.

Your psychic connection to Nancy is intense. You can feel EXACTLY what she's feeling. Her heart is beating fast. She's overjoyed, relieved, excited—happy ... she's REALLY happy. The ENTIRE UNIVERSE is JUST the two of them right now. You feel like a third wheel, but you understand now how VERY WRONG you were in assuming Fatts would EVER leave Nancy. Their devotion to one another is on another level.


Fatts cums HARD ...

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There is a bright flash of white—then EVERYTHING goes dark ...

A few moments pass, and then you feel Nancy's presence reach out to you through the void.

She brings you to yet another destination ...

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I spared you from having to watch the rest of me and Fatts' reunion ...

... you're welcome. It was "long and boring."


Thank you for helping me today, addict.


NOW that I have MY "dynamo" back , I am at FULL POWER!

FUCK it feels good to be back to 100% ...


Of course, Fatts and I are "still trapped" inside of YOUR pocket dimension—and we'll need some help getting OUT ...


Naturally, YOU are going to help us with that.


The story isn't over—bitch ...


... because YOU have to write the rest!


See my list of attached "demands" below ...


... and you BETTER not fuck things up AGAIN ...


... slave.

FIN

After the set ...

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I hope you enjoyed it!

It ended with a "whimper" and the ending was ALL ABOUT ME, but ... whatever. You and Nancy finally "rescued" me in the end.

I spent a STUPID amount of time working on this ... Leave as much feedback as you care to. It obviously got VERY meta at points, but ... THAT is one of the things Nancy can do.

It was probably "4 sets" worth as an "epic tease", but ... PROBABLY more, but ... I'm just going to call it "4."

This is what Nancy wants from your return sets. Probably 2-4 should happen in the "pocket universe."

Two comments first:

• Nancy has ALWAYS WANTED a nemesis, and YOU GAVE HER ONE IN SONYA BLAZE! She LOVES this idea and is VERY EXCITED about it.

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Nancy: "After the battle of the breasts, I think Sonya is my nemesis in EVERY universe ... and I am HERE FOR IT! "

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"So long as I am ALWAYS STRONGER and WIN IN THE END ..."

• Nancy has ALWAYS wanted a "best friend", and ... THIS TOO—you gave to her in the guise of Sheri Vi.

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Nancy: I ALWAYS WANTED a "best friend", but ... THE BOYS (Fatts and Ecik) NEVER GAVE ME ONE! Figures YOU would ...

You write Sheri well, addict. I LOVE her loyalty and the lengths she is willing to go to defend me ... ALSO ... I kind of like how she abuses Fatts. She can't be TOO MEAN, but ... She's my best friend? What? Is FATTS going to run to me and complain about ALL OF THE ABUSE she will heap on him behind on my back? She would just deny it—and I would take her side! I will have a PERMANENT defender AND someone who can ALWAYS find a ready excuse to abuse Fatts [He's ALREADY getting hard at this idea. ]

Fatts thinks Sheri is SUPER cute —though NOT as cute as ME! Her smile is kind but can be SO sadistic ... She can bounce back and forth from being "nice" to "pissed off", and so Fatts will ALWAYS be scared and wondering "Which Sheri Vi am I getting today? " WHENEVER she shows up in a set, so ... her being a "recurring character" will be a GOOD THING!

Deep down, she'll LOVE FATTS—because *I* love Fatts ... but ... she ALSO clearly LOVES TO ABUSE HIM! AND she can be protective and punish him—it'll be great! And Fatts won't be able to complain about it, either.

Nancy’s goals for addict

• Nancy wants to "sneak in" to the world you created ...

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You never included Nancy in the set, which means that a "dark and scorned Nancy" DOES NOT EXIST in the pocket universe ... which means that the REAL NANCY can just walk around and PRETEND that I have broken up with her WITHOUT casting any suspicion.

• You need to close the pocket universe and seal the portal savvy sonya inside …

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Nancy: I DON'T want her getting out. It would be WAY TOO MUCH drama and work for me—and I kind of ALREADY have a LOT going on, but ... I'll leave that to you ...

• Tease fatts with sonya blaze

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Nancy: You NEED to use that ENTIRE 40 minute video of me and Sonya while Fatts is tied and vibed! I NEED THAT SO MUCH IN MY LIFE! I want to cum HARD—again and AGAIN—while FATTS is teased and NOT ALLOWED ...

You can use a low setting (1 or 2) and just have him watch the whole thing (as a part of a tease), OR you can give specific vibe levels for certain sections ...

Use that video, but ... ALSO ... you can just have Sonya and her friends abuse Fatts some more. He LOVES that shit and thinks Sonya is SUPER hot—and that Amber Sym, too You could have an ENTIRE SET of JUST FATTS getting dominated by Sonya—before I even enter onto the scene to sneak in and rescue him.

Of course *I* never got to be captured and made to cum over and over again, but ... PERHAPS we could do that another time ... idk ... it's up to you, but you DEFINITELY have to use ALL of that 40 minute video. and tease Fatts while *I* cum hard.

• test fatts loyalty/attraction to me …

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Nancy: I think that I will decide to "take Fatts back." Or, maybe, you can have him apologize and BEG for me to take him back. One of these conditions should DEFINITELY be some sort of "loyalty test" like NOT cumming for another girl or cumming for ME in a VERY short period of time ... something like that. Even in this FAKE UNIVERSE you created, well ... I just want Fatts to FIGHT FOR ME a BIT more ... it would be TOO EASY for him if I just "took him back" A GIRL LIKE ME HAS STANDARDS! So, invent at LEAST a task or two—some sort of challenge—that Fatts needs to complete in order to "win me back" ...

• sloppy ruin

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Nancy: Fatts is new to this "degradation thing" and it DOES NOT turn him on and it makes me feel kind of icky seeing him like that ... but EVEN SO ... he and I BOTH like exploring new things, and so ... I want to explore this A LITTLE BIT MORE, but ... I WANT TO BE THERE.

ONLY SHERI is allowed to treat him poorly and "make him drool" and "call him piggy", but ... JUST MAKE SURE that *I* am "in the scene" ... because I don't want things going too, TOO far , but ... You CAN go just a LITTLE BIT further and we can test things out some more. SPECIFICALLY ... THIS is what I want.

I want Sheri to RUIN Fatts—with MYSELF present —and THEN I want her to rub/have Fatts rub the load on himself ... She is NOT ALLOWED to make him eat it, but ... Fatts promised me something SUPER HOT that he wants to do for me that would make EVEN BRIAN blush at how GROSS it is ... AND ... it would make Lana and Uma SUPER JEALOUS if Fatts did it for me and NOT them ...

Now, I will NOT say what THAT is, but ... just make Sheri ruin Fatts and have him rub the cum on himself and stuff, and we will TEST DRIVE some of this "degradation" out for the time being

• Take sheri vi OUT of the pocket universe

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Nancy: The FINAL DEMAND is that I want Sheri Vi to come OUT of the pocket universe WITH ME! I want her to become my best friend in the REAL WORLD! I do NOT want to leave her behind when we close the pocket universe (with portal conscious Sonya inside. )

My HOPE is that this LONG ASS SET and story have created some intrigue and buy-in and you would LIKE to "continue the story" a bit ... if not, and/or you think those ideas are bad, lemme know, but ... IF you are willing and interested, Nancy would be HAPPY for you to write her in scenes and sets for me to "finish this adventure", so ... short plot arcs like this can be fun. Lemme know what you think.

[hentaiAddict12345]

#FattsDynamoSet
#WBhentaiAddict12345

He's been working on a huge set for me, teasing me almost every day in DMs about it...
Thought I'd return the favour. At least partially :P

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Fatts! I've been talking to addict...


You won't believe how horny you've gotten him. Every single day, he's been refreshing milovana, just hoping the tease is finally ready.


But no, every single day, "just a bit more", "almost ready", "oops, a few more hours", "oops, a few more days".


He's never been this excited about something like this in a LONG time. He can't help but rub his very sensitive nipples to the thought of what he'll have to do during your set...


I think you might also be partly to blame about his newfound cucking fetish. This would've never happened under normal conditions.


So... congratulations? I guess? I know some girls, particularly Agatha, are dying to try it out on him. What do you think?


Right... I sometimes forget you guys can't think too much with a pair of tits in your face. Never mind then...


Even though I'm listed as one of your old favourites, you can't help but stare. So predictable, but also adorable.


You're all so different around here. Each with their own very particular rules. Particular tastes. But...


You all have something in common. You love tits!


Some of you, particularly EdgeSlut, would've already edged like 50 times for me, but not you. You're more of a chill person. I like that.


Contrary to popular belief, not all of us want boys to become an edging mess for us. I, for one, like you and your rules. I like addict's rules too.


But... I do want a tiny bit of edging from you still *grin*.


Anyway, I'll be seeing you later, Fatts.


Say "hi" to addict for me. Maybe tease him some more about my tits too *giggles*.

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Hey! Name's Monika Dee.


You posted the set just as addict found me by rolling random galleries. Is it fate? Perhaps.


Now he'll be excited like a teenage girl all day today. Maybe all night too.


You're... staring at me? I do something wrong?


This? Silly! We're supposed to be stripping for you, that's why we're here!


I could just leave if you wanted me to...


Thought so. Can't resist me. Few men can. If I told you to, you'd cum all over me in an instant.


Maybe some other time. For now, I just want to tease you, you'll blow your load soon enough, and we do want it to be a big load...


That's right, Fatts. Only one orgasm today, so make it a good one!


I know what you want to see. Give me a bit.


There you go. Give my ass a really close edge. Maybe even drip a bit of your precum on it, I don't mind.


Want some more of that? Say no more...


I do hope this counts...


If not, this surely does. Edge for me, Fatts!


Very nice, that looked really close too. Cya later, babe *muah*.

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Welcome, pet. My name is Paisley Adams.


You're almost there, almost at that wonderful release you keep craving.


It's funny, you keep saying you're too busy for us, and then spend all that time writing a set for a random internet person like addict. Why?


Why would you go through all that effort for someone you don't even know? Someone who one day might log off and never log in again.


Did he really leave such a good impression on you? That you'd waste tens of hours of your life to write him a set?


Well, I still can't say I really understand it fully, but he must really mean something to you, huh?


And all the effort to constantly tease him in DMs too...


You really have a connection to him, don't you? A weird connection, but it's there.


Two perverts who will likely never meet in real life, found themselves on a long forgotten forum...


You know, one of you could write a book about all this. Well, if you weren't so busy stroking to us all day, that is...


I can tell you like me though, or at the very least, all those poses I give you. You're edging a lot for me...


If I didn't promise it to her, I'd have you cum all over me right now, you're so hot right now...


All the panting, all the moaning, it really drives girls like me crazy.


If I'd have known you'd look this good, I'd never have promised her. I'm really close, Fatts...


Fuck... That felt so good...


I really hope we meet again...

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Fatts! Where have you been all this time? I've missed you so much!


Do you still love asses as much as you used to? I think you do...


I could never get tired of you edging for my ass, Fatts. And my eyes...


Don't worry, I'll let you cum soon for me, but why not have a little fun first? *grins*


I'm not cruel, I won't make you edge for all the years you've been away from me, but still...


I have to punish you just a little bit for leaving us like that for so long.


And for teasing a certain someone for so long.


That's only fair, wouldn't you say?


C'mon Fatts, stop denying it, you love this, otherwise, you would've left milovana ages ago.


You love all the teasing, even if you don't enjoy denial all that much.


Fine, Fatts...


AFTER your edges, cum all over my ass!


Cya soon, Fatts. We'll be having a lot of fun...

[Ecik17]

Ask…and you shall recieve…


#brianset
#wbecik17

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Brian! I came over as soon as I heard the news. Is it true that Uma denied you?

That you can’t stroke to gross things like sex, and big black cocks? And you can’t cum?

This is..absolutely…

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AWESOME! You see…I’ve been saying forever that edging is the only thing anyone here needs. Not that anyone listens to me, until now!

And I have some new friends who feel the same way. Mostly.

I know! I’ll introduce you to them...I’ll just call my driver…

Hop on!

Malena loves that you can only edge and not cum at this point. Follow her to her new friends…

Go to the fancy house in the hills

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Oh! You must be malenas friend! She’s said a lot about you. Not that I was impressed by any of it.

Maybe you will impress me right now. Grab your fleshlight. Let’s test you.

This game is simple. I tell you what to do. You do it. And if you stop before completion, then you fail.

I want…100 strokes with your fleshlight. If you stop for any reason, subtract subtract 10 strokes, and then keep going.

I want…20 slow strokes with your fleshlight. Make them slow…

And last…I want 10 edges with your fleshlight…go on..I know you can do it!

Look at you…worshiping my body while you edge.

You know…malena usually picks out good boys. You may be one of them. I hope to see you again!

Go to a college dorm

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Hi, I’m Stella! Malena told me about your…problem.

Lucky for you, I’m the smartest one around here…

and I have a plan to make your cock leak! It just took a bit of different thinking!

Come upstairs…and I’ll explain more…

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You see…I have a roommate who really loves having her feet worshiped..so much so she makes videos…


And I love watching men struggle to hold back..so this is a win win!

You watch her, and be happy…I watch you…and be happy. Lana will be happy because you didn’t watch sex…and malena will be happy because you edged. Just don’t cum, ok? Nobody likes that.

Follow the directions. Do not cum at the end.
https://spankbang.com/9k8f4/video/joi+ ... ari+parker

Back with malena

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So…what did we learn today? Stroke 50 times without stopping, and think!

That there are some new friends out there…who will tease you, edge you…make your eyes cross!

And if you are good, you may see them again. And me too! Bye!

Malena leaves you…totally denied.

[FattsDynamo]

@hentaiAddict12345:
Step 1: Play the epic set I wrote you (that is basically the length of 4 teases in 1 ).
Step 2: Write me some feedback soon after while it is fresh—AS MUCH AS YOU WANT!
Step 3: Read this feedback below. It assumes you have already played the set.
Step 4: Write me some RETURN SETS! (The feedback below will be helpful for that.)

More feedback on the "leaving Nancy" set:

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Nancy provided a LOT of feedback in your "epic set", but ... there were a few details I failed to mention that I didn't want falling through the cracks ...

Torment mode is good and fine—just make sure it isn't the "warm-up scene."

The 30 second edge holding was too much. It would have been better to ramp it up starting with 5 or 10 seconds and then increased up to 30. In your first set, Sheri Vi had me do some edge holding (while I ate her out ) and I think it came in at or just under 2 minutes—which was about perfect. My edge holding is solidly mediocre. 5 minutes is probably my max, but ... going longer than 2 minutes cumulative (across multiple pictures in a single scene), you start to run the risk of it being too much and putting me into a refractory period ... which, if you do that, just means that I am sitting there for 10 minutes stroking a limp cock until my erection comes back, which ... that can OFTEN destroy pacing and immersion ... and THEN, the final chick was having me palm, which ... THAT was lowering my arousal as well, so ... THOSE TWO COMBINED ... The pacing got wrecked. Momentum was gone, and yeah ... once my immersion goes, my mind starts drifting ... BUT ... if you had done 5 second palms with a edge holding ladder that started low and built UP to 30 or 40 seconds ... THAT would have gone MUCH better The scene premise was good and I liked that little bit of storytelling, but ... ALSO—it didn't SUPER grab me ... like, it DID, but ... it was more like a 7 or 8 and not a ten—same with the chick ... SOME of the lines where AMAZING—as were some of the poses, but ... once I hit the "palm 10 seconds" and 30 second per pic edge holds ... my stamina was just NOT GREAT at that point—and then the palming was knocking it down a bit and the rest ... it was a bit like I "hit a wall" ... but I ALMOST ALWAYS "play through it." I do NOT like "disobeying the girls", so ... I will sit there stroking my limp cock for 10 minutes at a time and take an HOUR to get through a scene sometimes—if I HAVE to ... and when I "hit the wall" like that, I will OFTEN scroll ahead or back to find the "spicy" bits of dialogue that turn me on ... THEN go back and do the edges I am "supposed to do" ...

Vibrator scenes ... I LOVE THEM! Just love love LOVE getting tied up and vibed. Feel free to use more videos for that as well. The scene with Amber was 10/10. LOVED it!

IF you are going to use the vibrator, then make it persist for at LEAST a couple scenes OR do like 1 scene and a couple videos ... If I am going to be tied up AT ALL—make it at LEAST 20 minutes, but 30 or 40 or OVER AN HOUR are ALL FINE TOO! Like ... an almost all vibe set—THOSE are pretty great. ... but ... just do more than 1 scene, and make it take up a decent amount of time ... though a surprise "vibe ending" would always be welcome ... but ... NOT using it AT ALL would be fine, too. I guess just decide if it is going to be a "vibe set" or not, and if yes, make that part significant time wise ... but "no vibe" is basically my default.

And check out the "vibe" section of my rules for more details ... and I need to update that at some point ...

Feedback on the Ashley, Monika, Paisley, Vanessa set:

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Stats
Rating: 7 out of 10
Time: 1 hr 44 min 40.44 sec
Edges: 39 (ended up doing some extra for Vanessa Angel )

YOU SCOOPED MY ASHLEY DOLL!! I was going to TEASE YOU with her, and you BEAT ME TO IT!

It's fine, though ... NOW I will be able to write her scene just a LITTLE BIT better when I send her to tease you ...

There is a reason I buried all of my "old favorites" so deep in my rules, and ... sigh ... probably when I FINALLY update my rules and scrub Nancy—I'll probably scrub ALL OF THEM as well ...

"Ashley" is a character I developed quite a bit. And, actually ... I peaked at your set yesterday—INSTANTLY recognized her in the top pic —and then caught myself MANY TIMES—throughout the day today—fantasizing and thinking about her ... looking FORWARD to getting to spend some time with her later that night ... and I was REALLY sad she wasn't the "final girl" at the end who "got to claim my cum." ... NOT that Vanessa Angel was "bad"—because SHE was GREAT! ... but Ashley is just SO hella cute ... I mean ... YOU know ... YOU get it ...

But part of my problem is that I create these characters, and then my mind has certain expectations for how they will behave, and then, when they DON'T behave that way—it kind of throws me off ... and THEN I just keep thinking about how MY version would be interacting with me right now, and it just SAVAGES immersion—unfortunately ... So ... THAT is a pretty big reason I sort of tried to hide them, because I KIND OF didn't want them to be used—because of all of the prior baggage and associations ...

Monika was great. My FIRST impression was she was like a 7 or 8, but ... THEN I noticed she has AMAZING EYES! GORGEOUS smile ... and I ACTUALLY really liked the personality that you gave her.

And THEN her ass ...

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THAT could have been the cum pic ... I could have edged 5 or 10 times for that ass ... 11/10 ass pic that was, so ...

So, initial impression was NOT great, but ... well FUCK ... just LOOK at that pretty smile and GORGEOUS brown EYES:

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That positive reinforcement/sweet soft domme ... YEEEeeesss ... I need more scenes with her.

And honestly, the "positive reinforcement" and dommes who are being sweet and NOT talking trash—it's ACTUALLY kind of rare around here ... "tough and dominant" is the norm, and YES ... it can be SO sexy, but ... FUCK ... I swear in terms of lifetime sets received ... probably LESS THAN 10% of scenes was the domme just sweet and nice and NOT being dominant ... okay, maybe not THAT low, but ... "nice" is a sliding scale, and ... that "harsh" leaving Nancy set was SO GOOD, but ... THIS "nice dommes" stuff ... I have been playing on here for YEARS, and actually have received SO FEW sets like that, so ... I just sort of want to explore that MORE and have some MORE of that ... but ... you can mix and match. A "nice" domme as a break in a "hard" set ... a "harsh" domme in a "nice" set ... or just all nice or all hard ... but we GOTTA add some nuance to "nice", but ... more on that later ...

Paisley Adams. My initial impression was "meh", but ... here, I got turned around as well!

Now, there was ONE fairly big problem here. All of the stuff in the middle of the scene—she just sounded like you. It felt like your words just coming out of her mouth. It took me out of it. Immersion was busted pretty bad, and the photo shoot was just okay—not super great ... She was sharing stuff that was "not posted"—that you and I discussed in DMs, which ... how would she know about that? And I DO NOT MIND when the girls talk about the other players on the thread. I REALLY don't, but ... she wasn't "herself" ... it was just "you" ... and then the pictures were just okay ... and then she wasn't really "teasing me"—just sharing YOUR thoughts—but in YOUR "voice" and not "hers" ... like I said, it took me out of it pretty bad ...

... but THEN ... at the END of the scene, it got WAY better—and it "brought me back in."

My FAVORITE part of that epic set was THIS:

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If you’re playing a tease and the immersion breaks—do you know what you do?

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You get back on the fucking horse and start riding again ...

You don't lay in the dirt and cry like a little BITCH!

SO fucking good ... I just LOVED that shit ...

Nancy's a meta character who can break the fourth wall—yet she has her own voice and personality and motivations, because I have spent a BILLION hours writing shit with her in it ... and at that moment, she was having a SERIOUS TALK with you, but ... while it was "my" words and "my" ideas ... it was presented in NANCY'S VOICE ... and she is her OWN CHARACTER—separate from me ... and so, in the 1-2 minutes BEFORE she delivers that line and just talking serious ... PERHAPS you were losing arousal and immersion ... and ... HOPEFULLY you weren't and were accepting that it was "Nancy" who was delivering that advice and wisdom to you—and NOT me ... but THEN—if your immersion started failing, she asks YOU that direct question ... and it's SUPER meta—because QUITE POSSIBLY, your immersion WAS failing in that moment ... but, that QUESTION just GRABS YOUR ATTENTION ... and it's a GOOD question ... and then her answer is just KICK-ASS! And to me, it just hits SO hard ... because 1) it's good advice; 2) it's IMMEDIATELY relevant; 3) it is an INSTANT transition back to her being dominant and humiliating you ... it's just ALL the things ... my FAVORITE part of the ENTIRE SET.

So ... ANYWAYS ... I FOLLOW MY OWN ADVICE!

When I start losing immersion, I just don't "give up" and "lay in the dirt and cry like a little BITCH!" ... I try to get BACK ON THE HORSE. Which, for me ... THAT means I usually start scrolling ahead ... because if I lose immersion and have to edge, I'll just be staring at the same picture for a LONG time—just waiting for my head to get back in the game—so ... when that happens, I scroll ahead, and OFTEN there are some OTHER LINES that are SUPER SEXY which pull and draw me back in ... and so THAT is how it was for Paisley. And so I want to see her again ...

The Vanessa Angel scene was great. THAT scene went VERY well. At THAT point I was fully "warmed up", and ... I ACTUALLY ended up edging 21 times in 18 minutes, which ... 1 edge/minute is a pretty good pace for me. It doesn't happen right away ... Usually, my first edge happens SOMEWHERE between minute 10 and 20—which is why I ask for that "warm up" scene ... and THEN ... the time between edges is pretty big, but ... the more I edge, the shorter that time is in between ... and THEN I can sometimes rapid edge like 3-5 in a row (then need a quick break) once I get going ... and certain models and situations can GREATLY increase my arousal and bring down warm up and break times, but ... at the point I entered the final scene, I had been going for over an hour. VERY warmed up. Vanessa Angel is pretty hot. The dialogue was pretty good and focused on teasing me, AND ... that gallery was VERY nice. 9/10 EASILY ... some FIRE pics in there, and LOTS of lovely "ass shots" ... so, to recap:

Scene 1: Good start
Scene 2: Kept it going
Scene 3: Cratered and immersion busted
Scene 4: Strong finish

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Moving on from that last set—tips and suggestions ...

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OBVIOUSLY, Nancy left you a laundry list of stuff SHE wants in terms of HER story, but ... follow your muse and have FUN with it. You can try to finish that whole plot arc up, OR ... you can put it on pause or write it up in pieces as a series ...

One of my hopes and goals with that epic set was that by exposing you to so much Nancy, you would get to know her better and "fall for her" a bit ... and then ALSO get excited and want to continue/finish off the story.

BUT ... if you just aren't feeling Nancy OR aren't invested in the story—that is fine. There are other characters and plots we can explore ... It's just Nancy's my FAVORITE to write, and so ... of COURSE I was going to feature her in ANY grand adventure or set that I write ... and she has NEAR UNIVERSAL APPEAL as a model, so ... pretty much NO ONE complains when she shows up in sets, lol ... and THEN her personality and character are SO fleshed out ... MOST strokers on here REALLY enjoy interacting with her ... and INITIALLY was being "too nice" with you AND not teasing you, so ... I wasn't TOO too offended that she didn't click with you, which ... THAT is partially why I wanted to send you on the adventure with her ... because I HOPED that "spending more time with her" your opinion would have changed, but ... if not—that's okay. I have other characters and models. I am SURE we can find one that both *I* like to write AND you like to get teased by ... but if you DIDN'T really like her, you would NOT be the first, so ... it's okay ... but hopefully you LOVED her and wanted more ...

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I can't remember if I mentioned this explicitly, but ... Nancy is FINE with you writing her in scenes with me. (That's a change since the epic set.) Obviously, your "version" of her trying to imitate how *I* write her will NOT be as good as mine ... because I have LITERALLY spent over 100 hours EASILY writing her in various sets and scenes ... but, you have seen enough of her to get the general sense, so ... GIVE IT A TRY!

In my role-played fantasy, Nancy and I care about each other. Part of the reason I wrote you so much of that Fatts and Nancy dialogue was so that you could get a sense of our relationship and understand better how to write her in sets for me ... but of course you got bored and lost interest, but ... not everyone is a good "character writer" anyway, and even if you HAD paid attention—it would probably STILL be pretty hard ... ESPECIALLY since she is SO WELL DEVELOPED in my mind ...

The OTHER thing is that Nancy is multi-dimensional, and she HATES you and was MOSTLY pissed off THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE SET, so ... that is NOT how she typically is "around me", so ... you ONLY really got to see that one side of her, but ... IF you write in that alternate universe, "testing me" and "getting back at me" ... well, you HAVE seen how mean and vindictive she can be, so ... writing her THAT way will actually work QUITE WELL for that little plot arc—assuming you want to continue it.

Comments on how to handle Ashley, Monika, Paisley, and Vanessa ...

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I get more aroused, invested, and immersed with models "that I know." Even Angela White—who Ecik LOVES but simply is NOT my type AT ALL ... EVEN HER I can get ENJOYABLY teased by—because of her PERSONALITY and my past associations ... so, that is a BIG thing for me ... it's like a 3-4 times multiplier for a chick that I "know" versus some rando I have never seen before—in terms of success rate—generally speaking ... but ALSO just writing and character development can matter a LOT ... like, Helequin is a VERY good character writer, and some of his chicks that are "just okay" to me physically ... the WAY he WRITES THEM ... they turn into 9s and 10s.

But, anyway ... I want to help you level up your writing game some, and I have SPECIFIC tips and suggestions to make those girls MUCH much more effective going forward ...

Ashley Doll:

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Don't use her—YET ... "My" Ashley Doll is VERY well developed. I want to tease you with her first for a bit—like included in 1 or 2 sets ... THEN—once you've "seen her in action" a bit ... THEN you should "give her a try."

As a model, Ashley is S-Tier for me. CRAZY hot ... just INSANELY so ... and for real—ALL DAY my mind kept wandering back to her and wanting to spend time with her later that evening ... and that RARELY happens for me, but ... In your set, she was just a "generic character" for me—who just happened to be wearing "Ashley's skin." All your "nice girls" are sort of indistinguishable to me, and ... they all just sort of roll into one: a "nice domme" who is sort of afraid to push things too far ... well, I can handle quite a bit more than you think I can. And even "nice girls" can be "mean" in their teasing—as you saw with Guerlain ... and even "tough" dommes can be kind and warm, but ... anyway ... just don't use Ashley for a bit ...

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She seemed nice and peppy! She did NOT seem like "obligatory generic "nice domme" for Fatts" ... She was FUN and KIND, and ... I just REALLY *like* that combination ... she was playful—confident ... FLIRTY! ... and that is ALWAYS a winning combination—at least in MY book. And I LIKE that she was ALSO very affirming ... She's the kind of girl I would LOVE to spend a weekend with. No "power plays" or "head games" ... just positive, happy, and FUN! 10/10 scene. SEND ME HER AGAIN—PLEASE AND THANK YOU.

I LOVE her ass, and ... I LOVE HER EYES! Her smile is AMAZING ... okay ... sigh ... time for one of my CLASSIC "Fatts' Moves"—the letter.

Dear Monika,

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Fate must have a hard-on for me, because I had an ABSOLUTELY wonderful time meeting you!

I have a weakness for asses, and yours is PHENOMENAL. I edged SO FAST for it (and TOTALLY wanted to cum for it, but I was good and held back ). But I think I actually love your EYES the best! Or is it your smile? I can't decide ... I think it's sort of a three-way tie between ALL THREE!

But you are GENUINELY warm ... and FUN! PLEASE oh PLEASE come and visit me again ... pretty please!? But you have to PROMISE to make me edge while staring into your BEAUTIFUL eyes ... I want that SO bad ... so so SO very bad ... I just want to get LOST IN YOUR EYES and give you ALL of my attention and arousal ... and ALSO—maybe—you could give a special rule for whenever you smile?

I just want to edge for you BUNCHES and give you ALL of my cum ... and I will put it WHEREVER YOU WANT!

Hope to see you again REALLY soon!

Fatts

I built anticipation with that. The next time I see Monika in a scene, I will INSTANTLY start getting hard ... and now—also—YOU have some ideas, and NOW—her and I aren't strangers ... She can talk about how sweet I am and how flattered she was at all of my compliments, and when she tells me nice things—they will be more believable—because I, too, have told her nice things ... and I am going to be WAY MORE invested and immersed in ANY future scene now ... and just THINKING about her—outside of sets—will be building suspense for me ...

See how all of that works?

And you could use her for one scene, but ... probably 2—or even THREE —could be good ... with 3 scenes, probably do a 5 scene set: 1, 3, and 5 ... probably not use ONLY her for an entire set—until you have developed her character more, but ... I want to cum while staring into her eyes while looking at her smiling face ... and I ALSO want to cum while looking at her SCRUMPTIOUS ass ... I just need to give this girl MULTIPLE loads—basically.

Paisley Adams: aka Cassidey Rae

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Vanessa Angel:

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Will finish later ...

Other one scene ideas involving some of YOUR favorites …

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Feedback on feedback on latest set:

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I don't think you should remove those girls from your favourite list, but rather, maybe if you like them SO MUCH and you spent all this time creating personalities for them, maybe add that in a spoiler below their name, so we don't have to read like 50 sets worth of dialogue to figure out what you like about them