[FEEDBACK] Lost Forest 1.0

[Goddess Bianca]

It's here! After 2 months of procrastination it's done!
It's the first release, so please if you see any bugs, typos, balance issues and softlocks report them here.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=71809

[tsyogini]

[Davo]

I loved this tease!

Here are some of the spelling mistakes I noticed:

Mysterious Atelier
Prologue:
1. Two capital letters: 'Oh You're in the lost forest of course'
2. Afraid being spelled wrong: 'Oh my, I'm affraid there is no easy way out,'
3. Imbued spelled wrong: 'Well of course, but it's mine, you will need to make your own and imbude it with your mana.'
4. Ingredients spelled wrong: 'Well, it's easy to make one but I need ingridients first.'
5. Perhaps spelled wrong: 'I could, perchaps share you some of my memories,'
6. Pleasant spelled wrong: 'Im not feeling very plesant right now, Im lost after all.'
7. Two capital letters 'Are... Why Am I the only one naked?'
8. Capital at 2nd Right and Don't are wrong, 'i' should be capital: 'Right Right, before i forget this too, Don't cum.'

Unlocking memory:
1. Forehead and vision spelled wrong (couldn't copy text)

Giant Tree
Humiliation:
1. Unbearable spelled wrong: 'The suspense is unberable is it?'
2. Always spelled wrong: 'You know, I aways wanted a pet.'

Eating fruit:
1. Fruit spelled wrong: 'Despite the warning, you think about eating the friut,'
2. Comprehension spelled wrong: 'Visions from worlds beyond your comprehention start to appear.'
3. Hopeless spelled wrong: 'SAY OUT LOUD HOW HOPLESS YOU ARE'
4. Interesting spelled wrong: 'Intresting... But I hope it was worth it...'
5. Tongue spelled incorrectly: 'PULL YOUR TOUNGE OUT LIKE A DOG'
6. Caress spelled wrong: 'CARRES YOUR THIGHS WITH YOUR FREE HAND'

Crystal Mine
Prologue:
1. I think this whole sentence is wrong or confusing? 'A Human, Human, Ring.'
CBT:
1. Capital at 'Just' incorrect: 'Straight to the point, Just as i like it!'
2. Capital at 'We' incorrect: 'Better get used to the pain, We barely started.'
Explore the mines:
1. Mistress spelled wrong: 'Come here boy, It's been so long since Misstress got some love.'
2. Tongue spelled wrong: 'I really enjoyed your tounge last time!'
3. Capital on 'It's' wrong: 'Hi cutie! I'm sorry but It's just me today...'

Black smith
Prologue:
1. Coming spelled incorrectly: 'Turns out the heat is comming from something more than just the smithy.'
Buy:
1. Interested spelled wrong: 'Are you intrested in my membership club?'
Warmup:
1. Meant spelled wrong: 'Oh you ment something else right?'
Merchandise showcase:
1. Interested spelled wrong: ' Some get intrested in you while they wait.'
Manual labour:
1. Purpose spelled wrong: 'What's t-taking you so long? Are... you going slow o-on purouse?'

[Goddess Bianca]

I loved this tease!

Here are some of the spelling mistakes I noticed:

Mysterious Atelier
Prologue:
1. Two capital letters: 'Oh You're in the lost forest of course'
2. Afraid being spelled wrong: 'Oh my, I'm affraid there is no easy way out,'
3. Imbued spelled wrong: 'Well of course, but it's mine, you will need to make your own and imbude it with your mana.'
4. Ingredients spelled wrong: 'Well, it's easy to make one but I need ingridients first.'
5. Perhaps spelled wrong: 'I could, perchaps share you some of my memories,'
6. Pleasant spelled wrong: 'Im not feeling very plesant right now, Im lost after all.'
7. Two capital letters 'Are... Why Am I the only one naked?'
8. Capital at 2nd Right and Don't are wrong, 'i' should be capital: 'Right Right, before i forget this too, Don't cum.'

Unlocking memory:
1. Forehead and vision spelled wrong (couldn't copy text)

Giant Tree
Humiliation:
1. Unbearable spelled wrong: 'The suspense is unberable is it?'
2. Always spelled wrong: 'You know, I aways wanted a pet.'

Eating fruit:
1. Fruit spelled wrong: 'Despite the warning, you think about eating the friut,'
2. Comprehension spelled wrong: 'Visions from worlds beyond your comprehention start to appear.'
3. Hopeless spelled wrong: 'SAY OUT LOUD HOW HOPLESS YOU ARE'
4. Interesting spelled wrong: 'Intresting... But I hope it was worth it...'
5. Tongue spelled incorrectly: 'PULL YOUR TOUNGE OUT LIKE A DOG'
6. Caress spelled wrong: 'CARRES YOUR THIGHS WITH YOUR FREE HAND'

Crystal Mine
Prologue:
1. I think this whole sentence is wrong or confusing? 'A Human, Human, Ring.'
CBT:
1. Capital at 'Just' incorrect: 'Straight to the point, Just as i like it!'
2. Capital at 'We' incorrect: 'Better get used to the pain, We barely started.'
Explore the mines:
1. Mistress spelled wrong: 'Come here boy, It's been so long since Misstress got some love.'
2. Tongue spelled wrong: 'I really enjoyed your tounge last time!'
3. Capital on 'It's' wrong: 'Hi cutie! I'm sorry but It's just me today...'

Black smith
Prologue:
1. Coming spelled incorrectly: 'Turns out the heat is comming from something more than just the smithy.'
Buy:
1. Interested spelled wrong: 'Are you intrested in my membership club?'
Warmup:
1. Meant spelled wrong: 'Oh you ment something else right?'
Merchandise showcase:
1. Interested spelled wrong: ' Some get intrested in you while they wait.'
Manual labour:
1. Purpose spelled wrong: 'What's t-taking you so long? Are... you going slow o-on purouse?'

I feel embarrassed when I see how many typos I made.
I will fix them ASAP!

About the confusing sentence In the mines.
It was supposed to be a Dr. Who reference.
A bad one but still a reference

[baksiu321]

first of all, great tease i really liked it. I found a bug when you buy cheat code in the mines it doesn't take essence

[SC2]

I'm stuck at the Crystal Mine, what to do after buying the ingredient?
Edit: Have found the way out.

[Goddess Bianca]

I'm stuck at the Crystal Mine, what to do after buying the ingredient?

You need 3 ingredients

One from the Forest

One from the Mines

And one form the Blacksmith

After you find all 3 you need to come back to The Atelier and craft it

[Davo]

Is there any use for the other rings?

Also is there a way to purchase the Blacksmiths 'membership'?

[Goddess Bianca]

Is there any use for the other rings?

Also is there a way to purchase the Blacksmiths 'membership'?

No they are just to bait you into buying the wrong one.

As for the membership, not yet, I wanna make some updates with side content and more characters but that will come later rather than sooner.

[Davo]

Is there any use for the other rings?

Also is there a way to purchase the Blacksmiths 'membership'?

No they are just to bait you into buying the wrong one.

As for the membership, not yet, I wanna make some updates with side content and more characters but that will come later rather than sooner.

Would love to see more content added to this tease!
This tease also gave me inspiration for another webtease

If you ever want to bounce ideas off of someone or could use help in another way feel free to hit me up ^^

[Goddess Bianca]

We have our first update!
Or rather a hotfix

-Fixed typos
-Buying a code in the mines will correctly take away your essence

[cristovaop]

Wonderful tease, right up my alley with the different fetishes and options. I "didn't" failed and hit the right button once, and finished with the elf girl, but she wasn't happy with me.

Great attention to the details, but the gemstone is too expensive and the grinding can become boring after a while. Or I didn't do something right this first time.

Any way, the replayability will make me come back. Congrats.

[Jackall]

Creative tease thank you for making it!
It was fun to endure more to unlock a new place.
Easily 5 stars because of all the things it does right, but i have to mention the gemstone price too, if it was half as much it'd be easier to get motivated to do something for the 5th time. I like demanding but even with small variations things get predictable. There were also extras i may aim at on a different playthrough bc i really didnt feel like ballbusting or stroking to the same pattern more than 10 times.
Very curious as to what if anything copper and iron rings do (anyone? asking for spoiler).

What would turn this from a good tease to one of my top favorites is like 2 more locations purely to spend essence for unlocking significantly faster essence collecting ways, for example i love headplay/sensitivity play or stroking after an edge, slow reverse grip or twisting motion stroking, alternating speeds or technigues etc. Superslow can be the best with a bit of taunting. My point is what is there is all good but if it was possible to unlock everything by trying everthing twice and then doing what you liked the most 3-4 more times it could never get boring for even a moment. But since i dont know what the extras are maybe what im saying is redundant and i should have just aimed for those first.

[baksiu321]

Creative tease thank you for making it!
It was fun to endure more to unlock a new place.
Easily 5 stars because of all the things it does right, but i have to mention the gemstone price too, if it was half as much it'd be easier to get motivated to do something for the 5th time. I like demanding but even with small variations things get predictable. There were also extras i may aim at on a different playthrough bc i really didnt feel like ballbusting or stroking to the same pattern more than 10 times.
Very curious as to what if anything copper and iron rings do (anyone? asking for spoiler).

What would turn this from a good tease to one of my top favorites is like 2 more locations purely to spend essence for unlocking significantly faster essence collecting ways, for example i love headplay/sensitivity play or stroking after an edge, slow reverse grip or twisting motion stroking, alternating speeds or technigues etc. Superslow can be the best with a bit of taunting. My point is what is there is all good but if it was possible to unlock everything by trying everthing twice and then doing what you liked the most 3-4 more times it could never get boring for even a moment. But since i dont know what the extras are maybe what im saying is redundant and i should have just aimed for those first.

you better release dimension trouble, i still remember!!!

[Jackall]

haha
i should. i just put too many things in it and without a plan for ending