[Release][Feedback] Hello World

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[Release][Feedback] Hello World

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Everyone, here's my very first tease. It's pretty basic at the moment. There's no story, and minimal text. Just some solid pictures and hopefully not too challenging stroking to the beats. Let me know if there's anything broken or just what you think.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=61246
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Re: [Release][Feedback] Hello World

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Beginning works. Nice pictures. I personally would prefer some interactivity and estim track instead of metronome, so I din't watch the whole tease. But good start :-).
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I liked the concept of a nice picture series interrupted with some boss battle(s).
Especially the variable bpm samples during some of the timers in the bossbattle were a nice surprise.

Some additional text would be nice of course, but hte pictures only also got me going !
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verynicekojak wrote: Wed Nov 30, 2022 12:18 am Beginning works. Nice pictures. I personally would prefer some interactivity and estim track instead of metronome, so I din't watch the whole tease. But good start :-).
Thanks for the feedback. I'm working on adding some interactivity to the next one. What kinds of interactive features do you like?
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shorremori wrote: Wed Nov 30, 2022 9:39 am I liked the concept of a nice picture series interrupted with some boss battle(s).
Especially the variable bpm samples during some of the timers in the bossbattle were a nice surprise.

Some additional text would be nice of course, but hte pictures only also got me going !
Thanks for giving it a shot. I really appreciate the feedback.
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