EdgeSlut0828 wrote: Thu Oct 10, 2024 8:33 pm
Quick question for anyone I saw a few people have their rules imbedded as a link in their posts. If someone could let me know how to do that so I don't have to copy paste every time that would be great.
Make a separate post that contains your rules.
Click your name next to "logout" which will take you to your user panel.
Click the "Profile" tab, then click "edit signature."
Create a signature that will appear at the bottom of all of your posts that includes the hyperlink to your rules post.
To get your rules post URL, click the "Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!" link at the top of the rules post. Normally, when navigating, you are taken to a page of posts on the thread, but, by clicking the post link itself, it will be a DIFFERENT LINK that goes DIRECTLY to your rules post on its page.
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
Overall a set for me needs to just have sections of different girls teasing me with 1-2 lines of text per image. Incorporate as many or as few rules from here as you like. Below is just a general list of things I love, like, and dislike in a set. Right now my favorite thing from the list below in sets is: Censors
Love: Edging, Censors***, Eye Contact , Lingerie, Commands/ additional rules, Unfair games, Solo/Lesbian Pics, Tits, Being called Pet, Toy, Slut, or any other more playful name Like: Multiple orgasms*, Humiliation, Stroking, CBT, Pussy, Ass, Being called Bitch, Whore, etc... but only when deserved Don'ts: Anal, Chastity, palming, Milf, PC muscle squeezes(just don't like it as much in sets), any other extremes
*For multiple orgasms I have only been able to keep going if I ruin by using 1 finger on the sweet spot behind my cockhead. If in a set please tell me to ruin like this.
Recently I have become a complete censor slut. I have an auto censor extension that will censor images in a set for me. By default it is on and only comes off during sets here. During a set feel free to tell me to use it as much or as little as you like. Censored body parts will still count as revealed for edges.Here are all the different features I use on it:
Body parts to censor:
Tits, Ass, pussy, feet, and belly.
Types of censors in order from least to most censoring:
Blur, Black Box
If during a censored section a body part isn't censored that should be it 3 very hard ball slaps.
Default rules- Stroking for first 3 images only. After that all Default rules on the rest of the set. 30 strokes per image All edges have a default rest time of 15-20 seconds and can be changed by girls Eye contact- 1 edge
Pussy- 1 edge
Tits- 1 edge
Ass- 1 edge
Feet- 1 edge
Lingerie- 1 edge
Latex- 1 edge per nudity covered
Stockings/thigh highs- 2 edges
On her Knees- 3 rapid fire edges (5 sec break)
Girls can verbally command edge holds too up to a max of 3 minutes.
High heels- 3 ball slaps after edging
Tattoo/Piercing- 1 Hard ball squeeze after edging
Edge Slut Mode (ONTOP OF DEFAULT RULES)- This mode forces me to hold the last edge of an image. All time is cumulative and will add to one long edge hold. Rest time after Edge holds is max 30 seconds and can be changed by the girls. + 1 edge every image
Every regular edge to the image- 5 seconds
Stockings- 20 seconds
Wet- 15 seconds
No specific rule for it but girls can command me to hold the edge with 1 finger (Way more intense and longest I've done is only like 30-40 seconds).
Girls are welcome to add rules over these if they would want to or add onto my rules if they have the power to do that.
My Goddess can add rules to my Default Mode or Edgeslut Mode whether I want to or not. Anyone on my top 7 list can add rules/games that exist throughout an entire set. They can also suggest permanent rules to add and I decide if I should keep them. Anyone else can only add rules for their section whether they are a favorite or a new introduction.
GODDESS Niemira- Recently became my Goddess after lots of time of the edge for her. She is very demanding and knows I am just her toy to edge. Goddess of Edge Holding and loves to see me suffer on long edges. First and only girl I have eaten my own cum for.
-Edgeslut mode always on and edge holding time quadrupled (4X). Ignore 3 min max on edge holds. Record: 15 min
1. Alissa Foxy - Was my Goddess for a long time before Niemira. She is waiting on me to regret my decision and come back begging for her to take me back. - Edgeslut mode always on, +10 instead of +5 seconds per edge, Only eye contact while edging.
2.Kika- The girl who ruined me during NNN. She is playfully evil in the way she goes about teasing me. 11/10 body and eyes. She knows she drives me crazy.
- Edge slut mode always active for Kika. I may only make eye contact while holding an edge. Any eye contact otherwise adds 1 edge up to 3 max.
3. Debora a: One of the girls really into taking advantage of humiliating me. Is the Queen of Censors and will never uncensor her body for me. Only her feet if I beg her enough.
- Edgeslut mode and censors always on. +10 seconds cumulative every image and +10 every time she verbally humiliates me.
4.Red Fox (Michelle H)- Has become a favorite of mine over the months on HMC and was the first girl to ruin me. Loves to show me her "fiery" personality - + 1 edge for her Red Hair. Other redheads that appear after red fox in a set +1 edge
5. Aislin: I am her permanent censorslut and she loves it. I am not allowed to see her any of her body.
-Every censor on and 1 rapid fire edge for every 2 censor bubbles.
6. Kay J - She is a very cruel Mistress to me and loves to see me suffer/punish me. Will do anything to get other girls mad and punish me too. - Breaks between edges are 10 seconds max. If she is on her knees its 5 rapid fire edges.
7. Alisa Amore: She has the one of the best pairs of tits and knows it. Will tease me with them all the time.
- Edgeslut mode always on. +5 seconds cumulative per edge every time I see her tits.
8. Emily Bloom: My old Goddess who was recently removed from this list until I was urged to put her back.
-+1 edge every pic +2 if her perfect pussy is showing.
Other favorites- Not an exact order but closer to the top means I like them more.
Maxa Saloma
Adriana Morriss
Jennifer Mackay
Rinna Ly
Kaleesy
Alice Mido
Eva Elfie
Valerica Steele
Katya Clover
Mila Azul
Marta Gromova
Ellie Luna
Roberta Berti
Gloria Sol
Elle Tan
Sonya Blaze
Carli Banks
Anna Melody
Freya Mayer
Linda Elisson
Chloe Toy
Sybil A
Faye Reagan
Lexi Belle
Nancy Ace
Nikia A
Barbara
Candice B
Jia Lissa
Any suicide girl
Hentai/animated stuff
Girls that haven't been in my sets but would like to see. (Not in any order and all names are from PornPics)
Adriana Regent
Aleksandrina
Guinevere Huney
Jen Loveheart
Experiments- Stuff I don't know if I will like but would like to try so not in any of the above categories.
-None
Homework
-50 edges daily with last one held for 5 min until I receive and play a set from hentaiaddict
Orgasms- The girls can decide between full orgasm, ruin, multiple ruins, or denial. Can command me to eat my own cum no promises I go through with it. Any accidental orgasms should be eaten.
Edges in last set- 369 hentaiaddict
Most edges in a set- 603 in hentaiaddicts set (March 31)
Edges since last orgasm- 663
Last full orgasm- June 19th
Last ruin- June 17th
Last edited by EdgeSlut0828 on Wed Jun 25, 2025 5:41 pm, edited 98 times in total.
The girl selection was very hot, and I liked how they were all mad at me. Now, on to per-section feedback:
Mila
A good starter. She's right, I wouldn't survive her kicks, I know how hard she can be. I also loved those poses where she squeezed those tits.
Foxy
I also loved this section. And a bit about me, I just like looking at their expression and eyes while I stroke every now and then, so yeah, my nipples took quite the beating in her section
Eva
Wow, the only girl I didn't piss off, just because you managed to piss her off even more . Also liked this section. Was a nice change of pace from "everyone hates you"
Lola
I don't know her, I just got the name from under the picture. I also loved this section. At first, I thought she meant "Eva", and I thought "Oh, another girl who's going to be nice to me", then when she was mean to me, I remembered she said "Elsa"...uh oh...
She didn't tell me do this directly, but I looked at anything other than her tits while stroking, and played with my nipples while staring at her tits. Was VERY frustrating, and I loved it! She's also such a hottie!
Guerlain
Fuck me... that's a good spot and a good abuse of my rules That outfit is also so hot it makes me drool! I also loved the second outfit.
All around, a great set! No complaints from me... this time
Btw, if you want to have a nice signature instead of a link, you can do this: (Just use your own link instead of mine)
What took you so long??? Do you know how cold it is outside???
Addict helped me find you. YOU BITCH. Turn up that torment mode!
WHY DID YOU DO ALL THAT TO POOR ELLE???
She cried so much on the phone with me, she even sent me a picture of it, you're disgusting!
No, I won't show it to you, wtf???
Are you going to cum all over my face too? You wouldn't dare, I'd cut your balls off.
You know, I really liked what we had going on, and then you had to go ahead and ruin it, huh?
Ruin. Does that word make your cock twitch?
Mmm, it does. Well, at this point, I guess you like ruining more than actually cumming.
Oh, no? You still like spilling your cummies all over instead of just a frustrating dribble? Too bad, pet.
Because I have the perfect way of making sure you'll regret every single drop of cum from Elle's face. Follow me. Oh, and you BETTER keep your torment mode on for the next section too!
Little boy still dreams of being a football player?
Grow up, you know you'll amount to nothing more than a pathetic edge slut on a long-forgotten forum.
Oh, what's this? Your diary? Hey, don't touch me!
That's hilarious! *hysterical laugh*
Oh my god, you're even more pathetic that I thought... Ahh... Anyway, on to what we were actually doing.
This is going to be very painful for you, and very enjoyable for me to watch.
But you can't back down now, not after everything you've done, or else, I'll ruin your life. I know where you live, I know everything about you.
So, here's what you're going to do: You're going to ruin your orgasm for me, and the moment you take your hands off, immediately give your balls 10 fast slaps. Afterwards, palm the head of your cock for 10 seconds.
Ready? NOW.
Well, that looked painful enough to earn you maybe... 20% of forgiveness? Well then, leave now, I'll just keep on reading...
Another great set. The pictures and text were all great. I edged 140 times with a good amount of those being held for Eva. Now that Eva is sorta happy I would appreciate the next sets with less of the girls being upset and me playful and teasing. Obviously if it fits the "characters" again go right ahead.
Gloria sections was good. The main reason I don't have her higher is because I find most of the other girls more attractive. Don't use that against me that's just me to you not to the girls. However, this section in particular had some extremely hot images. With me being already pretty desperate before the set those made me want to cum from the very beginning.
Michele (Red Fox) was someone I had seen before on other sections of this forum and she is hot. Her section was shorter but I enjoy it just as much as the others. I wish I could have followed her home and see what she wanted to show me. I put her on my favorites list.
Whoever the third girl was wasn't my favorite and this was my least favorite section of the tease. Being ignored like that didn't turn me on as well as the some of the images weren't my favorites. I appreciate trying something new just don't include something like that again.
Eva was hot as always and I went in expecting the worst. I honestly wasn't expecting her to ruin me since straight denial in my opinion is way worse. Great writing and images throughout the whole section but Eva will still remain at 2 on my favorites list. After that section of Torment mode I would use it more sparingly from now on since its more of a mode of punishment with all the busting and palming.
Overall great set and I hope to have one back to you sometime this weekend or early next week.
Hey Fatts...
I must say I really felt bad about this misunderstanding.
I still do. I thought you were disrespecting me, disrespecting Uma. So guess what?
For that I disrespected you
You must understand: I'm used to poorly behaved subs...*coughs*
So to cut things short: I apologize, I didn't mean to disrespect you and I accept your proposal for us to start new. But one thing won't get out of my mind...
That deep down..you were, no, you are turned on by giving up control in my presence. More than you know. Why?
"I couldn't bring myself to edge for your ass, though ... I felt I needed permission for that"
permission granted Fatts. permission to touch denied, Brian. *laughs*
Now don't get me wrong. I understand why you asked to edge to my ass. It shows your respect and sincere effort to start new. And I appreciate that. Same goes to you willpower, the ruin and eating up your cum.
Ruining in my presence was a twisted way of disobeying me. Yet it turned me on. But that's the type of girl I am. See I noticed that look in your eye. It was new to me. It was hot...
...for most girls. Because here is the thing Fatts. I want you to accept that I'm a dominant woman. You will never dom me, we can be equal..at times. we can have fun together, we can fuck, make each other cum. But I want you to understand that I will not engage in any power games. I hope that's okay and you respect that
Just like I respect that you aren't a subby plaything like Brian over here.
See, he hasn't cum in two full weeks. He is sitting, dripping pre cum without even touching because he so turned on by the thought of me making him even more desperate. Taking away what could have been one of the most powerful orgasms he has ever had. Haha, do you want me to ruin that orgasm you have built up for two weeks, Brian?Do you want me to make that cock cry as I stare into your eyes. Do you want eat it from my feet?
FUCK NO! *Click* (Lana locks Brian up)
As for you Fatts...
"it doesn't need to be some crazy long thing where her and I domme 5 women"...well, almost. Follow me...
Damn you could have knocked, Fatts
"Now here is how this is going down. You are going to stroke as you wish. You are going to fuck the girls. You are going to fuck me. And you are going to cum.
But there is just one simple rule you have to follow... Suddenly Lana engages in a passionate kiss with Adira
You will not cum before you are told.
That's right Fatts, I want to reward you. No strings attached. But for that, I want you to trust me and respect the control that I need to make this work.
Give up a little control...
And I will make your dreams come true
And Brian...you will watch as we present ourselves to Fatts. As we show him every inch of our bodies. As he strokes, edges and fucks our tight pussys. All while you experience...
nothing at all
damn look at them. Both of you, look! Brian smell my pussy, you can almost taste it right? Well Fatts...
You will...Time for your reward to really begin.... you approach the girls
Control yourself Fatts...
And experience...
...paradise Lana sucks your cock. It's so tight you are sacred to lose control just by this Her eyes captivate your sole
Yeah girls...get him warmed up
Oh Brian, what would you do just to experience entering my mouth just once. Would you give up cumming for a year?
That can be arranged
Without the blowjob of course
Adira: I want to fuck him..Fatts that is. The way he stood up to you and withstood your dominance is so fucking hot
Riley: me, too, please
Lana: Patience Ladies, Janice is first.
You start to fuck Janice' pussy slowly as the other girls make out
Lana: "See that girls, Brian is actually staring at our feet"
And look at that precum... A string of precum exists Brian's cage
Lana: "take it off. Yeah, you heard me right. And you Fatts, no slowing down. Experience the warm and wet sensation of that amazing pussy"
Now Brian, sit on your hands as you watch Fatts cock penetrate our pussys like we'll never let you
Not because you're not worthy. But because deep down, you don't want it.
A little birdy told me that being locked up actually causes some stimulation while you try to get erect. So guess what? I thought that's too much fun for you. Sit on your hands, let that pre cum dry as we just get wetter...
That's the next part of your punishment: no stroking to sex scenes for 3 full sets
Fuck that pussy harder, Fatts. I want to hear each thrust, the wetness spraying into my face
Adira: "Finally" She starts playing with your balls harder
Calm down Adira, we can't finish Fatts yet
Fuck it I can't wait either, I want to cum. The contrast of pleasure and desperation. Submission and equality......edge him (you edge in Adiras pussy then take a break)
And you Brian, slap that cock head hard
HARDER
BEG ME TO LET YOU HUMILIATE YOURSELF FOR ME, BRIAN You start fucking Riley.
"Fuck, Lana. You are so fucking evil, I love it."
After a few minutes Janice intervenes
"I want another go, his cock is so good" her pussy feels especially tight Suddenly all girls stare at Brian. He's leaking precum without even touching
Lana: "I think it's time to enter the next phase. Come here Fatts...." "
AND FUCK ME
HARDER FATTS...You know how I like it, don't you? EDGE FOR ME PLEASE
Oh Brian, see what happens to guys that eat their cum for me? Get ready Fatts...I want you to cum for us. I want you to explode all over our faces. Can you do that for us? EDGE AND WAIT FOR MY SIGNAL
EDGE AGAIN AND HOLD IT FOR 20 SECONDS... All Girls gather around you
AND CUM, CUM ALL OVER US. EXPLODE
give us all you've got...
Oh my Fatts...what a load...
not quite a 2 week load, but what a load Lana laughs and peeks at Brian
Speaking of which... The girls extract everything that'S left
Sit down Fatts. You said you enjoyed me dominating Brian. So enjoy this...
So Brian...time for the finale. I will let you stroke to the edge in a second. Wait a minute...I almost forgot... Lana gives Brian some goggles. She also hands the same to Fatts, so he can see what Brian's seeing
Much better
Riley: "you forgot your foot"
Good spot Riley...look at that desperate slut
Now get to the edge Brian. Look at our faces, covered in orgasmic relief. Something you will not experience any time soon. AND RUIN YOUR ORGASM INTO YOUR HAND. Stare deep into our eyes as you let that orgasm you have built up for weeks go to waste. You know you deserve it. You know you want it. DO IT
Good slut. And now beg me again. Beg me to eat your cum. You want to prove yourself to me so badly. You want to serve me, suffer for me. BEG ME
HAHA NO! DENIED AGAIN That would have been too predictable, right? That's too easy. Plus you wrote this, so you just eat cum when you are ready to? No. But that's not how I play. You'll have to earn the privilege to submit for me. To taste that failure for me.
But this punishment set has proven you are willing to. So go ahead, dip the tip of your tongue into that puddle. Just get a tiny taste. A taste of what you are desperate for. Final piece of your punishment you can add to your rules: No CEI at all until I allow it.
See, at least you've earned the right to see my feet again while stroking.
Oh, you're hard again? Too bad. Time to clean up. Satisfied or not. Lana winks at Fatts
I hope you enjoyed and didn't mind the focus on me too much - but you did say you wanted to see Lana dominate me So I hope I found the right balance their (and the right tone after the misunderstanding prior). Let me know!
Normal image - 50 strokes
Edge for each nudity (tits, ass, pussy)
If you see all 3 of tits, ass and pussy in the same image, hold the last edge for 10 seconds.
Set was made entirely with random image sets from pornpics.
Welcome! I'm Anna Tatu, for those of you who don't know me.
Krystal told me I should tease some of you boys more than others...
So if you're a regular in this thread, i.e. you posted any sets in the last 2 weeks...
You're going to give me one extra edge per image, and any edge holding is increased to 30 seconds.
Sorry boys, I don't make the rules! And by the way, those rule changes are until the end of the set, not only for my section.
Aww, mad are we? But you can't stop staring at my tits...
Or at my ass... So sad!
Well boys, get ready, because...
It's holding time! Which hole would you pick if given the choice? I want you to imagine fucking me rough in your choice while you're holding that edge for me...
That looked very intense!
Can you still hold on? You must! You're so close to the end!
So give me another edge-hold! C'mon, just a bit longer!
And more edge-holding! I'm going to let you cum soon, get ready...
And now give me your most intense edge-holding of all time, I want you to get as close as possible... And...
Yes HentaiAddict, thank you so much, I also have one from EdgeSlut I had actually forgotten about since I was busy the last weeks! So I’m definitely more than taken care of - thanks!
Can’t wait to play them. Just had this set to write for Fatts, FB for you guys will be next :) - as well as return sets asap
I took my time with it. Ending up taking just under 2 hours from start to finish with 42 edges.
I REALLY got into the set—right away—so ... I sort of "role played it out" QUITE a bit ... I'll save myself some time and NOT recreate the ENTIRE SET from my perspective, lol I think that WAS helpful for that previous set, ESPECIALLY because there was SO MUCH that was going on, but ... I *DID* dictate (into my phone with voice to text) a LOT of my thoughts and "conversation" with Lana, so ... I will share that ...
This whole thing will end up being a fairly long read—which ... THAT fact will be a surprise to NO ONE! You may wish to prepare a hot beverage before starting to consume all of this!
"So to cut things short: I apologize, I didn't mean to disrespect you and I accept your proposal for us to start new. But one thing won't get out of my mind..."
"That deep down..you were, no, you are turned on by giving up control in my presence. More than you know. Why?"
I’m a switch, which means I have a Subby side… And yes…You’re not wrong, Lana…
I do get turned on by giving up control in your presence.
But I’m not powerless. I have agency and spunk and self-control. I choose who I give that control up to… And I’m strong enough to resist. I can exert self-control. It’s always my choice.
And I don’t want to give it up to anybody and everybody… Only those who are worthy and deserve it… someone such as yourself …
And so for that woman… Who understands me and respects me and who appreciates that what I give up to her, I do so willingly because I respect her… Someone who understands what she has and what I’m offering someone who appreciates it…
Then, yes… Giving up control to that person who deserves it… It’s very arousing to me.
"I couldn't bring myself to edge for your ass, though ... I felt I needed permission for that"
That was because I’m a gentleman and I didn’t want to take from you something you weren’t offering… I was trying to be respectful and show respect… And it was more about that than trying to be subservient to you
permission granted Fatts. permission to touch denied, Brian. *laughs*
Lana exposing herself to me and giving me permission to edge felt like an olive branch. Lana bending slightly over on the table, her bare ass to me giving me what I wanted what I desired while she was silent. She waited patiently for me to edge and I took my time. This was a gift from her. An apology. Giving me what I wanted. Knowing that you [brian] were there and couldn’t touch, knowing that I was being given permission and was allowed turned me on VERY much ...
Lana looked over at you and smiled and laughed once in a while. And I too looked over and smirked, feeling very superior feeling Lana's apology was very sincere.
Stroking slow was a way to take back some control. It’s better receive the gift that Lana was giving me.
“You’re amazing…" I said to Lana with sincere admiration and arousal in my eyes. "And he’s a Putz,“ I said, nodding over at brian.
Lana and I both smirked. It was taking a while [to edge], but Lana didn’t seem to mind and neither did I … Because we both knew I was getting something that you [brian] weren’t and just watching was a suitable punishment. it was an exchange of two equals. Her offering herself patiently and me taking it—taking advantage of my arousal for her curves and forcing you to watch from the inferior position and be denied ...
Now don't get me wrong. I understand why you asked to edge to my ass. It shows your respect and sincere effort to start new. And I appreciate that. Same goes to you willpower, the ruin and eating up your cum.
Ruining in my presence was a twisted way of disobeying me. Yet it turned me on. But that's the type of girl I am. See I noticed that look in your eye. It was new to me. It was hot...
...for most girls. Because here is the thing Fatts. I want you to accept that I'm a dominant woman. You will never dom me, we can be equal..at times. we can have fun together, we can fuck, make each other cum. But I want you to understand that I will not engage in any power games. I hope that's okay and you respect that
it makes me really sad to hear that Lana… My attraction to you has actually dropped quite a bit, but I appreciate your honesty. As a switch, I wanted to win you over and add you to my list of conquests … Just like I did with Caprice. But you say that you’re unable, and I respect that.
I do respect that, and in a way it makes me respect you more… Though attracted to you less.
But I said that I wanted to have you as a friend, and that would be enough for me… And so I shall respect your position.
It’ll be weird and interesting because I’ve wanted to have you as a friend… But you’ll never become a conquest for me… Which will basically put you in the permanent “fatts dynamo friend zone”… But I think that might be fun.
Having a dame who respects me, but will never be fully won over by me… I guess I’ve had this arrangement with lots of women in the past… But it has never been stated so explicitly before with such honesty and openness
You’re off my list too, in a way… I will no longer try to win you over… The desire is gone…
But after having established these boundaries, so clearly eliminating all of the games… I think it means we can just focus on being really, really good fuck buddies… And maybe occasionally I’ll give you permission to exercise some of that power over me that you seem so convinced turns me on so very completely… And… I was able to resist that… So you’ll never fully have me Lana… Just as I will never fully have you…
But yes… I respect that
Part of it, Lana, Is that this scene [the thread] is just FILLED with ALL of these subby boys who fall all over you dominant women without ANY sort of pushback or self respect, and it kind of disgusts me on a certain level… And none of them seem to have the wherewithal to stand up and push back… And so I seek to differentiate myself from them… so the fact that I won’t always refer to you as "mistress"… And that you acknowledge there’s something different in me And prove it by the different relationship I have with you and how you treat me… It’s not as much as I wanted, but… It’s still more than the rest… And that makes me feel a little bit superior and I like that.
Okay, so ... THAT was most of my "intro scene thoughts and conversation" ... and like I said, I took my time ... because I imagined this was Lana "offering herself" to me as part of her apology ... and so she was being patient ... and THEN ... *I* was allowed to touch and YOU were not, so ... that just incentivized me to go EVEN SLOWER and taunt you with what you could NOT have ... and so Lana and I exchanged a lot of smoldering looks and then glances and smirks over at you ... and I just LOVED that.
Okay, so ... I had a long think and "conversation" that was in the spoilers above ... and THEN I got to THIS part of the tease:
See, he hasn't cum in two full weeks. He is sitting, dripping pre cum without even touching because he so turned on by the thought of me making him even more desperate. Taking away what could have been one of the most powerful orgasms he has ever had. Haha, do you want me to ruin that orgasm you have built up for two weeks, Brian?Do you want me to make that cock cry as I stare into your eyes. Do you want eat it from my feet?
This one got me SO hard, brian. Lana's dirty talk and being dominant and talking down to you, all the while *I* was allowed to stroke and edge and *I* was receiving her approval and favor ... TOTAL turn on for me!
I don't know if I just thought it or said it, so ... let's just say I happened to say it "out loud" in a moment of weakness, but ... I said, "If I’m cucking brian, then I’ll sub for you all day."
It wasn't too much. It was PERFECT! All of that "writing yourself into the scene" ... I just LOVED that shit! It was NOT too much AT ALL ...
It was SUCH an interesting set for me ... I changed SO MUCH in how I perceived Lana, and ... it ended up that a LOT of the stuff that I said at the start—while true ... is NOT where I ended up.
I MEANT what I said about my arousal and attraction to Lana going down—knowing that she was "unwinnable" and I could never dominate her ... and that was real and made me sad, but ... OBVIOUSLY I was going to go along with whatever she had planned!
Because of this "new" dynamic where Lana and I would "be equals at best", but ... in a way, I would never be able to *FULLY* be equals with her, because she would NEVER allow ME to dominate her ... which, THAT—by the way ... I did NOT see that coming—but SHOULD have expected it, and ... I thought that was PERFECT! I thought that was in PERFECT KEEPING with her character. Well done with THAT decision brian!
... but I did NOT like the power imbalance that still existed, and so ... I decided that I would MOSTLY just call her "Lana"—since we were equals—but would ONLY call her "mistress" when I wanted to ... as a SMALL way of maintaining SOME control and not FULLY submit ... because if SHE is not "fully submitting to me", then ... *I* don't want to "fully submit to her" either ... and so, just calling her "Lana" most of the time is my way to signal that, but ... when she turns me on and I really WANT to give her control ... THAT is when I will call her "mistress" ... it's just a subtle reminder that my submission is earned, and again ... it's a VERY small way for me to push back ...
... and in terms of "rules", I think that I will just be in something between "dom mode" and "teasing sub mode" with Lana the entire time going forward ... like, I can disobey her and NOT follow what she says ... but you can just remove the "please" from her requests. She should just make demands of me, and if it's something I don't want to do, then I just won't do it and will tell her "no" ...
I don't know ... I think I sort of want that "taming a stallion" sort of vibe from our scenes ... write them "as normal" where she gives orders and its just assumed that I will follow them, but ... sometimes I may not—and I'll just role play and imagine that from my end, and if there is anything significant, I'll just report that ...but most of the time, I'm just going to "give in" and do what she requests:
"Now here is how this is going down. You are going to stroke as you wish. You are going to fuck the girls. You are going to fuck me. And you are going to cum.
But there is just one simple rule you have to follow...
You will not cum before you are told.
That's right Fatts, I want to reward you. No strings attached. But for that, I want you to trust me and respect the control that I need to make this work.
"I trust you, Lana… “No strings attached“ is what I want to hear. You do what you say, and I do what I say. No power Games just like you said…"
"But if you fuck me over while I’m trusting you, then we’re done."
"No power games. Just teasing as respected equals… That makes me smile.
Knowing that I can trust you and that you respect me enough to not fuck me over… That makes me very happy indeed…"
Give up a little control...
"I can do that for you, Lana, Because if you break trust, then you lose something: my respect. And now I’m convinced that actually means something to you… You've been Giving me what I wanted… So let’s have some fun and fuck Brian over."
And I will make your dreams come true
"If you can make me feel like an alpha when I'm with you, I won’t mind so much subbing for you…"
At this point, I was SUPER excited!
The first scene literally took me around an hour—because all of the thinking and going slow and dictation and such ... and I got about 10 edges ... but then the rest was pretty crazy. At one point I had a "wet edge", where I came like 1 drop of cum and went over a TINY bit—but held back and still stayed hard even though I pushed SLIGHTLY over the edge ...
Seeing ALL FOUR girls down on their knees in front of me ... just WOW ... I had NEVER been like THAT with FOUR GIRLS in a set before.
It was a LOT to hold back, and ... IF it was real life ... I don't think I would have ... but in a porn tease where I have total control of the stroking and my dick, I was able to ...
I *do* recall seeing this scene on pornpics before, so ... it WAS familiar ... but ... I usually move past most hardcore/orgy scenes ... and mostly people write me solo girls and lesbians, so ... this scene was just INCREDIBLE! I LOVED it ... and Lana's eyes were amazing ...
I edged a LOT while they were making out on the couch, but ... wow ... once the blowjob began ... wow ...
I didn't QUITE edge as much for the 4 girl blowjob as I WANTED TO ... I wanted to do a few for each, but ... I KNEW that the sex was coming up ... and I was just SO excited—and was NOT expecting THIS! SUCH a wild ride ... so ... I think I only edged like once per girl—and actually a bit less ...
Lana sucks your cock. It's so tight you are sacred to lose control just by this
This was SO TRUE! SO fucking hot ... As a switch in this game, I just get dominated SO MUCH, so ... it was just SO NICE to have a set and scene like THIS where *I* get to "be dominant" "under Lana".
Her eyes captivate your sole
I 100% edged while staring into her eyes ...
Yeah girls...get him warmed up
So, here I did something interesting. Whenever ANOTHER GIRL was giving me a blow job and Lana was making eye contact ... I just edged while staring into Lana's eyes ... I wanted Lana to know that she was number one, and while all of these other girls were servicing me, my focus and attention was on her. The rest of them were ALL SECONDARY ...
I wanted her to feel superior, and honestly, I didn't really care much about the rest of them ... Lana was in charge. Lana was making all of this happen. Lana was being dominant and turning me on the most ... so it was something I could give back to her to make her feel superior and dominant. Even when the other girls were sucking my dick, Lana was the only one worthy of my attention and focus ...
I am sure it is something she would have noticed, and it was a way for ME to give back to HER ... to show HER respect and elevate her above the others ...
Oh Brian, what would you do just to experience entering my mouth just once. Would you give up cumming for a year?
EVERY time the girls made mention of you—I just LOVED IT!
I NEVER would have expected that cucking someone else would turn me on so much ...
When you had me cuck Caprice—that was just really weird, because it was my first time cucking and it was a strange version of Caprice and I have a complicated relationship with her ...
... but cucking YOU here felt AMAZING! It was DEFINITELY not "too much." It was just enough to remind me that you were there, but ... I ALSO don't think it was even CLOSE to being "too much" ... If Lana spent an ENTIRE SCENE *just* shit talking you while servicing me—and only said a few sentences to me ... I think that would be the "most extreme case", and ... even THEN I don't think it would be "too much" ... because receiving pleasure and getting the girls' attention while knowing you can't and aren't is SUCH a turn on for me ... There's just something about that that flips a switch in my ape brain ... "Haha! They are MINE and they are NOT yours! " It's just this alpha feeling of superiority, and knowing you are denied makes it feel EVEN BETTER.
... and then that time when you came in at the end of Nancy's punishment set for me, and my jealousy just "turned on" and I did NOT want you getting pleasure from Nancy while *I* was being left out ... and so, even though I had just ruined, I got it back up and came again "at the same time as you" ...
Sigh ... it's one of the reasons I want to try getting cucked myself. It was one of the scenes I "requested" in the orgy set. I want one where I am tied up and teased on low [vibe] and/or not allowed to touch while YOU are getting pleasured ... I am just VERY curious to see what that does to me and if I REALLY hate it or it just turns me on ... I *know* that I am REALLY going to hate it, but ... I just want to experience that to see what it's like ...
Anyway, cucking you is a HUGE turn-on for me ... HUGE! I REALLY like it. And I think we were VERY far from reaching the "there were too many references to brian" saturation point, so ... feel free to go as hard as you want on THAT front until I say, "Okay ... it went too far this time," lol ...
Oh Brian, what would you do just to experience entering my mouth just once. Would you give up cumming for a year?
That can be arranged
Without the blowjob of course
"Be careful Lana… After you give Brian what he wants, He’ll just lose interest in you—like he did with Uma … So, unless you’re only content to play with him for another year, I suggest a longer period of time. Just long enough to stop playing with him at exactly the moment you lose interest in him as a sub ..."
Okay ... more of my "internal monologue" that I dictated into my phone while wanking with my other hand, lol ...
"Riley Sucks my cock as I stare into Lana‘s eyes and edge.
I smile a happy wicked smile… Janice is giving me pleasure, but all of my attention, satisfaction and arousal I want to give to Lana…"
This statement felt too forced and somehow didn't feel real to me:
Adira: I want to fuck him..Fatts that is. The way he stood up to you and withstood your dominance is so fucking hot
It didn't "hard break" the immersion and "take me out of the experience", but ... I was like, "Noooo ... THAT can't be true! "
Maybe if I were "Leeroy Jerkins" and had built up this big persona ... I just got hit by pangs of "imposter syndrome" at that line ... I FULLY believed the scene was possible though—and it FELT REAL ... but THAT is because Lana is the ring leader and controls the girls and she respects me and they do what she says ...
I think that if perhaps Riley had said it—Riley who had seen me ruin my orgasm and eat my cum first hand ... Riley who watched me make Lana cum ... but ... coming from Adira ... it just didn't seem real ... so I had to tell myself to just accept it ... and if she had said that in "real life", I could have read her body language and known whether or not she was being sincere, but ... I just had to tell myself that "girls talk—this is happening ... just accept the fantasy that is being presented to you" ... if I had a prior interaction with her or had there been previous lines from her it would have been more believable ... but, yeah ... I don't know ... it was like the ONLY thing in the WHOLE SET which made me go, "Nooooo ... THIS isn't really happening! brian is just telling me what I WANT to hear ..." So ... if THAT was the "only thing" ... that's a PRETTY HIGH success rate! So well done.
But yeah ... it's just weird ... because I just don't see myself as having that sort of reputation with the girls ... its new to me, and was something "Leeroy" had, but ... I don't know. I guess don't stop, and ... I suppose more comments and compliments from the girls about how they want to get with me will probably break that big of "imposter syndrome" I have as being "alpha Fatts" I hope that makes sense.
Riley: me, too, please
Lana: Patience Ladies, Janice is first.
You start to fuck Janice' pussy slowly as the other girls make out
Lana: "See that girls, Brian is actually staring at our feet"
And look at that precum...
A string of precum exists Brian's cage
Lana: "take it off. Yeah, you heard me right. And you Fatts, no slowing down. Experience the warm and wet sensation of that amazing pussy"
I just LOVED that ... that WHOLE exchange—EVERY little bit ...
You WOULD have been staring at their feet ... *I* was staring at asses while they were making out (Riley's mostly ), but ... YOU staring at feet was TOTALLY on brand! And I LIKED that I was reminded that while YOU were staring at feet, *I* was getting PUSSY!
And NOW I am thinking back to that scene where I was put into "dom mode" by Uma and was fucking Kenzie (and cucking Caprice ), and then Uma came in and told me to stop ... and I just HATED that.
But HERE it worked SO well!
Because HERE, I was NEVER given "full control." Lana was always "above me", and I was submitted to her, so ... she wasn't "taking my control away" ... I just never had full control to begin with ... and in that scene with Uma, once I was "given control", I never really consented to "giving it back"—and I'm too obstinate and alpha to just AUTOMATICALLY give up my power at the first instant a hot girl tells me to ... BUT ... this power dynamic with me "being dominant" but still "under Lana" all worked out VERY well ...
... and when she told me to "not slow down" ... I just LOVED that! Because it was ALSO a sign of respect—her making a nod to my stamina and asking me to step up and be the stud she KNOWS that I can be. So I just LOVED *all* of that and it worked VERY well ...
Now Brian, sit on your hands as you watch Fatts cock penetrate our pussys like we'll never let you
Loved that.
Not because you're not worthy. But because deep down, you don't want it.
I'm fucking Janice, but ... the only things *I* am thinking about are: "OMG! Lana's tongue is SO CLOSE to my DICK! " and "Oh, yeah ... I am WAY MORE of a man that BRIAN is. ::"
A little birdy told me that being locked up actually causes some stimulation while you try to get erect. So guess what? I thought that's too much fun for you. Sit on your hands, let that pre cum dry as we just get wetter...
That's the next part of your punishment: no stroking to sex scenes for 3 full sets
I assumed the bolded part was the thing which Nancy goaded you into accepting. Is that correct?
Fuck that pussy harder, Fatts. I want to hear each thrust, the wetness spraying into my face
Fucking LOVED that ... I tried to give at least one edge to every penetration pic. But it was an orgy and I was basically in dom mode—just not allowed to cum—so ... I was ONLY clicking edges on my "edge counter" and not really taking notes at this point!
Adira: "Finally"
She starts playing with your balls harder
Calm down Adira, we can't finish Fatts yet
Fucking LOVED that. Your dialogue here was SO good. It kept me immersed. It felt "real" and "realistic" and ALSO got me more aroused and turned my "stud determination" on even further—wanting to hold my cum back so that I could perform for the girls.
Fuck it I can't wait either, I want to cum. The contrast of pleasure and desperation. Submission and equality......edge him (you edge in Adiras pussy then take a break)
The line itself felt awkward and forced, but ... at the same time ... it was kind of what *I* was thinking, and so ... it actually felt more like a line from my inner monologue, but ... ALSO the fact that Lana was "feeling the same as me" ... it felt affirming ... like I was ACTUALLY EXPERIENCING what I was SUPPOSED TO BE experiencing ... and so ... it BOTH "took me out of it" and ALSO reinforced the experience—at the same time!
I don't know what you actually do with that note, but ... there it is anyway!
And you Brian, slap that cock head hard
Yes ... more punishment for brian while pleasure for ME ... those lines just NEVER got old ...
BEG ME TO LET YOU HUMILIATE YOURSELF FOR ME, BRIAN
I liked that. I REALLY did.
Even though Lana was "looking into your eyes" ... seeing her get dominant is SUCH a turn-on for me ... and I was actually HAPPY to have that break—by the way! I guess something to keep in mind for the orgy set "give Fatts some breaks" ... it actually was BETTER for pacing AND kept me immersed ...
There was a moment when I sat down to write this debrief where I was like, "Was this set REALLY a "12 out of 10?" " Looking back, the answer is" "Yes, yes it was ..." when ALL of the lines hit SO hard ... AND I said I wasn't going to give "line by line feedback" but I just feel that I have to because they were ALL so good ...
You start fucking Riley.
"Fuck, Lana. You are so fucking evil, I love it."
After a few minutes Janice intervenes
I loved this ... Janice licking Riley's GORGEOUS ass, but ... I was moving pretty quick through the pictures, so ... I just got to pause and "sit" for a while on this moment and pretend I was fucking Riley for a bit—and give an edge or two while imagining that ...
... and then it is back to Janice
I was just SO immersed, and the pacing was just SO incredible ... SO many times, I find myself flipping back and scrolling up to earlier parts of the scene to imagine more stuff that I am doing, but ... this all flowed SO well.
The Lana fucking part ... just WOW!
The pics were incredible—Adira licking her ass ... if I didn't have to "be a stud" and hold back ... if I hadn't ALREADY edged a bunch and wasn't VERY ready to cum ... wow ... I could have just parked there for a WHILE, but ... "duty calls" ... and I was immersed and wanted to keep the pace, so ... I did—and kept things moving with a few edges for each pic.
HARDER FATTS...You know how I like it, don't you? EDGE FOR ME PLEASE
When she's in control and I have decided to submit—she doesn't have to say please.
Oh Brian, see what happens to guys that eat their cum for me? Get ready Fatts...I want you to cum for us. I want you to explode all over our faces. Can you do that for us? EDGE AND WAIT FOR MY SIGNAL
LOVED that.
EDGE AGAIN AND HOLD IT FOR 20 SECONDS...
All Girls gather around you
AND CUM, CUM ALL OVER US. EXPLODE
No games. No fake countdowns ... just Lana delivering promises
Okay, and ... HERE is how THAT scene played out ... THIS PART I want to write you what happened ...
Fatts ejaculates in big, sloppy spurts. The girls all tug on his cock, fighting for control over who will get more of his load on her face. "Girls ... girls ... that was WONDERFUL ... you ALL were FANTASTIC! " Fatts is beaming. A warm, satisfied smile has taken over his face. He's in a state of pure bliss and gratitude.
Fatts stoops down and pulls Riley up to her knees. He begins making out with her, aggressively putting his tongue into her mouth. She eagerly kisses Fatts back. While making out with Riley, Fatts grabs her head and gently holds it in place. He licks up the cum that is smeared on her cheek, swallowing it. Riley looks up at him and smiles. The two exchange a few more kisses before Fatts lets her rest back down on her knees.
He next lifts Janice up and does the same. He makes out with her passionately. This time, between the tongue smacking, Janice holds her head still so that Fatts can lick his cum off of her lips and face. The two exchange a bit of Fatts' semen between their mouths, before Fatts gives Janice one final kiss—then swallows it all down.
Adira smiles as Fatts lifts her up to do the same. The two engage in some passionate kissing. Fatts holds her chin, licking up the cum he left on her cheek. Adira smiles happily, turned on by Fatts' display. She leans in to Fatts to kiss him more. Fatts keeps his mouth open, welcoming her tongue into his mouth and reciprocating by sending his tongue back into hers. As Fatts stands, Adira moves herself higher to continue the kissing, until Fatts has moved too far away to continue.
Finally, Fatts turns to Lana. The smile he has for her is one of pride and admiration. He bends down towards her. Lana raises herself up onto her knees, smiling back and preparing for her turn. Fatts reaches down and slaps Lana's ass—by cupping it with his hand. He gropes and rubs it while staring at her for a while. Even though he's just cum, he is so turned on by her—so attracted to her in this moment. He's just so taken with her. Awestruck. His mind is blown. Lana doesn't break eye contact. She can't stop smiling. She's proud of Fatts. Proud he held on. Proud he obeyed ... and AROUSED that he took this extra step ... She didn't ask for it—she COULDN'T after what transpired before ... but now Fatts was giving HER a gift—something unexpected that she didn't even know she wanted until it was presented to her.
Fatts and Lana begin to make out. Fatts won't take his hand off of her ass. He keeps groping her left ass cheek while the two make out—Fatts bending down while Lana raises herself up. Fatts' assertiveness is turning her on. In between the swirling tongues, Lana takes a few moments to hold her head still. Fatts eagerly licks his cum off of Lana's face. She managed to get most of his load. Fatts licks it up, then opens his mouth to show her the cum sitting on his tongue. Lana smiles a happy, evil grin—CLEARLY excited and aroused that Fatts is playing into one of her fantasies. The two make out again, Fatts putting some of the cum into Lana's mouth, Lana receiving it, then putting it back. Fatts smiles then gulps it down. The two continue grinning as they stare into each other's eyes. They make out a bit more as if they were the only ones in the room. Then Fatts stands up. He now looks at all the girls with a happy, boyish smile. Everyone seems to be in good spirits.
The girls were all just SO wonderful ... I just did that IMMEDIATELY after I came.
I came mostly on my cum rag (tissue), but ... I licked off a little bit from my hand, then "pretended to make out with a girl", swallowed a bit, licked some more off of my hand/rag, repeat ... and again ... and then for Lana, I licked a fair bit of the load up and swallowed it."
The girls were all just SO WONDERFUL, brian. I wanted to do something to "thank them" and show my appreciation ... even though I wasn't really into it—I just did it almost without thinking ... like ... the thought went into my head, and I was like, "THIS is what I am going to do ..." because THEY had given me SO MUCH, so ... I just wanted to repay them and give them something back. And how many guys eat their own cum like THAT!? ...
... but it just felt PERFECT to me. Because I was still "dominant" and "in control" (except over Lana ) ... but I wanted to do something for THEM that THEY would enjoy—and Lana, too ... I think THAT is how a "gentlemen alpha/sigma" finishes his orgy. ... and it was unprompted and organic and "in the moment" ... and I doubt that ANY of them had EVER experienced THAT before ... and even though I WASN'T into it ... I was just SO HAPPY to do it—that I am CERTAIN my face was just beaming and lit up with a huge smile—knowing the girls would be grateful and happy and surprised and turned on by it ... and it was giving THEM back some of that respect—and a show of gratitude and appreciation ...
... AND I KNEW that it would make LANA happy—because seeing guys eat their own cum turns her on ... So, I wanted to give that to her as a gift WITHOUT her asking.
... and I wasn't sure how she would feel about me grabbing her ass ... but it's what I WANTED to do—and it felt right ... and in my mind ... I REALLY wanted her to be okay with it—though it WAS a risk and I wasn't sure how it would be received ... because a sub does NOT grab his mistress without permission, but ... Lana and I are "equals" ... and in my heart, I REALLY hoped that she was okay with it—ESPECIALLY because in that moment I was being VERY generous with my OWN sexuality—giving her a gift she never demanded or commanded me to give or asked for ...
... and it was NOT a possessive look that I gave her as I did it ... I was just SO enamored with her and grateful and in awe ...
So at some point, please take a moment and let me know how Lana felt about that ... it was the ONLY thing that I did where I wasn't sure how she would respond, and since you seem to be a good "Lana referee", please let me know.
... and THEN they ate it all up, but ... haha ... when I had gotten to that part ... of course, *I* had "eaten it all up" haha ... so ... there really wasn't much left. I would have done a pretty good job of removing it all So that was another moment where I went "Oh, THAT didn't happen", lol ... but ... that just made me prouder and happier—knowing that the girls didn't need to "clean up my mess"—but ALSO that they were willing.
I don't necessarily want this to become a "regular thing," and I CERTAINLY don't want cum eating to become a "duty" of mine or expectation. If I am subbing for Lana and she commands me ... yeah, I'll probably do it. ... but I think I prefer this being something I do for her because *I* want to ... and I'm not sure how SHE would feel about that.
Is it hotter for her to "make me?" OR ... is it hotter for her when I do it freely? Let me know.
But I'll tell you, brian ... the moment she starts EXPECTING it is the moment I want to STOP. Maybe on a rare occasion, she can pull some CEI out of me AGAINST my will, but ... I feel like Lana and me's relationship is one built out of mutual respect and trust ... and the moment she starts getting entitled and just "expects" things of me—THAT is the moment I feel taken for granted, and my respect for her goes down and my desire to sub for her craters ...
SO ... I need to EITHER agree to the CEI AHEAD OF TIME ... OR ... it should happen spontaneously and/or prompted by ME. And it's okay for her to demand it and ask that I "trust her" ... because so far, she has proven VERY trustworthy, but ... sigh ... I guess that is all of my thoughts on THAT ...
The ending was great. Obviously, you "wrote it for you," but ... I REALLY enjoyed it—and was SUPER glad that the "tease ended there", because ... I was ready to be done! If the girls wanted me to "stud some more" ... it was a BIG load, and ... it was QUITE EXCITING ENOUGH for me.
But I LOVED that ending, and ... yeah ... having seen how you did things ... I will DEFINITELY follow along that path in a similar pattern in future sets for you.
Oh, you're hard again?
Was that part "true?" I assume that you played this set for yourself either after or right before you posted it—and I saw the "ruin" recorded in your signature.
But, yeah ... did you ACTUALLY get hard again after the ruin? Because I would be VERY impressed if you did—knowing how rare that is for you.
Oh, wait ... or was that direct at me? Well, I can say ... I was DEFINITELY not hard again.
Cumming like a stud is SO satisfying ... it happens so rarely in sets, that I cannot say for sure, but ... I THINK I can usually go again better if I am subbing and getting dominated, but ... idk. Often, after a short break I can go again ... 15-20 minutes, but ... that was a fair amount of edging and a pretty decent load—though not 2 weeks.
It was LITERALLY more time spent writing up the feedback at this point than it was to play the actual set, but ... hahahaha ... that's HARDLY surprising!
It was SUCH a great set—TRULY deserving of the 12/10 score I graded it as ...
It just felt so right and real and immersive ... SO unique and SUCH a memorable set.
Some final thoughts I wrote for Lana immediately after I completed the set:
I’ve never been with someone who’s made me feel so powerful… I’ve never had four girls at once.
Before the orgy [we just had], I really thought and was convinced that my attraction to you was going to be gone, that since you were unwinnable, I would lose all interest…
Being with you… Seeing how you handled Brian… You directed me and the girls… It just made me attracted to you even more
That ending and how cruel you were to Brian… It turned me on so much. It made me love you. I was grinning from ear to ear. I wanted to fuck you so much right then. It’s been a while since my desire to fuck someone was that strong… Where my attraction was so great the only thing that I could think to do to alleviate that feeling in my animal brain was to make love to you. No other thought could I dream up in the moment could satisfy that craving ...
I kept trying to sort out and define my relationship with Lana, and I kept thinking that perhaps I was "her knight"—maybe the Lancelot to her Guenevere ...
*I* serve HER, but ... she STILL has such reverence and admiration and respect for me ...
I'll leave the rest of my comments in a DM.
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
I played through your set with your rules, except for one change. If I edged without permission, it would be a ball slap.
Linda is super hot! Edges without permission started with her, and continued thorough her portion. I did not like Anna Tatu. Normally..I like brunettes…but she didn’t do it for me. Maybe it was her teeth?
Last, the red fox. She is always a delight…and I’ve written her several times…mainly as a soul sucking succubus…so her ruining me and taking my cum was right on…as how I think of her!
I walls liked the personalized ending…appreciated!
A make up set! Hopefully this is closer to what you are looking for. All text within is tounge in cheek…although, I admit, slightly meta. But have fun!
Hentaiaddict? You are the one? I can’t believe it that you are the one that ruined Elsa’s day!
You don’t remember? Elsa took you around town. Showed you off to all of her friends. She even gave you a job! And all you could say was that you hated your time with her. Elsa jean! Billionaire goddess…and all you could say is “meh”.
Well…I’m Elsa’s best friend, and I don’t like her feeling bad. So I’m going to take it out on you!
From now on: every time I change poses, you must choose to increase your metronome speed by one, or the number of strokes you do for me by one, your choice!. your starting metronome speed is 50, and the number of base strokes for me is 20. And this starts right now. And one more thing. Every time I say Elsa’s name you also increase by 1!
you can do more strokes for those other things you like. Like my natural tits. You like natural tits…right?
How about a nice ass? Are you an ass man?
Do you know who also has natural tits and a nice ass?
Elsa!
Now, I’m going to work. You can come along, if you want. If you do, I’ll tell you about how I met Elsa…. You follow Emily to her job…
Look at you. Stroking like a fiend…waiting for my story.
My story is simple. Not only am I elsas best friend, I am her lawyer!
It’s natural that a billionaire philanthropist pornstar like Elsa would need a lawyer! And that lawyer is me!
But even though I’m her lawyer, I also became her friend!
And she shared stories about how she just wanted a stroke slut…
Someone to follow her around and worship her…
And do everything she said…and occasionally be humilated and degraded…
Well…exactly you!
And you ignored her! You ignored Elsa!
Maybe she should sue you…I’d like that! More money for me! I’m done working here…come along…I’m going to take a shower…
You know…if you don’t like Elsa…
I’ll take you on as my special client…
I read your rules. You don’t seem to have a favorite…
Maybe I can be your favorite? Maybe you could add some extra rules for me only?
I was mad at you before…
But now I realize that having a stroke slut is kinda fun…maybe Elsa was on to something here…
So maybe you should add me! I won’t even tell Elsa!
Take your time…and think about it! Emily willis leaves to meet elsa
There he is. The bitch who brought me back here to tease all these useless sluts.
I'm pleased slut. I love stealing all these precious orgasms and turning them into puddles on the floor.
But one of these sluts didn't even want to orgasm for me no matter what.
All that talk about how he didn't need to cum and edging felt better actually convinced him he didn't deserve to cum for us.
So when I denied him in the end he was actually happy and said he was going to do that no matter what I told him to do.
And now I can't even get a puddle from a stroke slut like you.
I'm really hoping more sluts come through that competition you set up because I'm dying to see some of those boys completely devastated.
You look like you've been through a lot today though.
And seeing the desperation in your eyes as you stroke for me is almost just as good as those ruined orgasms.
Don't get ahead of yourself I still want ruins but...
But those slow desperate strokes as you stare into my eyes begging for more...
It feels pretty damn good knowing I get to leave you this desperate bitch.
Stare into my eyes and give me 5 slow worship strokes bitch. Now go back to your favorite image of each mistress before and do the same for them. They deserve it too.
Overall I loved it. Anything edging based I'm a big fan and I was even happy with my ending which may sound surprising but for some reason it just felt right. Crystal and Anna weren't my favorites but I loved Red Fox (Michelle) and Linda those 2 are close to my top 7. Not much feedback but still wanted to write this. Keep writing fun sets and hope you enjoyed this one I wrote.
I really liked this! A fun, hilarious premise…I’m all for it! I only have one favorite pic (normally I have 2 to 5) but this one…was the best. I’m totally on team Nancy ace!
And an everyone set in honor of Halloween…am everyone set! These are mini sets…focused on your preferences and feedback over the last month (I do like to lurk sometimes… ) but this shouldn’t interfere with any of your existing stories! Focused on those who have participated over the last month. Have fun, and use your own rules! It’s totally optional!
While out and about…you see someone curious. A witch?
You decide to follow her
Suddenly she turns around!
Hi! I’m a perverted witch! normally, Perverted witches are invisible…but since you can see me…that must mean you are horny! So…I want to invite you down the strokers road.
What is the strokers road? It’s a path that that witches like me can open to horndogs like you…in which you may see what you most desire…but at a cost! yes, there are some bad ends on the strokers road that may manipulate your existing rules…so be careful, and walk it at your own peril! I a, not responsible if you don’t like your ending!
So you can continue if you want…down down down the road…down the strokers road!
A path opens up with your name on it. You walk through…
Is that you? Is that really you?I was casting a spell…and it must have worked! You appeared!
My personal play toy!
Oh…don’t feel bad! I hear that you really liked me…that I made you drool! So you won’t mind this… Guerlain casts another spell. Your mouth remains open and does not close.
Stroke however you want…at any speed you want. But if your mouth closes for any reason…you will belong to me! now…I have a dress to try on…come with me…
So, what do you think of my outfit? Too slutty?
I can alter it so it covers up more of my body..
Or may be less is more…what do you think?
Why arent you talking? Your mouth has to stay open…but you can still make words…
Or are you just drooling..
It doesn’t matter…
I’ve decided to wear something else! Before Guerlain changes…you are transported away…
You made it to the end of the road! Hopefully your mouth remained open the entire time with Guerlain! If it didn’t, you have to mention her in your rules somewhere…I’m sure you can figure that out!
Hiya fatts! Don’t worry…this is me, the real me! I am not a witch! No bad ends or tricks for you! Honestly..I swear on my honor as a Girl Scout…you’d like to see me in my uniform…nasty boy, but that’s what I like about you…
Sorry! Got sidetracked! Anyway…these witches…I do not like them! I call them witch bitches!
They show up everytime in October…casting spells and such. Causing havoc on rules…making poor edgers ruin without permission. Taking over my BnB! They are a nusience, really..
But you know and I know who is the real magician around here…so I was thinking we could do what normal girlfriends and boyfriends do…instead of that hocus pocus garbage that everyone else is doing…
You know…spankbang and chill! I have two videos I really want to watch! Pick them in any order…and you can cum at the end of the second one!
So choose wisely!
Hi Brian! It’s me!
I’m doing what I do best! Which is being an attractive woman…just ready for you!
And won’t you do what you do best?
You know…stroke…
Just touch it once…
I won’t tell!
I’m not even the real Lana… The world reverts…and you see the witch…
You made it to the end of the road! But it seems like you had an existing punishment! So…we’re you good, or bad? If you touched your cock…your punishment is increased by 1! and if not…this counts towards one of your denial sets!
Hi! Welcome to my house! Do you want some cake? You take the cake. And when you do, you realize that your recovery time after edges is 15 seconds, and you are into edgeslut mode
Yum yum! Isn’t my cake good?
I put a special ingredient into it…
You must be feeling it now…
Here…have some more cake… And you are feeling it! Your recovery time after edging is 10 seconds
Keep edging, pet!
Don’t those edges taste..er…feel…good?
Give me more…
You do want more cake, right? And you do! As you lick the cake from her tits, your recovery time between edges is now 5 seconds…
Gotcha! You forgot…(or decided to ignore the horny witches advice. You are now cursed for your next set, you must double all rules for redheads. This must be placed in your rules.
You made it to the end of the road! I’m glad that you weren’t cursed! Go on, put your cock away and on on with your life! You are denied…but have a great story to tell about the strokers road…
Oh? What is this? A stroker without a name…what are they called…lurkers?
We don’t spend a lot of time on lurkers…
But we are casting a spell to increase the number of stroker around…maybe it will affect you…
It is a welcoming community…you will have fun here.. As the witches make out to complete the spell…you are transported away…
You made it to the beginning of the road. If you’ve gotten this far lurker..you should consider joining! The people here don’t bite…much…. You are denied…but have a great story to tell about the strokers road…
Oh, look! An edgeslut! I’ve always wanted one of those!
What does one do with a edgeslut pet? Play with them, of course! Let’s play my favorite game!! Hide and stroke!
But first…a special pet needs a special rule…
How about if I make eye contact with you…you stroke 6 times as fast as possible? you do this before any other rule. And now, let me explain the game.
I will hide…and you will stroke and edge until you find me!
Now hold an edge…count to ten…and then look for me! Foxy has decided you are her pet, and wants to play hide and stroke. Find foxy!
Hi! You look like you are searching for someone…so while you wait for them, can I interest you in an experiment? All you have to do is just follow your rules for the next 5 images. nothing more…nothing less! Ready? The scientist shows you 5 photos
I see. That data was…illuminating. Are you cursed or something? You should get that looked at. People should not be stroking to redheads that long. But that’s just my professional opinion!
Looking for foxy? Well..she’s not here.
You only have me!
But that’s not so bad…right?
I’m sure you will find foxy.
I’m actually rooting for you to find her.
Oh yes, I’m on your side…
So good luck!
So edge your brains out.
This spell of doubling will wear off eventually…
But your memory of me will not.
I have my eye on you, edgeslut. we will meet again…
Look at that! My pet found me!
Now we shouldn’t let those other locations go to waste…so if you want to look at them, you should!
And as a gift for finding me…I have some homework for you!
You know the color of my eyes, right? Your homework is that everytime you see someone with my eye color making eye contact with you, you must stroke 6 times as fast as possible. Let’s try it for 3 days…and see how far you get!
What? An orgasm? No…I’ve given you homework, and that is enough! Put your cock away, you are denied!
Come on…did you think foxy would be here? How did I get in here? Don’t worry about that.
Obvious. Boring. Just like foxy little game. How would you like to spice things up a bit? Foxy activates your edgeslut mode
Isn’t this more…fun?
In preparation for NNN I have been working on this everyone set for some time now. It was supposed to be done sooner but I had some saving issues with day 4 and had to rewrite the whole thing. It is a multi-day set designed to "train" you for NNN by having the girls tease and push you to your limit. There are multiple difficulties to play this tease, and your difficulty will decide your rules. If you would like to use your own on this forum, be my guest (just when doing difficulty specific tasks use the difficulty your rules are closest to) but since this is made for all the sluts who are participating in NNN there are rulesets if people need them. I hope everyone enjoys this and feedback via post or PM is always appreciated. Lastly, even if you don't have multiple days free in a row it is ok as long as you are able to play every section before November 1st is what matters. The 5th day will release later in October with about 2-3 days before NNN.
Hentaiiaddict and anyone who can't/ dont like to edge can use his rules viewtopic.php?p=368236#p368236 . Even though this set is an edging based set I hope you can find some enjoyment in it although I make no promises.
For all rules anytime you are asked to hold an edge if multiple holds are required on the same image you can combine the times and do 1 hold if you want.
Personally, I think this is a difficult tease and is ok if you ruin or fail once or twice. If anyone wants a reference for difficulty that’s too damn bad. Learn the hard way. Easy:
30 stroke per image
1 edge for naked pussy
no edge holding rules
Medium:
30 strokes per image
1 edge for naked pussy
1 edge for naked tits or ass (if both are shown only 1 edge)
If all three, tits, ass, pussy are visible hold 1 edge for 15 seconds
If the image is 10/10 (Extremely hot) or higher hold an edge for 15 seconds
Hard:
30 strokes per image
1 edge per image
1 edge for pussy
1 edge for tits
1 edge for ass
If all three, tits, ass, pussy are visible hold 1 edge for 30 seconds
If an image is 10/10 (extremely hot) hold 1 edge for 30 seconds
EdgeSlut
30 strokes per image
1 edge per image
1 edge for eye contact
1 edge for pussy
1 edge for tits
1 edge for ass
3 rapid fire edges (5 second break) if girl is on her knees
If all three, tits, ass, pussy are visible hold 1 edge for 30 seconds
If an image is 10/10 (extremely hot) hold 1 edge for 45 seconds
Welcome to the NNN training camp. (Begin this section with no edging rules just stroke and read along)
I'm sure most of you know who I am but if don't I am Eva Elfie.
As the figurehead for Tentacle Warlocks NNN game, I have set up a training camp here with a lot of the girls to prepare you boys for the month ahead.
For those of you who have participated in NNN before you know the struggles but for you newbies...
Let's just say it becomes one of the most frustrating experiences of your life.
Because of the difficulty of NNN the girls and I plan to push you to your limit.
To make sure you are as prepared as you can be to survive NNN.
Here at training camp there will be 5 days including a graduation ceremony that will be lead by one of the main girls here on the HMC thread.
Each of the 4 teasing days are designed to prepare you for different challenges you will face throughout NNN. With the last graduation ceremony being held on October 31.
If at any point you accidentally go over the edge you must stop for the day and restart the training session tomorrow. When restarting after a ruin you are allowed to lower your difficulty by 1 level if you, please. Only people who complete all 4 days will be able to be rewarded at graduation.
Now that you know what is in store ahead of you, make sure you have picked a difficulty that will challenge you.
This is meant to be difficult for you and shouldn't not a walk in the park. Me and the girls want to see you struggle so if you think you need to change it now is the last time to do so throughout the entire tease.
Hopefully everyone has picked their difficulty because this is where it gets fun. All your edging rules are now turned on.
The first edges are always best. You are able to stroke freely and take your time since your cock isn't too teased yet.
But the longer this goes on the less and less strokes will be needed to reach that edge and the more you will be dripping for us.
Trying your best to not spill your cum all over the floor. To make it to graduation day.
This will be a fun week for all of us. I can't wait to see you again on Day 4 when your a complete mess.
Now go meet the other leaders here at camp who will be helping you train for NNN.
Congrats on surviving your first day at camp slut.
Now for what you will be doing between sessions. You must pick a mistress. It can be any of us you met today or whoever you would like.
They will tease you between your days here at camp and keep that cock nice and hard for us.
Today's task is very simple. You need to pick your mistress and edge a certain amount to them based on your difficulty. Easy: 10Normal: 20Hard:40Edgeslut: 75
You can use whatever site you want as long as all your edges get done. Here are a few suggestions if needed. https://www.pornpics.com https://scrolller.com/
Enjoy your time with your mistresses' and we will see you back for your second day at camp tomorrow.
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AMAZING set! 
Ending up taking just under 2 hours from start to finish with 42 edges. 
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and taunt you with what you could NOT have 
... and I just LOVED that. 
... I had NEVER been like THAT with FOUR GIRLS in a set before. 
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... and it was unprompted and organic and "in the moment" ... and I doubt that ANY of them had EVER experienced THAT before ... and even though I WASN'T into it ... I was just SO HAPPY to do it—that I am CERTAIN my face was just beaming and lit up with a huge smile—knowing the girls would be grateful and happy and surprised and turned on by it ... and it was giving THEM back some of that respect—and a show of gratitude and appreciation ...
