[Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMMY 1.6

[Campione54xg]

I really enjoyed this game and I am really grateful for all the work you are putting on it, good job mate!

The only feedback that I have for the game is that it seems a little short, I played a lot and enjoyed a few endings and now there isn't much to do, I would like to see more of Kenzie and what Bridgette taught her, like scenes of her "training" the mc, I also would love to see more of Mr. White too since I really liked her character and as others have said I would like some feet fetish, nothing too heavy but some would be good, also it would be good if there were more scenes before the endings, like where Bridgette greets the mc at the evening where she says her plays for his father, it seems like no matter what you do this scenes stays almost the same and it becomes a little repetitive quickly so some variations would be nice.

Yours is probably the only tease that I check frequently to see if there is an update so keep up the good work!

[ritewriter]

I really enjoyed this game and I am really grateful for all the work you are putting on it, good job mate!

Thanks for giving me your feedback as your first post!

The only feedback that I have for the game is that it seems a little short, I played a lot and enjoyed a few endings and now there isn't much to do, I would like to see more of Kenzie and what Bridgette taught her, like scenes of her "training" the mc, I also would love to see more of Mr. White too since I really liked her character... also it would be good if there were more scenes before the endings

The game is definitely still a work in progress, and I have many, many more scenes planned. That said, I don't plan to make it much longer, just much wider with more paths to explore along the way. There will definitely be a lot more of Mrs. White and Kenzie, and the MC will be able to try to run to them for help at the end, which will provide extended endings for both of them. I'm planning similar endings for Natalie, Kristina, and a few other characters too!

and as others have said I would like some feet fetish, nothing too heavy but some would be good,

More foot fetish content coming in the next patch!

...where Bridgette greets the mc at the evening where she says her plays for his father, it seems like no matter what you do this scenes stays almost the same and it becomes a little repetitive quickly so some variations would be nice.

Yes, this has bothered me for a while. That scene is the "core" scene of the entire tease, and the first one I wrote, based on my old caption series, but I don't like that it's always the same in every play through. The good news is, I'm fixing this is the next patch! There will now be three possible face-to-face scenes with Bridgette, the existing one, one for the home bar, and one for the home theater. A lot of the dialogue will be the same, but there will be all new images (and all new accomplices for Bridgette). That should mix things up.

Yours is probably the only tease that I check frequently to see if there is an update so keep up the good work!

Thank you. I'm hoping for a new version in the next few months. Unfortunately, creating new scenes is a lot of work and I've got several in progress for 1.7. I suspect I won't be able to do as big a patch as I'd like, which means I probably won't finish the tease with 2.0 as planned, but I am determined to finish this thing eventually. I'd say, right now, it's probably 60% done.

[Alectra_play]

Coming down the sissy path I would like it for some ending where you come to terms with your new identity, possibly via Natalie as she's your friend and would end in a more supportive way. Escaping Bridgette and all - and the male cocks, mostly, but seriously, so much obsession with that :P

[ritewriter]

Coming down the sissy path I would like it for some ending where you come to terms with your new identity, possibly via Natalie as she's your friend and would end in a more supportive way. Escaping Bridgette and all - and the male cocks, mostly, but seriously, so much obsession with that :P

I'm definitely planning to include a happily-ever-after ending (or two or maybe even three) with Natalie before I'm done.

[ritewriter]

UPDATE: I'd hoped to get 1.7 out this month, but the functionality of the tease editor has gotten steadily worse. First uploading images became hit or miss. Now it's impossible. This morning, I had trouble even opening my tease. Once I found a work-around and started editing, I noticed saving changes takes a long time. I also checked and I can no longer upload back-up versions. Got the following fail message:

Upload Backup
Network error: Response not successful: Received status code 500

I'm worried if I keep editing, I may break the current draft version and not be able to upload a working one. That would cost weeks of work.

I'm afraid I'm going to have to put pause on the update until Milovana becomes stable again. I tried to keep moving forward as best as I could under the circumstances, but I don't want to risk corrupting the file and losing all my work. That would suck.

Current edit has:

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Two new characters to meet in the morning - complete.
Text from those new characters - complete.
Alt evening conversation with Mommy at the bar - complete.
Alt evening conversation with Mommy in the home theater - complete.
Phone call with Mrs. White in the evening - complete.
Naptime straight dream of Natalie - complete.

Naptime dream of Mrs. White - in progress.

Naptime dream of Elsa and Jean - gallery uploaded
Shower fantasy of Mommy - gallery uploaded
Shower fantasy of Mrs. White - gallery uploaded
New superhero video game - gallery uploaded

Planned: Naptime dream of new morning characters, shower as a sissy, shower fantasy of Natalie.

At this point, if and when Milovana is fixed, I'll probably just finish the "in progress" scene and post the tease so I can get an update out ASAP. Then I'll do a 1.75 to finish out all the planned 1.7 content.

Hopefully Milovana will be fixed soon. Fingers crossed.

Until then, if anyone would like to test the sections that are in progress, PM me and I'll send you a link. Just be aware that I haven't double checked the pathing so it will likely break in a few places.

[Sissycow]

Yea the site seems to be having a lot of issues lately. I do hope they fix it soon.

[bullsenthil2016]

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UPDATE: I'd hoped to get 1.7 out this month, but the functionality of the tease editor has gotten steadily worse. First uploading images became hit or miss. Now it's impossible. This morning, I had trouble even opening my tease. Once I found a work-around and started editing, I noticed saving changes takes a long time. I also checked and I can no longer upload back-up versions. Got the following fail message:

Upload Backup
Network error: Response not successful: Received status code 500

I'm worried if I keep editing, I may break the current draft version and not be able to upload a working one. That would cost weeks of work.

I'm afraid I'm going to have to put pause on the update until Milovana becomes stable again. I tried to keep moving forward as best as I could under the circumstances, but I don't want to risk corrupting the file and losing all my work. That would suck.

Current edit has:

Spoiler: show

Two new characters to meet in the morning - complete.
Text from those new characters - complete.
Alt evening conversation with Mommy at the bar - complete.
Alt evening conversation with Mommy in the home theater - complete.
Phone call with Mrs. White in the evening - complete.
Naptime straight dream of Natalie - complete.

Naptime dream of Mrs. White - in progress.

Naptime dream of Elsa and Jean - gallery uploaded
Shower fantasy of Mommy - gallery uploaded
Shower fantasy of Mrs. White - gallery uploaded
New superhero video game - gallery uploaded

Planned: Naptime dream of new morning characters, shower as a sissy, shower fantasy of Natalie.

At this point, if and when Milovana is fixed, I'll probably just finish the "in progress" scene and post the tease so I can get an update out ASAP. Then I'll do a 1.75 to finish out all the planned 1.7 content.

Hopefully Milovana will be fixed soon. Fingers crossed.

Until then, if anyone would like to test the sections that are in progress, PM me and I'll send you a link. Just be aware that I haven't double checked the pathing so it will likely break in a few places.
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I already PM you for trial ritewriter

[ritewriter]

Hurray! Site seems fixed. I’ll get back to work on 1.7 now. Thanks to all the beta testers.

[ritewriter]

v1.61 is out. Minor bug fix.

[Campione54xg]

So we had talked before about foot fetish content on the game and I just wanted to give you some ideas.

What I had in mind was for example:

1: in the dream you have of dominating her you instead worship her feet, when she wakes you up you can tell the truth and she humiliates you for it or even when she ask your cock she asks what you think of feet.

2: You can also put some pictures on the on the folder she sends you when you go online.

3: An option that you call yourself her "foot slave" or something like that at some point in the game.

4: I know it's hard to find pictures for specific scenarios but you can work around it by just showing the legs/feet and the guy then switching around the perspective so that she looks at you from above, this way she can tease your cock with her feet to edging, I don't know if this would work but I just wanted to give a different perspective about this.

5: Some content about Mrs. White, you already have one where you stare at her feet but you also could make some more here.

6: At the start of the game when you are fantasizing about Bridgette you can also have an option about her feet.

I don't know if some of these things you already had in mind or if even you will consider doing those but I wanted to say what I had in mind about this also thanks for all the hard work you are putting on the game, we may not comment a lot but there are a lot of people who are anxiously waiting for an update on the game.

[ritewriter]

So we had talked before about foot fetish content on the game and I just wanted to give you some ideas.

What I had in mind was for example:

1: in the dream you have of dominating her you instead worship her feet, when she wakes you up you can tell the truth and she humiliates you for it or even when she ask your cock she asks what you think of feet.

2: You can also put some pictures on the on the folder she sends you when you go online.

3: An option that you call yourself her "foot slave" or something like that at some point in the game.

4: I know it's hard to find pictures for specific scenarios but you can work around it by just showing the legs/feet and the guy then switching around the perspective so that she looks at you from above, this way she can tease your cock with her feet to edging, I don't know if this would work but I just wanted to give a different perspective about this.

5: Some content about Mrs. White, you already have one where you stare at her feet but you also could make some more here.

6: At the start of the game when you are fantasizing about Bridgette you can also have an option about her feet.

I don't know if some of these things you already had in mind or if even you will consider doing those but I wanted to say what I had in mind about this

Great suggestions. Some of these aren’t possible because the pictures just don’t exist. For the dream sequence pictorial I used, for example, there’s just no foot content at all. Bridgette B really hasn’t done much foot fetish content. That said, some of the models I’m using or planning to use do, so I will aim for more foot fetish fun in the future.

also thanks for all the hard work you are putting on the game, we may not comment a lot but there are a lot of people who are anxiously waiting for an update on the game.

Thank you! That’s nice to hear.

[jockpseudonym]

What would you think of some cultic/femdom ritual stuff? Might make a fun quick badend with a diversion side character. Your name is “rite”writer after all. Either in the game or just your captions on general.

Excited for more feet focused options! It’s even more niche but armpit/musk worship would also be nice if you don’t have qualms about it, could lead to a “pig” ending. Which brings to mind a petplay/housepet ending, I better stop now or I’ll go on forever

[ritewriter]

I'll keep those suggestions in mind moving forward!

The closest thing to the "cultic" end right now is PARTY FAVOR.

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Go to the funeral, go the reception, but DON'T go to your room when told.

[ritewriter]

In other news, I'm about ready to declare 1.7 done!

Even though I didn't get ALL of what I'd hoped into this update, I've created a decent amount of new content, and I feel like it's been a while since an update (due to the site issues) so I might as well publish what I have ready. There are 6-7 new full scenes, with lots of internal variations in each, so probably 100+ new pages. There may actually be more, but I lost count during all the site issues.

If anyone would like to playtest the current version, here's a link:

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https://milovana.com/webteases/showteas ... 12fb8f535e

I'll wait a few days for feedback, then probably publish next week.

[AFro62]

I think I found a bug. After I meet Mrs.White I go to take a nap and I don't dream about Bridgette it doesn't give me options and I can't progress.