Erotic Hypnosis 1: Control

[m1]

This is chapter 1 in Erotic Hypnosis series. Your Mistress are going to control you. Many Edges. Random Orgasm chance.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=22078

Version Update:
- Added a new (Evil ) ending.

Please give me feedback.

Feedback summary

1. Text switches too fast
- I have decreased the speed a little bit. It is ok now?

2. You are not hypnotized?
- No. I don't think you will be hypnotized The hypnosis idea is mainly for the story.
- Also, hypnosis topic is my personal favorite But I found there is no much in milovana. So I tried to create one.

3. Grammar mistakes
- Yes. This is always my problem. I will try to make it better

4. A little monotonous, only Edge / stop / masturbate
- I plan to add more commands in the coming chapters.

5. Adding trials and competitions

6. Make font little bigger

Erotic Hypnosis series:
Chapter 1: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=22078
Chapter 2: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=22185

[Nezhul]

The text switches pretty fast for me, and anyway there's no way I can stare at the image and read the text at the same time. I don't think that a webtease has good chances of hypnotizing anyone, mainly due to quality.

[camel]

I also thought that the induction should have been slower. I didn't expect to actually be hypnotized so was not disappointed.

Typos and grammar mistakes were there but the only one that was jarring for me was "STORKER SLAVE".

Second session lasted toooooooooooo long! I loved it. I began to suspect that she was just going to keep on looping until she/I lost control... which would have been evil, but I decided to stay with it. What really helped my decision to stay with it was (1) instructions to be mindless, obedient, and that the command to edge gave lots of willpower... so obviously she wasn't the type to do this without reason and I was content to continue, and (2) she said it would take about 30 minutes... so I assumed it had to end some time.

I liked the tease a lot! I'm looking forward to what comes next! Thanks!

[m1]

The text switches pretty fast for me, and anyway there's no way I can stare at the image and read the text at the same time. I don't think that a webtease has good chances of hypnotizing anyone, mainly due to quality.

Thanks for the comment. I have slowed it down a little bit. Is it ok now?

I also thought that the induction should have been slower. I didn't expect to actually be hypnotized so was not disappointed.

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Ha~ You got my point! Thank you very much.

Spoiler: show

The second session is random! Sometimes you can be very unlucky (or lucky?)

[davefrancis89]

Id just like to say I really enjoyed this tease. I got very into it and started to behave as if I was hypnotised deliberately, which actually has a similar effect as hypnosis (i.e. blind obedience) - which was a great experience all told.

The grammar did kind of let it down a bit which was a shame - still gone in my favorites though - nearly blew a hole in the tissue at the end (sorry if that image is a bit much for you).

Thank you!

[m1]

Id just like to say I really enjoyed this tease. I got very into it and started to behave as if I was hypnotised deliberately, which actually has a similar effect as hypnosis (i.e. blind obedience) - which was a great experience all told.
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Thank you very much!

I will work harder on the grammar problem

[sxxx_fxxx]

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[m1]

One of my favourite teases. Usually I never ruin myself - I hate it, but I was so much into this tease well... Yea, you got me begging for more!

Thank you very much

[BlueballAsylum]

Who is the playboy girl in this tease? She drives me crazy! Thanks

[Augustulus]

Who is the playboy girl in this tease? She drives me crazy! Thanks

Her name is Elizabeth Jean
Here is the image set: https://www.pornpics.com/galleries/ador ... -19284210/
Sadly it looks like that there are only a few different sets of her available.

[BlueballAsylum]

Thank you my friend. Some are better than none. She just gets me instantly hard and aching.